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Horror Saya. Dobara chudel ki prem kahani (Completed)

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congratulations on 1 lakh viewss....lakh lakh badhaiya....ab lakh ke 10 lakh views bhi ho jayenge...aap bas apni writting chalu rakhiye..aap ke fans anewale hai aur bhi
Wow. Thank you very very much. Me abhi update likh rahi thi. Par aaj rat der se post karungi. Thoda bahot likhna baki rahe gaya he.
 

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are shetan ji aap humse gussa ho gyi kya
Kis bat ke lie. Me flart vali comment ka to ans hi nahi diya. But vesi comment ke ans me nahi deti. Mr shetan bhi ye story padhte he. To fir....
 

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Ek taraf daba kar shusumi ke muh pe fire ho raha tha. Shusumi mushkurati jese dhup aane par hath ko ankho pe rakhte he bas vese rakha. Or vese hi khadi rahi. Shusumi kisi ko marne nahi bas hangama khada karne aai thi. Kayra janti thi. Veer jis car me hoga usi car pe sabse jyada hamla hoga.
Car ka kafila taiyar tha. Sab se paheli car me ek bande ke sath seema beth gai. Dusri car me kuchh gunde hathiyaro ke sath. Tisri car jisme pichhe veer ko coffin me nand kar ke rakha gaya. Jisme rajashab matlab ki jagga betha. Uske sath deepika bethna chahti thi.
Par kayra ne usne kandhe par hath rakh diya. Rajashab ek bag lekar us car ki driving seet par beth gaya. Uske pichhe deepika ki car. Uske pichhe kayra. Or bhi pichhe car thi. Kuchh chudele ashman me udd kar aa rahi thi. Shusumi bas mushkurati bas us car ke kafile ko dekhti rahi. Or unhe wakt se pahele nikalne par majbur kar diya. Andheri rat me ek sath 30 ke aas pas car ki light dikh rahi thi.
Rode pe takriban 2km dur nikle. Tabhi achanak bada hamla aashaman se ho gaya. Sabse paheli car par sidha miyomi ne kiya. Apne panjo se seema ki car ki chhat ukhad di. Badla huaa roop or jese koi bahot bada gidh ho. Or aage jake nikalte hi vo lohe ka hissa unki car se takrata side me gir gaya. Koi car nahi ruki.
Lekin sirf miyomi ne hamla nahi kiya tha. Tanya, karishma or unki maa kamini teeno ashman me mout bankar pahoch gai thi. Car se teer kaman se chandi ke teer ko ashman me mara ja raha tha. Par rat me upar dekhna mushkil ho raha tha. Chandi ki goliya vali bandukhe.
Jiski goliya bhi chal rahi thi. Kuchh goliya unhe pau hath me lag bhi jati. Par takatwar chudele unhe khud nikal kar fek sakti he. Tabhi rajashab ke kan me lagi Bluetooth me deepika ki aavaj aai.

Deepika ; (smaile) are you ready darling???

Rajashab ; (smaile) Yes, since when am I ready? 1,2,3 down.

Jese rajashab ne down bola rajashab ne ek lat apne bagal vale ko mari. Door khul gaya. Or vo gir gaya. Thik vesa deepika ne bhi kiya. Par usne lat nahi mari. Gun nikak kar bagal vale ke sar pe goli mari. Jagga ne left or deepika ne right car mod li. Kafila sidha hi chalta raha. Or kayra jor se chilai.

Kayra ; (chilakar) vo sali dhokha kar gai.

Kayra ke kafile me sirf 19 car bachi thi. Kayra ne bhi ek vayar vale chhote se phone jesi chij par bola.

Kayra ; chalte raho. Koi nahi rukega. Jo chhut gaya use jane do.

Car ka kafila sidha mumbai se bahar ki taraf nikal gaya. Ab jagga ki car ke pichhe dono bahene hath dho kar pad gai. Par shusumi ne trening hi use esi di ki achhi achhi chudelo ko vo mat de sakta tha. Lekin rajashab ki car ke pichhe Jo karishma or tanya lagi hui thi. Unka pati unka joda jagga kiq car me tha.
Vo kese pichhe chhodti. Car ko tez raftar se ghuma ghuma kar jagga bhi dono baheno ko nacha raha tha. Car khali medan se rode par chadh gai.

Jagga ; (vaya Bluetooth) he deepika..... these two are not leaving me behind.

Deepika ; just Wait....

Deepika ne kayra ko call lagaya.

Deepika ; vo dono uske pichhe lagi he. Jaldi use bachao. Ham tumhe pokhli me milenge.

Kayra dhokha kha gai. Vo mushkurai ekq bali ke lie vo kai chudele barbad karne ko taiyar thi. Usne apni chudelo ko adesh diya.

Kayra ; jaldi use bachao. Southern est. Jaldi jao.

Takriban 30 ke pas paschudelo ka zund nikal pada. Tanya or karishma ki ashman me chudelo se ladhai chalu hogai. Tabhi achanak under bridge aa gaya. Car to usme chali tai par ek bade trauck trelyour me se pichhe ki taraf se sheet jamin par ragadne lagi.
Car sidha usme chadh gai. Yaha sari chudelo ko buri tarike se mara or ghayal kiya. Or dono bahene aage nikli. Pat vo car unhe kahi najar nahi aai. Ek bar fir se karishma tanya or uski maa kayra ne veer ko kho diya. Kamini ne dono baheno pe jabardast gussa utara. Rat bhar dhudhne par bhi vo car nahi mili.
Shusumi bas hangama kar ke bas vapas jodhpur ki taraf udd gai. Apne mahel me. Kyo ki use shameer ka intjar karna tha..


Din nikal chuka tha. Or rajashab Mumbai se kai kilomitar aage ek new car me veer ko lekar rode pe bahot tez ja raha tha. Tabhi raste par deepika bich rode pe khadi uska intjar kar rahi thi.
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Car ekdam se brack mar kar roki. Or deepika car ka door khol kar beth gai. Dono ki najre mili. Dono ke face pe smaile.

Deepika ; (smaile) lets go........
वरो बहुत बढ़िया
 

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Us rat miyomi ne seema ki car palta di thi. Car se seema to nikal gai. Par fir car me jabardast blast huaa. Kayra ka hukam tha ki kisi ke bhi lie koi nahi rukega. Lekin ashaman se seema ke lie miyomi jarur utri. Ekdam gusse me.
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Miyomi ke lie to jitni dushmani avi se hui thi. Utni dushmani seema se bhi to ho chuki thi. Avi ne use dhokha diya. Par us dhokhe ke pichhe jo dimag tha vo to seema ka hi tha. Seema karahti hui badi mashulil se rengte hue aage khiski. Vo khadi hone hi vali thi ki uski najar miyomi pe chali gai hatho ko fela kar apni dushman ka swagat karre miyomi uski hi taraf aa rahi thi.

Miyomi ; wah kitni ajib bat he. Kabhi tum to kabhi ham. Tumhari inshani juban me kahete he. Ab aaya utt pahad ke niche.
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Seema ghabra gai. Usne rurant hi apne gale me hath laga kar kuchh check karne ki kosis ki. Par uske jadu ko takat dene vali mala to tut kar najane kaha kaha bikhar gai thi. hatho me ab bhi kuchh rings thi. Par jese hi seema ne hath utthaya. Miyomi ne zatke se use khich liya. Ab seema ke pas koi takat nahi thi. Vo bebas ho gai.

Miyomi ; kal tak me bebas thi. Aaj tu bebas he. Par tu yaad rakhegi muje. Na tu jee paegi na tu mar paegi.
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Seema ko zatke se daboch kar miyomi fir asan me udd padi. Vo janti thi ke subah hone vale he. Or karishma or tanya ki tarah vo dhup bardas nahi kar paegi. Kamini jesi takatwar chudel bhi pichhe bas isi lie mud gai. Use bhi apne andar kayarta ka ehsas ho raha tha. Halaki vo chudeli budhi ka sahi istmal hi tha.
Jan bachegi to vo veer ko vapas la paegi. Pahele mar gai to na veer ko vapas la paegi or na vapas jeet paegi. Kayra bahot der mumbai se bahar pikhli me dewpika or jagga ka itjar karne lagi. Par subah ka ujala huaa to vo khud vapas apni car me beth gai. Vo samaz gai ki uske sath deepika ne dhokha kiya.
Ab vo vapas nahi ja sakti thi. Ek to use shusumi se kamini se bhi jyada dar lagta tha
Or ab to karishma tanya ya kamini koi bhi use jinda to nahi chhodega. 3rd party shusumi ki vajah se vo har chuki thi. Par jeeti to vo dono baheme bhi nahi thi. Karishma or tanya dono bhi apne jode ko bachane me nakamyab rahi. Uski ankho me anshu the.
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Kafi der tak bahot aage tak karishma or tanya ne us car ko dhudhne ki kosia kari. Par vo nirash or hatas bas dur dur tak sirf rasta hi dekhti rahi.
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Apne pyar ki judai bardas nahi bardas ho rahi thi. Aaine se ek bar bas hakikat me apne pyar ko dekha. Kisi or ke sath par dekhna to nashib huaa tha. Vo fir zero pe aa gai.or is bar to nai mushibat. Kyo ki veer ab mumbai me nahi tha. Vahi hal tanya ka bhi tha. Alagli rani or apni bahen ko bachane ke lie bich me aa kar tanya ne kai chadi ki goliya or teer khae. Crosbo ke teer bahot ghatak hote he.
Chandi chudelo ke nadan se nikal bhi jae to bhi kai wakt tak chudelo ko dard raheta he. Or karishma ko bachane ke lie tanya jan buch kar bich me aa rahi thi. Dard to usko bahot huaa par us se bhi jyada apne pati ko khone ka sath apni badi bahen ke anshu dekh kar use jyada dard ho raha tha.
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Tanya karishma ke karib gai. Or use gale laga liya. Dono bahene fut fut kar roi.

Tanya ; (rote hue) vo hame jarur milega. Akhir joda he hamara

Karishma ne apne anshu pochhe.

Karishma ; jab tak unhe vapis na lau me vapas apne ghar nahi jaungi.

Tanya ; (rote hue) me bhi to sath hi chalungi. Magar pahele taiyari to kar le. Ab chalo pahele.

Bahot samza kar karishma ko tanya vapas lekar aai. Par karishma ne to kasham kha li thi. Vo dono anita ke ghar pahoche. Yaha miyomi seema ko bandhe hue unka hi intjar kar rahi thi.
Seema ko dekhte hi dono bahene tutant bhadki. Anita or miyomi ne unhe roka. Halaki unke gusse ko sambhalna dono ko bahot mushkil tha.

Tanya ; (gussa) ise to me kacha chabaungi.

Karishma ; (gussa) ye tere pas he or ab tak jinda kyo he.

Anita ; ruko.... Pahele miyomi ki bat suno ruko please.

Miyomi ; ruko sirf mout hi iski saja nahi he... Bas tuje tadpane vale ko itni kam saja degi kya.

Dono bahene ruk gai. Sayad seema ki taklif hi dono baheno ko sukun de. Dono bahene ruk jarur gai. Par gussa abhi bhi bahot tha. Dono ko intjar tha ki miyomi use kya saja dena chahti he. Miyomi seema ki taraf halki mushkurahat se dekhti he.

Miyomi ; fikar mat kar. Mene tere lie mout se bhi bayar jindgi sochi he.
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Anita karishma ke kandho par hath rakha. Jese kuchh hishara de rahi ho.

Anita ; tu jab aaine ki unlti duniya me gai tab tuje kya feel huaa tha???

Karishma turant samaz gai. Tanya ko is bare me abhi tak kuchh pata nahi tha. Vo bhi sock thi.

Tanya ; (sock) tum kahena kya chahti ho???

Karishma ; bhej do ise aauine ki ulti duniya me.



Reeta ki jab nind khuli to din nikal aaya to vo bad pe nangi thi. Usne apne bagal me shaneer ko nahi dekha to vo samaz gai ki vo ja chuka he. Nasha use itna jyada ho gaya tha. Ki use pata nahi chala ki vo kab soi. Ab ye dard bardas karna uske lie bhari pad gaya. Jab vo utthi thi.
Tab sirf ek chadar me thi. Vese hi jese rat me. Par uske pas rote rahene ke alava koi chara nahi tha. Vahi subah subah hi shameer ki nind khul gai. Kyo ki use shalini ne utthaya. Jab vo uttha usne reeta ko dekha. Dill to tha use chum kar alavida kahe de. Lekin ye uske lie bhi or jyada mushlil bhara kam tha. Vo bas chal diya.

Jate hue ek bar reeta ko mud kar jarur dekha. Lekin vo ruka nahi bas chal diya.
 
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Vese to shameer apne aap ko hi saja de raha tha. Alishan car me bethne ke bavjud bhi uski ankho ke anshu nahi ruke. Uske bagal me shalini bethi hui thi. Rasta bhi lamba tha. Use ek wakt to shusumi se pyar huaa tha. Par reeta ki kahi bat usne shusumi se puchh hi li thi.
Shameer ne shusumi se unke riwajo se joda bana ne ko kaha. Or shusumi ne ghuma fira kar jawab dene ko nakar diya. Shameer ye samaz gaya ki shusumi use sirf apni jarurat ke lie leja rahi he. Uski ankho ke anshu pas bethi shalini ko bhi pighla rahe the.

Shalini ; bas aaj tum akhri bar ro rahe ho. Agar meri rani ke vafadar rahoge to vo tumhe kabhi rone nahi degi.

Shameer ; (gam smaile) vafadar.....
Matlab ek gulam. Tumhari rani ka.

Shalini ; tum galat soch rahe ho. Tumhe gulami ke lie nahi lejaya ja raha. Ab bhul jao tum apni pichhli jindgi. Or ek raja ki tarah apni jindgi gujaro. Meri rani ke sath.

Shameer ; (smaile gussa) wow.... Rani... Me kafi excited hu.

Shalini ye to samaz gai ki vo khush nahi he sath aa kar. To fir ye kyo ja raha he. Kahi ye koi chal to nahi khel raha. Par uski rani ki pasand thi. Chudeli dimag shak karne se bhi pichhe nahi hat sakta. Vo apni rani ki vafadar thi.

Shalini ; vese meri rani ko log rajkumari ji ke name se jante he.

Shameer ; or muje log kya kahekar pukarenge?? Rani ka raja, rajkumar, ya fir rani ka khilona????

Shalini jesi chudel ke pas bhi is bat ka jawab nahi tha.

Shalini ; meri rani ne tumhare sath koi jabardasti nahi ki. Fir tum us se naraj kyo ho???

Shameer ; kyo ki tumhari rani ki gulami kabul karne ke lie me apni jindgi kurban kar ke aa raha hu. Vo dost jo meri jindgi he. Jo mere lie maa bap, bhai bahen, sab kuchh he.

Shalini ; kya tum us se pyar karte ho???

Shameer ; (smaile) ha.... Par vo pyar nahi jo tum samaz rahi ho. Vo mera pariwar he. Family. Jise me hamesa ke lie chhod kar ja raha hu.

Sawal to bahot the. Par shalini khamosh hi rahi. Raste me na shameer ne kuchh khaya. Na pani piya. Dhup tez hui tab jakar vo car shusumi ke mahel ke boundary ka gat cross karti he. Bada sa darwaja. Takriban hathi bhi ek sath do ghus jae. Hight bhi bahot jyada. Kisi ka par hona to bahot hi jyada mushkil he.
Ran ke andar ek alag si duniya. Bahar pani nahi or us deewar ke andar ek alag si duniya. Ped podhe thodhe. Ese ese fulo or falo ke ped jo vaha ki abohawa or vaha ki jamini par kabhi panap hi rahi shakte. Bahot hi khubshurat. Vo badi si deewar ke andar us shapno ki duniya bahot badi hi thi. Gate se mahel tak ka rasta hi 4 se 5 km ka tha. Shameer dekh kar heran tha. Jise shalini ne bhi mahesus kiya.

Shalini ; (smaile) ise apna hi samazo.

Shameer ; kese samazu ise apna. Me to ek gulam hu.

Shalini ki smaile chali gai. Use ye pata chal gaya ki shameer dhan dolat se bik to shakta he. Par apno ke badle nahi. Vo esa lalachi bhi nahi he. Shameer ki najar shusumi pe gai or uska look dekh kar shameer sock ho gaya. Black dress me vo koi rani ki tarah hi lag rahi thi.
Jo uski ke intjar me khadi thi. Khubshurat chahere par ek alag hi tej. Shameer se milne ki bekarari bhi uske face par saf dikhai de rahi thi.
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Car ruki or sirf shameer hi bahar nikala. Kyo ki bahar dhup thi. Or shalini nahi nikal sakti thi. Vahi hal shusumi ka bhi tha. Shameer ke intjar me vo bekarire me bahar hi rahi. Sirf ek ped ki chhav ke sahare. Shameer us car se utat kar aas pas bas ek bar dekhta he. Vaha sirf ek mahel nahi tha kai mahel the. Shameer shusumi ko dekh kar mushkuraya. Or uske karib pahoch gaya.

Shameer ; shalam rani saheba. Aap ka gulam hajir he.

Shusumi ke face ki smaile thodi si feki pad gai.

Shusumi ; me tumhari rani nahi hu handsome. Muje kuchh or kahe kar pukaro.
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Shameer fir zuk jata.

Shameer ; jesha meri rani ka hukam. Kahiye kya kahe kar pukaru meri rani ko

Shusumi ko feel huaa. Ek inshani dill ek chudel ko chhalave me fasne ke bavjud pighla raha tha.

Shusumi ; mene kaha na. Me tumhari rani nahi hu.

Shameer ; to fir??? Kya hu me?? Me aap ki gulami kabul kar chuka hu. Apni akhri shash tak aap ke har hukam ka palan karunga.

Shusumi ko dobara shameer ka dill jitna tha. Ek bar vo jeet chuki thi. Par shameer badla sa najar aaya. Shusumi chahti thi ki vaha rahekar shameer dill se khush rahe.

Shusumi ; (smaile) tumhari maa ko tumhare papa kya kahe kar pukarte the???

Ab shameer ko vo shusumi najar aai jis se use pyar huaa tha. Vo mushkura pada. Ek pal ke lie hi sahi. Par vo gam bhul gaya.

Shameer ; (smaile) darling, sweetheart, sexy, hotty. Mene to bachpan me esa hi sab suna tha.

Shusumi ; (smaile) to tum bhi muje inhi name se pukaroge. No rani no rajkumari. Or mere samne kabhi zukoge nahi.

Shameer ke face ki smaile or jyada gaheri hui. Jo shalini ne bhi dekha. Or cat me bethi vo bhi mushkura di.

Shameer ; (smaile) jesha aap kahe Darling.

Shusumi bhi khil utthi or shameer bhi. Mard hamesa narajgi me apne pyar ko chhupata he. Use bas pyar jatane ka bahana chahiye. Jese apne pyar ka khayal rakhna. Or bahana bhi esa ki jese jataenge ki ye pyar nahi. Me to apna farz pura kar raha hu. Bas yahi bahana shusumi ne shameer ko de diya. Sirf Darling sunkar shusumi halka sa sharmati he.

Shusumi ; (sharmana smaile) ha ab thik he. Tum chalo me aati hu.

Shameer samaz gaya ki dhup use sath aane se rok rahi he. Vo aage badha or mahel ke dwar tak pahocha. Samne ek blue saree me shalma khadi thi. Shalma thi to bahar ki taraf par vo dekh shaneer ko hi rahi thi.

Shusumi ; ye shalma he.

Shameer ek dam se chok gaya. Kyo ki shameer ke pichhe se hi aavaj aai thi vo shameer ke pichhe hi thi. Shameer ne pahele shusumi ko dekha. Fir shalma ko. Shalim ki bahen shalma sawali par akarshak badan.
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Shusumi ne shameer ke baju ko bahot ahista se pakada. Jese cupal ki taraf.

Shusumi ; aao shalma hamare sath aao.

shusumi shameer se chipak kar andar chalne lagi. Jese uski biwi ho. Use mahel ke andar le gai.

Shusumi ; (smaile) ye hamare rahene ki jagah. Mene khas tumhare lie taiyar kiya he. Har ek chiz ko mene khud sajaya he.

Shameer pahele to mahel ki sundarta ko dekhta he. Uske face pe smaile thi.
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Par anjane me uske muh se shusumi ko taklif dene vali bat nikal gai.

Shameer ; (smaile) rahene ke lie to koi apna dill hi de de. Us se bahetar kya hoga.

Par bolne ke bad use ehsas huaa. Vo ruk gaya.

Shusumi ; (mayus) maf karna dill mere pas nahi he.

Anjane me shameer se galti hui.

Shameer ; (smaile) chale sweetheart...

Shusumi ke chahere par smaile aa gai. Shameer ne use apna dill kahe kar pukara. Shusumi ne shalma ko hishara kiya. Or shalma ne bolna chalu kiya.

Shalma ; sir ye aap ka bad room he. Aap ko koi bhi chiz ki jarurat ho yaha sab kuchh he.
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Shameer ; sabse pahele to me koi sir nahi hu. Me bhi tumhari tarah ek gulam hu. To agar sir bolna ho to mujse bat mat karna. Ha agar dost samzo to muje shameer bol sakti ho.

Shusumi ka face fir mayus ho gaya. Shameer ne room ko dekha.

Shameer ; (smaile) wow kafi khubshurat he hotti.
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Par is bar shusumi mushkurai nahi thoda aage badhi. Is bar shusumi ne shameer ka hath chhod diya. Par shameer ne fat karte shusumi ki gand pe ek mar diya. Shusumi ne palat kar socking smaile karte hue dekha.

Shameer ; me kya karu. Jab bhi papa meri mom ko hoti bolte to unki bum ko pakka marte the.

Shusumi mushura gai. Use halki si sharam bhi aai. Or bahot achha bhi laga. Shameer bar bar esi bat bolta jis se shusumi ko dukh hota. Or uske turant bad hi vo kuchh esa karta jis se shusumi khush bhi ho jati. Shusumi ye to samaz gai ki shameer ke dill me uske lie pyar to he. Par ab bhi vo kisi bandhan me bandha huaa he.

Shusumi ; (smaile) ye sab tumhare lie he. Jo marji chahe paheno.
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Shameer dekhta he. Ek se ek mahenge kapde jute. Jese kisi maharaja ke ho. Shameer kuchh nahi bola.

Shalma ; me jau rajkumari Ji??
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Shusumi ; jab me na hou yaha tab tum har wakt inke sath rahogi. Or yaad rahe inhe khush rakhne ke lie kuchh bhi karna pade tum karogi. Kuchh bhi matlab kuchh bhi samzi.

Shameer matlab samaz gaya tha. Par vo kuchh bhi nahi bola.

Shalma ; (smaile sharmana) me inke lie kuchh khane pine ka intjam karti hu.

Shameer ; iski koi jarurat nahi he. Muhe jo chahiye hoga me tumse kahe dunga shalma.

Shalma ; (smaile) ji sir. Ohhhh sorry shameer.

Shalma jese hi gai shusumi shameer par tut padi. Use bad par dhakel kar uske lips se apne lips jod deti he. Or joro se kiss karne lagi. Shameer ye chahta to nahi tha par vo bhi uska sath dene laga.
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Shusumi ; kya huaa. Tumhe pasand nahi??

Shameer ; nahi vo darsal muje thakan lag rahi he. Me sona chahta tha. Aap ki ijajat ho to???

Shusumi kuchh or chahti thi. Par vo khadi ho gai.

Shusumi ; (mayus smaile) achha thik he. Tum aram karo. Koi bhi chiz ki jarurat ho to muje pukarna me turant aa jaungi.

Shusumi chali gai. Shameer ne rat bahot sharab pi thi. Or subah se pani tak nahi piya tha. Shameer apne aap ko jan buch kar taklif de raha tha. Shusumi ke jate hi uski ankho se fir anshu nikal gae. Vo bad par leta or so gaya.

Shalini shusumi ko ye bata deti he ki shameer ne rat sharab pi thi. Or subah se pani tak nahi piya.
 
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