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Incest Baadshah ~ The Tales of Debauchery

Kya Veer apni life behtar kar paega ya sab kuch kho baithega?

  • Veer Baadshah banega

    Votes: 1,426 82.7%
  • Sab kuch kho baithega

    Votes: 27 1.6%
  • Kuch paega toh kuch khoega

    Votes: 235 13.6%
  • Kuch nahi bann paega

    Votes: 36 2.1%

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Werewolf

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शानदार जबरदस्त भाई लाजवाब update bhai jann superree duperrere update

Ye dono billiya Kab zagdana band nhi krengi lagta hey jab dekho tab ek dusre ko panja marte rehati hey...
Shayad dheere dheere unme dosti ho jaaye?
Aur ye veer business ko leke to bohot hi confident hey to ohh success krega lagata hey aisa lag raha tha but.....

Aur kaira ke ghar mey jane ke bad usko ohh diary mili hey but usmey Asia kya hey jo ki Veer ko itna tensed hogya tha..
Ye aage dikhaya jayega.
Our do din ke bad Kiara ko dene ke bad Kiara bhi do din tak padti rahi par uski kuch faayda huva ki nhi ye ab agle update mey dekhna padega kya hota hey..


Aur veer ka mission bhi sala pura nhi huva lagta hey man uske bade vale L... Lagye hey aisa bashit hota hey..
Veer ka mission ek prakaar se hold par chala gaya hai.
Aur kaira ko Aisa kya pata chala veer ki favorability itni gir gayi hey ye bada valaa zatka tha veer keliye...

Ab age dekhne mey bada majedar hone valaa hey...
Dhanyavaad! Keep supporting! :five:
Ye kya bkchodi h bhai...ye last me kya kr die aap, totally find fck bro🤯😱...veer ko jhatke pe jhatke mil rhe h😵.. Phle wo precious skill(one & only)...and then Kiara's favourability decreasement or wo b 50...my god🥴🤦‍♂️..dis is going insane bro...meko lgta h ab zda khusi veer ke hisse me h ni😁...fir suru ho gya uski zindagi me laude lgne ka silsila😏... Khair ye to veer ki kismat hi h..hum kuch ni kr skte.. Well, now I'm really excited to know wts gonna be happen in next update🙄.. Eagerly waiting🧐, much love bro 😍👍💯🙏
Mene toh pehle hi bola tha ki uski kismat jhandu bhi hai. Ju log hi jal rahe the uski kismat se :laugh:
thanks btw! And keep supporting :five:

Ye baut bada kand ho gaya aage kya hota hai ye dilchasp hoga
Already posted hai agle update. Nahi padha toh padhiyega. Dhanyavaad!
Bohat he zabaradast lajawab update kaeera ne khud ko kamre band krdiya Kia usne wo diary parhi hogi shayad ye diary uski mom se related hy
Dhanyavaad! Keep supporting :shakehands:
 

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Update - 133 ~ Labyrinth and Invitation

Ab tak...

Mission khatam ho chuka tha toh notification toh aana hi chaahiye tha. Par wo nahi aaya,

Aur jo aaya, usse dekh Veer ke hosh udd gaye.

*Ding*

[Kaera’s favorability has dropped to 50.]

‘Wh-What???? N-Noooooo!!’


Ab aage...

Veer ne apni aankhein band kii ya yu kahe ki uski aankhein apne aap hi band ho gayi. Uske shareer ko ek jhatka laga aur uski consciousness drift hoke kahi aur hi chali gayi.

‘Ye- Ye kaha hu mein?’

Usse kuch bhi dikhaayi nahi diya. Chaaro orr andhkaar hi andhkaar faila hua tha. Aisa lag raha tha maano woh andhere me doobe kisi space me ho.

‘P-Pari? Pariiii???’

[M-Maaste…. r…. Maaste….. r…. K…y….a a…a…p m… u…. j… h… e……………….]

‘Pari?????’

Jo awaaz Veer ko Pari ki sunaayi de rahi thi, woh dheere dheere gaayab ho gayi. Aur ek ghanghor sannaata chhaa gaya. Woh na hi kuch sunn paa raha tha aur na hi kuch dekh paa raha tha.

Woh apne badan ke ango ko bhi mehsoos nahi kar paa raha tha.

Ek bhayanak ghabrahat janm lii.

‘Pariiiiiiiii????????’

Pari ko pukaarne ka koi fayda na hua. Aisa laga jaise woh poori tarah se uss se alag ho chuka tha.

‘Calm down Veer! Calm yourself down!’

Usne ek lambi saans lii aur khud ko shaant kiya. Apni tezz dhadkano ko thoda thaam usne dhyaan lagaaya.

‘Pari mujhe sunn nahi paa rahi. Aur na hi Pari ko mein. Iska matlab hamaare connection ke beech kuch aisa hai jo hume ek dusre se baat karne se rok raha hai.’

Usne fauran hi apni sthiti ka aaklan kiya. Usse yaad aaya ki chand palo pehle woh Pari ko nirdesh de raha tha.


‘Do it Pari!’

[P-Par Master!? Finally aapke paas mauka hai apne pendant ke raaz ke baare me jaan’ne ka. Aisi skill dobaara nahi milegi.]

‘Mene kaha na! Do it!’

[P-Par-]

‘Pariiii!!!!!!’

[Theek hai toh!]

*Ding*

[Seer Vision has been used.]


Yahi hua tha. Haan! Yahi toh hua tha.

Veer ko yaad tha acche se. Usse ye bhi yaad aaya ki Pari ne Seer Vision ke baare me kya bataya tha.

[Seer Vision ~

Description : Grants the vision of a seer. The skill allows the user to instantly witness the past related to anything. Beware! Mental pain is guaranteed. If the user fails to reclaim the memory, skill will terminate automatically.]

Ab sab kuch sense bana raha tha. Ye woh legendary skill thi jo usse kisi bhi vastu se sambandhit uska ateet poora ka poora dikha sakti thi.

Ek prakaar se ye uske ‘Check’ function ki tarah hi thi. Par uss se kahi zyaada aadhunik. Jo check function nahi dekh sakta tha woh Seer Vision dekh sakta tha.

Ab usse samajh aaya ki kyu Pari itne peeche lagi hui thi ki woh isse apne pendant par istemaal kare. Agar usne aisa kiya hota, toh pendant ka raaz ek jhatke me khul ke saamne aa jaata. Lekin kya pendant ka raaz Miss Kaera se zyada zaroori tha?

Veer ke liye ~ Nahi!

Aur isliye, usne aisi skill ko daav par lagaane se pehle ek baar bhi nahi socha.

Dikkat yahi thi ki iske istemaal ke saath saath aane waale bhayanak maansik dard ko bhi jhelna tha. Aur itna hi nahi, agar kisi kaaran vash wo chhipi hui yaad ko paane me nakaam hota hai toh skill wahi apne aap band ho jayegi.

Dusre shabdo me, skill barbaad chali jayegi.

Ye bohut risky tha. Kyuki jokhim bhi tha aur safalta ki koi guarantee bhi nahi.

‘Agar description ko dhyaan me rakha jaaye toh mujhe memory retrieve karni hai. That’s right! Mujhe sirf uss par hi dhyaan dena hai.’

Veer ne sahi disha me sochna shuru kiya.

Usne ye skill uss diary par istemaal ki thi jo usse Kaera ke puraane ghar me kahi chhipi hui mili thi.

Veer ke mann me kayi sawaal the. Jese ki woh diary waha kar kya rahi thi? Kya kabhi Kaera ya kisi aur ko iss diary ke baare me pata nahi laga? Aise aneko sawaal se woh joojh raha tha. Par filhaal inke liye samay nahi tha.

Kaera ke emotions ko baahar laane ke liye usse ek strong emotional impact dena zaroori tha. Ek prakaar ka emotional breakdown. Jab diary khol Veer ne andar dekha toh woh samajh gaya tha usse kya karna hai.

Abhi usne khud ko sambhaala hi tha ki tabhi,

‘Urghhh~’

Achanak se ek baar phir uski consciousness kahi drift hone lagi.



‘Aaaarrgghh~’

Aisa laga maano jese usse koi kheech ke kahi le jaa raha tha. Uske mastishk me ek bhayanak dard utha.

Dard ke maare usne aankhein band kar lii, aur jab sab kuch shaant hone ke baad usne aankh khol dekha toh,



Uske saamne ek labyrinth maujood tha. Yaani ek bhool-bhulaiyaa. Ek prakaar ka maze.

‘Ye toh ek-!!?’

Woh ashcharya-chakit reh gaya. Aas paas usne dekha, dur dur tak koi nazar nahi aaya. Sirf ek hi raasta tha uske liye aur woh tha iss labyrinth me ghusna.

‘Shayad isliye skill me likha hua tha ki agar memory retrieve karne me fail huye toh ye band ho jayegi. I get it now. Samajh gaya ye tough kyu hai itna.’

‘But know this… I’m not gonna fall back!’

Nidar hoke woh andar chal diya.

Andar ghuste hi,


“Eaaaaaaaaaarrrrghhhhh~”

*Screeeeeeeechhhhhhhh*

“Aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa”

“Die! Die! Die!!!!”

“Noooooooooo~”


Kaan ke parde faad dene waali alag alag cheenkhe aur awaazein sunaayi padne lagi. Apne kaano par haath rakh woh aage badha,

*hic* *hic*

“Uwaaaaaa~”


Kahi kisi chhote se bacche ki rone ki awaaz usse sunaayi deti, toh kahi kisi mahila ke rone ki. Ye jagah kisi bhootiya jagah se kam nahi thi.

‘Kya ye sab? Kaera ki yaado ka hissa hai? Ya fir diary ki?’

Ek bada sawaal aur khada hua.

Woh chal hi raha tha jab uske saamne achanak ek kaali dhundh si chhaane lagi. Bhayanak kaala dhua ikhatta hua aur uska ekmaatr raasta rok diya.

‘This still won’t stop me!’

Bina ghabraaye woh uss kaale dhue me ghus gaya. Aur ghuste hi,

“Aaaaaaaaaarggghhhhhhhhh!!”

Uski dard ke maare cheekh nikalni shuru ho gayi. Phir agle hi shan,


“Pagal ladki!”

“Hahahahaha!!”

“Tum ajeeb ho! Ajeeb! Hume tumse dosti nahi karni! Hato meri bench se!!”

“Mummy dekho! Woh ladki kitni ajeeb hai.”

“Arre ye ladki pagal hai. Hehehe~ Kuch bolti hi nahi hai.”

“Oye iski choti kheecho dekho kaise royegi hehe”

“Hey dekho toh kitna paisa hai saali ke paas.”

“Mene suna hai iske papa bohut bade businessman hai.”

“Tabhi toh paiso pe aish karti hai. Hmph! I hate such people.”

“Sahi kaha. Ghamand toh dekho! Jese apne aap ko koi maharani samajhti ho.”

“Baap ne zaroor teachers, principal ko paise diye honge. Tabhi toh kabhi kuch bolte nahi hai isko.”

“Kya hi kar legi itna padh ke? Raub toh dekho zara iska. Dekho toh, kaise car se utar rahi hai. Jaise duniya me iske hi paas mehngi car hai.”

“Saali par hai bohut hot yaar! Iska baap agar itna wazandaar na hota toh apne laude pe baithaya hota mene isse. Hahahaha!”


Kuch aisi anek baate Veer ke kaano me goonjne lagi. Woh haafte hue jaise hi uss dhundh se baahar aaya, uski saansein ukhadne lagi.

Ek ajeeb sa dard uske seene me utha. Saath hi gussa bhi.

‘Kya ye Kaera ki buri yaadein hai? I-Iska matlab Seer Vision mujhe sirf diary ki hi nahi, diary se jude insaan ki bhi yaadein dikha sakta hai?’

Dheere dheere Veer ke kaano se woh awaazein gaayab hui.

‘Aise aur kitne dard aap apne seene me daba ke rakhi ho huh?’

Woh bhool-bhulaiyaa me anumaan laga ke raasto par mudta gaya.

Abhi kuch derr hi hui thi jab saamne usse ek choti bacchi dikhaayi dii. Woh frock pehne neeche zameen par baithe apna sarr jhuka ke ro rahi thi.


*hic* *hic*

“Mamma!”


Veer ko zaroorat nahi thi ye samajhne ki ki saamne baithi ye chhoti si bacchi kaun thi.

“Mamma! Mein ajeeb hu kya? Sab mujhe ajeeb kyu kehte hai? *hic* Sab mujh se dur kyu bhaagte hai? *hic* Mamma! Wapas aa jao na! Mein ab bilkul shaitani nahi karungi. *hic* Mamma!”

Veer aage badha,

“Nahi! Nahi Kaera! Tum bilkul ajeeb nahi ho.”

Woh kehte hue aage aaya. Usne Kaera ko chheena chaaha par uske chheete hi woh ladki ek dhue me tabdeel ho gayi.

Labyrinth uske saath jese khel raha tha.

Aise kayi kaali dhundh se guzarte hue aur dard pe dard sehte hue woh jese tese apni manzil ke qareeb pohuch hi gaya.

Iss baar uske saamne koi kaali dhundh nahi thi. Saamne tha ek ujaala. Peela prakaash jo uski aankho ko chaka-chaundh kiye hue tha.

Woh uss prakaash ki orr badha aur jese hi roshni ki kiran ke sampark me woh aaya, ek baar phir woh khichta hua kahi aur chala gaya.

Fir sab kuch. Usse sab kuch nazar aa gaya. Memory retrieve ho chuki thi. Aur uske baad,

*huff* *huff* *huff*

[Maaasteerrr!!]

Uske kaano me awaaz aayi. Woh waapas se apne hosh me aa chuka tha. Par uski haalat ab bigad rahi thi. Sarr bhanna raha tha.

[Master you did it! You finally did it.]

Woh paseene se lathpath tha. Pari ko jawaab dene tak ke liye wo apni saasein durust nahi kar paa raha tha.

Aankho me nami bhi thi. Usne apne haatho me maujood uss diary ko dekha aur apni t-shirt ke andar daba ke chhupa liya.

Kaera jisse Veer ki absence ke baare me jab dhyaan aaya, woh fauran hi usse dhundhte hue waha aayi,

Kaera : You are here!? What happened?

Veer : N-Nothing! Mera bas perr fisal gaya tha.

Woh haafte hue utha.

[Master! This is bad! Jald hi skill ke side-effects aapko hit karenge. Aap yu hi yaha khade nahi reh paoge. Jaldi se nikaliye yaha se. Quick!]

Veer ne wahi kiya bhi! Usne apni himmat baandh khud ko zara bhi exhausted show nahi kiya. Par andar se usse aisa lag raha tha jaise uski saari shakti kisi ne choos lii ho.

[Hang in there Master! Bas thodi derr aur!]

Veer jese tese apne ghar pohucha. Kismat ki baat thi ye ki tab hall me koi bhi maujood nahi tha. Aur darwaza bhi lock nahi tha. Shayad saara mahila mandal ek kamre me baith gupshup me laga hua tha. Iska fayda utha ke Veer seedha apne kamre me ghusa,

*Click*

Darwaza lock karte hi usne sabse pehle diary ko chhipa ke rakha. Woh jaanta tha uske saath usse kya karna tha. Par ab aur nahi,

[Master!!!]

Woh ladkhadaya aur apne bistar par gir behosh ho gaya.

Woh shaam tak behoshi me hi tha. Aur usse hosh bhi aaya toh darwaze peetne ke shor se.

*Bammmmm* *Baaammmmm*

“Veeeeeeer!!!! Veer kholo! Veer???”

Awaaz Tej ki thi.

Fauran uth usne darwaza khola. Aur apne bhai ko sahi salamat dekh Tej ne ek raahat ki saans lii. Veer ye dekh ke bhi hairat me tha ki sabhi log uske darwaaze ke baahar khade hue the.

Uski maa, Shweta, Aabha, Suman, Ragini. Sonali aur Bhumika bas nahi thi kyuki iss samay woh dono hi kaam par gayi hui thi.

Veer : Aap sab yaha?

Tej : Aur nahi toh kya? Jab hume pata chala ki tum ghar aa gaye ho toh tumhe awaaz lagaayi par tumne darwaza khola hi nahi.

Bhavna : Hume laga ki tum so rahe hoge beta. Par jab shaam hui toh Tej ke saath saath fir hume bhi chinta hone lagi aur isliye-

Veer : Ahhh! Samjha! Nahi! Actually mein so hi raha tha.

Tej (frowns) : Really?

Veer : Of course!

Bhavna : Accha chalo! Ab uth gaye ho toh haath muh dholo. Aur neeche aa jao. Suman! Chai bana lo.

Suman : Jii!

Ragini : Arre? Aap kyu taqleef karti ho? Mein hu na! Mein banaati hu.

Jaate jaate Ragini ne Veer ko dekha aur sharma ke waha se nikal gayi. Apne hi haatho ki chai woh Veer ko pilaana chaahti thi.

Veer : M-Mein aata hu. Aap sab chaliye!

Sab waha se neeche chal diye. Siwaye Aabha ke. Woh nazre jhukaaye wahi khadi rahi.

Aabha : A-Aap! Aap ne jhooth kaha na?

Veer jo haath muh dhone washroom jaa hi raha tha, achanak hi uske qadam ye sunn wahi rukk gaye.

Wo palta aur Aabha ko dekha,

Aabha : W-Wo mein jab sabke liye paani upar leke jaa rahi thi tab aapko ladkhadate hue apne kamre me jaate dekha tha. A-Aap theek toh ho na?

Veer bina kuch kahe aage badha, Aabha ghabraate hue peeche hui aur deewaar se jaa bhidi. Uske saamne aake Veer ne apna ek haath zorr se deewaar par maara jo Aabha ke kaan ke bagal se hoke guzra.

Bechari darr ke maare kisi chhipkali ki tarah deewaar se chipak ke reh gayi.

Aage uske kaan ki taraf Veer jhuka,

Veer : Aur ye baat kisi ko pata lagne na paaye. Hmm?

Aabha ne zorr se apna sarr haan me hilaaya. Yaha vaastav me usne Veer ki chori pakdi thi, par lag aisa raha tha jese woh khud Veer ke changul me phassi ho.

Veer (smiles) : Good!

Aabha ki chin ko haath me leke usne uska chehra upar kiya aur unn gulabi hontho ko apni giraft me le liya. Woh kasmasa ke reh gayi.

“Nnnnnn~”

Jab tak Veer ka mann na bhar gaya tab tak usne unn raseele hontho ka acche se rasspaan kiya.

Aabha ko chorr woh fresh up hoke jab neeche aaya, toh sab saath baithe chai pee rahe the. Woh bhi apni jagah par baith chai peene laga aur apni soch me pad gaya.

[Kya aapne decide kar liya hai?]

‘Hmm!’

[Aap ye waali skill lena chaahte ho na?]

‘Yes Pari!’

[Okay!]

*Ding*

[5000 points have been used.]

[Kaafi mehngi hai par useful hai.]

‘Thanks!’

[Ab aap kaisa mehsoos kar rahe ho?]

‘Tum jaanti toh ho. Fir kyu puch rahi ho?’

[Kyuki mein bina aapki permission ke aapke mann me nahi jhaakna chaahti. Physically toh mein jaanti hu aap theek ho ab. But mentally? Uska jawaab aap hi mujhe dijiye.]

‘Mein theek hu Pari!’

[Ek legendary skill hamesha ek keemat ke saath hi aati hai Master.]

‘I know!’

[Aapko yaad hai na? Pitcher ko maarte samay bhi aapne legendary skill use kii thi.]

‘Woh legendary skill thi?’

[Of course Master! Sylvia’s venom cure!! Ek legendary skill hi toh thi. Farq sirf itna hai ki tab aap asaani se legendary skill ko purchase kar sakte the kyuki tab system meharban tha. Par ab sirf mission ke zariye hi ye mil sakti hai.]

‘I see!’

[Aur aapko yaad hai na Sylvia’s venom cure ko istemaal karne ke baad aapke saath kya hua tha?]

‘Yeah! I remember! White blood cells zyada maatra me badh gaye the aur poison ko baahar kiye the. I suffered a lot of pain. Mujhe acche se yaad hai. Haha! Divya ka chehra tab dekhne laayak tha. And- Miss Suhana too!’

Suhana ki ek chhavi uske dimaag me aayi.

[Yes! Toh ab yaad rakhiyega kisi bhi legendary skill ko istemaal karne se pehle. Kuch na kuch side-effects hote hi hai inke. Kyuki ye aapke planet ke laws ke against jaati hai. They are too powerful. Aap dekh hi chuke ho.]

‘Laws ke against toh tum bhi ho Pari!’

[Well! Yes!]

Veer muskuraya,

‘Mein dhyaan rakhunga Pari!’

[Good thing!]

3 din guzar gaye. Aur Veer apne uss ek kaam me laga raha. Aur ant me woh Kaera ke paas gaya aur usse diary thama aaya.

2 din aur guzre. Kaera ke mission ki last date khatam ho chuki thi. Par system ki taraf se koi bhi message nahi aaya tha mission ke liye. Jo aaya tha woh tha ek notification.

Jisse padh Veer aur chinta me doob chuka tha. Kaera ki favorability ghat ke 50 par aa chuki thi. Ye sab ho kya raha tha?

Notification kyu nahi aa raha tha.

‘Pari? What the hell is going on?’

[Mein bhi confused hu Master. Notification aa jaana chahiye tha.]

‘Agar woh mujhe hate karne lagi hai toh mujhe chalega Pari par unke saath kuch galat nahi hona chahiye. I cannot see her fall like this.’

[Shayad-]

‘Shayad kya Pari please bolo. Mein bechain hu yaha. Woh theek hai na?’

[Master! Aapne apna kaam kar diya hai. Don’t worry!]

‘Don’t worry? Karan ka message aaya hai mujhe Pari ki Miss Kaera ne khud ko 2 din tak andar room me band kar ke rakha tha. Aur fir achanak se unki favorability kam ho jaana. Ye sab kya hai? Keh do ki woh mujhe hate kar rahi hai. Na ki unke emotions hamesha hamesha ke liye chale gaye hai.’

[Master aisa ho sakta hai ki-]

‘K-Kya?’

[Shayad wo cheezo ko process kar rahi hai. Aur abhi tak kisi decision par nahi pohuchi hai. Shayad unhone kuch socha hai par abhi uss par poori tarah se atal nahi hai. Aur isliye mission clear ka notification hume nahi mila hai.]

‘....’

[Yes! Yahi kaaran hai Master! Ab aap ready rahiyega!]

‘Huh?’

[Woh aapko hate bhi kar sakti hai. Ya pyaar bhi. Hume jald pata lag jayega.]

‘I hope wo theek ho jaaye!’

***

Agli subaah Veer ki aankh jab khuli toh Bhumika uske seene se zorr se lagi hui thi. Aur usne khud ne Bhumika ko apne seene me kass ke bheencha hua tha. Uske doodh veer ki chaathi me dhasse hue the.

Veer maan’na toh nahi chaahta tha par ye ehsaas alaukik tha.

Uske bagal se Tej bhi laiti thi par woh ghode bech ke odhne wali chaadar ke upar hi so rahi thi.

Veer ne alag hone ka prayaas kiya ki itne me hi,

Bhumika ki aankhein khul gayi. Dono ek dusre ko dekhte rahe. Samay jaise ruk gaya tha. Aur jab kuch derr baad unhe dhyaan aaya, toh fir toota unpe sharm ka pahaad.

Veer (blushes) : I-I’m sorry! Mein wo neend me-

Bhumika (blushes) : I-It’s okay! Y-You can hold me i-if you want.

Veer : Eh?

Veer hakka bakka reh gaya. Kya usne abhi abhi sahi suna? Veer ne uski baat maan usse jakde rakha.

Veer : Aap mujhse kuch- akele me baat karna chaahti thi?

Bhumika : Hmm? H-Haan! Mene kuch decide kiya hai. Kya hum raat me baat kar sakte hai?

Veer : S-Sure!

Aur uske baad uski haya firse laut aayi. Surkh laal gaal liye woh chhat-pataati palko ko upar kar kabhi Veer ko dekhti toh kabhi kahi orr. Par dono kuch derr tak yu hi ek dusre ki baaho me bane rahe jab tak neeche shorgul na machne laga.

Kya kabhi aisi subaah Veer ke ghar me ho sakti hai jab chehel pehel na ho?

Aaj ki subah Sonali behek chuki thi.

Dining table par baithe Veer ko woh jhunjhlaaye jaa rahi thi.

Sonali : O-Oye!! Tum sunn rahe ho na meri baat?

Veer : Sunn raha hu!

Sonali : Fir bhi tumhaare kaano me juu nahi reng rahi? Arree! Mein keh rahi hu hamare truck ke karmchaari kaam chodh bhaag rahe hai. Unka aatmvishvaas gir raha hai. A-Aur- Aur aaj koi aane waala hai. Koi badi hasti. Mujhe Prachi ne bataya hai. Oyeeee!

Prachi Veer ke food truck me kaam karne waali ek ladki thi. Woh sonali ki madad karwaati thi. Aur kuch kuch recipes bhi bana leti thi.

Veer : Sunn raha hu!

Veer ke lagatar iss ignorant attitude ko dekh Sonali ka maatha aur thanak utha.

Sonali : T-Tum-!!!! Jao! Bhaad me jao! Hmph! Mera kaam tha bataana, mene bata diya. Aage tum jaano aur tumhara kaam jaane.

Aur agle hi pal woh muh fula ke baith bad-badaane lagi,

“Ek toh madad karo, upar se mahashay ko koi parvaah nahi hai. Mein koi kaam waali bai hu? Jo itna kaam thopte hi jaa rahe ho. Agar kisi din ye kaam ka bojh meri jaan le liya toh bhi mujhe aashcharya nahi hoga. Koi naazuk sii ladki ko itna kaam deta hai bhala? Itni badi zimmedaari koi khud bhi akele nahi uthaata, par yaha dekho. Mein hu! Jo-”

Uske non-stop radio ko sunn Veer ne uski orr dekha,

Veer : Tumhara naashta thanda ho raha hai!

Sonali : H-Huh? *blushes* h-haan toh khaa rahi hu. Naashta yahi hai, kahi udd ke nahi chala jayega.

Veer mand mand muskuraate hue uske iss chulbule-pann ka lutf leta gaya.

Aur naashta khatam karte hi woh utha.

Veer : Chalo!

Sonali : Huh?? Kaha?

Veer : Food truck ke liye, aur kaha? Abhi thodi derr pehle tum hi toh chillaa rahi thi na?

Sonali : O-Oohh!

Tej : Veer kaha jaa rahe ho?

Veer : Business time Teju dii! Aap waha bore ho jaogi. Mein aapke liye laut ke kuch launga na. *smiles*

Tej (blushes) : Theek hai! Mein wait karungi!

Ragini : A-Aur mere liye Veer?

Veer (smiles) : Aapke liye bhi launga bhabhi!

Ragini (blushes) : Mujhe intezaar rahega!

Dur baithi Bhavna iss conversation exchange ko bade hi gaur se sunn rahi thi aur dekh bhi rahi thi.

Idhar Sonali Veer ka peecha karta hue fauran hi baahar aayi. Veer ne apni Rolls Royce Ghost nikaali hui thi. Sonali jab andar baithi toh car ki khubsoorti ko dekhti reh gayi.

Veer : Kya hua?

Sonali : Woh- Mein pehli baar baith rahi hu isme.

Veer : Ohh!

Jald hi woh dono food truck ke saamne the. Ye Veer ka pehla waala food truck tha jo usne sabse pehle khareeda tha. Aur Sonali bhi issi me kaam karti thi.

Dono utar ke jab truck par pohuche toh Sonali ne chaavi se truck ko khola. Veer fir usse leke city side chal diya.

Daily ki apni jagah par truck ko laga ke set karne ke baad, woh customers ke aane ka intezaar karne lage.

Jab Prachi aur baaki sabhi ne Veer ko dekha toh woh sab hairaan reh gaye. Veer kabhi bhi iss tarah unke truck ke andar nahi aata tha. Aaj aisa kya special tha?

Veer : Toh baat kya hai?

Sonali : Woh-

Prachi : Sir mein batau?

Veer : Sure!

Prachi : Baat ye hai ki ladko me motivation gir raha hai. Woh food truck ki jagah kahi aur bhaag rahe hai. Unhe ye kaam nahi karna. Unka kehna hai ki yaha kaam kiya toh hamesha ke liye yahi fasse reh jayenge. Kuch kar nahi payenge.

Sonali : Dekha jaaye toh unki baat sahi bhi hai. Mujhe hi dekh lo!

Usne taunt maara. Veer ne jab usse ghoor ke dekha toh woh shaant ho gayi.

Veer : Samjha! Kya tum me se kisi ne unhe ye nahi bataaya ki jald hi hamara business bohut badhne wala hai?

Sonali : Ehh?? Ye kya nayi nayi tum fek rahe ho ab?

Veer : Ohh! Iss nadaan ladki ko bhi nahi maalum.

Sonali (bhadakte hue) : Oyeee! Nadaan kisse kaha?

Veer : Anyways! Prachi! Mein tumhe bata du ki jald hi hamara business badhne wala hai.

Prachi : Ye toh acchi baat hai sir! Toh kya mein unhe phone kar ye bata du? Mujhe yakeen hai woh waapas laut aayenge.

Veer (smiles) : Aur yahi toh mein nahi chaahta!

Prachi : Huh?

Veer : Jo log ek acche khaase chalte business se abhi bhaag gaye, zara socho ki jab business sach me kabhi agar manda pad gaya toh kya karenge woh?

Prachi : W-Woh-!!

Veer (smiles) : Ye accha hua ki woh chale gaye. Hume unki zaroorat nahi.

Sonali : Par unke jaane se baaki logo me aatmvishvaas gir gaya hai. Aur unka mann machal raha hai kaam chhodhne ke liye.

Veer : Toh uska hal hai unka aatmvishvaas badhaana!

Prachi : W-Woh kaise?

Veer (smiles) : Ussi ke liye toh mein aaya hu yaha!

Kehte hue usne apni shirt utaar ke apni kamar par baandh lii, aur bas ek black t-shirt me aa gaya.

Veer : Aaj unhe bataya jayega ki ek chef hona kitni responsibility ka kaam hota hai.

Jab uski aankho me woh Tej Prachi ne dekha toh woh mantra-mugdh hoke reh gayi.

Prachi : S-So cool!

Veer : Sonali! Saare food trucks par call kar unhe yaha bulao.

Sonali ne baat maan sabhi ko waha bula liya. Ladke aur ladkiya sabhi log the. Ye sabhi mil ke Veer ke alag alag food trucks ko sambhaalte the. Prachi inn sab se hisaab liya karti thi aur Sonali ko deti thi. Aur baad me Sonali usse manage kar Veer ko saupti thi.

Kuch iss tarah se ye chain kaam karti thi. Khaas baat ye thi ki Veer ke food trucks bhalayi dikhne me ek jaise the parantu sabhi ke menus alag alag hua karte the.

Koi sirf subaah ko lagta tha aur naashta serve karta tha toh koi din me lag ke thaali system par based tha. Koi fast food serve karta tha toh koi shakes and blends ke liye tha. Uske paas harr tarah ki variety maujood thi.

Jab sabhi ekatr hue toh Veer ne unhe ek lecture diya ki chef hona apne aap me kitna zimmedaari waala kaam tha. Aaj woh unn sab ko karke dikhaane waala tha.

Line se sabhi trucks lag gaye.

Shuruaat me toh gine chune log hi aaye par jaise hi logo ki dincharya ke working hours khatam hone ka samay hua, jab sooraj ki kirane ahista ahista chhatati gayi toh ilaake me chehel pehel badh gayi. Mausam bhi thoda sheetal ho utha.

Thaka haara aadmi kaam ke baad apne colleagues ke saath khaane peene ke liye nikalne laga. Aur fir Veer ne shuru kiya apna jaadu.

Jaise hi uske haath kitchen ke samaano par pade woh jaise ek alag hi duniya me chala gaya.

Bohut hi kam mauka milta tha usse apni cooking skills dikhaane ka. Of course! Uske paas wo jo thi!

Absolute Chef!!!!

Prachi (in shock) : S-Sir ko cook karna bhi aata hai??

Sonali : Haan!

Sonali ye maan’na toh nahi chaahti thi par daant peeste hue usse ye maan’na hi pada ki poore ghar me Veer se behtar khaana koi nahi bana paata tha.

Prachi ek student ki tarah Veer ke ird gird ghoomne lagi. Wo notes le rahi thi.
Prachi : Ahh? Oil ke saath butter?

Veer : Butter excessive heat me jaldi jal jaata hai Prachi. Toh usse thoda bachaane ke liye ye oil.

Prachi : Ohhhh!

Usne fauran hi apne notepad me usse notedown kar liya. Woh Veer ko prashansa bhari nazro se dekh rahi thi. Itne me do office ki ladkiya aayi aur Veer ko uska pehla order bhi mil gaya.

Veer (smiles) : Alright!

Veer ke bareek se bareek cheez ko dekh aur uski precise culinary skills ko dekh, na sirf waha maujood Prachi aur anya, balki Sonali bhi uski iss adaa par mohit ho gayi.

Woh ab sirf khaana nahi bana raha tha, woh ab ek artist ki tarah tha jiski kalaa ka pradarshan wo sabhi dekh paa rahe the.

Veer ne jab wo order unn ladkiyo ko diya toh dono excited hoke jaake khaane me lag gayi.

“Ohhhh my goddddd!!! Kitna tasty hai~”

“Hmm~ Par tumne usse nahi dekha? Chef ko? Wo to aur tasty hoga.”

“Hehehehehe~ Haan!”

Dekhte hi dekhte bheed jama hone lag gayi aur Veer ke food trucks bhaari vyast ho gaye. Woh idhar se udhar order complete karne me hi lag gaye.

Prachi bhaavuk ho uthi. Aaj tak usne itni bheed kabhi nahi dekhi thi. Harr guzarte pal Veer ke liye uski izzat badhti hi jaa rahi thi.

Veer : Prachi!! Inhe fryer me daalo!!!

Prachi : Yessss Sirrrr~

Veer : Sonali! Rolls ko wrap karo!

Sonali : Haan! K-Kar rahi hu!

Veer : Ek accha chef apne swaarth ke liye nahi, dusro ke liye cook karta hai. Samjhe???

“Yesssss Sirrrr!!!!!”

Veer ne aate hi apni upasthiti se poori kaaya palat kar dii thi.

Prachi baahar jaake logo se jab feedback lene gayi toh yaha Veer ne mauka dekh achanak se Sonali ko peeche se pakad liya.

Woh fryer se french fries nikaal rahi thi, par Veer uski kamar ko pakde apna chehra uske kandho par jhukaaye khada tha.

Akasmaat iss hamle se Sonali bhauchakki si reh gayi. Iske pehle ki Veer ko woh mana kar paati, Veer ka haath upar chala gaya aur Sonali murti ki tarah jamm ke reh gayi.

Uska haath sonali ke doodh par tha.

Sonali ke gaalo ka paara aise chadha jaise maano usse bukhaar aa gaya ho.

Sonali (blushes) : Chorro! Ch-Chorro warna mein- muh tod dungi tumhara.

Par Veer uske urojo ko masalne me laga hua tha.

Veer (smiles) : Ab kya kehna hai tumhara? Tum keh rahi thi business me mandi aa rahi hai? Log jaa rahe hai. Hmm? Toh ye bheed kaisi hai?

Sonali (blushes) : Nnnn~ Haaa~ Haaa~ Chhorro! J-Jaldi~ Prachi aati hogi! Chorro!!!

Veer : Nahi chorrunga!

Sonali : Kutte kameene!!!! Chorrr!! Ahhnnn~ Nnnnn~

Veer poori lagan se unn thano ko masalne laga. Usne Sonali ko pehli baar chhua tha aur wo zara bhi naraaz nahi tha.

Par usse jald hi Sonali ko chorrna pada kyuki Prachi aa rahi thi.

Prachi : S-Sir! Buri khabar! Woh famous hasti aa chuki hai aur aapse milna chaahti hai.

Veer jab baahar aaya toh uske saamne ek business suit me lady car ke paas khadi hui thi.

Uske paas aate hi usne khud hi haath aage badhaaya,

“Mister Veer?”

Veer : Yes! Aur aap?

Wese toh usne pehle hi check kar liya tha par formality karna toh zaroori tha.

“Mein tamanna!”

Woh boli aur apne haath mod khadi ho gayi.

Veer : Kya madad kar sakta hu aapki?

Tamanna : Do you know who I am?

Veer : No!

Veer ke knowledge par hasste hue woh guroor me boli,

Tamanna : Mein ek food critic hu.

Veer : Ohhh!

Tamanna : Mera kaam hai famous hotels, restaurants me jaake waha ka khaana taste karna aur uske baare me likhna. Apne reviews dena. Mera ek review acche khaase chalte firrte hotel ko sadak par laa sakta hai.

Veer shaant tha. Kyuki wo sach keh rahi thi.

Tamanna : Mein khud Mumbai se hu. Abhi tak baahar thi, kuch hafte pehle hi lauti hu. Mein aksar travel karti rehti hu. Iss food truck ko mene pehle kabhi nahi dekha tha. I guess ye abhi haal hi me khula hai!?

Veer : Jii!

Tamanna : Kal mein yaha se guzri toh by chance yaha aayi. Menu par ek signature dish dekh mene uski demand ki toh pata laga ki wo dish sirf truck ke owner ko hi banaani aati hai. Worker ne kaha tha ki mein kal aau toh isliye yaha aayi hu.

Veer : Then come, please!

Tamanna : Uss se pehle, ek walk ho jaaye?

Veer : Kyu nahi!

Veer jaanta tha woh kya karna chaah rahi thi. Woh owner se pehle baate karti thi, unke ravaiyye ko notice karti, unhe jaan boojh ke gussa bhi dilaati thi taaki wo uske jaal me phass jaaye aur fir wo unke baare me sab kuch likh sake. Veer ke saath bhi wo wahi karne waali thi.

Tamanna : Tum jaante ho mein number 1 food kis desh ka maanti hu?

[Huh? What the hell? Master? Hume iski bakwaas kyu sunn’na pad raha hai?]

‘Shaant Pari!’

Veer : Kis desh ka ma’am?

Tamanna (smiles) : Of course, Italy! Italian food best hai!

Veer : Aur second pe?

Tamanna : Mexican food!

Veer : Third?

Tamanna : Of course! It’s French food and spanish food!

Veer : Aur hamara Indian food?

Tamanna : Fourth!

Veer : Fourth kyu?

Tamanna : Apne saamne dekho!

Chalte chalte woh dono hi ek chaupaati ke nazdeek pohuch chuke the.

Tamanna : Dekho logo ko! Kaise thoos rahe hai! Hygiene dekho! Saaf safaayi dekho!

Veer : Par kuch log toh gloves pehne hai. Unke stalls bhi saaf hai.

Tamanna : Yahi to dikkat hai na. Sirf kuch log Mister Veer! Pata nahi logo ko sense kab aayega. Pata nahi ye sab kab sudhrenge. Food ko kachre ki tarah treat nahi kiya jaata. It should be handled delicately with hygiene.

Woh kareeb 15 minute tak bad-badaati rahi. Jab Veer ne usse achanak se rok diya,

Veer : One day!

Tamanna : Huh?

Veer : I’ll revolutionize the whole food industry.

Tamanna : What?????

Veer palta aur apne jeb me haath daal chal diya,

Veer : Come! I’ll show you what the real food is!

Veer ne Tamanna ko fir apni ek signature dish bana ke dii. Jo ki kuch nahi ek roll tha.

Tamanna disappoint hote hue wo roll uthaayi aur apne muh me daali. Jaise hi swaad, woh flavour uske taste buds ko hit kiye, wo wahi jamm gayi.

Veer : Tamanna ma’am??

Par koi jawaab nahi aaya. Agle hi pal Tamanna haatho me wo roll liye bhaagi aur apni car me baith gayi. Palak jhapakte car bhi waha se ravaana ho gayi.

‘What the fuck!!’

Veer yaha confused hi tha jab uske phone par ek message aaya aur phone vibrate hua,

*Buzzzz*

Message padhte hi Veer ke maathe par chinta ki lakeere chhaa gayi.

Message me likha tha~


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Aaj ke liye itna hi guys.
Update 5.3k words ka hai. Toh mujhe bolna na pade. Daba ke likes thokne ka aur revos dene ka. Agle update se crimson arc ka main plot shuru ho jayega. Tab tak ke liye,
Dhanyavaad! :shakehands:
Excellent update. Yeh ek aisa update tha jisko ek baar padhne ke baad dobara padhna padha. Jahan kifi sawal suljhe, kafi naye ulajh gaye.
Seer vision ko use kerne se Veer ki maansik dasha per kya asar hua, Labyrinth me kho sa jana, aur pehli baar Pari ka madad ke liye na hona, bahut hi rochak tha. Veer Kaera ki memory me utar gaya, uske pain ko feel kiya, lekin yeh samajh me nahi aaya ki us diary ko padh ker Kaera ko kya emotional shock laga. Kya weh apna bachpan bhool gayi thi. Ya yeh soch ker ki Veer ab diary ko padh ker uske mann ki baat jaan gaya hai. Agar yeh hai to Kaera ka Veer se naraz hona banta hai.
Ye ek naya angle aa gaya hai ki system kisi dusre planet ke log chala rahe hain, Pari bhi dusre planet se hai, mujhe to laga tha ki yeh koi AI type ki cheez hai, ab to lagne laga hai ki yeh kahin dusre planet se aa ker Veer ke andar ghus gayi hai.
Lagta hai ki Tamanna hi weh naya character hai, jo Veer ki Food Industry ko aage badhane me madad karegi.
Sonali ke saath aakhir chedkhan shuru ho gayi, uska reaction mazadar tha.
Dekhte hain kisne Veer ko madad ke liye bulaya hai, kya yeh ek trap hai ya kuch aur.
Ek baat aur, maine socha tha ki Kaera ke emotions ek dam se jaag jayenge. Per yeh idea accha laga, itni intelligent ladki ka dimag itni jaldi acdcept nahi karega.
Pictures were too good, very relevent.
 

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Ye ek naya angle aa gaya hai ki system kisi dusre planet ke log chala rahe hain, Pari bhi dusre planet se hai, mujhe to laga tha ki yeh koi AI type ki cheez hai, ab to lagne laga hai ki yeh kahin dusre planet se aa ker Veer ke andar ghus gayi hai.
Ye to update 4 me bata diya gaya tha na? :?:
 

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Update - 132 ~ Seer Vision

Ab tak :

Woh ekdum se peeche hui aur daud ke seedhe car ke andar jaa ke baith gayi.

'Fuuuucckkkkk!!!'

[...]

'Please tell me. It was again an accident. Right?'

[...]

'Right...???'

[....]


'Fuuucckkkkk!!!!'

Ab aage :

“Araam se dii!! Araam se!” Ek khubsoorat jawaan ladki apni badi behan ko ahista se sambhaal kar le jaa rahi thi.

Car me usse baithaate hue, usne driver ke bagal waali seat par baithe aadmi ko dekha aur boli, “Prakash Uncle, Dii ko sambhaal kar le jaana please!!”

Prakash : Ye bhi koi kehni ki baat hai Miss? Aap nishchint rahiye.

Ladki koi aur nahi, Sonia thi jo aphi badi behan Suhana ko hospital se leave karwa ke ghar le jaa rahi thi. Parantu, hospital ki kuch formalities ke liye usse rukna pada.

Suhana : Iske baad tum seedhe Mumbai ke liye nikal rahi ho. Theek hai na?

Sonia : Mein abhi jaana nahi chaahti par sirf aapke kehne pe mujhe jaana pad raha hai.

Suhana : Bilkul! Kyuki ab yaha tumhari zaroorat nahi hai. Business par dhyaan do! Tumne wese hi bohut din meri khatir-daari me waste kar diye hai.

Sonia : Ek behan ki seva karna samay ki wastage hai?

Suhana : Sonu!! Tum zaroorat se zyada parvaah kar rahi ho baby. Mein theek hu. Sach me!

Sonia : You were shot! Aur aap keh rahi ho aap sahi ho?

Suhana : Ab toh theek hu na par!?

Sonia : Bas Isliye aapki baat maan rahi hu. Warna mein yaha aapko akela chorr ke jaati hi nahi.

Suhana : Akeli kaha hu? Divya hai na? Aur Prakash Uncle bhi toh hai ab.

Sonia : That’s why! Anyways, agar aapko koi bhi taqleef hoti hai toh-

Suhana : Toh mein be-jhijak tumhe bata dungi. Yahi na? Pata hai baba mujhe.

Sonia : Fine! Th-Then I’m leaving.

Suhana (smiles) : Hmm! Mein bhi chalti hu. I’ll come soon. Okay?

Sonia agle hi shan bhaavuk ho, window se hi Suhana ke gale lag gayi.

Suhana : Hey! Mene kaha na mein jaldi aa jayungi. Ro kyu rahi ho?

Sonia : K-Kaha ro rahi hu?

Suhana (smiles) : Chalo chorro ab! Prakash Uncle dekho hass rahe hai tum par. Itni badi ho gayi fir bhi baat baat par rone lagti ho.

Sonia : Prakash Uncle nahi hasste mujh par. Aur mein ro nahi rahi.

Suhana : Theek hai maan liya. Now happy?

Sonia : Promise me aap jaldi aayengi.

Suhana : Tum jaanti ho ki mein promises nahi karti Sonu.

Sonia : Promise me!!!

Suhana : Sonuuuu!!! Zidd achhi nahi!

Sonia : Toh mein bhi nahi jaa rahi fir.

Suhana : Sonu!! Baat ko samjho!

Sonia : Toh promise kariye. Simple!

Suhana (sighs) : Theek hai! Promise toh nahi kar rahi. But I’ll try my level best to come back. Aur tumko khabar bhi deti rahungi.

Sonia : Fine! Aap maan’ne waali toh ho nahi. Th-Then bye! Take care! Okay?

Suhana (nods) : Mmm-Hmmm!! Have a safe journey.

Na chaahte hue bhi, Sonia ko waha se jaana pada. Apni badi behan ke liye uski chinta saaf dekhi jaa sakti thi. Uske jaate hi,

Suhana (sighs) : Prakash Uncle, jaldi chaliye. Divya ke ghar par mujhe jaldi pohuchna hai.

Prakash : Jii!

Aur Prakash ne driver ko order deke gaadi aage badhwa dii. Kuch hi palo me woh Divya ke aalishaan ghar ke baahar the.

Prakash : Ghar par toh lock laga hua hai Miss.

Suhana : Hmm! Ghar ki key mere paas hai. Divya mujhe deke gayi thi. Woh late night aayegi. Aaj usse zyaada kaam hai.

Prakash : Ohh!

Suhana : Kaera ki koi info?

Prakash : Unki toh nahi. Par iss se yaad aaya ki…

Bolte hue woh achanak, Suhana ke nazdeek aaya aur uske kaan me jhukte hue kuch kaha jisse sunn Suhana ki aankhein aashcharya ke maare fel gayi.

Suhana : Kya kaha aapne?

Parantu, Prakash maun raha. Aur uski chuppi saaf saaf batla rahi thi ki abhi abhi usne jo khabar dii woh shat pratishat sach thi.

Suhana (frowns) : Accha hua mene Sonu ko koi promise nahi diya. Aap jaa sakte hai.

Prakash : Par aap yaha akele?

Suhana : Meri chinta mat kariye. Meri ek doctor friend aa rahi hai. Woh mera khayal rakh legi. Aap jaaiye.

Prakash : Jaisa aap kahe. Agar meri zaroorat pade toh-

Suhana : Bilkul! Mein aapko call kar dungi.

Sarr haan me hilaate hue Prakash agle hi shan waha se nikal gaya. Woh kuch hi duri par sthit ek hotel me ruka hua tha. Taaki Suhana ko agar zaroorat pade toh woh madad ke liye fauran haazir ho sake.

Ek lambi aah chorrte hue Suhana darwaza khol ghar ke andar aayi. Hafto baad ghar ki hawa lete hi usne ek chenn ki saans lii. Poore samay hospital me rehne ke kaaran usse harr waqt dawaaiyo ki hi gandh ka saamna karna padta tha.

Andar aate hi woh ek bistar par araam se pait ke bal lait gayi. Apni peeth ko araam dene ke liye. Woh chal fir sakti thi, par abhi heavy kaam karne se usse manaahi thi.

Tabhi darwaaze ki ghanti baji aur jiska usse intezaar tha woh shaks aa chuka tha. Darwaza khulte hi ek sundar sii stree andar aayi,

Suhana : Itna bada bag? You came prepared huh?

Woh aurat muskuraayi aur apna bag rakh sofe par baith gayi.

“Tumne mujhe bulaaya, aur mein na aau? Aisa ho sakta hai?”

Suhana : Hmph! You didn’t come for me. You came because I paid you heavily.

“Ahem! Paisa zaroori hai Suhana. By the way ye ghar kyu? Hotel me kyu nahi?”

Suhana : Ye ghar meri friend ka hai. Uske yaha hote hue agar mein hotel me ruki toh woh mujhe kaccha chaba jayegi.

Woh aurat hassi. Aur fir bina Suhana ke kuch kahe hi, ghar me washroom dhoondh fresh hone chali gayi.

Usne apne taiyaar hone me itminaan se poora samay liya. Woh ghar me aise ghoom rahi thi jese maano ye uska hi ghar ho.

“So? Kya tum mere saath apni iss story ko share karna chaahogi?”

Suhana : Ki mujhe bullet kaise lagi? No thank you! Mujhe aur apne secrets nahi share karne.

Woh firse hassi,

“Hahahaha~ Dear! Mein aaj nahi toh kal tumhare muh se woh nikalwa hi lungi.”

Suhana (frowns) : Just because you are a psychologist, doesn’t mean you can interfere in my business.

“Mein sirf psychologist nahi hu Suhana. Mein tumhari personal psychologist hu.”

Usne adab se kaha. Uski aankho me ek aatmvishvaas tha jiske chalte Suhana ke maathe par shikan ki lakeere chhaa gayi.

Suhana : Mrs. Ashita! I’m warning you! Aap sirf meri personal psychologist ho. Not my Mom.

Ashita hassi,

Ashita : Hahahaha~ Hey!! Tum ek joke bhi nahi le sakti Suhana? Seriously? Lagta hai tumhare upar kaafi mehnat karni hogi mujhe.

Suhana : Hmph. Whatever.

Ashita : Alright! Toh shuru kare?

Suhana : Do what you want.

Ashita muskurate hue dining table ke sameep aayi aur usne fruit basket me se do santre haath me lete hue Suhana ko dikhaaye.

Ashita : Ye kya hai?

Suhana : Huh? Orange!?

Ashita : Hmm! Ab maan lo ki ye do santre tumhari 2 personalities hai Suhana.

Suhana : …

Ashita ne ek santre ko poori tarah se chheela aur doosre ko jyo ka tyo rehne diya.

Ashita : Ye santra dekh rahi ho? Jo chhila hua nahi hai.

Suhana : Hmm!

Ashita : Ye tumhari baahri personality hai Suhana. Aur ab ye chhila hua santra dekh rahi ho?

Suhana : That’s my other personality?

Ashita (smiles) : Exactly my dear. This is your inner personality. Aur hume inn dono ko ek karna hai. Inhe merge karna hai, taaki tum completely pehle ki tarah normal ho sako.

Suhana : And?

Ashita : And so… We will start with our game test again.

Suhana : Oh no! Please! Kuch bhi par woh nahi.

Ashita : What do you mean ‘woh nahi’ huh? Mein poori taiyyari ke saath aayi hu. Get ready!

Apne bag me se usne fatafat ek gaming console nikaala.

Suhana : Seriously?

Aur usse TV se connect kar Ashita Suhana ko pakad ke saamne baitha dii. Suhana ke haatho me remote thamaate hue usne kaha,

Ashita : Fighting game se shuru karte hai.

Suhana : Kahi mene apne paise waste toh nahi kar diye inhe bula ke?

Ashita : Shut up! I’m the finest psychologist in India. Tabhi toh tumne mujhe hire kiya hai.

Suhana ko jo sabse zyada na-pasand tha, woh yahi tha. Ek fighting game khelna. Woh games me behad bekaar thi. Ashita usse jaan boojh ke ye games khilwaati thi, jiske chalte Suhana lagataar unn games me haarti thi.

Jis vajah se uske andar frustration build up hota tha, aur uski split personality gusse ke chalte baahar aa jaati thi.

Aaj bhi Ashita ka iraada kuch aisa hi tha. Par,

Suhana : Hey! Literally, 20 rounds ho chuke hai aur single match bhi nahi jeeta hai mene. Let’s just stop okay?

Jab Suhana ne ye kaha, toh Ashita hairaani ke maare uth ke khadi ho gayi. Uska chehra dekhne laayak tha.

Suhana : K-Kya hua?

Ashita ne usse agle hi pal zorr se pakad ke jhunjhlaaya.

Ashita : Tum mere alaawa bhi kisi ko dikha rahi ho? Huh?

Suhana : Ahh! Wh-What? N-Noooo!

Ashita : Sach sach kaho!

Suhana : M-Mein sach keh rahi hu.

Woh hairat me peeche hui,

Ashita : I-Impossible!

Suhana : Kya hua hai?

Ashita : Sach sach kaho Suhana. T-Tum- Tum kisi se mili ho?

Suhana : Aap keh kya rahi ho meri kuch samajh nahi aa raha.

Ashita : Suhana, this is very important. Humne pehle bhi ye tests kiye hue hai aur tumhe pata hai tum kese react karti thi?

Suhana : !!!?

Ashita : Tum gusse me aa jaati thi. Tumhari dusri personality active ho jaati thi. Tum remotes ko idhar udhar fek deti thi, gaaliya bakne lagti thi aur sab kuch tahas nahas kar deti thi. Kuch yaad aaya?

Suhana : Th-That’s-

Ashita : Par ab dekho apne aap ko. Tumhe zara bhi gussa nahi aaya. Tell me honestly. Tum kisi naye shaks ke contact me aayi ho na? Ussi ne tumhe influence kiya hai na? Kyuki mein maan hi nahi sakti ki bina uske tum me antar aa jaaye. Kaho! Kaun hai woh?

Uske zorr dene par apne aap Suhana ka dhyaan uss ek shaks par chala gaya. Aur uss ladke ki chhavi uske mann me aayi.

Veer!!

Uske baare me sochte hi Suhana ke gaal sharm se laal ho gaye. Wahi toh tha. Wahi toh tha ek jisne uske gusse par qaabu paaya tha. Kya uske hi kaaran woh badal rahi thi?

Ashita ek maahir observer thi. Ek pal me bhaanp gayi woh ki ye haya kis liye thi.

Ashita : Oh my god!! Are you having an affair Suhana?

Suhana (panics) : Wh-What? No wayyyy! Shut uppppp!! And don’t talk nonsense.

Ashita : Tum mujhe bewakoof nahi bana sakti. Jaldi batao!

Suhana (blushes) : Wo-

Ashita : Haan! Haan! Kaho bhi!

Besabri se aage badh woh Suhana ki orr jhuki. Uss anjaan shaks ka naam zaahir hone hi waala tha. Par, agle hi shan-

Suhana : Nooooooo! You idiot! Get lost~

Suhana ne bagal me rakha cushion utha ke seedhe Ashita ke muh pe de maara,

“Ughhhhyaaaaaa~” Woh dhadaam se sofe par giri.

Suhana apni palke jhukaaye, surkh laal chehra liye waha se uth ke bhaag gayi.

‘I cannot tell anyone.’

***


Mumbai
Ragini’s house
Morning ~ 9:12 AM


Subah Subah yaha Veer ke ghar me bhi shorgul macha hua tha.

Tej : H-Hey! Mein khol rahi hu na, toh aapko bhi yahi kyu kholna hai?

Bhumika : Kyuki last waala tumne mujhse chhina ke khola. Toh ye waala mein kholungi.

Tej : Y-You-

Bhumika : Do mujhe!

Tej : Aap mujhe gussa dila rahi ho! Urgh~

Ek baar fir dono aapas me jhagadne me lagi hui thi. Veer ko diye gaye gifts khol rahi thi woh. Aur uss me bhi unki chheena jhapti chaalu thi.

Veer jese hi neeche aaya woh ye nazaara dekh taajub me reh gaya.

Veer : Woah~

Tej : Veer! Finally! Inse kaho ki ye tumhare gifts ko touch na kare.

Bhumika : Ahh! Kyu? Mein kyu nahi?

Tej : Kyuki ye mere bhai ke hai. Aur mein hu yaha inhe unwrap karne ke liye. Aap bacchiyo ki tarah behave kyu kar rahi ho?

Bhumika : Mein? Mein bacchiyo ki tarah? Mein tumhe sikha rahi hu. You are opening them the wrong way. Inhe aise nahi khola jaata. You have to be careful.

Tej : Oh Shut up! Mujhe aapse nahi jaan’na gifts kaise kholte hai. Gifts kholne ke liye hi hote hai. Jaise chaahe kholo.

Bhumika : Nooooo~
Tej : Argh! Chorro! Chorro warna gir jayega.

Bhumika : No! Tum chorro!

Inki kheecha taani me woh gift ka wrapper dono orr se phata aur gift uchhalte hue neeche gir gaya.

Tej : Ahhhh!

Bhumika : !!!!

Veer : Aap dono!!!

Tej : S-Sorry veer! But ye sab inki vajah se. Inki hi galti hai.

Bhumika : Kya? N-Nahi! Veer! Mein-

Veer : Dono jann! Shaant!

Uski ek tezz awaaz me dono darri hui billiyo ki tarah shaant hoke reh gayi.

Aabha : Accha hua aap aa gaye. Warna aaj na jaane kitne tohfe toot jaate.

Veer (sighs) : Seriously! Aap dono bhi! Ohh??

Jhukte hue Veer ne Arohi ke dwaara diya gaya gift uthaya.

Usme cufflinks ka set maujood tha. Unhe dekhte hi Veer ke hontho par muskan sajj gayi.

‘Arohi dii! As expected of her. Kitne dhyaan me rakh ke ye gift diya unhone.’

Woh utha aur unn dono ko dekha.

Veer : Anyways! Mein kuch kaam se jaa raha hu. Aap gifts khol sakti ho but don’t you dare fight. Okay?

Tej : Kaha jaa rahe ho tum?

Veer : Ek zaroori kaam hai.

Tej : Kya mujhe nahi bata sakte?

Veer : Business related hai.

Tej : O-Okay!

Bhumika : Veer! Mujhe bhi tumse ek zaroori baat karni hai. Akele me!

Tej : Haaaaahhhhh???

Bhumika : Toh please! Agar time mil sake toh~

Veer : Sure!

Bhumika : Thank you!

Tej : Whatttt? Aapko kya baat karni hai uss se akele me? Huh?

Par Veer ke paas samay nahi tha unki tu-tu me-me sunn’ne ka. Aaj usse ek sabse aham kaam niptaana tha.

Kaera ka mission!!!

Veer nahi jaanta tha woh ye kese karne waala tha. Par aaj kaise bhi karke woh kuch na kuch haasil karna hi chahta tha.

Karan ne kaha tha aaj Kaera free rahegi. Veer ye mauka apne haath se nahi jaane de sakta tha.

Isliye uski building ke baahar aake hi woh rukk gaya. Usse yaad tha ki ye ghar nahi, poori ki poori imaarat thi.

Baahar dherr saari security tainaat thi. Qareeb pohuchte hi guards uss se sawaal puchne me lag gaye.

Veer ne kayi baar bataaya ki woh Kaera ko jaanta hai aur Kaera usse, par ye baat guards ne na maani.

Aur abhi woh Karan ko call kar unhe proof dene hi waala tha jab upar se neeche aate ek shaks ne Veer ko pehchaan liya.

“Usse andar aane do!” Guards ne jese hi ye suna, woh sabhi peeche hatt gaye.

Saamne Jassi tha!

Veer : Ohh! Hey!

Jassi : Aaj achanak yaha?

Veer : Mein Miss Kaera se milna chaahta tha.

Jassi : Kya mein puch sakta hu kyu?

Veer : Business se related.

Jassi kuch derr tak usse dekhta raha, fir usne Veer ko raasta dete hue kaha,

Jassi : Miss upar hai apne room me. Tumhe pata hai na kaunsi floor pe hai unka room?

Veer : Haan! Mein pehle ek baar aa chuka hu.

Jassi : Good! You can go!

Veer : Thanks for the help!

Jassi ne koi jawaab na diya. Bas haan me gardan hila ke woh aage badh gaya.

Aur idhar entrance ki access paate hi Veer lift me chadh Kaera ke room waale floor par chal diya. Pichli baar jab woh aaya tha toh Julia ne usse bataaya tha ki Kaera ko lifts pasand nahi hai. Isliye uska room first floor par hi banwaya gaya tha. Veer ne tabhi uss info ko apne dimaag me store kar liya tha.

‘Fuck! It still surprises me everytime. Just how massive this house is?’

[Ye ghar nahi hai Master. It’s a fucking skyscrapper.]

‘You are right!’

Floor par aate hi, usse kayi chefs lambi lambi trolley le jaate hue dikhaayi diye. Toh kahi kuch maids samaan leke idhar se udhar ho rahi thi.

‘Kitne log rehte hai yaha?’

[Family me sirf teen log hai. Par uss se zyaada workers hai yaha. Ajeeb hai na?]

‘Behad!’

[Itni badi building hai. Itni space hai. Fir bhi ek loneliness hai iss building me. I can feel it. Aisa lagta hai kabhi iss building ne parivaar ki khushiyaan nahi dekhi.]

‘Tum sahi ho Pari! Aur isliye, mujhe unhe theek karna hi hoga.’

[Kehna asaan hai Master!]

‘Hum dekhte hai hum kya kar sakte hai.’

Chalte chalte woh jese hi kamre ke baahar pohucha toh darwaaze ko knock kiya. Par knock karte hi darwaza apne aap khul gaya.

Sankoch me qadam badhaate hue woh andar pravesh kiya toh usse koi bhi dikhaayi nahi diya.

‘Strange!’

Kamra itna bada tha ki usse samajh nahi aa raha tha ki ye kamra hi tha ya hall?

“Miss Kaera?” Awaaz dete hue jese hi woh ek orr muda toh-

“O-Ohhh!!!”



Uske saamne safed bathrobe daale woh geele baalo me khadi hui thi. Kaera!! Uski peni nazre Veer par hi tiki hui thi. Aur uske bagal se khadi Julia, hair-dryer liye uske baal sukhaane me lagi hui thi.

Veer : I-

Julia : Ohh! It's Young Master Veer!

Veer ko punaah dekh Julia chehek uthi. Ek baar fir uske muh se woh honorifics sunn, Veer ko ajeeb laga. Ye Julia usse Young Master kehke sambodhit kyu karti thi? Par last time usne Veer se permission le lii thi usse aise pukaarne ki. Toh ab bhala woh kaise mana kar sakta tha.

Veer : Umm! H-Hello! I think I came at the wrong time.

Woh mudne ke liye hua toh Kaera ne usse pukaara,

Kaera : Wait!!

Veer : ???

Kaera : Why are you leaving?

Veer : Umm!? Aap ready ho rahi ho. Mein baad me aa jaata hu.

Kaera : I’m already done with the bath. You can stay!!!

Veer : O-Ohh!!

Julia (smiles) : Please, have a seat young master.

Veer : Sure!

Ek sofe par virajmaan hote hue Veer apne aap hi Kaera ko tirchhi nazro se dekhne laga. Woh behad khubsoorat thi. Pata nahi kyu, par usse dekhte hi ek ajeeb si feeling aati thi uske dil me. Jisse woh samajh nahi paa raha tha. Kya thi ye anubhuti?

Kaera ka aura hi alag tha. Woh jese kheechta tha Veer ko apni orr.

Kaera jab taiyaar hui toh woh aake Veer ke saamne baith gayi. Aur idhar Julia fauran hi Veer ke liye coffee banaane lagi.

*Ding*

[Julia’s favorability : 45]

[Mujhe laga aap dekhna chaahte the.]

‘Ohh! Indeed! Thanks Pari!’

Kaera : Karan ne bataya tha tum aaoge. So?

Kaera ne uska dhyaan punaah kheencha. Veer uthate hue uske saamne aaya.

Veer : I think mene decide kar liya hai.

Kaera : Ohh? Contract ke baare me? The one we talked about earlier?

Veer : Haan!

Kaera : Mein sunn rahi hu.

Veer : Mein ready hu. I mean mene soch liya hai mujhe kis way me aage badhna hai.

Kaera : Tell me!

Veer : Well! Aapne kaha tha mein do tareeqe se aage badh sakta hu. Ya toh mein shuru se ek building ko banwau. Aur fir apna business start karu. Ya fir abandoned buildings ko khareed unhe renovate karwau aur fir apna business start karu.

Kaera : And you chose the second way. Right?

Veer (surprised) : That’s-

Kaera : Why the surprised face? Mein jaanti thi tum yahi way choose karoge.

Veer : Kaise?

Kaera : Wise people think alike Veer!

Kehte hue usne palke utha ke Veer ko dekha.



Buddhimaan log ek sa sochte hai. Aur ye baat satya thi.

Kaera : You can sit down! I won’t charge you for that.

Veer : S-Sure!

Kaera : Scratch se business start karne ke liye, property ka ek acchi location me hona zaroori hai. Then, tum uss land par building ko scratch se banwaoge. It will take time, money, and your hard work as well.

Veer : Right!

Kaera : Then staff selection, promotion, advertisements, maintenance, etc. Ye karna hoga. Tab jaake business initial stage pe aayega.

Veer : Hmm!

Kaera : So ultimately, this is time consuming.

Veer : Exactly!

Kaera : Better option ye hai ki tum not-in-use buildings ko target karo.

Veer : Yes!

Kaera : Building tumhari nahi rahegi toh tumhe business flop hone ki utni tension nahi rahegi. You just have to renovate it.

Veer : Par staff ka kya? Advertisements?

Kaera ke hontho par ek halki sii muskaan aayi,

Kaera : Jab ek puraani building ko own kiya jaata hai, toh uske saath uske benefits bhi aate hai Veer.

Veer : You mean-

Kaera : Ek puraani building pehle se hi public ki nazron me rehti hai. Unhe bas ye pata lagna chahiye ki ab uss jagah par koi aur business shuru ho chuka hai. Aur aise me advertisements ki requirements zyada nahi rehti.

Veer : Kyuki log chalte firrte hi jaan sakte hai ki kuch naya yaha khulne waala hai.

Kaera : Correct.

Veer : Par staff?

Kaera : Staff search karna easy nahi?

Veer : I think ye complicated hota hai.

Kaera : But not in your case.

Veer : Kaise?

Veer ke sawaal puchne par Kaera phir muskuraayi. Ab ye muskurahat thi? Ya fir bas hontho ka upar uthna? Ye kehna mushkil tha. Julia itne me Veer ke haatho me ek coffee ka cup thamaate hue uske bagal se khadi ho gayi.

Veer : Thank you!

Julia (smiles) : You don’t have to thank me, Young Master! It’s my pleasure.

Kaera : Ye easy hai Veer!

Veer : Hmm?

Kaera : Staff selection! You can leave that to me.

Veer : O-Ohh!

Kaera : So? Kya business socha hai?

Veer : Clothes ka!

Kaera (frowns) : Are you sure?

Veer : Yes!

Kaera : Tumhe kya lagta hai? Ye Top kitne ka hoga? The one which I’m wearing.

Veer : Probably a few thousands?

Kaera : Julia? How much was this one?

Julia : 1745$ Miss!

Iss se pehle ki Veer mann me calculate karta, Pari ne pehle hi uske saamne results rakh diye.

[Master! Uska top 1 lakh, 42 thousand, 5 hundred, 49 rupees ka hai.]

Jab Veer ne keemat suni, toh uske gale se coffee badi hi mushqil se andar gayi. Bhale hi woh crorepati kehlaane laga tha. Par ek lakh ke upar ka sadhaaran sa kapda dekh uska mann shaant na reh paaya.

Kaera aage badh uski orr jhuk ke baithi,

Kaera : When I buy clothes, I don’t see price tags. I only look for 3 things. Quality, comfort and lastly, wo mujh par jach raha hai ya nahi.

Veer : Par average people itni mehngi dresses nahi lete right?

Kaera : Agar tumhe aise chote business karne hai then I’m sorry Veer. I won’t invest. Look for someone else. Probably Sonia!

[Oooooooooooooooo~]

Veer ki bauhe ek chintan me sikudi. Kaera truly was a professional lady. Uski apni hi ek class thi.

Veer : Fine then! Mein aapki her terms se ready hu.

Kaera : No! You need to understand this first. Answer my question.

Veer : Puchiye!

Kaera : Kya tumhara cloth brand in-future mujhe aisi same satisfaction provide kar sakta hai? Kya tum mujhe iss brand se hatt ke apne brand ke clothes pehen’ne ke liye majboor kar sakte ho? If yes, then congratulations. We have an agreement. If no, then… You know the answer.

Veer : Yes!

Kaera agle hi pal apni jagah se uthi,

Kaera : Get ready then! We are leaving!

Veer : Huh?

Kehte hue woh andar chali gayi.

Veer : Where did she go?

Julia (smiles) : To change her clothes.

Veer : Again?

Julia (smiles) : Yes! Again!

Kaera ek baar fir kapde badal haazir thi. Veer uski harr adaa par lattu hota jaa raha tha.

Usse saath me lete hue woh neeche ki orr gayi. Jassi pehle se hi waha maujood tha,

Jassi : Kahi jaa rahi hai Miss?

Kaera : Yes! Tumhe follow karne ki zaroorat nahi. I’m going for a short ride.

Jassi : J-Jii!

Veer chup chaap khada hua tha. Agle hi pal basement se ek luxury Mercedes car baahar aayi aur unke saamne aake khadi ho gayi.

Kaera : Leave! Mein khud drive karungi.

Uski baat maante hue driver turant hi baahar nikal gaya.

Jassi : M-Miss? Aap drive kyu kar rahi hai?

Kaera : Kyuki mein drive karna chaahti hu.

Jassi : Theek hai! Sambhaal ke chalaiyega.

Jassi ko bina jawaab diye, Kaera andar baithi. Aur Veer uske bagal waali seat par baith gaya. Kuch hi palo me woh dono baahar the.

‘Maaf kijiye Miss! Par mein apni duty nahi chorr sakta.’

Mann me Jassi sochte hue apni bike uthaaya aur unke peeche peeche chal diya.

Veer : Hum kaha chal rahe hai?

Kaera : Tumhe building nahi dekhni?

Veer : Ohh! Building dekhne. Sure!!

Veer bagal se Kaera ke husn ko dekh usme khoya hua tha. Tabhi usse ek wild thought aaya.

‘Mene inke stats kabhi check nahi kiye. Pari?’

[Alright!]

Aur agle hi shan-

*Ding*

Jese hi Kaera ke stats saamne aaye, Veer ki aankhein phati ki phati reh gayi. Kyuki,

[Kaera’s stats :
Strength : 52 ⬆️
Intelligence : 150 ⬆️
Agility : 48 ⬆️
Endurance : 60 ⬆️
Appearance : 145 ⬆️]

Veer ki nazre intelligence par tiki hui thi. 150 ka intelligence. Uski bolti band ho chuki thi. Aur upar se 145 ka appearance. Ye kis prakaar ke ank the?

‘Wait! Y-Ye arrows? Ye arrows kisliye?’

[Uska matlab ye hai ki abhi woh stats aur badh sakte hai. Apni limit par nahi pohuche hai.]

Veer ke mann me ek visfot sa hua jese.

Kaera : Hmm? What is it?

Jese hi woh mud ke usse dekhi, Veer uski sundarta me hi kho gaya.



Veer : Ahh! N-Nothing!

‘She’s too gorgeous.’

[How many things did she sacrifice to achieve this level?]

‘Unke saare emotions Pari! Ek robot ki tarah kaam karte rehne par hi aap iss level pe aate ho.’

[We must cure her!]

Kaera jagah jagah gaadi le jaate hue Veer ko tarah tarah ki buildings dikhwa rahi thi aur unka poora gyaan dene me lagi hui thi.

Jiski vajah se Veer ne ek location decide bhi kar lii.

Kaera : Ask Karan for help! Wo real-estate me active hai. Building ke owner se wo tumhari baat easily karwa dega. Then come to me. We’ll sign the contract.

Veer : Okay! Thank you!

Kaera : Thank you? For what?

Veer : Aapne itni madad ki, isliye.

Kaera kuch na boli. Bas drive karti rahi. Wo ek raaste se guzar rahe the jab achanak hi gaadi ki raftaar apne aap kam ho gayi. Kaera khidki ke baahar kahi dekh rahi thi.

Dheere dheere gaadi poori tarah se ruk gayi aur unke bagal se ek behad bada sa ghar bana hua tha. Ghar puraana tha. Aisa lag raha tha usse kayi saalo se khaali chorra gaya tha.

Veer ne jese hi uss ghar ko check kiya toh ek baar phir aashcharya me reh gaya. Woh Kaera ka puraana ghar tha.

Car se utar woh ahista ahista aage badhi. Ghar ke baahar abhi bhi ek guard maujood tha. Shayad uske pita ne iss guard ko yaha ghar ki rakhwaali ke liye rakha hua tha. Taaki koi ghuspaith iska fayda na uthaaye.

Guard Kaera ko dekh apne aap salute maar khada ho gaya.

Guard : Madam!

Kaera bina uss par dhyaan diye hi chal dii. Uske qadam khud-ba-khud aage badh rahe the. Woh jaise ek trance me jaa chuki thi. Veer ne uska peeche kiya.

Kaera : This was-

Veer : Your old house?

Kaera : Y-Yes!

Apne purse se usne ek chaavi nikaali, aur taale par laga ke woh taala khol diya.

Bina Veer ka intezaar kiye hi woh andar ghus gayi. Andar dhool maujood thi. Samaan kuch kuch abhi bhi rakha hua tha.

Kaera harr ek hisse ko bade dhyaan se dekh andar jaati jaa rahi thi. Woh seedhiya jinse bachpan me woh utarti aur chadhti, Woh hall jaha baith uska parivaar saath hota tha, Woh study space jaha ek ke baad ek professors aake usse ghanto tak padhaate.

Usse kaafi kuch yaad tha. Woh upar ko badhi aur ek familiar jagah aate hi woh rukk gayi.

Saamne glass window thi ek jaha se neeche ka poora nazaara dekha jaa sakta tha. Ghar ka lawn yaha se saaf dikhayi padta tha.

Aur usse yaad aaya, yahi woh jagah thi jaha se woh apne chote bhai ko baahar khelte hue dekha karti thi. Aur woh andar hi ek chidiya ki tarah pinjre me band reh jaaya karti thi.

Veer bareeki se harr hisse ko dekh raha tha aur unhe check bhi kar raha tha. Kuch hisse kaale pade hue the. Aisa lag raha tha jese ghar me kabhi aag bhi lagi ho.

Veer : Kya ghar me aag laga thi?

Kaera : Y-Yes!

Veer : ???

Kaera : 3 tragedies happened here. That’s why my father left this home.

Veer : Can you share?

Kaera : Meri mom- She- She died here! Then there was fire too. Woh- Woh aag-! I remember! Aur woh ek-

Veer : ?

Kaera : Murder! Garden me! Mujhe yaad hai! There was blood! Crimson red in color-

Kaera ko kuch pal akela chorr Veer idhar udhar cheezein tatolne laga. Usse abhi 10 minute hi hue the jab usne ek sansani khej khoj kii.

Ek cupboard ko khiskaate hue usse deewaar me kuch nazar aaya. Ek prakaar ka drawer tha. Baahar usse kheechte hi uske saamne ek diary prakat hui.

Usse khol jaise hi usne andar dekha, usse ek aur bada jhatka laga.

‘Pari!’

[Yes?]

‘Do it!’

[Do what? Wait! Kahi aap? No! No! Aap aisa nahi kar sakte.]

‘Mene kaha na. Do it!’

[But Master- Finally ab jaake aap apne pendant ka raaz jaan sakte ho. Itna bada raaz jaan’ne ka mauka hai aapke paas. Kya aap sach me?]

‘Miss Kaera se badh kar nahi hai Pari. I cannot lose her.’

[B-But- Aisi skill dobaara nahi milegi master.]

‘Pari!!’

[Theek hai toh!]

*Ding*

[Seer Vision has been used.]

Kaera ko uske baad jald se jald ghar waapas chorr Veer apni himmat baandhe ghar lauta. Ghar me ghuste hi woh ladkhada ke apne kamre me gaya aur phisal ke apne bistar par gir woh behosh ho gaya.

[Maaasterrr!!!]

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3 din guzar gaye. Kaera ke mission ke liye ab sirf do din shesh the. Veer dobaara Kaera se milne gaya.

Aur uss se milte hi usne ek diary Kaera ko thama dii.

Kaera : Kya hai ye?

Veer : Last time aapke puraane ghar se mili thi. Aapko dena bhul gaya tha. Abhi yaad aaya toh le aaya. Sorry!

Kaera : Ohh!

Woh usse thaam jese hi padhna shuru kii, uske maathe par chinta ki lakeere bann gayi.

Veer ko yu akela chorr woh ek kamre me ghusi aur khud ko lock kar lii.

Veer ne apna kaam kar diya tha. Ab bas usse notification ka intezaar tha. Par woh ye nahi jaanta tha ki Kaera 2 dino se ussi kamre me khud ko band karke rakhe huye thi.

Jab finally, mission ki time limit samaapt hui toh Veer ko ek aur bada jhatka laga. Kyuki jis notification ka woh intezaar kar raha tha woh toh aaya hi nahi. Mission khatam ho chuka tha toh notification toh aana hi chaahiye tha. Par wo nahi aaya,

Aur jo aaya, usse dekh Veer ke hosh udd gaye.

*Ding*

[Kaera’s favorability has dropped to 50.]

‘Wh-What???? N-Noooooo!!’
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Aaj ke liye itna hi guys.
Ek update aur hai agla waala, jisme kuch aur dikhaya jayega. Aur uske baad se hum seedha Crimson festival par lag jayenge. Iss update me Prakash aur Suhana ka ek convo tha jisse mene abhi subah hi hata diya hai. Moderation kiya hai firse. Toh derri ke liye maafi chaahta hu. Baaki, likes thokne ka aur revos rakhne ka.

Dhanyavaad!
Mind blowing last ka twist
 

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Toh sab se phele toh a fantastic update. Aur jo starting Teen-char lines padh kar ko ase laga ki naya character aa gya story mien lekin prakash uncle wali line se samaj aagya ki yeh sonia aur suhaana hai 😂
Hmm! Wesa to dikhana padta hai na. Bhram me rakhna padta hai. :heh:
Lekin bechari sonia kar apni behn ko comfort rahi thi lekin suhaana ko uss baat ka majak aur banne laag gyi lekin sonia aur suhaana dono apni apni jagah sahi thi lekin inn dono thi nok jok padh kar maja bhot aaya. Lekin mere ko yeh samaj nhi if suhaana is healthy then why she is not coming back to India with sonia
She's not completely healthy. Padha nahi? Divya ke ghar aate hi wo pait ke bal lait gayi. Kyuki bullet peeth me lagi thi usse. To peeth ko rest deti hai abhi bhi. Uss par bhaar nahi padne deti. Abhi wo fully recovered nahi hui hai. Lekin doctors ne ab ghar jaane keh diya hai. Wo chal fir sakti hai. Par heavy usage nahi kar sakti.

Bhaari kaam, ya derr tak kaam karne ke liye manaahi hai usse. Isliye abhi bhi wahi hai. Kyuki uska treatment wahi hua hai. Nayi jagah shift hoyegi to treatment ki jaach padtaal karenge naye doctors. Reports ke through jayenge. In case usse kuch dikkat aati hai to wo fauran unhi doctors ke sampark me aa sake isliye wo wahi ruki hai.

and why she is want more information about kaera and what the parkash uncle said in her ear?
Kaera ki info to wo shuru se hi leti aayi hai. Hum pehle bhi dekh chuke hai. Aur Kaera bhi yahi karti hai. Basically, business opportunities ko hathiyaane ke liye ye kiya jaata hai. Suppose, Kaera ko koi deal offer hui hai. Toh agar ye khabar Suhana ke haath lagi toh woh Sonia ko uss deal ko hathiyaane bol sakti hai. :smartm: Kyuki Kaera aur Sonia. Dono ke beech competition hai. Bhale hi dono bachpan ki saheliya ho.
Many questions and answers only know by one and only werewolf.
:smoking:
Aur uss ke baad jo cheez mujhe starting mien padh le laga ki hoyega vo ab hua a new character introduced aur uss ke dialouge padh kar hi laga ki yeh ek caretaker toh nhi ho sakti aur uss ke pata laag hi gya ki yeh ek psychologists aur vo bhi suhaana ki personal lekin in dono ki conversation padh kar sahi mien hassi aa gyi thi lekin suhaana kya bata thi ashita ko veer ki taraf attract hogyi hai yeh phir pheli baar kisi se pyaar kar batti hai aur ussi ne uss ke gusse par control karwaya. But i am quite impressed from you werewolf bro ekdam wese hi jese psychologists soch ke hai wese hi you written the character of ashita. Kyuki ashita ne ek baari ko suhaana ke muh se veer ka naam nikla hi liya tha.
Wo kayi cheeze nikalwa chuki hai uske muh se. :laugh: Tabhi to Suhana ne kaha ki mein apne saare raaz nahi pata lagne dungi. Khaas kar wo bullet kaise lagi. Aur fir Ashita ka ye kehna ki wo kabhi na kabhi uske muh se nikalwa hi legi. You see! :smartm:
Aur uss ke baad tej aur bhumika ka gift kholna jo dekha jaye toh gift faadna tha
Gift Tej phaad rahi thi. Aur Bhumika usse yahi samjha rahi thi ki unhe faada nahi jaata, acche se pyaar se khola jaata hai. Jiski vajah se dono jhagadne lagi.
aur agar veer na aaya hota toh saare gift faat yeh tuk fuk jate aur tej ka veer ko badi bhen ki tarah comfort karna aur question puchna lekin bhumika ko kya baat karni hai veer se vo bhi privately ? Kya ho sakti hai vo baat? Kyu bhumika ne veer toh akele baat karne ke liye kah hai?
Bataya jayega jald hi.
Aur uss ke baad finally humein vo dekhne toh mili jis toh dekhna ke liye ankhein tarash gyi thi sarre reader ki miss kaera lekin uss ke phele veer ekdam sahi soch raha tha ki yeh ghar nhi yeh ek skyscraper hai sahi mien teen logo ki family ke liye itne workers fuck. Aur uss ke veer finally kaera ke kamre mien gya and finally usse kaera mili aur kaera ke baat karne ke style aur business intelligence se hi pata chal tha hai ki kaera ki intelligence above 100 hai lekin thodi der baad kaera ke stats dikha diye. Aur kaera ka veer se conversation karna ke style was damm good. Lekin ek baat toh hai ki kaera sundar toh hai veer toh kya ek baari ko mien bhi kho jaata hu kaera ki photo dekh kar. Lekin veer ko yeh baat pata honi chahiye ki kaera is very rich so she will not wear a top of few thousands she will wear clothes in lakhs.
Nahi! Ju galat samajh liye. :nana: Aisa nahi hai ki wo mehnge tops hi pehnegi. Usne khud kaha tha. Wo teen hi cheez dekhti hai kapde khareedte waqt~
1) Kapde ki quality.
2) Uska comfort.
3) Kapda uss par jach raha hai ya nahi.

Wo price tags nahi dekhti. :sigh: Paisa uske liye koi problem nahi hai. Wo sirf ye teen cheez dekhti hai kisi bhi kapde ko lene se pehle. Isliye usne kaha ki agar Veer ka future brand usse ye provide kar sakta hai to woh sochegi uski brand ke baare me.

Lekin jo bhi ho veer ko ek business partner bhi mil gyi aur thoda experience bhi aur kaera ki thodi si daand 😁.
Lekin veer ko ase diary mien kya dikh gya (seer vision) ki vo teen din tak behosh hogya aur sab se harani ki baat yeh hai ki teen din veer behosh tha lekin uss ke Garhwale ka koi seen nahi dikhya gya kya next update mien dikhaya jayega?
Fir se ju galat samajh liye. :nana: Veer teen din tak behosh tha hi nahi. :nana:

Kahi bhi aisa nahi likha ki Veer 3 din tak behosh tha. Ye likha tha ki Veer behosh hua. Fir 3 din guzar gaye. Ye nahi likha tha ki veer ko behosh hue 3 din guzar gaye. :declare:

Bohut dhyaan se padhna bhaaya warna kahani sarr ke upar se jaane lagegi. :what1:

lekin uss ke bhi harani ki baat yeh diary padh kar kaera ne bhi apne aap ko lock kar liya. Lekin veer ke sath acha nhi hua vo soch rha ki kaera wala mission finish hogya lekin ulta Favourbility drop ho gyi. Kya jassi ne kaera ke baap ko baata diya ki kaera aur veer kha gaye tha aur kaera ke room ke nikle ke hi uss ke baap ne uss se kuch kha aur iss vajah ke Favourbility kam hogyi kya yeh wajah hai?
Baap ne kuch kaha to Veer ke prati favourability kaise kam hoyegi? :?: Favourability to fir Jassi ke prati kam honi chahiye na ki Jassi ne bataaya. :dontknow:
Lekin kya veer kaera ko kho deda?aur kaera ke emotions kabhi vapas nhi aa payega? Kya veer aur karan ka connection bhi tuk jayega? Kya veer aur kaera kabhi eksath nhi aapayega?.
God knows what will happened in next update.
Next to padh hi liya hai. :what2:
Diary ka raaz aage khulega. Filhaal seer vision ka raaz khol diya hai mene. Mein isse bhi baad me kholne wala tha par fir socha ki readers ko kuch dedu. To ye ek raaz khol diya. :D

Edit : werewolf also know what will happened.
Aur agle update mien kaand hone wale hai
Thanks a lot for this wonderful revo mate. :five: And keep supporting as usual. ✨
 
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