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Fantasy Lucifer- The fallen angel(completed)

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School times se likhne ka bahut shauk tha mujhe mostly poems hi likhta tha. School me hi ek ladki mili bahut pyaari thi. College ke 3rd year tak relationship chala fir vo chali gaye door. Uske baad kabhi socha nahi tha dobara kuch likunga. Bilkul man hi nahi karta tha. Nashe to jaise jindagi ban gaye the. Pehle bhi nashe karta tha lekin uske baad jada ho gaye. Akela rahna acha lagne lagega aur dheere dheere sab door hote chale gaye. Main akela hi bacha tha. Tab kahi se xf ka pata chala aur pata nahi kyu aise hi ek raat pehli story ka first update post kar diya. Ek medium mil gaya tha mujhe kuch share karne ka aur acha bhi lagne laga tha. Dheere dheere vapas likhna start kiya aur es baar stories. Xf par kuch stories likhi fir vo band hua to yaha aa gaya. Aur vohi silsila yaha bhi kamyaab raha. Aap sabko sayad idea nahi hoga ki jo thoda bahut interact hota hai humara yaha vo kitna important ho sakta hai kisi ki life me. Es waqt mere pass almost sab kuch hai lekin agar kisi ko kuch share karna chahu to aisa person nahi hai esliye beech beech me kuch updates me apni situation likh deta hu to acha lagta hai. I hope ki humara sath aise hi aage bana rahe.

Ek mew story ka dimag me kuch idea hai lekin kab start hogi eske liye abhi sure nahi hu

May be main kuch dino ke liye rehab chala jau ya fir kuch aur mil jaye sath chalne ke. Lets see

In the end i want to thank each and everyone of you guys who has supported me and gave me so much love. Means a lot

Thank you so much guys. Jaldi hi milte hai ek new story ke sath tab tak ke liye 👋
 

LOV mis

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Mujhe pata hai ye meri maa hai, I can feel it, bahut baar dekha hai maine enko apne sapno me...she is my mother" lucifer ek behad sundar aurat ki painting dekhte hue bola jo apne gaud me ek bacha liye hue thi aur usse khila rahi thi

Anisha- you sure lucifer?

Lucifer- yeah I'm sure
Ye meri maa hi hai

Kamna- ye hai the one and only true goddess, Supreme commander of the universe

Anisha- wait what??

Kamna- ha yehi hai vo jinhe hum alag alag naam alag alag chehre me dekhte hai aur poojte hai
Es sansaar ki rachiyata aur dunia ki sabse shaktisali praani

Lucifer- Supreme is the creator and most powerful being

Kamna- you're wrong here
Supreme is the most destructive God
But he wasn't the one who created everything
It was your mother
Unhone hi dunia me sabse pehle insaan ko banaya, unhone hi sahi galat ke beech ek rekha khechi
Unhone hi achae banaye aur unhone hi burae banaye
Aur unhone hi LUCIFER ko banaya

Lucifer- bullshit
It was Supreme

Kamna- you remember nothing lucifer
Maine apni jindagi di hai eske liye aur jo main bol rahi hu vohi sach hai

Lucifer- she loved me
Vohi ek matar thi jo mujhe achae dikhati thi

Kamna- tum galat nahi ho lekin sahi bhi nahi ho
Mata ne tumko banaya tha burae se ladne ke liye
Lekin ek waqt ke baad burae ne apne aapko aisa badal liya ki achae unse jeet pane me asafal hone lagi ya yu kahe ki aakhir me achae jeet to jati thi lekin nuksaan etna ho jata tha ki us jeet ka koe mulya nahi rah jata tha esliye unhone ek aisi burae banaye ek aisa andhera jo khud ko jala kar dusro ko roshini de
Aur vo andhera tum ho lucifer

Lucifer- kuch bhi bol rahi ho aap
Aapko kuch nahi pata

Kamna- look at these pictures
Kuch alag lag raha hai?

Lucifer- ha
Jaha jaha main hu vaha vaha aag jal rahi hai

Kamna- kyu jal rahi hai?

Lucifer- mujhe kaise pata hoga?

Anisha- tumhre pass hi aag jal rahi hai baki har jagah andhera dikhae de raha hai
Matlab sirf tum hi us andhere ko door kar sakte ho

Lucifer- fir main burae kaise hua?

Kamna- unhe burae se ladne ke liye burae hi chahiye thi
Tum batao tumhe konsa acha kaam yaad hai?
Khoon hi to yaad aata hai tumhe?

Lucifer- lekin masoom khoon to nahi the na vo?

Anisha- mujhe lagta hai ki unhone darshaya aise hai ki tum galat ho lekin agar sahi mayne me dekha jaye to tum hi sahi ho

Lucifer- ek jhatke me sare jajbaat badal diye
Kaha main sochta tha maa to hai mere pass pyaar karne ke liye lekin...

Kamna- vo ab bhi tumse pyaar karti hai

Lucifer- you don't know that
Sirf assumption me chal rahi ho aap

Kamna- jo assumption sahi hai
Ye dekho esko dekh ke batao kya dikh raha hai tumhe?

Lucifer- meri training ki image hai ye
Samne khade hai guruji aur uske sath hai....hmm ye eda hai

Anisha- eda??

Kamna- ye vo hai jo lucifer ka pehla pyaar thi
Aisa pyaar jo kabhi pura nahi hota vo wala pyaar tha eda lucifer ka

Lucifer- bullshit

Kamna- tumhre naa manane se sachae badal nahi jayegi

Kamna- agar hum sare gods ko hata de to eda dusri sabse takatwar person hai
Pehle to tumhe pata hi hai kon hai?

Lucifer- main

Kamna- bilkul sahi
Pehle par tum hi ho
Bhagwano ko es andhere me roshini ko bhi dikhana tha aur uske liye hi banae gaye thi eda
Lekin unke plan ke against jake eda tumse muhobaat karne lag gaye aur jab unko pata chala ki eda tumse muhobbat karti hai to unhone aisa khel racha ki tum dono dekhte rah gaye

Lucifer- eda never loved me

Kamna- shanti banaye rakho
Jab sab yaad aayega tab pata chal jayega ki eda tumse pyaar karti thi ya nahi

Lucifer- en sab ka matlab to yehi nikalta hai ki hum me se galat koe nahi tha sivay bhagwano ke
Jinhone hume aisa banaya

Kamna- yehi shristhi ka niyam hai
Ek jagah achae hogi to dusri jagah burai janam legi hi legi

Lucifer- aur ye sab suru hua mujhse?

Anisha- esme to aur bhi log hai
To kya vo lucifer ke bhai behan hai ya aur koe?

Lucifer- ek ko to main pahchan raha hu
Sabse piche niche muh karke jo batha hua hai vo hai kavish
Baki ke yaad nahi aa rahe lekin aisa lag jarur raha hai ki main unhe janta hu

Kamna- ye dekho
Kuch yaad aaya?

Lucifer- koe rishi lag rahe hai

Kamna- tumhe koe maar nahi sakta
Pata hai na tumhe?

Lucifer- ha

Kamna- yehi hai vo jinki vajah se koe tumhe maar nahi sakta

Anisha- that curse??
Kya ye vo curse wale hi hai?
Jinhone tumhe shraap diya tha?

Lucifer- pata nahi

Anisha- yehi vohi hai
Enki aankhon ka tej hi bata raha hai ki ye vohi hai
Lekin kyu?

Kamna- taki tum amar ho jao aur dunia tumhre naam se humesha darti rahe aur galat kaam karne se pareej kare

Lucifer- ye sab theory hai
Mujhe yaha aana hi nahi chahiye tha bina matlab ke waqt kharab ho gaya mera

Kamna- yehi sach hai tumhra lucifer

Lucifer- agar yehi sach hai mera to mujhe kuch yaad kyu nahi aa raha?
Aur aise sach ka main kya karunga jab mera dil dimag us sach ko manane se hi inkaar kar de?
Sach vo hota hai jinhe hum bina kisi ha na ke accept kare
Aur mujhe to ye koe bhi accept karne layak baatin nahi lag rahi

Kamna- sab yaad aayega tumhe aur aaj hi yaad aayega

Lucifer- aapko kya lagta hai ki ye sab aapke muh se sun kar mujhe sab yaad aa jayega?
Galat fami hai aapki

Anisha- tumhe hi to bola tha ki kosis karni hai ek baar
Ab jab hum kosis kar rahe hai to etne negative kyu ho rahe ho?

Kamna- kyuki main bata rahi hu esse esliye
He hates me

Anisha- why??

Kamna- because maine abhi tak ashu se baat nahi ki
Ye chahta tha ki main starting me hi baat karke sab sort kar lu lekin aisa maine kiya nahi to ye gusse me batha hai

Lucifer- main gussa nahi karta
Aur jo main karta hu vo aap handle nahi kar paoge

Anisha- okay enough
Hum yaha lucifer ka sach janane aaye hai aur mujhe lagta hai hume ussi par focus karna chahiye

Kamna- sun kaha raha hai ye?

Anisha- lucifer tum dekho chhije khud analysis karo aur khud yaad karne ki kosis
I'm here with you
Lucifer ka hath thamte hue anisha bade pyaar se boli to lucifer samne ki photo ke aage khada ho gaya

Ek eye contact hua lucifer ka aur us photo me dikhae dene wale ka aur agle hi pal lucifer ki aankhen laal chamakne lag gaye

Anisha ko apne hatho par garmi feel hone lagi lekin usne apna hath hataya nahi

Do minute tak aisa hi chalta raha fir lucifer shant ho gaya aur vo dusti painting ki taraf mud gaya

Do teen baar to vo vaise hi garam hota raha lekin fir vo shant ho gaya aur yaha vaha ghumte hue sab analysis karne laga

Etne sare paintings thi vaha lucifer baari baari se sab me khota chala gaya

Bas fark etna tha ki vo un paintings me ander tak ghus ja raha tha aisa lag raha tha jaise unki soul ke ander ghus kar unka sab kuch jaan raha tha vo

Teen ghante ho gaye the ye sab karte karte aur dheere dheere sari paintings khatam hoti ja rahi thi aur sath me andhera bhi sab kuch apne ander samane me laga hua tha

En teen ghanto me vaha sirf aur sirf shanti chahi rahi agar kisi tarah ki aawaz aa rahi thi to vo thi unke chalne ki aur sirf unke chalne ke

Eske alava aisa lag raha tha jaise vaha koe hai hi nahi

Ek ghanta aur beeta vaha fir aakhir me lucifer bola

Lucifer- ulti disha me ek talaab hai
Vaha chalte hai

Lucifer etne samay baad bola tha lekin fir bhi kisi ne uski baat nahi kaati aur jis direction me lucifer ne bola ussi direction me chal diye sab

Piche ka gate kholte hi ek bahut bada talaab bana hua tha aur hairaat ki baat ye thi ki es pahaad ke upar fal fruit ke paid lage hue the aur sare ke sare Hare bhare the

Anisha ne baat bahut ache se notice kar li thi lekin abhi tak vo boli kuch nahi thi

Sayad lucifer ko disturb nahi karna chahti thi vo

Lucifer- kha lo kuch bukh lagi ho aap dono ko
Yaha sab fresh hai
Main es paani se thode sawal puch leta hu

Aur lucifer apne kapde nikalte hue us pani me utar gaya vahi anisha aur kamna ne kuch fruits ikhatha kiye aur unhe khane lagi

Anisha to shant thi lekin kamna ko bahut ache se pata tha ki abhi yaha ek tufaan aane wala hai aur vo tufaan es neele paani ko apne khoon se laal karne wala hai....
Good update bro mind-blowing
 

Thakur

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Mujhe pata hai ye meri maa hai, I can feel it, bahut baar dekha hai maine enko apne sapno me...she is my mother" lucifer ek behad sundar aurat ki painting dekhte hue bola jo apne gaud me ek bacha liye hue thi aur usse khila rahi thi

Anisha- you sure lucifer?

Lucifer- yeah I'm sure
Ye meri maa hi hai

Kamna- ye hai the one and only true goddess, Supreme commander of the universe

Anisha- wait what??

Kamna- ha yehi hai vo jinhe hum alag alag naam alag alag chehre me dekhte hai aur poojte hai
Es sansaar ki rachiyata aur dunia ki sabse shaktisali praani

Lucifer- Supreme is the creator and most powerful being

Kamna- you're wrong here
Supreme is the most destructive God
But he wasn't the one who created everything
It was your mother
Unhone hi dunia me sabse pehle insaan ko banaya, unhone hi sahi galat ke beech ek rekha khechi
Unhone hi achae banaye aur unhone hi burae banaye
Aur unhone hi LUCIFER ko banaya

Lucifer- bullshit
It was Supreme

Kamna- you remember nothing lucifer
Maine apni jindagi di hai eske liye aur jo main bol rahi hu vohi sach hai

Lucifer- she loved me
Vohi ek matar thi jo mujhe achae dikhati thi

Kamna- tum galat nahi ho lekin sahi bhi nahi ho
Mata ne tumko banaya tha burae se ladne ke liye
Lekin ek waqt ke baad burae ne apne aapko aisa badal liya ki achae unse jeet pane me asafal hone lagi ya yu kahe ki aakhir me achae jeet to jati thi lekin nuksaan etna ho jata tha ki us jeet ka koe mulya nahi rah jata tha esliye unhone ek aisi burae banaye ek aisa andhera jo khud ko jala kar dusro ko roshini de
Aur vo andhera tum ho lucifer

Lucifer- kuch bhi bol rahi ho aap
Aapko kuch nahi pata

Kamna- look at these pictures
Kuch alag lag raha hai?

Lucifer- ha
Jaha jaha main hu vaha vaha aag jal rahi hai

Kamna- kyu jal rahi hai?

Lucifer- mujhe kaise pata hoga?

Anisha- tumhre pass hi aag jal rahi hai baki har jagah andhera dikhae de raha hai
Matlab sirf tum hi us andhere ko door kar sakte ho

Lucifer- fir main burae kaise hua?

Kamna- unhe burae se ladne ke liye burae hi chahiye thi
Tum batao tumhe konsa acha kaam yaad hai?
Khoon hi to yaad aata hai tumhe?

Lucifer- lekin masoom khoon to nahi the na vo?

Anisha- mujhe lagta hai ki unhone darshaya aise hai ki tum galat ho lekin agar sahi mayne me dekha jaye to tum hi sahi ho

Lucifer- ek jhatke me sare jajbaat badal diye
Kaha main sochta tha maa to hai mere pass pyaar karne ke liye lekin...

Kamna- vo ab bhi tumse pyaar karti hai

Lucifer- you don't know that
Sirf assumption me chal rahi ho aap

Kamna- jo assumption sahi hai
Ye dekho esko dekh ke batao kya dikh raha hai tumhe?

Lucifer- meri training ki image hai ye
Samne khade hai guruji aur uske sath hai....hmm ye eda hai

Anisha- eda??

Kamna- ye vo hai jo lucifer ka pehla pyaar thi
Aisa pyaar jo kabhi pura nahi hota vo wala pyaar tha eda lucifer ka

Lucifer- bullshit

Kamna- tumhre naa manane se sachae badal nahi jayegi

Kamna- agar hum sare gods ko hata de to eda dusri sabse takatwar person hai
Pehle to tumhe pata hi hai kon hai?

Lucifer- main

Kamna- bilkul sahi
Pehle par tum hi ho
Bhagwano ko es andhere me roshini ko bhi dikhana tha aur uske liye hi banae gaye thi eda
Lekin unke plan ke against jake eda tumse muhobaat karne lag gaye aur jab unko pata chala ki eda tumse muhobbat karti hai to unhone aisa khel racha ki tum dono dekhte rah gaye

Lucifer- eda never loved me

Kamna- shanti banaye rakho
Jab sab yaad aayega tab pata chal jayega ki eda tumse pyaar karti thi ya nahi

Lucifer- en sab ka matlab to yehi nikalta hai ki hum me se galat koe nahi tha sivay bhagwano ke
Jinhone hume aisa banaya

Kamna- yehi shristhi ka niyam hai
Ek jagah achae hogi to dusri jagah burai janam legi hi legi

Lucifer- aur ye sab suru hua mujhse?

Anisha- esme to aur bhi log hai
To kya vo lucifer ke bhai behan hai ya aur koe?

Lucifer- ek ko to main pahchan raha hu
Sabse piche niche muh karke jo batha hua hai vo hai kavish
Baki ke yaad nahi aa rahe lekin aisa lag jarur raha hai ki main unhe janta hu

Kamna- ye dekho
Kuch yaad aaya?

Lucifer- koe rishi lag rahe hai

Kamna- tumhe koe maar nahi sakta
Pata hai na tumhe?

Lucifer- ha

Kamna- yehi hai vo jinki vajah se koe tumhe maar nahi sakta

Anisha- that curse??
Kya ye vo curse wale hi hai?
Jinhone tumhe shraap diya tha?

Lucifer- pata nahi

Anisha- yehi vohi hai
Enki aankhon ka tej hi bata raha hai ki ye vohi hai
Lekin kyu?

Kamna- taki tum amar ho jao aur dunia tumhre naam se humesha darti rahe aur galat kaam karne se pareej kare

Lucifer- ye sab theory hai
Mujhe yaha aana hi nahi chahiye tha bina matlab ke waqt kharab ho gaya mera

Kamna- yehi sach hai tumhra lucifer

Lucifer- agar yehi sach hai mera to mujhe kuch yaad kyu nahi aa raha?
Aur aise sach ka main kya karunga jab mera dil dimag us sach ko manane se hi inkaar kar de?
Sach vo hota hai jinhe hum bina kisi ha na ke accept kare
Aur mujhe to ye koe bhi accept karne layak baatin nahi lag rahi

Kamna- sab yaad aayega tumhe aur aaj hi yaad aayega

Lucifer- aapko kya lagta hai ki ye sab aapke muh se sun kar mujhe sab yaad aa jayega?
Galat fami hai aapki

Anisha- tumhe hi to bola tha ki kosis karni hai ek baar
Ab jab hum kosis kar rahe hai to etne negative kyu ho rahe ho?

Kamna- kyuki main bata rahi hu esse esliye
He hates me

Anisha- why??

Kamna- because maine abhi tak ashu se baat nahi ki
Ye chahta tha ki main starting me hi baat karke sab sort kar lu lekin aisa maine kiya nahi to ye gusse me batha hai

Lucifer- main gussa nahi karta
Aur jo main karta hu vo aap handle nahi kar paoge

Anisha- okay enough
Hum yaha lucifer ka sach janane aaye hai aur mujhe lagta hai hume ussi par focus karna chahiye

Kamna- sun kaha raha hai ye?

Anisha- lucifer tum dekho chhije khud analysis karo aur khud yaad karne ki kosis
I'm here with you
Lucifer ka hath thamte hue anisha bade pyaar se boli to lucifer samne ki photo ke aage khada ho gaya

Ek eye contact hua lucifer ka aur us photo me dikhae dene wale ka aur agle hi pal lucifer ki aankhen laal chamakne lag gaye

Anisha ko apne hatho par garmi feel hone lagi lekin usne apna hath hataya nahi

Do minute tak aisa hi chalta raha fir lucifer shant ho gaya aur vo dusti painting ki taraf mud gaya

Do teen baar to vo vaise hi garam hota raha lekin fir vo shant ho gaya aur yaha vaha ghumte hue sab analysis karne laga

Etne sare paintings thi vaha lucifer baari baari se sab me khota chala gaya

Bas fark etna tha ki vo un paintings me ander tak ghus ja raha tha aisa lag raha tha jaise unki soul ke ander ghus kar unka sab kuch jaan raha tha vo

Teen ghante ho gaye the ye sab karte karte aur dheere dheere sari paintings khatam hoti ja rahi thi aur sath me andhera bhi sab kuch apne ander samane me laga hua tha

En teen ghanto me vaha sirf aur sirf shanti chahi rahi agar kisi tarah ki aawaz aa rahi thi to vo thi unke chalne ki aur sirf unke chalne ke

Eske alava aisa lag raha tha jaise vaha koe hai hi nahi

Ek ghanta aur beeta vaha fir aakhir me lucifer bola

Lucifer- ulti disha me ek talaab hai
Vaha chalte hai

Lucifer etne samay baad bola tha lekin fir bhi kisi ne uski baat nahi kaati aur jis direction me lucifer ne bola ussi direction me chal diye sab

Piche ka gate kholte hi ek bahut bada talaab bana hua tha aur hairaat ki baat ye thi ki es pahaad ke upar fal fruit ke paid lage hue the aur sare ke sare Hare bhare the

Anisha ne baat bahut ache se notice kar li thi lekin abhi tak vo boli kuch nahi thi

Sayad lucifer ko disturb nahi karna chahti thi vo

Lucifer- kha lo kuch bukh lagi ho aap dono ko
Yaha sab fresh hai
Main es paani se thode sawal puch leta hu

Aur lucifer apne kapde nikalte hue us pani me utar gaya vahi anisha aur kamna ne kuch fruits ikhatha kiye aur unhe khane lagi

Anisha to shant thi lekin kamna ko bahut ache se pata tha ki abhi yaha ek tufaan aane wala hai aur vo tufaan es neele paani ko apne khoon se laal karne wala hai....
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Ye kya matlab ekdam se jajbaat badal diye halaat badal diye ,match he palat di :sigh:
It took me 3 fcking days to cope up with this :
Kamna- ye hai the one and only true goddess, Supreme commander of the universe
Matlab ab me supreme ko gariya bhi nahi sakta ke wo supreme ab maa he :sad:
Aur konsa ab talab me fight hone wali he :hmm: talab ka koi chodu bhagat guard he kya?
 
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Mujhe pata hai ye meri maa hai, I can feel it, bahut baar dekha hai maine enko apne sapno me...she is my mother" lucifer ek behad sundar aurat ki painting dekhte hue bola jo apne gaud me ek bacha liye hue thi aur usse khila rahi thi

Anisha- you sure lucifer?

Lucifer- yeah I'm sure
Ye meri maa hi hai

Kamna- ye hai the one and only true goddess, Supreme commander of the universe

Anisha- wait what??

Kamna- ha yehi hai vo jinhe hum alag alag naam alag alag chehre me dekhte hai aur poojte hai
Es sansaar ki rachiyata aur dunia ki sabse shaktisali praani

Lucifer- Supreme is the creator and most powerful being

Kamna- you're wrong here
Supreme is the most destructive God
But he wasn't the one who created everything
It was your mother
Unhone hi dunia me sabse pehle insaan ko banaya, unhone hi sahi galat ke beech ek rekha khechi
Unhone hi achae banaye aur unhone hi burae banaye
Aur unhone hi LUCIFER ko banaya

Lucifer- bullshit
It was Supreme

Kamna- you remember nothing lucifer
Maine apni jindagi di hai eske liye aur jo main bol rahi hu vohi sach hai

Lucifer- she loved me
Vohi ek matar thi jo mujhe achae dikhati thi

Kamna- tum galat nahi ho lekin sahi bhi nahi ho
Mata ne tumko banaya tha burae se ladne ke liye
Lekin ek waqt ke baad burae ne apne aapko aisa badal liya ki achae unse jeet pane me asafal hone lagi ya yu kahe ki aakhir me achae jeet to jati thi lekin nuksaan etna ho jata tha ki us jeet ka koe mulya nahi rah jata tha esliye unhone ek aisi burae banaye ek aisa andhera jo khud ko jala kar dusro ko roshini de
Aur vo andhera tum ho lucifer

Lucifer- kuch bhi bol rahi ho aap
Aapko kuch nahi pata

Kamna- look at these pictures
Kuch alag lag raha hai?

Lucifer- ha
Jaha jaha main hu vaha vaha aag jal rahi hai

Kamna- kyu jal rahi hai?

Lucifer- mujhe kaise pata hoga?

Anisha- tumhre pass hi aag jal rahi hai baki har jagah andhera dikhae de raha hai
Matlab sirf tum hi us andhere ko door kar sakte ho

Lucifer- fir main burae kaise hua?

Kamna- unhe burae se ladne ke liye burae hi chahiye thi
Tum batao tumhe konsa acha kaam yaad hai?
Khoon hi to yaad aata hai tumhe?

Lucifer- lekin masoom khoon to nahi the na vo?

Anisha- mujhe lagta hai ki unhone darshaya aise hai ki tum galat ho lekin agar sahi mayne me dekha jaye to tum hi sahi ho

Lucifer- ek jhatke me sare jajbaat badal diye
Kaha main sochta tha maa to hai mere pass pyaar karne ke liye lekin...

Kamna- vo ab bhi tumse pyaar karti hai

Lucifer- you don't know that
Sirf assumption me chal rahi ho aap

Kamna- jo assumption sahi hai
Ye dekho esko dekh ke batao kya dikh raha hai tumhe?

Lucifer- meri training ki image hai ye
Samne khade hai guruji aur uske sath hai....hmm ye eda hai

Anisha- eda??

Kamna- ye vo hai jo lucifer ka pehla pyaar thi
Aisa pyaar jo kabhi pura nahi hota vo wala pyaar tha eda lucifer ka

Lucifer- bullshit

Kamna- tumhre naa manane se sachae badal nahi jayegi

Kamna- agar hum sare gods ko hata de to eda dusri sabse takatwar person hai
Pehle to tumhe pata hi hai kon hai?

Lucifer- main

Kamna- bilkul sahi
Pehle par tum hi ho
Bhagwano ko es andhere me roshini ko bhi dikhana tha aur uske liye hi banae gaye thi eda
Lekin unke plan ke against jake eda tumse muhobaat karne lag gaye aur jab unko pata chala ki eda tumse muhobbat karti hai to unhone aisa khel racha ki tum dono dekhte rah gaye

Lucifer- eda never loved me

Kamna- shanti banaye rakho
Jab sab yaad aayega tab pata chal jayega ki eda tumse pyaar karti thi ya nahi

Lucifer- en sab ka matlab to yehi nikalta hai ki hum me se galat koe nahi tha sivay bhagwano ke
Jinhone hume aisa banaya

Kamna- yehi shristhi ka niyam hai
Ek jagah achae hogi to dusri jagah burai janam legi hi legi

Lucifer- aur ye sab suru hua mujhse?

Anisha- esme to aur bhi log hai
To kya vo lucifer ke bhai behan hai ya aur koe?

Lucifer- ek ko to main pahchan raha hu
Sabse piche niche muh karke jo batha hua hai vo hai kavish
Baki ke yaad nahi aa rahe lekin aisa lag jarur raha hai ki main unhe janta hu

Kamna- ye dekho
Kuch yaad aaya?

Lucifer- koe rishi lag rahe hai

Kamna- tumhe koe maar nahi sakta
Pata hai na tumhe?

Lucifer- ha

Kamna- yehi hai vo jinki vajah se koe tumhe maar nahi sakta

Anisha- that curse??
Kya ye vo curse wale hi hai?
Jinhone tumhe shraap diya tha?

Lucifer- pata nahi

Anisha- yehi vohi hai
Enki aankhon ka tej hi bata raha hai ki ye vohi hai
Lekin kyu?

Kamna- taki tum amar ho jao aur dunia tumhre naam se humesha darti rahe aur galat kaam karne se pareej kare

Lucifer- ye sab theory hai
Mujhe yaha aana hi nahi chahiye tha bina matlab ke waqt kharab ho gaya mera

Kamna- yehi sach hai tumhra lucifer

Lucifer- agar yehi sach hai mera to mujhe kuch yaad kyu nahi aa raha?
Aur aise sach ka main kya karunga jab mera dil dimag us sach ko manane se hi inkaar kar de?
Sach vo hota hai jinhe hum bina kisi ha na ke accept kare
Aur mujhe to ye koe bhi accept karne layak baatin nahi lag rahi

Kamna- sab yaad aayega tumhe aur aaj hi yaad aayega

Lucifer- aapko kya lagta hai ki ye sab aapke muh se sun kar mujhe sab yaad aa jayega?
Galat fami hai aapki

Anisha- tumhe hi to bola tha ki kosis karni hai ek baar
Ab jab hum kosis kar rahe hai to etne negative kyu ho rahe ho?

Kamna- kyuki main bata rahi hu esse esliye
He hates me

Anisha- why??

Kamna- because maine abhi tak ashu se baat nahi ki
Ye chahta tha ki main starting me hi baat karke sab sort kar lu lekin aisa maine kiya nahi to ye gusse me batha hai

Lucifer- main gussa nahi karta
Aur jo main karta hu vo aap handle nahi kar paoge

Anisha- okay enough
Hum yaha lucifer ka sach janane aaye hai aur mujhe lagta hai hume ussi par focus karna chahiye

Kamna- sun kaha raha hai ye?

Anisha- lucifer tum dekho chhije khud analysis karo aur khud yaad karne ki kosis
I'm here with you
Lucifer ka hath thamte hue anisha bade pyaar se boli to lucifer samne ki photo ke aage khada ho gaya

Ek eye contact hua lucifer ka aur us photo me dikhae dene wale ka aur agle hi pal lucifer ki aankhen laal chamakne lag gaye

Anisha ko apne hatho par garmi feel hone lagi lekin usne apna hath hataya nahi

Do minute tak aisa hi chalta raha fir lucifer shant ho gaya aur vo dusti painting ki taraf mud gaya

Do teen baar to vo vaise hi garam hota raha lekin fir vo shant ho gaya aur yaha vaha ghumte hue sab analysis karne laga

Etne sare paintings thi vaha lucifer baari baari se sab me khota chala gaya

Bas fark etna tha ki vo un paintings me ander tak ghus ja raha tha aisa lag raha tha jaise unki soul ke ander ghus kar unka sab kuch jaan raha tha vo

Teen ghante ho gaye the ye sab karte karte aur dheere dheere sari paintings khatam hoti ja rahi thi aur sath me andhera bhi sab kuch apne ander samane me laga hua tha

En teen ghanto me vaha sirf aur sirf shanti chahi rahi agar kisi tarah ki aawaz aa rahi thi to vo thi unke chalne ki aur sirf unke chalne ke

Eske alava aisa lag raha tha jaise vaha koe hai hi nahi

Ek ghanta aur beeta vaha fir aakhir me lucifer bola

Lucifer- ulti disha me ek talaab hai
Vaha chalte hai

Lucifer etne samay baad bola tha lekin fir bhi kisi ne uski baat nahi kaati aur jis direction me lucifer ne bola ussi direction me chal diye sab

Piche ka gate kholte hi ek bahut bada talaab bana hua tha aur hairaat ki baat ye thi ki es pahaad ke upar fal fruit ke paid lage hue the aur sare ke sare Hare bhare the

Anisha ne baat bahut ache se notice kar li thi lekin abhi tak vo boli kuch nahi thi

Sayad lucifer ko disturb nahi karna chahti thi vo

Lucifer- kha lo kuch bukh lagi ho aap dono ko
Yaha sab fresh hai
Main es paani se thode sawal puch leta hu

Aur lucifer apne kapde nikalte hue us pani me utar gaya vahi anisha aur kamna ne kuch fruits ikhatha kiye aur unhe khane lagi

Anisha to shant thi lekin kamna ko bahut ache se pata tha ki abhi yaha ek tufaan aane wala hai aur vo tufaan es neele paani ko apne khoon se laal karne wala hai....
Bahut badhiya update hai Bhai.....
Waiting for next update
 
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Bhai qasam swy wo din bhut miss krta ho jab apki story ka update roz ayta h aik apki hi story thi jis ky liye aik waqt aysa tha jab sirf es story ky liye internet pakg lagata tha ab hafto bad open key tu kch update milty
Bhai bahut sare reason hai daily update na dene ka jisme sabse important hai pehle base banana easy hota hai ab jada soch ke likhna padta hai plus ab kaam bahut badh gaya hai to waqt kam mil pata hai
 
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