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Incest Baadshah ~ The Tales of Debauchery
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Update - 134 ~ Crimson Festival
Ab tak…
Agle hi pal Tamanna haatho me wo roll liye bhaagi aur apni car me baith gayi. Palak jhapakte car bhi waha se ravaana ho gayi.
‘What the fuck!!’
Veer yaha confused hi tha jab uske phone par ek message aaya aur phone vibrate hua,
*Buzzzz*
Message padhte hi Veer ke maathe par chinta ki lakeere chhaa gayi.
Message me likha tha~
“I need you! ASAP!”
Ab aage :
Harr baar ki tarah aaj subah bhi Veer ke ghar me kohraam macha hua tha. Ab toh jaise Veer ko bhi aadat lag gayi thi. Iss shorgul ki aur saath hi saath-
Apna bag pack karne ki.
Packing? Kis liye? Packing isliye kyuki bulaava jo aa chuka tha usse. Par harr baar ki tarah dil bhi tootne the.
“Kyu Veer? Ab kaha? Tum ye baar baar kyu bhala-!?”
Ragini ki udaasi bhari awaaz uske kaano me peeche se padi.
Woh hall me hi sabke saamne packing kar raha tha aur sabhi ussi par nazre gadaaye hue the. Ragini ko dekh aisa laga jaise bechari abhi ro degi. Uske chehre ke haav bhaav padhna behad hi asaan tha. Aur Bhavna wahi kar bhi rahi thi. Upar se neeche tak Ragini ki harqato ko wo parakh rahi thi.
Woh chehre par chinta aur bechaini, aankho me ek bebasi, aur yu uske jee ka machalna. Bhavna ki aankho se kuch bhi chooth kar nahi jaa raha tha.
Ragini jab jab Veer ke qareeb aati, Veer kisi patang ki tarah dheel khaa ke aur dur udd jaata. Ye toh jaise ab harr baar ka hi ho gaya tha. Parantu, ab Veer unn sab ko kaise samjhaata? System aur anya raazo ko woh baahar aane nahi de sakta tha. Woh apni jagah majboor tha. Unn sab ko surakshit rakhne ki zimmedaari bhi toh uske hi sarr thi.
Veer : Bhabhi! Mein jald aa jaunga! Aap chinta mat kariye.
Usne fatafat suitcase me apne kuch kapde aur zaroori samaan daalte hue kaha. Par peeche khadi Ragini ko uski harr baat aur bechain kar rahi thi.
Tej : Par? Par ye achanak se Paris kyu Veer? Ek minute! Kahi tum uss secret love waali lady se toh nahi milne jaa rahe na?
Veer : Hein???
Bhavna : Secret love waali lady?
Apne bete ki love life se juda sawaal sunn, Bhavna ka badan seedha ho gaya. Aur na sirf uska balki Ragini bhi bauhe sikod usse dekhne lagi.
Tej : Aur kaun? Wahi lady jisne tumhe ye itni mehngi gaadi gift kii hai!
Apni behna ki baat sunte hue Veer hassa,
Veer : Haha~ Aisa kuch bhi nahi hai. Woh waha Vegas me hai. Ya shayad Mumbai laut bhi aayi ho. Paris me mein kisi aur kaam se jaa raha hu.
Tej (frowns) : Kis kaam se?
Veer : Business ke!
Tej : Kaisa business?
Veer (shrugs) : Business Teju dii!
Tej : Kis se business karne jaa rahe ho waha?
Veer : Client hai woh dii! Badi company ka. Zaahir hai ki kisi ek insaan se toh business karunga nahi? Company ke sang hi sambhav hai na ye?
Tej : Toh aise achanak se kyu? Itni kya important meeting hai?
Veer : Kyuki unka schedule hota hai. Woh mere liye toh baithe hi nahi rahenge na?
Tej : Kis company se milne jaa rahe ho?
Veer (sighs) : Teju dii! Paris ke liye hume Visa kab nahi lagta?
Tej : Jab aap business ke liye jaa rahe- ahh!? Toh-!?
Veer muskuraaya aur usne apna phone Tej ke saamne kar screen par ek mesage dikhaaya.
Message me Veer ki flight ki ticket thi shaam ki. Mumbai se Paris. Business class. Agar business ke silsile me Paris jaana ho toh Visa ki zaroorat nahi padti thi. Aisa visitor kam se kam 90 dino tak waha theherne ke liye allowed tha.
Jab Tej ne message padha toh kahi na kahi ab usse Veer pe yakeen hona shuru ho gaya. Kyuki bina business ke kaam ke liye jaane par Visa lagta hi tha.
Aur Veer agar bina Visa ke jaa raha tha toh baat spasht thi. Woh business sambandhit kaam ke liye hi jaa raha tha.
Tej : T-Toh client kaun hai?
Veer : Mujhe kaise pata hoga dii? Company se woh kisi ko bhi milne ke liye bhej sakte hai.
Tej : Ohhh!
Bhavna : Kis vishay me business kar rahe ho?
Jab Bhavna ne ye sawaal pucha toh kuch derr ke liye Veer shaant reh gaya. Uski khamoshi dekh Tej ka shaq firse badhne laga.
Veer (smiles) : Food industry se related hi hai Maa~
Woh aur Bhavna ek dusre ko kuch shan tak dekhte rahe.
Bhavna : Bas?
Veer : Aur shayad kuch goods supply?
Bhavna : Samjhi!
Veer : Hmm!
Peeche khadi Shweta jo ab tak maun thi, woh kaise chup reh sakti thi? Sab baari baari Veer par haq jama ke uss se prashn par prashn puch rahe the. Uski privacy ki dhajjiya udaa rahe the. Yahi sahi waqt tha apna pyaar Veer ko dikhaane ka. Woh fauran aage aayi aur usne Veer ke haath ko thaama,
Shweta : P-Par Veer? Beta tum rukoge kaha? Aise akele jaa rahe ho? Itne bade desh me, itni badi city me akele kaise sab manage karoge? Tumhara khaana peena? M-Mein bhi chalti hu tumhare saath.
Aur usne apna daav khel diya. Jaha sab Veer ke muh se jankaari nikalwaane me lage hue the, wahi Shweta ne aisa kuch bhi karne ka prayaas nahi kiya. Woh jaise ye dikhaana chaah rahi thi ki Veer jaha jis kaam se jaana chaahe jaa sakta hai. Usse toh bas uske khaan-paan aur rehne ki fiqr hai.
Kahi na kahi ye kaam bhi kar gaya. Kyuki Veer ko asaani hui. Ab usse ek aur shaks ko nahi samjhaana pada. Kahi na kahi usse andar se accha bhi laga ki Shweta ko uski chinta thi.
Khaas baat ye thi ki bhale hi Shweta mauke ka fayda utha ke Veer ke qareeb aane ki koshish karti thi par uski chhahat sacchi thi. Uska lagaav aur prem koi dhong nahi tha.
Hamesha se hi uske dil me ek bete ke liye ek rikt sthaan hua karta tha. Jisse Veer ne ab apne naam se bhar diya tha. Ab toh woh uski aankho ka taara bann chuka tha. Aur Veer bhi uske pyaar ko samajhta tha. Jaanta tha ki Shweta ke sang ateet me kya guzri hai.
Toh wahi dur baithi Bhavna apni sautan ko apne bete se chipke ek alag sii muskaan liye dekh rahi thi.
Jaise hi Shweta ne Bhavna ko dekha,
Shweta : Huh!?
Usne apni pakad Veer ke haath par aur mazboot kar dii. Veer ki asli maa usse rehesyamayi muskaan liye ghoor rahi thi. Shweta bechari darr ke reh gayi. Woh abhi ek bacchi ki tarah mehsoos kar rahi thi jisse ye bhay tha ki kahi koi uska mann-pasand gudda chhina ke na bhaag jaaye.
Parantu, bagal me khadi Tej ko ye sab bilkul bhi nahi kusaa raha tha. Uska toh mann kar raha tha ki abhi Shweta ko kheech ke Veer se alag kar de. Lekin usne khud ko aisa karne se roka.
Bhavna ke sang aankh-michauli karte hue Shweta kabhi usse dekhti toh kabhi Veer ko,
Shweta : M-Mein chalti hu na betu! Mein tumhari madad karwa dungi waha. H-Haan? Okay?
Veer (smiles) : Sochne ke liye shukriya. But iski zaroorat nahi hai. Mein akele jaunga toh travel jaldi kar paunga waha. Aur jitna jaldi sab hoyega utni hi jaldi mein waapas bhi aa paunga.
Shweta (bechaini me) : P-Par-
Veer ne uska haath thaama,
Veer (smiles) : Jaldi aaunga na! Don’t worry!
Jab Veer ne uss se itne pyaar se kaha toh Shweta uski soorat me hi kahi kho gayi. Woh momm ki tarah pighal ke reh gayi. Uska dil baag baag ho utha. Jaise maano uski mehnat safal ho gayi ho. Veer ke muh se apne liye pyaar bhare shabd sunn ke hi woh sab kuch bhool gayi.
Shweta : O-Okay~
‘Phew! Inhe manaana utna kathin nahi tha.’ Veer ne ek raahat ki saas lii.
[Well! Abhi aur bhi logo ko manaana hai aapko.]
Ragini : Toh mein chali jaati hu na. Mein tumhe slow down nahi karungi Veer.
Veer : Nahi Bhabhi! Mene abhi toh kaha. Waha mujhe travel karna padega. Aapke liye convenient nahi rahega. Aur wese bhi, ab meri flight aaj ki book ho chuki hai. Ab flights milti bhi hai ya nahi kya pata.
Ragini : Tum tension mat lo, zaroor mil jayegi.
Iss se pehle ki woh aage badh mobile par tickets dekhti, Veer ne usse rok diya.
Veer (smiles) : Bhabhi~
Veer ke chehre par woh narm sii muskurahat dekh Ragini phir haar gayi. Apne nichle honth ko daato tale kutarte hue woh sarr jhuka ke khadi ho gayi. Harr baar yahi hota tha uske saath. Harr baar Veer uske saath aisa karta tha. Woh niraash thi. Gussa bhi.
Ragini ke haav bhaav padh Veer samajh gaya tha ki usse jaane se pehle apni bhabhi ko manaana behad zaroori tha.
Kherr! Bag packing samaapt hui. Aaj Bhumika aur Sonali dono hi kaam par nahi gayi. Kyuki Veer aaj kayi dino ke liye ghar se jaa raha tha, toh woh dono bhi thehri hui thi.
Aur samast parivaar Veer ke kamre me ikhatta tha. Bed par Veer, Tej, Bhumika, Aabha aur Sonali baithi hui thi. Toh wahi neeche chataayi par Ragini, Suman, Shweta aur Bhavna.
Veer : Mujhe aap sab se kuch baat karni hai. Ya yu samajh lijiye ki aap sabki madad chahiye.
Shweta : Kaisi madad betu?
Bhavna : Hmm?
Tej : Kaho Veer!
Veer ne ek gehri saans lii.
[Yes! Ye sahi samay hai Profit Path ko lay down karne ka Master. Jitni jaldi ye execute hoga, hum new profit path ko dekh payenge. Behtar hoga ki hume naya profit path waha Paris me hi mil jaaye. Toh waha ki business opportunities ko hum hathiya payenge Master.]
‘Mujhe firse wo path show karo Pari!’
[Right away Master!]
Aur Veer ke saamne punaah ek baar wahi path khul gaya.
‘Hmm! I see!’
Ragini : Kya baat hai Veer? Kaho na!
Veer : Ohhh! H-Haan! Mein keh raha tha ki kya aap sab meri madad mere business me karengi?
Aur sabse pehla response Bhavna ka hi tha.
Bhavna (smiles) : Mein soch hi rahi thi ki akhir kab tum hum se ye baatein saajha karoge. Akhir kab se isse apne zehen me dabaaye hue the?
Veer : Umm~ Woh-!
Bhavna : Koi baat nahi! Derr aaye durust aaye! Kaho! Kya karna hai hume?
Veer : Darasal! Shyaam jii se keh ke mene kuch kisaano ki maang kii hai.
Tej : Kisaan? Kis liye?
[Ekdum sahi direction me jaa rahe ho aap Master.]
Veer : Teju dii! Dada jii ne mujhe zameen dii hui hai. Uska istemaal toh karna hi tha. Woh zameen upjau hai. Waha kheti ho sakti hai. Isliye Shyaam jii se mene kisaano ko bhejne ke liye kaha hua hai.
Ragini : Toh tum ab kheti karoge Veer?
Veer : Bhabhi aisa hai ki, mera business food me hai abhi. Zara sochiye ki agar mere paas khud ki kheti ho, jaha se food truck me istemaal hone waali taaza sabziya mil sake. Aur toh aur mein unhe bazaar me supply karne lagu. Toh iss se kya hoga?
Veer Profit path ke pehle path ko achhi tarah se decode kar chuka tha. Usse pata tha kis disha me aage badhna hai aur kin logo ko aage leke badhna hai.
Uske prashn ka uttar Shweta ne diya jo neeche paalthi maare baithi hui thi,
Shweta : Betu bohut badhiya! Tumne ek efficient tareeqa khoja hai. Tum na sirf apna kharcha bachaoge balki ab aur zyada kama sakte ho. Iss se unn kisaano ko bhi ek kaam mil jayega. Unki aamdani hone lagegi jo ab tak nahi ho rahi thi. Aur toh aur tumhare customers ko jab fresh fruits, vegetables ka khaana milega toh business me badhhotri honi hi hai.
Ek business lady hone ke naate, Shweta pal bhar me hi Veer ka plan samajh gayi thi.
Veer : Jii! Yahi mera plan hai. Also, Varsha ko ped paudho ka bohut knowledge hai. Usse phuulo se banayi jaane waali sugandh aur paudho se banaayi jaane waali ayurvedic aushdhiyo ko banaana aata hai. Uss baare me bhi mene kuch soch ke rakha hai.
Ragini : Varsha? Kaun?
Bhumika : Hmm?
Veer ke sang jo aurte gayi thi Jaipur woh Parijaat ki aurto se waaqif thi. Par Bhumika, Ragini, Sonali aur Aabha nahi. Isliye ye naam unke liye naya tha.
Shweta : Tum sab unke baare me nahi jaanti. Rehne do!
Shweta na woh baat bataana theek na samjha. Ragini bas ek soch me doobi upar baithe Veer ko dekhti rahi jaise ek biwi dekhti hai jab uska pati koi anjaan mahila ka naam le.
Veer : Aur isliye- Mein ye saara kaam abhi 3 logo ko saupna chaahta hu.
Uske itna bolte hi sabhi aurte ek dusre ko dekhne lagi.
Veer (smiles) : Bhabhi!
Ragini : Huhhh!?
Veer : Aap, Teju dii aur Arohi dii!
Tej : Arohi??
Veer : Hmm! Arohi dii se abhi meri baat nahi hui hai par unhe shaamil karna chaahunga mein.
Tej : Toh mujhe kya karna hai?
Veer : Abhi mene bataya toh dii! Aap logo ko hi ye milke manage karna hoga. Kya aap sab karogi?
Ragini toh chaahti hi yahi thi. Hamesha se hi woh Veer ke kaam aana chaahti thi. Uske business me uska haath bataana chaahti thi.
Ragini (gehri saans lete hue) : Tum chinta mat karo Veer! Mein sab samajh gayi hu. Aur hum sab milke sab dekh lenge. Tumhe fiqr karne ki koi zaroorat nahi!
Veer (smiles) : Aapse yahi umeed thi mujhe!
Bhumika : V-Veer! Mujhe bhi tumse kuch kehna hai.
Veer ko dhyaan aaya ki Bhumika pichli subaah bhi yahi keh rahi thi.
Veer : Kahiye!
Bhumika : W-Woh-
Veer : Hmm!?
Bhumika : M-Mein- Mein tumhe hamari hotel dena chaahti hu.
Uske vaakya ne waha baithe sabhi ko hairat me daal diya.
Veer : Whaaaatttt??
Sabse zyaada jhatka Veer ko hi laga. Jis hotel ko varsho se maa beti ne milke badhaaya, aaj woh usse dena chaahti thi? Kyu?
Bhumika : H-Hmm! Mene bohut socha hai iss baare me. Aur mujhe ye sahi lagta hai. Agar hum sab ek parivaar ka hissa hai toh ye mera hotel, mera business nahi hona chahiye na? K-Kya ye kehna sahi nahi hoga ~ ‘Hamara Business’??
Bhumika ka masoom sa chehra jab Veer ne nazdeek se dekha, khaaskar uske gore gaalo par girti hui uski kaali zulfe toh Veer ke khud ke gaal halke laal ho chale.
‘She- She’s cute!’
[Ahem!]
Shweta : Hey Bhagwaan!
Shweta achanak khadi ho gayi.
Shweta : Ye mene pehle kyu nahi socha? Beta tumne 100 takke ki baat kahi hai. Jab hum sab saath saath hai toh ye mera tera kya? Veer! Bhumi sahi keh rahi hai.
Veer : Huh?
Shweta ka dil gad-gad ho utha. Uski beti ne itna behatreen sujhaav diya tha. Ab toh jese woh Veer ke qareeb aate hue khud ko mann me hi asaani se dekh paa rahi thi.
Veer : Par-
Shweta : Par var kuch nahi. Bilkul! Tum dono ka haq hai uspe. Jab bhumi meri bacchi hai toh tum bhi toh mere bete ho. Aur wese bhi mene toh woh hotel Pranjal ke haatho kho dii thi, Tumhi toh laaye the na usse. Toh wo toh wese hi tumhari ho gayi.
Tej dono ko iss qadar dekh vyakul ho gayi.
Tej : M-Mom!?
Wo Bhavna ko chinta me dekhi. Kya ye dono sauteli maa beti uske bhai ko chheen ke le jaane waali thi? Par Bhavna ne usse shaant rehne ka ishaara kiya.
Bhumika : Actually, Veer! H-Hum ye kar sakte hai ki- Tumhare food truck par ek label laga de.
Veer : Label?
Bhumika : Like- Owned by hotel Prestige. Iss se logo ko pata chalega ki food truck sheher ki ek badi hotel ka hissa hai. Saath hi hamari hotel ka bhi advertisement ho jayega.
Idea sunte hi Veer surprised reh gaya.
[Woah! She’s intelligent.]
Hotel Prestige Shweta aur Bhumika ki hotel ka naam tha. Agar truck par ye label chadh jaaye ki truck sheher ki jaani maani hotel prestige dwaara chalaya jaa raha hai toh zaahir hai iss se do kaam hone waale the. Hotel ka advertisement. Aur saath hi logo ko ye pata chalta ki food truck khaali food truck nahi, balki ek badi hotel ka hissa hai.
Ek teer se do shikaar.
Par itna hi nahi, Veer aur Bhumika ek dusre ke business me ab transparency rakh sakte the. Yaani woh ek dusre ka business dekh sakte the. Aur toh aur ghar par baithi Shweta bhi unse jud sakti thi. Sujhaav bohut hi zyada zabardast tha.
Shweta : Excellent idea meri bacchi! Bilkul! Hum yahi karenge!
Veer bas muskura ke reh gaya.
Aur issi ke saath Veer ne apni business planning ko apne ghar ki aurto ke upar saunp diya.
***
Kuch hi ghanto me shaam hone waali thi aur Ragini ki haalat kharab ho rakhi thi.
Jaanti thi woh ki ye kitna jokhim bada kaam tha, par ab uss se zara bhi bardaasht nahi ho raha tha. Veer ke kamre me uski safaayi ke bahaane woh darwaza andar se band kii hui thi aur idhar se udhar tehel rahi thi.
Jab achanak se darwaze par knock hui. Ragini ne khush hote hue darwaaza khola aur uske saamne Veer tha.
Veer : Aap jaanti ho ye kitna risky hai?
Ragini : Mujhse bardaasht nahi ho raha Veer! Take me now~
Veer ko uski collor se pakadte hue andar kheech usne darwaaza band kar diya.
Aur unn dono ke honth ek dusre se bhid gaye. Ragini apne labo se Veer ke labo ko chaba rahi thi. Woh itni khatarnaak kisser bann chuki thi ki Veer khud hairat me tha.
Iss se pehle Veer ne sirf Divya ko hi ek crazy kisser maana tha par Ragini ne sabhi aurto ko kissing ke maamle me ab pachhaad diya tha. Woh poora ka poora muh hi choom daalti thi. Uski kiss itni sloppy hoti thi ki thook aur laar se unn dono ke muh aksar sann jaaya karte the.
Aur ek aur ajeeb sa chaska chadha hua tha usse. Ya yu kahe ki ek fetish~
Ragini : Nnnn~ J-Jaldi do! Jaldi do na baby~
Apna muh khol, jeebh baahar nikaal woh kisi cheez ki maang karne lagi.
Veer (smiles) : Aap bohut dirty ho rahi ho aaj kal!
Ragini : Ummmm~ I want to be dirty Veer! I want to be dirty!! Lekin sirf tumhare liye! P-Pleaseeee~ De do naaaa~
Veer ke muh se jaise hi fir thook nikla woh seedha jaake Ragini ke muh me tapka aur palak jhapakte hi,
*Gulps*
Woh usse nigal gayi.
“Ahhhhhhhh~~”
Uske baad toh woh dono ek dusre par toot pade. Bistar par laiti Ragini usse baahe fela fela ke bulaayi,
Aur dono ke beech ek quick sex akhir ho hi gaya.
Woh dono nahi jaante the ki neeche maujood Suman peeth peeche unki madad kar rahi thi taaki dono kisi bhi tarah pakde na jaaye.
***
Jaane ka samay ho chuka tha. Sabhi udaas the, par sabse zyada Tej aur Ragini hi thi.
Bhavna uske nazdeek aayi,
Bhavna : Mere liye kuch kaam nahi bataaya?
Veer : Hai na aapke liye bhi kaam!
Bhavna : Kya?
Veer : Jab tak mein waapas na aa jau tab tak aap apni job ke liye kahi bhi baahar nahi jayengi.
Bhavna : P-Par?
Veer : Mene kaha na! Jab tak mein laut na aau aap kahi bhi baahar nahi jayengi.
Bhavna : Lekin kyu?
Veer : Bas meri baat maaniye.
Bhavna : Kya mujhe jaan ka khatra hai?
Veer maun raha. Aur uski chuppi ko Bhavna fauran hi samajh gayi.
Bhavna : Nahi jaungi! Ab khush?
Veer : Hmm!
Bhavna : Ye dahi shakkar kha lo! Shubh kaam ke liye jaa rahe ho toh isse khaa ke jao. Tumhara kaam safal hoga.
Maa ke haath se dahi shakkar kha ke Veer jaane ke liye hua toh Bhavna ne fir ek baar usse rok liya.
Veer : Ab kya hua?
Woh kuch na boli. Bas apni kalaayi par bandha usne ek kaala dhaaga utaara aur Veer ki kalaayi par baandh diya.
Veer : Ye kya hai?
Bhavna : Kuch nahi hai.
Veer : Arre? Bataiye na kya hai ye?
Bhavna : Kaha na kuch nahi hai! Jao ab!
Veer ne dhaage ko check kiya. Par woh ek sadharan dhaaga hi tha. Uski samajh me nahi aaya ki jab dhaaga mamuli tha toh uski maa baandh kyu rahi thi?
Kherr! Woh baari baari sabhi ke gale se laga. Tej uske gale se jab lagi toh usne sharmaate hue uske gaal bhi choom liye.
Tej :J-Jaldi aana! Okay?
Veer (smiles) : Hmm!
Toh wahi Bhumika sankoch ke chalte aage badhne ki himmat nahi jutaa paa rahi thi. Shweta, Bhavna ne bhi pyaar kiya usse.
Aur Veer ne jab apni baahe khud-ba-khud felaayi toh Bhumika dheere se aage badh uske gale se lag gayi.
Ravaangi kisi ko bhi nahi bhaati thi. Parantu, Veer ka jaana zaroori tha.
Unn sab ko antim baar tata bye-bye karte hue woh Ragini ke saath car me nikal gaya.
Uske jaate hi ghar agle hi pal soona soona sa ho gaya. Tej apna mood off liye andar ko jaane lagi. Toh Bhumika usse dekh boli,
Bhumika : H-Hum- Hum Veer ki help karne ke liye kuch decide kar lete hai?
Tej ne usse ek baar dekha aur chehra waapas se jhuka ke woh andar chali gayi. Bechaari Bhumika toh bas usse cheer up karne ki koshish kar rahi thi. Par shayad Tej ko ubharne me kuch samay lagne wala tha.
Baahar jo abhi bhi khadi hui thi woh thi Bhavna. Kaafi samay baad uske maathe par chinta ki lakeere chhaayi hui thi.
‘Akhir!? Jhooth bol ke jaane ki kya zaroorat pad gayi mere bacche?’
Woh apne mann me kahi. Uss raaste ko taakti rahi jaha se guzar ke Veer gaya hua tha.
6 baje ke aas paas ki flight thi. Kareeban Veer ko 30 ghante ka safar tay karna tha.
Flight par baithne se pehle Ragini ne usse bohot pyaar kiya. Bechaari ka bilkul mann nahi ho raha tha Veer se alag hone ka. Jaise tese Veer ne usse console kiya aur flight me baith ravaana ho gaya.
30 ghante ke safar ke baad woh finally Paris pohuch gaya.
Charles de gaulle airport par plane land kiya aur Veer plane se baahar aaya. Raat ke 12 ke qareeb samay ho chuka tha. Aur uske nazre kisi ki talaash me thi.
Airport par bhi naa maatr ki bheed thi. Dhundhte hi woh jaise hi thoda aage badha, usse woh shaksiyat dikhaayi degi jiske liye woh yaha tak itni dur aaya tha.
Uske saamne khubsoorti ki woh bala khadi hui thi.
Ava!!!
Ya yu kahe ki,
Natalia!!!
***
Ushant Island, France
Night ~ 12:36 AM
Iss taapu ke theek thodi dur par ek cruise samundar me thehra hua tha.
Woh behad vishaal tha. Lights se poora jagmag ho rakha tha. Jahaaj bada zaroor tha par log sirf ginti ke hi the. Sabhi ki aankho par ek decorative mask tha.
Mand mand music ki dhun pe, haath me red wine ka glaas liye woh sabhi jhoomne lage. Jab ek aadmi ne unka dhyaan kheencha,
“Ladies and gentleman!!”
Mic par uski awaaz sunn, sab uski orr dekhe. Usne ek suit pehna hua tha. Par aankho par uske bhi wahi decorative mask tha.
“Samay aa gaya hai ki hamaare pehle food ka lutf uthaaya jaaye.”
“Yayyyyyyy~” Waha maujood sabhi cheer karne lage.
Shayad koi khaane ki dish thi? Kuch behatreen sa bhojan? Woh insaan bhi jhoomte hue aage badha.
Aam taur par ye ek bade raees logo ki party prateet ho rahi thi. Par aage jo ghatit hone waala tha usse dekh ke accho se accho ki rooh kaanp uthati.
Woh aadmi gungunaate hue cruise ki ek khuli railing ke nazdeek aaya.
“Food! Food! Food! Food!” Sabhi firse shor karne lage.
Woh punaah aage badha. Aur jese hi woh railing ke chhorr par pohucha.
Chhorr se lage ek lakdi ka plank juda hua tha. Jiske upar,
Ek vyakti khada tha. Uske haath perr bandhe hue the. Aur muh parr kapda thusa tha. Aankho se aasu nirantar behte jaa rahe the.
Woh upar waale se duaa kar raha tha. Par upar waale ne ek na suni. Kyuki agle hi shan,
*Bammmm*
Usse peeche se ek zordaar laat padi aur woh hawa me uchhalte hue samundar me jaa gira. Log daudte hue railing ke nazdeek aaye aur nazaara dekhne lage. Kuch toh apna phone nikaal record karne lage.
Unhe mazaa aa raha tha. Iss fetish ke liye hi toh woh dherro kharch karte the aur samaaj se chhup ke apni dark desires ko poora karte the.
Paani me gira aadmi chhap chhap kar ke tadapne laga. Usse terrna nahi aata tha. Aur paani me hoti halchal mehsoos karte hi agle hi pal,
*Khaaaaaaaacccccchhhhhh*
“Oooooooooo~~~”
“Buuuuuuuuuuuuu~”
“Woooohooooooooo~”
Log taaliya bajaane lagi. Uss aadmi ko samundar me maujood shark ne do tukdo me kaat ke rakh diya tha.
Samudr ka paani lahu luhaan hua aur laal rang uski upari sateh par bichh gaya.
Jisne laat maari thi sabhi ne uske liye taali bajaayi aur apne coat ko adjust kar woh apne haath fela ke janta ke saamne jhuk gaya.
*Boooom* *Booooom*
*Swooooooosssshhh*
Uske jhukte hi peeche island se hawa me aatishbaazi hui aur aasmaan me alag alag rang bikhar gaye.
Paas khadi ek ladki uske qareeb aayi,
Ladki : Festival ki shuruaat kamaal ki hui hai. Kuch kehna chaahoge?
Aadmi ne bina kuch kahe uss ladki ko apni baaho me liya aur usse zorr se chooma.
Choomne ke baad usse side kar woh railing ke paas gaya aur ahista se bola,
“Rango ka mishran hai crimson.
Khoon ka rang hai crimson.
Mujhse kismat bhi haarti hai sweetie,
Kyuki mein hi hu Crimson!!”
Khoon ka rang hai crimson.
Mujhse kismat bhi haarti hai sweetie,
Kyuki mein hi hu Crimson!!”
Ladki (smiles) : Toh... Ab kya karna hai?
Crimson (smiles) : Kuch nahi! Mera shikaar… Aa chuka hai.
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Aaj ke liye itna hi guys.
Update normal size ka hai. 4.2k words. Crimson Festival start ho chuka hai. Daba ke likes thok ke jaane ka aur revos rakhne ka. Yaha se ab jo hoga woh bawaal hi hoga.
Dhanyavaad!
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So finally legendary skill ka raaz khul gaya aur ye bhi pata vhal gaya ke notification na aane ki kiya possibility ho sakti he,
Bhumika aur veer ka relation bhi dheere dheere thik ho rha he, wahi sonali ka wohi andaz baat karne ka buhat hi acha tha,
Veer ka kafi time baad apne food truck pe aana he aur apne sbhi workers ko motivate karna aur ye 1 new character ka story me aana ab dekhte he ke ye tamanah kiya karti he aage,
Aur veer ka sonali ke sth first time physical hona aur sonali ka reaction dekhna ye he ke ab sonali aur veer ka relation aage kesa hota he,
And last me veer ko message aana, as expected aapka suspense create karnaab agle update tak hum sub readers yahi sochte rahe ge ke kis ka message aaya he veer ko aur hum aap se pochte rahe ge aur aap hume suspense me hi rakhe ge
Aur kiya hi kahu aap har bar lajawab update dete ho shabad hi kam par jate he tareef karne ke liye,
Awesome bro you are amazing and your writing skills is insane keep it up bro maza agya.
Edakm rapchik update
Mast update h bhai...
Awesome superb update
Fabulous excellent outstanding update Bhau
Ye legendary skill to Ekdam fadu thi sab ulat pulat ke rakh deti hey...
Usmey veer ko kaira ko bachpan mey kya kya sehana pada ye sab dikhai diya hey kaise kaise usne sab se nikli hey ye bhi pata chala hey...
Lekin us skill ke side effect Bhi the Jo veer ne apne tarikese use lad ke thik oh gya hey...
Abha ne usko juth padete pakda to sala aisa kon darara hey us bhichari Ko., us ka to sab dhila kar dala na second mey
Lekin uske bad ohh uske gulabi adhoro ka raspan kar ke chala gaya
Ye sonali to Pura rashan pani leke uske uper Chad gayi thi food truck ke bare mey batne keliye par apne veer babu to full ignore kr rahe the usko aur uska gussa pada raha tha
Fir kya sab ko ektha kar ke sala apna talent dikhaya hey cooking ka lajawab...
Aur ye vip guest bich mey hi agyi hey..
Bol rahi hey ki uske revo pey hotel ka future depend rehta hey chalo ye dekh lete hey..
Fir kya apna bhidu ne to apna ek सिग्नेचर dish khila dala to ek bite Kar ke hi Kay ko Aisi bhagi ohhh
Aur sala bina Bill diye hi bhag gayi sala fokat mey kha ke gayi
Lekin ohh kay ko bhagi aise kya usko su su lagi thi kya
Aur ye last mey kiska msg aya hey I need bol ke kon ho sakta hey
Unban ho gaye aap ab dhyan se rahna kinna pareshan karoge meko agli baar sayad koi na sunega meri bhi
Bahut hi romanchak aur zabardast update bhai
Mast yaar sonali ki to halat kharab ho gayi veer ka uske stan pakadne se aur tamanaa aise bhag gayi jaise koi usse kaid kar lega,
Zabardast fantastic update
Werewolf bhai yeh baat nhi hoti yaar mereko laga iss update kaera ke mission ka aar yeh paar ho jayega lekin phir tumne suspense mein chor diya
Matlab phir se kat diya hamara sab ka
Jabardast
Well written sir
Kaera ka past to really dark and sadhai
Love the way you you showed us and that maze part was really great
I thought is update me we'll see some glimpse of kaera and her reaction her emotions but yea ik we'll see much of her and Trinity in future!
Bhumika what has she decided? She want to talk to veer? I guess business related?
Bhavana is watching raghini pretty closely!
Veer showing his cocking skill lol even sonali ko bhi tareef krni pad gai haha
"I’ll revolutionize the whole food industry."
Hell yea this line was very impactfull.
God you always left us on a cliffhangeris this MSG from Karan related to kaera
or THE MAN has strike his first blow
Once again great update and yea sorry about that "ear" thing
I think I was right about kaera. Mind blowing update
Abha ne veer ko ladkhda kr aate huye dekh liya tha or usne veer ko Bol bhi diya ki vo jhuth bol rha tha, jiske evaj me use ek Badhiya smooch mila with some fear flavor.
Idhar Sonali madam ke sath veer ka breakfast conversation or uske baad food truck ke karmchariyo ko motivate karna va khud se khana bnakr logo ko show karvana ki chef hota kya hai or Kaise kaam karta hai Jabardast tha...
Sonali ko pichhe se hug karke veer ne Aaj pahli baar uske ango ko chhua unhe masla, bhale hi Sonali veer ko kahti kuchh bhi rahe pr Vo vastav me veer ke Har action ko Injoy karti hai ab Dekhte hai veer ke is action pr kya reaction deti hai...
Ye food critic tamanna (kahi ye apni actress tamanna bhatiya to nhi hai
Yha veer use aise jata dekhta rah gya pr ye ASAP kya hota hai bhaya mere dimag me Iska koi full form nhi aa rha Abhi, or I need you! Kaera kah sakti hai sonia kah sakti hai or to or arohi va shreya bhi kah sakti hai na bhule to Sayad karan bhi Bol hi dega, pr veer ke mathe me Chinta ki lakire is samay kaera or US unknown person ke bare me soch kr hi ubhar sakti hai...
Veer ne legendary skill istemal kiya tha seer vision jiske side effect bhi hai is duniya ke niyamo se alag hone ke chalte, pr jis tarah se aapne dairy or kaera ki memory ko retrieve karne ka dikhaya hai hat's off bhai superb amazing lajavab update, veer ne kitna pain saha kaera ke imotion ko vapas lane ke liye, kya aaj ke jmane me koi istarah se risk le sakta hai, jvab hai nhi, log dusro ke liye aise risk Bilkul bhi nhi uthata pr apna veer veer hai...
Awesome writing skills bhaya superb lajvab amazing wonderful
Ya sonu bhi ho sakti hey baki ka bacha huva point mey se
Wonderful update Bhai
Interested n amazing update
Wow awesome update bhai
nice 1
खून का सैलाब आने वाला है, सीट बेल्ट बांध लो सभी,
कल भी ' काला नाग ' के स्टोरी थ्रीड पर यही समझाना चाह रहा था कि दूर की हर चमकती हुई वस्तु डायमंड नही होती। ग्लैमर से भरी हुई हर फिल्म कलाकारों का लाइफ वास्तविक जीवन मे उतना ग्लैमर नही होता। हर बड़े बिजनेसमैन की तरक्की के पीछे कोई बहुत बड़ा कारण होता है। उनका हर स्टेप्स कांटो भरे पथ पर चलने जैसा होता है।
काइरा की लाइफ भी वैसी ही थी। मां ने बचपन मे ही साथ छोड़ दिया । भाई ने कभी उसे समझने की कोशिश नही की। और बाप ने अपने व्यापारिक फायदे के लिए उसका मशीनीकरण कर दिया। सोनिया , जो उसकी उस वक्त की एकमात्र फ्रैंड थी , ने भी उसकी काबिलियत , उसकी सुपीरियरटी पर सब समय जलन की भावना पाले रही।
वर्तमान मे वो एक प्रतिष्ठित बिजनेस वुमेन है लेकिन इसे प्राप्त करने के लिए उसने कितनी कुर्बानियां दी है , यह कोई नही समझ सकता।
वीर ने परी की मदद से एक और अद्भुत स्किल हासिल किया , सीर वीजन। वैसे वीर के पास पहले से क्षमता थी कि वह पहली नजर मे ही किसी व्यक्ति का पहचान मालूम कर लेता था। पर इस स्किल की वजह से वो व्यक्ति का अब तक का पास्ट भी मालूम कर सकता है।
इस स्किल ने उसे काइरा के अतीत का दर्शन कराया जो बहुत भी दर्द से भरा था।
स्किल चूंकि बहुत बड़ी और अनोखी थी , इसलिए प्रयोग के दौरान कीमत के रूप मे उसे आठ दस घंटे के लिए मेंटल ट्रामा से भी गुजरना था।
लेकिन यह समझ मे अभी भी न आया कि काइरा की विश्वसनीयता वीर के प्रति अचानक कम क्यो हो गई ?
फूड ट्रक -- मोस्ट डिपेंड करता है फूड के स्वाद और क्वालिटी पर। चूंकि वीर के पास यह स्किल भी है इसलिए उसके बनाए गए फूड्स पर कोई प्रश्न चिन्ह लगा ही नही सकता। लेकिन बाकी लोग के लिए यह कठिन है ही। इसीलिए आज-कल होटल मैनेजमेंट की शिक्षा की काफी मांग है। वीर को कम से कम सोनाली को यह कोर्स जरूर कराना चाहिए।
तमन्ना मैडम एक फूड क्रिटिक थी और उन्होने अपने प्रोफेशन के बारे मे जो कहा , वो भी सच था। लेकिन अचानक से भाग क्यों खड़ी हुई ?
वैन के अंदर सोनाली को वीर द्वारा दिया हुआ झटका जोर से ही लगा होगा। ऐसा उसने एक्स्पेक्ट ही नही किया होगा।
देखते है मोहतरमा का रिएक्शन क्या होता है !
बेहतरीन अपडेट वेयरवोल्फ भाई। आउटस्टैंडिंग।
और जगमग जगमग भी।
( मै काइरा के अंदर कियारा को देख रहा था लेकिन यह लड़की भी सिध्दार्थ से आज के दिन शादी कर पराई हो जायेगी। कोई बात नही फिर काइरा को शादी-शुदा लाल कपड़े मे ही इमेजिन कर लेंगे)
Behad hi khoobsurat update
Best story and best writer
Veer ke accident ka baad Kya Kabhi usne apne sarir ka pura check up karvaya hai physical or energy level pr, ki kon se part me sharir ke vo extra hai jo Uske sarir me nhi honi chahiye.
Yadi pari physical form me hai to veer ke andar kuchh to extra show hoga or Yadi energy form me hui to use tresh karna utna hi jyada mushkil ho jayega...
Mujhe yah samajhna tha ki pari ke pass knowledge kis form me aati hai?
Jaisa ki ek theory hai ki ham Jo Bolte hai, karte hai Ya Kahe kahi pr kuchh bhi hota hai to uska impact is prakrati me hmesha rahta hai puri knowledge ke sath Sayad energy form me...
Or mujhe lagta hai pari usi energy ko vapas se information ke rup me convert karke veer tk pahuchati hai...
Mujhe pta hai ki werewolf bhaya ne btaya tha ki like google baba ya internet ki tarah kaam karta hai pari ka network, pr sochne vali baat hai earth pr storage option hai internet ke liye Lekin pari ka storage kis form me hai or kaha...
Mujhe lagta hai Sayad aapne btaya tha past me ki pari ka network inter galaxy tha
Jaise hmara phone ek tower se connect rahta hai or usi se hame internet milta hai to kya pari ke case me bhi aisa kuchh hai kya, or kya kabhi veer ke pass koi aisa question hoga jisko pari se puchhne pr pari Kahe ki is answer ke liye Aapke system me koi jankari nhi hai, ya kahe ki is prithavi me hi iska jvab nhi hai...
jabarjast lajvab update
1 din aur bada diya !
W
Lovely update....
Bhaaya aur koi rasta bhi nhi he na
Bhaaya mtlb ke revo dene se pehle sochna parta he buhat ke kiya likhe jo aap ki writing skills ko suit kare.
Werewolf
ये पूरा सप्ताह यानिकी वेलेंटाइन डे से पहले roseday Chocolate
day teddy
day... So on चलता रहेगा और मित्रों की पाठशाला में वीर की शरारती क्रिया सोनाली की तो........
बहुत ही उम्दा अंक रहे हैं विगत में ये सब crimson आर्क से पहले एक अजीब सी रूप रेखा को चित्रांकित किए जा रहे हैं.. मिशनों का मिशन केयेरा को सफलतापूर्वक संपन्न हुआ कि नहीं ये तो बहुत ही रोमांचक होगा जानना....
तमन्ना की तमन्नाओं पर कितना खरा उतरा ये तो बहुत ही सुंदर रोमांचकारी रहा है
फायर है
अगले रोमांचक अंक के इंतजार में
Great update Werewolf bhai.
Kafi dino ke baad aaya to dekha kahani kafi progress kar chuki he. Kuch naye character bhi aaye he village arc ke baad.
Bhavna ki jo back story aapne dikhai he wo kafi emotional kar ke gayi. Uske sath dhoka hi hua uper se brijesh ne bhi vishwas na kara. Suman ka character kafi grow kar chuka he. Ek tarah se wo head of slaves bann chuki he veer ke liye. Purvi aur bhavna khush nahi he isse par kya kar sakti he dono. Ye sachai accept karni hi hogi unko.
Tej ki baat kare to wo apne bhai ke bare me sab janna chahti he, usse protect bhi Karna chahti he. Veer kya use karta he, kya usko achha lagta he, kya usko nahi pasand, sab kuch wo janna chahti he taki wo aur close ho sake veer se. Uper se Aarohi aur kavya uski hi side he. 2 behno ka bhi sath mil gaya he usko. Bhumika ke sath jarur abhi ladai, bolna ho jata he par ye compititan bhi achha he. Isse Tej active rahegi veer ko pane ki race me. Aur abhi to kaera, Sonia, suhana, Ava nahi samne aayi. Inn sabke bich veer ko dekhegi to pakka jal bhun jayegi.
Veer ka ab apna ek pariwar he. Ragini ke sath bhi aage badh chuka he wo. Aur bhavna inn dono ko notice karti rehti he. Jarur aage chalke ragini aur bhavna me saas-bahu jesa rishta banne wala he. Bhavna ye to janti hi he ki ragini ke dil me veer ke liye bahut pyaar he aur wo dekh bhi rahi he. Bhavna aur Nidhi abhi tak nahi mile. Birthday party me mile honge par baatchit nahi samne aayi abhi tak.
Nidhi ke sath bhi ab kese aage badhta he wo bhi dekhna he. Nidhi ke sath uska rishta bahut khaas hoga. Juhi to he hi veer ki ladli. Nidhi samne se kahegi juhi ko ki "beta abse veer ko mamu mat bulana, papa bula sakti ho"
Shweta ne ek alag hi approach apnaya he veer ke dil me jagah banane ka. Aur usme thoda hath suman ka bhi he jis tarah suman aur wo baat kar rahi thi jab suman aur veer ke sambandh ki baate samne aayi. Bhumika ko bhi wo veer se close rakhna chahti he aur isiliye wo force karti he bhumika ko. Kyuki samne se to bhumika kuch kahegi nahi.
Baat kare baki sabki to karan aur kritika bhi sath me khush he. Kritika ne bhi achha kiya veer ke piche na padi wo, warna kab jaake uska number lagta uper se kaera, Sonia jesi personality ke bich wo khud ko chota feel karti. Kavya ki spanking jarur baki he abhi. Aarohi ke sath firse wahi moment bann gaya. Ab samne aayegi to sharam ke mare baat bhi nahi karegi. Veer ke diye earnings ke liye kaan me piercing bhi karwa li thi usne, uska he sharmana hi usko khaas banata he. Uper se dimag wali ladki he jaldbazi me kuch nahi karegi.
Abhi haal me to kaera pe focus he. Veer ne Kaera ke emotion wapis lane ke liye pura try to kiya hi he. Par result uske soche mutabik nahi aaya, ulta uski favourbility drop hui he. Par ye ek sign bhi to ho sakta he ki uske emotion wapis aaye he aur wo gussa he veer se ya naraz he. Gussa aana, naraz hona bhi to ek emotion hi he. Veer ne apna kaam kiya he, system ne bhi usko inform kar diya he sab bare me. Abhi filhal apne food truck pe dhyan de raha he wo. Ek food critics bhi aayi he. Veer bhi uski chalaki samjh gaya he aur usko uske hi khel me haraya he. Last me ek roll banake diya aur khake sidha nikal padi wo. Ab kya baat hogi wo aage dekhte he.
Inn sabke bich uss niharika se bhi milna nahi hua. Wo abhi tak slave nahi bani he.
Kaera ke emotion wapis aane ke baad ab majha aayega jab wo sabke samne haq jatayegi veer ke uper. Uske paas ek plus point ye he ki usne Veer ki virginity li he aur khud ki Veer ko di he. To ese me veer ke andar bhi ek protective nature hamesha rahega kaera ke liye.
Suhana, divya bhi sahi samay ka wait kar rahe he taki dubara veer se mil sake. Ava ki bhi apni backstory he jo aage pata chalegi.
Ragini aur suman ke scene dekhne me majha aayega kyuki ragini veer ke sab kaam Karna chahegi aur suman pehle se sab kaam karti aayi he veer ke. Dono ke bich Vese koi race nahi he ulta dono hi shuru se ek dusre ko samman deti aayi he.
Ab aage aane wale updates thrill se bhare honge esa lagta he. Bahut si baate he ab tak jo pata chalni he. Veer ka Locket, wo jungle wali ladki, system's truth, kishor sahi he ya galat ?,
Neha, vanshika ke jese Tejal bhi possessive he apne bhai ke prati. Aur bhavna bhi Nisha ke jese nail polish lagana shuru kar degi veer ko rijhane ke liye. Majha aayega aage.
Abhi to yahi lag raha he ki kaera ne message likha he. Baki dekhte he aage. ❤
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Super update bhaiUpdate - 134 ~ Crimson FestivalAb tak…
Agle hi pal Tamanna haatho me wo roll liye bhaagi aur apni car me baith gayi. Palak jhapakte car bhi waha se ravaana ho gayi.
‘What the fuck!!’
Veer yaha confused hi tha jab uske phone par ek message aaya aur phone vibrate hua,
*Buzzzz*
Message padhte hi Veer ke maathe par chinta ki lakeere chhaa gayi.
Message me likha tha~
“I need you! ASAP!”
Ab aage :
Harr baar ki tarah aaj subah bhi Veer ke ghar me kohraam macha hua tha. Ab toh jaise Veer ko bhi aadat lag gayi thi. Iss shorgul ki aur saath hi saath-
Apna bag pack karne ki.
Packing? Kis liye? Packing isliye kyuki bulaava jo aa chuka tha usse. Par harr baar ki tarah dil bhi tootne the.
“Kyu Veer? Ab kaha? Tum ye baar baar kyu bhala-!?”
Ragini ki udaasi bhari awaaz uske kaano me peeche se padi.
Woh hall me hi sabke saamne packing kar raha tha aur sabhi ussi par nazre gadaaye hue the. Ragini ko dekh aisa laga jaise bechari abhi ro degi. Uske chehre ke haav bhaav padhna behad hi asaan tha. Aur Bhavna wahi kar bhi rahi thi. Upar se neeche tak Ragini ki harqato ko wo parakh rahi thi.
Woh chehre par chinta aur bechaini, aankho me ek bebasi, aur yu uske jee ka machalna. Bhavna ki aankho se kuch bhi chooth kar nahi jaa raha tha.
Ragini jab jab Veer ke qareeb aati, Veer kisi patang ki tarah dheel khaa ke aur dur udd jaata. Ye toh jaise ab harr baar ka hi ho gaya tha. Parantu, ab Veer unn sab ko kaise samjhaata? System aur anya raazo ko woh baahar aane nahi de sakta tha. Woh apni jagah majboor tha. Unn sab ko surakshit rakhne ki zimmedaari bhi toh uske hi sarr thi.
Veer : Bhabhi! Mein jald aa jaunga! Aap chinta mat kariye.
Usne fatafat suitcase me apne kuch kapde aur zaroori samaan daalte hue kaha. Par peeche khadi Ragini ko uski harr baat aur bechain kar rahi thi.
Tej : Par? Par ye achanak se Paris kyu Veer? Ek minute! Kahi tum uss secret love waali lady se toh nahi milne jaa rahe na?
Veer : Hein???
Bhavna : Secret love waali lady?
Apne bete ki love life se juda sawaal sunn, Bhavna ka badan seedha ho gaya. Aur na sirf uska balki Ragini bhi bauhe sikod usse dekhne lagi.
Tej : Aur kaun? Wahi lady jisne tumhe ye itni mehngi gaadi gift kii hai!
Apni behna ki baat sunte hue Veer hassa,
Veer : Haha~ Aisa kuch bhi nahi hai. Woh waha Vegas me hai. Ya shayad Mumbai laut bhi aayi ho. Paris me mein kisi aur kaam se jaa raha hu.
Tej (frowns) : Kis kaam se?
Veer : Business ke!
Tej : Kaisa business?
Veer (shrugs) : Business Teju dii!
Tej : Kis se business karne jaa rahe ho waha?
Veer : Client hai woh dii! Badi company ka. Zaahir hai ki kisi ek insaan se toh business karunga nahi? Company ke sang hi sambhav hai na ye?
Tej : Toh aise achanak se kyu? Itni kya important meeting hai?
Veer : Kyuki unka schedule hota hai. Woh mere liye toh baithe hi nahi rahenge na?
Tej : Kis company se milne jaa rahe ho?
Veer (sighs) : Teju dii! Paris ke liye hume Visa kab nahi lagta?
Tej : Jab aap business ke liye jaa rahe- ahh!? Toh-!?
Veer muskuraaya aur usne apna phone Tej ke saamne kar screen par ek mesage dikhaaya.
Message me Veer ki flight ki ticket thi shaam ki. Mumbai se Paris. Business class. Agar business ke silsile me Paris jaana ho toh Visa ki zaroorat nahi padti thi. Aisa visitor kam se kam 90 dino tak waha theherne ke liye allowed tha.
Jab Tej ne message padha toh kahi na kahi ab usse Veer pe yakeen hona shuru ho gaya. Kyuki bina business ke kaam ke liye jaane par Visa lagta hi tha.
Aur Veer agar bina Visa ke jaa raha tha toh baat spasht thi. Woh business sambandhit kaam ke liye hi jaa raha tha.
Tej : T-Toh client kaun hai?
Veer : Mujhe kaise pata hoga dii? Company se woh kisi ko bhi milne ke liye bhej sakte hai.
Tej : Ohhh!
Bhavna : Kis vishay me business kar rahe ho?
Jab Bhavna ne ye sawaal pucha toh kuch derr ke liye Veer shaant reh gaya. Uski khamoshi dekh Tej ka shaq firse badhne laga.
Veer (smiles) : Food industry se related hi hai Maa~
Woh aur Bhavna ek dusre ko kuch shan tak dekhte rahe.
Bhavna : Bas?
Veer : Aur shayad kuch goods supply?
Bhavna : Samjhi!
Veer : Hmm!
Peeche khadi Shweta jo ab tak maun thi, woh kaise chup reh sakti thi? Sab baari baari Veer par haq jama ke uss se prashn par prashn puch rahe the. Uski privacy ki dhajjiya udaa rahe the. Yahi sahi waqt tha apna pyaar Veer ko dikhaane ka. Woh fauran aage aayi aur usne Veer ke haath ko thaama,
Shweta : P-Par Veer? Beta tum rukoge kaha? Aise akele jaa rahe ho? Itne bade desh me, itni badi city me akele kaise sab manage karoge? Tumhara khaana peena? M-Mein bhi chalti hu tumhare saath.
Aur usne apna daav khel diya. Jaha sab Veer ke muh se jankaari nikalwaane me lage hue the, wahi Shweta ne aisa kuch bhi karne ka prayaas nahi kiya. Woh jaise ye dikhaana chaah rahi thi ki Veer jaha jis kaam se jaana chaahe jaa sakta hai. Usse toh bas uske khaan-paan aur rehne ki fiqr hai.
Kahi na kahi ye kaam bhi kar gaya. Kyuki Veer ko asaani hui. Ab usse ek aur shaks ko nahi samjhaana pada. Kahi na kahi usse andar se accha bhi laga ki Shweta ko uski chinta thi.
Khaas baat ye thi ki bhale hi Shweta mauke ka fayda utha ke Veer ke qareeb aane ki koshish karti thi par uski chhahat sacchi thi. Uska lagaav aur prem koi dhong nahi tha.
Hamesha se hi uske dil me ek bete ke liye ek rikt sthaan hua karta tha. Jisse Veer ne ab apne naam se bhar diya tha. Ab toh woh uski aankho ka taara bann chuka tha. Aur Veer bhi uske pyaar ko samajhta tha. Jaanta tha ki Shweta ke sang ateet me kya guzri hai.
Toh wahi dur baithi Bhavna apni sautan ko apne bete se chipke ek alag sii muskaan liye dekh rahi thi.
Jaise hi Shweta ne Bhavna ko dekha,
Shweta : Huh!?
Usne apni pakad Veer ke haath par aur mazboot kar dii. Veer ki asli maa usse rehesyamayi muskaan liye ghoor rahi thi. Shweta bechari darr ke reh gayi. Woh abhi ek bacchi ki tarah mehsoos kar rahi thi jisse ye bhay tha ki kahi koi uska mann-pasand gudda chhina ke na bhaag jaaye.
Parantu, bagal me khadi Tej ko ye sab bilkul bhi nahi kusaa raha tha. Uska toh mann kar raha tha ki abhi Shweta ko kheech ke Veer se alag kar de. Lekin usne khud ko aisa karne se roka.
Bhavna ke sang aankh-michauli karte hue Shweta kabhi usse dekhti toh kabhi Veer ko,
Shweta : M-Mein chalti hu na betu! Mein tumhari madad karwa dungi waha. H-Haan? Okay?
Veer (smiles) : Sochne ke liye shukriya. But iski zaroorat nahi hai. Mein akele jaunga toh travel jaldi kar paunga waha. Aur jitna jaldi sab hoyega utni hi jaldi mein waapas bhi aa paunga.
Shweta (bechaini me) : P-Par-
Veer ne uska haath thaama,
Veer (smiles) : Jaldi aaunga na! Don’t worry!
Jab Veer ne uss se itne pyaar se kaha toh Shweta uski soorat me hi kahi kho gayi. Woh momm ki tarah pighal ke reh gayi. Uska dil baag baag ho utha. Jaise maano uski mehnat safal ho gayi ho. Veer ke muh se apne liye pyaar bhare shabd sunn ke hi woh sab kuch bhool gayi.
Shweta : O-Okay~
‘Phew! Inhe manaana utna kathin nahi tha.’ Veer ne ek raahat ki saas lii.
[Well! Abhi aur bhi logo ko manaana hai aapko.]
Ragini : Toh mein chali jaati hu na. Mein tumhe slow down nahi karungi Veer.
Veer : Nahi Bhabhi! Mene abhi toh kaha. Waha mujhe travel karna padega. Aapke liye convenient nahi rahega. Aur wese bhi, ab meri flight aaj ki book ho chuki hai. Ab flights milti bhi hai ya nahi kya pata.
Ragini : Tum tension mat lo, zaroor mil jayegi.
Iss se pehle ki woh aage badh mobile par tickets dekhti, Veer ne usse rok diya.
Veer (smiles) : Bhabhi~
Veer ke chehre par woh narm sii muskurahat dekh Ragini phir haar gayi. Apne nichle honth ko daato tale kutarte hue woh sarr jhuka ke khadi ho gayi. Harr baar yahi hota tha uske saath. Harr baar Veer uske saath aisa karta tha. Woh niraash thi. Gussa bhi.
Ragini ke haav bhaav padh Veer samajh gaya tha ki usse jaane se pehle apni bhabhi ko manaana behad zaroori tha.
Kherr! Bag packing samaapt hui. Aaj Bhumika aur Sonali dono hi kaam par nahi gayi. Kyuki Veer aaj kayi dino ke liye ghar se jaa raha tha, toh woh dono bhi thehri hui thi.
Aur samast parivaar Veer ke kamre me ikhatta tha. Bed par Veer, Tej, Bhumika, Aabha aur Sonali baithi hui thi. Toh wahi neeche chataayi par Ragini, Suman, Shweta aur Bhavna.
Veer : Mujhe aap sab se kuch baat karni hai. Ya yu samajh lijiye ki aap sabki madad chahiye.
Shweta : Kaisi madad betu?
Bhavna : Hmm?
Tej : Kaho Veer!
Veer ne ek gehri saans lii.
[Yes! Ye sahi samay hai Profit Path ko lay down karne ka Master. Jitni jaldi ye execute hoga, hum new profit path ko dekh payenge. Behtar hoga ki hume naya profit path waha Paris me hi mil jaaye. Toh waha ki business opportunities ko hum hathiya payenge Master.]
‘Mujhe firse wo path show karo Pari!’
[Right away Master!]
Aur Veer ke saamne punaah ek baar wahi path khul gaya.
‘Hmm! I see!’
Ragini : Kya baat hai Veer? Kaho na!
Veer : Ohhh! H-Haan! Mein keh raha tha ki kya aap sab meri madad mere business me karengi?
Aur sabse pehla response Bhavna ka hi tha.
Bhavna (smiles) : Mein soch hi rahi thi ki akhir kab tum hum se ye baatein saajha karoge. Akhir kab se isse apne zehen me dabaaye hue the?
Veer : Umm~ Woh-!
Bhavna : Koi baat nahi! Derr aaye durust aaye! Kaho! Kya karna hai hume?
Veer : Darasal! Shyaam jii se keh ke mene kuch kisaano ki maang kii hai.
Tej : Kisaan? Kis liye?
[Ekdum sahi direction me jaa rahe ho aap Master.]
Veer : Teju dii! Dada jii ne mujhe zameen dii hui hai. Uska istemaal toh karna hi tha. Woh zameen upjau hai. Waha kheti ho sakti hai. Isliye Shyaam jii se mene kisaano ko bhejne ke liye kaha hua hai.
Ragini : Toh tum ab kheti karoge Veer?
Veer : Bhabhi aisa hai ki, mera business food me hai abhi. Zara sochiye ki agar mere paas khud ki kheti ho, jaha se food truck me istemaal hone waali taaza sabziya mil sake. Aur toh aur mein unhe bazaar me supply karne lagu. Toh iss se kya hoga?
Veer Profit path ke pehle path ko achhi tarah se decode kar chuka tha. Usse pata tha kis disha me aage badhna hai aur kin logo ko aage leke badhna hai.
Uske prashn ka uttar Shweta ne diya jo neeche paalthi maare baithi hui thi,
Shweta : Betu bohut badhiya! Tumne ek efficient tareeqa khoja hai. Tum na sirf apna kharcha bachaoge balki ab aur zyada kama sakte ho. Iss se unn kisaano ko bhi ek kaam mil jayega. Unki aamdani hone lagegi jo ab tak nahi ho rahi thi. Aur toh aur tumhare customers ko jab fresh fruits, vegetables ka khaana milega toh business me badhhotri honi hi hai.
Ek business lady hone ke naate, Shweta pal bhar me hi Veer ka plan samajh gayi thi.
Veer : Jii! Yahi mera plan hai. Also, Varsha ko ped paudho ka bohut knowledge hai. Usse phuulo se banayi jaane waali sugandh aur paudho se banaayi jaane waali ayurvedic aushdhiyo ko banaana aata hai. Uss baare me bhi mene kuch soch ke rakha hai.
Ragini : Varsha? Kaun?
Bhumika : Hmm?
Veer ke sang jo aurte gayi thi Jaipur woh Parijaat ki aurto se waaqif thi. Par Bhumika, Ragini, Sonali aur Aabha nahi. Isliye ye naam unke liye naya tha.
Shweta : Tum sab unke baare me nahi jaanti. Rehne do!
Shweta na woh baat bataana theek na samjha. Ragini bas ek soch me doobi upar baithe Veer ko dekhti rahi jaise ek biwi dekhti hai jab uska pati koi anjaan mahila ka naam le.
Veer : Aur isliye- Mein ye saara kaam abhi 3 logo ko saupna chaahta hu.
Uske itna bolte hi sabhi aurte ek dusre ko dekhne lagi.
Veer (smiles) : Bhabhi!
Ragini : Huhhh!?
Veer : Aap, Teju dii aur Arohi dii!
Tej : Arohi??
Veer : Hmm! Arohi dii se abhi meri baat nahi hui hai par unhe shaamil karna chaahunga mein.
Tej : Toh mujhe kya karna hai?
Veer : Abhi mene bataya toh dii! Aap logo ko hi ye milke manage karna hoga. Kya aap sab karogi?
Ragini toh chaahti hi yahi thi. Hamesha se hi woh Veer ke kaam aana chaahti thi. Uske business me uska haath bataana chaahti thi.
Ragini (gehri saans lete hue) : Tum chinta mat karo Veer! Mein sab samajh gayi hu. Aur hum sab milke sab dekh lenge. Tumhe fiqr karne ki koi zaroorat nahi!
Veer (smiles) : Aapse yahi umeed thi mujhe!
Bhumika : V-Veer! Mujhe bhi tumse kuch kehna hai.
Veer ko dhyaan aaya ki Bhumika pichli subaah bhi yahi keh rahi thi.
Veer : Kahiye!
Bhumika : W-Woh-
Veer : Hmm!?
Bhumika : M-Mein- Mein tumhe hamari hotel dena chaahti hu.
Uske vaakya ne waha baithe sabhi ko hairat me daal diya.
Veer : Whaaaatttt??
Sabse zyaada jhatka Veer ko hi laga. Jis hotel ko varsho se maa beti ne milke badhaaya, aaj woh usse dena chaahti thi? Kyu?
Bhumika : H-Hmm! Mene bohut socha hai iss baare me. Aur mujhe ye sahi lagta hai. Agar hum sab ek parivaar ka hissa hai toh ye mera hotel, mera business nahi hona chahiye na? K-Kya ye kehna sahi nahi hoga ~ ‘Hamara Business’??
Bhumika ka masoom sa chehra jab Veer ne nazdeek se dekha, khaaskar uske gore gaalo par girti hui uski kaali zulfe toh Veer ke khud ke gaal halke laal ho chale.
‘She- She’s cute!’
[Ahem!]
Shweta : Hey Bhagwaan!
Shweta achanak khadi ho gayi.
Shweta : Ye mene pehle kyu nahi socha? Beta tumne 100 takke ki baat kahi hai. Jab hum sab saath saath hai toh ye mera tera kya? Veer! Bhumi sahi keh rahi hai.
Veer : Huh?
Shweta ka dil gad-gad ho utha. Uski beti ne itna behatreen sujhaav diya tha. Ab toh jese woh Veer ke qareeb aate hue khud ko mann me hi asaani se dekh paa rahi thi.
Veer : Par-
Shweta : Par var kuch nahi. Bilkul! Tum dono ka haq hai uspe. Jab bhumi meri bacchi hai toh tum bhi toh mere bete ho. Aur wese bhi mene toh woh hotel Pranjal ke haatho kho dii thi, Tumhi toh laaye the na usse. Toh wo toh wese hi tumhari ho gayi.
Tej dono ko iss qadar dekh vyakul ho gayi.
Tej : M-Mom!?
Wo Bhavna ko chinta me dekhi. Kya ye dono sauteli maa beti uske bhai ko chheen ke le jaane waali thi? Par Bhavna ne usse shaant rehne ka ishaara kiya.
Bhumika : Actually, Veer! H-Hum ye kar sakte hai ki- Tumhare food truck par ek label laga de.
Veer : Label?
Bhumika : Like- Owned by hotel Prestige. Iss se logo ko pata chalega ki food truck sheher ki ek badi hotel ka hissa hai. Saath hi hamari hotel ka bhi advertisement ho jayega.
Idea sunte hi Veer surprised reh gaya.
[Woah! She’s intelligent.]
Hotel Prestige Shweta aur Bhumika ki hotel ka naam tha. Agar truck par ye label chadh jaaye ki truck sheher ki jaani maani hotel prestige dwaara chalaya jaa raha hai toh zaahir hai iss se do kaam hone waale the. Hotel ka advertisement. Aur saath hi logo ko ye pata chalta ki food truck khaali food truck nahi, balki ek badi hotel ka hissa hai.
Ek teer se do shikaar.
Par itna hi nahi, Veer aur Bhumika ek dusre ke business me ab transparency rakh sakte the. Yaani woh ek dusre ka business dekh sakte the. Aur toh aur ghar par baithi Shweta bhi unse jud sakti thi. Sujhaav bohut hi zyada zabardast tha.
Shweta : Excellent idea meri bacchi! Bilkul! Hum yahi karenge!
Veer bas muskura ke reh gaya.
Aur issi ke saath Veer ne apni business planning ko apne ghar ki aurto ke upar saunp diya.
***
Kuch hi ghanto me shaam hone waali thi aur Ragini ki haalat kharab ho rakhi thi.
Jaanti thi woh ki ye kitna jokhim bada kaam tha, par ab uss se zara bhi bardaasht nahi ho raha tha. Veer ke kamre me uski safaayi ke bahaane woh darwaza andar se band kii hui thi aur idhar se udhar tehel rahi thi.
Jab achanak se darwaze par knock hui. Ragini ne khush hote hue darwaaza khola aur uske saamne Veer tha.
Veer : Aap jaanti ho ye kitna risky hai?
Ragini : Mujhse bardaasht nahi ho raha Veer! Take me now~
Veer ko uski collor se pakadte hue andar kheech usne darwaaza band kar diya.
Aur unn dono ke honth ek dusre se bhid gaye. Ragini apne labo se Veer ke labo ko chaba rahi thi. Woh itni khatarnaak kisser bann chuki thi ki Veer khud hairat me tha.
Iss se pehle Veer ne sirf Divya ko hi ek crazy kisser maana tha par Ragini ne sabhi aurto ko kissing ke maamle me ab pachhaad diya tha. Woh poora ka poora muh hi choom daalti thi. Uski kiss itni sloppy hoti thi ki thook aur laar se unn dono ke muh aksar sann jaaya karte the.
Aur ek aur ajeeb sa chaska chadha hua tha usse. Ya yu kahe ki ek fetish~
Ragini : Nnnn~ J-Jaldi do! Jaldi do na baby~
Apna muh khol, jeebh baahar nikaal woh kisi cheez ki maang karne lagi.
Veer (smiles) : Aap bohut dirty ho rahi ho aaj kal!
Ragini : Ummmm~ I want to be dirty Veer! I want to be dirty!! Lekin sirf tumhare liye! P-Pleaseeee~ De do naaaa~
Veer ke muh se jaise hi fir thook nikla woh seedha jaake Ragini ke muh me tapka aur palak jhapakte hi,
*Gulps*
Woh usse nigal gayi.
“Ahhhhhhhh~~”
Uske baad toh woh dono ek dusre par toot pade. Bistar par laiti Ragini usse baahe fela fela ke bulaayi,
Aur dono ke beech ek quick sex akhir ho hi gaya.
Woh dono nahi jaante the ki neeche maujood Suman peeth peeche unki madad kar rahi thi taaki dono kisi bhi tarah pakde na jaaye.
***
Jaane ka samay ho chuka tha. Sabhi udaas the, par sabse zyada Tej aur Ragini hi thi.
Bhavna uske nazdeek aayi,
Bhavna : Mere liye kuch kaam nahi bataaya?
Veer : Hai na aapke liye bhi kaam!
Bhavna : Kya?
Veer : Jab tak mein waapas na aa jau tab tak aap apni job ke liye kahi bhi baahar nahi jayengi.
Bhavna : P-Par?
Veer : Mene kaha na! Jab tak mein laut na aau aap kahi bhi baahar nahi jayengi.
Bhavna : Lekin kyu?
Veer : Bas meri baat maaniye.
Bhavna : Kya mujhe jaan ka khatra hai?
Veer maun raha. Aur uski chuppi ko Bhavna fauran hi samajh gayi.
Bhavna : Nahi jaungi! Ab khush?
Veer : Hmm!
Bhavna : Ye dahi shakkar kha lo! Shubh kaam ke liye jaa rahe ho toh isse khaa ke jao. Tumhara kaam safal hoga.
Maa ke haath se dahi shakkar kha ke Veer jaane ke liye hua toh Bhavna ne fir ek baar usse rok liya.
Veer : Ab kya hua?
Woh kuch na boli. Bas apni kalaayi par bandha usne ek kaala dhaaga utaara aur Veer ki kalaayi par baandh diya.
Veer : Ye kya hai?
Bhavna : Kuch nahi hai.
Veer : Arre? Bataiye na kya hai ye?
Bhavna : Kaha na kuch nahi hai! Jao ab!
Veer ne dhaage ko check kiya. Par woh ek sadharan dhaaga hi tha. Uski samajh me nahi aaya ki jab dhaaga mamuli tha toh uski maa baandh kyu rahi thi?
Kherr! Woh baari baari sabhi ke gale se laga. Tej uske gale se jab lagi toh usne sharmaate hue uske gaal bhi choom liye.
Tej :J-Jaldi aana! Okay?
Veer (smiles) : Hmm!
Toh wahi Bhumika sankoch ke chalte aage badhne ki himmat nahi jutaa paa rahi thi. Shweta, Bhavna ne bhi pyaar kiya usse.
Aur Veer ne jab apni baahe khud-ba-khud felaayi toh Bhumika dheere se aage badh uske gale se lag gayi.
Ravaangi kisi ko bhi nahi bhaati thi. Parantu, Veer ka jaana zaroori tha.
Unn sab ko antim baar tata bye-bye karte hue woh Ragini ke saath car me nikal gaya.
Uske jaate hi ghar agle hi pal soona soona sa ho gaya. Tej apna mood off liye andar ko jaane lagi. Toh Bhumika usse dekh boli,
Bhumika : H-Hum- Hum Veer ki help karne ke liye kuch decide kar lete hai?
Tej ne usse ek baar dekha aur chehra waapas se jhuka ke woh andar chali gayi. Bechaari Bhumika toh bas usse cheer up karne ki koshish kar rahi thi. Par shayad Tej ko ubharne me kuch samay lagne wala tha.
Baahar jo abhi bhi khadi hui thi woh thi Bhavna. Kaafi samay baad uske maathe par chinta ki lakeere chhaayi hui thi.
‘Akhir!? Jhooth bol ke jaane ki kya zaroorat pad gayi mere bacche?’
Woh apne mann me kahi. Uss raaste ko taakti rahi jaha se guzar ke Veer gaya hua tha.
6 baje ke aas paas ki flight thi. Kareeban Veer ko 30 ghante ka safar tay karna tha.
Flight par baithne se pehle Ragini ne usse bohot pyaar kiya. Bechaari ka bilkul mann nahi ho raha tha Veer se alag hone ka. Jaise tese Veer ne usse console kiya aur flight me baith ravaana ho gaya.
30 ghante ke safar ke baad woh finally Paris pohuch gaya.
Charles de gaulle airport par plane land kiya aur Veer plane se baahar aaya. Raat ke 12 ke qareeb samay ho chuka tha. Aur uske nazre kisi ki talaash me thi.
Airport par bhi naa maatr ki bheed thi. Dhundhte hi woh jaise hi thoda aage badha, usse woh shaksiyat dikhaayi degi jiske liye woh yaha tak itni dur aaya tha.
Uske saamne khubsoorti ki woh bala khadi hui thi.
Ava!!!
Ya yu kahe ki,
Natalia!!!
***
Ushant Island, France
Night ~ 12:36 AM
Iss taapu ke theek thodi dur par ek cruise samundar me thehra hua tha.
Woh behad vishaal tha. Lights se poora jagmag ho rakha tha. Jahaaj bada zaroor tha par log sirf ginti ke hi the. Sabhi ki aankho par ek decorative mask tha.
Mand mand music ki dhun pe, haath me red wine ka glaas liye woh sabhi jhoomne lage. Jab ek aadmi ne unka dhyaan kheencha,
“Ladies and gentleman!!”
Mic par uski awaaz sunn, sab uski orr dekhe. Usne ek suit pehna hua tha. Par aankho par uske bhi wahi decorative mask tha.
“Samay aa gaya hai ki hamaare pehle food ka lutf uthaaya jaaye.”
“Yayyyyyyy~” Waha maujood sabhi cheer karne lage.
Shayad koi khaane ki dish thi? Kuch behatreen sa bhojan? Woh insaan bhi jhoomte hue aage badha.
Aam taur par ye ek bade raees logo ki party prateet ho rahi thi. Par aage jo ghatit hone waala tha usse dekh ke accho se accho ki rooh kaanp uthati.
Woh aadmi gungunaate hue cruise ki ek khuli railing ke nazdeek aaya.
“Food! Food! Food! Food!” Sabhi firse shor karne lage.
Woh punaah aage badha. Aur jese hi woh railing ke chhorr par pohucha.
Chhorr se lage ek lakdi ka plank juda hua tha. Jiske upar,
Ek vyakti khada tha. Uske haath perr bandhe hue the. Aur muh parr kapda thusa tha. Aankho se aasu nirantar behte jaa rahe the.
Woh upar waale se duaa kar raha tha. Par upar waale ne ek na suni. Kyuki agle hi shan,
*Bammmm*
Usse peeche se ek zordaar laat padi aur woh hawa me uchhalte hue samundar me jaa gira. Log daudte hue railing ke nazdeek aaye aur nazaara dekhne lage. Kuch toh apna phone nikaal record karne lage.
Unhe mazaa aa raha tha. Iss fetish ke liye hi toh woh dherro kharch karte the aur samaaj se chhup ke apni dark desires ko poora karte the.
Paani me gira aadmi chhap chhap kar ke tadapne laga. Usse terrna nahi aata tha. Aur paani me hoti halchal mehsoos karte hi agle hi pal,
*Khaaaaaaaacccccchhhhhh*
“Oooooooooo~~~”
“Buuuuuuuuuuuuu~”
“Woooohooooooooo~”
Log taaliya bajaane lagi. Uss aadmi ko samundar me maujood shark ne do tukdo me kaat ke rakh diya tha.
Samudr ka paani lahu luhaan hua aur laal rang uski upari sateh par bichh gaya.
Jisne laat maari thi sabhi ne uske liye taali bajaayi aur apne coat ko adjust kar woh apne haath fela ke janta ke saamne jhuk gaya.
*Boooom* *Booooom*
*Swooooooosssshhh*
Uske jhukte hi peeche island se hawa me aatishbaazi hui aur aasmaan me alag alag rang bikhar gaye.
Paas khadi ek ladki uske qareeb aayi,
Ladki : Festival ki shuruaat kamaal ki hui hai. Kuch kehna chaahoge?
Aadmi ne bina kuch kahe uss ladki ko apni baaho me liya aur usse zorr se chooma.
Choomne ke baad usse side kar woh railing ke paas gaya aur ahista se bola,
“Rango ka mishran hai crimson.
Khoon ka rang hai crimson.
Mujhse kismat bhi haarti hai sweetie,
Kyuki mein hi hu Crimson!!”
Ladki (smiles) : Toh... Ab kya karna hai?
Crimson (smiles) : Kuch nahi! Mera shikaar… Aa chuka hai.
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Aaj ke liye itna hi guys.
Update normal size ka hai. 4.2k words. Crimson Festival start ho chuka hai. Daba ke likes thok ke jaane ka aur revos rakhne ka. Yaha se ab jo hoga woh bawaal hi hoga.
Dhanyavaad!
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Again as expected amazing update bro.Update - 134 ~ Crimson FestivalAb tak…
Agle hi pal Tamanna haatho me wo roll liye bhaagi aur apni car me baith gayi. Palak jhapakte car bhi waha se ravaana ho gayi.
‘What the fuck!!’
Veer yaha confused hi tha jab uske phone par ek message aaya aur phone vibrate hua,
*Buzzzz*
Message padhte hi Veer ke maathe par chinta ki lakeere chhaa gayi.
Message me likha tha~
“I need you! ASAP!”
Ab aage :
Harr baar ki tarah aaj subah bhi Veer ke ghar me kohraam macha hua tha. Ab toh jaise Veer ko bhi aadat lag gayi thi. Iss shorgul ki aur saath hi saath-
Apna bag pack karne ki.
Packing? Kis liye? Packing isliye kyuki bulaava jo aa chuka tha usse. Par harr baar ki tarah dil bhi tootne the.
“Kyu Veer? Ab kaha? Tum ye baar baar kyu bhala-!?”
Ragini ki udaasi bhari awaaz uske kaano me peeche se padi.
Woh hall me hi sabke saamne packing kar raha tha aur sabhi ussi par nazre gadaaye hue the. Ragini ko dekh aisa laga jaise bechari abhi ro degi. Uske chehre ke haav bhaav padhna behad hi asaan tha. Aur Bhavna wahi kar bhi rahi thi. Upar se neeche tak Ragini ki harqato ko wo parakh rahi thi.
Woh chehre par chinta aur bechaini, aankho me ek bebasi, aur yu uske jee ka machalna. Bhavna ki aankho se kuch bhi chooth kar nahi jaa raha tha.
Ragini jab jab Veer ke qareeb aati, Veer kisi patang ki tarah dheel khaa ke aur dur udd jaata. Ye toh jaise ab harr baar ka hi ho gaya tha. Parantu, ab Veer unn sab ko kaise samjhaata? System aur anya raazo ko woh baahar aane nahi de sakta tha. Woh apni jagah majboor tha. Unn sab ko surakshit rakhne ki zimmedaari bhi toh uske hi sarr thi.
Veer : Bhabhi! Mein jald aa jaunga! Aap chinta mat kariye.
Usne fatafat suitcase me apne kuch kapde aur zaroori samaan daalte hue kaha. Par peeche khadi Ragini ko uski harr baat aur bechain kar rahi thi.
Tej : Par? Par ye achanak se Paris kyu Veer? Ek minute! Kahi tum uss secret love waali lady se toh nahi milne jaa rahe na?
Veer : Hein???
Bhavna : Secret love waali lady?
Apne bete ki love life se juda sawaal sunn, Bhavna ka badan seedha ho gaya. Aur na sirf uska balki Ragini bhi bauhe sikod usse dekhne lagi.
Tej : Aur kaun? Wahi lady jisne tumhe ye itni mehngi gaadi gift kii hai!
Apni behna ki baat sunte hue Veer hassa,
Veer : Haha~ Aisa kuch bhi nahi hai. Woh waha Vegas me hai. Ya shayad Mumbai laut bhi aayi ho. Paris me mein kisi aur kaam se jaa raha hu.
Tej (frowns) : Kis kaam se?
Veer : Business ke!
Tej : Kaisa business?
Veer (shrugs) : Business Teju dii!
Tej : Kis se business karne jaa rahe ho waha?
Veer : Client hai woh dii! Badi company ka. Zaahir hai ki kisi ek insaan se toh business karunga nahi? Company ke sang hi sambhav hai na ye?
Tej : Toh aise achanak se kyu? Itni kya important meeting hai?
Veer : Kyuki unka schedule hota hai. Woh mere liye toh baithe hi nahi rahenge na?
Tej : Kis company se milne jaa rahe ho?
Veer (sighs) : Teju dii! Paris ke liye hume Visa kab nahi lagta?
Tej : Jab aap business ke liye jaa rahe- ahh!? Toh-!?
Veer muskuraaya aur usne apna phone Tej ke saamne kar screen par ek mesage dikhaaya.
Message me Veer ki flight ki ticket thi shaam ki. Mumbai se Paris. Business class. Agar business ke silsile me Paris jaana ho toh Visa ki zaroorat nahi padti thi. Aisa visitor kam se kam 90 dino tak waha theherne ke liye allowed tha.
Jab Tej ne message padha toh kahi na kahi ab usse Veer pe yakeen hona shuru ho gaya. Kyuki bina business ke kaam ke liye jaane par Visa lagta hi tha.
Aur Veer agar bina Visa ke jaa raha tha toh baat spasht thi. Woh business sambandhit kaam ke liye hi jaa raha tha.
Tej : T-Toh client kaun hai?
Veer : Mujhe kaise pata hoga dii? Company se woh kisi ko bhi milne ke liye bhej sakte hai.
Tej : Ohhh!
Bhavna : Kis vishay me business kar rahe ho?
Jab Bhavna ne ye sawaal pucha toh kuch derr ke liye Veer shaant reh gaya. Uski khamoshi dekh Tej ka shaq firse badhne laga.
Veer (smiles) : Food industry se related hi hai Maa~
Woh aur Bhavna ek dusre ko kuch shan tak dekhte rahe.
Bhavna : Bas?
Veer : Aur shayad kuch goods supply?
Bhavna : Samjhi!
Veer : Hmm!
Peeche khadi Shweta jo ab tak maun thi, woh kaise chup reh sakti thi? Sab baari baari Veer par haq jama ke uss se prashn par prashn puch rahe the. Uski privacy ki dhajjiya udaa rahe the. Yahi sahi waqt tha apna pyaar Veer ko dikhaane ka. Woh fauran aage aayi aur usne Veer ke haath ko thaama,
Shweta : P-Par Veer? Beta tum rukoge kaha? Aise akele jaa rahe ho? Itne bade desh me, itni badi city me akele kaise sab manage karoge? Tumhara khaana peena? M-Mein bhi chalti hu tumhare saath.
Aur usne apna daav khel diya. Jaha sab Veer ke muh se jankaari nikalwaane me lage hue the, wahi Shweta ne aisa kuch bhi karne ka prayaas nahi kiya. Woh jaise ye dikhaana chaah rahi thi ki Veer jaha jis kaam se jaana chaahe jaa sakta hai. Usse toh bas uske khaan-paan aur rehne ki fiqr hai.
Kahi na kahi ye kaam bhi kar gaya. Kyuki Veer ko asaani hui. Ab usse ek aur shaks ko nahi samjhaana pada. Kahi na kahi usse andar se accha bhi laga ki Shweta ko uski chinta thi.
Khaas baat ye thi ki bhale hi Shweta mauke ka fayda utha ke Veer ke qareeb aane ki koshish karti thi par uski chhahat sacchi thi. Uska lagaav aur prem koi dhong nahi tha.
Hamesha se hi uske dil me ek bete ke liye ek rikt sthaan hua karta tha. Jisse Veer ne ab apne naam se bhar diya tha. Ab toh woh uski aankho ka taara bann chuka tha. Aur Veer bhi uske pyaar ko samajhta tha. Jaanta tha ki Shweta ke sang ateet me kya guzri hai.
Toh wahi dur baithi Bhavna apni sautan ko apne bete se chipke ek alag sii muskaan liye dekh rahi thi.
Jaise hi Shweta ne Bhavna ko dekha,
Shweta : Huh!?
Usne apni pakad Veer ke haath par aur mazboot kar dii. Veer ki asli maa usse rehesyamayi muskaan liye ghoor rahi thi. Shweta bechari darr ke reh gayi. Woh abhi ek bacchi ki tarah mehsoos kar rahi thi jisse ye bhay tha ki kahi koi uska mann-pasand gudda chhina ke na bhaag jaaye.
Parantu, bagal me khadi Tej ko ye sab bilkul bhi nahi kusaa raha tha. Uska toh mann kar raha tha ki abhi Shweta ko kheech ke Veer se alag kar de. Lekin usne khud ko aisa karne se roka.
Bhavna ke sang aankh-michauli karte hue Shweta kabhi usse dekhti toh kabhi Veer ko,
Shweta : M-Mein chalti hu na betu! Mein tumhari madad karwa dungi waha. H-Haan? Okay?
Veer (smiles) : Sochne ke liye shukriya. But iski zaroorat nahi hai. Mein akele jaunga toh travel jaldi kar paunga waha. Aur jitna jaldi sab hoyega utni hi jaldi mein waapas bhi aa paunga.
Shweta (bechaini me) : P-Par-
Veer ne uska haath thaama,
Veer (smiles) : Jaldi aaunga na! Don’t worry!
Jab Veer ne uss se itne pyaar se kaha toh Shweta uski soorat me hi kahi kho gayi. Woh momm ki tarah pighal ke reh gayi. Uska dil baag baag ho utha. Jaise maano uski mehnat safal ho gayi ho. Veer ke muh se apne liye pyaar bhare shabd sunn ke hi woh sab kuch bhool gayi.
Shweta : O-Okay~
‘Phew! Inhe manaana utna kathin nahi tha.’ Veer ne ek raahat ki saas lii.
[Well! Abhi aur bhi logo ko manaana hai aapko.]
Ragini : Toh mein chali jaati hu na. Mein tumhe slow down nahi karungi Veer.
Veer : Nahi Bhabhi! Mene abhi toh kaha. Waha mujhe travel karna padega. Aapke liye convenient nahi rahega. Aur wese bhi, ab meri flight aaj ki book ho chuki hai. Ab flights milti bhi hai ya nahi kya pata.
Ragini : Tum tension mat lo, zaroor mil jayegi.
Iss se pehle ki woh aage badh mobile par tickets dekhti, Veer ne usse rok diya.
Veer (smiles) : Bhabhi~
Veer ke chehre par woh narm sii muskurahat dekh Ragini phir haar gayi. Apne nichle honth ko daato tale kutarte hue woh sarr jhuka ke khadi ho gayi. Harr baar yahi hota tha uske saath. Harr baar Veer uske saath aisa karta tha. Woh niraash thi. Gussa bhi.
Ragini ke haav bhaav padh Veer samajh gaya tha ki usse jaane se pehle apni bhabhi ko manaana behad zaroori tha.
Kherr! Bag packing samaapt hui. Aaj Bhumika aur Sonali dono hi kaam par nahi gayi. Kyuki Veer aaj kayi dino ke liye ghar se jaa raha tha, toh woh dono bhi thehri hui thi.
Aur samast parivaar Veer ke kamre me ikhatta tha. Bed par Veer, Tej, Bhumika, Aabha aur Sonali baithi hui thi. Toh wahi neeche chataayi par Ragini, Suman, Shweta aur Bhavna.
Veer : Mujhe aap sab se kuch baat karni hai. Ya yu samajh lijiye ki aap sabki madad chahiye.
Shweta : Kaisi madad betu?
Bhavna : Hmm?
Tej : Kaho Veer!
Veer ne ek gehri saans lii.
[Yes! Ye sahi samay hai Profit Path ko lay down karne ka Master. Jitni jaldi ye execute hoga, hum new profit path ko dekh payenge. Behtar hoga ki hume naya profit path waha Paris me hi mil jaaye. Toh waha ki business opportunities ko hum hathiya payenge Master.]
‘Mujhe firse wo path show karo Pari!’
[Right away Master!]
Aur Veer ke saamne punaah ek baar wahi path khul gaya.
‘Hmm! I see!’
Ragini : Kya baat hai Veer? Kaho na!
Veer : Ohhh! H-Haan! Mein keh raha tha ki kya aap sab meri madad mere business me karengi?
Aur sabse pehla response Bhavna ka hi tha.
Bhavna (smiles) : Mein soch hi rahi thi ki akhir kab tum hum se ye baatein saajha karoge. Akhir kab se isse apne zehen me dabaaye hue the?
Veer : Umm~ Woh-!
Bhavna : Koi baat nahi! Derr aaye durust aaye! Kaho! Kya karna hai hume?
Veer : Darasal! Shyaam jii se keh ke mene kuch kisaano ki maang kii hai.
Tej : Kisaan? Kis liye?
[Ekdum sahi direction me jaa rahe ho aap Master.]
Veer : Teju dii! Dada jii ne mujhe zameen dii hui hai. Uska istemaal toh karna hi tha. Woh zameen upjau hai. Waha kheti ho sakti hai. Isliye Shyaam jii se mene kisaano ko bhejne ke liye kaha hua hai.
Ragini : Toh tum ab kheti karoge Veer?
Veer : Bhabhi aisa hai ki, mera business food me hai abhi. Zara sochiye ki agar mere paas khud ki kheti ho, jaha se food truck me istemaal hone waali taaza sabziya mil sake. Aur toh aur mein unhe bazaar me supply karne lagu. Toh iss se kya hoga?
Veer Profit path ke pehle path ko achhi tarah se decode kar chuka tha. Usse pata tha kis disha me aage badhna hai aur kin logo ko aage leke badhna hai.
Uske prashn ka uttar Shweta ne diya jo neeche paalthi maare baithi hui thi,
Shweta : Betu bohut badhiya! Tumne ek efficient tareeqa khoja hai. Tum na sirf apna kharcha bachaoge balki ab aur zyada kama sakte ho. Iss se unn kisaano ko bhi ek kaam mil jayega. Unki aamdani hone lagegi jo ab tak nahi ho rahi thi. Aur toh aur tumhare customers ko jab fresh fruits, vegetables ka khaana milega toh business me badhhotri honi hi hai.
Ek business lady hone ke naate, Shweta pal bhar me hi Veer ka plan samajh gayi thi.
Veer : Jii! Yahi mera plan hai. Also, Varsha ko ped paudho ka bohut knowledge hai. Usse phuulo se banayi jaane waali sugandh aur paudho se banaayi jaane waali ayurvedic aushdhiyo ko banaana aata hai. Uss baare me bhi mene kuch soch ke rakha hai.
Ragini : Varsha? Kaun?
Bhumika : Hmm?
Veer ke sang jo aurte gayi thi Jaipur woh Parijaat ki aurto se waaqif thi. Par Bhumika, Ragini, Sonali aur Aabha nahi. Isliye ye naam unke liye naya tha.
Shweta : Tum sab unke baare me nahi jaanti. Rehne do!
Shweta na woh baat bataana theek na samjha. Ragini bas ek soch me doobi upar baithe Veer ko dekhti rahi jaise ek biwi dekhti hai jab uska pati koi anjaan mahila ka naam le.
Veer : Aur isliye- Mein ye saara kaam abhi 3 logo ko saupna chaahta hu.
Uske itna bolte hi sabhi aurte ek dusre ko dekhne lagi.
Veer (smiles) : Bhabhi!
Ragini : Huhhh!?
Veer : Aap, Teju dii aur Arohi dii!
Tej : Arohi??
Veer : Hmm! Arohi dii se abhi meri baat nahi hui hai par unhe shaamil karna chaahunga mein.
Tej : Toh mujhe kya karna hai?
Veer : Abhi mene bataya toh dii! Aap logo ko hi ye milke manage karna hoga. Kya aap sab karogi?
Ragini toh chaahti hi yahi thi. Hamesha se hi woh Veer ke kaam aana chaahti thi. Uske business me uska haath bataana chaahti thi.
Ragini (gehri saans lete hue) : Tum chinta mat karo Veer! Mein sab samajh gayi hu. Aur hum sab milke sab dekh lenge. Tumhe fiqr karne ki koi zaroorat nahi!
Veer (smiles) : Aapse yahi umeed thi mujhe!
Bhumika : V-Veer! Mujhe bhi tumse kuch kehna hai.
Veer ko dhyaan aaya ki Bhumika pichli subaah bhi yahi keh rahi thi.
Veer : Kahiye!
Bhumika : W-Woh-
Veer : Hmm!?
Bhumika : M-Mein- Mein tumhe hamari hotel dena chaahti hu.
Uske vaakya ne waha baithe sabhi ko hairat me daal diya.
Veer : Whaaaatttt??
Sabse zyaada jhatka Veer ko hi laga. Jis hotel ko varsho se maa beti ne milke badhaaya, aaj woh usse dena chaahti thi? Kyu?
Bhumika : H-Hmm! Mene bohut socha hai iss baare me. Aur mujhe ye sahi lagta hai. Agar hum sab ek parivaar ka hissa hai toh ye mera hotel, mera business nahi hona chahiye na? K-Kya ye kehna sahi nahi hoga ~ ‘Hamara Business’??
Bhumika ka masoom sa chehra jab Veer ne nazdeek se dekha, khaaskar uske gore gaalo par girti hui uski kaali zulfe toh Veer ke khud ke gaal halke laal ho chale.
‘She- She’s cute!’
[Ahem!]
Shweta : Hey Bhagwaan!
Shweta achanak khadi ho gayi.
Shweta : Ye mene pehle kyu nahi socha? Beta tumne 100 takke ki baat kahi hai. Jab hum sab saath saath hai toh ye mera tera kya? Veer! Bhumi sahi keh rahi hai.
Veer : Huh?
Shweta ka dil gad-gad ho utha. Uski beti ne itna behatreen sujhaav diya tha. Ab toh jese woh Veer ke qareeb aate hue khud ko mann me hi asaani se dekh paa rahi thi.
Veer : Par-
Shweta : Par var kuch nahi. Bilkul! Tum dono ka haq hai uspe. Jab bhumi meri bacchi hai toh tum bhi toh mere bete ho. Aur wese bhi mene toh woh hotel Pranjal ke haatho kho dii thi, Tumhi toh laaye the na usse. Toh wo toh wese hi tumhari ho gayi.
Tej dono ko iss qadar dekh vyakul ho gayi.
Tej : M-Mom!?
Wo Bhavna ko chinta me dekhi. Kya ye dono sauteli maa beti uske bhai ko chheen ke le jaane waali thi? Par Bhavna ne usse shaant rehne ka ishaara kiya.
Bhumika : Actually, Veer! H-Hum ye kar sakte hai ki- Tumhare food truck par ek label laga de.
Veer : Label?
Bhumika : Like- Owned by hotel Prestige. Iss se logo ko pata chalega ki food truck sheher ki ek badi hotel ka hissa hai. Saath hi hamari hotel ka bhi advertisement ho jayega.
Idea sunte hi Veer surprised reh gaya.
[Woah! She’s intelligent.]
Hotel Prestige Shweta aur Bhumika ki hotel ka naam tha. Agar truck par ye label chadh jaaye ki truck sheher ki jaani maani hotel prestige dwaara chalaya jaa raha hai toh zaahir hai iss se do kaam hone waale the. Hotel ka advertisement. Aur saath hi logo ko ye pata chalta ki food truck khaali food truck nahi, balki ek badi hotel ka hissa hai.
Ek teer se do shikaar.
Par itna hi nahi, Veer aur Bhumika ek dusre ke business me ab transparency rakh sakte the. Yaani woh ek dusre ka business dekh sakte the. Aur toh aur ghar par baithi Shweta bhi unse jud sakti thi. Sujhaav bohut hi zyada zabardast tha.
Shweta : Excellent idea meri bacchi! Bilkul! Hum yahi karenge!
Veer bas muskura ke reh gaya.
Aur issi ke saath Veer ne apni business planning ko apne ghar ki aurto ke upar saunp diya.
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Kuch hi ghanto me shaam hone waali thi aur Ragini ki haalat kharab ho rakhi thi.
Jaanti thi woh ki ye kitna jokhim bada kaam tha, par ab uss se zara bhi bardaasht nahi ho raha tha. Veer ke kamre me uski safaayi ke bahaane woh darwaza andar se band kii hui thi aur idhar se udhar tehel rahi thi.
Jab achanak se darwaze par knock hui. Ragini ne khush hote hue darwaaza khola aur uske saamne Veer tha.
Veer : Aap jaanti ho ye kitna risky hai?
Ragini : Mujhse bardaasht nahi ho raha Veer! Take me now~
Veer ko uski collor se pakadte hue andar kheech usne darwaaza band kar diya.
Aur unn dono ke honth ek dusre se bhid gaye. Ragini apne labo se Veer ke labo ko chaba rahi thi. Woh itni khatarnaak kisser bann chuki thi ki Veer khud hairat me tha.
Iss se pehle Veer ne sirf Divya ko hi ek crazy kisser maana tha par Ragini ne sabhi aurto ko kissing ke maamle me ab pachhaad diya tha. Woh poora ka poora muh hi choom daalti thi. Uski kiss itni sloppy hoti thi ki thook aur laar se unn dono ke muh aksar sann jaaya karte the.
Aur ek aur ajeeb sa chaska chadha hua tha usse. Ya yu kahe ki ek fetish~
Ragini : Nnnn~ J-Jaldi do! Jaldi do na baby~
Apna muh khol, jeebh baahar nikaal woh kisi cheez ki maang karne lagi.
Veer (smiles) : Aap bohut dirty ho rahi ho aaj kal!
Ragini : Ummmm~ I want to be dirty Veer! I want to be dirty!! Lekin sirf tumhare liye! P-Pleaseeee~ De do naaaa~
Veer ke muh se jaise hi fir thook nikla woh seedha jaake Ragini ke muh me tapka aur palak jhapakte hi,
*Gulps*
Woh usse nigal gayi.
“Ahhhhhhhh~~”
Uske baad toh woh dono ek dusre par toot pade. Bistar par laiti Ragini usse baahe fela fela ke bulaayi,
Aur dono ke beech ek quick sex akhir ho hi gaya.
Woh dono nahi jaante the ki neeche maujood Suman peeth peeche unki madad kar rahi thi taaki dono kisi bhi tarah pakde na jaaye.
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Jaane ka samay ho chuka tha. Sabhi udaas the, par sabse zyada Tej aur Ragini hi thi.
Bhavna uske nazdeek aayi,
Bhavna : Mere liye kuch kaam nahi bataaya?
Veer : Hai na aapke liye bhi kaam!
Bhavna : Kya?
Veer : Jab tak mein waapas na aa jau tab tak aap apni job ke liye kahi bhi baahar nahi jayengi.
Bhavna : P-Par?
Veer : Mene kaha na! Jab tak mein laut na aau aap kahi bhi baahar nahi jayengi.
Bhavna : Lekin kyu?
Veer : Bas meri baat maaniye.
Bhavna : Kya mujhe jaan ka khatra hai?
Veer maun raha. Aur uski chuppi ko Bhavna fauran hi samajh gayi.
Bhavna : Nahi jaungi! Ab khush?
Veer : Hmm!
Bhavna : Ye dahi shakkar kha lo! Shubh kaam ke liye jaa rahe ho toh isse khaa ke jao. Tumhara kaam safal hoga.
Maa ke haath se dahi shakkar kha ke Veer jaane ke liye hua toh Bhavna ne fir ek baar usse rok liya.
Veer : Ab kya hua?
Woh kuch na boli. Bas apni kalaayi par bandha usne ek kaala dhaaga utaara aur Veer ki kalaayi par baandh diya.
Veer : Ye kya hai?
Bhavna : Kuch nahi hai.
Veer : Arre? Bataiye na kya hai ye?
Bhavna : Kaha na kuch nahi hai! Jao ab!
Veer ne dhaage ko check kiya. Par woh ek sadharan dhaaga hi tha. Uski samajh me nahi aaya ki jab dhaaga mamuli tha toh uski maa baandh kyu rahi thi?
Kherr! Woh baari baari sabhi ke gale se laga. Tej uske gale se jab lagi toh usne sharmaate hue uske gaal bhi choom liye.
Tej :J-Jaldi aana! Okay?
Veer (smiles) : Hmm!
Toh wahi Bhumika sankoch ke chalte aage badhne ki himmat nahi jutaa paa rahi thi. Shweta, Bhavna ne bhi pyaar kiya usse.
Aur Veer ne jab apni baahe khud-ba-khud felaayi toh Bhumika dheere se aage badh uske gale se lag gayi.
Ravaangi kisi ko bhi nahi bhaati thi. Parantu, Veer ka jaana zaroori tha.
Unn sab ko antim baar tata bye-bye karte hue woh Ragini ke saath car me nikal gaya.
Uske jaate hi ghar agle hi pal soona soona sa ho gaya. Tej apna mood off liye andar ko jaane lagi. Toh Bhumika usse dekh boli,
Bhumika : H-Hum- Hum Veer ki help karne ke liye kuch decide kar lete hai?
Tej ne usse ek baar dekha aur chehra waapas se jhuka ke woh andar chali gayi. Bechaari Bhumika toh bas usse cheer up karne ki koshish kar rahi thi. Par shayad Tej ko ubharne me kuch samay lagne wala tha.
Baahar jo abhi bhi khadi hui thi woh thi Bhavna. Kaafi samay baad uske maathe par chinta ki lakeere chhaayi hui thi.
‘Akhir!? Jhooth bol ke jaane ki kya zaroorat pad gayi mere bacche?’
Woh apne mann me kahi. Uss raaste ko taakti rahi jaha se guzar ke Veer gaya hua tha.
6 baje ke aas paas ki flight thi. Kareeban Veer ko 30 ghante ka safar tay karna tha.
Flight par baithne se pehle Ragini ne usse bohot pyaar kiya. Bechaari ka bilkul mann nahi ho raha tha Veer se alag hone ka. Jaise tese Veer ne usse console kiya aur flight me baith ravaana ho gaya.
30 ghante ke safar ke baad woh finally Paris pohuch gaya.
Charles de gaulle airport par plane land kiya aur Veer plane se baahar aaya. Raat ke 12 ke qareeb samay ho chuka tha. Aur uske nazre kisi ki talaash me thi.
Airport par bhi naa maatr ki bheed thi. Dhundhte hi woh jaise hi thoda aage badha, usse woh shaksiyat dikhaayi degi jiske liye woh yaha tak itni dur aaya tha.
Uske saamne khubsoorti ki woh bala khadi hui thi.
Ava!!!
Ya yu kahe ki,
Natalia!!!
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Ushant Island, France
Night ~ 12:36 AM
Iss taapu ke theek thodi dur par ek cruise samundar me thehra hua tha.
Woh behad vishaal tha. Lights se poora jagmag ho rakha tha. Jahaaj bada zaroor tha par log sirf ginti ke hi the. Sabhi ki aankho par ek decorative mask tha.
Mand mand music ki dhun pe, haath me red wine ka glaas liye woh sabhi jhoomne lage. Jab ek aadmi ne unka dhyaan kheencha,
“Ladies and gentleman!!”
Mic par uski awaaz sunn, sab uski orr dekhe. Usne ek suit pehna hua tha. Par aankho par uske bhi wahi decorative mask tha.
“Samay aa gaya hai ki hamaare pehle food ka lutf uthaaya jaaye.”
“Yayyyyyyy~” Waha maujood sabhi cheer karne lage.
Shayad koi khaane ki dish thi? Kuch behatreen sa bhojan? Woh insaan bhi jhoomte hue aage badha.
Aam taur par ye ek bade raees logo ki party prateet ho rahi thi. Par aage jo ghatit hone waala tha usse dekh ke accho se accho ki rooh kaanp uthati.
Woh aadmi gungunaate hue cruise ki ek khuli railing ke nazdeek aaya.
“Food! Food! Food! Food!” Sabhi firse shor karne lage.
Woh punaah aage badha. Aur jese hi woh railing ke chhorr par pohucha.
Chhorr se lage ek lakdi ka plank juda hua tha. Jiske upar,
Ek vyakti khada tha. Uske haath perr bandhe hue the. Aur muh parr kapda thusa tha. Aankho se aasu nirantar behte jaa rahe the.
Woh upar waale se duaa kar raha tha. Par upar waale ne ek na suni. Kyuki agle hi shan,
*Bammmm*
Usse peeche se ek zordaar laat padi aur woh hawa me uchhalte hue samundar me jaa gira. Log daudte hue railing ke nazdeek aaye aur nazaara dekhne lage. Kuch toh apna phone nikaal record karne lage.
Unhe mazaa aa raha tha. Iss fetish ke liye hi toh woh dherro kharch karte the aur samaaj se chhup ke apni dark desires ko poora karte the.
Paani me gira aadmi chhap chhap kar ke tadapne laga. Usse terrna nahi aata tha. Aur paani me hoti halchal mehsoos karte hi agle hi pal,
*Khaaaaaaaacccccchhhhhh*
“Oooooooooo~~~”
“Buuuuuuuuuuuuu~”
“Woooohooooooooo~”
Log taaliya bajaane lagi. Uss aadmi ko samundar me maujood shark ne do tukdo me kaat ke rakh diya tha.
Samudr ka paani lahu luhaan hua aur laal rang uski upari sateh par bichh gaya.
Jisne laat maari thi sabhi ne uske liye taali bajaayi aur apne coat ko adjust kar woh apne haath fela ke janta ke saamne jhuk gaya.
*Boooom* *Booooom*
*Swooooooosssshhh*
Uske jhukte hi peeche island se hawa me aatishbaazi hui aur aasmaan me alag alag rang bikhar gaye.
Paas khadi ek ladki uske qareeb aayi,
Ladki : Festival ki shuruaat kamaal ki hui hai. Kuch kehna chaahoge?
Aadmi ne bina kuch kahe uss ladki ko apni baaho me liya aur usse zorr se chooma.
Choomne ke baad usse side kar woh railing ke paas gaya aur ahista se bola,
“Rango ka mishran hai crimson.
Khoon ka rang hai crimson.
Mujhse kismat bhi haarti hai sweetie,
Kyuki mein hi hu Crimson!!”
Ladki (smiles) : Toh... Ab kya karna hai?
Crimson (smiles) : Kuch nahi! Mera shikaar… Aa chuka hai.
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Aaj ke liye itna hi guys.
Update normal size ka hai. 4.2k words. Crimson Festival start ho chuka hai. Daba ke likes thok ke jaane ka aur revos rakhne ka. Yaha se ab jo hoga woh bawaal hi hoga.
Dhanyavaad!
To finally veer nikal gaya he apni journey par paris crimson festival shuru hogya he,
But sawaal buhat sare he veer ava (Natalia) ke pass kyu gaya he kiya veer ko jo msg aya tha wo Natalia ka hi tha,
Kiya Natalia ka crimson festival se koi connection he,
Bhavana ko veer pe shaq he ke wo business ke liye nhi gaya he,
Veer ne profit path ka use karna bhi shuru kar diya he,
Ragini ke reaction bhi bhavana note kar rahi he dekha jaye to bhavana khud mysteries se bhari hui he usko smjhna bhi mushkil he,
Bhumika ne veer ko 1 bhariya idea diya he hotel ka maybe is se veer ko apne business me help mile gi,
Maybe next update me pata chale ke veer Natalia ke pass kiya kar raha he aur main villain ke bare me bhi hume aage jake kuch pata chale,
Zabardast update tha bhai dil khush hogya aur ab aap wapis flow me wapis bhi aage ho update dene me,
Lot's of love for your writing skills bro.
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To kyaa system wala Banda yahi hai or Ava ne veer ko kyun bulaya hai fir se kuch questions rah gyeUpdate - 134 ~ Crimson FestivalAb tak…
Agle hi pal Tamanna haatho me wo roll liye bhaagi aur apni car me baith gayi. Palak jhapakte car bhi waha se ravaana ho gayi.
‘What the fuck!!’
Veer yaha confused hi tha jab uske phone par ek message aaya aur phone vibrate hua,
*Buzzzz*
Message padhte hi Veer ke maathe par chinta ki lakeere chhaa gayi.
Message me likha tha~
“I need you! ASAP!”
Ab aage :
Harr baar ki tarah aaj subah bhi Veer ke ghar me kohraam macha hua tha. Ab toh jaise Veer ko bhi aadat lag gayi thi. Iss shorgul ki aur saath hi saath-
Apna bag pack karne ki.
Packing? Kis liye? Packing isliye kyuki bulaava jo aa chuka tha usse. Par harr baar ki tarah dil bhi tootne the.
“Kyu Veer? Ab kaha? Tum ye baar baar kyu bhala-!?”
Ragini ki udaasi bhari awaaz uske kaano me peeche se padi.
Woh hall me hi sabke saamne packing kar raha tha aur sabhi ussi par nazre gadaaye hue the. Ragini ko dekh aisa laga jaise bechari abhi ro degi. Uske chehre ke haav bhaav padhna behad hi asaan tha. Aur Bhavna wahi kar bhi rahi thi. Upar se neeche tak Ragini ki harqato ko wo parakh rahi thi.
Woh chehre par chinta aur bechaini, aankho me ek bebasi, aur yu uske jee ka machalna. Bhavna ki aankho se kuch bhi chooth kar nahi jaa raha tha.
Ragini jab jab Veer ke qareeb aati, Veer kisi patang ki tarah dheel khaa ke aur dur udd jaata. Ye toh jaise ab harr baar ka hi ho gaya tha. Parantu, ab Veer unn sab ko kaise samjhaata? System aur anya raazo ko woh baahar aane nahi de sakta tha. Woh apni jagah majboor tha. Unn sab ko surakshit rakhne ki zimmedaari bhi toh uske hi sarr thi.
Veer : Bhabhi! Mein jald aa jaunga! Aap chinta mat kariye.
Usne fatafat suitcase me apne kuch kapde aur zaroori samaan daalte hue kaha. Par peeche khadi Ragini ko uski harr baat aur bechain kar rahi thi.
Tej : Par? Par ye achanak se Paris kyu Veer? Ek minute! Kahi tum uss secret love waali lady se toh nahi milne jaa rahe na?
Veer : Hein???
Bhavna : Secret love waali lady?
Apne bete ki love life se juda sawaal sunn, Bhavna ka badan seedha ho gaya. Aur na sirf uska balki Ragini bhi bauhe sikod usse dekhne lagi.
Tej : Aur kaun? Wahi lady jisne tumhe ye itni mehngi gaadi gift kii hai!
Apni behna ki baat sunte hue Veer hassa,
Veer : Haha~ Aisa kuch bhi nahi hai. Woh waha Vegas me hai. Ya shayad Mumbai laut bhi aayi ho. Paris me mein kisi aur kaam se jaa raha hu.
Tej (frowns) : Kis kaam se?
Veer : Business ke!
Tej : Kaisa business?
Veer (shrugs) : Business Teju dii!
Tej : Kis se business karne jaa rahe ho waha?
Veer : Client hai woh dii! Badi company ka. Zaahir hai ki kisi ek insaan se toh business karunga nahi? Company ke sang hi sambhav hai na ye?
Tej : Toh aise achanak se kyu? Itni kya important meeting hai?
Veer : Kyuki unka schedule hota hai. Woh mere liye toh baithe hi nahi rahenge na?
Tej : Kis company se milne jaa rahe ho?
Veer (sighs) : Teju dii! Paris ke liye hume Visa kab nahi lagta?
Tej : Jab aap business ke liye jaa rahe- ahh!? Toh-!?
Veer muskuraaya aur usne apna phone Tej ke saamne kar screen par ek mesage dikhaaya.
Message me Veer ki flight ki ticket thi shaam ki. Mumbai se Paris. Business class. Agar business ke silsile me Paris jaana ho toh Visa ki zaroorat nahi padti thi. Aisa visitor kam se kam 90 dino tak waha theherne ke liye allowed tha.
Jab Tej ne message padha toh kahi na kahi ab usse Veer pe yakeen hona shuru ho gaya. Kyuki bina business ke kaam ke liye jaane par Visa lagta hi tha.
Aur Veer agar bina Visa ke jaa raha tha toh baat spasht thi. Woh business sambandhit kaam ke liye hi jaa raha tha.
Tej : T-Toh client kaun hai?
Veer : Mujhe kaise pata hoga dii? Company se woh kisi ko bhi milne ke liye bhej sakte hai.
Tej : Ohhh!
Bhavna : Kis vishay me business kar rahe ho?
Jab Bhavna ne ye sawaal pucha toh kuch derr ke liye Veer shaant reh gaya. Uski khamoshi dekh Tej ka shaq firse badhne laga.
Veer (smiles) : Food industry se related hi hai Maa~
Woh aur Bhavna ek dusre ko kuch shan tak dekhte rahe.
Bhavna : Bas?
Veer : Aur shayad kuch goods supply?
Bhavna : Samjhi!
Veer : Hmm!
Peeche khadi Shweta jo ab tak maun thi, woh kaise chup reh sakti thi? Sab baari baari Veer par haq jama ke uss se prashn par prashn puch rahe the. Uski privacy ki dhajjiya udaa rahe the. Yahi sahi waqt tha apna pyaar Veer ko dikhaane ka. Woh fauran aage aayi aur usne Veer ke haath ko thaama,
Shweta : P-Par Veer? Beta tum rukoge kaha? Aise akele jaa rahe ho? Itne bade desh me, itni badi city me akele kaise sab manage karoge? Tumhara khaana peena? M-Mein bhi chalti hu tumhare saath.
Aur usne apna daav khel diya. Jaha sab Veer ke muh se jankaari nikalwaane me lage hue the, wahi Shweta ne aisa kuch bhi karne ka prayaas nahi kiya. Woh jaise ye dikhaana chaah rahi thi ki Veer jaha jis kaam se jaana chaahe jaa sakta hai. Usse toh bas uske khaan-paan aur rehne ki fiqr hai.
Kahi na kahi ye kaam bhi kar gaya. Kyuki Veer ko asaani hui. Ab usse ek aur shaks ko nahi samjhaana pada. Kahi na kahi usse andar se accha bhi laga ki Shweta ko uski chinta thi.
Khaas baat ye thi ki bhale hi Shweta mauke ka fayda utha ke Veer ke qareeb aane ki koshish karti thi par uski chhahat sacchi thi. Uska lagaav aur prem koi dhong nahi tha.
Hamesha se hi uske dil me ek bete ke liye ek rikt sthaan hua karta tha. Jisse Veer ne ab apne naam se bhar diya tha. Ab toh woh uski aankho ka taara bann chuka tha. Aur Veer bhi uske pyaar ko samajhta tha. Jaanta tha ki Shweta ke sang ateet me kya guzri hai.
Toh wahi dur baithi Bhavna apni sautan ko apne bete se chipke ek alag sii muskaan liye dekh rahi thi.
Jaise hi Shweta ne Bhavna ko dekha,
Shweta : Huh!?
Usne apni pakad Veer ke haath par aur mazboot kar dii. Veer ki asli maa usse rehesyamayi muskaan liye ghoor rahi thi. Shweta bechari darr ke reh gayi. Woh abhi ek bacchi ki tarah mehsoos kar rahi thi jisse ye bhay tha ki kahi koi uska mann-pasand gudda chhina ke na bhaag jaaye.
Parantu, bagal me khadi Tej ko ye sab bilkul bhi nahi kusaa raha tha. Uska toh mann kar raha tha ki abhi Shweta ko kheech ke Veer se alag kar de. Lekin usne khud ko aisa karne se roka.
Bhavna ke sang aankh-michauli karte hue Shweta kabhi usse dekhti toh kabhi Veer ko,
Shweta : M-Mein chalti hu na betu! Mein tumhari madad karwa dungi waha. H-Haan? Okay?
Veer (smiles) : Sochne ke liye shukriya. But iski zaroorat nahi hai. Mein akele jaunga toh travel jaldi kar paunga waha. Aur jitna jaldi sab hoyega utni hi jaldi mein waapas bhi aa paunga.
Shweta (bechaini me) : P-Par-
Veer ne uska haath thaama,
Veer (smiles) : Jaldi aaunga na! Don’t worry!
Jab Veer ne uss se itne pyaar se kaha toh Shweta uski soorat me hi kahi kho gayi. Woh momm ki tarah pighal ke reh gayi. Uska dil baag baag ho utha. Jaise maano uski mehnat safal ho gayi ho. Veer ke muh se apne liye pyaar bhare shabd sunn ke hi woh sab kuch bhool gayi.
Shweta : O-Okay~
‘Phew! Inhe manaana utna kathin nahi tha.’ Veer ne ek raahat ki saas lii.
[Well! Abhi aur bhi logo ko manaana hai aapko.]
Ragini : Toh mein chali jaati hu na. Mein tumhe slow down nahi karungi Veer.
Veer : Nahi Bhabhi! Mene abhi toh kaha. Waha mujhe travel karna padega. Aapke liye convenient nahi rahega. Aur wese bhi, ab meri flight aaj ki book ho chuki hai. Ab flights milti bhi hai ya nahi kya pata.
Ragini : Tum tension mat lo, zaroor mil jayegi.
Iss se pehle ki woh aage badh mobile par tickets dekhti, Veer ne usse rok diya.
Veer (smiles) : Bhabhi~
Veer ke chehre par woh narm sii muskurahat dekh Ragini phir haar gayi. Apne nichle honth ko daato tale kutarte hue woh sarr jhuka ke khadi ho gayi. Harr baar yahi hota tha uske saath. Harr baar Veer uske saath aisa karta tha. Woh niraash thi. Gussa bhi.
Ragini ke haav bhaav padh Veer samajh gaya tha ki usse jaane se pehle apni bhabhi ko manaana behad zaroori tha.
Kherr! Bag packing samaapt hui. Aaj Bhumika aur Sonali dono hi kaam par nahi gayi. Kyuki Veer aaj kayi dino ke liye ghar se jaa raha tha, toh woh dono bhi thehri hui thi.
Aur samast parivaar Veer ke kamre me ikhatta tha. Bed par Veer, Tej, Bhumika, Aabha aur Sonali baithi hui thi. Toh wahi neeche chataayi par Ragini, Suman, Shweta aur Bhavna.
Veer : Mujhe aap sab se kuch baat karni hai. Ya yu samajh lijiye ki aap sabki madad chahiye.
Shweta : Kaisi madad betu?
Bhavna : Hmm?
Tej : Kaho Veer!
Veer ne ek gehri saans lii.
[Yes! Ye sahi samay hai Profit Path ko lay down karne ka Master. Jitni jaldi ye execute hoga, hum new profit path ko dekh payenge. Behtar hoga ki hume naya profit path waha Paris me hi mil jaaye. Toh waha ki business opportunities ko hum hathiya payenge Master.]
‘Mujhe firse wo path show karo Pari!’
[Right away Master!]
Aur Veer ke saamne punaah ek baar wahi path khul gaya.
‘Hmm! I see!’
Ragini : Kya baat hai Veer? Kaho na!
Veer : Ohhh! H-Haan! Mein keh raha tha ki kya aap sab meri madad mere business me karengi?
Aur sabse pehla response Bhavna ka hi tha.
Bhavna (smiles) : Mein soch hi rahi thi ki akhir kab tum hum se ye baatein saajha karoge. Akhir kab se isse apne zehen me dabaaye hue the?
Veer : Umm~ Woh-!
Bhavna : Koi baat nahi! Derr aaye durust aaye! Kaho! Kya karna hai hume?
Veer : Darasal! Shyaam jii se keh ke mene kuch kisaano ki maang kii hai.
Tej : Kisaan? Kis liye?
[Ekdum sahi direction me jaa rahe ho aap Master.]
Veer : Teju dii! Dada jii ne mujhe zameen dii hui hai. Uska istemaal toh karna hi tha. Woh zameen upjau hai. Waha kheti ho sakti hai. Isliye Shyaam jii se mene kisaano ko bhejne ke liye kaha hua hai.
Ragini : Toh tum ab kheti karoge Veer?
Veer : Bhabhi aisa hai ki, mera business food me hai abhi. Zara sochiye ki agar mere paas khud ki kheti ho, jaha se food truck me istemaal hone waali taaza sabziya mil sake. Aur toh aur mein unhe bazaar me supply karne lagu. Toh iss se kya hoga?
Veer Profit path ke pehle path ko achhi tarah se decode kar chuka tha. Usse pata tha kis disha me aage badhna hai aur kin logo ko aage leke badhna hai.
Uske prashn ka uttar Shweta ne diya jo neeche paalthi maare baithi hui thi,
Shweta : Betu bohut badhiya! Tumne ek efficient tareeqa khoja hai. Tum na sirf apna kharcha bachaoge balki ab aur zyada kama sakte ho. Iss se unn kisaano ko bhi ek kaam mil jayega. Unki aamdani hone lagegi jo ab tak nahi ho rahi thi. Aur toh aur tumhare customers ko jab fresh fruits, vegetables ka khaana milega toh business me badhhotri honi hi hai.
Ek business lady hone ke naate, Shweta pal bhar me hi Veer ka plan samajh gayi thi.
Veer : Jii! Yahi mera plan hai. Also, Varsha ko ped paudho ka bohut knowledge hai. Usse phuulo se banayi jaane waali sugandh aur paudho se banaayi jaane waali ayurvedic aushdhiyo ko banaana aata hai. Uss baare me bhi mene kuch soch ke rakha hai.
Ragini : Varsha? Kaun?
Bhumika : Hmm?
Veer ke sang jo aurte gayi thi Jaipur woh Parijaat ki aurto se waaqif thi. Par Bhumika, Ragini, Sonali aur Aabha nahi. Isliye ye naam unke liye naya tha.
Shweta : Tum sab unke baare me nahi jaanti. Rehne do!
Shweta na woh baat bataana theek na samjha. Ragini bas ek soch me doobi upar baithe Veer ko dekhti rahi jaise ek biwi dekhti hai jab uska pati koi anjaan mahila ka naam le.
Veer : Aur isliye- Mein ye saara kaam abhi 3 logo ko saupna chaahta hu.
Uske itna bolte hi sabhi aurte ek dusre ko dekhne lagi.
Veer (smiles) : Bhabhi!
Ragini : Huhhh!?
Veer : Aap, Teju dii aur Arohi dii!
Tej : Arohi??
Veer : Hmm! Arohi dii se abhi meri baat nahi hui hai par unhe shaamil karna chaahunga mein.
Tej : Toh mujhe kya karna hai?
Veer : Abhi mene bataya toh dii! Aap logo ko hi ye milke manage karna hoga. Kya aap sab karogi?
Ragini toh chaahti hi yahi thi. Hamesha se hi woh Veer ke kaam aana chaahti thi. Uske business me uska haath bataana chaahti thi.
Ragini (gehri saans lete hue) : Tum chinta mat karo Veer! Mein sab samajh gayi hu. Aur hum sab milke sab dekh lenge. Tumhe fiqr karne ki koi zaroorat nahi!
Veer (smiles) : Aapse yahi umeed thi mujhe!
Bhumika : V-Veer! Mujhe bhi tumse kuch kehna hai.
Veer ko dhyaan aaya ki Bhumika pichli subaah bhi yahi keh rahi thi.
Veer : Kahiye!
Bhumika : W-Woh-
Veer : Hmm!?
Bhumika : M-Mein- Mein tumhe hamari hotel dena chaahti hu.
Uske vaakya ne waha baithe sabhi ko hairat me daal diya.
Veer : Whaaaatttt??
Sabse zyaada jhatka Veer ko hi laga. Jis hotel ko varsho se maa beti ne milke badhaaya, aaj woh usse dena chaahti thi? Kyu?
Bhumika : H-Hmm! Mene bohut socha hai iss baare me. Aur mujhe ye sahi lagta hai. Agar hum sab ek parivaar ka hissa hai toh ye mera hotel, mera business nahi hona chahiye na? K-Kya ye kehna sahi nahi hoga ~ ‘Hamara Business’??
Bhumika ka masoom sa chehra jab Veer ne nazdeek se dekha, khaaskar uske gore gaalo par girti hui uski kaali zulfe toh Veer ke khud ke gaal halke laal ho chale.
‘She- She’s cute!’
[Ahem!]
Shweta : Hey Bhagwaan!
Shweta achanak khadi ho gayi.
Shweta : Ye mene pehle kyu nahi socha? Beta tumne 100 takke ki baat kahi hai. Jab hum sab saath saath hai toh ye mera tera kya? Veer! Bhumi sahi keh rahi hai.
Veer : Huh?
Shweta ka dil gad-gad ho utha. Uski beti ne itna behatreen sujhaav diya tha. Ab toh jese woh Veer ke qareeb aate hue khud ko mann me hi asaani se dekh paa rahi thi.
Veer : Par-
Shweta : Par var kuch nahi. Bilkul! Tum dono ka haq hai uspe. Jab bhumi meri bacchi hai toh tum bhi toh mere bete ho. Aur wese bhi mene toh woh hotel Pranjal ke haatho kho dii thi, Tumhi toh laaye the na usse. Toh wo toh wese hi tumhari ho gayi.
Tej dono ko iss qadar dekh vyakul ho gayi.
Tej : M-Mom!?
Wo Bhavna ko chinta me dekhi. Kya ye dono sauteli maa beti uske bhai ko chheen ke le jaane waali thi? Par Bhavna ne usse shaant rehne ka ishaara kiya.
Bhumika : Actually, Veer! H-Hum ye kar sakte hai ki- Tumhare food truck par ek label laga de.
Veer : Label?
Bhumika : Like- Owned by hotel Prestige. Iss se logo ko pata chalega ki food truck sheher ki ek badi hotel ka hissa hai. Saath hi hamari hotel ka bhi advertisement ho jayega.
Idea sunte hi Veer surprised reh gaya.
[Woah! She’s intelligent.]
Hotel Prestige Shweta aur Bhumika ki hotel ka naam tha. Agar truck par ye label chadh jaaye ki truck sheher ki jaani maani hotel prestige dwaara chalaya jaa raha hai toh zaahir hai iss se do kaam hone waale the. Hotel ka advertisement. Aur saath hi logo ko ye pata chalta ki food truck khaali food truck nahi, balki ek badi hotel ka hissa hai.
Ek teer se do shikaar.
Par itna hi nahi, Veer aur Bhumika ek dusre ke business me ab transparency rakh sakte the. Yaani woh ek dusre ka business dekh sakte the. Aur toh aur ghar par baithi Shweta bhi unse jud sakti thi. Sujhaav bohut hi zyada zabardast tha.
Shweta : Excellent idea meri bacchi! Bilkul! Hum yahi karenge!
Veer bas muskura ke reh gaya.
Aur issi ke saath Veer ne apni business planning ko apne ghar ki aurto ke upar saunp diya.
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Kuch hi ghanto me shaam hone waali thi aur Ragini ki haalat kharab ho rakhi thi.
Jaanti thi woh ki ye kitna jokhim bada kaam tha, par ab uss se zara bhi bardaasht nahi ho raha tha. Veer ke kamre me uski safaayi ke bahaane woh darwaza andar se band kii hui thi aur idhar se udhar tehel rahi thi.
Jab achanak se darwaze par knock hui. Ragini ne khush hote hue darwaaza khola aur uske saamne Veer tha.
Veer : Aap jaanti ho ye kitna risky hai?
Ragini : Mujhse bardaasht nahi ho raha Veer! Take me now~
Veer ko uski collor se pakadte hue andar kheech usne darwaaza band kar diya.
Aur unn dono ke honth ek dusre se bhid gaye. Ragini apne labo se Veer ke labo ko chaba rahi thi. Woh itni khatarnaak kisser bann chuki thi ki Veer khud hairat me tha.
Iss se pehle Veer ne sirf Divya ko hi ek crazy kisser maana tha par Ragini ne sabhi aurto ko kissing ke maamle me ab pachhaad diya tha. Woh poora ka poora muh hi choom daalti thi. Uski kiss itni sloppy hoti thi ki thook aur laar se unn dono ke muh aksar sann jaaya karte the.
Aur ek aur ajeeb sa chaska chadha hua tha usse. Ya yu kahe ki ek fetish~
Ragini : Nnnn~ J-Jaldi do! Jaldi do na baby~
Apna muh khol, jeebh baahar nikaal woh kisi cheez ki maang karne lagi.
Veer (smiles) : Aap bohut dirty ho rahi ho aaj kal!
Ragini : Ummmm~ I want to be dirty Veer! I want to be dirty!! Lekin sirf tumhare liye! P-Pleaseeee~ De do naaaa~
Veer ke muh se jaise hi fir thook nikla woh seedha jaake Ragini ke muh me tapka aur palak jhapakte hi,
*Gulps*
Woh usse nigal gayi.
“Ahhhhhhhh~~”
Uske baad toh woh dono ek dusre par toot pade. Bistar par laiti Ragini usse baahe fela fela ke bulaayi,
Aur dono ke beech ek quick sex akhir ho hi gaya.
Woh dono nahi jaante the ki neeche maujood Suman peeth peeche unki madad kar rahi thi taaki dono kisi bhi tarah pakde na jaaye.
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Jaane ka samay ho chuka tha. Sabhi udaas the, par sabse zyada Tej aur Ragini hi thi.
Bhavna uske nazdeek aayi,
Bhavna : Mere liye kuch kaam nahi bataaya?
Veer : Hai na aapke liye bhi kaam!
Bhavna : Kya?
Veer : Jab tak mein waapas na aa jau tab tak aap apni job ke liye kahi bhi baahar nahi jayengi.
Bhavna : P-Par?
Veer : Mene kaha na! Jab tak mein laut na aau aap kahi bhi baahar nahi jayengi.
Bhavna : Lekin kyu?
Veer : Bas meri baat maaniye.
Bhavna : Kya mujhe jaan ka khatra hai?
Veer maun raha. Aur uski chuppi ko Bhavna fauran hi samajh gayi.
Bhavna : Nahi jaungi! Ab khush?
Veer : Hmm!
Bhavna : Ye dahi shakkar kha lo! Shubh kaam ke liye jaa rahe ho toh isse khaa ke jao. Tumhara kaam safal hoga.
Maa ke haath se dahi shakkar kha ke Veer jaane ke liye hua toh Bhavna ne fir ek baar usse rok liya.
Veer : Ab kya hua?
Woh kuch na boli. Bas apni kalaayi par bandha usne ek kaala dhaaga utaara aur Veer ki kalaayi par baandh diya.
Veer : Ye kya hai?
Bhavna : Kuch nahi hai.
Veer : Arre? Bataiye na kya hai ye?
Bhavna : Kaha na kuch nahi hai! Jao ab!
Veer ne dhaage ko check kiya. Par woh ek sadharan dhaaga hi tha. Uski samajh me nahi aaya ki jab dhaaga mamuli tha toh uski maa baandh kyu rahi thi?
Kherr! Woh baari baari sabhi ke gale se laga. Tej uske gale se jab lagi toh usne sharmaate hue uske gaal bhi choom liye.
Tej :J-Jaldi aana! Okay?
Veer (smiles) : Hmm!
Toh wahi Bhumika sankoch ke chalte aage badhne ki himmat nahi jutaa paa rahi thi. Shweta, Bhavna ne bhi pyaar kiya usse.
Aur Veer ne jab apni baahe khud-ba-khud felaayi toh Bhumika dheere se aage badh uske gale se lag gayi.
Ravaangi kisi ko bhi nahi bhaati thi. Parantu, Veer ka jaana zaroori tha.
Unn sab ko antim baar tata bye-bye karte hue woh Ragini ke saath car me nikal gaya.
Uske jaate hi ghar agle hi pal soona soona sa ho gaya. Tej apna mood off liye andar ko jaane lagi. Toh Bhumika usse dekh boli,
Bhumika : H-Hum- Hum Veer ki help karne ke liye kuch decide kar lete hai?
Tej ne usse ek baar dekha aur chehra waapas se jhuka ke woh andar chali gayi. Bechaari Bhumika toh bas usse cheer up karne ki koshish kar rahi thi. Par shayad Tej ko ubharne me kuch samay lagne wala tha.
Baahar jo abhi bhi khadi hui thi woh thi Bhavna. Kaafi samay baad uske maathe par chinta ki lakeere chhaayi hui thi.
‘Akhir!? Jhooth bol ke jaane ki kya zaroorat pad gayi mere bacche?’
Woh apne mann me kahi. Uss raaste ko taakti rahi jaha se guzar ke Veer gaya hua tha.
6 baje ke aas paas ki flight thi. Kareeban Veer ko 30 ghante ka safar tay karna tha.
Flight par baithne se pehle Ragini ne usse bohot pyaar kiya. Bechaari ka bilkul mann nahi ho raha tha Veer se alag hone ka. Jaise tese Veer ne usse console kiya aur flight me baith ravaana ho gaya.
30 ghante ke safar ke baad woh finally Paris pohuch gaya.
Charles de gaulle airport par plane land kiya aur Veer plane se baahar aaya. Raat ke 12 ke qareeb samay ho chuka tha. Aur uske nazre kisi ki talaash me thi.
Airport par bhi naa maatr ki bheed thi. Dhundhte hi woh jaise hi thoda aage badha, usse woh shaksiyat dikhaayi degi jiske liye woh yaha tak itni dur aaya tha.
Uske saamne khubsoorti ki woh bala khadi hui thi.
Ava!!!
Ya yu kahe ki,
Natalia!!!
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Ushant Island, France
Night ~ 12:36 AM
Iss taapu ke theek thodi dur par ek cruise samundar me thehra hua tha.
Woh behad vishaal tha. Lights se poora jagmag ho rakha tha. Jahaaj bada zaroor tha par log sirf ginti ke hi the. Sabhi ki aankho par ek decorative mask tha.
Mand mand music ki dhun pe, haath me red wine ka glaas liye woh sabhi jhoomne lage. Jab ek aadmi ne unka dhyaan kheencha,
“Ladies and gentleman!!”
Mic par uski awaaz sunn, sab uski orr dekhe. Usne ek suit pehna hua tha. Par aankho par uske bhi wahi decorative mask tha.
“Samay aa gaya hai ki hamaare pehle food ka lutf uthaaya jaaye.”
“Yayyyyyyy~” Waha maujood sabhi cheer karne lage.
Shayad koi khaane ki dish thi? Kuch behatreen sa bhojan? Woh insaan bhi jhoomte hue aage badha.
Aam taur par ye ek bade raees logo ki party prateet ho rahi thi. Par aage jo ghatit hone waala tha usse dekh ke accho se accho ki rooh kaanp uthati.
Woh aadmi gungunaate hue cruise ki ek khuli railing ke nazdeek aaya.
“Food! Food! Food! Food!” Sabhi firse shor karne lage.
Woh punaah aage badha. Aur jese hi woh railing ke chhorr par pohucha.
Chhorr se lage ek lakdi ka plank juda hua tha. Jiske upar,
Ek vyakti khada tha. Uske haath perr bandhe hue the. Aur muh parr kapda thusa tha. Aankho se aasu nirantar behte jaa rahe the.
Woh upar waale se duaa kar raha tha. Par upar waale ne ek na suni. Kyuki agle hi shan,
*Bammmm*
Usse peeche se ek zordaar laat padi aur woh hawa me uchhalte hue samundar me jaa gira. Log daudte hue railing ke nazdeek aaye aur nazaara dekhne lage. Kuch toh apna phone nikaal record karne lage.
Unhe mazaa aa raha tha. Iss fetish ke liye hi toh woh dherro kharch karte the aur samaaj se chhup ke apni dark desires ko poora karte the.
Paani me gira aadmi chhap chhap kar ke tadapne laga. Usse terrna nahi aata tha. Aur paani me hoti halchal mehsoos karte hi agle hi pal,
*Khaaaaaaaacccccchhhhhh*
“Oooooooooo~~~”
“Buuuuuuuuuuuuu~”
“Woooohooooooooo~”
Log taaliya bajaane lagi. Uss aadmi ko samundar me maujood shark ne do tukdo me kaat ke rakh diya tha.
Samudr ka paani lahu luhaan hua aur laal rang uski upari sateh par bichh gaya.
Jisne laat maari thi sabhi ne uske liye taali bajaayi aur apne coat ko adjust kar woh apne haath fela ke janta ke saamne jhuk gaya.
*Boooom* *Booooom*
*Swooooooosssshhh*
Uske jhukte hi peeche island se hawa me aatishbaazi hui aur aasmaan me alag alag rang bikhar gaye.
Paas khadi ek ladki uske qareeb aayi,
Ladki : Festival ki shuruaat kamaal ki hui hai. Kuch kehna chaahoge?
Aadmi ne bina kuch kahe uss ladki ko apni baaho me liya aur usse zorr se chooma.
Choomne ke baad usse side kar woh railing ke paas gaya aur ahista se bola,
“Rango ka mishran hai crimson.
Khoon ka rang hai crimson.
Mujhse kismat bhi haarti hai sweetie,
Kyuki mein hi hu Crimson!!”
Ladki (smiles) : Toh... Ab kya karna hai?
Crimson (smiles) : Kuch nahi! Mera shikaar… Aa chuka hai.
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Aaj ke liye itna hi guys.
Update normal size ka hai. 4.2k words. Crimson Festival start ho chuka hai. Daba ke likes thok ke jaane ka aur revos rakhne ka. Yaha se ab jo hoga woh bawaal hi hoga.
Dhanyavaad!
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Mast update h bhai...Update - 134 ~ Crimson FestivalAb tak…
Agle hi pal Tamanna haatho me wo roll liye bhaagi aur apni car me baith gayi. Palak jhapakte car bhi waha se ravaana ho gayi.
‘What the fuck!!’
Veer yaha confused hi tha jab uske phone par ek message aaya aur phone vibrate hua,
*Buzzzz*
Message padhte hi Veer ke maathe par chinta ki lakeere chhaa gayi.
Message me likha tha~
“I need you! ASAP!”
Ab aage :
Harr baar ki tarah aaj subah bhi Veer ke ghar me kohraam macha hua tha. Ab toh jaise Veer ko bhi aadat lag gayi thi. Iss shorgul ki aur saath hi saath-
Apna bag pack karne ki.
Packing? Kis liye? Packing isliye kyuki bulaava jo aa chuka tha usse. Par harr baar ki tarah dil bhi tootne the.
“Kyu Veer? Ab kaha? Tum ye baar baar kyu bhala-!?”
Ragini ki udaasi bhari awaaz uske kaano me peeche se padi.
Woh hall me hi sabke saamne packing kar raha tha aur sabhi ussi par nazre gadaaye hue the. Ragini ko dekh aisa laga jaise bechari abhi ro degi. Uske chehre ke haav bhaav padhna behad hi asaan tha. Aur Bhavna wahi kar bhi rahi thi. Upar se neeche tak Ragini ki harqato ko wo parakh rahi thi.
Woh chehre par chinta aur bechaini, aankho me ek bebasi, aur yu uske jee ka machalna. Bhavna ki aankho se kuch bhi chooth kar nahi jaa raha tha.
Ragini jab jab Veer ke qareeb aati, Veer kisi patang ki tarah dheel khaa ke aur dur udd jaata. Ye toh jaise ab harr baar ka hi ho gaya tha. Parantu, ab Veer unn sab ko kaise samjhaata? System aur anya raazo ko woh baahar aane nahi de sakta tha. Woh apni jagah majboor tha. Unn sab ko surakshit rakhne ki zimmedaari bhi toh uske hi sarr thi.
Veer : Bhabhi! Mein jald aa jaunga! Aap chinta mat kariye.
Usne fatafat suitcase me apne kuch kapde aur zaroori samaan daalte hue kaha. Par peeche khadi Ragini ko uski harr baat aur bechain kar rahi thi.
Tej : Par? Par ye achanak se Paris kyu Veer? Ek minute! Kahi tum uss secret love waali lady se toh nahi milne jaa rahe na?
Veer : Hein???
Bhavna : Secret love waali lady?
Apne bete ki love life se juda sawaal sunn, Bhavna ka badan seedha ho gaya. Aur na sirf uska balki Ragini bhi bauhe sikod usse dekhne lagi.
Tej : Aur kaun? Wahi lady jisne tumhe ye itni mehngi gaadi gift kii hai!
Apni behna ki baat sunte hue Veer hassa,
Veer : Haha~ Aisa kuch bhi nahi hai. Woh waha Vegas me hai. Ya shayad Mumbai laut bhi aayi ho. Paris me mein kisi aur kaam se jaa raha hu.
Tej (frowns) : Kis kaam se?
Veer : Business ke!
Tej : Kaisa business?
Veer (shrugs) : Business Teju dii!
Tej : Kis se business karne jaa rahe ho waha?
Veer : Client hai woh dii! Badi company ka. Zaahir hai ki kisi ek insaan se toh business karunga nahi? Company ke sang hi sambhav hai na ye?
Tej : Toh aise achanak se kyu? Itni kya important meeting hai?
Veer : Kyuki unka schedule hota hai. Woh mere liye toh baithe hi nahi rahenge na?
Tej : Kis company se milne jaa rahe ho?
Veer (sighs) : Teju dii! Paris ke liye hume Visa kab nahi lagta?
Tej : Jab aap business ke liye jaa rahe- ahh!? Toh-!?
Veer muskuraaya aur usne apna phone Tej ke saamne kar screen par ek mesage dikhaaya.
Message me Veer ki flight ki ticket thi shaam ki. Mumbai se Paris. Business class. Agar business ke silsile me Paris jaana ho toh Visa ki zaroorat nahi padti thi. Aisa visitor kam se kam 90 dino tak waha theherne ke liye allowed tha.
Jab Tej ne message padha toh kahi na kahi ab usse Veer pe yakeen hona shuru ho gaya. Kyuki bina business ke kaam ke liye jaane par Visa lagta hi tha.
Aur Veer agar bina Visa ke jaa raha tha toh baat spasht thi. Woh business sambandhit kaam ke liye hi jaa raha tha.
Tej : T-Toh client kaun hai?
Veer : Mujhe kaise pata hoga dii? Company se woh kisi ko bhi milne ke liye bhej sakte hai.
Tej : Ohhh!
Bhavna : Kis vishay me business kar rahe ho?
Jab Bhavna ne ye sawaal pucha toh kuch derr ke liye Veer shaant reh gaya. Uski khamoshi dekh Tej ka shaq firse badhne laga.
Veer (smiles) : Food industry se related hi hai Maa~
Woh aur Bhavna ek dusre ko kuch shan tak dekhte rahe.
Bhavna : Bas?
Veer : Aur shayad kuch goods supply?
Bhavna : Samjhi!
Veer : Hmm!
Peeche khadi Shweta jo ab tak maun thi, woh kaise chup reh sakti thi? Sab baari baari Veer par haq jama ke uss se prashn par prashn puch rahe the. Uski privacy ki dhajjiya udaa rahe the. Yahi sahi waqt tha apna pyaar Veer ko dikhaane ka. Woh fauran aage aayi aur usne Veer ke haath ko thaama,
Shweta : P-Par Veer? Beta tum rukoge kaha? Aise akele jaa rahe ho? Itne bade desh me, itni badi city me akele kaise sab manage karoge? Tumhara khaana peena? M-Mein bhi chalti hu tumhare saath.
Aur usne apna daav khel diya. Jaha sab Veer ke muh se jankaari nikalwaane me lage hue the, wahi Shweta ne aisa kuch bhi karne ka prayaas nahi kiya. Woh jaise ye dikhaana chaah rahi thi ki Veer jaha jis kaam se jaana chaahe jaa sakta hai. Usse toh bas uske khaan-paan aur rehne ki fiqr hai.
Kahi na kahi ye kaam bhi kar gaya. Kyuki Veer ko asaani hui. Ab usse ek aur shaks ko nahi samjhaana pada. Kahi na kahi usse andar se accha bhi laga ki Shweta ko uski chinta thi.
Khaas baat ye thi ki bhale hi Shweta mauke ka fayda utha ke Veer ke qareeb aane ki koshish karti thi par uski chhahat sacchi thi. Uska lagaav aur prem koi dhong nahi tha.
Hamesha se hi uske dil me ek bete ke liye ek rikt sthaan hua karta tha. Jisse Veer ne ab apne naam se bhar diya tha. Ab toh woh uski aankho ka taara bann chuka tha. Aur Veer bhi uske pyaar ko samajhta tha. Jaanta tha ki Shweta ke sang ateet me kya guzri hai.
Toh wahi dur baithi Bhavna apni sautan ko apne bete se chipke ek alag sii muskaan liye dekh rahi thi.
Jaise hi Shweta ne Bhavna ko dekha,
Shweta : Huh!?
Usne apni pakad Veer ke haath par aur mazboot kar dii. Veer ki asli maa usse rehesyamayi muskaan liye ghoor rahi thi. Shweta bechari darr ke reh gayi. Woh abhi ek bacchi ki tarah mehsoos kar rahi thi jisse ye bhay tha ki kahi koi uska mann-pasand gudda chhina ke na bhaag jaaye.
Parantu, bagal me khadi Tej ko ye sab bilkul bhi nahi kusaa raha tha. Uska toh mann kar raha tha ki abhi Shweta ko kheech ke Veer se alag kar de. Lekin usne khud ko aisa karne se roka.
Bhavna ke sang aankh-michauli karte hue Shweta kabhi usse dekhti toh kabhi Veer ko,
Shweta : M-Mein chalti hu na betu! Mein tumhari madad karwa dungi waha. H-Haan? Okay?
Veer (smiles) : Sochne ke liye shukriya. But iski zaroorat nahi hai. Mein akele jaunga toh travel jaldi kar paunga waha. Aur jitna jaldi sab hoyega utni hi jaldi mein waapas bhi aa paunga.
Shweta (bechaini me) : P-Par-
Veer ne uska haath thaama,
Veer (smiles) : Jaldi aaunga na! Don’t worry!
Jab Veer ne uss se itne pyaar se kaha toh Shweta uski soorat me hi kahi kho gayi. Woh momm ki tarah pighal ke reh gayi. Uska dil baag baag ho utha. Jaise maano uski mehnat safal ho gayi ho. Veer ke muh se apne liye pyaar bhare shabd sunn ke hi woh sab kuch bhool gayi.
Shweta : O-Okay~
‘Phew! Inhe manaana utna kathin nahi tha.’ Veer ne ek raahat ki saas lii.
[Well! Abhi aur bhi logo ko manaana hai aapko.]
Ragini : Toh mein chali jaati hu na. Mein tumhe slow down nahi karungi Veer.
Veer : Nahi Bhabhi! Mene abhi toh kaha. Waha mujhe travel karna padega. Aapke liye convenient nahi rahega. Aur wese bhi, ab meri flight aaj ki book ho chuki hai. Ab flights milti bhi hai ya nahi kya pata.
Ragini : Tum tension mat lo, zaroor mil jayegi.
Iss se pehle ki woh aage badh mobile par tickets dekhti, Veer ne usse rok diya.
Veer (smiles) : Bhabhi~
Veer ke chehre par woh narm sii muskurahat dekh Ragini phir haar gayi. Apne nichle honth ko daato tale kutarte hue woh sarr jhuka ke khadi ho gayi. Harr baar yahi hota tha uske saath. Harr baar Veer uske saath aisa karta tha. Woh niraash thi. Gussa bhi.
Ragini ke haav bhaav padh Veer samajh gaya tha ki usse jaane se pehle apni bhabhi ko manaana behad zaroori tha.
Kherr! Bag packing samaapt hui. Aaj Bhumika aur Sonali dono hi kaam par nahi gayi. Kyuki Veer aaj kayi dino ke liye ghar se jaa raha tha, toh woh dono bhi thehri hui thi.
Aur samast parivaar Veer ke kamre me ikhatta tha. Bed par Veer, Tej, Bhumika, Aabha aur Sonali baithi hui thi. Toh wahi neeche chataayi par Ragini, Suman, Shweta aur Bhavna.
Veer : Mujhe aap sab se kuch baat karni hai. Ya yu samajh lijiye ki aap sabki madad chahiye.
Shweta : Kaisi madad betu?
Bhavna : Hmm?
Tej : Kaho Veer!
Veer ne ek gehri saans lii.
[Yes! Ye sahi samay hai Profit Path ko lay down karne ka Master. Jitni jaldi ye execute hoga, hum new profit path ko dekh payenge. Behtar hoga ki hume naya profit path waha Paris me hi mil jaaye. Toh waha ki business opportunities ko hum hathiya payenge Master.]
‘Mujhe firse wo path show karo Pari!’
[Right away Master!]
Aur Veer ke saamne punaah ek baar wahi path khul gaya.
‘Hmm! I see!’
Ragini : Kya baat hai Veer? Kaho na!
Veer : Ohhh! H-Haan! Mein keh raha tha ki kya aap sab meri madad mere business me karengi?
Aur sabse pehla response Bhavna ka hi tha.
Bhavna (smiles) : Mein soch hi rahi thi ki akhir kab tum hum se ye baatein saajha karoge. Akhir kab se isse apne zehen me dabaaye hue the?
Veer : Umm~ Woh-!
Bhavna : Koi baat nahi! Derr aaye durust aaye! Kaho! Kya karna hai hume?
Veer : Darasal! Shyaam jii se keh ke mene kuch kisaano ki maang kii hai.
Tej : Kisaan? Kis liye?
[Ekdum sahi direction me jaa rahe ho aap Master.]
Veer : Teju dii! Dada jii ne mujhe zameen dii hui hai. Uska istemaal toh karna hi tha. Woh zameen upjau hai. Waha kheti ho sakti hai. Isliye Shyaam jii se mene kisaano ko bhejne ke liye kaha hua hai.
Ragini : Toh tum ab kheti karoge Veer?
Veer : Bhabhi aisa hai ki, mera business food me hai abhi. Zara sochiye ki agar mere paas khud ki kheti ho, jaha se food truck me istemaal hone waali taaza sabziya mil sake. Aur toh aur mein unhe bazaar me supply karne lagu. Toh iss se kya hoga?
Veer Profit path ke pehle path ko achhi tarah se decode kar chuka tha. Usse pata tha kis disha me aage badhna hai aur kin logo ko aage leke badhna hai.
Uske prashn ka uttar Shweta ne diya jo neeche paalthi maare baithi hui thi,
Shweta : Betu bohut badhiya! Tumne ek efficient tareeqa khoja hai. Tum na sirf apna kharcha bachaoge balki ab aur zyada kama sakte ho. Iss se unn kisaano ko bhi ek kaam mil jayega. Unki aamdani hone lagegi jo ab tak nahi ho rahi thi. Aur toh aur tumhare customers ko jab fresh fruits, vegetables ka khaana milega toh business me badhhotri honi hi hai.
Ek business lady hone ke naate, Shweta pal bhar me hi Veer ka plan samajh gayi thi.
Veer : Jii! Yahi mera plan hai. Also, Varsha ko ped paudho ka bohut knowledge hai. Usse phuulo se banayi jaane waali sugandh aur paudho se banaayi jaane waali ayurvedic aushdhiyo ko banaana aata hai. Uss baare me bhi mene kuch soch ke rakha hai.
Ragini : Varsha? Kaun?
Bhumika : Hmm?
Veer ke sang jo aurte gayi thi Jaipur woh Parijaat ki aurto se waaqif thi. Par Bhumika, Ragini, Sonali aur Aabha nahi. Isliye ye naam unke liye naya tha.
Shweta : Tum sab unke baare me nahi jaanti. Rehne do!
Shweta na woh baat bataana theek na samjha. Ragini bas ek soch me doobi upar baithe Veer ko dekhti rahi jaise ek biwi dekhti hai jab uska pati koi anjaan mahila ka naam le.
Veer : Aur isliye- Mein ye saara kaam abhi 3 logo ko saupna chaahta hu.
Uske itna bolte hi sabhi aurte ek dusre ko dekhne lagi.
Veer (smiles) : Bhabhi!
Ragini : Huhhh!?
Veer : Aap, Teju dii aur Arohi dii!
Tej : Arohi??
Veer : Hmm! Arohi dii se abhi meri baat nahi hui hai par unhe shaamil karna chaahunga mein.
Tej : Toh mujhe kya karna hai?
Veer : Abhi mene bataya toh dii! Aap logo ko hi ye milke manage karna hoga. Kya aap sab karogi?
Ragini toh chaahti hi yahi thi. Hamesha se hi woh Veer ke kaam aana chaahti thi. Uske business me uska haath bataana chaahti thi.
Ragini (gehri saans lete hue) : Tum chinta mat karo Veer! Mein sab samajh gayi hu. Aur hum sab milke sab dekh lenge. Tumhe fiqr karne ki koi zaroorat nahi!
Veer (smiles) : Aapse yahi umeed thi mujhe!
Bhumika : V-Veer! Mujhe bhi tumse kuch kehna hai.
Veer ko dhyaan aaya ki Bhumika pichli subaah bhi yahi keh rahi thi.
Veer : Kahiye!
Bhumika : W-Woh-
Veer : Hmm!?
Bhumika : M-Mein- Mein tumhe hamari hotel dena chaahti hu.
Uske vaakya ne waha baithe sabhi ko hairat me daal diya.
Veer : Whaaaatttt??
Sabse zyaada jhatka Veer ko hi laga. Jis hotel ko varsho se maa beti ne milke badhaaya, aaj woh usse dena chaahti thi? Kyu?
Bhumika : H-Hmm! Mene bohut socha hai iss baare me. Aur mujhe ye sahi lagta hai. Agar hum sab ek parivaar ka hissa hai toh ye mera hotel, mera business nahi hona chahiye na? K-Kya ye kehna sahi nahi hoga ~ ‘Hamara Business’??
Bhumika ka masoom sa chehra jab Veer ne nazdeek se dekha, khaaskar uske gore gaalo par girti hui uski kaali zulfe toh Veer ke khud ke gaal halke laal ho chale.
‘She- She’s cute!’
[Ahem!]
Shweta : Hey Bhagwaan!
Shweta achanak khadi ho gayi.
Shweta : Ye mene pehle kyu nahi socha? Beta tumne 100 takke ki baat kahi hai. Jab hum sab saath saath hai toh ye mera tera kya? Veer! Bhumi sahi keh rahi hai.
Veer : Huh?
Shweta ka dil gad-gad ho utha. Uski beti ne itna behatreen sujhaav diya tha. Ab toh jese woh Veer ke qareeb aate hue khud ko mann me hi asaani se dekh paa rahi thi.
Veer : Par-
Shweta : Par var kuch nahi. Bilkul! Tum dono ka haq hai uspe. Jab bhumi meri bacchi hai toh tum bhi toh mere bete ho. Aur wese bhi mene toh woh hotel Pranjal ke haatho kho dii thi, Tumhi toh laaye the na usse. Toh wo toh wese hi tumhari ho gayi.
Tej dono ko iss qadar dekh vyakul ho gayi.
Tej : M-Mom!?
Wo Bhavna ko chinta me dekhi. Kya ye dono sauteli maa beti uske bhai ko chheen ke le jaane waali thi? Par Bhavna ne usse shaant rehne ka ishaara kiya.
Bhumika : Actually, Veer! H-Hum ye kar sakte hai ki- Tumhare food truck par ek label laga de.
Veer : Label?
Bhumika : Like- Owned by hotel Prestige. Iss se logo ko pata chalega ki food truck sheher ki ek badi hotel ka hissa hai. Saath hi hamari hotel ka bhi advertisement ho jayega.
Idea sunte hi Veer surprised reh gaya.
[Woah! She’s intelligent.]
Hotel Prestige Shweta aur Bhumika ki hotel ka naam tha. Agar truck par ye label chadh jaaye ki truck sheher ki jaani maani hotel prestige dwaara chalaya jaa raha hai toh zaahir hai iss se do kaam hone waale the. Hotel ka advertisement. Aur saath hi logo ko ye pata chalta ki food truck khaali food truck nahi, balki ek badi hotel ka hissa hai.
Ek teer se do shikaar.
Par itna hi nahi, Veer aur Bhumika ek dusre ke business me ab transparency rakh sakte the. Yaani woh ek dusre ka business dekh sakte the. Aur toh aur ghar par baithi Shweta bhi unse jud sakti thi. Sujhaav bohut hi zyada zabardast tha.
Shweta : Excellent idea meri bacchi! Bilkul! Hum yahi karenge!
Veer bas muskura ke reh gaya.
Aur issi ke saath Veer ne apni business planning ko apne ghar ki aurto ke upar saunp diya.
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Kuch hi ghanto me shaam hone waali thi aur Ragini ki haalat kharab ho rakhi thi.
Jaanti thi woh ki ye kitna jokhim bada kaam tha, par ab uss se zara bhi bardaasht nahi ho raha tha. Veer ke kamre me uski safaayi ke bahaane woh darwaza andar se band kii hui thi aur idhar se udhar tehel rahi thi.
Jab achanak se darwaze par knock hui. Ragini ne khush hote hue darwaaza khola aur uske saamne Veer tha.
Veer : Aap jaanti ho ye kitna risky hai?
Ragini : Mujhse bardaasht nahi ho raha Veer! Take me now~
Veer ko uski collor se pakadte hue andar kheech usne darwaaza band kar diya.
Aur unn dono ke honth ek dusre se bhid gaye. Ragini apne labo se Veer ke labo ko chaba rahi thi. Woh itni khatarnaak kisser bann chuki thi ki Veer khud hairat me tha.
Iss se pehle Veer ne sirf Divya ko hi ek crazy kisser maana tha par Ragini ne sabhi aurto ko kissing ke maamle me ab pachhaad diya tha. Woh poora ka poora muh hi choom daalti thi. Uski kiss itni sloppy hoti thi ki thook aur laar se unn dono ke muh aksar sann jaaya karte the.
Aur ek aur ajeeb sa chaska chadha hua tha usse. Ya yu kahe ki ek fetish~
Ragini : Nnnn~ J-Jaldi do! Jaldi do na baby~
Apna muh khol, jeebh baahar nikaal woh kisi cheez ki maang karne lagi.
Veer (smiles) : Aap bohut dirty ho rahi ho aaj kal!
Ragini : Ummmm~ I want to be dirty Veer! I want to be dirty!! Lekin sirf tumhare liye! P-Pleaseeee~ De do naaaa~
Veer ke muh se jaise hi fir thook nikla woh seedha jaake Ragini ke muh me tapka aur palak jhapakte hi,
*Gulps*
Woh usse nigal gayi.
“Ahhhhhhhh~~”
Uske baad toh woh dono ek dusre par toot pade. Bistar par laiti Ragini usse baahe fela fela ke bulaayi,
Aur dono ke beech ek quick sex akhir ho hi gaya.
Woh dono nahi jaante the ki neeche maujood Suman peeth peeche unki madad kar rahi thi taaki dono kisi bhi tarah pakde na jaaye.
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Jaane ka samay ho chuka tha. Sabhi udaas the, par sabse zyada Tej aur Ragini hi thi.
Bhavna uske nazdeek aayi,
Bhavna : Mere liye kuch kaam nahi bataaya?
Veer : Hai na aapke liye bhi kaam!
Bhavna : Kya?
Veer : Jab tak mein waapas na aa jau tab tak aap apni job ke liye kahi bhi baahar nahi jayengi.
Bhavna : P-Par?
Veer : Mene kaha na! Jab tak mein laut na aau aap kahi bhi baahar nahi jayengi.
Bhavna : Lekin kyu?
Veer : Bas meri baat maaniye.
Bhavna : Kya mujhe jaan ka khatra hai?
Veer maun raha. Aur uski chuppi ko Bhavna fauran hi samajh gayi.
Bhavna : Nahi jaungi! Ab khush?
Veer : Hmm!
Bhavna : Ye dahi shakkar kha lo! Shubh kaam ke liye jaa rahe ho toh isse khaa ke jao. Tumhara kaam safal hoga.
Maa ke haath se dahi shakkar kha ke Veer jaane ke liye hua toh Bhavna ne fir ek baar usse rok liya.
Veer : Ab kya hua?
Woh kuch na boli. Bas apni kalaayi par bandha usne ek kaala dhaaga utaara aur Veer ki kalaayi par baandh diya.
Veer : Ye kya hai?
Bhavna : Kuch nahi hai.
Veer : Arre? Bataiye na kya hai ye?
Bhavna : Kaha na kuch nahi hai! Jao ab!
Veer ne dhaage ko check kiya. Par woh ek sadharan dhaaga hi tha. Uski samajh me nahi aaya ki jab dhaaga mamuli tha toh uski maa baandh kyu rahi thi?
Kherr! Woh baari baari sabhi ke gale se laga. Tej uske gale se jab lagi toh usne sharmaate hue uske gaal bhi choom liye.
Tej :J-Jaldi aana! Okay?
Veer (smiles) : Hmm!
Toh wahi Bhumika sankoch ke chalte aage badhne ki himmat nahi jutaa paa rahi thi. Shweta, Bhavna ne bhi pyaar kiya usse.
Aur Veer ne jab apni baahe khud-ba-khud felaayi toh Bhumika dheere se aage badh uske gale se lag gayi.
Ravaangi kisi ko bhi nahi bhaati thi. Parantu, Veer ka jaana zaroori tha.
Unn sab ko antim baar tata bye-bye karte hue woh Ragini ke saath car me nikal gaya.
Uske jaate hi ghar agle hi pal soona soona sa ho gaya. Tej apna mood off liye andar ko jaane lagi. Toh Bhumika usse dekh boli,
Bhumika : H-Hum- Hum Veer ki help karne ke liye kuch decide kar lete hai?
Tej ne usse ek baar dekha aur chehra waapas se jhuka ke woh andar chali gayi. Bechaari Bhumika toh bas usse cheer up karne ki koshish kar rahi thi. Par shayad Tej ko ubharne me kuch samay lagne wala tha.
Baahar jo abhi bhi khadi hui thi woh thi Bhavna. Kaafi samay baad uske maathe par chinta ki lakeere chhaayi hui thi.
‘Akhir!? Jhooth bol ke jaane ki kya zaroorat pad gayi mere bacche?’
Woh apne mann me kahi. Uss raaste ko taakti rahi jaha se guzar ke Veer gaya hua tha.
6 baje ke aas paas ki flight thi. Kareeban Veer ko 30 ghante ka safar tay karna tha.
Flight par baithne se pehle Ragini ne usse bohot pyaar kiya. Bechaari ka bilkul mann nahi ho raha tha Veer se alag hone ka. Jaise tese Veer ne usse console kiya aur flight me baith ravaana ho gaya.
30 ghante ke safar ke baad woh finally Paris pohuch gaya.
Charles de gaulle airport par plane land kiya aur Veer plane se baahar aaya. Raat ke 12 ke qareeb samay ho chuka tha. Aur uske nazre kisi ki talaash me thi.
Airport par bhi naa maatr ki bheed thi. Dhundhte hi woh jaise hi thoda aage badha, usse woh shaksiyat dikhaayi degi jiske liye woh yaha tak itni dur aaya tha.
Uske saamne khubsoorti ki woh bala khadi hui thi.
Ava!!!
Ya yu kahe ki,
Natalia!!!
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Ushant Island, France
Night ~ 12:36 AM
Iss taapu ke theek thodi dur par ek cruise samundar me thehra hua tha.
Woh behad vishaal tha. Lights se poora jagmag ho rakha tha. Jahaaj bada zaroor tha par log sirf ginti ke hi the. Sabhi ki aankho par ek decorative mask tha.
Mand mand music ki dhun pe, haath me red wine ka glaas liye woh sabhi jhoomne lage. Jab ek aadmi ne unka dhyaan kheencha,
“Ladies and gentleman!!”
Mic par uski awaaz sunn, sab uski orr dekhe. Usne ek suit pehna hua tha. Par aankho par uske bhi wahi decorative mask tha.
“Samay aa gaya hai ki hamaare pehle food ka lutf uthaaya jaaye.”
“Yayyyyyyy~” Waha maujood sabhi cheer karne lage.
Shayad koi khaane ki dish thi? Kuch behatreen sa bhojan? Woh insaan bhi jhoomte hue aage badha.
Aam taur par ye ek bade raees logo ki party prateet ho rahi thi. Par aage jo ghatit hone waala tha usse dekh ke accho se accho ki rooh kaanp uthati.
Woh aadmi gungunaate hue cruise ki ek khuli railing ke nazdeek aaya.
“Food! Food! Food! Food!” Sabhi firse shor karne lage.
Woh punaah aage badha. Aur jese hi woh railing ke chhorr par pohucha.
Chhorr se lage ek lakdi ka plank juda hua tha. Jiske upar,
Ek vyakti khada tha. Uske haath perr bandhe hue the. Aur muh parr kapda thusa tha. Aankho se aasu nirantar behte jaa rahe the.
Woh upar waale se duaa kar raha tha. Par upar waale ne ek na suni. Kyuki agle hi shan,
*Bammmm*
Usse peeche se ek zordaar laat padi aur woh hawa me uchhalte hue samundar me jaa gira. Log daudte hue railing ke nazdeek aaye aur nazaara dekhne lage. Kuch toh apna phone nikaal record karne lage.
Unhe mazaa aa raha tha. Iss fetish ke liye hi toh woh dherro kharch karte the aur samaaj se chhup ke apni dark desires ko poora karte the.
Paani me gira aadmi chhap chhap kar ke tadapne laga. Usse terrna nahi aata tha. Aur paani me hoti halchal mehsoos karte hi agle hi pal,
*Khaaaaaaaacccccchhhhhh*
“Oooooooooo~~~”
“Buuuuuuuuuuuuu~”
“Woooohooooooooo~”
Log taaliya bajaane lagi. Uss aadmi ko samundar me maujood shark ne do tukdo me kaat ke rakh diya tha.
Samudr ka paani lahu luhaan hua aur laal rang uski upari sateh par bichh gaya.
Jisne laat maari thi sabhi ne uske liye taali bajaayi aur apne coat ko adjust kar woh apne haath fela ke janta ke saamne jhuk gaya.
*Boooom* *Booooom*
*Swooooooosssshhh*
Uske jhukte hi peeche island se hawa me aatishbaazi hui aur aasmaan me alag alag rang bikhar gaye.
Paas khadi ek ladki uske qareeb aayi,
Ladki : Festival ki shuruaat kamaal ki hui hai. Kuch kehna chaahoge?
Aadmi ne bina kuch kahe uss ladki ko apni baaho me liya aur usse zorr se chooma.
Choomne ke baad usse side kar woh railing ke paas gaya aur ahista se bola,
“Rango ka mishran hai crimson.
Khoon ka rang hai crimson.
Mujhse kismat bhi haarti hai sweetie,
Kyuki mein hi hu Crimson!!”
Ladki (smiles) : Toh... Ab kya karna hai?
Crimson (smiles) : Kuch nahi! Mera shikaar… Aa chuka hai.
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Aaj ke liye itna hi guys.
Update normal size ka hai. 4.2k words. Crimson Festival start ho chuka hai. Daba ke likes thok ke jaane ka aur revos rakhne ka. Yaha se ab jo hoga woh bawaal hi hoga.
Dhanyavaad!