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Kya Veer apni life behtar kar paega ya sab kuch kho baithega?

  • Veer Baadshah banega

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  • Sab kuch kho baithega

    Votes: 27 1.6%
  • Kuch paega toh kuch khoega

    Votes: 231 13.4%
  • Kuch nahi bann paega

    Votes: 36 2.1%

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Werewolf

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Werewolf

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Thoda btaiye to ki kaise kahani ak page se attach rhe ya setting kre ki vah ak hi page se attach rhe padhne wale ko bhi samajh aaye aur
First page pe index isliye toh diya hua hai. Update wise padhte jao ek ke baad ek. Simple. :dazed:
 

Mohammadrafi

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Bahot hi behtarin update ...
bahot hi safai ke sath ganne me arad ko dikhya gaya hai .....:applause::applause::applause::applause::applause::applause::applause::applause::applause:
veer aa chuka hai ava ko bachane ke liye , ya fir use bulaya gaya hai ava ke jariye ye to waqt hi batayega....

jo naye charecter dikhaye gaye hai unke bare me bhi malum chal pana muskil hai ki dono freinds hai ya foes ye to abhi suspens bana hua hai , par andaja ai ki dono dushman hi hone chahiye .....

ava ki mataji coma me kyu hai? wo admi use kyu dhundh raha hai ? kya koi secret hai iske piche ? ye bhi age dekhne ko milega hi kyuki agar wo admi dhundh raha to hai to kuchna kuchto reson rahega hi .....
ek anfdaja ye lagaya ja sakta hai ke ava ke fevorebility 80 to 90 pahoch jayegi .....
 

Werewolf

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Hai na broo sach main bahut strong feeling aa rahi hai mujhe
:heh:
Katai Jahar update diya hai Werewolf
Dhanyavaad.
Sahi kaha bro jis trha ye banda ava suhana aur maybe kaera ke peche bhi parha hua he mujhe bhi yahi feeling arhi he ke ye wohi he
Crimson Pushkar hai? :cmouth:
Han bro mujhe pata nhi kyu buhat strong feelings arhi he ke ye pushkar he baqi ye srf 1 guess he dekhte he ye kitna sahi hota he.
Meri story khaali predict karne ke liye hi high IQ ki avashyakta hoti hai.:whistle: Lagao lagao. Dimaag lagao. :smartm:
Bro koi bhi ho hume it a to pata he jb ye raaz khule ga to bomb to phate ga
Bomb ke saath saath readers ka bhi dimaag phatega. 🤯
Story bahut hi acchi hai Bhai... Awsm man khush ho gaya bhai padh ke...
Dhanyavaad. ✨
Shandar update bro
Keep it up
Shukriya.
Super Duper fantabulous update Werewolf bhai...
Dhanyavaad bhai.
bhai mast suspense banaya hai story me. ek baat jo ajeeb hai wo ye ki crimson ne pahle veer ko mara kyun nahin jab suhana ko goli lagi thi uske paas pura mauka tha
Koi toh kaaran raha hoga na. :smartm: Socho, socho.
aur agar usko us samay veer ko marna nahin tha to uske aadmiyon ne veer pe goli hi kyun chalai. ye ho sakta hai ki wo suhana ko bachana chahta tha isliye usne veer ko jane diya.
Fir Suhana ko goli lagne hi kyu deta? :dazed:
might be wo koi aisa hai jo suhana ko janta hai aisa ho skata hai ki wo pushkar ho jise marte samay system mil gaya ho ya usse koi related ho.
Pushkar ke prati logo ki itni strong feelings kyu aa rahi hai? :laugh:
kyuki wo sonia ka dost tha to ho sakta hai isliye usne suhana ko bachane diya veer ko. pushkar ki ava se koi problem ho sakti hai past me jis wajah se wo uske peeche pada ho to mujhe ye hi lag raha hai ki crimson ya to pushkar hai ya usse se related
Ava se problem hai toh baat kare. Uski maa ke paas kyu mandra raha hai? Aisa kya kar diya Ava ne jo usko maarne pe tul gaya woh. :laugh:
. ye just mer idea hai asli baat to aap hi likhoge per dimag ghooma ke rakha hai maja aa raha hai
Ghumaiye dimaag ko bhai. Ghumaaiye. :D Thoda brainstorming kariye. Aur uttar dhoondne ka prayaas kariye. Thanks a lot btw for the comment. Keep supporting! :five: ✨
 

Werewolf

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Ab to meko aur khujli ho rahi hai ab mai ye bhi bolna chahunga ki crimson ki kahi koi purane relation to nhi grace martin i mean natalia ke family ke sath :D khair Werewolf aate story ke review par to mai yhi kahunga brother ki iss story me pahle jaisa way ju jaanbuz ke khatm kar rahe ho meko aisa lag rela hai aur mai chahunga ki ju iss story ko jisse way me pahle likhte the usko ek baar checkout kro brother
Hein? :Jerry: Nahi toh!? Mein ussi way me likh raha hu jis way me kahani chalti aayi hai. Update 1 ko padh lo firse. Mujhe toh kahi koi changes na lag rahe. :think:
sirf meri tarf se ek request hai khair hum sab jante hai ki writter jaise jaise apni kalam aur soch badhate jaata hai waise waise uski soch aur bhi badhti jaati waise hi yaha bhi har Witter ke sath aisa hona normal hai jo ju ke sath bhi hua hai ju ki bhi transformation alag hi level pe hui padi hai writing ke mamle me ki ju kis tarike se har scenes ko samne laate ho aur hum readers ko show karte ho aur khas kar ju ke story ke har arc ek alag hi level se ju likhte ho jo dhire-dhire ju ne aur develop kia hai jo aaj epic stage par hai.
Haan iss baat se toh mein bhi sehmat hu. :approve:
Jaise jaise aap likhte jaate ho, aapki lekhni behtar hoti jaati hai.

Theme wahi hai meri writing ki, jo mein use karte aa raha hu. Shabdo ke chayan me kuch antar dekhne ko mil sakta hai. Baaki writing style meri wahi hai. Hum abhi bhi script form me hi chal rahe hai. Kahi ek aad jagah dialogues ke liye novel writing pattern ka istemaal mein kar deta hu. Ye tabhi karta hu jab naye character ko logo ke saamne laaya jaa raha ho.

Uska uddeshya hota hai ki readers ko turant naye characters ke baare me pata na lage script me unka naam padh kar. Baaki toh kahi koi changes nahi hai.
Ab aate hai aaj ke update par to brother bohot amazing aur simple chala ye update par kuch complicated matter isme the jo ju ne isme dikhaye jo future updates ke spoiler saaf jhalka rahe the.
Ohh! Aisa kya? :hinthint:
Aur aaj veer ne ava ki ankho me akela pan aur uss panap rahe dard ko bhanp lia jo ek tarah se bohot badhiya bhi hua kyunki ye jaruri bhi tha ava aur veer dono ke liye.Ava ko future me ek sathi i mean uss angle pe abhi mat jana mera matlab uske sath akelapan dur karne wala mil jayega(meko ye likhne pe bhi hasi rahi ye ava wali line:roflol:)aur rahi baat veer ki to usse uske sath i mean ahem-ahem seal tod ke thode mode points to kama hi lega:lol: khair aur bhi fayede hai missions jo ab milne suru honge jab ava ko pata chalega "meri maa ka kidnap ohh !! No" khair uske baad "Ding" "mission is on screen bhosdk" aisa likh aaye to maza aayega :D khair mission aapane suru honge ab.
Ju toh kaafi kuch soch ke baithe ho. :laugh:
Kherr hum dekhte hai kya hota hai. Already sab planned hai Crimson arc ka toh mera. Filhaal koi bhi sahi uttar nahi de paa raha hai. :nana:
Ab aate uss kaale bhalu par jo japani machli par line maar rela tha par uski kaali daal uss machli ke muh me jane se rahi aur n jane kis
Ehh?? :?: Nahi toh!? Chirs Terashima ko line maar raha tha? Mene toh aisa kahi nahi dikhaya. Unki baato me bhi ye zaahir nahi hota. Fir aisa kyu laga ju ko? :dontknow:
aur kya active hone ki baat kr rahe the khair ye dono crimson ke association i mean isai ke bande ya kaho to branch killers ho jo bande kidnap wagerah karte ho ya vip's ko target ke kidnap may be for crimson festival, ho sakta hai.
Ye jald pata lagega kaun hai woh.
Khair ab aate uss crimson namak launde par jise saaf lahje me bada wala chuuuuuutiya nhi kahna usko mujhe but ek baat kahna padega ki usne veer ko yaha bulane ka plan wahi house of killers arc ke samay se hi rach chuka tha :D jo aaj plan safal hua aur uska ye plan lastly ava ne hi safal kia jo planned tha yes veer ke liye ye plan tha but idhar ava ke liye i mean jis tarah hospital ka scene dikhaya wo lag raha hai crimson ava ki maa ka rishtedar na nikal pade bc nhi to ek alag hi hype ho jayegi idhar to. Haa ye bhi possible hai ki crimson ava ke father ka sautela beta ho.
Mein ek bohut bada spoiler dete dete bach gaya. Accha hua edit kar usse backspace maar diya. :shook:

Hmm! Crimson Ava ke baap ka sautela beta? Interesting!!! We'll see! We'll see! :D
Khair ab aate van me entry lene se pahle bodyguard wala scene haa uss samay lajmi thi ki koi bhi bodyguard gussa hoga but jab maine ye scene padha tha to mujhe ye bodyguard ke lakshan dekh lag rela tha ki isse veer ko dekh jalan ya gussa aaraha hai ki itni Sundar singer aur celebrity ke sath jo kisi gair shakhs ko apne pass tak na aan de aur veer uske sath khair lekin ye dout ju ne clear out krdi aur pata chala ki ava par attack hua tha iss liye usne bodyguards aur security hire ki hui hai waisa kuch ya kaho to kidnapping ki koshish khair lekin ek baat bolu to iss baat se kuch points samne aaye ki
Bodyguard bas usse ek annoying person ke roop me dekh raha tha. Baad me jab pata chala ki woh bhi madad ke liye hi hai toh uska behaviour narm pad gaya.
1)Jo kidnapper honge unka plan agar successful nhi hua to confirm ye ek preplanned attack ya sirf ek dikhawa tha attack ka jo ava ke dwara veer ko yaha paris me bulane ka plan tha crimson ka yes haa yahi ho sakta hai.
Sawaal yaha ye uthata hai ki Crimson Ava ke peeche pada kyu hai? :think: Agar pre-planned bhi tha attack toh Ava ke peeche jaane ka uddeshya kya hai? Veer ko bulaana? Par fir Grace Martin ko target kyu kiya jaa raha hai? :hinthint:
2)Aur dusra ye ki agar crimson ne kidnap karne ki koshish ki hoti simply to wo kr leta aur fail bhi nhi hota but agar uske association ya bando ke hisab se hum soche, jo aaj ke update me wo kaala admi aur japanese women bol rahi thi kal hume active ho jana hai to ye saaf hua yaha ki ye crimson ne sirf veer ko yaha bulane ke liye ava par fake attack krwaya tha khair yaha se crimson ke intelligence ki tulna kar hi sakte hai approx wo bohot high hoga veer se to sochne wali baat hai aur sab stats aur skills jo honge uske pass bc veer ki gand me daal dega wo skill ho sakta hai legendary bhi ho uske pass.
Yahi toh ek darr hai. Veer aur hume andaaza hi nahi hai uske paas akhir kya kya skills aur cards maujood hai.

Insaan anjaan cheez hi darrta hai. Veer ke saath bhi wahi hai. Koi clarity nahi hai uske paas.
3) Crimson khel gaya ek teer se do nishane mano to ektraf wo ava ke sath aur dusra uska sikar veer ke sath aur meko to ye bhi dout hai ki ava ke father ka kuch relation to nhi iss crimson festival se :roflol:ho sakta hai kuch bohot bada khuni khel i mean issitrah to ava ki mom comma me nhi jaa sakti aur uske father mar jaye
Ava ki mom head injury ke chalte coma me gayi thi. Pita Jayesh ka mujhe yaad nahi. Check karna hoga mene kya details likhi hai past ke updates me Jayesh ki maut ko lekar. Koi mere liye ye kaam kar de toh badi meherbaani hogi. :pray:
4)Aur ek aur point samne hai mere ki ava ke father may be koi serial killer ho sakte ho jinki death kisi ghatna ya police ya government ke karan hi hui ho aur crimson unka beta ya sautela beta ho sakta hai jisse apne pita se kuch jyada hi lagav ho aur usske lakshan dekh to yahi pratit hota hai "HOK" aur ye crimson festival isai se kuch related ho khair ye sab sirf ek soch thi aur bhi kuch kahani maine sochi insab ke hisab se :D bolo to ava ki maa ki bhi pel du ek-aadh story.
Ye waala possible nahi. Serial Killker hota Jayesh toh Ava ke liye mushqile badh jaati. Uska parivaar strict surveillance ke andar aa jaata. Zaahir hai Govt. Ya police fir aise chup nahi baithati. Ava ke liye success ke saare darwaaze band ho jaate. Toh hum ye deduce kar sakte hai ki Jayesh koi serial killer toh nahi tha at least.
Ab aate ava ki van aur price dene ki ava ko secure karne ke liye to veer ke attitude uss samay kaam kia akhir wo gift kaise le sakta na bilkul na wo bhi to kama raha tha haa aiyashi bilkul wo bhi karega wo future me jab wo uss mukam tak hoga par abhi bhi to ke hi raha hai aiyashi gulamo ke sath ek tarah se khair ab aate hai ava ke scenes par to haa ye to sahi hai ki ava unn dono se bohot alag hai aur akeli bhi jaha Kaera aur Sonia ke pass unka parivar unke pass to hai par yaha ava ke pass uska koi apna uske pass hote hue bhi soya hua hai aur ava sirf uski sanso aur dhadkano ke alawa kuch nhi sunn sakti khair veer ke sath wo
thodi-thodi khul rahi hai
Bilkul! Suhana se woh abhi itna mehnga gift le chuka hai. Baar baar yu leke woh apni pride ko yu neeche nahi girayega. Gifts sahi samay par diye gaye ho toh baat alag hai. Par ye toh hum jaante hai Ava extra me usse de rahi thi.

Kaise le leta woh? Warna Divya ki baat ko woh sahi na thehra deta? :laughing: Jab usne kaha tha, "suhana! Accha gigolo dhundha hai tumne."

So no faaltu gifts. :nana:

Rahi baat Ava ki toh sahi kaha man. Trinity me sabke paas kam se kam parivaar hai. Siwaye Ava ke. Maa saath hoke bhi saath nahi. Upar se uska koi accha dost nahi hai. Bas other celebs ke sang hi-hello, ek formality ka rishta hai.
aur ek aur baat ki ava apni mom ke pass jati to hogi hi milne bhale wo comma me ho par wo ek beti hai wo bhi akeli to haa wo apni maa se mil apne sari bate unse share jarur karti hogi bhale wo kuch sune ya na sune but haa ye to fix hai aur ava ne american hospital of paris jo america ka hi koi branch hai jisme usne apni mas ko rakha hai.
Kyu nahi jaati hogi. Bilkul jaati hai. :approve: Maa se baate karti hogi. Unhe bataati hogi kya kiya usne din bhar me. Bhale hi uski maa koi response na de. Par uske dil kl thandak pohuchti hai maa se baat karne me. Ek aas roz rehti hai. Ki aaj woh hosh me aayengi.

Thanks a lot for the massive revo man. :five:
Bc itna bada likha mere ko padhne me aur fir reply karne me aadhe ghante ke upar samay nikal gaya. :what1:

Par yahi sab toh accha lagta hai. :love2: Jab readers logis jo dil me aaya hai keh dete hai. Bas issi ki chaah mein rakhta hu. Umeed hai nice update waalo ko ju se seekhne ki kuch prerna milegi. :sigh2:

Once again thanks a lot man. ✨ And keep supporting! :shakehands: :thanx:
 

Werewolf

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Phir se ek shandar update...
Crimson arc ab dhire dhire mahol bnane lga h aur apna veer Ladkiyo me aur jyada chhane lga hai...... adbhut.
Sahi kahe ho ab. Mahaul bann raha hai. Dhanyavaad! ✨
Nice behtarin mast awesome update bro
Thanks
superb update brother
Ju bhi superb update par aa gaye? :sigh2:
awesome , super , fantastic update bro
Thanks
Ab ayega maza
Or ab update time par to aaye ge na
Schedule ke hisaab se chalenge. Koshish toh issi ki rahegi.
Behtrin umda

Mst
Bahut khas hoge aage ke update
Yes! Thanks a lot! ✨
Bhai Agla update kab tak aaega thoda Hint de do Intezar Nahin ho raha hai
Tomorrow night.
Werewolf 🐺🐺🐺बहुत ही भावुक क्षणों में पिरोया है Ava की मनोदशा को...
कई तर्ज पर विचार विमर्श करने को तैयार है विभिन्न किरदार.. 🎉
आज तो पूरी रूप रेखा तैयार है...
देखते हैं ये सब रहस्य रोमांच रोमांस कहा ले कर हमें जाता है
...
मजेदार भावनाओं के ओतप्रोत से भरपूर मनोरंजक अंक...
Bohut bohut dhanyavaad bhaaya. Aise hi bane rahiyega. ✨
 
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