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Thriller DIL,DOSTI AND REVENGE (action,thrill, suspense and romance)(Completed)

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UPDATE 40







Aarav- Bhai koi bhi lead nhi mil rahi hai. Yaar pata nhi kinda bhi hai ya nhi. Kuch idea to do ki kya Karu..



Main- yaar ek kaam Kar hamari company band hone ke baad 3-4 saal ke andar kitni company khuli hai. Or khaskr isi field me. Ye pata Kar.


Fir aarav lag Gaya kaam per. Karib 10 min. Baad


Aarav- Bhai karib 3 company khuli hai. Medicine ki field me.


Main- achha inke owner ki photos ko scan karo or prakash ki photo se match karo… agar isne apna chehra bhi badla hoga. Tab bhi iski aankhe jaroor kuch had Tak match hongi.


Aarav- kamaal idea hai Bhai. Abhi karta hu.


Uske baad usne scanning chalu ki and kuch der baad.


Aarav- Bhai Baki to kisi ka nhi lekin ek ki 75% match ho rahi hai. Iski aankhe sayad yahi apna sikar…


Main- ek kaam kr usko ek sms bhej de and agar bahi hai confirm ho to usko khi Milne ke liye bula Le.


Aarav-. Ok bhai abhi karta hu.


Uske baad aarav ne usko ek sms bhej diya and ab ham wait Karne lage. Ki koi response aaye baha se.


Or karib 30 min. Me hamara shak sahi nikal Gaya. Kyuki uska aisa reply aaya ki ham sab me khusi ki lehar daud gayi..


Fir aarav ne usko Milne ke liye aaj sham ko 5 baje ka time de diya.


Main- Bhai usse Milne aap jaoge. Or agar nakli hoga to aapko nhi pehchanega. Lekin agar asli prakash hoga to aapko turant pehchan lega.


Bhai- thik hai. Aisa hi karte hai..


Uske baad ham log time ka wait Karne lage. Hamne sab planning Karli. Yahi sab me hame 4 baj gye.


Main- aarav tune kaha bulaya hai use.


Aarav- Bhai Thames ke kinare ek restaurant me bulaya hai.


Main- thik hi. Bhai aap aage rahoge. Ham aapke aas pass hi rahege. Agar kahi koi gadbad lagegi to ham uspe Nazar banaye rakhenge. Or aarav tum koi transmitter de do. Jisse hame unki bate sunai deti rahegi.


Uske baad aarav ne bhai ko ek transmitter Diya or hamne use check Kiya and nikal pade apni jagah per. Karib 45 min me ham bha pahuche Gaye and ek dusri table per baith Kar uska intjaar Karne lage. Or Bhai kisi dusri table per baith Gaye. Karib 5 bje bo baha hame dikha.


Main- vo aa raha hai. Aap ready ho jao.


Bo bha pahucha or yaha baha dekhne laga. Tabhi Bhai ne use hath dikha Kar apne pass bulaya. Vo baha Gaya and jab usne Bhai ko gour se dekha to jaisa hamne Socha tha uska reaction bilkul baisa hi tha.


Prakash- Jay tum jinda ho. Magar kaise or tum to kafi jawaan lag rahe ho.ye kaise sambhav hai.


Bhai- ye sab tumhe itni jaldi samaj nhi aayega prakash. Lekin mujhe tumse ye ummid nhi thi. Tumne Meri sari mehnat per Pani fer Diya. Ye sab kyu Kiya tumne. Agar paise hi chahiye the to mujhse kehte me tumhe apni sari property de deta.


Prakash- bas karo tum ye Kya bake ja rahe ho. Me bhala tumhe kyu dhoka dunga. Tum mere sabse jigri dost the. Tumhe dhoka Dene se achha me mar Jana pasand karta.


Bhai- to tumne fir kyu Meri mehnat se banai company or Mera naam dono kyu kharab Kar diya. Or tumne mere pore parivar ko bhi nhi chhoda. Tumhe isi waqt maarne ka Dil Kar raha hai Mera.


Prakash- tum mujhe abhi ke abhi maar do lekin ye ganda iljam mat lagao mujh per. Me ye sab seh nhi paoga. Or dusri baat tum Jay nhi ho. Jaldi batao tum Kon ho nhi to sari jindgi yaha ki jail me chakki pisoge.


Bhai- wah Bhai wah. 100 chuhe kha Kar billi haj ko chali. Bulao police ko. Mere sath tum bhi jaoge. Usi jail me. Ye yaad rakhna. Mujhe jyada mehnat nhi karni padegi tumhe praksh sabit Karne me. Samjhe.


Prakash- ab to ye confirm ho gyaa ki tum Jay nhi ho. Isliye jldi bato ki Kon ho or kya chahte ho. Verna tumhare liye thik nhi hoga.kyuki Jay sab janta tha ki aage Kya hone Wala hai. Or kaise haalat aane wale hai.


Bhai- kya jnte the vo batao mujhe.


Prakash- pehle tum batao ki Kon ho tum. Or me tumhe ye sab kyu batao.


Bhai- me veer hu. Jay Pratap ka beta. Ab agar tumne jaldi hi batana suru nhi Kiya to yahi Thames me tumhari lash tairti najar aayegi sab ko.


Prakash- me kaise maan lu.


Fir Bhai ne apna passport dikhaya. Tab use yakin hua.


Prakash- tum Sach me veer hi hona. Dekho agar ye sab jhoot hua to thik nhi hoga.


Bhai- me Sach keh raha hu. Or aapko yakin ho ya na ho isse mujhe koi dark nhi padne Wala. Sach to me aaj nhi to Kal jaan hi lunga. Lekin aap apni fikar keejiye. Me aapka Kya hars Karne Wala hu. Agar aapne mujhe Sach nhi bataya to.


Prakash- Kya tum akele hi Bache ho ya or koi bhi hai.


Bhai- me or Mera Bhai dono hi jinda hai.


Prakash- Kya surya jinda hai. Mujhe usse Milne hai. Mujhe use dekhna hai.


Bhai- vo abhi yaha nhi hai. Vo India me hai. Or yakin maniye. Vo mujhse jyada khatarnak hai. Or agar use ye baate pata chali to pata nhi Kya karega vo. Isliye mujhe aap pori sachhai bataiye. Yahi aapke liye theek rahega.


Prakash- thik hai me tumhe vo sab batoga Jo mujhe pata hai. Baki pora Sach to keval Jay hi janta tha.


Bhai- thik hai boliye me sun raha hu.


Prakash- yaha nhi tum mere Ghar Chalo bahi me tumhe sab Bata dunga. Yaha khatra ho sakta hai.


Bhai- yaha kaisa khatra ho sakta hai.


Prakash- Meri Bata Mano or Chalo mere sath.


Uske baad Bhai uske sath Jane lage and gadi me baith ke nikal gye. And ham bhi unke peechhe chlne lge.bhai se ham contact me the. Baha ki sari bate hme sunayi de rahi thi.




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Boht khoob yar itna to pakka ha ka hero party par dushman abhi bhi nazar rakhe hoye ha ab is prakash sa boht sa raaz khulega
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Yakinan is prakash ka ek bahut hi ahem role hai isme. Jo aapko aage pata chalega...


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Kahin unke pariwar ki death/murder ka reason DNA mutation par based woh research toh nahin thi na?
Yh kis naye locker ki key mili hai surya ko?
Veer ka peechha Kaun Kar raha tha aur kyun?
Prakash ne Jay KO dhokha diya sirf paison ke liye ya us dhokhe ke peeche koi aur wajah thi ya waqai mein Prakash ne dhokha diya tha Jay ko ya iske peechhe kisi aur ka haath hai?
Aur yash ki eye color ke peechhe ka kia raaz hai kahin Surya ki speed aur yash ki eyes ka raaz isi research mein toh nahin na?
Aur yash zinda bhi hai ke nahin? Aur agar hai toh kahan hai?
Waiting for your next update
Thanks for your support Bhai.......


Bhai aapne to bahut sare sawal poochh liye ek sath.....
Me bas itna hi kahunga ki aapke kuch doubt sahi hai..... Baki aage story ko paste rahiye. Sab clear ho jayega....


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Thanks for your support Bhai.......


Bhai aapne to bahut sare sawal poochh liye ek sath.....
Me bas itna hi kahunga ki aapke kuch doubt sahi hai..... Baki aage story ko paste rahiye. Sab clear ho jayega....


Keep supporting......


Next update de diya hai......
Hahaha ek story mein parha tha ki sawal bante hi kahaniyon se hai
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UPDATE 41







Hum log unke pechhe bane hue the. Karib 30 min. Me vo ek alishan Ghar me andar ghus gaya and humne gate se kuch doori per hi apni gadi park Kar li.

Main- aarav ISS transmitter ki range to achhi Haina. Werna pata Chala ki andar ki koi bhi baat hame sunai hi na de..

Aarav- bhai no tension. Ise Mene banaya hai. Ye 10km ka radius cover karti hai. Isliye aap range or network ki chinta chhod do bus unki bato per focus Karo.

Main- ok.


Hum unki bato ka wait karne lage. Kyuki ab hame kuch dikh to Raha nhi tha. Keval unki bate hi sun sakte the. Tabhi hame aawaj aayi.


Prakash- Kya loge beta.

Bhai- sach

Prakash- thik hai to suno.


Jay or main clg me mile the thode hi samay me hamari dosti kafi gehri ho gyi thi. Yaha Mera koi Ghar nhi tha to me hostal me rehta tha. Lekin Jay ne Mujhe apna dost banaya to usne hostal ki jagah Mujhe uske sath rehne ko offer kiya. Kyuki vo bhi akela rehta tha. Mene bhi uski baat maan li or hum dono sath me rehne lage. Roj clg jate and saam ko masti karte. Hamari life achhi chal rahi thi. Or isi prakar hamara CLG bhi end ho gaya. Hum dono ne medical science me PH.D ki thi. Vo ek kusal scientist tha or uske sath rehke me bhi achha scientist ban gaya tha. Clg KE baad vo Ghar aaya. And jab kuch mahino baad bo bapis aaya to uski Sadi ho chuki thi vo bhabi ko sath leke aaya tha. Hum sab bahut kush the. Usne apne sabhi dosto ko bula Kar ek grand party bhi organized ki thi. Fir humne kuch time Tak ek science lab me ek scientist ko assist kiya jisse hame kafi knowledge mila. Fir jab Maine Jay SE aage KE bare me pochha to usne bataya ki bo medicine ka business karna chahta hai. Kifayti medicine bana Kar logo ki bhalai karna chahta tha. Mene uske is faisle ka samman kiya and hum logo ne medicine banane KE liye bahut sari ayurbed or Bharat ki poranik kitabo ka adhyan kiya. Or usi per aage kaam karna suru Kar diya hame jaldi hi safalta Milne lagi thi. Humne aayurved or science ko ek karke medicine banana start kiya. Or unko market me utara. Suru me to kafi problem hui. Lekin jab unka asar suru hua to Sara England dekhta reh gaya. Kaisi bhi beemari kyu na ho hamari medicine se record time me theek ho rahi thi. Medicine thi bhi kafi khifayti. Isliye hamari company rato raat famous hone lagi. Or baki company ko tala lagne laga. Fir humne India me bhi apni ek branch kholi and sath me lagbhag har chhote bade desh me. Hamari Kam se Kam ek branch to thi hi. Hum sab logo ka bhala Kar rahe the hamari Company har jagah no.1 ki position per thi. Jisse hamare jalne walo ki list lambi hoti ja rahi thi. Lekin hame unse koi dar nhi tha. Na hi vo hamara kuch bigaad pa rahe the. Is beech uske yaha tumhara janm hua. Hum sab kafi kush the. Halaki tumhara janm gaon me hua tha. Kyuki tumhare dadaji yahi chahte the. Lekin usse hame Kya. Tumhara janm yaha ho ya baha rahoge to hamare sath hi. Aise hi hamari life maje se Kat rahi thi. Karib 3 Saal baad Mujhe Jay ne bato KE dauran banaya ki vo ek aisi dawai bana Raha hai. Jo insaan ko kabhi beemar hi nahi hone degi. Matlab ki agar ye experiment kamyaab ho jata hai to insaan ko docter ya medicine ki kabhi jarurat hi nhi hogi. Or insan khud me itna saksham ho jayega ki pochho hi mat. Ek tarah se kahe to super human banane ki dawai bana Raha tha vo. Mujhe ye vichar kafi interesting laga. Lekin agar doctor or medicine ki kisi ko jarurat hi nhi hogi to fir hamari dawai kon kharidega. Mene usko ye bola to usne kaha ki ye agar ban gayi to bese bhi kabhi tumhe kaam karne ki jarurat hi nahi hogi.kyuki ye dawai ek gold mine hogi Jo agar ham saste se saste Damo me bhi bechege to bhi ham itne Ameer ho jayenge ki Paisa ginne ka time nhi hoga hamare pass.or fir un paiso se apan koi or business suru Kar lenge.mujhe ye baat bahut sahi lagi. Fir usne mujhe bola ki ye baat abhi raaj hi rahe to behtar hai. Warna agar ye baat Bahar aayi to pata nhi Kya hoga. Isliye ye jab Tak ban nhi jati. Tab Tak isko raaj hi rakhna. Maine usko viswas dilaya ki ye baat mere seene me dafan hi rahegi.maine usse pochha ki lagbhag jab Tak ye medicine complete ho jayegi.to usne mujhe 2 Saal ka time bataya.or fir bo din raat usko banane me lag gaya. Me uski madad karna chahta tha lekin fir company ko sambhalne Wala koi nhi tha. To usne mujhe isse door hi rakha.karib 2 Saal baad me usse Milne gaya Ghar per to bhabi se pata Chala ki bo kahi Bahar gaya hai kuch dino me aa jayega. To Mene fir us per jyada dhyan nhi diya karib 20 dino ke baad bo office aaya and Maine usko dekha to uski sakal utri hui thi. Mene usse pochha ki Kya hua to usne bataya ki uska experiment baar baar fail ho Raha hai. ISS liye usne is file ko band Kar diya hai.mene usko Meri help ki baat kahi to usne kaha ki ab koi fayeda nhi hai kyuki Mene gusse me usse releted sare documents Jala diye hai. Jisse Mujhe kafi dhakka laga. Ki usne apni salo ki mehnat ko aag ke hawale Kar diya. Lekin. Ab kiya Kya ja sakta tha. Fir kuch mahine or beete. Lekin in mahino me bo bahut jyada tension me rehta tha. Mene kai baar pochhne ki kosis ki lekin usne nhi bataya. Or Mujhe bhi

Laga ki sayad uska experiment safal nhi hua isi wajah se bo thoda tension me hai. Lekin isi dauran khabar mili ki bhabi dobara se pregnant hui hai. Jisse hum sab me fir se khusi ki lahar doud padi. Or kuch samay baad Surya ka janm hua. Or uske baad bo gaon Chala gaya. Jaha se bo teeno hi bapis. Unke sath tum nhi the. Mere pochhne per usne bataya ki dadaji ne tumhe bahi rakh liya hai. Khair ab hamare pass khelne KE liye Surya aa gaya. Tha.tumhari yaad aati thi lekin Surya usko poora Kar deta tha. Dheere dheere samay gujarta ja Raha tha lekin Jay ki tension me koi kami nahi aayi Ulta uski tension samay KE sath badti ja rahi thi.tang aa Kar Maine ek baar use apni dosti ki kasam dekar pochha to usne bataya ki.

Yaar kuch gadbad ho gyi hai. Pata nhi kaise kuch mafia balo ko khabar lag gyi hai ki Mene koi aisi medicine banai hai jisse hum super human bana sakte hai. Vo log Mujhe baar baar paresan Kar rahe hai. Maine unko Kai baar bol diya hai ki Mera experiment safal nhi hua hai lekin vo log manne ko ready hi nhi hai. Unhone PAYAL ko nuksaan pahuchane ki bhi kosis ki hai 1-2 baar. Or Maine gusse me aakar unke na Jane kitne hi aadmiyo ko mout KE ghat utar diya hai. Lekin vo log nhi maan rahe hai.bo mujhse us medicine ko maang rahe hai Jo mere pass hai hi nhi. Or agar hoti bhi to me mar jata lekin unko nhi deta. Isliye yaar Mujhe apni nahi balki apne pariwar ki chinta ho rahi hai. Kyuki vo mera past future sab kuch jaante hai.kahi vo log mere pariwar ko kuch na Kar de bus isi tension me yaha SE baha ghoom Raha hu.mere hath aate bhi nhi hai sale. Mene un Tak pahuchne ki bahut kosis ki lekin sale mere samne nhi aa rahe. Or agar aa gye to fir bo jinda nhi bachne wale. Sayad bo log ISS baat ko jante hai isliye Meri peeth peechhe waar Kar rahe hai Taki me toot jao.bus yahi tension Mujhe khai ja rahi hai.

Maine jab uski baat suni to me to sann reh gaya. Ki kaise kisi ko pata chal sakti hai ye baat. Mere or Jay ke alawa ye baat sayad koi nhi jaanta tha. Ya fir kahi kisi ne hamari bate sun li ho ye bhi ho sakta tha. Ha yahi hua hoga kisi ne hamari bate sun li hogi yaha office me or Chand paiso KE liye ye baat un Tak pahuchai hogi. Jis baat per jay bhi sehamt tha. Hamne kafi kosis ki. Ki ye sab SE hamara pechha chhut Jaye lekin kuch fayeda nhi hua. Bo log kuch dino Tak shant rehte and fir suru ho jate. Or Kai baar unke hamlo ko Jay ne nakam kiya tha. Aise hi Surya ke 8be janmdin per bo sab gaon Gaye. Hue the. Lekin agle hi din baha SE Jo khabar aayi. Use sun Kar to me jaise koma Chala gaya. Mujhe pata Chala ki gaon me Jay or uska poora pariwar aag me jal gaya.sab kuch khatam ho gaya.tha. Mujhe yakin tha ki ho na ho ye kaam unhi logo ka hoga. Sayad bo Jay ko na marna chahte ho lekin ab bo bhi nhi Raha tha. Jisse unke safe armano per Pani to fir hi gaya tha. Fir kuch time baad Jay ke bakeel ne will padi jisme sab kuch uske Beto KE naam tha lekin ab bo bhi nhi rahe the to sab kuch mere naam ho gaya tha. Jise Maine swikar kiya and company ko bese hi chalane laga jaisi pehle chal rahi thi.karib 6 mahine hi beete honge ki Mujhe unhi mafia balo KE thread aane lage the. Vo mujhse kehte the ki tum jante hi hoge ki usne vo medicine kaha rakhi hui hai. Mujhe besumar Paisa dene ko bhi ready the lekin Mene unko bahi bataya ki bo sab kabhi ban hi nhi paya. Lekin unko bhi Meri baat per yakin nhi aaya or vo log Mujhe todne ki kosis karne lage. Halaki Mera koi apna tha hi nhi to unhone vo nakli medicine wali chal chali. Taki me jail jao ya fir unke kabje me ho jao. Fir vo log Mujhe torcher Kare. Lekin jab Mujhe ye sab pata Chala to Mene foran hi yaha se gayab ho gaya.or kisi dusri country me Jake apni plastic surgery karwa li. Taki koi bhi Mujhe pehchan na sake.or hua bhi bahi. Aaj Tak Mujhe koi bhi pehchan nhi paya. Fir Maine bapis aake ek dusri company suru ki tumhare or Surya ke naam per. And usme bhi me bahi medicine banane laga. Or logo ki bhalai karne laga.bus yahi thi Kahani tumhare parents ki.

Lekin tumne Mujhe pehchana kaise.

Bhai- aapki aankho ne aapko pakadba diya. Aapne cehra bhale hi badal diya ho lekin aapki aankhe nhi badli. Lekin ye aapne kiski identity li hai.

Prakash- mera ek dost tha India me uski kuch time pehle death ho gyi thi. India me. Me uske antim sanskaar me bhi gaya tha. Usi ki identity Mene le li thi baad me.

Bhai- ab Mujhe aap ye bataiye ki vo kon SE mafia ke log the Jo Papa KE pechhe pade the. Unko dhood dhood Kar maruga me. Khud apne hatho se.

Prakash- dekho beta Jo ho Chuka hai use bhool jao. Abhi tumhare samne pori jindgi padi hai.unko tum maar bhi doge tab bhi Jay and PAYAL bhabi bapis nhi aane wale. Or ye tumhare liya achhi khabar hai ki unlogo ko tumhare jinda hona ka pata nhi hai. Warna vo log ab Tak tumhare pechhe pad Gaye. Hote. So apni life ko injoy Karo or in sab bato ko bhool jao.or Surya ka khayal rakho.abhi vo sayad 18 Saal ka hi hua hoga to usko abhi tumhari sabse jyada jarurat hogi. Isliye tum uska dhyan rakho. Or baki bato ko apne dimaag SE nikal do……





To be continued……….
 

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Hahaha ek story mein parha tha ki sawal bante hi kahaniyon se hai
Khair waiting for your next update
Thanks for your support Bhai....


Bakai apki baat me 100% sachhai hai...isliye apne sawal pochhte rahe...

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Boht khoob yar ya kya prakash ka to character jaisa dikh raha ha ya hero side ha
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Bhai aksar jaisa dikhta baisa hi ho ye jaruri nhi..... Baki apna sath banaye rakhe....

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