Acchi kahani likhi hai aapne ... much better than your previous one ... woh to maine beech mae hi pahdni chod di thi ... too raw and unerotic. Isme suspence action eroticism sab hai aur acche se darshaya hai aapne, aur suspence kholne ka tareeka bhi accha hai ... carry on ... but add some 3-some action if you can - with Anjali and Deepa aur/or Seema and Deepa.
waise Ruchi kab chudegi aur kis se ... aur baki dono bete ka bhi role aaye aage I hope nahi to hummare appendix jaise lag rahe hain ... unka hona na noha ek barabar hain abhii tak to ... hope Sakshi is let off. Ruchi ne theek kaha - she should not pay for her mother's crimes. But I am really looking forward to Anita and Tushar. I hope the time he is spending with her makes him more polished. Mujhe nahi lagta Anita ko galiyan khate hue chudna pasand ayega. aur ab to uski beti bhi aa rahi hai ... usse sudharne ka tareeka Tushar ki tangon ke beech me hai ... jo natak Anita karne wali hai wo usse Tushar ke neeche laa kar rahega. aur mujhe surprise nahi hoga agar twins ki maa Kamini nikle - Tushar ki bua.
jo bhi hoga interesting hoga ... thanks for your imagination, time and effort ...