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Update 263 ONE TWO THREE Posted Masti Mai padhne ka bindaas likes aur revoes pelne ka
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Adultery Raj-- hero of the family
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Tiger 786
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Ha ha ha .....story ab fast track par he jane wali h...ek saal ka gap par sawal ye h ki akhir kyo ??????
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Bilkul jayegi par abhi nahi ..abhi toh action ka time h
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Sandeep bhai
Kya karwa kar manoge
Deepika to safe ho gayi
But Ajay aur janvi ke wajeh se haveli bhi safe ho jayegi
Kyoki unko sab pata chal jayega
Aur beema chacha alert ho jayenge
Ak ak ko chun chun kar marenge
But ap har kisi ko kaise bachaoge
But mujhe pata h ap bacha loge
Kyoki abhi kuch kirdar chupe hue h
Jaise wo wideshi fighter
Wo seene unki behan ka hona chahiye tha
Road wala jo apne pucha tha
Maza aagaya
Mujhe to deth hello aur raj ki fight ka intjar h
Aur mujhe is bar aisa kyo lagta h
Ki poonam aayegi fir se raj ko bachane
Is bar ak game aur mere demag mai aaya h
Kyoki dada ji ko pandit ne bataya tha
Ki raj ki pahli shadi hogi aur raj ko pata bhi n chalega
Kahi is fighte ke beech raj ke khoon se poonam ki mang to n bharne wale ap
Kyoki poonam ki kanya rashi h
Aur poonam hi kai bar apni jaan ko dav par laga kar raj ko bachayegi
Maza aa gaya pad kar
Kya karwa kar manoge
Deepika to safe ho gayi
But Ajay aur janvi ke wajeh se haveli bhi safe ho jayegi
Kyoki unko sab pata chal jayega
Aur beema chacha alert ho jayenge
Ak ak ko chun chun kar marenge
But ap har kisi ko kaise bachaoge
But mujhe pata h ap bacha loge
Kyoki abhi kuch kirdar chupe hue h
Jaise wo wideshi fighter
Wo seene unki behan ka hona chahiye tha
Road wala jo apne pucha tha
Maza aagaya
Mujhe to deth hello aur raj ki fight ka intjar h
Aur mujhe is bar aisa kyo lagta h
Ki poonam aayegi fir se raj ko bachane
Is bar ak game aur mere demag mai aaya h
Kyoki dada ji ko pandit ne bataya tha
Ki raj ki pahli shadi hogi aur raj ko pata bhi n chalega
Kahi is fighte ke beech raj ke khoon se poonam ki mang to n bharne wale ap
Kyoki poonam ki kanya rashi h
Aur poonam hi kai bar apni jaan ko dav par laga kar raj ko bachayegi
Maza aa gaya pad kar
ellysperry
Humko jante ho ya hum bhi de apna introduction
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Bhai dono ka mila ker 125 se uper ho gyaUpdate 215 posted Masti mai padhne ka bindass likes aur revoes pelne ka
Update 216 posted Masti mai padhne ka bindass likes aur revoes pelne ka ...
Abki baar 125 paar
ellysperry
Humko jante ho ya hum bhi de apna introduction
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Iske liye v agr writer ko likes mangne pade to story pdna band kr deni chahiye hum readers ko hum iss story ke layak he nhi hai
Ek ek scene karine se likha gya hai sath mai emotions v hai gjb bhai aur jo lst mai ek suspense hota hai wo aane wale update ke intizar ke liye adhir kr deta hai
Intizar rahega mandawa mai Rajan ka
Ek ek scene karine se likha gya hai sath mai emotions v hai gjb bhai aur jo lst mai ek suspense hota hai wo aane wale update ke intizar ke liye adhir kr deta hai
Intizar rahega mandawa mai Rajan ka
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Bhai JB Jung Hoti h to Marty b zakhmi or Marty dono trf hn kia pata is Jung Mai raj apni family ko bachaty huwy zakhmi ho gia ho or agr ziyada Kuch huwa ho or qoma Mai chla gia ho
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Jatin bhai ab kya he kahe kahne par bhi hath kaanp jate h to kuch apna ego le ate h ki kah kyo raha h ...aur jab writer story request karne ke baad bhi akhir thak haarkar chod jata h tab ...update mangte h....mujhe nahi pata kitne writer honge jo lagatar update dete h but ha itna pata h ki 200 update tak bina ruke dene wale ungliyo par gin sakte h ...yanha koyi award nahi milta h isliye 100 updates ke baad toh writer ki kuch umide ho he jati h wanhi yanha h ...