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Character
Shakshi - 40
Suraj - shakshi ka beta - 18+
Vikram - Shakshi ka Dever 38
Kanti Lal - 65
Shakshi - 40
Suraj - shakshi ka beta - 18+
Vikram - Shakshi ka Dever 38
Kanti Lal - 65
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Mast shuruat ab bete ke samne uski mummy uske chacha ke sath bister garam karegiUpdate 01
Ek chote se Gaav me sam ho Rahi thi...Sara gaav sunhara ho raha tha ese me shakshi aapne Ghar ki chat pe bethi apane pati ko call karati he...
Shakshi - Hello ji.. Suraj ke Papa.. kuch toh boliye na....
Samane se phone cut ho jata he aur yaha shakshi ki aakhe bhar aati he...
thodi hi der me shakshi ke mobile me kisi ka call aata he....
Shakshi - Ji maa...
shakshi ki maa - beta kab tak vaha rahegi hamare pass chali aa.. ye bhi tera hi Ghar he na meri bacchi...
shakshi - Maa me nahi aane vali.. Aur aap bhi chinta mat kijiye me thik hu...sab thik hi jayegaa muje pura bharosa he...
aur dono maa Beti kuch samay ek dusre apana man halka karati he....
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Kantilal (bapuji) kheto se aa raha tha ki raste me use unka dost Champaklal mil gaya...aur dono apas me baate karane lage.... Champaklal Buddha jarur tha lekin uski kamvasana abhi tak kam nahi hue thi...ye bakiyo ki Bahu betiyo pe toh nazar rakhta hi tha lekin apni khud ki Bahu ko bhi apni aur karane ke petare karata tha... Kuch hi der me baat shakshi par aai...
champak Lal - Yaar Tera beta toh ab aane se raha vapas is gaav me aur... Mene toh suna tha uske maa baap use apane pass bula rahe he...
kanti lal - Me bhi bol hi Raha hu use ki yaha kya rakha he chali ja apane Ghar.. aur kisi ke sath Ghar basa le abhi toh puri jindagi padi he... Lekin vo sune tab na...
champak lal man me sochta he are pagal meri Bahu hoti toh ab tak meri baho me hoti... Aur vo apane khyalo me shakshi ko sochane lagata he... Sawala gathila badan.. kamuk muskaan... patali kamar... champalal ke muh me Pani aa jata he....
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kantilal - kya hua Champak... Kis soch me dub gaya...
Chamak lal - Kitana Nalayak ladaka he Tera Jo Shakshi bahu jesi sanskari susil patni ko chod Sahar ki bachalan aurat ke piche bhag raha he....
Kanti Lal - Esi aulaad se accha toh aulaad hi na ho...
champak Lal - Toh kya Shakshi bitiya yahi rahane vali he... Tu toh samajhdar he Kanti... Accha toh nahi lagta lekin me bol raha hu... Ki us nalayak Virendra ke bare me sab ko pata he aur tuje toh pata he ki Gaav me kese kese log he bin mard ki aurat ke piche toh.... Maaf karana...
kanti Lal bhi champak ki esi baat apani bahu ke bare me sun ke apani Babu ko na chahate hue bhi aaj Subhah vale Avatar me soch leta he...jab vo naha ke aai thi...use chai Dene... Vo apani Bahu ke backless blouse me dikh rahe jism me kho sa gaya tha...ek pal ke liye toh use hua ki abhi pakad ke gale se laga le...
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Kanti lal - Tu bol toh thik raha he... Lekin vo bolti he ki vo uske bete ko ab apane dada se bhi dur nahi karegi...kyu ki ek pita vala pyar toh me de sakta hu use.... Aur syad use abhi tak ummid he ki uska pati aj nahi toh kal lot ke aayegaa hi....
Champak Lal - Dekh esa he toh apane chote bete se shaadi kyu nahi karava deta bahu ki... Is se use Jana bhi nahi hoga aur.. Vikram ka bhi ghar bas jayega...
Kanti Lal - (ye baat sun ke uski hotho pe ek muskaan aa gai) ye baat muje kyu nahi Suzi... Lekin chota bhi kaha thik he... Usne bhi ye nahi vo nahi bol bol ke apani shadi ki Umar nikal di he... Aur kya vo apani bhabhi se hi shaadi ke liye manega bhi...
Champak Lal - Shakshi aur vo ek hi Umar ke honge na aur use ab kon dega apani beti...muje nahi lagata vo mana karega agar tu thoda sakthi se bole...
kanti Lal - Ha Baat karake dekhata hu... Chal milate he fir....
aur Kanti lal apane Ghar ki aur chal dete he....
To be Continued...
welcome to the forum and congratulations on your first story.Update 01
Ek chote se Gaav me sam ho Rahi thi...Sara gaav sunhara ho raha tha ese me shakshi aapne Ghar ki chat pe bethi apane pati ko call karati he...
Shakshi - Hello ji.. Suraj ke Papa.. kuch toh boliye na....
Samane se phone cut ho jata he aur yaha shakshi ki aakhe bhar aati he...
thodi hi der me shakshi ke mobile me kisi ka call aata he....
Shakshi - Ji maa...
shakshi ki maa - beta kab tak vaha rahegi hamare pass chali aa.. ye bhi tera hi Ghar he na meri bacchi...
shakshi - Maa me nahi aane vali.. Aur aap bhi chinta mat kijiye me thik hu...sab thik hi jayegaa muje pura bharosa he...
aur dono maa Beti kuch samay ek dusre apana man halka karati he....
................
Kantilal (bapuji) kheto se aa raha tha ki raste me use unka dost Champaklal mil gaya...aur dono apas me baate karane lage.... Champaklal Buddha jarur tha lekin uski kamvasana abhi tak kam nahi hue thi...ye bakiyo ki Bahu betiyo pe toh nazar rakhta hi tha lekin apni khud ki Bahu ko bhi apni aur karane ke petare karata tha... Kuch hi der me baat shakshi par aai...
champak Lal - Yaar Tera beta toh ab aane se raha vapas is gaav me aur... Mene toh suna tha uske maa baap use apane pass bula rahe he...
kanti lal - Me bhi bol hi Raha hu use ki yaha kya rakha he chali ja apane Ghar.. aur kisi ke sath Ghar basa le abhi toh puri jindagi padi he... Lekin vo sune tab na...
champak lal man me sochta he are pagal meri Bahu hoti toh ab tak meri baho me hoti... Aur vo apane khyalo me shakshi ko sochane lagata he... Sawala gathila badan.. kamuk muskaan... patali kamar... champalal ke muh me Pani aa jata he....
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kantilal - kya hua Champak... Kis soch me dub gaya...
Chamak lal - Kitana Nalayak ladaka he Tera Jo Shakshi bahu jesi sanskari susil patni ko chod Sahar ki bachalan aurat ke piche bhag raha he....
Kanti Lal - Esi aulaad se accha toh aulaad hi na ho...
champak Lal - Toh kya Shakshi bitiya yahi rahane vali he... Tu toh samajhdar he Kanti... Accha toh nahi lagta lekin me bol raha hu... Ki us nalayak Virendra ke bare me sab ko pata he aur tuje toh pata he ki Gaav me kese kese log he bin mard ki aurat ke piche toh.... Maaf karana...
kanti Lal bhi champak ki esi baat apani bahu ke bare me sun ke apani Babu ko na chahate hue bhi aaj Subhah vale Avatar me soch leta he...jab vo naha ke aai thi...use chai Dene... Vo apani Bahu ke backless blouse me dikh rahe jism me kho sa gaya tha...ek pal ke liye toh use hua ki abhi pakad ke gale se laga le...
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Kanti lal - Tu bol toh thik raha he... Lekin vo bolti he ki vo uske bete ko ab apane dada se bhi dur nahi karegi...kyu ki ek pita vala pyar toh me de sakta hu use.... Aur syad use abhi tak ummid he ki uska pati aj nahi toh kal lot ke aayegaa hi....
Champak Lal - Dekh esa he toh apane chote bete se shaadi kyu nahi karava deta bahu ki... Is se use Jana bhi nahi hoga aur.. Vikram ka bhi ghar bas jayega...
Kanti Lal - (ye baat sun ke uski hotho pe ek muskaan aa gai) ye baat muje kyu nahi Suzi... Lekin chota bhi kaha thik he... Usne bhi ye nahi vo nahi bol bol ke apani shadi ki Umar nikal di he... Aur kya vo apani bhabhi se hi shaadi ke liye manega bhi...
Champak Lal - Shakshi aur vo ek hi Umar ke honge na aur use ab kon dega apani beti...muje nahi lagata vo mana karega agar tu thoda sakthi se bole...
kanti Lal - Ha Baat karake dekhata hu... Chal milate he fir....
aur Kanti lal apane Ghar ki aur chal dete he....
To be Continued...