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Waah dost wahh!!! Tumhare iss story ke sare updates padhe maine har roj bas 1 ya 2 hi updates padh pata tha kyuki busyness chakker me time hi nhi mil pata tha aur ab bhi wahi hal hai pr hamesha se jab se story read karni shuru kiya hu tumhara bas besabri se intejar hota tha ki kab time mile aur...

Ab bhai ji mai story pe kya hi comments Karu ya aur kuchh kahu kyuki mujhe khud ko bhi nhi pata hai ki story kaise likhte hai kya kya add karna chahiye... Pr hota hai na ki kuchh bhi ho na ho pr ek chij jarur aisa hota hai jo aapko pasand ho aur wahi chij mujhe aapke story me mil rha hai isliye...

Ye baat aapne bilkul sahi kahi hai ki agar kuchh intrested na ho to use krne ka mn nhi krta hai pr agar hamesha sabhi chije intrested hi ho jaye aisa bhi to possible nhi hai mere nazariye se... Pr mujhe sach me ye jaan kr khushi hui hai pure dil se ki aapne ye chij anubhav kiya aur isse bahar...

Aapki story padhkar mujhe bahut achha lga bhai , mai jaisi story padhna chahta tha ye bilkul waisi hi hai ....... Dukhon ka bhandaar hote hue bhi apne jivan me aage badhna tatha jivan me aaye dukho ke karni se ladna ye mujhe bahut pasand aata hai .. .. .. ... Maine iss forum pe kai sqri stories...

Aur isme ho sake to gif aur pics bhi add krna aur behtar lagega. baki writter mahoday ki mrji hai

Story thoda suspense wala lgta hai aur title bhi achha hai... Congratulation for new story 🤠🤠🤠 And as usual wating for the next update

Update ??????

Bhai yrr kahani majedar hai aaye kirdar bhi bahut sare hai to thoda fast chalta hai, pr aaj ka thoda sa jyada hi fast lga mujhe. Ye action seen thoda sa aur detail me hona chahiye tha aur sex seen bhi...... . Baki sex hardcore tha , pussy fucking aur anal sex dono ek sath me dikhaya wo achha...

Ye to gajab hogya mtlb socha nhi tha ki surajbhan itni jaldi mara jayega . Aur surajbhan mara gya hai mtlb abhi isse bhi bada dusman aayega ? Pr isme ye sare seen kuchh jyada hi jaldi jaldi run ho rha tha aisa lga mujhe aur surajbhan wala seen bhi ............? Khair jo bhi ho hame next update...

Gajabbbbbb yrrr , ab dekhte hai rudra kya krta hai

Bas yrr aap updates time pe dena aur story bhi complete karna , bahut se writter shuru karte hi 10 se 12 update pe incomplete hi chhor dete hai aap waisa Mt krna......

Nayi kahani ke liye congratulations 👏🎉🎉 And abhi to padhne me achha laga mujhe ,ab aage kya kya hota hai wo dekhte hai . Pr shuruaat achha kiya hai aapne , and aal the best for the nex update ....... And as usual wating for the next wonderful and more interesting updates:):):)

Keep writing, I'm always with story and writter. Update please 😸😃.........

Kya mast likha hai yrr apne . Mja aa gya , apne tarike se likhe story me jo baat hoti hai wo alg hi mja aata hai ,gajjabbb bhai gajjabbbbbbb But as usual wating for next one.

Aaj Friday hai aaj update milega :think: