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Nice and awesome update...Update 1
Ek aurat jangalo ke bich me se bahut tez bhagi jaa rahi thi, uske pairon me kaanto ki vajah se jakham ho chuke the uski halat bahut kharab thi, vo bhagte bhagte thak chuki thi. Lekin vo phir bhi ek ladke ko apni god me liye bhage jaa rahi thi. Vo ladka dara sehma usse chipaka hua tha.
Baccha - choti maa!
Aurat - bas beta thodi der aur hum pahuch hi jayenge. Ek baar ghar pahuch jaye phir sab thik ho jayega.
Baccha - Maa kya hum marne vale hai.
Aurat - nahi bacche kuch nahi hoga, choti maa hai na aapke sath. Bas thodi der aur.
Uss aurat ke piche kam se kam 20 aadmi pade hue the. Hathiyaron ke sath.
Aadmi - are kutto kya apni gaand mara rahe ho jaldi pakdo uss aurat ko. Bach ke Jane naa paye.
Agar vo ladka hath nahi laga to dekh lena sabka gosht kasaikhane me bikva dunga. Boti boti karke.
Aadmi 2 - boss chinta mat karo vo bach ke jaa nahi payegi.
Vo jungel paar karke road par pahuchne hi vali thi ki samne ek aadmi aa jata hai. Achanak kisi ke aa jane se pehle to vo ghabra jati hai lekin phir usska chehra dekhkar use sukun milta hai.
Aurat - (lambi saans lete hue ) haaahaa haaaa bhaisahab aap haaahaa acha hua aap aa gye. jaldi chaliye Karan ki jaan ko khatra hai.
Aadmi - haa bilkul lao karan ko mujhe dedo.
Itne me vo aadmi uss aurat ka picha karte hue vahan pahunch jate hai.
Unhe dekhkar vo thoda ghabrati hai lekin ab use ummed thi.
Lekin...
Aadmi - are boss aap yahan, hum ise pakad kar laa hi rahe the.
Dusra aadmi - kutton tumse ek kaam thik se nahi hota.
Ye sunkar ki ye log uss aadmi ko boss bol rahe hai, vo aurat hairan ho jati hai, lekin jab use samajh aata hai ki yahan kya ho raha hai to uske pairo tale jameen khisk jati hai.
Aurat - aaaap...aap ne ye sab kiya?
Aadmi - ohhh to tum samjh gyi...
Aurat - lekin kyu.... Karan to aapka...
Aadmi - haaa mera kuch nahi hai ye kutta, mera dushman hai ye, lao mujhe dedo ise aur main tumhe aaram se Ghar pahucha dunga.
Aurat - nahi kabhi nahi, mere rehte mere bete ko koi hath bhi nahi laga sakta.
Piche se ek aadmi uss aurat ki tarah badhta hai lekin itne me vo aurat jameen par padi ek lakdi uthati hai aur uss aadmi ko aankho me gussa deti hai.
Aur phir uss bache ko lekar dusri taraf jahan par nadi beh rahi thi bhagne lagti hai.
Aage rasta band tha, nadi ka pani ufan maar raha tha, piche jaan ka khatra tha aur aage bhi jaan jane ki sambhavana.
Aadmi use pakadne ke liye kareeb aate ja rahe the. Uss aurat ne aankhe band ki aur apne man me bhagwaan ko yaad karke sirf uss bache ki salamati mangi aur nadi me chhalang laga di.
Lekin kudne ke turant pehle ek goli ussaurat ki pith me aakar lagi. Aur vo aurat uss bache ko apne seene se lagaye teji se nadi ke pani me girne lagi.
Vo sabhi aadmi aur unka boss vahan pahunche tab tak vo dono nadi me kahi gum ho chuke the.
Aadmi - boss lagta hai Nadi me girkar mar gye. Vaise bhi iss uffanati nadi meto hathi bhi dubkar mar jaye.
Boss - acha hua mare gye, lekin tum sab dhyan rkho, agar jinda hue to ye log ghar tak nahi pahunch paye, usse pehle khatam kar dena, vena main tum sabko nahi chhodunga.
Ye kehkar vo aadmi nikal jata hai.
Nice beginning updateUpdate 1
Ek aurat jangalo ke bich me se bahut tez bhagi jaa rahi thi, uske pairon me kaanto ki vajah se jakham ho chuke the uski halat bahut kharab thi, vo bhagte bhagte thak chuki thi. Lekin vo phir bhi ek ladke ko apni god me liye bhage jaa rahi thi. Vo ladka dara sehma usse chipaka hua tha.
Baccha - choti maa!
Aurat - bas beta thodi der aur hum pahuch hi jayenge. Ek baar ghar pahuch jaye phir sab thik ho jayega.
Baccha - Maa kya hum marne vale hai.
Aurat - nahi bacche kuch nahi hoga, choti maa hai na aapke sath. Bas thodi der aur.
Uss aurat ke piche kam se kam 20 aadmi pade hue the. Hathiyaron ke sath.
Aadmi - are kutto kya apni gaand mara rahe ho jaldi pakdo uss aurat ko. Bach ke Jane naa paye.
Agar vo ladka hath nahi laga to dekh lena sabka gosht kasaikhane me bikva dunga. Boti boti karke.
Aadmi 2 - boss chinta mat karo vo bach ke jaa nahi payegi.
Vo jungel paar karke road par pahuchne hi vali thi ki samne ek aadmi aa jata hai. Achanak kisi ke aa jane se pehle to vo ghabra jati hai lekin phir usska chehra dekhkar use sukun milta hai.
Aurat - (lambi saans lete hue ) haaahaa haaaa bhaisahab aap haaahaa acha hua aap aa gye. jaldi chaliye Karan ki jaan ko khatra hai.
Aadmi - haa bilkul lao karan ko mujhe dedo.
Itne me vo aadmi uss aurat ka picha karte hue vahan pahunch jate hai.
Unhe dekhkar vo thoda ghabrati hai lekin ab use ummed thi.
Lekin...
Aadmi - are boss aap yahan, hum ise pakad kar laa hi rahe the.
Dusra aadmi - kutton tumse ek kaam thik se nahi hota.
Ye sunkar ki ye log uss aadmi ko boss bol rahe hai, vo aurat hairan ho jati hai, lekin jab use samajh aata hai ki yahan kya ho raha hai to uske pairo tale jameen khisk jati hai.
Aurat - aaaap...aap ne ye sab kiya?
Aadmi - ohhh to tum samjh gyi...
Aurat - lekin kyu.... Karan to aapka...
Aadmi - haaa mera kuch nahi hai ye kutta, mera dushman hai ye, lao mujhe dedo ise aur main tumhe aaram se Ghar pahucha dunga.
Aurat - nahi kabhi nahi, mere rehte mere bete ko koi hath bhi nahi laga sakta.
Piche se ek aadmi uss aurat ki tarah badhta hai lekin itne me vo aurat jameen par padi ek lakdi uthati hai aur uss aadmi ko aankho me gussa deti hai.
Aur phir uss bache ko lekar dusri taraf jahan par nadi beh rahi thi bhagne lagti hai.
Aage rasta band tha, nadi ka pani ufan maar raha tha, piche jaan ka khatra tha aur aage bhi jaan jane ki sambhavana.
Aadmi use pakadne ke liye kareeb aate ja rahe the. Uss aurat ne aankhe band ki aur apne man me bhagwaan ko yaad karke sirf uss bache ki salamati mangi aur nadi me chhalang laga di.
Lekin kudne ke turant pehle ek goli ussaurat ki pith me aakar lagi. Aur vo aurat uss bache ko apne seene se lagaye teji se nadi ke pani me girne lagi.
Vo sabhi aadmi aur unka boss vahan pahunche tab tak vo dono nadi me kahi gum ho chuke the.
Aadmi - boss lagta hai Nadi me girkar mar gye. Vaise bhi iss uffanati nadi meto hathi bhi dubkar mar jaye.
Boss - acha hua mare gye, lekin tum sab dhyan rkho, agar jinda hue to ye log ghar tak nahi pahunch paye, usse pehle khatam kar dena, vena main tum sabko nahi chhodunga.
Ye kehkar vo aadmi nikal jata hai.
Waiting for update Madam..
For starting new story thread.....
Acchi shuruaat hai
Nice update....
Nice and beautiful introduction of the story....
Gif add kro plz
Nice story bro
Thanks aap sabhi ko. Ye meri pehli koshish hai kahani likhne ki.Nice beginning update![]()
Thanks BhaiStory thoda suspense wala lgta hai aur title bhi achha hai...
Congratulation for new story
And as usual wating for the next update
Koshish karunga bhaiAur isme ho sake to gif aur pics bhi add krna aur behtar lagega.
baki writter mahoday ki mrji hai
Thanks BhaiCongratulations bro for new thread....
keep going keep posting