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Well ab lgta hai story mai jld hi magic fantasy enter hone wala hai boht achaa update tha bhai aise hi update post krte jao now waiting for you next dhamakedaar update:yourock::yourock::yourock::yourock:

Bro sbse phle yeh bolna hai ki pehle ke kuch update padhke aisa lga jaise yeh story padhi hui hai but I am sure incomplete hogi so usko chodhte hai abb baat apki story ki toh jaburdust hai Karan aurJyoti ke beech ke pyar ko aapne boht acche tariqa se dikhaya hai waise hmko lgta hai yeh story aap...

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RD bro boht time se app story likh rhe ho phele bhi apni is story ka 1st part ko itna behtareen tarike se likha ki bss pucho hi mt lajabab tha bhai istarh dimag mai chap gya jaise ki bandhan aur chehekta chirag jaise mst faadu abb app Iske second part kr sath waps aaye ho aur starting...

Bro apki story bhi mai padhta hoon bss apne abhi start kiya hai pr start bhi jaburdust kiya hai hmko bhi 3-4 story likhna hai but mai college going student hoon woh bhi mechanical engg. kr rha hoon time km hota hai apne pass jo time milta hai story padhke par kr leta hoon 2013 se xossip pe story...

Mst update bro abb intzaar hai ki yeh dono ka pyar kb parwan chadhta hai aur dono bhaiyoon mai takraw kb hota hai story mst jaa rhi hai bro wating for next waise apka ATTITUDE bhi Kamal ka hai likhne mai:respekt::yourock::yourock::yourock::yourock:

Ekk baat dost yeh mera first comment hai xform pe aur sach bolon toh aapki writing style zabrdust hai ekk thahrow hai scenes aise likhte ho padhke aisa lgta hai ki woh sbb apne aakhon ke saamne hi ho rha hai story mst hai hero aur villain behtareen hai love romance bhi kabiletarif hai toh...

UPDATE....... 6behan ko nanga dekhny ke bad mujhy bohat hi ajeeb lag rha tha lakin maza bohat aya tha aur main be qarar raha main ne pehli bar hi jis ko nanga dekha tou apni sagi behan ko dekhamain store room se bhar aa gia aur sochoon min gum bojhal qadmoon ke sath ghar se bhar nikal gia...

UPDATE....... 5jaisy hi min nazar oper krta hun wo khala nhi balkeh meri behn uzma naha rhi hoti he jo matric ki student heyeh manzar dekh ke mujhy paseena aa jata hai mera pora jisam ayasy garam ho jat hai jaisy mujhy bohat teez bukhar hai dil ki dharkan bohat zaida teez aur be tarteeb...

UPDATE....... 4jaisy hi iron ke rod se store room ke almari ki back side cover karny wali tiyle ke neechy se main ne ceement khurch ke nikala tou sorakh ban gia jis se bath room ke ander ka sara nazara ho rha tha main ne bari ihtiyat se yeh kam kia tha pehlay bhar ja ke check kia keh bath...

UPDATE....... 3main inhi sochoon main gum beqarar rehny laga keh khala ko kaysy aur kahan se nanga dekhoon kibhi kibhi mery zehan min yeh baat bhi ati keh main gunah kar rha hun mujhy ahsas tha keh khala ke bary ayasa sochna bhi bohat bara gunah hai kisi time main khud ko malamat karta aur...

UPDATE....... 2khala ayasy uthi keh jaisy abhi jagi hun mujhy bhi laga keh khala waqiye min abhi jagi hin jo kuch hoa hai neend min hoa hai os ke bad khala mera sar dabati rahi aur mery oper ik aur razai dal di mujhy pata nahi kab neend aa gi aur main subha utha aur mamo mujhy doctor ke...

UPDATE...... 1ab aty hin sachy waqiyat ki taraf main soch rha hun kahan sy sharoo karoon , lakin aik ke bad ik sab waqiyat ap ke samny paish karny ki koshash kroon ga INTRODUCTION:Behan .........................Uzma ki age ab 30/31 ho gi Behan .........................Shazia ki age ab 27...

Credit goes to original writer :- BabarKhandoato main koi writer nahi hun lakin reader zaroor hun bohat arsa sy yahan stories read kar rha hun kuch achi lagi kuch achi nahi lagi lakin jo achi lagi wo reality base hoti thi ,chaye fake hi hun lakin writer ke likhny ky style sy jin stories main...

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