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Very good update brother waiting for the next update.

Faadu update bhidu ekdam rapchik masaka marke Waiting for the next update.

1st of all congrats fir completed 200 pages and this marvelous story.Dear brother aap jitna bhi likhate ho apni aur se har nazariye se behtar hai. Lekin hum bhi apni baat kahe bina nahi rah sakte ki aap ek hi family ko lekar jyada concentrate mat karo bich me kuchh jhalkiyan anya families ya...

Fantastic update brother waiting for the next update.

Kahani to bas aur kuchh na bas ye hi aawaje aani h jara dheere dheere raja.... vaise hina ji ki khoobsurati to dekhate hi bann rahi thi gazab likha hai bhai aapne. Waiting for the next update.

Janab kaha ho inteha ho gyi intezar ki kuchh khabar aai na mere yaar ki hai yakeen bewafa tum nhi Jamegi jarur mahfil mere dildar ki.wait kar rahe hai. waiting eagerly.

Janab kaha ho inteha ho gyi intezar ki kuchh khabar aai na mere yaar ki hai yakeen bewafa tum nhi Jamegi jarur mahfil mere dildar ki.wait kar rahe hai. waiting eagerly.

Very nice update brother But spelling mistakes kafi thi es update me bura mat manana laga ki bhai ko btana chahiye esliye bta diya. Matlab aapne to heena ji ko gayab sa hi kar diya bhai ji. Aisi to ummid nhi thi janab aapse. Waiting for the next update.

Dam to ye ab dekhenge chicha dubai wale kya dialogue bola hai bhidu ekdam kanto. waiting for the next update.

Sp ke sath ka scene jabardast create kiya hai bhai bas ritu ki jaban achchhi nhi lagi Baki aap to mahamahim ho kahani ke. waiting for the next update.

Pyare bhaiya ji , Adbhut likha hai aapne sahi kaha hai kahne wale ne:- En aankho ko sukoon aur dil ko karar Mil hi jayega Ek baar aa to sahi, Tere chhune bhar se mera ye pathar sa jism jivit ho jayega Tu hath badha to sahi. Tere chhune bhar ke ehsas se yuhi dohri ho jati hu Jagti ho raato ko...

Bhai wah kya gazab likha hai bhai aapne sahi se thukai ki hai suman ki. agle episode ka intezar rahega.

Very nice update brother aaj ke update me to aapne sama hi bandh diya gazab likha hai bhai. waiting for the next update.

Aap kitna sahi likhAte ho bhai lekin jo ye update ke bich me duri hai na bas yahi pareshan karti hai please update post kaijiye. Waiting eagerly.

Bhai ye to kahani jaise aage badhegi to picture khud hi clear ho jayegi agar hum jyada hint lenge na to kahani ka romanch smapat ho jayega aur jahan tak h na aap aisa chahenge and na hi baki sab. Par aapka bhi dil se aabhar aapne jo baate kahi uper wali comment me badi sahi kahi h.

Update kado de rahe ho fer dr. Sahab assi te wait kar re h twadi bhi aur update di bhi. AUr aapnu full chhut h ji heena de Sadke. Love you dear brother Waiting eagerly.

Very nice update brother waiting for the next update.

Uthi ek tis si asar sa hua hai Hawa me aaj dhua hi dhua hai , Aas lagaye baithe hai tere rah-e-intezar mein Raho sada hi haste khilkhilate Humari to bus ye hi dua hai. Love you dear brother @Enigma Waiting for the update.

Ab phategi en supari lene walo ki sach me ekdam interesting bna diya h bhidu tumne es pure ghatnakaram ko maza aa raha h bhai ab thode se ve chije bhi add karo na jo aap har baar karte ho kuchh nye weapons ko add karke unki jankari bhi achchhe se btate ho i love them. Waiting for the next update.

Arey o bhidu rapchik update de dala Gazab kya dialogue bola eske liye to mai sorry na bolne wala..... Yar ye security breach hone wali baat ko serious lena chahiye bhidu pta nhi kyu mujhe aisa lag Rah hai ki ye sala rakesh chacha kahi un g***duo se mila hua hai. ye ghar me rahkar sari details...