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Superb starting bro. Kaafi alag plot hai aapki story ka, joki achha laga. Aapki writing skills bhi shandar hain. Abhi tak bohot badhiya tareeke se likh rahe hain aap.Ab dekhna hai ke Vijay kaise apni Maa aur teeno behno ko Rekha ke changul se bachayega.Waiting for next update.

Bohot hi badhiya story hai bro. Aaj hi poori story khatam ki hai read karni aur maza aagaya kahani padhke. Sabhi characters ko bohot achhe se present kiya hai aapne joki kaafi mast laga. Issi tarah likhte rahiye bhai. :superb:

Badhiya updates the bhai. :good:

Aap apni story ka hi example dekh lo bhai. Jo Swara Reyansh se karti hai wahi Pyaar hai, uski yaadon mein khoye rehti hai aur har waqt bas usse hi yaad karti rehti hai.Avni, joki kabhi Reyansh se mili hi nahi wo bas uski tasveer dekh kar hi usse apna pati maan baithi hai. Wahin Noor jo...

Bro agla update padhiye. Wo sab sirf ek sapna tha.

Sahi pakde bhai. Gif daalte waqt bhi beech ka text link mein convert kar deta hai ye writer!! Paanch – Chhe ID ab tak in janab ki ban chuki hain.

Bhai koyi sense nahi bani iss update ki. Ek taraf aapne bataya ke Shashank Veer ka gulaam hai aur usne Nisha aur baaki sab ki aatma ko kaid karke unse Ravi ko nuksaan pahunchaya.Aur ab keh rahe ho ke Ye sab log Ravi ka darr nikaalne ke liye ye sab kuchh kar rahe the?? Kya matlab hua bhai iska??

Hello @Preeet604 bhai... Kaise ho? Puraani Id se mann bhar gaya kya jo nayi ID se same kahani chalu kar di :haha:

Excellent Story bhai. Bahut badhiya likh rahe hain aap. Kuchh alag si lagi mujhe ye story aur updates bhi regular hain joki bahut hi achhi baat hai. Bass isi tarah updates dete rahiye bhai. Aur Index mein poora link daalne ki jagah Link ko edit karke Update –1, Update –2 mein change kardo, nahi...

:congrats: for new story thread bro... Nice Intro, kaafi badhiya rahegi lagta hai ye story!! Kaafi characters hain to maza aane waala hai. Baaki aapne ek Comment mein kaha ke Hero ki apni sagi behen bhi hai par wo abhi uss se anjaan hai. Ek hi request hai ke family mein chaahe sabhi ek doosre...

Hey bro!! You're writing a wonderful story. Your writing skills are awesome as well. Just ek suggestion tha, ab tak jo bhi characters aayen hain un sabko ek hi update mein mention kardo & usko Index mein INTRODUCTION naam se laga do. Kyonki abhi tak kaafi saari female character aa chuki hain to...

Badhiya Intro. Par aapne Shweta ki age 30 likhi hai aur uski betiyon ki 21. Kuchh galti huyi hai shayad aapse. Aur haan hero ki behen ki age 16 hai. To usse bhi edit kar do bhai. 18 se kam ke character Forum ke rules ke khilaaf hain.Isse Edit kar dijiye!!!

Nayi story start karne ke liye :congrats:. Aasha hai ke story shaandar hogi aur saath hi complete bhi hogi. Pehle Update ke Intezaar mein.

Bhai 795 words the ye aur aap 3000 keh rahe ho. Khair, kaafi badhiya update tha. Reyansh ko kaali shaktiyan mil gayin hain. Ab wo nikal pada hai paise kamane. Shayad ye ladki uski madad kar paaye usmein. Dekhna hoga ke Reyansh ke saath aage kya hota hai. Bhai thoda jaldi update dene ka try kiya...

Dekho bhai story bahut achhi jaa rahi hai. Hina aur Saba dono story ki heroine hain to un dono ko Sunny tak hi rehne do. Aur waise bhi abhi tak aapne dikhaaya hai ke wo dono Sunny se bahut pyaar karti hain aur Sunny unse. To please unn dono ka kisi aur ke saath sex mat dikhaana. Ya to Sunny ka...

Ab tak ki kahani bahut hi badhiya rahi hai. Reyansh ko zaroor un sabse badla lena hi chahiye. Aur kuchh nahi to ye zehar dekar maaran bahut zyada ho gaya tha, iski aese hi maafi nahi milni chahiye. Dekhte hai ab Swara kya karegi.Bhai Updates thoda regular rakho. Kaafi late ho jaate hain.

Badhiya Intro. Bas ek request rahegi ke Saba aur Hina ke saath sirf Sunny ka hi Sex ho aur kisi ka bhi nahi.

Bhailog aap sab abhi tak nahi samjhe kya ?? Ye @Ravi R , @Raj the chodu aur ye @Aditya Raj 44 ... Ye teeno ek hi hai. Koyi story poori nahi hone waali in teeno ID se. Aap log check kar lijiye in teeno stories mein upload kiye gaye gif aur pictures ke beech mein jo text hai wo bhi link ban chuka...

Ek tareeka ye ho sakta hai ke Sunny seedhe se Ali ko samjhaaye ke Hina aur Sunny ek doosre sacha pyaar karte hain. Wo bhi samajh hi jaayega par Hina ke saath najayaj hoga agar usse Ali se pyaar karne ko kaha jaaye.