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Update kab Tak aayega sir. Abhi tak dikhe nahi

Sorry nain sir mujhe cricket me jyada intrest nahi isliye mai bahut jyada nahi likhungi. But apko third year jita hai. Final year ke players ne cheating kiya tha. Btw kahani ka ekdum se rukh apne palat diya.Som IIRF ka joint secratery 😍😍😍. Mujhe laga upar ki post kisi middle age ya old age Wale...

Tarif 😏😏😏😏 tarif se kya hoga. Aaj kal ap nain sir ko chidha nahi rahe is bat se main kafa hu apse. Naina maim bhi nahi hai. Ab to nain sir ki hi manmani chalti hai story me. Koi tokne wala hi nahi. Btw nain sir sunte nahi lekin tab bhi kahna humara janmsidhh adhikar hai.

I missed her name too. Naina is also class a part. Main bata dun ki nain sir ki ye first story hai jis par mai comment kar rahi. School days se Mai inki story follow karti hu. Pyar hum ya khushi ek aisi kahani thi jise mai 10 bar se jyada padh chuki hu. Aisa shayad he koi ho jo ye story padhne...

Sorry sir kuch dino se busy thi isliye apki story nahi padhi. Jahan tak padhi thi kamal ka likha tha apne. Story ke 3 hisson ko parellel apne bakhubi likha hai. Chahe roop ka scene ho ya tapas ka ya fir kshtrpal ki kururta ho. Hats off. Sunday Tak current update par rahungi.

Sir is list ke kayi readers ke comments main padhti hu. Like Naina ji, fan ji, xabhi, Nevil Singh (comment me inki tukbandi aur bhasha ka bejod sangam rahta hai), chintu aur aap. Aap sab kamal ke hai. Xp par jab main padhne jati thi tab main nain sir ke thread par kuch log ki jugalbandi dekhne...

Yun hi nahi hum pathak apke story ke deewane hai. Kalpnik hone ke bavjood bhi kayi aise situation hote hain jahan ke emotion 100% reality se match karte hain. I can feel the emotion of a daughter and wife. Kitni hichak aur jhijhak hoti hai unhe pyar ya shadi jaisi baat ghar ke mukhiya se batne...

can i take part too

I should forecast my thinking. Dam god, main soch rahi thi acha room number 211 matlab movies ki tarah yahan bhi murder hoge. Jante hai fir kya sochi, nahi yar kaha nain sir wahi murder dalenge. Lekin kuch chijen aap normal bhi likhsakte hai :D Update thoda bada hai aur mujhe nini aa rahi. Bacha...

Mind blowing update tha sir. Mujhe laga yahan kisi tarah ka clarification ayega aur sab thik ho jayega. Jaisa ki har kahani me hota hai. Lekin aapne to yahan poora jal hi bana diya. Koi kisi ki sun he nahi raha sab apni dhun me lage hai. Waise reality bhi yahi hai aaj kal sunta kaun hai sab to...

Hihihihihihi Rayta hi rayta. Koch rayta mere yaha bhijwa dete sir. Maza aa gaya update padhkar

Koi idea hi nahi aaya 😀😀😀😃😃😃 Kitne name try kiye but yahi nam final kiya site ke log ne 😀😀😀😀

Waiting sir. Kab tak update aayega

Waiting

Bohat he umda writing skill hai. Bhairav Singh aur Vishwa ka kya character creat kiya hai. Roop nandni apna graduation karne bhuvneshwar ja rahi. Kahani ke sabhi twist and turn yahin se shuru honge.Abhi kuch update read Kari hun. Kahani mazedar tarike se likha hai aapne

Bahot hi umda romance ke sath khatti mithi nok jhonk hai dono couple ki. I enjoyed a lot. Jaldi se iske aage ka bhag post kar dijiye.

Aapko wapas dekhkar main bata nahi sakti kitni khush hun. Kewal aap ki story par comment post karne ke liye main yahan ragister hui. Kahani bohat hi mind-blowing hai. Wapas aane ke baad to jaise aap ne isme Jaan phook diye ho.