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Raat ko update padhne ke bad jyada kuch likh nahi paya. Kuch naye questions samne aya hai. In sab ke bare me mera soch kuch aisa hai: 1. Puneet shayad mara nahi hai, wo kahi aur hai, jiska pata shayad sirf Ankit ko pata hai. Kyonki bich sadak par suicide ka khabar to at least police ko pata...

Puneet mara ki nahi confirmed nahi tha, phir bhi maine soch liya tha ki wo mar gaya hai, lekin ab to confusion aur bad gaya, aisa lag raga hai ki wo abhi jinda hai, kyonki police ke pass bhi uska koi khoj nahi hai. Ab to kahani aur bhi interesting ho gaya hai. Dekhte hai Ankit aur Richa/Pooja ka...

Naye update aur naye mysteries, lekin itne time ke bad update kuch chota ho gaya. Let's see what happens next...

2 hafton se silently story padh rha hu, ye mera pehla comment hai. Kuch points note kiye hai 1. Maine bohot story padhe hai jinme ek character ko mara hua dikhaya jata aur badme wo bapas ata hai. Puneet mara ki nahi wo confirm nehi hai, sifr suicide attempt likha gaya hai. Bohot unchai se girne...

Suspense wala story bahut kam hai is forum pe. Acchha laga. Waiting for next.

No updates for a long time. Writer bro are you ok?

Aap jitna bhi chahe sabhi readers ko santusht nahi kar payenge. Kuch negative comments ke karan story ka flowmat badliye. kuch writers ko dekhe hai readers ke kehne par kahani badal dete hai. kabhi kabhi readers ki demand pura karna chahiye liken har ek demnad nahi, Aapne jaise socha tha wese hi...

Ekdam thik kaha. Ab tak kahani ke sath ek tarah ka attachment tha. Ab aur nahi rahega. Dekhte hai age kya hota hai. Shayad vikram bhi cheater niklega ya fir cuckold ban jayega

Bhai kahani aapka hai to aapko apni tarike se hi kahani ko likhna chahiye. hum readers ko itna to haq banta hai ki ye kahe kahani accha laga ya bura. agar kisi reader ko kahani bura laga aur unka comment dekh kar aap kahani likhna bandh kar denge ya fir aapka dimag kharap ho jaye to wo aapka...

Ho geya kahani ka satyanash, sirf hilane ke liye jo log kahani padte he unko khush kar diya

Full of suspense. Waiting for next.

Congratulations. Asha karta hu ki Aap dono ki married life khushiyon se bhar jaye.

Avi, Nitin, Ankita, Simran ka foursome ho sakta hain

Mujhe to laga tha Shekhar ko heart attack agaya

Bahut mast story hai aapka. Aisi story is site par bahut kam hai. Aage likhte jaiye

Mujhe bhi lag raha hai sabkuch bahut jaldi hogaya. Jo bhi ho, aap kahani ko aage likhte rahiye. Kahani mein kuch side plot add karenge to accha hoga. Kuch suspense jaisa. Abhi kahani mein group sex mat karba dena. Agar plan hai to last part mein accha rahega.

Nicely going. Ab dekhte hain Rahul aur Manisha kaise react karta hain Neha ki baat sunkar.

is story ko continue hote dekh accha laga. writer se kehna chahunga ki aap apni tarike se likhiye. alag alag log alag alag demand karenge. agar unke demand pura karna chahenge to aap khud hi confused ho jayenge. aur jo log kah rehe hain ki shweta ko exclusive rakho unko shayad pata nahi ki...

Bahut accha laga ye story restart hui hai. Keep going

Great update. Waiting for family group sex.