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Adultery Khel Khel Mein...
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Update kafhi accha hae.. . Pr ab kuch log ki comment baji start ho gai hae aese hi comment baji se kuch story band ho gai thi.. Kahi ye story v na band ho jae..
Abhi maine story to nhi read ki...but aapki baat par kahuga....
ki....Jo readers ke comment ko reply
na kare...ya usse story band kar de...
wo acche writter to nhi ho sakte.....
I hope ye writter har comment ka valid ans dega.....
Baki story read karne ke baad hi comment karuga....
Keep rocking writter.......
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Rashi ki gand dekh ke apna accha irada badalta Usman
Rashi removing her bra
Rashi getting herself a painal punishment
great update. yaha ke negative comments ko ignore kariye writer ji. jinko story nahi pasand wo na padhe. unki pasand ki bohot si stories is forum ya fir dusre forums mein mil jayegi. jo aapko achcha lage wo padho jo achcha na lage use ignore kar do. you dont have to be mean
ohh sabse pahle to dil se sorry un readers ko jinke liye ye story bakwas ho gyi...mai koi itna bda writer nhi hu aur abhi abhi likhna shuru kiya hai..to aisa hona lazimi tha
Par comments dekh k dil khush ho gya...
yaha rashi ne bhawanao me bah k ek galti kya kr di to sab hath me candle le k aa gye vikram ko insaaf dilaane...
yaha forum pe top ki bahut si stories hai jinme male dusro ki wifes/gf, aur incest category me jaha mohabbat se bhi bda rishta hota hai..waha apni fantasy ka aatank machata hai to waha taaliya bajti hai..kyu?
kyuki wo male hai na..wo to paida hi esliye hua hai...ki wo apne hathiyar ko apni fantasy k chalte ghr pariwar, bahar kahi bhi use kr sakta hai...par agar ek female apni jajbaato me bah kisi 2 rascals k trap me fas k kuch kar gujre to uski maafi nhi......kyuki usne supreame male ko hurt kr diya.....aur wo bhale hi bahar jo marzi krta rahe..
bhai ye itna discrimination kyu??????..kya male bhagwan ki special creation hai kya? aur usne uske andar hi jajbaat aur fantasy daali hai..aur aurat ek bejubaan murat jiska male jab chahe kaise bhi use kr sakta hai....
female ka 1 se jyada affair to wo slut
male ki 4-5 girlfriend to wo king...gajab ki soch hai
real life me to women ko ab tak male k brabar haq ni mila..aur na hi shayad mile aisi soch ke chalte...par kam se kam ek adult forum pe to usko ek male k brabar dekh sakte hai..ki uske andar bhi sensation , fantasy hai..aur wo bhi jajbaato me bah sakti hai...
aisi hi soch k chalte ek state ka cm bolta hai rape k baare me ki..ladko se galti to ho jaati hai..koi badi baat nhi
wahi agar kisi ladki ka rape raat k 9 baje k baad ho gya to..uski hi galti nikalte hai ki isko 9 baje k baad bahar nhi jana chahiye tha
disgusting soch.. tabhi to yaha rashi jab 2 rascals k trap me fas k kuch kar gujri aur apne pyar ko bhi bachaane ki koshish kr rhi..toh ye sab kuch readers digest ni kr paa rhe..wo to es slut ko saza dilaane pe tule hai... ... jabki real life me ye kaarnaame ek males k liye aam hai..kaise wo roj apni biwi/gf ka bewakoof bnata hai..ye sab male k liye normal hai..because he is king
mai maanta hu ki mai bakwas witer hu
meri kahaani bakwas hai
par koi iske baare me nhi bola..sabko to bas rashi ki galti dikhi..ab wo kin paristhithi ya circumstances me hue unse unko koi matlab nhi..ya phir they are not mature enough to understand that becouse of this thinking..ya samjhana hi nhi chahte kyuki unke according ek female aisi himmat kaise kr sakti hai
to mera un readers se nivedan hai ki es story ko unfollow kr de..kyuki aage bhi aise hi update aayenge..kyuki ab to ye story bilkul bhi band nhi hogi...jo aapko aur hurt kr sakte hai..so dont waste your precious time here
kyuki ye story complete ho k hi band hogi.... haan agar aapki admin k sath jaan pehchan ho to shayad band ho jaaye complete hone se pahle...aapko nhi psand ..koi baat nhi..sabka apna apna taste hota hai..jinko acchi lag rhi hai mai unke liye hi likh rha hu
aur aapke comments se mujhe aapka taste pta lg gya aur mere es comment se aapko meri mansha..to ummed krta hu ki ab aage ispe koi discussion nhi hoga
agar phir bhi aapko apni frustration nikalni hai toh..you are free to post comment...jaise mai free hu apni kahaani ko jaise marzi likhne k liye ...but aage ispe discussion k liye mere ans ki ummeed na rakhe... kyuki wo faltu ka time waste hoga.....
Happy Holi and Have Fun
Par comments dekh k dil khush ho gya...
yaha rashi ne bhawanao me bah k ek galti kya kr di to sab hath me candle le k aa gye vikram ko insaaf dilaane...
yaha forum pe top ki bahut si stories hai jinme male dusro ki wifes/gf, aur incest category me jaha mohabbat se bhi bda rishta hota hai..waha apni fantasy ka aatank machata hai to waha taaliya bajti hai..kyu?
kyuki wo male hai na..wo to paida hi esliye hua hai...ki wo apne hathiyar ko apni fantasy k chalte ghr pariwar, bahar kahi bhi use kr sakta hai...par agar ek female apni jajbaato me bah kisi 2 rascals k trap me fas k kuch kar gujre to uski maafi nhi......kyuki usne supreame male ko hurt kr diya.....aur wo bhale hi bahar jo marzi krta rahe..
bhai ye itna discrimination kyu??????..kya male bhagwan ki special creation hai kya? aur usne uske andar hi jajbaat aur fantasy daali hai..aur aurat ek bejubaan murat jiska male jab chahe kaise bhi use kr sakta hai....
female ka 1 se jyada affair to wo slut
male ki 4-5 girlfriend to wo king...gajab ki soch hai
real life me to women ko ab tak male k brabar haq ni mila..aur na hi shayad mile aisi soch ke chalte...par kam se kam ek adult forum pe to usko ek male k brabar dekh sakte hai..ki uske andar bhi sensation , fantasy hai..aur wo bhi jajbaato me bah sakti hai...
aisi hi soch k chalte ek state ka cm bolta hai rape k baare me ki..ladko se galti to ho jaati hai..koi badi baat nhi
wahi agar kisi ladki ka rape raat k 9 baje k baad ho gya to..uski hi galti nikalte hai ki isko 9 baje k baad bahar nhi jana chahiye tha
disgusting soch.. tabhi to yaha rashi jab 2 rascals k trap me fas k kuch kar gujri aur apne pyar ko bhi bachaane ki koshish kr rhi..toh ye sab kuch readers digest ni kr paa rhe..wo to es slut ko saza dilaane pe tule hai... ... jabki real life me ye kaarnaame ek males k liye aam hai..kaise wo roj apni biwi/gf ka bewakoof bnata hai..ye sab male k liye normal hai..because he is king
mai maanta hu ki mai bakwas witer hu
meri kahaani bakwas hai
par koi iske baare me nhi bola..sabko to bas rashi ki galti dikhi..ab wo kin paristhithi ya circumstances me hue unse unko koi matlab nhi..ya phir they are not mature enough to understand that becouse of this thinking..ya samjhana hi nhi chahte kyuki unke according ek female aisi himmat kaise kr sakti hai
to mera un readers se nivedan hai ki es story ko unfollow kr de..kyuki aage bhi aise hi update aayenge..kyuki ab to ye story bilkul bhi band nhi hogi...jo aapko aur hurt kr sakte hai..so dont waste your precious time here
kyuki ye story complete ho k hi band hogi.... haan agar aapki admin k sath jaan pehchan ho to shayad band ho jaaye complete hone se pahle...aapko nhi psand ..koi baat nhi..sabka apna apna taste hota hai..jinko acchi lag rhi hai mai unke liye hi likh rha hu
aur aapke comments se mujhe aapka taste pta lg gya aur mere es comment se aapko meri mansha..to ummed krta hu ki ab aage ispe koi discussion nhi hoga
agar phir bhi aapko apni frustration nikalni hai toh..you are free to post comment...jaise mai free hu apni kahaani ko jaise marzi likhne k liye ...but aage ispe discussion k liye mere ans ki ummeed na rakhe... kyuki wo faltu ka time waste hoga.....
Happy Holi and Have Fun
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Aapko kisi ne Story band karne nahi kaha, aur Aap itne bhi KHAS nahi ki Aapki Story band karne koi ADMIN se bat kare.
sabki Apni Pasand hoti hai,
Jisse accha lagega, wo Padhenge, jisse accha nahi lagega, unke liye is Forum me bahut si Story hai.
Aap kahte hai ki wo VIKRAM se saccha Pyar karti hai aur wo RANDI khud se Sabse CHUDNE jati hai,
Ha, Aap ye Show kar sakte hai ki 'SAFE & RESPECTED FUTURE " ke liye VIKRAM se Shadi karna Chahti hai, aur MAZE ke liye Dusro se CHUDTI hai to Hum bhi Aapki Mantility se agree ho jayenge.
Lakin 1 taraf ko Aap Pyar ka Dialogue bhi dete hai aur Khud se Dusro se CHUDNE ko bhi Justify karte hai to Aap hi Khus rahe.
Jinko Story padh kar sirf LUND hilana hai, wo khus hi rahenge,
lakin Logic Aapki Story me nahi hai.
Kya Sabhi, Ladies ko Rat 9 baje ke bad kahi bahar jane ko kharab mante hai ? - Nahi
Kya Sabhi Rape hone par Ladki ko hi Dosh dete hai ? - Nahi
Kya 2-5 Ladkiyo/GF ke sath Sex karne walo ko sab sahi ya KING mante hai ? - Nahi
Kuch Logo ke Galat Vichar ke liye Sabhi Male kharab nahi ho jate.
Hamare Samaj me to Ladkiyo / Mahilao ko bahut Azadi bhi hai,
Kabhi unki khabar li hai, jinhe bahar bhi Jana hota hai to KALE Labade me dhak kar hi jane milta hai,
Jinhe sirf Bacche Paida karne ke liye hi rakha jata hai, unki koi Marzi nahi hoti ki aur Bacche Paida karna hai ya nahi,
Jinke BAAP, BHAI, SASUR, DEVER, MAMA, FUFA etc koi bhi CHOD jata hai, wo us Ladkiyon/Mahilao ke insaf me koi khada nahi hota, Qki unme kuch JUTHA nahi hota, koi bhi CHOD gaya, naha liya sab thik,
Us Ladki/Mahila ki Feelings ki koi fikr nahi.
Logic wahi dijea, jo sahi ho. Bada-Bada Pravachan dene se Sab sahi nahi ho jata hai.
Chhodiye ye sb . Jinko story nahi pashnd hai voh fir bhi sirf comment karne k liye aa rahe hai to kyu aa rahe hai unko pata , aap likhiye jayadatar readers ( mere khayal se to ek do ko chhod k sare ) aapki stoty ko pashnd kar rahe hai aur kuch logo ko critic banne ka shokh hota hai banne dijiye ..unki ye ichhchha voh log aishe puri kar rahe hai to karne do ..hame kya fark padta hai
Aap likhte rahiye aapke readers aap ke har update ki pratiksha me hi hai .
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Aap akele nehin ho jo ek female ko central character bana ke story likhe ho aur usko sacche pyar, slut ye sab bol ke logic dhundha ja raha ho. Meine 2-3 story aur bhi padhi he jisme woman central character he usme bhi yehi sab chalta hi rehta he. Jo criticize kar rahe hein time ho toh thoda unka comments dekh lena aap jisme male lead hein wahan par clap maarke details mein likho ye bol rahe hein.
Basic baat he Ye story Adultry category mein atta he isme adultry stuff, cheating, seduction ye chij sab toh hoga hi. Romance toh he nehin ki ek hi admi se hi pyar karegi.
Meine last 2 update padha nehin he. Kyunki last 2 updates se hi Raashi ka character ko judge kiya ja raha he.
Ek baat aur kehna he ek bahut hi acche writer the Casinar bhai woh bhi esa hi 2-3 story woman centra based story likhe hein. Majal he kisi ek ka jo wahan jaake saccha pyar, dhokha wala logic dhundha ho!!! Abhi ek comment padh raha tha ki ek user ne bola he aap itne bhi khaas writer nehin ho iss baat se samajh jao.
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