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Are bhai sirf muh dhikhai ke liye aaye the kya ap,?Update kaha hai bhaiji???

Bhai 2no hi update superb hai, but 2 mistake mujhe feel hui wo share kar raha hun,1. Jab sadhna original nhi hai tab tino ka blood group ek hi kaise,2.aur us dairy k according bachpan main bhi raj ko kisi ne injection diya tha tho wo kon tha, yani wo sadhna nhi thi, tho kon tha, agar aisa...

Bhai update kab tak doge, intajar hai apke jaandar-sandar update ke liye...!!!

Lagata hai ye writer bhai ki aag kuch jyada hi thandi pad gayi hai tab hi kafi dino se koi update hi nhi aa rahe hai.... !!

Bhai lockdown main konsa business kar rahe engima bhai...? Itne dino ke lockdown main kafi update de dete abhi tak... Ya fir ghar main hi BJP join kar liya tho pata nahi...

Bhai kahani jaisi chal rahi hai waise hi chalne de, speed main na jaye point to point clear kare,

Bhai request hai apse, thoda sensible likho and aur koi bhi romantic scene ko jyada lamba mat khichho isse story bore hone lagti hai....Mere suggestions ko dil main nhi dimag main lena taki story ko aur behtar tarike se present kar sako....

Bhai bura nhi manna but story mat likhna, jab ap is story ko bhi sahi se complete nhi kar paye tho agali story ki main umid nhi karta, iss story ki jo main heroines thi rajani aur vidhisha unke role ki tho puri band hi baja di apne, ek ko bhaga diye aur uska reason bhi clear nhi kiya jabki...

Bhai ye coming soon kitani jaldi hota hai....

Bhai update achha tha, but rashmi ko raj jhooth hi bola hai, wo nhi bolna chahiye tha...

Bhai update mega tho nhi laga but update acha tha.... Keep it up

Bhai apki story kafi achi hai kripiya itna jyada gap dege uska maza readers ke dilo se kam na hone de...

Hello.... Main apne soye huye lekhak bhai se ye gujarish karna chahunga ki kripiya wo update likhna continue kare, ya update kab tak aayega ye apne readers ko inform karne nhi tho plz 2 min. Nikal kar ye jarur inform karde ki ab is story per koi update nhi aayega so ap log iss story ko bhul kar...

Hello.... Main apne soye huye lekhak bhai se ye gujarish karna chahunga ki kripiya wo update likhna continue kare, ya update kab tak aayega ye apne readers ko inform karne nhi tho plz 2 min. Nikal kar ye jarur inform karde ki ab is story per koi update nhi aayega so ap log iss story ko bhul kar...

Hello.... Main apne soye huye lekhak bhai se ye gujarish karna chahunga ki kripiya wo update likhna continue kare, ya update kab tak aayega ye apne readers ko inform karne nhi tho plz 2 min. Nikal kar ye jarur inform karde ki ab is story per koi update nhi aayega so ap log iss story ko bhul kar...

Hello.... Main apne soye huye lekhak bhai se ye gujarish karna chahunga ki kripiya wo update likhna continue kare, ya update kab tak aayega ye apne readers ko inform karne nhi tho plz 2 min. Nikal kar ye jarur inform karde ki ab is story per koi update nhi aayega so ap log iss story ko bhul kar...

Hello.... Main apne soye huye lekhak bhai se ye gujarish karna chahunga ki kripiya wo update likhna continue kare, ya update kab tak aayega ye apne readers ko inform karne nhi tho plz 2 min. Nikal kar ye jarur inform karde ki ab is story per koi update nhi aayega so ap log iss story ko bhul kar...

Hello.... Main apne soye huye lekhak bhai se ye gujarish karna chahunga ki kripiya wo update likhna continue kare, ya update kab tak aayega ye apne readers ko inform karne nhi tho plz 2 min. Nikal kar ye jarur inform karde ki ab is story per koi update nhi aayega so ap log iss story ko bhul kar...

@Love 1994 bhai update dedo, .... Waiting