Incest Anjaan raste (adultery ,incest)
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Bhai ek aise story likhna jisme hero apna dimag ke dam pe bare se bare planning kar sake aur powerful villens ko maat de sake, aur romance per bhi jor dena, single heroin ho to achha hoga.
tangojaguar342
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Story was a good one
Although sometimes some illogical things happened (it doesn't matter as this is a story not real life)
But bro you killed my fav character (vidisha) in the end
She is the main reason why I was attracted towards your story
Because of this story got very emotional and heart touching
And it became a masterpiece.
Thanks for such a story
Next time whenever you start a new story pls keep it incest.
Although sometimes some illogical things happened (it doesn't matter as this is a story not real life)
But bro you killed my fav character (vidisha) in the end
She is the main reason why I was attracted towards your story
Because of this story got very emotional and heart touching
And it became a masterpiece.
Thanks for such a story
Next time whenever you start a new story pls keep it incest.
BAHOT HI BEHTAREEN KAHANI, AAP BAHOT ACHHA LIKHTE HAIN, BAS LAST ME AISA LAGA KI AAP NE KAHANI KO BAHOT JALDBAJI ME KHATM KIYA
SUKRIYA EK ACHHI KAHANI KE LIYE !!!
Raja thakur
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Insects, fantasy aur thriller hona chaiye bhai
Ravi_raj
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Bhai bura nhi manna but story mat likhna, jab ap is story ko bhi sahi se complete nhi kar paye tho agali story ki main umid nhi karta, iss story ki jo main heroines thi rajani aur vidhisha unke role ki tho puri band hi baja di apne, ek ko bhaga diye aur uska reason bhi clear nhi kiya jabki dusari ko marwa diya, jo character silen2 the jaise ki shreya unko suddenly main role de diya..
Aisa bura end shayad hi main koi aur story ka dekha hoga, jabardasti story ko end kiya apne, nhi likhna tha tho adhuri hi chod dete...