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Kya update de mara hai bhai.. d best in d story and am sure next one aur bhi awesome hoga.. Baap beti ki bachpan wali baatein was awesome.. Dialogues sabhi spot on.. sex scenes khatarnaak.. jald hi next update post karein.. wanna see Vineeth aur Bua kya kya baat kartein hai.. past wali..Aisa...

Bro, I think you are the best judge what is good for story.I think the story is going fine. Since you have included most people in group sex everyone is feeling it's fast.You can invest in solo scenes where characters can discuss about their past like how they had such encounters at their...

Awesome story bhai. The dialogues between Bua and karma were super hot. Like to see more dirty talks between other characters. The other scenes were also erotic with rimjim and poorvi. Nice balanceAs always very smooth narration ? Thanks bro

Great initiative bro? Ur writing will make it superrrr.But please apni original story which is running now bhool mat Jaana.. Mostly handling 2-3 stories can be a hassle and updates become irregular. Have seen writers struggling with it..Aapke updates bahut regular hai for now.So request...

And ya.. it's really awesome to see you put effort to reply to almost all comments from your readers without fail. Shows how much u appreciate your readers and fans..great attitude bhai.. rocking ho ?

Great going bhai, your way of presentation of characters and story is Just WOW. Bahut hi simple style hai aapka,yet so detailed and hot.?Bro just a suggestion. I think aapko focus from Karma thoda hatana chahiye.. why because if karma alone gets to fuck all woman at 1st.. den thoda repetitive...

Amazing story boss.. just registered to comment on your story. You have a very easy writing approach. The characters are all awesome.. I like how it runs in family.. Mazaa aa Raha hai. One angle I suggest you should explore how Karma's Papa aur Bua started fucking each other in past.. u know a...