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Thanks and bahut jald pata chalegavery hotttt updates dear ..!!!!
wahhh kya mast scene dala hai story main bua na na karte bhi sex kar hi baithi ab karma nai kya dekh liya yaar ......
Thanks and bahut jald pata chalegavery hotttt updates dear ..!!!!
wahhh kya mast scene dala hai story main bua na na karte bhi sex kar hi baithi ab karma nai kya dekh liya yaar ......
Thanks bro for your appreciation... comments like these make writing worthwhile...and I have that in mind how dad and bua started....but for that you have to wait as it will come on it's time ...Amazing story boss.. just registered to comment on your story.
You have a very easy writing approach. The characters are all awesome.. I like how it runs in family.. Mazaa aa Raha hai. One angle I suggest you should explore how Karma dad and Bua got into each other.. u know a scene where dey talk dirty abt their past and may be one of characters overhears it.. unki family ka dirty secrets. You know how it runs in family.
Jo bhi ho.. u r a great story teller. Look forward to next episodes.. great going bro
Thanks bhai....bas aise hi padhte raho sab samajh aa jayega...Nice hot update hai bhaii
gadi wale scene nai toh aag di hai bhaii agar bua naraj hoti hai toh karma papa aur bua ki raasleela ke bare mai bata sakta hai