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Congrats for completing 100 pages on the thread....:applause::congrats::applause:

Nadaan toh hai...lekin parindey bahut hi khush hai apni choti duniya main...chahe bade ho ya chote...:grouphug:

Gajab ki writing skill hai brother...story pe comment karna thik nahi...your flow is great...:yippi::rock1::yippi:

Congrats on completing 500 pages...

Itihas repeat ho raha hai...lekin alag andaz se...Arjun ki subhabra...Shankar ki ????. Maan gaye bro...amazing story...

Bhai saheb yeh titles kaha se late ho...sach kahu toh bahut hi badhiya update tha...apni bharatiya sanskrati aur itihas ka gehra misran dekh kar aaj bahut acha laga...really unique writing skill...bravo...

Story toh hawas ka bhayanak roop le rahi hai...jahan pyar ka namo nishan nahi hai...dookha dekhne layak hoga...

Arjun toh hero hai...kamaal toh hoga hi...lekin Shankar baap kyun hai...yeh dheere dheere ujagrit ho raha hai...dono character kamaal ke hai...lekin yeh toh bas shuruart hai...Great writing skill...keep the flow...Great.

Yeh pimping apne hero ko bahut bhari padne wali hai...riya ki gaand...ankit ko fantasy ka khoon chakhana...getting exciting bro...keep it up...

Riya is a silent player...told her dad's plan to Avi...Avi reacted with anal punishment. Story is at exciting corner...let see the battle between love and lust...Great

Welcome back....ek baar...100 baar...

Faadu update bro...Aapne toh kamaal kar diya...keep it up...great.

Great story writing...great skill...great flow.

Bhai saheb...incest hai...family sex hai...kya trust aur samman ka bhi mahaul hoga...ya sirf sex hi hoga...pyar aur emotions nahi....Nice...well done... congrats for the new story...may receive all success just like...Kamina Bhai...Great...

Great bro...best.

Maa ko maa hi rakhna...khwahisoo ke chakker main...kuch aur mat bana dena...mom...and son...are great...keep them great...

Great story bro...

Yeh story sirf aur sirf entertainment hai...baki kuch nahin...Rohit hai kaun...sirf ek character...ek shigandi...

Great emotions...Great drama...Great feeling...Great narration...Keep it great.. Great flow...Great...