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Really? 18 ki ladki aur 55 ka aadmi? Jab 10 saal baad mar jaayega tab wo kya life jiyegi? I know it's just an imaginary story but shouldn't it be a bit practical? Aur agar sirf erotic journey hogi where Vanita and Manohar will just have sex, to alag baat hai. But if you're counting it as a love...

Aisi hi story ki talash thi jahaan Incest ke naam par thoda romance ho, naaki kewal lust. Bahut pehle padhi thi is genre ki story, jahaan Incest tag ke saath ek achhi romantic kahani ho. Achha laga dekhkar ki aapne is story ko shuru kiya.Ruhi aur Harsh ka rishta itna badhiya likha hai aapne...

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Aaj hi dekha ki story waapis aa gayi hai. 204 update tak read kiya hua tha uske baad story band ho gayi thi. Ab dobara start karunga padhna 205 update se. Bahut hi achhi story thi ye, one of my favourites.Btw. Multiverse waala angle abhi bhi hai kya story mein? Aisa isliye pucha kyonki wo...

Ye to aap hi jaano bhai. Password bhool gaye hoge ID ka, ye ek reason ho sakta hai. Par yadi aisa tha bhi to aap multiple IDs se stories start nahi karte... So, aap hi jaano bhai asal kaaran to.

Ek hi ID se saari stories likhte Asad bhai, itni IDs banane ki kya zarurat thi? Kam se kam 10 behatreen stories hoti aapki ek hi ID ke saath...

Zaroor karo bhai.

Intezaar...

Nayi kahani ki shuruaat ke liye aapko shubhkamnaye. :congrats:

Abhi puri story padh li hai bhai. Bahut badiya likha hai abhi tak aapne. Jitna mujhe samajh aaya hai us hisaab se Kishan jaldi hi marne waala hai, aur fir uska punarjanm hoga. Iska reason yahi hai ki jin god/godess ka avtar/ansh aapne Kishan aur Neha ko bataya hai us hisaab se unmei prem...

Matlab bhai nisha ki zindagi bhi Roshni jaisi hi ho jaayegi? Veeru nahi bacha payaega use?Btw. Congratulations for new story!

Unhone aapke brain ko child nahi bola bhai. Poori line padho unki, “Ab kahani lekhak ka brain child hai”.. Is line ka matlab hua ki Kahani/story ka janm lekhak ke brain se hota hai, so story is a child of the writer.

Bhai ab Kuchh Rang Zindagi Ke, complete ho gayi hai to Tawaifzada start karoge ya fir koyi aur story?And Bhai Manorama waali story kab restart hogi?

Gazab ki pakad hai aapki Hindi bhasha par. Abhi tak badhiya likha hai aapne. Ek sawaal tha, kya kahani Incest hai ya Adultery, yaani Akash ki Maa/Behen ko aap kisi baahar waale ke saath bhi dikhane waale ho kya, jaisi jhalak is update mein saamne aayi?Agar aisa hua to kahani satya mein kharab...

Haha.. Punit aise hi Puja se kata kata rehne lagega, Puja ko job par dheron gifts milenge, paise milenge aur Punit use deserve nahin karta yahi uske andar daala jaayega.. Puja fir shayad kisi aur ke saath so jaayegi, Punit ko bhi pata chal jaayega, par wo kuchh nahin kahega aur randi rona karta...

Karn ke paas bhi teenon the... Brahmastra, Brahmshirastra, Brahmandastra.. par wo unhe use kahaan kar sakta tha? Bhagwaan Parshuram ke shraap ke kaaran..

Same here..

Means, Puja will be involved with outsiders too?

Is it incest ya fir adultery bhi hai ismein?

Will you complete this story? Maine almost 250-260 Update tak padha hai isse but us se aage ye incomplete thi.As you're copying it, so just want to ask whether you'll complete it or just post till the update, it has been written by the original writer?