Abhimanyu Roy
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Aisi hi story ki talash thi jahaan Incest ke naam par thoda romance ho, naaki kewal lust. Bahut pehle padhi thi is genre ki story, jahaan Incest tag ke saath ek achhi romantic kahani ho. Achha laga dekhkar ki aapne is story ko shuru kiya.
Ruhi aur Harsh ka rishta itna badhiya likha hai aapne, ki jitni bhi tarif karun kam hi hogi. Especially dono mei jo understanding hai kamaal ki lagi. Dhruv ke rup mei ek obstacle aaya hai kahani mei par shayad yahi Ruhi ka ek test hoga ki wo Harsh par kitna trust karti hai. Kyonki laga yahi hai ki Dhruv ka target Harsh aur Ruhi mei issues laana hai. Par jitna vishwas karti hai Ruhi Harsh par, aisa hona possible nahi.
Tushar aur Srishti ne na sirf Harsh ko balki puri family ko dhoka diya hai. Arun to khul kar bolta hai ki Tushar ne galat kiya par lagta hai ki agar future mei wo dono waapis aaye tab shayad Neha maaf kar degi unko, especially Tushar ko. Family mei darar padne ki possibility bhi hai. Overall, kaafi badhiya laga story ko padhke, lagta hai ki Harsh ke pyaar ki journey Ruhi ke saath badi exciting hone waali hai.
Isi tarah likhte rahiye aur apni health ka bhi dhyan rakhiye. Best of Luck.
Ruhi aur Harsh ka rishta itna badhiya likha hai aapne, ki jitni bhi tarif karun kam hi hogi. Especially dono mei jo understanding hai kamaal ki lagi. Dhruv ke rup mei ek obstacle aaya hai kahani mei par shayad yahi Ruhi ka ek test hoga ki wo Harsh par kitna trust karti hai. Kyonki laga yahi hai ki Dhruv ka target Harsh aur Ruhi mei issues laana hai. Par jitna vishwas karti hai Ruhi Harsh par, aisa hona possible nahi.
Tushar aur Srishti ne na sirf Harsh ko balki puri family ko dhoka diya hai. Arun to khul kar bolta hai ki Tushar ne galat kiya par lagta hai ki agar future mei wo dono waapis aaye tab shayad Neha maaf kar degi unko, especially Tushar ko. Family mei darar padne ki possibility bhi hai. Overall, kaafi badhiya laga story ko padhke, lagta hai ki Harsh ke pyaar ki journey Ruhi ke saath badi exciting hone waali hai.
Isi tarah likhte rahiye aur apni health ka bhi dhyan rakhiye. Best of Luck.