parkas
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Bahut hi badhiya update diya hai Rohit875 bhai.....Update > 58
Mene ankhe band to jaroor kar li thi kintu muje need nhi aa rhi to kyonki m jo ka rha tha pta nhi bo sahi hai ya galat kuch samjh nhi aa rha tha kuch to tha jo muje majbur kar rha tha sochne k liye bas samjh m nhi aa rha tha k kya hai bo khair y sab mene apne dimag s jhatak diye aur so gye*uhhhhhhhhch * teri maa ka bhosda fadu mar dala r bahen chod
subha lagbhag 7 baje meri ankh khuli to dekha dono mujhse chipak kar so rhi thi dono k chehre main etni masoomiyat thi k m khud kho gya dono k chehre m dono ek s bad kar ek thi sayad hi a hi tak muje koi mila ho inki takkar ka khubsoorati main
khair mene dono k mathe ko bari bari choom kr uthaya to dono n ankhe kholi aur boli
sweety > bhai sone do na Etna acha lag rha ahi apke upar sone m main to nhi uthne bali muh bna kar boli aur fir a ankh band ka li
anjali > mujhe uthane ki to sochna bhi mat samjha aur so ja mujhe need aa rhi hai
Main > o maha raniyo thoda dimag lgao mom uth gyi hogi samjhi aur mujhe kam s bhi jana hai
Anjali > mom ko pta hai hum tere pas hai to let uthenge to so ja aur apna kam bad m kar liyo
main apne man m socha y aise nhi manegi soda karna padega
TO main bola
main > acha eske badle m kya chahiye
mere Etna bolte hi dono ke chehre par shararti mushkan aa gyi main kuch samjhte hue bola
main > nhiiiíiiiii
usko chhod kar aur kuch mang lo
dono > nhi dena hai to bolo varna rahne dete hai aur so gyi bapas dono
main > acha ruko thik hai milega par jab main kahunga tab manjoor hai
dono > promise karo
main > bharosa nhi hai kya
dono > hai bharosa par us mamle main nhi hai na aur hasne lgi
to main bhi has pda ,bahut chalak ban rhi ho
dono > aur aap jo hume bevkuf bnane ki soch rhe hai uska kya
main jhenpte hue tumhe kaise pta
anjali > hum sab jante hai. Teri bahene bhi hai aur pyar bhi to Etna to pta hi hoga na
main > thik hai promise ab uth jao
fir mene dono ko bari bari kiss kiya to anjali n mere lund ko daba diya
lund n gali dete hue kaha
to dono ek dam s chonk gyi k y aavaj kaha s aa gyi
to main ek dam s hadvda gya
anjali > tumne gali di kya
Sweety > do mene bhi suna tha
main> ( man main ) mar gye bahen chod kya jaroorat thi bakne ki
lund abbe chodu bahen chod banne main mja hai aur usne etni jhor a dva diya tha ka mer muh s nikal gya
dono > kaha kho gye javav
nhi diya
main > filhal muje jana hoga aa kar batata hu aur fir main fresh hua aur ma ko bta kr nikal gya ghar kyo ki muje d raj ka message mil chuka tha
main jaise hi baha pahuncha adrishya roop main
to samne don sena ek dusre s ladne k liye bilkul teyar thi
aaj bhi durmukha sur yudh main nhi aaya tha aur na hi ketka sur tha kyonki use durmukha nai un sab k pas bhej diya tha Rocky aur uske dosto ki madad karne k liye
aaj yudh main durmukha k dono bete aaye the ladne k liye
agnya sur aur makra sur
un dono ko is bar bheja gya tha yudh k liye aur rja sur mahal m aapat kal k liye sena teyar kar rha tha
d raj n jab dekha k agnya sur aur makra sur bahut hi kushal yodha pratit ho rhe hai to bo chintit ho gye kyo ki un dono ko vardan prapt tha k unhe sirf aur sirf prem se hi mara ja sakta hai
y sun kar to sabhi devta heran ho gye ki es vardan ka tod kya hai
sabhi n Arjun ki taraf dekha to bo bhi soch main tha k aakhir inhe mara kaise jaye
kya soch rhe ho devo fir shaitani hasi haste hue
*ha hah ha ha ha ha ha ha ha *
hum amar hai hume koi nhi mar sakta hai hai na hi tum aur na hi tumhara dand nayak samjh gye
ab tum sab devo mout k ghat utar diya jayega aur kaha hai tumhara bo dand nayak jiske dam par tum uchal rhe the
Abhi bo kuch aur bolta k
devika bol padi teeno ma beti bahut hi gusse main thi
devika > apni had m rah makra sur janta bhi hai kiske bar e main bol rha hai
fir haste hue aur tu ghabra mat tujhe marne k liye unki aavshyakta nhi padegi samjha aur tere fufa ko aur sena pati humne mara tha agar hmare swami n mara hota to unke sareer k tukde bhi nhi milte samjha
fir teeno hasne lgi unki bat sun kar dono mirchi lag gyi aur uska para asman m chad gya
agnya sur > teri etni majal sali ek ishtri hokar hume dhamka rhi tujhe to sabke samne chodunga aur teri betiyo ko bhi samjhi aur hum dono bhai jab tum teeno ko chodenge uske bad hmare senik bhi tumhe chodenge
unki bat sun kar mera para Chad gya lekin agle hi pal baha par sweety aur anjali aa gyi jinki ankhe ek dam lal thi gusse ke mare
dono ghurrate hue kaha
dono >bahut sok hai na tujhe aurato ki abroo s khelne ka unhe bistar ka khilona samjhte ho na tum aaj k bad tum kuch karne k yogya nhi rahoge Etna kahte hi dono n ek sath chutki bjai aur us yudha sthal main un dono ki cheekhe gunj gyi
to dono n dekha k unka lund nhi bacha hai ab
to dono k krodh ki seema khatam ho gyi aur yudh ka aadesh d diya gya aur ek bar fir yudh chhid chuka tha
mujhe pta tha k un dono ko marne ka upay mere pas nhi hai esliye muje jo bhi karna hai jaldi karna hoga esliye mene apne sareer s vetali ko bahar bulaya to mujhe dekh kar bahut khush ho gyi aur boli
vetali > swami aap fir apne aas pas dekha to bo samjh gyi aur mere gale lag gyi
to mene uske mathe ko chuma aur bola
main > vetali dekhi mere pas abhi tak in dono bhaiyo ko marne ka upay nhi hai m use lene ja rha hu esliye tab tak dyan rakhna ki anjali aur sweety k sath sath sabhi ki sahayata k liye chhod kar ja rha hu agar jaroorat pade to devo ki help kar dena aur yahi s dhyan rakhna tum unhe rok sakthi m janta hu y
acha main chalta hu
etna kah kar main baha s gayab ho gya aur vetali anjali aur sweety k pas pahuch gyi to dono usse mil kar bahut khush hue vetali bhi bahut khush hue mil kar baise to mene un sabhi par kavach lga diya tha jab jaroorat padegi apne aap active ho jayega
fie m ek tree k neeche baith gya aur dhyan lgane lga kafi der dhyan main rha aur fir mene gurudev ko yad kiya
main > gurudev aap kaha hai muje apki saahayta ki avshyakta hai
tabhi mere dimag m guru dev ki aavaj gunji
gurudev > kya hua putra Arjun etne vichalit kyo ho
main > pranam guru dev apko sb to pta hai
Guru dev > mushkra diye aur bole kabhi kabhi marg hamre samne hote hue bhi hume dikhai nhi deta hai thoda dhyan s dekho to tumhare sval m hi uska javav chhipa hua hai
main aage kuch puch pata k guru dev n contact tod diya main fir s
yudh bhumi par pahuch gya dekha to teeno bahut dyan s yudha ko dekh rhi thi
anjali > dekho kaise sweety ,vetali bo teeno kitni kusalta s yudh lad rhi hai
Sweety > didu y kon hai teeno aur y bhi inke sath lad rhi hai
anjali > pta nhi y kon hai
vetali > bo teeno garud lok s hai
baki apko kuch samay bad pta chal jayega
idhar yudha main
teeno ma aur betiya mil kar asuro ko katne chhatne main lagi thi to d raj bhi makra sur s bhi chuke the
agni dev n jal dev n agnya sur par hamla kar diya tha
Jinki shakti hva thi vo bavandor bna kar asuri sena ko titar vitar kar rhe the
aise hi koi na koi kisi na kisi ko roke hue tha yudh maidan m es bad kar ek Asur the
agnya sur agni dev par var karta hai ek Agni ka gola bna kar
agni dev haste hue
agni dev > bas etni takat hai aur unhone bhi ek ek gola bheja lekin unke n do colour the jaise dono apas m takraye bhayank aavaj pure vatavarn m gunj gyi
agnya > teri y mjal tu muje sikhayega aur kahte hue k s ek bheeshan var karne lga
agni dev bhi uska javab. D rhe the
inka yudh kafi bheesan chal rha tha
makra sur n apne muh s ek gola fenka jo aadhe m jakar ek jal k roop m badal gya to d raj apne ashtra s ek var kiya aur jal tukdo m bikhar gya dono taraf s ek s ek bheeshan parhar ho rhe the
makra sur > aaj k bad tu kabhi bhi khud ko dev nhi kah payega d raj khud ko Raja samjhta hai tu aurato k pallu m chupne bale khud ko yodha kahta hai tu
d raj > gusse main jiyada bad bad m mat kar varna tera loda kat kar latka dunga tere mahal k bahar
fir kuch soch kar hasne lge
d raj > are m to bul hi gya devi anjali aur sweety n tumhe pahle hi namard bna diya hai ab m tumhe tni buri tarah haraunga k log tumhe yodha nhi kahenge bo dusra bala darja denge
d raj ki bat ko samjh aate hi uska krodh apne charam par pahuch gya aur usne divya astro ka prayo karna suru kar diya kafi der tak dev raj use rokte rhe fir unhone apne vajra ka var kiya jisse bo buri tarah jakhmi ho gya
main abhi bhi vardan k tod k bare m soch rha tha to muje guru dev ki bat yad aa gyi jab mene yudha bhumi m dekha to dono bhai vish ka prayog kar rhe hai jisse hmari sena dheere dheere kamjor pad rhi thi
tabhi muje yad aaya agar kisi ko vish pran deta hai to kya sabhi ko pran dene bali koi aise bastu hai jo uske liye ulta asar kare tabhi mere dimag main aaya milk
HA y es vardan ka tod ho sakta hai
main baha s turant gayab ho gya aur pahuch gya go lok main
main > he devi kam dhenu mata mujhe darshan dijiye muje apki avasyakta hai
etna kahte ho samne aa gyi
kamdhenu > kaho putra muje kis liye yad kiya hai
MAin > mata is dharm yudh ko jeetne k liye muje apke dhudh ki avshyakta hai kripya muje mamta aur sneh(pyar) bhare dhudh dene ki kirpa kariye mate
mata > avshya putra y lo es patra m mamta s bharpur dhudh hai ese l jakar un dono k upar dal kar unhe Nahla do
main > ji mata dhanyabad mata
MAta > aayushman bhav putra
aur mata chali gyi
edhar krodh main aa kar majra sur n ek bade makde ka roop l liya aur aatank mchane lga ab aisa lg rha tha k dev har jayenge
idhar agnya sur bhi ek vishal Asur dabav m badal gya aur charo aur tabahi felane lga sena ghavrane lgi to anjali sweety aur vetali soch m pad gye
edhar devika apni putrriyo k sath milkar un dono s bhid gyi kyonki sabhi dev ghayal ho chuke the
Agnya sur > haste hue ,ha ha ha ha, dekho kon ladne aaya hai najuk aur bistar ki sobha bdane bali komal nariya
dobo hasne lge lekin enki hasi jyada nhi tiki aur devika aur komal n ek ek var kiya dono par dono dur ja kar gire aur apne normal roop m aa gye y dekh kar sabhi khush ho gye bo dono krodh m bhadak gye
to unhone bhi ghatak var karba chalu kar diya kintu dono taraf barabar ki takkar ho rhi thi
idhar durmukha k dut n use shandesh diya k dono raj kumaro ko napunsak bna diya hai vo bhi un dharti ki nariyo n
etna sunte hi bo bhadak gya
durmukha > dand nayak tujhe chhodunga nhiiiiiiiiiíiiiii main
aur kahte hue gayab ho gya apni bachi kuch sena lekar
idhar lagbhag un teeno n mil kar un dono ki halat kharab kar di
tabhi dand nayak aa gya us patra ko lekar aur bo patra usne devika k hatho m d diya aur bola
Main > y lo aur chda do bhog to teeno mujhe savaliya najro s dekhne lgi aur fir ghurne lgi to m jhenpte hue
main > are pahle karo to sahi
fir teeni n pakad kar use in dono par dalna chalu kar diya aur dono chhillane lge
*Nhiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii* aisa nhi ho sakta hum mar nhi sakte y dravya hume hani pahucha rha hai aur dekhte dekhte dono jal kar bhasam ho gye
tabhi maidan main ek bahut bhayank aur dard bhari cheekh gunj gyi
aavaj >
*nhiiiiiiiiiíiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii*
aaj k liye eta hi
Guys kal y yudha samapt ho jayega esse aage hum chalenge prathi par baha aage kya hoga aur kon kon si musibate us par havi hongi padne k liye bane rahiye hmare sath
Dhanyabad
Nice and beautiful update.....
, superb, 
