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Update. 51



Dand nayak k samne ek bahut bhayank aur khatrnak janvar aur insan ka mila hua roop tha jiske ek hi var s badi s badi chttan bhi mitti m mil jaye
(Y bahi h jo Arjun ko barfile ilake m mila tha apni yatra k douran geedado ka raja )


geedad manav >

Pranam dand nayak

Arjun > pranam

Geedad manav > etne samay bad muje kaise yad kiya dand nayak



Arjun> kyonki tumhe bhi is dharm yudh m bhag lene ka sobhagya prapt hua hai


Geedad manav> y to sach m mera sobhagya hai ki mujh jaise shaitan ko bhi darm yudh m bhag lekar burai ka ant karne ka absar prapt hua


Arjun > tum sayad bhul rhe ho ki burai sirf ho aur sirf neeyat m hoti hai shaktiya achhi ya buri nhi hoti hai balki unko istemal karne bala acha ya bura hota hai uski soch par hi achhai aur burai nirbhar hoti hai

Geedad manav > ji dand nayak samjh gya

kahiye mere liye kya aagya hai

Fir Arjun n apne ander s geedado ki baki sena ko bahar nikal diya

jo lagbhag s bhi jyda the

y tumhari sena hai jao aur jakar dev raj ki sahayata karo aur khatm karo es yudh ko


idhar dev raj kafi jakhmi ho chuke the lekin fir bhi unhone har nhi mani thi

mesha sur

har man lo dev raj kyo apni mirttyu ko davat d rhe ho

ha hah ha ha ha ha ha ha ha

Aur hasne lagta hai

dev raj

kabhi nhi mesha sur m kabhi har nhi manunga samjhe tum aur dev raj fir s bheeshan prahar karne lgte hai jiske karn mesha sur dur jakar girta hai

mesha sur

Cheekhte hue devvvvvv rajjjjjjjjjjj tumne mere sabar ka imtehaan le rhe ho tujhe main chhodunga nhiiiiiiiiiíiiiii

aur Etna kahkar vo dev raj k upar ek bahut hi bhayankar prahar karta hai lekin uss prahar ko koi beech m hi rok deta hai

devika

etni bhi kya jaldi hai mesha sur mujhse to mil lo


mesha sur haste hue

hah hah ha ha ha

tumhe ladna nhi chahiye striyo k hath m shastra sobha nhi dete bo to bardo k bistar ki sobha bdane k kam aati hai

tumhe bhi m ek moka deta peeche hat jao aur bad m tumhe m apne bister par aane ka moka dunga samjhi

uski bat sun kar devika bhadak jati hai aur Apni talvar ko hava m ghuma kar kisi cheez ko katne ki style m talvar marti hai jisse ek bhayankar prahar ban kar mesha sur ki traf jata hai jaise hi vo prahar mesha sur s takrata hai mesha sur ki bhayanak cheekh pure yudh medan m gunj jati hai
nhiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii Ahhhhhhhh marrrrrr gyaaaaaaaa
tujhhhhheeeee chhodunggggaaaa nhiiiiiiiiiíiiiii


jisse ek pal k liye to sabhi ruk jate hai


Devika


acha pahle pakad to l

dusri taraf Ritika pavak dev k samne aa gyiiiiiiiiii thi unhe bachane k liye

ketka sur

Aarre waah kachhihhhiiiii kali esko m hi mashlumga samjhe tum log , aaahhhhhh ,kya javani hai eski

ritika uski bat sun kar aur jyada gusssaa ho jati hai

ritika

Tu mujhe masalemga sale 6kkke tera khda bhi hota hai ya aise bhonk rha hai teri bibi to mene suna hai kisi aur k neeche let jati hai

lagta hai tujhe pta nhi chla abhi tak fir Etna shaktishali hone ka kya labhh


bichare ketka sur ko ritika ki bate kisi teer ki tarah chubh rhi thi gusse m pagal ho gya aur apna Dhanush utha kar ek bad ek bheeshan bar karne lga ritika bhi koi mamuli ladki nhi thi bo uske har var ko vifal kar deti jisse uska gussa bhi bad gya to usne apni gda utha li aur bhid gya ritika n bhi utha li lekin ketka sur par esme bhi ritika bhari pad rhi thi

ketka

agar aise hi chalta rha to jaldi y mujhe hra degi mujhe kuch aur karna hoga

tabhi uske chehre par ek kamini mushkan fail jati hai

ha ese bal s nhi ese chhal s harana hoga

ketka sur

ritika kyo apan time aur shakti barbad kar rhi ho tum duniya ki sabse bhadi maharani ban sakti ho socho tumhare pas besumar paisa hoga sab tumhari aagya ka palan karenge tum duniya ki ha r subhidha ka labh l sakti hai tumhare jaise dusra koi nhi hoga

dheere dheere ritika k prahar rukne lagte hai aur vo uske lobh pansh m bandhne lagti hai aur uske jal m puri taraf fansh chuki thi uske charo taraf ek raashi aa jati hai


idhar devika ko bhi esha sur n apne mayajal m fansh liya tha uske charo taraf sarp hi sarp the mesha sur n devika ko nag pansh m bandh diya tha

devika

M Yaha kaise aa gyi m to us dusht mesha sur s yudh kar rhi thi y sanp etne sare kana s aa gye ab n kaise nikali yaha s y to mere najdeek hi aa te ja rhe hai ab m kya karu

Hey dand nayak meri sahayta kijiye

idhar kanthka sur n bhi devika ki chhoti putri ko apne varo s thka diya tha dono thak chuke the sabhi to ashahay ek dusre ki taraf dekh rhe the kyonki unki shaktiya lagbhag samapt ho chuki thi thakne k karn
aur tabhi kanthka sur n apne hath s ek lejar jaisi kiran nikali aur usse Komal ki taraf kar diya

thake hone k karn bo usse bandhan ko tod na saki aur usi m bandh kar murchit ho gyi

jaise dand nayak n apni sena ko aadesh diya tabhi uske samne ek tej divya prakash utpann ho gya aur usne s ek aavaj aai

ruko dand nayak

jaise hi Arjun n Avaj sun kar samne dekha to chounk gya




Ajj k liye Etna hi



kya ye teeno es chakraview s nikal payengi ya dand nayak kuch kar payenge ya is yudh ko har jayenge kon karega dand nayak ki sahayata aakhir ko tha es prakash k peeche aur dand nayak ko usne kyon rok diya

y sab janne k liye bane rhiye agle update k liye

Dhanyabad





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Update > 58

Mene ankhe band to jaroor kar li thi kintu muje need nhi aa rhi to kyonki m jo ka rha tha pta nhi bo sahi hai ya galat kuch samjh nhi aa rha tha kuch to tha jo muje majbur kar rha tha sochne k liye bas samjh m nhi aa rha tha k kya hai bo khair y sab mene apne dimag s jhatak diye aur so gye

subha lagbhag 7 baje meri ankh khuli to dekha dono mujhse chipak kar so rhi thi dono k chehre main etni masoomiyat thi k m khud kho gya dono k chehre m dono ek s bad kar ek thi sayad hi a hi tak muje koi mila ho inki takkar ka khubsoorati main
khair mene dono k mathe ko bari bari choom kr uthaya to dono n ankhe kholi aur boli

sweety > bhai sone do na Etna acha lag rha ahi apke upar sone m main to nhi uthne bali muh bna kar boli aur fir a ankh band ka li

anjali > mujhe uthane ki to sochna bhi mat samjha aur so ja mujhe need aa rhi hai

Main > o maha raniyo thoda dimag lgao mom uth gyi hogi samjhi aur mujhe kam s bhi jana hai

Anjali > mom ko pta hai hum tere pas hai to let uthenge to so ja aur apna kam bad m kar liyo

main apne man m socha y aise nhi manegi soda karna padega

TO main bola

main > acha eske badle m kya chahiye

mere Etna bolte hi dono ke chehre par shararti mushkan aa gyi main kuch samjhte hue bola

main > nhiiiíiiiii
usko chhod kar aur kuch mang lo

dono > nhi dena hai to bolo varna rahne dete hai aur so gyi bapas dono

main > acha ruko thik hai milega par jab main kahunga tab manjoor hai

dono > promise karo

main > bharosa nhi hai kya


dono > hai bharosa par us mamle main nhi hai na aur hasne lgi

to main bhi has pda ,bahut chalak ban rhi ho

dono > aur aap jo hume bevkuf bnane ki soch rhe hai uska kya

main jhenpte hue tumhe kaise pta

anjali > hum sab jante hai. Teri bahene bhi hai aur pyar bhi to Etna to pta hi hoga na

main > thik hai promise ab uth jao

fir mene dono ko bari bari kiss kiya to anjali n mere lund ko daba diya
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*uhhhhhhhhch * teri maa ka bhosda fadu mar dala r bahen chod



lund n gali dete hue kaha



to dono ek dam s chonk gyi k y aavaj kaha s aa gyi



to main ek dam s hadvda gya



anjali > tumne gali di kya



Sweety > do mene bhi suna tha



main> ( man main ) mar gye bahen chod kya jaroorat thi bakne ki



lund abbe chodu bahen chod banne main mja hai aur usne etni jhor a dva diya tha ka mer muh s nikal gya



dono > kaha kho gye javav

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nhi diya

main > filhal muje jana hoga aa kar batata hu aur fir main fresh hua aur ma ko bta kr nikal gya ghar kyo ki muje d raj ka message mil chuka tha

main jaise hi baha pahuncha adrishya roop main

to samne don sena ek dusre s ladne k liye bilkul teyar thi

aaj bhi durmukha sur yudh main nhi aaya tha aur na hi ketka sur tha kyonki use durmukha nai un sab k pas bhej diya tha Rocky aur uske dosto ki madad karne k liye

aaj yudh main durmukha k dono bete aaye the ladne k liye

agnya sur aur makra sur

un dono ko is bar bheja gya tha yudh k liye aur rja sur mahal m aapat kal k liye sena teyar kar rha tha

d raj n jab dekha k agnya sur aur makra sur bahut hi kushal yodha pratit ho rhe hai to bo chintit ho gye kyo ki un dono ko vardan prapt tha k unhe sirf aur sirf prem se hi mara ja sakta hai

y sun kar to sabhi devta heran ho gye ki es vardan ka tod kya hai

sabhi n Arjun ki taraf dekha to bo bhi soch main tha k aakhir inhe mara kaise jaye

kya soch rhe ho devo fir shaitani hasi haste hue

*ha hah ha ha ha ha ha ha ha *

hum amar hai hume koi nhi mar sakta hai hai na hi tum aur na hi tumhara dand nayak samjh gye

ab tum sab devo mout k ghat utar diya jayega aur kaha hai tumhara bo dand nayak jiske dam par tum uchal rhe the

Abhi bo kuch aur bolta k

devika bol padi teeno ma beti bahut hi gusse main thi

devika > apni had m rah makra sur janta bhi hai kiske bar e main bol rha hai

fir haste hue aur tu ghabra mat tujhe marne k liye unki aavshyakta nhi padegi samjha aur tere fufa ko aur sena pati humne mara tha agar hmare swami n mara hota to unke sareer k tukde bhi nhi milte samjha

fir teeno hasne lgi unki bat sun kar dono mirchi lag gyi aur uska para asman m chad gya


agnya sur > teri etni majal sali ek ishtri hokar hume dhamka rhi tujhe to sabke samne chodunga aur teri betiyo ko bhi samjhi aur hum dono bhai jab tum teeno ko chodenge uske bad hmare senik bhi tumhe chodenge

unki bat sun kar mera para Chad gya lekin agle hi pal baha par sweety aur anjali aa gyi jinki ankhe ek dam lal thi gusse ke mare

dono ghurrate hue kaha

dono >bahut sok hai na tujhe aurato ki abroo s khelne ka unhe bistar ka khilona samjhte ho na tum aaj k bad tum kuch karne k yogya nhi rahoge Etna kahte hi dono n ek sath chutki bjai aur us yudha sthal main un dono ki cheekhe gunj gyi

to dono n dekha k unka lund nhi bacha hai ab

to dono k krodh ki seema khatam ho gyi aur yudh ka aadesh d diya gya aur ek bar fir yudh chhid chuka tha

mujhe pta tha k un dono ko marne ka upay mere pas nhi hai esliye muje jo bhi karna hai jaldi karna hoga esliye mene apne sareer s vetali ko bahar bulaya to mujhe dekh kar bahut khush ho gyi aur boli

vetali > swami aap fir apne aas pas dekha to bo samjh gyi aur mere gale lag gyi

to mene uske mathe ko chuma aur bola

main > vetali dekhi mere pas abhi tak in dono bhaiyo ko marne ka upay nhi hai m use lene ja rha hu esliye tab tak dyan rakhna ki anjali aur sweety k sath sath sabhi ki sahayata k liye chhod kar ja rha hu agar jaroorat pade to devo ki help kar dena aur yahi s dhyan rakhna tum unhe rok sakthi m janta hu y

acha main chalta hu

etna kah kar main baha s gayab ho gya aur vetali anjali aur sweety k pas pahuch gyi to dono usse mil kar bahut khush hue vetali bhi bahut khush hue mil kar baise to mene un sabhi par kavach lga diya tha jab jaroorat padegi apne aap active ho jayega

fie m ek tree k neeche baith gya aur dhyan lgane lga kafi der dhyan main rha aur fir mene gurudev ko yad kiya

main > gurudev aap kaha hai muje apki saahayta ki avshyakta hai

tabhi mere dimag m guru dev ki aavaj gunji

gurudev > kya hua putra Arjun etne vichalit kyo ho

main > pranam guru dev apko sb to pta hai

Guru dev > mushkra diye aur bole kabhi kabhi marg hamre samne hote hue bhi hume dikhai nhi deta hai thoda dhyan s dekho to tumhare sval m hi uska javav chhipa hua hai

main aage kuch puch pata k guru dev n contact tod diya main fir s

yudh bhumi par pahuch gya dekha to teeno bahut dyan s yudha ko dekh rhi thi

anjali > dekho kaise sweety ,vetali bo teeno kitni kusalta s yudh lad rhi hai

Sweety > didu y kon hai teeno aur y bhi inke sath lad rhi hai

anjali > pta nhi y kon hai

vetali > bo teeno garud lok s hai

baki apko kuch samay bad pta chal jayega

idhar yudha main

teeno ma aur betiya mil kar asuro ko katne chhatne main lagi thi to d raj bhi makra sur s bhi chuke the

agni dev n jal dev n agnya sur par hamla kar diya tha
Jinki shakti hva thi vo bavandor bna kar asuri sena ko titar vitar kar rhe the

aise hi koi na koi kisi na kisi ko roke hue tha yudh maidan m es bad kar ek Asur the

agnya sur agni dev par var karta hai ek Agni ka gola bna kar

agni dev haste hue

agni dev > bas etni takat hai aur unhone bhi ek ek gola bheja lekin unke n do colour the jaise dono apas m takraye bhayank aavaj pure vatavarn m gunj gyi

agnya > teri y mjal tu muje sikhayega aur kahte hue k s ek bheeshan var karne lga

agni dev bhi uska javab. D rhe the

inka yudh kafi bheesan chal rha tha

makra sur n apne muh s ek gola fenka jo aadhe m jakar ek jal k roop m badal gya to d raj apne ashtra s ek var kiya aur jal tukdo m bikhar gya dono taraf s ek s ek bheeshan parhar ho rhe the

makra sur > aaj k bad tu kabhi bhi khud ko dev nhi kah payega d raj khud ko Raja samjhta hai tu aurato k pallu m chupne bale khud ko yodha kahta hai tu

d raj > gusse main jiyada bad bad m mat kar varna tera loda kat kar latka dunga tere mahal k bahar

fir kuch soch kar hasne lge

d raj > are m to bul hi gya devi anjali aur sweety n tumhe pahle hi namard bna diya hai ab m tumhe tni buri tarah haraunga k log tumhe yodha nhi kahenge bo dusra bala darja denge

d raj ki bat ko samjh aate hi uska krodh apne charam par pahuch gya aur usne divya astro ka prayo karna suru kar diya kafi der tak dev raj use rokte rhe fir unhone apne vajra ka var kiya jisse bo buri tarah jakhmi ho gya

main abhi bhi vardan k tod k bare m soch rha tha to muje guru dev ki bat yad aa gyi jab mene yudha bhumi m dekha to dono bhai vish ka prayog kar rhe hai jisse hmari sena dheere dheere kamjor pad rhi thi

tabhi muje yad aaya agar kisi ko vish pran deta hai to kya sabhi ko pran dene bali koi aise bastu hai jo uske liye ulta asar kare tabhi mere dimag main aaya milk

HA y es vardan ka tod ho sakta hai

main baha s turant gayab ho gya aur pahuch gya go lok main

main > he devi kam dhenu mata mujhe darshan dijiye muje apki avasyakta hai


etna kahte ho samne aa gyi

kamdhenu > kaho putra muje kis liye yad kiya hai

MAin > mata is dharm yudh ko jeetne k liye muje apke dhudh ki avshyakta hai kripya muje mamta aur sneh(pyar) bhare dhudh dene ki kirpa kariye mate

mata > avshya putra y lo es patra m mamta s bharpur dhudh hai ese l jakar un dono k upar dal kar unhe Nahla do

main > ji mata dhanyabad mata

MAta > aayushman bhav putra

aur mata chali gyi


edhar krodh main aa kar majra sur n ek bade makde ka roop l liya aur aatank mchane lga ab aisa lg rha tha k dev har jayenge

idhar agnya sur bhi ek vishal Asur dabav m badal gya aur charo aur tabahi felane lga sena ghavrane lgi to anjali sweety aur vetali soch m pad gye

edhar devika apni putrriyo k sath milkar un dono s bhid gyi kyonki sabhi dev ghayal ho chuke the

Agnya sur > haste hue ,ha ha ha ha, dekho kon ladne aaya hai najuk aur bistar ki sobha bdane bali komal nariya

dobo hasne lge lekin enki hasi jyada nhi tiki aur devika aur komal n ek ek var kiya dono par dono dur ja kar gire aur apne normal roop m aa gye y dekh kar sabhi khush ho gye bo dono krodh m bhadak gye

to unhone bhi ghatak var karba chalu kar diya kintu dono taraf barabar ki takkar ho rhi thi

idhar durmukha k dut n use shandesh diya k dono raj kumaro ko napunsak bna diya hai vo bhi un dharti ki nariyo n

etna sunte hi bo bhadak gya

durmukha > dand nayak tujhe chhodunga nhiiiiiiiiiíiiiii main

aur kahte hue gayab ho gya apni bachi kuch sena lekar

idhar lagbhag un teeno n mil kar un dono ki halat kharab kar di

tabhi dand nayak aa gya us patra ko lekar aur bo patra usne devika k hatho m d diya aur bola

Main > y lo aur chda do bhog to teeno mujhe savaliya najro s dekhne lgi aur fir ghurne lgi to m jhenpte hue


main > are pahle karo to sahi

fir teeni n pakad kar use in dono par dalna chalu kar diya aur dono chhillane lge

*Nhiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii* aisa nhi ho sakta hum mar nhi sakte y dravya hume hani pahucha rha hai aur dekhte dekhte dono jal kar bhasam ho gye

tabhi maidan main ek bahut bhayank aur dard bhari cheekh gunj gyi

aavaj >

*nhiiiiiiiiiíiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii*

aaj k liye eta hi




Guys kal y yudha samapt ho jayega esse aage hum chalenge prathi par baha aage kya hoga aur kon kon si musibate us par havi hongi padne k liye bane rahiye hmare sath
Dhanyabad


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Update 53 (karn pichani ka aagman )

Jaise hi d raj n Arjun aur uski baheno ko dekha to unhone sab kuch badal diya aisa lag rha tha jaise aaj k time m yudh hota hai chutki bajate hi sab kuch badal chuka tha

idhar jaise hi in dono ka badh hua durmukha ka dut turant hi pahuch gya saitan lok m



dut > maharaj ki jai ho

abhi durmukha Aram farma rha tha sham ka samay tha


durmukha > haste hue ! Kya khabar laye ho ?
kya hum yudh jeet gye hai ?

* hah hah ha haha *

dut (kanpte hue) m... Maharaj prandan dijiye

durmukha >(bhoye tante hue )
thik hai diya
ab bolo

dut > maharaj Saina pati kanthka aur mesha sur mare gye


jaise durmukha n suna bo apne singhasan s khda ho gya ek dam gussse se lal ho chuka tha durmukha

durmukha > (gusse ) m kya bak rhe ho tum in devtao m etni himmat aur takat kaha s aa gyi ki unhone in dono ko mar diya

agar sabhi devta ek sath bhi ho jaye tab bhi unme s ek ka bhi bal banka nhi kar sakte



y sab hua kaise *bolo* ek dam chilaate hue usne kaha jiske karn bichara dut to khde khde thar thar kanp rha tha


durmukha* > kya dand nayak n yudh m bhag liya tha usne us dut ko ghurte hue kaha


*boloooo* es bar etni takat s cheekha k mahal m lage kanch k seeso ki khidkiyo k kanch tut kar bikhar chuke the

aur dut to that thar kanp rha tha


idhar dono baheno n jaise hi apne bhai ki avaj suni to in dono ki bhi need khul gyi bo dono bhi room s bahar aa gyi

dushti aur mesha bahar aate hue

kya hua bhaiya aap Etna cheekh kyon rhe hain


durmukha apni baheno ko dekh kar chakit ho jata hai ki ab kya jabab d

durmukha kaisa bhi ho lekin apni baheno dukhi nhi karta tha

durmukha > kaise btau bahen

kahte hue bo soch m pad gya

dono ek sath aap bta kyo nhi rhe hai kya bat mujhe ajeeb sa lag rha hai mesha n y bat sochte hue kahi kyonki usse thodi china ho rhi thi

unhe y bhi nhi pta tha k unke pati yudh m bhag le chuke hai

durmukha lambi sans lete hue >(huh ahh )darasal mesha sur yudh m veer gati ko prapt ho chuka hai aur hmara Saina pati bhi yudh m mara gya hai y kah kar bo chup ho gya

dukh to use bhi hua tha esliye jyda kuch nhi bola

mesha > kyaaaaaa yudh ! Lekin kis k sath yudh aur hume btaya kyo nhi chilate hue mesha n durmukha s kaha

besak bo durmukha s yon sambandh banti thi kintu apne Pati s bhi prem karti thi pachle dasko s durmukha k sath sambandh nhi bnaye the

uski ankho m aansu aa gye aur bo

*dhadammmmm* ki aavaj k sath neeche gir gyi dushta n use sambhal liya uski ankho m bhi Anshu aa gye the apni bahen ki aise dasha dekh kar


dushta > y sb hua kaise aur unse yudh karne ka kya karn tha jo apne unhe chunoti di aap nhi jante ki un logo s bhidna kitna ghatak ho skta hai

durmukha uski bat sun kar chup ho gya ab bo kya bolta ki do ladkiyo k liye usne yudh kiya hai

tabhi achank s uske dimag m ek bat aayi are bo ladkiya

durmukha apne sevak ko bulata hai


durmukha *> jao jakar dekho un dono ko kaha hai bo log

sevak > ji maharaj

durmukha dut s

humne kuch pucha jai jabab do

*Kya dand nayak n yudh m bhag liya tha ya nhi ek dm uska gla pakada aur use upar utha diya ek jordar garjana ka satha bola


*jababbbbbb doooooo suna nhi tumne *

dut kanpte hue > m m mharaj dand nayak n yudh m bhag nhi liya tha bo tha hi nhi baha par


uski bat sun kar durmukha ko ek jhatka lga * kya bola abhi abhi k dand nayak n bhag nhi liya aur y sunte hi uski aascharya ki seema hi na rhi


herani k mare uski ankhe failti chali gyi usse kuch second to bilkul kuch bhi samjh nhi aa aya aisa but ki tarah khda rha

fir achank use dushta kia avaj s hosh aaya bola


kk..kya.bola tumne usne bhag nhi liya ttt to un dono ko kisne mara *bolo * uske alaba kon hai jo y sab kar sakta hai



dut bichara dar k mare thar thar kanp rha tha

aur bichari mesha to roye ka rhi thi aur dushta krodh m jal rhi thi aur mesha ko sambhal rhi thi

Dut > maharaj un dono ka bhadh un teeno n kiya hai garun lok ki maharani Devika aur uski putriya

dut ka Etna kahna tha ki bechara ladkhda kar gir gya uske to dimag n hi kam karna band kar diya tha fir jab bo hosh m aaya to ek dam gusse garja

*devikaaaaaaa*



tujhe chhodunga nhiiiiiiiiiíiiiii

uski etni bhayankar aavaj thi ki pure shaitan lok m gunj gyi

mesha jab thode hosh m aayi to usne fir s durmukha k sabal kiye

mesha > bhaiya aap batate kyon nhi aakhir es yudh karan kya tha jo app yudh m par utar aaye kya har chhoti chhoti bato k liye aap yudh ladna abhi bhi nhi bhule rote hue usne kaha

durmukha > bahen y koi chhoti bat nhi thi bat y hai ki June do sundriyan pasand aa gyi thi dharti lok par kintu unhe lana Etna aasan nhi tha kyonli.bo dand nayak ki bahene thi


m chahta tha ki ek bar m un dono a vivah lar lu dand nayak kuch nhi kar payega agar unhe m ek bar bhog kar un s vivaah kar leta to m amar ho jata kyonki dand nayak ki bahene hi meri mirttyu ka karn hai esliye m use hi khatm kar dena chahta tha lekin dand nayak n in d logo s sahayata mang li jiski bajah s y sab ho gya

m uski baheno ko uthane m to kamyab ho gya ki tu vivaah karne aur unhe bhogne k liye y yudh jeetna jaroori hai kyonki harne k bad dand nayak kuch nhi kar payega

uski bat sun kar do o bhochhaki si durmukha ko dekh rhi thi dono k muh khule hue tha aascharya k mare jab durmukha n unhe aavaj di


durmukha > kya hua sab thik hai na

dono hadvdate hue *h hn Haan sab thik hai *

durmukha to y tha karn fir haste hue sali dono ki dono us kaksh m band hai ek bar in dono s vivah kar lu fir btataunga es dand nayak ko kahte hue uski ankhe krodh m lal ho chuki thi

mesha (man m) > dand nayak tune acha nhi kiya hai y sab karke tujhe chhodunga nhi m

jin baheno k liye tune mere pati ki hatya ki hai unka bo haal karbaungi tere hi hatho s ki tu soch bhi nhi skta ki sab hua kya hai

idhar rat k 9 baj chuke the anil bhi ghar aa chuka tha sabhi khana kha kar apne ki teyari kar rhe the aur dheere dheere apne apne room m chale gye

Arjun ki ma apni soch m gum thi pta nhi bo kya soch rhi thi y to bahi janti thi ki bo kya soch rhi hai

aaj pahli bar aisa nhi hua tha k bo es tarah soch gum thi aksar bo apni soch m rat k samay aise hi gum rahti thi
jab bhi aise aise soch m gum hoti thi k uski ankho m Anshu aa jate the

bed par leti hue bo ek tak chat ko ghur rhi thi na jane kya soch kar uski ankho m aanshu aa gye the
tabhi anil n karbat li aur dekha k sarita kisi soch m gum hai aur uski ankhon m aanshu aa gye

anil > sarita kya hua kya abhi bhi tum bahi sab soch rhi ho

sarita n jab anil ki avaj suni to use koi herani nhi hue

sarita > kitna bhi bo sab bhulne ki kosis karti hu lekin nhi bhul pati kya aap bhul paye hai bo sab

Anil > n jab suna to usne pahle to Sarita l chehre ko dyan s dekha aur bola

sarita > samjh sakta hu Etna aasan nhi hai bo sab bhulna aur ek na ek din to bo sab samne aayega hi


etna sunte hi sarita ki ankho m ruke hue Anshu bahne algte hai

sarita > use jab pta chalega to kya bo humse nafrat to nhi karega na

anil > sarita sab samay par chhod dena hi thik hai jo bhi hoga achhe k liye hoga aur aur abhi bo sirf 20 ka hua hai abhi 2 sal aur hai dekhte hai kya hota hai jo bhi hoga sab achha hoga

chalo so jao ab

fir thodi der m hi dono need ki badiyo m chale gye


city dur ussi sunsan road par rat k andhere m koi chla ja rha tha peeche s dekhne par aisa lg rha tha koi ladki hai jo chali ja rhi hai

tabhi baha ek car aa jati hai to ladki use lift k liye hath deti hai

ladka > kya hua madam etni rat ko aap es sunsan raste par kar kya rhi hai.

ladki > ji m ghar ja rhi thi bo aate samay auto khrab ho gyi to baha s mujhe pedal aana pda kya aap mujhe aage tak lift de sakte hai


ladka.bichara thoda dra hua tha to bo bola

thik hai madam aap peeche baith jayiye m aapko chhod dunga Etna kahte hi usne gadi satrt ki aur bo ladki peeche ki seet par baith gyi


ladki > ji kya m apka name jan sakti hu ?

ladka > uski bat un kar chounk gya aur bola

ladka > j ji mera name Vikas hai

gadi ki light jali hue thi to sab kuch dikhai d rha tha

bo ladki apne hontho par jeebh firati hai aur fir s bolti hai

ladki achha name hai apka

ladka > apka kya name hai

ladki > ki aavaj es bar bilkul badal chuki thi ek dam kadak karari aur mardana aavaj m boli *hah ha ha ha ha *

mera name ashtika hai

*ha ha ha ha ha*

uski aavaj sun kar ladke ke roungte khde ho chuke the dar k mare paseena aa chuka tha use pura badan thar thar kanp rha tha uska

ladki karn pisachni hai mera name ye kahte hue bo hasne lagi

*hah ha ha ha ha ha *

uski bat sun kar us ladke ki rahi sahi himmat bhi jabab d gyi aur bo behos ho chuka tha



aaj k liye Etna hi


aap log response nhi d rhe hai kya kahani m koi kmi hai to apne comments karke bta to skte hai aise muje kaise pta chalega ki kya problem hai ya kya kami hai



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Update 55 (amrat ki khoj)


Rohit un dono ko lejar chla gya


idhar jab sevak us kaksh m pahucha to dekhta hai ki ....

aur ek jor ko aavaj gunj jati hai


*maharajjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjj*

ab tak *

durmukha n jaise hi peeche mud kar dekha to sevak khda hua kanp rha tha

durmukha >( gusse me ) kya bat hai kyo cheekh rhe ho ha

aur tumhe to mene uno ladkiyo ko dekhne bheja tha khana diya unko tune ghurte hue kaha durmukha n


sevak > maharaj prandan dijiye

sevak bat sun kar uski bhoye tan gyi aur bola kya bat hai

sevak > maharaj bo dono ladkiya mahal kar kamre s gayab ho chuki hai

etna sunna tha k pure darbar m Sanatan chhha gya kyonki jinke liye usne y sab kiya tha

apne bhai jaise jeeja ko kho diya, jinke liye liye apni bahen ka suhaag ujjad gya tha bo to dono mahal s hi gaya. Ho chuki thi

* lekinnnnnnn ​

kaiseeeeeee hooooo sktaaaaaa haiiiiiiii yyyyyyyyyy*



cheekhte hue *asambhavvvvvvvvv hai koi mamooli ladkiya mere mayajal



ko kaise tod sakti hai usne ek saitani dahad k sath kaha



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sevak pta nhi maharaj kitnu Etna to hai k jab m gaya tab bhi bo kavach lga hua tha to bo log gayab kaise ho gye

gusse m durmukha n apne dodo hath gusse m upar utha liye aur cheekhne lgta hai

uski cheekh k karn pure saitan log m mayusi andhkar apavitrata no pahle s hi charam par thi aur bhi bad jati hai

yaha tak ki prathvi lok aur garun lok ki tarah anya loko par bhi aisa mahol tha par bhi eska asar dekhne ko milta hai jiske karn badal jor a garjne lgte hai aur tej havao k sath varish hone lagti hai


jab Arjun un sabhi k pas pahucha to sabhi n use hath jod k kar pranam kiya to dand nayak n bhi badle m sabhi ki pranam kiya

d raj > d nayak hum y yudh to jeet gye kintu jaise hmari halat hai hume nhi lgta hum jeet payenge y kahte hue jab unhone apne seniko ki taraf dekha to thode mayus ho gye kyonki kafi sainik ghayal ho chuke the

UNki bat sun kar m bhi thoda soch m pad gya tha

MUje sochta dekh kar devika boli

devika > kya soch rhe hai Arjun aap hum n un logo ka samna kiya hai to aage bhi karenge

Unki bat sun kar m ha m sar hila deta hu

meri samjh nhi aa rha tha aage kya karna kafi der tak m sochta rha fir mene bolna suru kiya

Arjun > hmare kitne sainik ghayal hai

rohit > kafi sainik ghayal unme s kuch ladne layak ho chuke hai jinhe jyada chot nhi aayi thi
aur kuch subhah tak recover ho jayenge ladne k liye jo jyda ghayal hai unke liye sanjeevni mantra chahiye hoga jo sirf aur sirf Asur guru sukra charya k pas hai aur uske bad mahadev k pas

uski bat sun kar m ha m sar hila deta hu kyonki m bhi y bat janta tha

tabhi mujhe kuch yad aaya

Arjun > d raj jab rahu ketu name k Asur n amrat ka pan kiya tha tab uska pan karte samya kuch bunde neeche giri thi kya hua tha unka apko kuch pta hai

meri bat sun kar dev raj chounk jate hai

Main > kya hua app aise kyon chounk rhe hai jaise mene apse apki bibi mang li ho

meri bat sun kar sab hasne lgte hai to d raj ka muh latak jata hai aur idhar teeno ma beti mujhe ghurne lagti hai to m to m hadvda kar bolta hu mera matlab hai aap aise chounk kyo gye

d raj > kuch nhi apne sval hi aisa kiya hai kyonki aaj tak uske bare m devo k siva kisi ko pta nhi chla kyonki agar uske bare m asuro ko pta chla to bo kisi bhi keemat par use pane s nhi chukenge us samay to rahu ketu ki gardan katne k karan jo bhi vivad hua uske bad kisi ka dhyan us taraf nhi gya

to apko kaise pta chla

main muskurate hue samay aane par bta dunga pahle mujhe btatiye kaha hai bo

d raj > trdevo n use teen surksha chakkro k beech surakshit rakhha hua

use pana etna aasan nhi hai d raj ki bat sun kar m thoda niras to hua lekin muje y karna tha esliye m bola mujhe jagah btayiye kaha h bo

d raj > apko anant nag k anant lok jana hoga kintu ek bat ka dhyan rhe agar aap chuke to bapas nhi aaoge

d raj ki bat sun kar devika aur uski betiya khadi ho gyi aur boli

Teeno > kyaaaaaaa

d raj > ji ha kyonki amrat pana matlab mirttyu par vijay pana hai to etni aasani s to prapt nhi hoga chahe bo koi bhi kyo na ho teeno god k sivay

main > kab jana hoga


d raj> abhi Jana hoga aur apke pas sirf 2 gante ka samay hai jaise hi aap anant lok m pravesh karenge aapka samay suru ho jayega

main > thik hai

d raj > hath aage kiya aur ek portal khol diya ​

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Kuch aisa

Aur main usme ghus gya to dusri taraf nikal gya to dur dur tak bas ped podhe hari bhari ghash aur pahad hi dikhai de rhe the aur kuch bhi najar nhi aa rha th

Chalte chale m kafi aage aa gya kintu fir bhi kuch nhi dikha mujhe

Jaise hi m thoda aage bda to mujhe ek bahut hi ajeeb tarah ka bda sa pather tha

Mene jaise hi us par hath rakhha to m ek darvaje k samne khda tha ​

Kuch aisa jaise hi mene use hath lgaya samne do snake aa gye aur bole

(Main inhe snake 1 aur 2 likhunga )

Snake 1 >kon ho tum aur yaha kyo aaye ho bapas chale jao yaha s samjhe

Main > m yaha s bapas nhi ja sakta m mujhe aapki sahayata chahiye mujhe ander jana hai bahut hi jaroori hai

Snake 2 > humse kya help chahiye aur tum ander kyo jana chahte ho aur ho kon Tum

Main > m mera name Arjun hai aur log mujhe dand nayak k name s bhi jante hai

Meri bat sun kar ek pal k liye to dono ghabra gye fir pahla bola

Snake 1 > dand nayak kahi tum bahi to nhi jinhe god n chuna hai univers ki surkhsha k liye

Main > ji main bahi hu kintu ap log mujhe kaise jante hai

Snake 1 ek taraf dekh kar bola

(Bhai kahi koi locha na ho jaye khud dand nayak annt lok aaye hai matlab kuch to hai lekin hum inhe ander to nhi jane d sakte kyonki gods k alava aur koi nhi ja skta hai

Baise tumhe kya lgta hai yahi bo jinhe yaha par aana tha

S 2 > kuch kaha nhi ja sakta chal dekhte hai kya hota hai )

Fir Arjun s

S 1 > hume maf kijiye kintu hum apko ander nhi jane d sakte

Arjun> mera jana jaroori hai varna m etni fir yaha nhi aata

Dono > hum vivas hai hmare hote hue aap ander nhi ja sakte hai

Mene Etna sunte hi apna roop badal liya jise dekh kar bichare ander ander kanp rhe the

Arjun> jaise apki marji aap yudh chahte hai to yahi sahi

Tabhi dono n bhi apna roop badal liya aur apne talvar s ek ek lejar atteck kiya mere upar jise mene apne talvar s rok diya jise dekh kar dono ghabra gye gye

Fir mene apna per jameen m mara aur vo dono usme sama gye aur darvaja khul gya

Main nhi chahta tha ki un dono ko koi nuksan ho kyonki vo apna kartvya nibha rhe the

Esliye dono ko bandi bna diya

M ander pravesh kiya to bahut hi sunder jagah thi y m aise hi aage badta gya to mujhe ek mandir dikha purana tha ki tu bahut hi bhavya tha kafi sunder dikh rha tha

Jaise hi mene kadam badaye baha ek aavaj gunj gyi bahut bahyank thi aavaj agar m pahle bala Arjun hota to dar k mare moot deta

Aavaj > kyo aaye ho yaha tumhe pta hai na yaha ana manushyo k liye varjit hai fir tum yaha kyo aur kaise aaye

Bahut hi tej aavaj aayi > boloooooo

Main > aap kon ho

Aavaj mujhse puch rhe ho pahle mere sval ka jabav do samjhe

Main > Arjun name hai mera m yaha amrat k talas m aaaya hua d raj k aadesh anusar

Aavaj > bapas lot jao yaha s samjhe bachhe yaha tumhara koi kam nhi hai aur amrat ka kya karoge tum jo is sansar m aaya hai use jana bhi padega


Main > mujhe apne liye nhi chahiye apne sainiko k liye chahiye jo yudh m ghayal ho chuke hai

Aavaj > tum unhe kis liye bachana chahte ho taki unhe fir s ladva sako esliye

Aavaj ki bat sun kar Arjun ko ahsas hota hai ki bo apne swarth k liye kitne sainko ko bali chda rha hai tabhi tabhi use uske gurudev ki aavaj aati hai

Putra > y sammohan dhvani hai tumhe apne path s bhatka rhi hai eski bato m mat aao ander pravesh karo


Main > pranam gurudev kintu m esme pravesh kaise karu m kar hi nhi pa rha

Guru dev > putra har samshya ka samadhan hota hai bas use dudne ki der hai Etna bol kar guru dev ki aavaj aani band ho gyi u

Kuch m nhi aaya kya karu to mene apne hath s ek roshni samne chhodi to ek pardarshi deevar mere samne thi mene us par kai par har kiye kintu koi asar hi nhi ho rha tha

main > kon ho tum aur tum mujhe rokna kyo chahte ho

avaj m koi bhi hu tumhe usse kya

jaise hi aavaj deevar s takrai usme kampan hone lga to meri ankho m chamak aa gyi

ab samjha guru dev kya bolna chah rhe the matlab es par kisi bhi tarah ka force kam nhi karega bas y aavaj hi eska tod hai

fir mene use bhadkane k idara kiya kyonki jitni tej bo bolega utni jaldi mera kam ho jaye ga esliye kafi bate use sunai jo aage pta chalegi aur fir m use tod kar aage bad gya aur kai sari aise musibato s nikal kar aakhir kar m baha tak pahuch hi gya kaha par hva m ek chota lota latka hua tha

mene jaise hi hath badaya baise mere hath m ek tej karant lga




aaj k liye Etna hi

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Awesome update with great writing skills. Brother


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