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Bahot khoob shaandaar updateUpdate > 60 * Yudh ki samapti
Dono k ek hote hi charo taraf tufan uthne lga aisa lag rha tha jaise koi maha vinash hone bala ho
aur tabhi fizao m ek bhayankar aavaj gunj gyi jo thi sweety aur anjali ki
(Dono ko ek hi name s bulaunga thik hai )
AS > murkh hai tu durmukha tum logo ko kitna bhi gyan shakti budhi d di jaye kintu tum logo ka pap karna ek junoon ban chuka hai tum log kabhi nhi sudhar sakte ek mouka diya gya tha tumhe mere swami dvara kintu tumne bi bhi ganva diya
nirlajja ,papi ,dust atyachari durmukha
jaise hi durmukha na samne dekha to uske samne ek devi kadi hue thi
(Kahte hai na vinash kale viprit budhi )
yahi eska haal tha
durmukha haste hue <hahahahahah
kon ho tum murkh lg to devi
...xxxxx rhi ho kintu unke vastra dharan karne s tum bi nhi ban jaogi murkh aurat
aur kahte hue fir s hasne lga
Tumhare papo ka ghada bhar chuka hai durmukha kahte hue devi n use ghura to
durmukha > teri to kon hoti hai tu mera ghada bharne bali aur dono ek sareer m ghusne ki maya dikha kar mujhe bhaybheet karna chahti ho
y kahte hue usne apne Dhanush par teer chda liye aur aur koi mantra padne lga
Krodh m pagal ho chuki us devi n bhi
apne Dhanush par teer lagaya aur durmukha n jaise chhoda baise hi devi n chhod diya
aur nateeja hua durmukha ka var vifal ho gya aise kai var karne k bad bhi durmukha k sare var vifal hone lge to uska gussa bhi bad gya kintu lagatar harne k bad uske man main ek anjana bhay niyat ho gya
devi > murkha durmukha tune kshama mang li hoti to aaj tujhe antim avsar diya jata kintu tune vo bhi ganva diya
durmukha > ek sadharan stri mujhe kya kshama karegi abhi tera ant kiye deta hu bevkuf aurat
aur apni talvar lekar doud pda us devi ki taraf
devi n bhi apne Dhanush ko gayab kiya aur talvar aa gyi hath m
dono ladne lge talvaro k takrane bheeshan dhwani utpann hone lgi
Bheeshan gadgadahat s charo taraf shor hone lga do teen var m hi durmukha ki talvar tu gyi aur ab durmukha k chehre par dar n apna gha bna liya paseena uske chehre par dikhne
Ab devi ka krodh charam par tha jiske karn usne apna aakar bdana suru kar diya aur boli
Murkh durmukha agar tu chahta to mere diye hue vardano ka sahi upyog kar k amritw prapt kar sakta tha kintu tere kukarmo n teri budhi ko har liya
Aur y kahte hue unhone use utha kar nigal liya lekin fir bhi unka krodh sant nhi hua to vetali devika aur uski putriyo n pyas kiya unhe sant karne ka
Kintu koi labh nhi hua tabhi devi n kaha
Devi > kaha hai dand nayak
Tabhi baha par Arjun parakat hua jise dekh devi ka krodh aur bhi bad gya tabhi
Devi > dand nayak agar tum chahte to es yudh ko rok sakte the jisse. Hajaro vegunao ki jane bach jati kintu tumne vinash ko chuna
Jiski tumhe saja milegi
Arjun > aap jo chahe muje saja d sakti hai devi
Devi > jis tumhare karn jin logo ki bhi akal mirtu hue hai un sab ki kam shakti tumhare ander samahit ho jayegi aur tum chah kar bhi apne aap par niyantran nhi rakh paoge
Devi ki bat sunte hi sbhi devta heran aur paresan ho gye
Meri ankho Anshu aa gye devi ki bat sun kar kyonki m janta tha y jaroor hoga lekin etna jaldi hoga y nhi socha tha
Tabhi devika aur d raj hath jod kar bole
Devika > hey devi aap to sb janti hai dand nayak n jo bhi kiya niyati k adesh par kiya mante hai eski saja hai kintu etni badi saja mat dijiye devi k rakshak hi bakshak ban jaye
D raj > ha devi kya eska koi upay nhi hai etni kathor saja mat dijiye devi
Devi > m apni saja bapas nhi l sakti kintu Etna jaroor kar sakti hu k jo bhi esse sambandh banana chahegi y use mana nhi kar payega aur uski ichha k virudh kabhi nhi jayega
Arjun> muje manjoor hai devi
Etna kahte hi devi gayab ho gyi aur anjali aur sweety bapas aa gyi apne asli rup main
Anjali > are y sab ho kya raha hai aur tu ro kyo rha hai bat kya hai
Main > kuch bhi nhi di chahiye ghar chalte hai hum jeet gye
Us yudh m s durmukha ka dut gayab ho kar pahuch gya mahal m jaha par durmukha ki dono bahene thi
Dut > maharaj veer gati ko prapt ho gye rajkumari ji
Etna sunte hi dono rone lagti hai
*Nhiiiiiiiiiíiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii*
Dand nayak main tumhe nhi chhodungi kahte hue dono bahene cheekh padi
Idhar us mahal k dusre room main jaise hi y khabar durmukha ki patni ko lgi ya kah lo jabardasti banai gyi bibi ko lgi to bahut hi khush ho gyi aur dand nayak ka intejar karne lgi
(Rani Ambika name d rha hu name is changed becouse main pahla bane bhul gya to ab s yahi rahega )
Ambika> apka koti koti dhanyabad dand nayak mujhe es kaid s aajad karava kar apne muh par bahut bda upkar kiya hai
(Fir man main > pta nhi aap muje sweekarenge ya nhi kintu jab s aapki dekha m apke prem dub gyi hu pta nhi muje mera pyar kabhi milega bhi ya nhi lekin m fir bhi apke aane ka intejar karungi )
Idhar yudh samapt hote hi sabhi apne apne yodhao ko agni dene lge aur sabhi kirya karm karne k bad bapas loutne lge
Sweety > bhai kya ab hum ghar chal sakte hai kya ab aap hume chhod kar kahi nhi jaoge na
Main > are meri pyari gudiya ab m kahi nhi ja rha chalo ghar chalte hai
Tabhi
Devika > swami aap kaha ja rhe hai
Bas fir kya Etna sunna tha k dono ki bhoye tan gyi aur mujhe ko ghurne lgi
To main bola
Main > mar gye beta ab to bas fir kya tha main doudne lga aur bo dono muje marne k liye mere pichhe
Lekin yaha par vetali khub maje le rhi thi
Fir rohit
Rohit > Savas chhoti chhodna mat es kameene ko
Uski bat sun kar main use ghurne lga
Main > sale tujhe to main dekh lunga
Rohit > hi hi hi rahne d main khud ka hi jeeja aur khud ka hi sala bhi hu samjha aur jeebh nikalne lga
Main > dekho main tumhe samjha sakta hu pls ek mouka to do
Dono ruk kar
Thik hai diya ab bolo
Main > pahle ghar chale baha jakar aaram s bat karte hai meri bat sun kar un teeno ka muh yar gya jo abhi tak soch rhi thi ki y ho kya rha hai
Main > are tum logo n muh kyo bnaya hua hai tum bhi chalogi hmare sath baki baha k bad m sochenge ok
Meri bat sun kar teeno khush ho gyi to y dono unhe ghurne lgi aur vetali maje l rhi thi
Maine mari kohni dva k uske
*Aaauchhh *
Vetali > kya kar rhe hai swami lagti hai
Main > lagti hai ki bachhi bachane ki jagah dant nikal rhi thi
Vetali > bo bo fir hi hi hi hi hi
Main fir has rhi
Vetali > hasi control' karte hue ok ok
Main > Good
Fir hum sabhi ghar aa gye
Mom n get khola
Sam ka time tha mere sath etne logo dekh kar mom soch m pad gyi fir boli
Mom > beta y log kon hai
Main > mom ander to aane dijiye
Mom hat kar rasta dete hue 'aajao sabhi '
Fir mom n darvaja band kiya aur hum sabhi hall m baith gye
To vetali n mon k pair chue dekhi dekha un teeno n bhi bari bari pair chue
Jaise hi mom ki kuch samjh main aaya mom apne muh hath rakh kar herani s mujhe dekhne lgi to mene apne hath khde kar diye
Main > mera koi dosh nhi hai baise abhi ek aur bachi hue
Mera Etna kahna tha ki dono k beech m baitha hone k karne ek ek mukka lga meri dono kokh main
Main >Aaahhh
Fir dono natak karte hue
Kya hua bhai kuch lga kya aur kahte hue ghurne lgi to main bola nhi kuch bhi nhi
Main > mom bhukh lgi hai kuch banaiye na
mom > ha beta thodi ruk main abhi bnati hu
jaise hi uthne lgi mom to vetali boli
mummy > m bhi apki help kar deti hu
Mom > are beta m tujhse puchna hi bhul gyi kaha thi tu etne samay s achanak hi chali gyi
main ek dam hadvda gya
main > are mom bo mene bheja tha ese kisi kam s
mom > nalayak bahu ko ekele kaha bheja tha tune
main > mom bo eske ek dur k chacha ki tabiyat kharab thi
Mom >jyada bahane mat bna muje sab pta hai samjha
Main > hi hi hi hi hi
Kar ke hasne lga to mom fir s boli
Mom > aise dant kya nikal rha hai chalo ladkiyo y to hai hi nalayak tum sab chalo mere sath kah kar sabhi sabhi ko sath le gyi
Main > hasssss , bach gye aaj to puri neend lunga dava k fir baki ka kam dekhunga
Dono mujhe ghurte hue
Sweety > sochna bhi mat
Anjali > sapne m bhi mat sochna samjha
Main > lekin mene kya kiya hai
Dono > sone ki soch rha hai na tu
Main > tum log mera dimag kaise pad sakti ho
Dono > hi hi hi nhi hum dimag nhi pad sakte tumhara lekin chehra jaroor pad sakte hai samjha aur hume pyar kiye bina sone ki socha bhi na to tera muh tod dungi
main > hey upar bale ek musibat s bacha to dusri suru ho gyi
kya bola teri to
*nhiiiiiiiiiíiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii* *bachaooooooo *
aaj k liye Etna hi
Durmukha apne ghamd m mara gaya lekin Devi n tow kich ziada hi kadi saza de di baharhal dekhte h kia hota h Arjun ka
Udher m Rani amnika bhi intijar ker rahi h Dand nayak ka
Or yaha Anjali or sweetie Arjun ki lene m lagi h
Baharhal dekhte h aage kia hota
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