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UPDATE - 95



……….Gurum ne gadi start ki aur sabke baethte hi aage bada di uske man me bahot se sawal the jo chhano bhi samajh rahi thi lekin uska man shant tha ab fir koi khas bate nahi hui gadi me aur isi tarah unka rasta cut gaya aur wo log haweli pahuch gaye.

Gurum ne sabko saman andar le jane me help ki aur uske baad haweli se nikalne laga. Mala kamini aur rati bhi apne apne room me chali gayi gurum ko bye bol kar. Lekin sab ke jane ke baad channo gurum ko bahar tak chhodne aayi.



Gurum – channo mere baare me to aapne sab jan liya lekin apne bare me nahi bataya kuchh bhi. Aur aaj jo kuchh hua usse mujhe kuchh samajh aaya kuchh nahi to ……….



Channo – mae aapse kuchh nahi chhupaugi. Aur sahi waqt aane par sab bata dugi. Lekin tab tak aap meri jasusi mat karna mae chahti hu aapko sab mae hi batau. Kisi aur se aapko mere bare me poochne ki jarurat na pade.



Gurum – thik hae channo mae intjar karuga. Ab tum bhi aaram kar lo fir milege. Gud nt.



Channo – gud nt gurum. Apna khayal rakhiyega.



Fir gurum bangle pe aa jata hae. aur tab tak deva and group bhi wapas aa gaye the to gurum deva ko bata deta hae. ke haweli ki sari ladies ki shoping ho chuki hae. aur ab kal wo poori sagai ki taiyariyo me rahega.



Deva - thik hae aaj ki raat hame bhi tilism nagri jana hae to tum log yaha ka dhyan rakhna.



Gurum - ok deva aap log ho aaiye.



Fir dev thodi der aaram karne ke bad dinner pe sabse milta hae. aur dinner ke baad apne room me aa kar apna clone banana ke baad adrashya hokar poonam ke ghar jata hae. lekin tabhi uski najar sudha pe padti hae jo apne kamre ka darwaja band kar rahi thi. Deva seedhe uske kamre me chala jata hae.



Darwaja band karne ke baad apne bag se wahi bra penty ke set nikalti hae aur unhe apne hatho me uthakar dekhti hae aur jane kya soch ke uske shehre pe smile aa jati hae. fir wo ek ek kar ke apne sare kapde nikal ke ekdam nangi ho jati hae. dev uska sheeshe ki tarah chamakta badan dekh ke usi me kho jata hae



Sudha bhi apne poore nange badan pe hath firati hae. pahle apne sapat chikne pet pe fir kamar pe fir apni gand pe sahlati hui apne hatho se apni chuchiya sahlati hae aur jane kyu apni ankhe band kar ke sihar uthti hae. aur ek hath neeche apni chut pe le jati hae to uske mooh se siskari nikal jati hae



Sudha – ssssssssssseeeeeeeeeeooooooooohhhhhhdevaaaaaaaaa



Deva apna nam sudha ke mooh se sun ke haeran rah jata hae wahi sudha ko bhi shayad apni galti ka ahsas ho jata hae. wo apne hotho ko apne hath se band kar deti hae aur fir wahi red bra penty ka set utha ke use chumti hae aur fir pahle bra aur fir penty pahan leti hae . is set me wo gajab ki khoobsurat lag rahi thi deva ka man dolne lagta hae aur uska lund bhi uske vash se bahar ho raha tha. Sudha usi bra penty me bade se aaine ke samne ja kar khadi ho jati hae aur khud ko us set me dekhne lagti hae. tab deva bhi samne aa jata hae aur sudha use aaine me dekhti hae ke deva thik uske peeche khada use hi dekh raha hae aur muskra bhi raha hae.



Sudha teji se palatti hae usi pal deva fir se adrashya ho jata hae. sudha fir aaine me dekhti hae use deva fir najar aata hae lekin palatne par deva gayab.



Sudha – ohhh deva hamare rishte alag hae hamara Milan nahi ho sakta mae tumahri nahi ban sakti. Fir kyu mera dil tumahri taraf hi khincha ja raha hae. mat aao mere samne. Par meri ye aankhe bhi to tumhe hi dekhna chahti hae. mera dil ye chahta hae ke tum mujhe is roop me dekho. Ye tumne hi to lekar diya hae na tohfa. Mujhe apne is tohfe me sirf tum dekho. Aur mujhe apne seene se laga lo.



Sudha aaine ki taraf mooh kar ke deva ko dekhte hue bol rahi thi. Tabhi deva use peeche se baho me bhar leta hae aur uske tapte hue galo ko chum kar apne hath uske chikne pet pe bandh deta hae. aur sudha ki garden pe chumte hue



Deva – tum bahot khubsurat lag rahi ho in do kapdo me sudha. … deva ek bar fir uski garden pe chumte hue apne hoth uske galo pe lata hae sudha to madhosh hui ja rahi thi wo fir se teji se palatti hae deva fir gayab. Lekin is baar deva sach me hi waha se nikal gaya tha. Use lagne laga tha ke ab wo ruka to fir khud ko nahi rok payega. Sudha bhi pyasi hae aur tadap rahi hae. wo sudha ki aag me abhi jalna nahi chahta tha.



Deva waha se nikal ke seedha poona ke kamre me jata hae jaha poonam aur shalaka so rahi thi. Deva unhe uthata hae. aur un dono ka clone set karne ke baad teeno waha se adrashya hokar nikal jate hae. aur aakar rudra aur nilam se milte hae.



Deva – ha to sathiyo chale sab taiyar ho?



Rudra - ha bhai chal na yar ab kya likh kar de



Fir sabhi waha se tilism nagri ki taraf nikal padte hae idhar sudha to apne hosho hawas hi kho chuki thi wo samajh nahi pa rahi thi ke deva aaya tha ya nahi. Deva ke badan ki garmi ka ahsas ab tak uske badan pe tha aur uske khade lund ka sparsh ab tk uski gand pe use mahsus ho raha tha uske hotho ka ahsas use apne chehre pe ab tak mahsus ho raha tha. Uske sanso ki khushboo ko wo ab tak mahsus kar pa rahi thi. jise thodi der pahel apne badan pe paya tha usn. lekin agar deva yaha tha to yaha kaese tha darwaja to band hae. fir wo yaha kaese aa sakta hae aur aa bhi gaya to ab kaha gaya aur agar wo yaha nahi tha to fir ye itne sare ahsas use kaese ho rahe hae. sudha apni inhi socho me gum thi ke uske darwaje pe dastak hoti hae. to wo turant hi ek night gown pahan kar darwaja khol deti hae. darwaje pe gopal khada tha. Thaka hua sa.



Gopal ek sadharan sa yuvak jo ab tak gaanv ko pichhda hua samajhta tha aur paese kamane shahar gaya tha apni kheti badi aur kai ekad ke khet chhod kar. Lekin shahar ki dhool mitti ne use samjha diya ke gaanv lautne me hi uski jeet hae. kyu ki gaanv me uska sabkuchh hae shahar me sab banana padega uske liye uski poori jindagi bhi lag sakti hae. aur fir gaanv me uski maa padma aur bahan poonam bhi akele hae. ye sab use sudha ne hi samjhaya. Jo ek padhi likhi sujhi hu ladki hae. gaanv me shadi ho jane ke baad gopal apni patni ke saath shahar aa gaya tha apne dosto ki baato me aakar. Lekin idhar baar baar padma use bulati thi udhar sudha bhi waha ke halat ko dikhate hue use gaanv hi chalne ko kahti rahti thi. Aakhir ye log gaanv wapas aa gaye the.



Sudha – are aap itni der tak kaha the ji?



Gopal – are kuchh mat pooch ye do saal shahar me kya rah liya sab aadate chhut gayi hae. aaj khet me kaam kar ke fat gayi hae meri. Sham ko khet se nikla to purane dosto ke saath hi baetha tha choupal par. Tum batao kaesa raha aaj ka din



Sudha - bahot achha tha. Bahot kuchh liya hamne shahar se aur aapke liye bhi kapde layi hu.



Gopal - are mere liye lane ki kya jarurat thi sudha?



Sudha – achha bahan ki sagai me purane kapde pahnoge kya?



Gopal – tum bhi na are hum mardo ko to sab chalta hae. hame kaun dekhne wala hae .



Sudha – kyu mardo ko dekhne ke liye hae na aurate ab mera pati kisi ko kharab lage to mujhe kaese achha lagega?



Gopal – aur agar tumahra pati kisi ko achha lag gaya aur usne mujhe faans liya to?



Sudha – pahli baat ye ke aese sapne to dekho hi mat ke koi aapko fasayega. Aur agar man liya ke aesi galti kisi ne kar bhi li to bhi koi baat nahi fasjana meri taraf se chhut hae.



Sudha man me – jo Sali tumhe fasayegi na wo ek bar tumahra lund dekhte hi tumahri gaand me laat mar ke bhaga degi.



Gopal – are wah tune chhut de di ab dekho mae kaese is gaanv me sachmuch ka gopal ban ke ghumta hu



Sudha – thik hae thik hae lekin agar kisi ne mujhe faans liya to?



Gopal – aesi himmat kisi me nahi ke meri biwi pe aankh bhi uthaye. Lekin agar koi aesa kar hi le aur wo tujhe bhi pasand aa jaye to tu bhi fans jana aakhir aese mard bahot kam hi hote hae. aur mere hisab se aesa mard koi is gaanv me nahi . are do saal shahr me tumhe kisi ne ghaans nahi dali to yaha ke ganvar kya fasayege. Lekin in chuityo ko nahi malun ke Tu to aag hae meri jaan aag. Itna kah kar gopal sudha ko khinch leta hae palang pe aur uska gown uthane lagta hae ke tabhi sudha uska hath pakad leti hae.

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[Nevil singh]

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[Boby]

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[Akil]

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[Naik]

UPDATE - 95



……….Gurum ne gadi start ki aur sabke baethte hi aage bada di uske man me bahot se sawal the jo chhano bhi samajh rahi thi lekin uska man shant tha ab fir koi khas bate nahi hui gadi me aur isi tarah unka rasta cut gaya aur wo log haweli pahuch gaye.

Gurum ne sabko saman andar le jane me help ki aur uske baad haweli se nikalne laga. Mala kamini aur rati bhi apne apne room me chali gayi gurum ko bye bol kar. Lekin sab ke jane ke baad channo gurum ko bahar tak chhodne aayi.



Gurum – channo mere baare me to aapne sab jan liya lekin apne bare me nahi bataya kuchh bhi. Aur aaj jo kuchh hua usse mujhe kuchh samajh aaya kuchh nahi to ……….



Channo – mae aapse kuchh nahi chhupaugi. Aur sahi waqt aane par sab bata dugi. Lekin tab tak aap meri jasusi mat karna mae chahti hu aapko sab mae hi batau. Kisi aur se aapko mere bare me poochne ki jarurat na pade.



Gurum – thik hae channo mae intjar karuga. Ab tum bhi aaram kar lo fir milege. Gud nt.



Channo – gud nt gurum. Apna khayal rakhiyega.



Fir gurum bangle pe aa jata hae. aur tab tak deva and group bhi wapas aa gaye the to gurum deva ko bata deta hae. ke haweli ki sari ladies ki shoping ho chuki hae. aur ab kal wo poori sagai ki taiyariyo me rahega.



Deva - thik hae aaj ki raat hame bhi tilism nagri jana hae to tum log yaha ka dhyan rakhna.



Gurum - ok deva aap log ho aaiye.



Fir dev thodi der aaram karne ke bad dinner pe sabse milta hae. aur dinner ke baad apne room me aa kar apna clone banana ke baad adrashya hokar poonam ke ghar jata hae. lekin tabhi uski najar sudha pe padti hae jo apne kamre ka darwaja band kar rahi thi. Deva seedhe uske kamre me chala jata hae.



Darwaja band karne ke baad apne bag se wahi bra penty ke set nikalti hae aur unhe apne hatho me uthakar dekhti hae aur jane kya soch ke uske shehre pe smile aa jati hae. fir wo ek ek kar ke apne sare kapde nikal ke ekdam nangi ho jati hae. dev uska sheeshe ki tarah chamakta badan dekh ke usi me kho jata hae



Sudha bhi apne poore nange badan pe hath firati hae. pahle apne sapat chikne pet pe fir kamar pe fir apni gand pe sahlati hui apne hatho se apni chuchiya sahlati hae aur jane kyu apni ankhe band kar ke sihar uthti hae. aur ek hath neeche apni chut pe le jati hae to uske mooh se siskari nikal jati hae



Sudha – ssssssssssseeeeeeeeeeooooooooohhhhhhdevaaaaaaaaa



Deva apna nam sudha ke mooh se sun ke haeran rah jata hae wahi sudha ko bhi shayad apni galti ka ahsas ho jata hae. wo apne hotho ko apne hath se band kar deti hae aur fir wahi red bra penty ka set utha ke use chumti hae aur fir pahle bra aur fir penty pahan leti hae . is set me wo gajab ki khoobsurat lag rahi thi deva ka man dolne lagta hae aur uska lund bhi uske vash se bahar ho raha tha. Sudha usi bra penty me bade se aaine ke samne ja kar khadi ho jati hae aur khud ko us set me dekhne lagti hae. tab deva bhi samne aa jata hae aur sudha use aaine me dekhti hae ke deva thik uske peeche khada use hi dekh raha hae aur muskra bhi raha hae.



Sudha teji se palatti hae usi pal deva fir se adrashya ho jata hae. sudha fir aaine me dekhti hae use deva fir najar aata hae lekin palatne par deva gayab.



Sudha – ohhh deva hamare rishte alag hae hamara Milan nahi ho sakta mae tumahri nahi ban sakti. Fir kyu mera dil tumahri taraf hi khincha ja raha hae. mat aao mere samne. Par meri ye aankhe bhi to tumhe hi dekhna chahti hae. mera dil ye chahta hae ke tum mujhe is roop me dekho. Ye tumne hi to lekar diya hae na tohfa. Mujhe apne is tohfe me sirf tum dekho. Aur mujhe apne seene se laga lo.



Sudha aaine ki taraf mooh kar ke deva ko dekhte hue bol rahi thi. Tabhi deva use peeche se baho me bhar leta hae aur uske tapte hue galo ko chum kar apne hath uske chikne pet pe bandh deta hae. aur sudha ki garden pe chumte hue



Deva – tum bahot khubsurat lag rahi ho in do kapdo me sudha. … deva ek bar fir uski garden pe chumte hue apne hoth uske galo pe lata hae sudha to madhosh hui ja rahi thi wo fir se teji se palatti hae deva fir gayab. Lekin is baar deva sach me hi waha se nikal gaya tha. Use lagne laga tha ke ab wo ruka to fir khud ko nahi rok payega. Sudha bhi pyasi hae aur tadap rahi hae. wo sudha ki aag me abhi jalna nahi chahta tha.



Deva waha se nikal ke seedha poona ke kamre me jata hae jaha poonam aur shalaka so rahi thi. Deva unhe uthata hae. aur un dono ka clone set karne ke baad teeno waha se adrashya hokar nikal jate hae. aur aakar rudra aur nilam se milte hae.



Deva – ha to sathiyo chale sab taiyar ho?



Rudra - ha bhai chal na yar ab kya likh kar de



Fir sabhi waha se tilism nagri ki taraf nikal padte hae idhar sudha to apne hosho hawas hi kho chuki thi wo samajh nahi pa rahi thi ke deva aaya tha ya nahi. Deva ke badan ki garmi ka ahsas ab tak uske badan pe tha aur uske khade lund ka sparsh ab tk uski gand pe use mahsus ho raha tha uske hotho ka ahsas use apne chehre pe ab tak mahsus ho raha tha. Uske sanso ki khushboo ko wo ab tak mahsus kar pa rahi thi. jise thodi der pahel apne badan pe paya tha usn. lekin agar deva yaha tha to yaha kaese tha darwaja to band hae. fir wo yaha kaese aa sakta hae aur aa bhi gaya to ab kaha gaya aur agar wo yaha nahi tha to fir ye itne sare ahsas use kaese ho rahe hae. sudha apni inhi socho me gum thi ke uske darwaje pe dastak hoti hae. to wo turant hi ek night gown pahan kar darwaja khol deti hae. darwaje pe gopal khada tha. Thaka hua sa.



Gopal ek sadharan sa yuvak jo ab tak gaanv ko pichhda hua samajhta tha aur paese kamane shahar gaya tha apni kheti badi aur kai ekad ke khet chhod kar. Lekin shahar ki dhool mitti ne use samjha diya ke gaanv lautne me hi uski jeet hae. kyu ki gaanv me uska sabkuchh hae shahar me sab banana padega uske liye uski poori jindagi bhi lag sakti hae. aur fir gaanv me uski maa padma aur bahan poonam bhi akele hae. ye sab use sudha ne hi samjhaya. Jo ek padhi likhi sujhi hu ladki hae. gaanv me shadi ho jane ke baad gopal apni patni ke saath shahar aa gaya tha apne dosto ki baato me aakar. Lekin idhar baar baar padma use bulati thi udhar sudha bhi waha ke halat ko dikhate hue use gaanv hi chalne ko kahti rahti thi. Aakhir ye log gaanv wapas aa gaye the.



Sudha – are aap itni der tak kaha the ji?



Gopal – are kuchh mat pooch ye do saal shahar me kya rah liya sab aadate chhut gayi hae. aaj khet me kaam kar ke fat gayi hae meri. Sham ko khet se nikla to purane dosto ke saath hi baetha tha choupal par. Tum batao kaesa raha aaj ka din



Sudha - bahot achha tha. Bahot kuchh liya hamne shahar se aur aapke liye bhi kapde layi hu.



Gopal - are mere liye lane ki kya jarurat thi sudha?



Sudha – achha bahan ki sagai me purane kapde pahnoge kya?



Gopal – tum bhi na are hum mardo ko to sab chalta hae. hame kaun dekhne wala hae .



Sudha – kyu mardo ko dekhne ke liye hae na aurate ab mera pati kisi ko kharab lage to mujhe kaese achha lagega?



Gopal – aur agar tumahra pati kisi ko achha lag gaya aur usne mujhe faans liya to?



Sudha – pahli baat ye ke aese sapne to dekho hi mat ke koi aapko fasayega. Aur agar man liya ke aesi galti kisi ne kar bhi li to bhi koi baat nahi fasjana meri taraf se chhut hae.



Sudha man me – jo Sali tumhe fasayegi na wo ek bar tumahra lund dekhte hi tumahri gaand me laat mar ke bhaga degi.



Gopal – are wah tune chhut de di ab dekho mae kaese is gaanv me sachmuch ka gopal ban ke ghumta hu



Sudha – thik hae thik hae lekin agar kisi ne mujhe faans liya to?



Gopal – aesi himmat kisi me nahi ke meri biwi pe aankh bhi uthaye. Lekin agar koi aesa kar hi le aur wo tujhe bhi pasand aa jaye to tu bhi fans jana aakhir aese mard bahot kam hi hote hae. aur mere hisab se aesa mard koi is gaanv me nahi . are do saal shahr me tumhe kisi ne ghaans nahi dali to yaha ke ganvar kya fasayege. Lekin in chuityo ko nahi malun ke Tu to aag hae meri jaan aag. Itna kah kar gopal sudha ko khinch leta hae palang pe aur uska gown uthane lagta hae ke tabhi sudha uska hath pakad leti hae.

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