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Nice start of the story. Abhi to buildinf stage per hi hain story. Lekin ek saal me bus 90 plus update. Iska matlab updates late rehti hain. Ab isko theek kijiye sir ji.UPDATE 3
Deva Nanihal
Deva ke teen mama aur maamiya hae aur 2 mousi bhi mousiyo ki apni alag duniya hae jaha wo apne pariwar ke sath hae. Is waqt ghar me sabhi moujood the, deva aur uski maa ko waha pahuchte hue sham ho gayi thi andhera bhi bad gaya tha.deva ka tractor ek bahot bade ghar ke samne rukta hae.
Nanihal
1 Mama Shyamlal ek kisan
Mami sunita 34 30 36 inki ek beti hae
aage uske mama se kuch hua hi nahi koshish to karte hae lekin mahine me 1-2 baar hi jiski wajah se maami dukhi rahti hae bechari.
2 Mama kishan lal ye bhi ek kisan hae
Mami bharti 32 30 34 ki ek dubli patli lambi lekin behad khoobsurat aurat hae. Inka ek beta hae. Aage ka kuch kishan lal se bhi hua hi nahi ye beta bhi shayad isliye ho gaya kyu ki shadi ke naye naye josh me inki bur roj chudti thi aur nayi nayi jawani thi, kam umar thi to khoon garam tha isliye bharti ki bachchedani ne bhi kishan lal ke virya ko apne andar band kar liya aur to bachcha thar gaya ab to inhe bhi mahine me ek do baar hi sharirik sukh naseeb hota hae wo bhi jab ye khud nangi ho ke pati ki dhoti khole, aur unka lund chus chus ke khada kare jo ki bahot mushkil se hota hae. varna chudai ka koi chance nahi
3 mama ramlal apne hi gaanv ki post office me job bhi mil gaya hae to shadi ki baate chal rahi hae. Shareer se koi khas nahi hae.
1 Mousi tara. Badi khatarnak figure hae inki 38 34 40 itna gadraya hua badan kin ajar hi na hate lekin fir bhi sharer se moti nahi . ye apne pati se kabhi santusht nahi hoti , ho bhi kaese is khunkhar badan ko jaesa lund chahiye wo inke pati ke pas nahi wo bechara ek dubla patla insane hae jo chodna to door chut ki garmi se hi jhad jata hae bas lund andar gaya nahi ke inki pichkari nikal jati hae. Par ye kahani aajkal hae.shadi ke shuruati dino me inke 2 sal ke andar hi do bachche ho chuke hae . kyu ki us waqt na to tara devi ka jism itna khunkhar tha nahi ye chudai ki itni bhookhi thi jitni aaj hae tab to ye ½ ghanta bhi nahi chud pati thi k inki kamar jawab de deti thi aur aaj to koi inhe raat bhar bhi thoke to subah ko ye use pahle uth ke wrestling kar sakti hae. ( jokes a part) .
2 mousi sarita ye bhi apni bahan ki hi tarah hae aur inki chut bhi pyasi hae inke bhi 2 bache hae par pati se santushti nahi hae. Bahar kahi mooh koi marta nahi to bas ye sab jalti hi rahti hae.
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Tractor ki awaz sun ke bade mama shyam lal bahar aate hae aur apni bahan aur bhanje ko dekh ke khush ho jate hae
S.L. - are aao bhanje aaj bade dino baad aaye . kaesi ho didi
Aur wo aage bad ke bahan ke pair chhuta hae.
Savitri - thik hu bhaiya . tum kaese ho aur meri bhabhi kaesi hae.
SL - sab thik hae chalo aao andar
Sab andar aate hae. Aur sabse milte hae payal doudti hui aati hae aur aakar maa aur bhai ke gale milti hae
Payal maa kaesi hae tu aur bhai tu kaesa hae
Savitri- tu to yaha aa kar bhul gayi . ghar nahi jana kya
Deva . are maa mae to mana kar raha tha ke ise yahi rahne de varna ghar pe sab ka dimag khati rahegi
Payal rooth ke . . kya bhai mae kaha kisi ko pareshan karti hu. Aur aesa hae to nahi jaugi mae
Savitri . . are aese kya roothti hae apne bhai se wo majak kar raha hae.
Payal - Janti hu maa mae varna mujhe bhi pata hae bhai mujhe kitna pyar karte hae.
Tabhi badi mami aa jati hae
Sunita .. kaun kise pyar karta he bhai
Deva uth ke sunita ke paer chhuta hae to sunita use rok ka apne gale laga leti hae deva ki choudi chhati se lag ke us ke badan me cheetiya rengne lagti hae aur chut bhi kuch geeli ho jati hae . deva ko bhi mami ki badi badi choochiya apne seena me chubhti hu si lagti hae. Aur uska lund bhi kuch harkat karne lagta hae jiski halki si chubhan sunita ko uski nabhi pe hoti hae to ashcharya se deva ko dekhti hae deva ki najar jaese hi mami se milti hae wo Sharma jata hea. Sunita muskrat ke use ek bar fir kas ke gale se lagati hae aur uske supade ki garmi apni nabhi pe mahsus karti hae aur fir wo deav se khud ko alag karti hae, aur apni nanad se
Sunita . Didi ab to apna deva bhi jawan ho gaya hae bahu kab laa rahi ho
Savitri hans ke . haa re lana to hae par pahle payal ko vida karege uske baad .
Sunita sharat se. Deva tujhe agar kisi cheez ki jarurat ho to mujhe batana mae mana nahi karugi balki sab vyavastha kar dugi . yaha gaanv me khoob hariyali hae.
Deva . . kya mami aap bhi. mujhe bhala is gaanv ki hariyali se kya lena wo to hamare gaanv me bhi hae. Sunita hans ke haa wo to hogi hi . chal sahi hae didi ka kahna bhi, lagta hae abhi teri shadi me sach much der karna hi sahi hae. Kyu ki abhi tera dhyan asli hariyali ki taraf nahi ja paya hae.
Ye sun ke sunita aur savitri hasne lagti hae lekin deva aur payal ko kuch samajh nahi aata.
Fir deva apni dusri mami bharti se milta hae wo bhi deva ko gale lagati hae. Is baar deva apna lund door hi rakhta hae jisse uska lund to bharti ke sharer se nahi chhu pata lekni deva ka seena ubhar ke bharti ki coochiyo pe poora dabav dalta hae jisse wo bhi germane lagti hae. Deva ke majboot shareer ko dekhte hue wo bhi khush hoti hae. Aur fir bato ke lamba dour chalta hae us ke baad sab khana kha ke sone chale jate hae. Jisme ki sunita aur bharti aaj apne pati ko chhod ke savitri ke saath hi sone chali jati hae. Waese bhi unke pati to kisi kam ke hae nahi .
Waha jngle me aghori ek sher ki khal pe leta hua hae uska sir kanika ki god me hae jo use apni chuchi pila rahi thi beech beech me jab aghori uski nipple pe dant gada deta to kanika ki siskari nikal jati, aghori apne dusre hath se uski dusri badi si chushi masal raha tha. Neeche uske paero ke pas manika baethi thi jo ke aghori ka bada sa kala lund chus rahi thi halaki use aghori ke jism se uthti badbu bilkul bardasht nahi ho rahi thi uska lund chuste hue use aesa lag raha tha k abhi ulti aa jayegi lekin wow aha se hat nahi sakti thi kyuki agar aghori ko bhanak bhi lagi to wo manika ka sir uda dega. Bas isliye manika uska lund chuse ja rahi thi. Aur khud aghori kanika ke hatho se jam pe bhi pee raha tha. Tabhi us gufa ke us vishesh kamre me ek baaz udta hua aata hae. Jis ki awaz sun kar. Aghori ek dam se kanika aur manika ko door dhakel deta hae aur galab ki furti se uth kar khada ho jata hae. Aur doudta hua wahi hawan kund ke paas aa jata hae jaha usne nag aur nagin ko dekha tha. Us gole me fir se dekhne pe aghori ki aankhe lal ho jati hae. Kyu ki nag aur nagin is raat ke sannate me lipte hue the aur pyar me mast the.
Aghori – nahi ye nahi ho sakta ye naag is nagin ko nahi chod sakta inhe rokna hoga. Agar aesa ho gaya to mere itne saalo ki tapasya bhang ho jayegi mae kabhi sarvshaktiman nahi ban pauga. Kya karu jisse ye nagin ko chod na paye. Tabhi use kuch sujhta hae. Aur uski aankhe chamakne lagti hae.
Wo mantra padh haath me kuch kale dane leta hae aur us gole me fenk deta hae. Aur dekhne lagta hae.
Jaha nag nagin prem me dube hue ek dusre se lipte the. Waha se thodi hi doori pe kuch jnugli log nachte hue nikalne lagte hae. Unke hatho me dhol bhi the aur kuch ke hatho me been bhi thi.
INTRODUES ICHCHADHARI NAAG NAGIN
NAGRAJ RUDRA AUR NAAGRANI NILAM
Rudra aur nilam ek dusre ke pyar me dube hue the {abhi ye dono insani roop me hi the }
Nilam – ye kya kar rahe ho rudra tum jante ho abhi poonam ki raat door hae jab hamara vivah ho jayega aur mae hamesha ke liye tumahri ho jaugi tab tak thoda sa intjar aur karo . mujhe yu na bahkao. Kyu ki mae bhi bahak gayi to wo shakti jo tumhe aur hamare vanch ko milne wali hae wo vyarth ho jayegi.
Rudra – nilam mae tumhare roop me apne hosh kho raha hu . mae bholenath se kshama mang luga lekin abhi to mera saath do . aur rudra uske hotho ko chumne lagta hae
Nilam haste hue – achcha kshama mang loge janbujhkar kiye hue gunaho ki kshama nahi milti nagraj, bholenath itne bhi bhole nahi . aur mae to tumahri hi hu. Kya thoda sa sabra nahi rakh sakte.
Rudra – tumahre is roop ko dekh kar to rishi muni bhi apna tap chhod de mae to unke samne kuch bhi nahi .
Nilam - aesa mat kaho. Tum sa shaktishali naag aaj is dharti pe koi nahi. Aur hajaro salo ki tapasya ke baad tum itne taqatwar hue ho. Aur mae bhi. Tumhe yaad hae hum log to sadharan se naag nagin the jo yu hi ek duje ke pyar mae pad gaye . lekin hame agar us FAKEER BABA ne sahi raah na dikhai hoti to hum dono kab ke is sansar se vida le chuke hote .
Rudra – ha nilam unhone kaha tha ke hamara janam yu hi nahi hua hamare jivan ka uddeshya bahot bada hae. Uske liye hame kathor tapasya kar ke ichchadhari banna hoga. aur tab hamara Milan bhi hoga aur hamara prem bhi amar ho jayega aur fir is sarp yoni ke bad jab bhi hamara janam hoga to insane roop me hoga aur tab hame moksh bhi milega. Aur ab wo ghadi bhi jyada door nahi.
Nilam – aur tum itni kadi mehnat ko apni is vasna ki bhent chadhana chahte ho?
Rudra – nahi nilam mae to bas bahak gaya tha. Par tumhara dhanyavad ke tumne mujhe sahi raah dikhai
Tabhi unhe wo awaze sunai deti hae. Aur wo chhitak kar ek duje se alag ho jate . unhe alag hote dekh aghopri ki ankho me chamak aa jati hae. Aur hotho pe kameeni muskan bhi.
Rudra – lagta hae kuch insan saanpo ko pakadne nikle hae chalo yaha se jaldi
Fir rudra aur nilam waha se door ho jate hae aur rat ke andhere me chhup jate hae. Kyu ki abhi wo koi shakti pradarshan nahi kar sakte the.
Idhar deva ke nanihal me
Deva baju wale kamre me soya hua hae. Din bhar ki thakawat ke baad deva jaese hi bistar pe leta use nind aa gayi thi nind me wahi aawaze use sunai deti hae. Aur thodi der baad fakeer baba aa jate hae.
F B . . Deva . kaesa hae re.
Deva . . theek hu baba. Aapne bataya nahi aap kaun hae aur mujhse kya chahte hae.
FB. Deva tu shareer se bada hua hae lekin dimag se nahi aur abhi tujhme koi taqat bhi nahi . tu abhi na to mujhe samajh payega na hi kuch kar payega . tujhe apni shaktiyo ko jagana hoga deva. Samay nikat aa raha hae.
Deva. . par wo kaese baba
FB . yog se beta. Yog dwara hi tujhe apni shaktiyo ko jagrat karna hoga. Jisse tumhare andar kai sare parivartan aayege.
Deva . . baba lekin aesa nahi hae mujhme bahot taqat hae. Din bhar to mae kheto me kaam karta hu .
FB . . muskrate hue . agar tu aesa samajhta hae to thik hae is baat ki bhi pariksha bhi ho jayegi. Aur uski shuruat abhi se hogi . Lekin agar meri baat sahi nikli to tu wahi karega jo mae kahuga.
DEva . . Thik hae baba.
FB . . ab dhyan se sun teri pariksha abhi se shuru hogi aur asal imthan kal hoga. Tujhe is baat ka andaza hoga ki tujhme kya hae aur kis baat ki kami hae. Lekin tu ghabrana mat. Aur ye le anguthi
Baba use ek anguthi dete hae
Deva . . baba ye kyu
FB . . jab tujhe lage k tu halat se mukabla nahi kar pa raha hae ya tujhe kuch bhi janna ho tu muje yad kar ke is anguthi ko apne maathe pe lagana. Ab mae chalta hu. Lekin yaad rakhna teri pariksha shuru ho chuki hae abhi se .
Fir fakeer baba muskrate hue gayab ho jate hae. Aur deva ek jhatke se uth ke baeth jata hae. Wo fir paseene se lathpath tha. Uski najar apne hatho pe jati hae to uski ungli me baba ki di hui wahi anguthi moujood thi . jise dekh deva ko ab FB pe yakeen bad jata hae. Halaki kamre me pankha chal raha tha. Par uska gala sukha hua tha. Use bahot tej pyas lagi hui thi. Wo tej tej saanse le raha tha tabhi uski najar ghadi pe jati hae abhi use soye hue koi 2 ghante hi hue the. Wo dekhta hae to paani ka jag wahi pe bhara hua rakha tha wo pani peeta hae aur fir peshab karne ke liye bahar nikalta hae.
Bahar Ghana andhera tha. Peshab karne ke baad Thodi der deva. Thandi hawa me saans leta hae aur apne kamre ki taraf jata hae to dekhta hae maa ke kamre ki khidki se awaze aarahi thi shayad uski dono mamiya bhi wahi thi usnki awaze bahot dheemi thi deva waha chala jata hae thodi der ko time pass karne par jaese hi wo khidki tak pahuchta hae uske kano me badi mami ki aawaz padti hae aur wo apna nam sun ke ruk jata hae.
Sunita. . didi apna deva to kafi bada ho gaya hae.
Savitri . tujhe kaese pata
Sunita. Are jab sham ko use gale lagaya tha tabhi pata chal gaya tha uska to poora khada ho gaya tha aur meri nabhi pe chubh raha tha . aur dono mamiya hasne lagti hae.
Savitri . . pagal ho tuum dono koi apne bachche ke bare me aesa shochta hae kya
Bharti . . sach didi usko apne seene se laga ke to meri bhi geeli ho gayi thi
Savitri . . to yaha kyu padi hae ja na apne pati ke pas aur thandi kar le apni.
Bharti . . kaha didi un se to abhi kuch hota hi nahi bas chut me daalte hi nikal jata hae aapke bhai ka
Sunita. . ye chhoti sach kah rahi hae didi. Par aap sunao jija ji shant he ya ab tak aapki fadte rahte hae.
Deva ke kano se dhunwa nikal raha tha ladies ki bate sun ke par wo khada suntan raha. Uske lund me bhi harkat shuru ho gayi thi. Use ab apni maa ke jawab ka intjar tha.
Savitri . . Kaha shant hue hae wo. wo to jab tak roj mujhe poora nichod na le unhe nind hi nahi aati . ye to bachcho ka thoda dar hae unhe varna pahle to din me bhi mouka nikkal kar patak dete the bistar me aur ragad dalte the.
Sunita . . haye didi aap to khoob maje leti ho. Aur yaha hamare pati yani aapke bhai to kisi kam ke hi nahi hae.
Bharti . . to fir didi aaj ki rat to jija ji se kategi hi nahi aaj to aap yaha hae. Kahi wo kisi aur pe na chadh jaye.
Savitri . . nahi aesa nahi hae mae unhe kai salo se janti hu. Unhe jism ki bookh bhale hi bahot jyada hae par mere alawa aaj tak kisi ko chhua bhi nahi .
Sunit . . Fir aaj kaese ruk gayi aap yaha. Jija ji ki fikar nahi aapko?
Savitri . . muskra ke haa to mae isliye to raat ko rukna nahi chahti thi par deva ko khet k kam bhi dekhne the aur hame shahr bhi jana tha isliye der ho gai yaha aane me varna to ham yaha aate aur yaha se nikal ke sham tak ghar bhi pahuch jate.
Bharti . . to aaj rat kya haal hoga akele unka
Savitri . . hoga kya kaat lege aaj ki raat . waese kal unhone 3 guna kasar nikali hae.
Sunita . . matlab?
Savitri . . are murakh roj to rat ko ek baar hi karte hae wo mere saath par kal to unhone poori rat bhar mujhe ragda hae kamre me jate hi jo mujhe nangi kar ke pyar karna chalu kiya to mat pooch aesa koi tareeka nahi jisme unhone mujhe nahi choda ho. rat ko 10 baje mae kamre me gayi thi aur subah 4 baje ja ke mujhe sone diya . wo bhi isliye kyu ki fir subah 6 baje uthna padta hae. Aur in 6 ghanto me unhone teen bar mujhe alag alag tareeko se choda aur apna pani nikala aur do baar mujhe apna paani pilaya.
Itna sunte hi sunita aur bharti ki chut teji se bahne lagti hae. Aur saari ke upar se hi apni apni chut ko ragadne lagti hae Aur yaha chut to savitri ki bhi geeli ho gayi thi kal raat ki chudai ko yad kar ke .
Deva ka lund bhi khada ho gaya tha apni maa ki baate sun kar
Sunita . . haye didi kitni khushkismat ho tum . is umar me bhi jija aapko rat bhar chodte hae jaese koi apni nayi naveli dulhan ko . aur yaha hum dono to sulagti rah jati hae.
Bharti . . ha didi aur jaesa baap waesa beta deva bhi aesa hi hoga bistar pe.
Savitri . . kya pata ye to waqt hi batayega . ab raghu ko hi le lo kai baar bahu se baat ki hae maene. Par wo kahti hae ki raghu ko peene se hi fursat nahi to wo chod bhi nahi pata aur uska virya bhi kamjor hae jisse bachcha nahi ho sakta. Ye bat doctor ne saf saf kah di hae. Ab deva kaesa niklega ye to upar wala jane.
Sunita. . didi chinta mat karo apna deva gabru jawan hae. Us raghu ke jaesa nashedi nahi dekhna deva sab ki jholi me khushiya hi bharega.
Deva ab waha nahi rukta aur apne kamre me nikal jata hae tabhi deva ka dhyan apne lund pe jata hae uska lund us samay bate sun ke to khada hua tha lekin abhi itni jaldi baeth chuka tha aur uska size bhi koi khas nahi tha. Soya hua 4 “ ka aur khada hone par bhi mushkil se 6” ka hota tha . jyada mota bhi nahi tha uska lund.
Deva . . He bhagwan kya mae kisi kam ka nahi . pitaji to maa ko sone bhi nahi dete aur yaha mera lund hae jo shayad un ke mukable kahi bhi nahi hae.
Tabhi deva ko Fakeer baba yaad aa jate hae. “ deva abhi tujhme kai kamiya hae” . sahi kaha tha fakeer baba ne mujhme kamiya hae . mae to bekar me khush tha ki mae taqatwar hu. Aur baba ne kaha tha meri pariksha abhi shuru hogi . jisme mujhe apna astitva pata chalega. Ek baat to pata chal gayi. Ab aage dekhte hae.
Yahi sochte hue deva so jata hae. Aur agli subah . .
Uth deva kitna soyega mere bete ghar nahi jana kya. Apni maa ki aesi hi awazo se deva ki nind tooti hae aur wo dekhta ki maa wahi deva ki taraf peeth kar ke khadi hae aur apna bag bhi bana rahi hae sath hi deva ko awaze de ke utha bhi rahi hae,
Deva.. are maa palto to sahi mae kab ka uth gaya ab to awaze lagana band kar.
Savitri . . muskra ke deva ko dekhti hae. Uth gaya beta chal jaldi se taiyar ho ja fir nikalte hae ghar ki or
Uske baad deva bhi jaldi se taiyar ho ke nashta kar ke chalne ko taiyar ho jata hae thodi hi der me uski maa aur bahan bhi aa jati hae fir sabse vida le ke teeno chal dete hae apne ghar ki taraf. Aaj bhi deva ko laga ki uski mamiya use badi hasrat se dekh rahi thi jaate hue. Par abhi wo un pe dhyan nahi deta. Aur rat ko baba se ki hui bato hi sochte hue aage bad raha tha. Ki tabhi deva ka tractor khad khadate hue band ho jata hae.
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