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Fantasy इच्छाधारी देव

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awesome update ..kanika to achchi achchi salaah de rahi hai aghori ko ..ab pishach ki sena ko bulana chahta hai aghori aisa lagta hai ..

deva ne apne maa baap ki yaddasht ko mitake sahi kiya ..

dev aur aghori ki ek baat sahi hai ki taakad ka istemal karna aana chahiye jo thakur nahi kar paaya ..
 

The king

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UPDATE - 169


Waha ke halat dekh kar sab chonk gaye. Shalaka ne unhe farm house me bahar hi visible kiya.Wo log bahar se andar aane lage aur kadam kadam pe lashe dekh kar dev aur rudra ki ankho me shole nachne lage wahi haal nilam aur poonam ka bhi tha.



Ab Aage ……….



Jab andar ka hal dekha to dev daud kar apne maa bap ke pas pahucha usne apne andar umadte gusse ko kabu kiya aur bahot dheere se shalaka ki taraf dekh kar………………



Dev – Naam?



Shalaka – thakur.



Dev ne shalaka ki ankho me dekha, shalaka sab kuchh batati chali gayi, poori bat sun kar dev aur rudra ke chehre bhabhakne lage.



Rudra – us thakur ki itni majal nahi hoti agar use us aghori ki madad nahi milti.



Poonam – Bandar ko mukut pahna dene se wo raja nahi ban jata Rudra, Aghori ne use taqate to di lekin thakur ko unka istemal karna nahi aaya. Varna wo bahot kuchh kar jata. Mae ab tak wo sab dekh chuki hu jo thakur ne is farm house pe aa kar kiya. Yaha aakar sabse pahle usne sharab pi fir ek aurat ka balatkar kiya. Fir apne bete ke saath milkar hamare khilaf shadyantra racha. Aur anjam ye hua. Yadi wo apni aiyashiyo pe dhyan na dekar sahi planning pe dhyan deta to wo hamare ghar ke aur kai logo ko maar sakta tha. Lekin wo yaha aiyashiyo me dooba raha aur kuchh na kar saka waqt uske hatho se nikal gaya. Aur fakeer baba ne sabko surakshit karwa diya maharaj bhairav singh aur maharj sumant dev ke jariye.



Dev ne apni maa ke sir pe hath fera ab tak wo bikul thik ho chuki thi. unke kapde to shalaka pahle hi sahi kar chuki thi. lekin dev ne ankhe badn kar ke har cheej ko ek film ki tarah dekha . aur sab kuchh samajh gaya.



Dev aur rudra bahar gaye jaha vithhal ki lash padi thi.



Rudra ka krodh shant hone ka nam nahi le raha tha. Usne ek hath upar kiya aur asman me cheel aur kaue mandrane lage rudra ne ishara lash ki taraf kiya sare cheel kaue lash par jhapat pade aur lassh ko noch noch ke khane lage. Kuchh cheel thodi door padi mannu ki tang pe jhapti aur use bhi noch noch ke khane lage.



Rudra – thakur tere aur tere bete ko bhi aese hi cheel kauo ke aage na dala to rudra nam nahi mera.



Fir dev aur rudra wapas aate hae.



Poonam - dev chalo ghar chalte hae.



Dev – ha chalo, gurum sab kuchh pahle jaesa kar do. Nagarjun ko bhi bol do wo nayi building ko samanya kar de lekin shield cover rakhe. Haweli walo ko wapas haweli pahucha ke shield cover kar do. Uske baad tum sab basement me aa jana. Abhi hum ghar ja rahe hae.



Gurum- - thik hae deva hum log milte hae basement me.



savitri ko abhi hosh nahi aaya tha. Wo sadme me thi. dev savitri ko god me utha leta hae aur rudra DN ko fir sabhi log waha se adrashya ho ke apne bangle pe aate hae.dev apne maa babu ji ko unke kamre me lita deta hae.



Poonam – dev maa ko hosh kyu nahi aa raha hae.



Dev – wo sadme me hae halaki ab wo bilkul thik hae. lekin inke dimag se wo sab nikalna padega.



Deva maa ke sir pe hath rakh deta hae. aur unke chehre ko dekhne lagta hae jaha ab tension ki koi lakeer nahi thi.



Dev – ab jab maa hosh me aayegi to unhe yahi lagega ke unka accident hua tha jisme pita ji ki halat jyada kharab hae. unhe koi chot nahi aayi. Wo bure halat ab unhe yad nahi rahege. Aur pitaji ko bhi bas accident hi yad rahega.



Poonam – lekin babu ji thik kyu nahi ho rahe hae.



Dev – poonam babu ji pe thakur ne apni shaktiyo se bhi hamla kiya hae. jis wajah se wo aese thik nahi ho rahe hae. mae fakeer baba se bat karuga. Abhi inhe aaram karne dete hae.



Poonam - ha thik hae. mae baki sabko bulwa leti hu. Pitaji maharaj se kah kar.



Thodi der me sabhi log apne apne kamro me aa jate hae sab log ab tak so hi rahe the. Halaki waha wo log uthe the ek dusre se baate bhi kit hi wo log pareshan bhi the lekin ab unhe bhi sab sapna hi lagega. Jab uthege.



Udhar gufa me aghori bechaini se tahal raha tha.



Kanika - kya hua maharaj aap aaj pareshan kyu hae.



Aghori - kanika maene aaj dev ke pariwar pe us thakur aur uske shahri dosto ke saath mil ke hamla karwaya. Kyu ki us samay dev, rudra, poonam aur nilam yaha nahi the. Maene Ye janne ke liye hamla karwaya tha ke jo yaha hae wo kitne saksham hae kyu ki unki taqat ka andaza mujhe hone par mae unhe samapt kar sakta tha. Mae koi bhi kaam is baar andhere me nahi karna chahta.



Kanika – to hamla to karwa diya na aapne fir pareshan kyu hae?



Aghori - pareshan isiliye hu kyu ke deva ne apni sena bahot majboot banayi hae is baar. Na to mae unme se kisi ka kuchh bigad paya na hi dev ke pariwar ko utha paya. Wo sab behad sawdhana aur khatarnak sabit hue. Aur ye mere liye koi shubh sanket nahi hae .



Kanika – to ab kya socha hae aapne?



Aghori - wahi to samajh me nahi aa raha hae.



Kanika – agar aap kahe to mae kuchh sujhav du aapko?



Aghori – bolo kya kahna chahti ho?



Kanika – aap kuchh samay pahle jinn lok gaye the na waha se koi sahayta kyu nahi le lete.



Aghori - jinn badshah dev ka dushman nahi hae wo bas gurudev ke kisi ahsan tale daba hua hae jis wajah se mera saath dene ko taiyar hae to mae uska istemal tab karuga jab mere pas dusra koi vikalp nahi rah jayega. Tab mae khud aur jinn dashah dev pe dono taraf se hamla karege. Lekin usse pahle mae chahta hu. Ki in logo ko sabak sikhaya jaye yadi maene hi inhe sambhal iya to fir kisi jinn vinn badshah ki jarurat nahi hogi.



Kanika - to apni taqato ke saath aapne thakur ko bheja use fir se bhejo



Aghori - kanika taqate hone ka matlab ye nahi hota ke wo vyakti taqatwar ho gaya un taqato ka sahi istemal kaese kiya jaye ye seekhne me bahot samay lagta hae. yu hi taqate udhar lekar agar har koi jeetne lagta to mujhe itna intjar nahi karna padta is dev jaese sapolo ko to mae unki maa ke bhosde me hi masal deta. isi tarah thakur ke pas meri taqate to thi lekin uska istemal use nahi aata tha. Jis wajah se uski haar hui. waese bhi wo sala bahot bada chutiya hi hae bekar maene us par itna samay kharab kiya.



Kanika – to fir to aap pishach sena ka sahara lijiye aur un par hamla kar dijiye dev aur rudra to bach jayege ye hum jante hae wo pishach sena unka kuchh nahi bigad payegi par sambhavtah baki logo ko mar ke aapka aadha kam kar de.



Aghori ki aankho me chamak aa gayi



Aghori - are waah kanika tune to meri samasya hal kar di ye mujhe pahle kyu nahi sujha ke mae pishach sena ka istemal karu . yahi karna uchit hoga. Tune sach me mujhe khush kar diya.

Kanika - to fir chaliye na bistar pe. aap bhi mujhe khush kar dijiye kab se meri yoni sookhi padi hae aap ke intjar me.
Nice update bhai waiting for next update
 

Vk248517

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UPDATE - 169


Waha ke halat dekh kar sab chonk gaye. Shalaka ne unhe farm house me bahar hi visible kiya.Wo log bahar se andar aane lage aur kadam kadam pe lashe dekh kar dev aur rudra ki ankho me shole nachne lage wahi haal nilam aur poonam ka bhi tha.



Ab Aage ……….



Jab andar ka hal dekha to dev daud kar apne maa bap ke pas pahucha usne apne andar umadte gusse ko kabu kiya aur bahot dheere se shalaka ki taraf dekh kar………………



Dev – Naam?



Shalaka – thakur.



Dev ne shalaka ki ankho me dekha, shalaka sab kuchh batati chali gayi, poori bat sun kar dev aur rudra ke chehre bhabhakne lage.



Rudra – us thakur ki itni majal nahi hoti agar use us aghori ki madad nahi milti.



Poonam – Bandar ko mukut pahna dene se wo raja nahi ban jata Rudra, Aghori ne use taqate to di lekin thakur ko unka istemal karna nahi aaya. Varna wo bahot kuchh kar jata. Mae ab tak wo sab dekh chuki hu jo thakur ne is farm house pe aa kar kiya. Yaha aakar sabse pahle usne sharab pi fir ek aurat ka balatkar kiya. Fir apne bete ke saath milkar hamare khilaf shadyantra racha. Aur anjam ye hua. Yadi wo apni aiyashiyo pe dhyan na dekar sahi planning pe dhyan deta to wo hamare ghar ke aur kai logo ko maar sakta tha. Lekin wo yaha aiyashiyo me dooba raha aur kuchh na kar saka waqt uske hatho se nikal gaya. Aur fakeer baba ne sabko surakshit karwa diya maharaj bhairav singh aur maharj sumant dev ke jariye.



Dev ne apni maa ke sir pe hath fera ab tak wo bikul thik ho chuki thi. unke kapde to shalaka pahle hi sahi kar chuki thi. lekin dev ne ankhe badn kar ke har cheej ko ek film ki tarah dekha . aur sab kuchh samajh gaya.



Dev aur rudra bahar gaye jaha vithhal ki lash padi thi.



Rudra ka krodh shant hone ka nam nahi le raha tha. Usne ek hath upar kiya aur asman me cheel aur kaue mandrane lage rudra ne ishara lash ki taraf kiya sare cheel kaue lash par jhapat pade aur lassh ko noch noch ke khane lage. Kuchh cheel thodi door padi mannu ki tang pe jhapti aur use bhi noch noch ke khane lage.



Rudra – thakur tere aur tere bete ko bhi aese hi cheel kauo ke aage na dala to rudra nam nahi mera.



Fir dev aur rudra wapas aate hae.



Poonam - dev chalo ghar chalte hae.



Dev – ha chalo, gurum sab kuchh pahle jaesa kar do. Nagarjun ko bhi bol do wo nayi building ko samanya kar de lekin shield cover rakhe. Haweli walo ko wapas haweli pahucha ke shield cover kar do. Uske baad tum sab basement me aa jana. Abhi hum ghar ja rahe hae.



Gurum- - thik hae deva hum log milte hae basement me.



savitri ko abhi hosh nahi aaya tha. Wo sadme me thi. dev savitri ko god me utha leta hae aur rudra DN ko fir sabhi log waha se adrashya ho ke apne bangle pe aate hae.dev apne maa babu ji ko unke kamre me lita deta hae.



Poonam – dev maa ko hosh kyu nahi aa raha hae.



Dev – wo sadme me hae halaki ab wo bilkul thik hae. lekin inke dimag se wo sab nikalna padega.



Deva maa ke sir pe hath rakh deta hae. aur unke chehre ko dekhne lagta hae jaha ab tension ki koi lakeer nahi thi.



Dev – ab jab maa hosh me aayegi to unhe yahi lagega ke unka accident hua tha jisme pita ji ki halat jyada kharab hae. unhe koi chot nahi aayi. Wo bure halat ab unhe yad nahi rahege. Aur pitaji ko bhi bas accident hi yad rahega.



Poonam – lekin babu ji thik kyu nahi ho rahe hae.



Dev – poonam babu ji pe thakur ne apni shaktiyo se bhi hamla kiya hae. jis wajah se wo aese thik nahi ho rahe hae. mae fakeer baba se bat karuga. Abhi inhe aaram karne dete hae.



Poonam - ha thik hae. mae baki sabko bulwa leti hu. Pitaji maharaj se kah kar.



Thodi der me sabhi log apne apne kamro me aa jate hae sab log ab tak so hi rahe the. Halaki waha wo log uthe the ek dusre se baate bhi kit hi wo log pareshan bhi the lekin ab unhe bhi sab sapna hi lagega. Jab uthege.



Udhar gufa me aghori bechaini se tahal raha tha.



Kanika - kya hua maharaj aap aaj pareshan kyu hae.



Aghori - kanika maene aaj dev ke pariwar pe us thakur aur uske shahri dosto ke saath mil ke hamla karwaya. Kyu ki us samay dev, rudra, poonam aur nilam yaha nahi the. Maene Ye janne ke liye hamla karwaya tha ke jo yaha hae wo kitne saksham hae kyu ki unki taqat ka andaza mujhe hone par mae unhe samapt kar sakta tha. Mae koi bhi kaam is baar andhere me nahi karna chahta.



Kanika – to hamla to karwa diya na aapne fir pareshan kyu hae?



Aghori - pareshan isiliye hu kyu ke deva ne apni sena bahot majboot banayi hae is baar. Na to mae unme se kisi ka kuchh bigad paya na hi dev ke pariwar ko utha paya. Wo sab behad sawdhana aur khatarnak sabit hue. Aur ye mere liye koi shubh sanket nahi hae .



Kanika – to ab kya socha hae aapne?



Aghori - wahi to samajh me nahi aa raha hae.



Kanika – agar aap kahe to mae kuchh sujhav du aapko?



Aghori – bolo kya kahna chahti ho?



Kanika – aap kuchh samay pahle jinn lok gaye the na waha se koi sahayta kyu nahi le lete.



Aghori - jinn badshah dev ka dushman nahi hae wo bas gurudev ke kisi ahsan tale daba hua hae jis wajah se mera saath dene ko taiyar hae to mae uska istemal tab karuga jab mere pas dusra koi vikalp nahi rah jayega. Tab mae khud aur jinn dashah dev pe dono taraf se hamla karege. Lekin usse pahle mae chahta hu. Ki in logo ko sabak sikhaya jaye yadi maene hi inhe sambhal iya to fir kisi jinn vinn badshah ki jarurat nahi hogi.



Kanika - to apni taqato ke saath aapne thakur ko bheja use fir se bhejo



Aghori - kanika taqate hone ka matlab ye nahi hota ke wo vyakti taqatwar ho gaya un taqato ka sahi istemal kaese kiya jaye ye seekhne me bahot samay lagta hae. yu hi taqate udhar lekar agar har koi jeetne lagta to mujhe itna intjar nahi karna padta is dev jaese sapolo ko to mae unki maa ke bhosde me hi masal deta. isi tarah thakur ke pas meri taqate to thi lekin uska istemal use nahi aata tha. Jis wajah se uski haar hui. waese bhi wo sala bahot bada chutiya hi hae bekar maene us par itna samay kharab kiya.



Kanika – to fir to aap pishach sena ka sahara lijiye aur un par hamla kar dijiye dev aur rudra to bach jayege ye hum jante hae wo pishach sena unka kuchh nahi bigad payegi par sambhavtah baki logo ko mar ke aapka aadha kam kar de.



Aghori ki aankho me chamak aa gayi



Aghori - are waah kanika tune to meri samasya hal kar di ye mujhe pahle kyu nahi sujha ke mae pishach sena ka istemal karu . yahi karna uchit hoga. Tune sach me mujhe khush kar diya.

Kanika - to fir chaliye na bistar pe. aap bhi mujhe khush kar dijiye kab se meri yoni sookhi padi hae aap ke intjar me.
Nice updates
 

Boby

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To ab dev aur rudra wapas aa gaye hai to dekhte hai wo aghori par hamla karte hai ya aghori pahle hamla karta hai.Pishach sena se dev apne pariwaar ko Bach bhi payega ya phir aghori ke haatho maat khayega. Nice update.
Bhai Thank you very much for your review
 

Raja maurya

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UPDATE - 169


Waha ke halat dekh kar sab chonk gaye. Shalaka ne unhe farm house me bahar hi visible kiya.Wo log bahar se andar aane lage aur kadam kadam pe lashe dekh kar dev aur rudra ki ankho me shole nachne lage wahi haal nilam aur poonam ka bhi tha.



Ab Aage ……….



Jab andar ka hal dekha to dev daud kar apne maa bap ke pas pahucha usne apne andar umadte gusse ko kabu kiya aur bahot dheere se shalaka ki taraf dekh kar………………



Dev – Naam?



Shalaka – thakur.



Dev ne shalaka ki ankho me dekha, shalaka sab kuchh batati chali gayi, poori bat sun kar dev aur rudra ke chehre bhabhakne lage.



Rudra – us thakur ki itni majal nahi hoti agar use us aghori ki madad nahi milti.



Poonam – Bandar ko mukut pahna dene se wo raja nahi ban jata Rudra, Aghori ne use taqate to di lekin thakur ko unka istemal karna nahi aaya. Varna wo bahot kuchh kar jata. Mae ab tak wo sab dekh chuki hu jo thakur ne is farm house pe aa kar kiya. Yaha aakar sabse pahle usne sharab pi fir ek aurat ka balatkar kiya. Fir apne bete ke saath milkar hamare khilaf shadyantra racha. Aur anjam ye hua. Yadi wo apni aiyashiyo pe dhyan na dekar sahi planning pe dhyan deta to wo hamare ghar ke aur kai logo ko maar sakta tha. Lekin wo yaha aiyashiyo me dooba raha aur kuchh na kar saka waqt uske hatho se nikal gaya. Aur fakeer baba ne sabko surakshit karwa diya maharaj bhairav singh aur maharj sumant dev ke jariye.



Dev ne apni maa ke sir pe hath fera ab tak wo bikul thik ho chuki thi. unke kapde to shalaka pahle hi sahi kar chuki thi. lekin dev ne ankhe badn kar ke har cheej ko ek film ki tarah dekha . aur sab kuchh samajh gaya.



Dev aur rudra bahar gaye jaha vithhal ki lash padi thi.



Rudra ka krodh shant hone ka nam nahi le raha tha. Usne ek hath upar kiya aur asman me cheel aur kaue mandrane lage rudra ne ishara lash ki taraf kiya sare cheel kaue lash par jhapat pade aur lassh ko noch noch ke khane lage. Kuchh cheel thodi door padi mannu ki tang pe jhapti aur use bhi noch noch ke khane lage.



Rudra – thakur tere aur tere bete ko bhi aese hi cheel kauo ke aage na dala to rudra nam nahi mera.



Fir dev aur rudra wapas aate hae.



Poonam - dev chalo ghar chalte hae.



Dev – ha chalo, gurum sab kuchh pahle jaesa kar do. Nagarjun ko bhi bol do wo nayi building ko samanya kar de lekin shield cover rakhe. Haweli walo ko wapas haweli pahucha ke shield cover kar do. Uske baad tum sab basement me aa jana. Abhi hum ghar ja rahe hae.



Gurum- - thik hae deva hum log milte hae basement me.



savitri ko abhi hosh nahi aaya tha. Wo sadme me thi. dev savitri ko god me utha leta hae aur rudra DN ko fir sabhi log waha se adrashya ho ke apne bangle pe aate hae.dev apne maa babu ji ko unke kamre me lita deta hae.



Poonam – dev maa ko hosh kyu nahi aa raha hae.



Dev – wo sadme me hae halaki ab wo bilkul thik hae. lekin inke dimag se wo sab nikalna padega.



Deva maa ke sir pe hath rakh deta hae. aur unke chehre ko dekhne lagta hae jaha ab tension ki koi lakeer nahi thi.



Dev – ab jab maa hosh me aayegi to unhe yahi lagega ke unka accident hua tha jisme pita ji ki halat jyada kharab hae. unhe koi chot nahi aayi. Wo bure halat ab unhe yad nahi rahege. Aur pitaji ko bhi bas accident hi yad rahega.



Poonam – lekin babu ji thik kyu nahi ho rahe hae.



Dev – poonam babu ji pe thakur ne apni shaktiyo se bhi hamla kiya hae. jis wajah se wo aese thik nahi ho rahe hae. mae fakeer baba se bat karuga. Abhi inhe aaram karne dete hae.



Poonam - ha thik hae. mae baki sabko bulwa leti hu. Pitaji maharaj se kah kar.



Thodi der me sabhi log apne apne kamro me aa jate hae sab log ab tak so hi rahe the. Halaki waha wo log uthe the ek dusre se baate bhi kit hi wo log pareshan bhi the lekin ab unhe bhi sab sapna hi lagega. Jab uthege.



Udhar gufa me aghori bechaini se tahal raha tha.



Kanika - kya hua maharaj aap aaj pareshan kyu hae.



Aghori - kanika maene aaj dev ke pariwar pe us thakur aur uske shahri dosto ke saath mil ke hamla karwaya. Kyu ki us samay dev, rudra, poonam aur nilam yaha nahi the. Maene Ye janne ke liye hamla karwaya tha ke jo yaha hae wo kitne saksham hae kyu ki unki taqat ka andaza mujhe hone par mae unhe samapt kar sakta tha. Mae koi bhi kaam is baar andhere me nahi karna chahta.



Kanika – to hamla to karwa diya na aapne fir pareshan kyu hae?



Aghori - pareshan isiliye hu kyu ke deva ne apni sena bahot majboot banayi hae is baar. Na to mae unme se kisi ka kuchh bigad paya na hi dev ke pariwar ko utha paya. Wo sab behad sawdhana aur khatarnak sabit hue. Aur ye mere liye koi shubh sanket nahi hae .



Kanika – to ab kya socha hae aapne?



Aghori - wahi to samajh me nahi aa raha hae.



Kanika – agar aap kahe to mae kuchh sujhav du aapko?



Aghori – bolo kya kahna chahti ho?



Kanika – aap kuchh samay pahle jinn lok gaye the na waha se koi sahayta kyu nahi le lete.



Aghori - jinn badshah dev ka dushman nahi hae wo bas gurudev ke kisi ahsan tale daba hua hae jis wajah se mera saath dene ko taiyar hae to mae uska istemal tab karuga jab mere pas dusra koi vikalp nahi rah jayega. Tab mae khud aur jinn dashah dev pe dono taraf se hamla karege. Lekin usse pahle mae chahta hu. Ki in logo ko sabak sikhaya jaye yadi maene hi inhe sambhal iya to fir kisi jinn vinn badshah ki jarurat nahi hogi.



Kanika - to apni taqato ke saath aapne thakur ko bheja use fir se bhejo



Aghori - kanika taqate hone ka matlab ye nahi hota ke wo vyakti taqatwar ho gaya un taqato ka sahi istemal kaese kiya jaye ye seekhne me bahot samay lagta hae. yu hi taqate udhar lekar agar har koi jeetne lagta to mujhe itna intjar nahi karna padta is dev jaese sapolo ko to mae unki maa ke bhosde me hi masal deta. isi tarah thakur ke pas meri taqate to thi lekin uska istemal use nahi aata tha. Jis wajah se uski haar hui. waese bhi wo sala bahot bada chutiya hi hae bekar maene us par itna samay kharab kiya.



Kanika – to fir to aap pishach sena ka sahara lijiye aur un par hamla kar dijiye dev aur rudra to bach jayege ye hum jante hae wo pishach sena unka kuchh nahi bigad payegi par sambhavtah baki logo ko mar ke aapka aadha kam kar de.



Aghori ki aankho me chamak aa gayi



Aghori - are waah kanika tune to meri samasya hal kar di ye mujhe pahle kyu nahi sujha ke mae pishach sena ka istemal karu . yahi karna uchit hoga. Tune sach me mujhe khush kar diya.

Kanika - to fir chaliye na bistar pe. aap bhi mujhe khush kar dijiye kab se meri yoni sookhi padi hae aap ke intjar me.
Fantastic update Bhai
 
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