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Zabardast updateUPDATE – 170
Kanika - to fir chaliye na bistar pe. aap bhi mujhe khush kar dijiye kab se meri yoni sookhi padi hae aap ke intjar me.
Ab Aage……
Aghori ne use hawas bhai najro se dekha aur uske kandhe se jo baal uski chuchiyo ko dhake hue the unhe usne peeche kiya fir apna langot ek jhatke me utar fenka aur kanika ki chuchiya pakad ke marodne laga jisse kanika bhi madhosh hone lagi aur aghori ka lund bhi khada hone laga tabhi aghori ka dhyan neeche gaya koi uska lund pakad ke chus raha tha. Aghori ne dekha ye manika hae. to wo manika ke mooh me dhakke marne laga aur kanika ki chuchiya daba daba ke peene laga.
Fir teeno bistar pe gaye aur hawasa ka nanga naach shuru ho gaya.
Idhar deva ke ghar me Koi do ghante bad sab uthte hae.
Diya – dev ye aaj kya ho raha hae payal bhi so rahi hae. ye bhi aaj khet nahi gaye. Maa babu ji bhi so rahe hae.
Dev - are bhabhi kuchh nahi thakan hogi. Lekin ek buri khabar hae.
Diya – kaesi buri khabar?
Dev - jab aap log so rahe the tab maa babu ji mandir gaye the raste me unki gadi ka break fail ho gaya aur unka ek accident ho gaya.
Diya - kyaa??? He bhagwan aur mae soti rahi mujhe kisi ne is kabil bhi nahi samjha ke aesi bat hone pe bhi utha de.
Dev – are bhabhi sab thik hae mujhe pata chala to mae waha pahucha aur unhe hospital se abhi laya hu. Aaram kar rahe hae. babu ji ki tabiyat jyada kharab hae lekin chinta ki koi baat nahi
Diya – aur maa kaesi hae?
Dev – maa thik hae bas aaram kar rahi hae.
Payal - bhaiya abhi to mae isi ghar me hu mujhe abhi se itna paraya kar diya aap logo ne ke maa babu ji ka accident ho gaya aur aapne batana bhi jaruri nahi samjha?
Deva – are gudiya naaraj kyu hoti ho, maene to bhabhi ko bhi nahi bataya, na hi bhaiya ko. Mae nahi chahta tha tum log pareshan ho, Aur dekho hospital se chutti bhi turant mil gayi. Yani sab thik hae na. ab tu ro mat aur ja ja kar dekh le maa babu ji ko
Itna sunte hi diya aur payal daudti hui andar jati hae aur maa babu ji ko dekhne lagti hae jo abhi so rahe the.
Wo dono bahar aa jati hae aur fir rone lagti hae.
Dev – tum dono ro mat. Kuchh nahi hua. Sab thik hae. jao jakar aaram karo.
Fir diya aur payal chali jati hae apne apne kamre me aur dev chala jata hae basement me. Jaha sabhi moujood the. Gurum, nagarjun, channo, shalaka, Rajni, nilam, rudra, dev aur poonam.
Lekin sab ki garden jhuki hui thi koi kuchh kah nahi pa raha tha.
Dev – to aaj ki is ghatna se kya samajh me aaya aap sabko?
Gurum – hame maaf kar do dev hum sharminda hae ke hamare hote ye sab ho gaya. Hume bilkul andaja nahi tha ye sab hone ka.
Channo – ha bhaiya hame pata hi nahi chala unhone sab kuchh itna achanak kiya hum log to bas nishchint the. Ke hamne har jagah ko surakshit kiya hua hae to kuchh nahi ho sakta.
Rudra – fir bhi hua. Aur kafi khatarnak tareeke se hua.
Nagarjun - hame hamari galti ka ahsas hae. hum mante hae ke hamse bahot badi chook hui hae.
Dev - sabse pahle to tum log sab apne man se ye guilty ki feeling ko nikal do. Jo hua achha nahi hua. Lekin hum me se koi bhi bhagwan nahi hae. agar hum samne walo ka itna nuksan kar sakte hae to wo log bhi kam shatir to hae nahi. Isiliye jo hua. Wo hona hi tha. Bas Isme tum sab ki galti nahi hae. uske bhi teen karan hae.
Karan 1 – un logo ke pas us waqt teen tarah ki powers thi. ek humse dushmani ki aag jo thakur aur mannu ke dilo me thi, karan 2,- latest technic ki power jo vithhal ne di, 3rd- mayavi shaktiyo ki power jo aghori ne di. Iske viprit tum logo ke pas jo tha wo sab nuksan karne wala hi tha. 1) over confidance 2) nishchintta yani relexation 3) aur sabse aham unhe is bat ka pata tha ki hum charo yaha nahi hae. man lo tum sab satark bhi hote to bhi wo hamle me kamyab hote kyu ki us halat me aghori bhi samne aata aur tum logo ki taqate freez kar deta. Tum log kuchh nahi kar pate. Aghori nahi aaya uska reason ye hae kyu ki use pata chal gaya ke hum log wapas is gaanv me aane hi wale hae uske apne sources hae. use mere aane ka intjar to tha hi lekin wo chahta tha Ki hamare poore pariwar ko bandi bana ke mujhse wo swarn mani hasil kar sake lekin hamare bado ne hamare pariwaro ko pahle hi surakshit kar diya jisse uski yojna fail ho gayi. Bhadas nikalne ke liye unhone maa babu ji ko kidnap kiya lekin unke dam pe wo humse swarn mani nahi le pata isisliye wo samne nahi aaya. Kyu ki uske pas hamare log jyada hote to alag alag jagah pe rakh ke mujhe uljha sakta tha. Hum sab ko divert kar sakta tha. Wo uske pas the nahi. Isiliye tum log guilty feel mat karo.
Rajni - lekin dev aese to wo aesa hi hamla fir kar sakta hae na.
Nahi kar sakta ab wo aesa dubara, uske pas ye akhri mouka tha. Ab mere pas swarn mani hae. mere kisi bhi sathi ke bare me wo sochega bhi to mae kahi bhi rahu ye mani us ka kaal ban ke samne aa jayegi. Jise wo chhu bhi nahi payega aur koshish karega to jal ke bhasm ho jayega.
Dev - ab ye batao ke……………..
Sab dev ke chup ho jane par use dekhne lage to dev samne dekh raha tha ab jab sabne dev ki ankho ka peecha kiya to dekha samne diya khadi thi wo haerat ke mare sab ko dekh rahi thi
Dev – are bhabhi aap waha kyu khadi hae aaiye na hamare saath baethiye.
Diya - ye sab kya hae dev ? kaesi bate kar rahe the tum log? Latest technic, mayavi shaktiya, mannu, thakur aghori? Ye sab kya hae dev mujhe kuchh thik nahi lag raha kya tum mujhe bataoge ya mae sab ko yaha le aau?
Dev ne sab ki taraf dekha aur ant me poonam ki taraf to poonam ne haa me garden hila di.
Dev uthkar aage badha aur diya ka hath pakad kar use apne samne ek kuri par baetha diya aur palatkar…..
Dev – basement ko sound proof karo yaha ki bate bahar nahi jani chahiye.
Nagarjun uth kar bahar gaya tab tak sab chup baethe the. Uske wapas aane par dev ne uski taraf dekha.
Nagarjun - done .
Dev – bhabhi aap ko yaad hae kuchh din pahle jab hamari sagai thi tab aapne mujhse kuchh poocha tha aur maene aapse kaha tha ke waqt aane par mae aapko sab batauga .
Diya - ha tumne kaha tha lekin ab tak kuchh bataya nahi. Lekin Wo baad me dekhege. Jo abhi maene suna wo sab kya hae mera to dimag hi ghum raha haae. Us bare me pahle batao.
Deva – bhahi har baat ek duje se judi hui hae. kuchh bhi alag nahi. To aapko mae pahle sabka parichay de deta hu.
Diya sab ka parichay? Tu kya mujhe pagal samajhta hae yaha kaun hae jise mae nahi janti?
Deva – yaha koi bhi aesa nahi jise aap janti ho. Aur jinhe janti ho wo sab jhuth hae. ek bhram jo hamne hi failaya hae. in sab ka sahi parichay sahi pahchan mae ab aapse karwauga. Khud se bhi milwauga. Lekin usse pahle aapko mujhse ek vada karna hoga ke jo bhi mae kahuga use aap kisi ko batane ki koshish nahi karegi. Sahi waqt aane par mae khud sabko batauga.
Diya – thik hae deva. Mae vachan deti hu…………….
Thanks Krish bhaiNice update
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Aapke review ke liye dhanyavaad bhaiBahot behtreen update Bhai
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Fantastic updateUPDATE – 170
Kanika - to fir chaliye na bistar pe. aap bhi mujhe khush kar dijiye kab se meri yoni sookhi padi hae aap ke intjar me.
Ab Aage……
Aghori ne use hawas bhai najro se dekha aur uske kandhe se jo baal uski chuchiyo ko dhake hue the unhe usne peeche kiya fir apna langot ek jhatke me utar fenka aur kanika ki chuchiya pakad ke marodne laga jisse kanika bhi madhosh hone lagi aur aghori ka lund bhi khada hone laga tabhi aghori ka dhyan neeche gaya koi uska lund pakad ke chus raha tha. Aghori ne dekha ye manika hae. to wo manika ke mooh me dhakke marne laga aur kanika ki chuchiya daba daba ke peene laga.
Fir teeno bistar pe gaye aur hawasa ka nanga naach shuru ho gaya.
Idhar deva ke ghar me Koi do ghante bad sab uthte hae.
Diya – dev ye aaj kya ho raha hae payal bhi so rahi hae. ye bhi aaj khet nahi gaye. Maa babu ji bhi so rahe hae.
Dev - are bhabhi kuchh nahi thakan hogi. Lekin ek buri khabar hae.
Diya – kaesi buri khabar?
Dev - jab aap log so rahe the tab maa babu ji mandir gaye the raste me unki gadi ka break fail ho gaya aur unka ek accident ho gaya.
Diya - kyaa??? He bhagwan aur mae soti rahi mujhe kisi ne is kabil bhi nahi samjha ke aesi bat hone pe bhi utha de.
Dev – are bhabhi sab thik hae mujhe pata chala to mae waha pahucha aur unhe hospital se abhi laya hu. Aaram kar rahe hae. babu ji ki tabiyat jyada kharab hae lekin chinta ki koi baat nahi
Diya – aur maa kaesi hae?
Dev – maa thik hae bas aaram kar rahi hae.
Payal - bhaiya abhi to mae isi ghar me hu mujhe abhi se itna paraya kar diya aap logo ne ke maa babu ji ka accident ho gaya aur aapne batana bhi jaruri nahi samjha?
Deva – are gudiya naaraj kyu hoti ho, maene to bhabhi ko bhi nahi bataya, na hi bhaiya ko. Mae nahi chahta tha tum log pareshan ho, Aur dekho hospital se chutti bhi turant mil gayi. Yani sab thik hae na. ab tu ro mat aur ja ja kar dekh le maa babu ji ko
Itna sunte hi diya aur payal daudti hui andar jati hae aur maa babu ji ko dekhne lagti hae jo abhi so rahe the.
Wo dono bahar aa jati hae aur fir rone lagti hae.
Dev – tum dono ro mat. Kuchh nahi hua. Sab thik hae. jao jakar aaram karo.
Fir diya aur payal chali jati hae apne apne kamre me aur dev chala jata hae basement me. Jaha sabhi moujood the. Gurum, nagarjun, channo, shalaka, Rajni, nilam, rudra, dev aur poonam.
Lekin sab ki garden jhuki hui thi koi kuchh kah nahi pa raha tha.
Dev – to aaj ki is ghatna se kya samajh me aaya aap sabko?
Gurum – hame maaf kar do dev hum sharminda hae ke hamare hote ye sab ho gaya. Hume bilkul andaja nahi tha ye sab hone ka.
Channo – ha bhaiya hame pata hi nahi chala unhone sab kuchh itna achanak kiya hum log to bas nishchint the. Ke hamne har jagah ko surakshit kiya hua hae to kuchh nahi ho sakta.
Rudra – fir bhi hua. Aur kafi khatarnak tareeke se hua.
Nagarjun - hame hamari galti ka ahsas hae. hum mante hae ke hamse bahot badi chook hui hae.
Dev - sabse pahle to tum log sab apne man se ye guilty ki feeling ko nikal do. Jo hua achha nahi hua. Lekin hum me se koi bhi bhagwan nahi hae. agar hum samne walo ka itna nuksan kar sakte hae to wo log bhi kam shatir to hae nahi. Isiliye jo hua. Wo hona hi tha. Bas Isme tum sab ki galti nahi hae. uske bhi teen karan hae.
Karan 1 – un logo ke pas us waqt teen tarah ki powers thi. ek humse dushmani ki aag jo thakur aur mannu ke dilo me thi, karan 2,- latest technic ki power jo vithhal ne di, 3rd- mayavi shaktiyo ki power jo aghori ne di. Iske viprit tum logo ke pas jo tha wo sab nuksan karne wala hi tha. 1) over confidance 2) nishchintta yani relexation 3) aur sabse aham unhe is bat ka pata tha ki hum charo yaha nahi hae. man lo tum sab satark bhi hote to bhi wo hamle me kamyab hote kyu ki us halat me aghori bhi samne aata aur tum logo ki taqate freez kar deta. Tum log kuchh nahi kar pate. Aghori nahi aaya uska reason ye hae kyu ki use pata chal gaya ke hum log wapas is gaanv me aane hi wale hae uske apne sources hae. use mere aane ka intjar to tha hi lekin wo chahta tha Ki hamare poore pariwar ko bandi bana ke mujhse wo swarn mani hasil kar sake lekin hamare bado ne hamare pariwaro ko pahle hi surakshit kar diya jisse uski yojna fail ho gayi. Bhadas nikalne ke liye unhone maa babu ji ko kidnap kiya lekin unke dam pe wo humse swarn mani nahi le pata isisliye wo samne nahi aaya. Kyu ki uske pas hamare log jyada hote to alag alag jagah pe rakh ke mujhe uljha sakta tha. Hum sab ko divert kar sakta tha. Wo uske pas the nahi. Isiliye tum log guilty feel mat karo.
Rajni - lekin dev aese to wo aesa hi hamla fir kar sakta hae na.
Nahi kar sakta ab wo aesa dubara, uske pas ye akhri mouka tha. Ab mere pas swarn mani hae. mere kisi bhi sathi ke bare me wo sochega bhi to mae kahi bhi rahu ye mani us ka kaal ban ke samne aa jayegi. Jise wo chhu bhi nahi payega aur koshish karega to jal ke bhasm ho jayega.
Dev - ab ye batao ke……………..
Sab dev ke chup ho jane par use dekhne lage to dev samne dekh raha tha ab jab sabne dev ki ankho ka peecha kiya to dekha samne diya khadi thi wo haerat ke mare sab ko dekh rahi thi
Dev – are bhabhi aap waha kyu khadi hae aaiye na hamare saath baethiye.
Diya - ye sab kya hae dev ? kaesi bate kar rahe the tum log? Latest technic, mayavi shaktiya, mannu, thakur aghori? Ye sab kya hae dev mujhe kuchh thik nahi lag raha kya tum mujhe bataoge ya mae sab ko yaha le aau?
Dev ne sab ki taraf dekha aur ant me poonam ki taraf to poonam ne haa me garden hila di.
Dev uthkar aage badha aur diya ka hath pakad kar use apne samne ek kuri par baetha diya aur palatkar…..
Dev – basement ko sound proof karo yaha ki bate bahar nahi jani chahiye.
Nagarjun uth kar bahar gaya tab tak sab chup baethe the. Uske wapas aane par dev ne uski taraf dekha.
Nagarjun - done .
Dev – bhabhi aap ko yaad hae kuchh din pahle jab hamari sagai thi tab aapne mujhse kuchh poocha tha aur maene aapse kaha tha ke waqt aane par mae aapko sab batauga .
Diya - ha tumne kaha tha lekin ab tak kuchh bataya nahi. Lekin Wo baad me dekhege. Jo abhi maene suna wo sab kya hae mera to dimag hi ghum raha haae. Us bare me pahle batao.
Deva – bhahi har baat ek duje se judi hui hae. kuchh bhi alag nahi. To aapko mae pahle sabka parichay de deta hu.
Diya sab ka parichay? Tu kya mujhe pagal samajhta hae yaha kaun hae jise mae nahi janti?
Deva – yaha koi bhi aesa nahi jise aap janti ho. Aur jinhe janti ho wo sab jhuth hae. ek bhram jo hamne hi failaya hae. in sab ka sahi parichay sahi pahchan mae ab aapse karwauga. Khud se bhi milwauga. Lekin usse pahle aapko mujhse ek vada karna hoga ke jo bhi mae kahuga use aap kisi ko batane ki koshish nahi karegi. Sahi waqt aane par mae khud sabko batauga.
Diya – thik hae deva. Mae vachan deti hu…………….