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Fantasy काजल देवगन की अनदेखी जिंदगी
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Sham ke 6:00 baje manager use aadami ko lekar aati hai use aadami ki umra lagbhag 40 sal ke aaspaas thi Aur vah dikhne mein bhi theek takta tha Kajal uska welcome Karti hai vah Kajal ke liye ek gift lekar aaya tha to Kajal bhi use gift ko accept kar leti hai Aur vah donon sofe per baith jaate Hain
Aadmi - Kajal madam ham aapko hamari ek add me cast karna chahte hain yah baat to aapko manager ne Bata hi di hogi
Kajal - mujhe usne sab kuchh Bata Diya per kya sach mein aap ek chhoti si add mein kissing seen chahte ho
Aadami - madam yah hamari company ka pahla product hai aur ham Apna product ko kuchh alag Andaaz mein logon ke samne pesh karna chahte hain
Kajal - Okay main aapki baat samajh gai
Kajal - aap mujhe bata sakte ho kya aapane is add ka leye mujhe hi kyon chuna
Aadmi - madam hamari add ke liye jis tarah ki actress chahie thi usmein aap fit baithati hai isliye humne aapko chuna
Uski baat sunkar Kajal ko kuchh samajh nahin a raha tha aur use kuchh daal mein Kala lag raha tha per Fir bhi Kajal use add ko karne ke bare mein soch rahi thi
Kajal - vah sab theek hai per agar main kissing seen karne wali Hun to mere sath kaun sa Mel actor hoga
Aadami - madam humne uske bare mein kuchh socha hai
Kajal - dekhiae main kisi ke sath bhi kissing seen nahin kar sakti aap mujhe pahle Bata dijiye ki mere sath Kaun Kam karne wala hai tabhi main iske bare mein sochungi
Per is baat ka koi bhi jawab use aadami ke pass nahin tha vah Kajal ko kuchh bhi Bata nahin Raha tha ab Kajal ko toda toda shak hone laga tha per Kajal aise hi use Mana nahin kar sakte the
Aadami -madam aap jyada mat sochiye ham aapko ek add ke 1 cr bhi dene ke liye taiyar hai
1 crore sunte hi Kajal hairan Ho jaati hai Aisa nahin tha ki uske pass paison ki Kami thi per usne kabhi bhi Suna nahin tha ki koye ek add ke liye koi 1 cr dene ke liye taiyar hai Kajal ka man badalne lagta hai ab vah bhi use add mein kam karne ke liye taiyar Ho jaati hai
Kajal - dekhiae paise ki koi baat nahin per use add ke bare mein mujhe detail mein aap bataiye
Aadami - madam main aapko set per sab kuchh bata dunga aur set per hi aapko mel actor bhi pata chalega agar aap kam karna chahti ho to ham abhi ke abhi contract sign kar lete hain
Kajal thoda time sochati hai aur contract sign kar leti hai ab vah aadami Kajal ko batata hai ki kal hi ham add suut karne Wale Ha ye sunkar Kajal thodi soch mein pad jaati hai kyunki vah kissing seen ka liye jaldi taiyar nahin thi per aap uske pass koi bhi chara nahin tha vah aadami use shooting ke location Bata kar chala jata hai
Dusre din subah Kajal shooting ke location par pahoce jaati hai vah jagah city ke bahar thi vaha ek purani haveli thi Jo kuchh टूटे-फूटी se lag rahi thi kajal ko usa dekhkar kuchh Ajeeb lagta hai Kajal haveli ke andar jaati hai haveli andar se bhi gandi lag rahi thi ek aadami use shooting ke set per le jata hai
vah set per बीचों-बीच ek bed Rakha hua tha aur uske आजू-बाजू mein camera Lage hue the yah dekhkar Kajal thoda ghabra jaati hai tabhi Kajal ko dekhkar director uska welcome Karta hai director ki umra lag bhag 60 sal ki thi uska naam Ramesh tha
vah usha ek room ke andar le jata hai vah khas uske liye hi banai gai thi Kajal ko vo batata hai shooting mein abhi ek ghanta hai tab tak aaram kijiye uske baat Kajal ko bhi Sahi lagti hai aur kajal bhi toda aaram karne ki sochati hai
1 ghante ke bad directer Kajal ko bulane aata hai to Kajal uske sath set par jaane lagti hai use waqt sabhi logo ki nazar kajal pe tiki hui kyunki unhone kabhi bhi badi actor ke sath Kam nahi kiya tha
Wo sabhi Pehli baar Bollywood ke actress Kajal Devgan ko dekh rahe the Jyadatar sabhi log mard hi waha pe the
Kajal dekh rahi thi ki sabhi log use hi dekh rahi thi Kajal ko apne aap per gamand ho raha tha
aur kyon Na Kare 50 sal ki umra hone ke bavjud vah kisi ka bhi land khada kar sakti thi Kajal ko us waqt ajeeb laag raha tha sabhi jydatar aged the aur Itne ajeeb laag rahe the ki Kajal ko nervousness feel ho raha tha
Kajal director ko Male actor ke bare mein puchti hai aur jab director usa male actor se milva ta hai to use dekhkar to Kajal ka dimag hi kharab ho jata hai Kajal ke samne ek 18 sal umra ka ek ladka khada tha
Jo bilkul Kala tha aur aisa lag raha tha ki vah kahi dinon se nahaya nahin hai aur uski body dekhkar lag raha tha ki use polio hua hai
Aadmi - Kajal madam ham aapko hamari ek add me cast karna chahte hain yah baat to aapko manager ne Bata hi di hogi
Kajal - mujhe usne sab kuchh Bata Diya per kya sach mein aap ek chhoti si add mein kissing seen chahte ho
Aadami - madam yah hamari company ka pahla product hai aur ham Apna product ko kuchh alag Andaaz mein logon ke samne pesh karna chahte hain
Kajal - Okay main aapki baat samajh gai
Kajal - aap mujhe bata sakte ho kya aapane is add ka leye mujhe hi kyon chuna
Aadmi - madam hamari add ke liye jis tarah ki actress chahie thi usmein aap fit baithati hai isliye humne aapko chuna
Uski baat sunkar Kajal ko kuchh samajh nahin a raha tha aur use kuchh daal mein Kala lag raha tha per Fir bhi Kajal use add ko karne ke bare mein soch rahi thi
Kajal - vah sab theek hai per agar main kissing seen karne wali Hun to mere sath kaun sa Mel actor hoga
Aadami - madam humne uske bare mein kuchh socha hai
Kajal - dekhiae main kisi ke sath bhi kissing seen nahin kar sakti aap mujhe pahle Bata dijiye ki mere sath Kaun Kam karne wala hai tabhi main iske bare mein sochungi
Per is baat ka koi bhi jawab use aadami ke pass nahin tha vah Kajal ko kuchh bhi Bata nahin Raha tha ab Kajal ko toda toda shak hone laga tha per Kajal aise hi use Mana nahin kar sakte the
Aadami -madam aap jyada mat sochiye ham aapko ek add ke 1 cr bhi dene ke liye taiyar hai
1 crore sunte hi Kajal hairan Ho jaati hai Aisa nahin tha ki uske pass paison ki Kami thi per usne kabhi bhi Suna nahin tha ki koye ek add ke liye koi 1 cr dene ke liye taiyar hai Kajal ka man badalne lagta hai ab vah bhi use add mein kam karne ke liye taiyar Ho jaati hai
Kajal - dekhiae paise ki koi baat nahin per use add ke bare mein mujhe detail mein aap bataiye
Aadami - madam main aapko set per sab kuchh bata dunga aur set per hi aapko mel actor bhi pata chalega agar aap kam karna chahti ho to ham abhi ke abhi contract sign kar lete hain
Kajal thoda time sochati hai aur contract sign kar leti hai ab vah aadami Kajal ko batata hai ki kal hi ham add suut karne Wale Ha ye sunkar Kajal thodi soch mein pad jaati hai kyunki vah kissing seen ka liye jaldi taiyar nahin thi per aap uske pass koi bhi chara nahin tha vah aadami use shooting ke location Bata kar chala jata hai
Dusre din subah Kajal shooting ke location par pahoce jaati hai vah jagah city ke bahar thi vaha ek purani haveli thi Jo kuchh टूटे-फूटी se lag rahi thi kajal ko usa dekhkar kuchh Ajeeb lagta hai Kajal haveli ke andar jaati hai haveli andar se bhi gandi lag rahi thi ek aadami use shooting ke set per le jata hai
vah set per बीचों-बीच ek bed Rakha hua tha aur uske आजू-बाजू mein camera Lage hue the yah dekhkar Kajal thoda ghabra jaati hai tabhi Kajal ko dekhkar director uska welcome Karta hai director ki umra lag bhag 60 sal ki thi uska naam Ramesh tha
vah usha ek room ke andar le jata hai vah khas uske liye hi banai gai thi Kajal ko vo batata hai shooting mein abhi ek ghanta hai tab tak aaram kijiye uske baat Kajal ko bhi Sahi lagti hai aur kajal bhi toda aaram karne ki sochati hai
1 ghante ke bad directer Kajal ko bulane aata hai to Kajal uske sath set par jaane lagti hai use waqt sabhi logo ki nazar kajal pe tiki hui kyunki unhone kabhi bhi badi actor ke sath Kam nahi kiya tha
Wo sabhi Pehli baar Bollywood ke actress Kajal Devgan ko dekh rahe the Jyadatar sabhi log mard hi waha pe the
Kajal dekh rahi thi ki sabhi log use hi dekh rahi thi Kajal ko apne aap per gamand ho raha tha
aur kyon Na Kare 50 sal ki umra hone ke bavjud vah kisi ka bhi land khada kar sakti thi Kajal ko us waqt ajeeb laag raha tha sabhi jydatar aged the aur Itne ajeeb laag rahe the ki Kajal ko nervousness feel ho raha tha
Kajal director ko Male actor ke bare mein puchti hai aur jab director usa male actor se milva ta hai to use dekhkar to Kajal ka dimag hi kharab ho jata hai Kajal ke samne ek 18 sal umra ka ek ladka khada tha
Jo bilkul Kala tha aur aisa lag raha tha ki vah kahi dinon se nahaya nahin hai aur uski body dekhkar lag raha tha ki use polio hua hai
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Bhai hindi me likhane mein bahut mehnat lagti hai aage ke kuchh update bhi likh diye HainBahut hi jabardast shuruaat hai ! Mitr agar possible ho sake toh next update hindi me den … hinglish me nahin
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यह मात्र एक सुझाव है मित्र ! आप कोशिश करें एक अपडेट को हिंदी में लिखें और फिर उस पर विव्यूअर की प्रतिक्रिया देखे !
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Male actor tha uska naam Akbar tha vah kuchh b grade filmon mein bhi kam kar chuka tha vah
Kajal - director yah kya behuda majak hai ab main is gande ladke ke sath kam karungi
Director - dekhiae madam is add ka liye hamen Jo Sahi Laga use hi ham nahin cast kiya ha ab aap Mana nahin kar sakti
Uski baten sunkar Kajal ko aur bhi gussa a jata hai aur vah vahan se jaane lagti hai
Direct - dekhiae madam aap aise hi bich mein nahin chod sakti Apne hamare sath contract kiya hai aur usme saaf saaf likha hai ki ham Jaise chahte Hain vaise aap shoot karungi
Director ki baat sunkar Kajal ke pair ruk jaate ab Kajal samajh chuki thi ki vah ab Puri tarike se fas chuki hai aur uske pass kam karne ke Siva koi chara nahin hai Kajal na chaate hue piche mudkar direct ke pass a jaati hai
direct Kajol ko pura seen samjha lagta ha Add me kajal ka name fulandevi aur ladka ka name jafer ho ta ha director kajal ko batata ha ki hum abi sirf intense scene shoot karna vala ha
Ismai aap semi nude rahengi Kajal ka ye sunkar dil ki dhadkan tejj ho gayi thi uski aakhe fati ki fati reh gyi thi usa scene ek ganda ladka ke saath shoot karna tha usse kuch samjh nhi aa rha tha ki kaise kr skti hai wo ye sab
Add me Kajal ka nama fulandevi aur ladka ka nama Jafer hota ha
Scene kuch iss prakar rahenga -
ek gareeb ladka Jesska Naam jafer hota hai vo thakurain ka saat ek purani haveli me fasa huwa hota ha bahar teej toofan aa raha tha bejli kadak rhi thi ekdum se light chli jaati hai aur andhera ho jata hai
Thakurain dar kr Jafar Ko pakad leti hai hai aur fir dono ek dusre ko chumne lagte hai light aa jati hai to jafer piche ki aur hatne lagta hai to Thakurain uska haath pakad kar usse ek room mai le jaane lagti hai
Aur fir room mai wo dono ekdum intense love making scene shoot krenge ekdum passionately ismai Kajal upar se nude rahengi but Camera angle peeche se shoot honga to Kajal ki sirf back he nude dikhayi dengi aur samne se wo jafer ke samne nude rahengi Sirf jafer he samne se dekh payenga Kajal ko aur koi nhi
Kuch der baad sab kuch ready tha shoot ke liye sabhi Crew members director apna seena thamne Kajal ka intejaar kr rhe the
Ladka bhi ready tha uski exitement pr usse kaabu paana mushkil hue jaa rha tha aur
Kajal bhi finally ready ho chuki thi Wo kisi apsara se kam nhi lag rhi thi goora gadraya doodh jaisa badan red glossy lipstick sleeveless blouse jo ki backless bhi tha red transparent saree jismai se uska jhalakta uska Navel uski sundarta par char chaand laga rha
aab finally sab kuch ready tha aur ab wo pal aa gaya tha jiska sab besabri se intejaar kar rhe the
Director kajal aur ladka ko sab kuch samjha deta hai and aab time the shot ka
SHOT start hota hai
Kajal ( Thakurain ) aur ladka ( Jafer ) dono apni position le lete haidono ke dil ki dhadkan teji se dhadkne lagti hai
Dono apne dialogue bolne lagte hai
Jafer - Thakurain bahar jor se barish hone lagi hai kya main aapko aapke ghar chhod sakta hun
Thakurain - kya tum mujhe jante ho
Jafar - han Thakurain main aapko har roj Mandir mein aate hue dekhta hun Mandir ke raste per hi mere pitaji ka chicken ka dukaan hai
Thakurain - sahi hai kya tum mujhe Ghar chhod sakte ho
Bahar jor se barish pad rahi thi tabhi jor se bijali kadak jaati hai aur usi time light bhi Chali jaati hai to Thakurain ghabrakar ko jafar ko pakad leti hai jafer bhi thakurain ko jor se pakad leta ha
ab uska ganda sa sharir thakurain ke sharir se bilkul chipka hua tha Jafar apni gande hath se Thakurain ka pet aur kamar sailani lagta hai
Thakurain - Jabbar mujhe dar lag Raha hai Tum mujhe chhod kar kahin mat jao
donon ke chehre ek dusre ke samne the धीरे-धीरे unke honth Kareeb aane Lage thakurain Jafee ka chehra pakad kar Apne hothon ki taraf laane lagti hai
Ab Jo hone wala tha use dekhne ke liye har koi atur tha kyunki Kajal Devgan unke samne ek gande ladke se kiss karne wali thi Jo kai B grade filmon mein kam kar chuka tha
Dono ek dusre ki saanse feel kar rhe the aur unke hoonth ekdum kareeb aa jate hai Jafer aage bad kar uske kala hoonth Thakurain ke hoonth par rakh deta hai donon ek dusre ko kis karne lagte Hain
Dono ke beech ekdum passionately kissing chal raha tha Kajal aur Akbar ekdum apne kirdaar mai khoye hue the ye sab dekh kar sabhi crew ke logo ki pant mai land khade ho jaate
Tabhi bijali fir se kadak jaati hai uski awaaz sunkar donon alag Ho jaate Hain thakurain ki Aankhe abhi bhi Ban ti jafer usko dekhkar ghabra jata hai per tabhi Thakurain apni Aankhen khol leti hai Aur jafer ka hath ko pakad kar use ek room mein le jaane lagti hai
Jafar ko to samajh hi nahin a raha tha ki uske sath kya ho raha hai
ab aate Hain room ke andar ke seen per
Room mai aakar Jafer aur Thakurain ek dusre baaho mai firse sama jaate hai aur ekdusre ko choomne lagte hai dono ekdum wildly Smooch kar rhe the ek dusre ko..
Kajal aur akber dono scene mai ekdum involve the akber to khul kar apni kismat ke maze le raha tha Bollywood ki itne badi actress ke laal raseele hoontho ko betahasha choomne mil raha tha usko akber khul kar Kajal ke hoonto ka raaspaan kar rha tha
Kajal - director yah kya behuda majak hai ab main is gande ladke ke sath kam karungi
Director - dekhiae madam is add ka liye hamen Jo Sahi Laga use hi ham nahin cast kiya ha ab aap Mana nahin kar sakti
Uski baten sunkar Kajal ko aur bhi gussa a jata hai aur vah vahan se jaane lagti hai
Direct - dekhiae madam aap aise hi bich mein nahin chod sakti Apne hamare sath contract kiya hai aur usme saaf saaf likha hai ki ham Jaise chahte Hain vaise aap shoot karungi
Director ki baat sunkar Kajal ke pair ruk jaate ab Kajal samajh chuki thi ki vah ab Puri tarike se fas chuki hai aur uske pass kam karne ke Siva koi chara nahin hai Kajal na chaate hue piche mudkar direct ke pass a jaati hai
direct Kajol ko pura seen samjha lagta ha Add me kajal ka name fulandevi aur ladka ka name jafer ho ta ha director kajal ko batata ha ki hum abi sirf intense scene shoot karna vala ha
Ismai aap semi nude rahengi Kajal ka ye sunkar dil ki dhadkan tejj ho gayi thi uski aakhe fati ki fati reh gyi thi usa scene ek ganda ladka ke saath shoot karna tha usse kuch samjh nhi aa rha tha ki kaise kr skti hai wo ye sab
Add me Kajal ka nama fulandevi aur ladka ka nama Jafer hota ha
Scene kuch iss prakar rahenga -
ek gareeb ladka Jesska Naam jafer hota hai vo thakurain ka saat ek purani haveli me fasa huwa hota ha bahar teej toofan aa raha tha bejli kadak rhi thi ekdum se light chli jaati hai aur andhera ho jata hai
Thakurain dar kr Jafar Ko pakad leti hai hai aur fir dono ek dusre ko chumne lagte hai light aa jati hai to jafer piche ki aur hatne lagta hai to Thakurain uska haath pakad kar usse ek room mai le jaane lagti hai
Aur fir room mai wo dono ekdum intense love making scene shoot krenge ekdum passionately ismai Kajal upar se nude rahengi but Camera angle peeche se shoot honga to Kajal ki sirf back he nude dikhayi dengi aur samne se wo jafer ke samne nude rahengi Sirf jafer he samne se dekh payenga Kajal ko aur koi nhi
Kuch der baad sab kuch ready tha shoot ke liye sabhi Crew members director apna seena thamne Kajal ka intejaar kr rhe the
Ladka bhi ready tha uski exitement pr usse kaabu paana mushkil hue jaa rha tha aur
Kajal bhi finally ready ho chuki thi Wo kisi apsara se kam nhi lag rhi thi goora gadraya doodh jaisa badan red glossy lipstick sleeveless blouse jo ki backless bhi tha red transparent saree jismai se uska jhalakta uska Navel uski sundarta par char chaand laga rha
aab finally sab kuch ready tha aur ab wo pal aa gaya tha jiska sab besabri se intejaar kar rhe the
Director kajal aur ladka ko sab kuch samjha deta hai and aab time the shot ka
SHOT start hota hai
Kajal ( Thakurain ) aur ladka ( Jafer ) dono apni position le lete haidono ke dil ki dhadkan teji se dhadkne lagti hai
Dono apne dialogue bolne lagte hai
Jafer - Thakurain bahar jor se barish hone lagi hai kya main aapko aapke ghar chhod sakta hun
Thakurain - kya tum mujhe jante ho
Jafar - han Thakurain main aapko har roj Mandir mein aate hue dekhta hun Mandir ke raste per hi mere pitaji ka chicken ka dukaan hai
Thakurain - sahi hai kya tum mujhe Ghar chhod sakte ho
Bahar jor se barish pad rahi thi tabhi jor se bijali kadak jaati hai aur usi time light bhi Chali jaati hai to Thakurain ghabrakar ko jafar ko pakad leti hai jafer bhi thakurain ko jor se pakad leta ha
ab uska ganda sa sharir thakurain ke sharir se bilkul chipka hua tha Jafar apni gande hath se Thakurain ka pet aur kamar sailani lagta hai
Thakurain - Jabbar mujhe dar lag Raha hai Tum mujhe chhod kar kahin mat jao
donon ke chehre ek dusre ke samne the धीरे-धीरे unke honth Kareeb aane Lage thakurain Jafee ka chehra pakad kar Apne hothon ki taraf laane lagti hai
Ab Jo hone wala tha use dekhne ke liye har koi atur tha kyunki Kajal Devgan unke samne ek gande ladke se kiss karne wali thi Jo kai B grade filmon mein kam kar chuka tha
Dono ek dusre ki saanse feel kar rhe the aur unke hoonth ekdum kareeb aa jate hai Jafer aage bad kar uske kala hoonth Thakurain ke hoonth par rakh deta hai donon ek dusre ko kis karne lagte Hain
Dono ke beech ekdum passionately kissing chal raha tha Kajal aur Akbar ekdum apne kirdaar mai khoye hue the ye sab dekh kar sabhi crew ke logo ki pant mai land khade ho jaate
Tabhi bijali fir se kadak jaati hai uski awaaz sunkar donon alag Ho jaate Hain thakurain ki Aankhe abhi bhi Ban ti jafer usko dekhkar ghabra jata hai per tabhi Thakurain apni Aankhen khol leti hai Aur jafer ka hath ko pakad kar use ek room mein le jaane lagti hai
Jafar ko to samajh hi nahin a raha tha ki uske sath kya ho raha hai
ab aate Hain room ke andar ke seen per
Room mai aakar Jafer aur Thakurain ek dusre baaho mai firse sama jaate hai aur ekdusre ko choomne lagte hai dono ekdum wildly Smooch kar rhe the ek dusre ko..
Kajal aur akber dono scene mai ekdum involve the akber to khul kar apni kismat ke maze le raha tha Bollywood ki itne badi actress ke laal raseele hoontho ko betahasha choomne mil raha tha usko akber khul kar Kajal ke hoonto ka raaspaan kar rha tha