Erotica जोरू का गुलाम उर्फ़ जे के जी

[komaalrani]

जोरू का गुलाम भाग २३६ - मंगलवार, दिल्ली

अपडेट पोस्टड, पृष्ठ १४३३ फायनेंसियल थ्रिलर का नया मोड़,

कृपया पढ़ें, आंनद लें और कमेंट जरूर करें

 

[komaalrani]

Haa ji bilkul sahi kaha aapne,lagta hain aap guddi ki mang unsake bhaiiya Kam saiyya se ke virya se bharoge Bina sindoor ke.

sindoor ki hakdaar to sirf ek maang hi hai ,... baaki ko to usi se kaam chalana padega jaisa apane kaha hai

 

[komaalrani]

1.Aapko ek request hain kya aap mohalla mohabbat wala fir share kar sakte ho? Ya rewrite kar sakte ho without interfaith angle??
2.aur kya aap lrrd jaisi fantasy erotica likh sakte ho kya??I think late teen's erotica journey is more exciting than adultery theme.

irrd main samjhi nahi please aap link share kar dijiye aur teen fantasy pe meir kayi stories hai aur sabse popular Nanad ki Training hi hai jo is forum men pdf pe hai . aur MMW abhi re write karana mushkil hoga kyonki main do stories post kar rhai hun , aur maine Mohe Range de ke seequel ke taur pe Banaras ka ras likhana tay kar liya hai aur uske kuch paart share bhi kar chuki hun,

iirrd vaala link ya kuch detail mil jaayen to main aage respond kar sakti hun

 

[komaalrani]

Except Mohalla Mohabbat wala sab padh chuke hain wohi missing hain aur little Red riding hood.

TThanks so much

 

[anvesharonny]

irrd main samjhi nahi please aap link share kar dijiye aur teen fantasy pe meir kayi stories hai aur sabse popular Nanad ki Training hi hai jo is forum men pdf pe hai . aur MMW abhi re write karana mushkil hoga kyonki main do stories post kar rhai hun , aur maine Mohe Range de ke seequel ke taur pe Banaras ka ras likhana tay kar liya hai aur uske kuch paart share bhi kar chuki hun,

iirrd vaala link ya kuch detail mil jaayen to main aage respond kar sakti hun

Sorry typing mistake maine little red riding hood likhana chahta tha.

 

[anvesharonny]

irrd main samjhi nahi please aap link share kar dijiye aur teen fantasy pe meir kayi stories hai aur sabse popular Nanad ki Training hi hai jo is forum men pdf pe hai . aur MMW abhi re write karana mushkil hoga kyonki main do stories post kar rhai hun , aur maine Mohe Range de ke seequel ke taur pe Banaras ka ras likhana tay kar liya hai aur uske kuch paart share bhi kar chuki hun,

iirrd vaala link ya kuch detail mil jaayen to main aage respond kar sakti hun

Haa I know nkd aur usaka sequel bhi.dono stories achi thi.
Just want you to write something different.

irrd main samjhi nahi please aap link share kar dijiye aur teen fantasy pe meir kayi stories hai aur sabse popular Nanad ki Training hi hai jo is forum men pdf pe hai . aur MMW abhi re write karana mushkil hoga kyonki main do stories post kar rhai hun , aur maine Mohe Range de ke seequel ke taur pe Banaras ka ras likhana tay kar liya hai aur uske kuch paart share bhi kar chuki hun,

iirrd vaala link ya kuch detail mil jaayen to main aage respond kar sakti hun

Haa I read both nkd and it's sequel both stories are fantastic so as solva sawan as teen fantasy.
I want you to write something different.A different erotica from your usual style.Yoir stories always are ground rooted have Desi flavour village background and relation between nanad bhabhi devar etc etc.i want you to write something unusual different from your style which was evident in story like little red aur phagun story.

 

[anvesharonny]

sindoor ki hakdaar to sirf ek maang hi hai ,... baaki ko to usi se kaam chalana padega jaisa apane kaha hai

Bilkul sahi kaha aapne.to Roz subah kya isi se maang bharni padegi kya??

 

[komaalrani]

Bilkul sahi kaha aapne.to Roz subah kya isi se maang bharni padegi kya??

are nahi,....aapne suna hoga kayi baar NANDON ke liye main ye gaana gaa ke chidhatai hun

" MERE TO EK PIYA NAANDI KE DAS -DAS'

to maang bharene ki jaroort nahi hai use, har baar fresh kunvaari ban ke , abhi to Coaching ke launde fansaane hain use , phir Gita kaegi uska intezaam , mere maayke ke gaaon vaale,.... century laagani hai use,.... aur vo bhi T20 vaali raftaar se tabhi to maja aayegaa ,....


uske bhaiya kaa kaam to tha fita kaatne ka


unke liye Mrs moitra ke dono rsgulle bhi intezaar kar rahe hain aur vo to abhi 10 vin vaale hi hain, unka bhi fita apne saajn se katvaaungi, agvaade pcihvaade dono ka,... saajn ke liye to chun chun ke

 

[komaalrani]

Haa I know nkd aur usaka sequel bhi.dono stories achi thi.
Just want you to write something different.

Haa I read both nkd and it's sequel both stories are fantastic so as solva sawan as teen fantasy.
I want you to write something different.A different erotica from your usual style.Yoir stories always are ground rooted have Desi flavour village background and relation between nanad bhabhi devar etc etc.i want you to write something unusual different from your style which was evident in story like little red aur phagun story.

Thanks so much, but there are a few problems with changing situations.

I too liked little red riding hood which was first posted in a yahoo group HILMS, ( since closed) and another forum, but as in the original story the Girl is young and is a play on a old fable story with hidden erotic overtones. Even the story lez sex was subterranean and subtle. But i can't dream of posting it in this group because of under age issue.

and i cannot visualize red riding hood to be of 18+ years, ... it was a case of 'innocence lost' a girl surprised and discovering some hidden pleasures with a woman much older to her age. It was not a lez dom.

and if you look at the literature, Nobkov Lolita is not 18+, nor is the girl in Ismat Chugtai's famous story Razai or Quilt ( but she was prosecuted, .. but honorably discharged).

Look at the facts of life , birds and bees, in India

National Family Health Survey (NFHS) during 2019-2021 found that women have more sex partners than men in many states and Union territories. The survey was conducted in 707 districts of the country among 1.1 lakh women and one lakh men..

As per sex survey average age for first sex in rural area is 18.6, so one can presume how many would have done it before 18. the same survey states,10% of women in the age group of 25-49 had sex before 15 and 38% before 18. and i am again quoting NFHS 2015-16,

but i support forum rules.

Not only because they are the rules made by this forum but we must respect laws and more importantly nobody and i will repeat no body should support an act which is pedophile in nature, direct or indirect so NO to under age.

but the more important issue is esp. in this forum readers are besotted with INCEST and not the layered one but something which is mechanical.

so i am not share how many readers i can get for a Phagun ke din chaar like story in this group.

I was thinking of writing a story with dystopian milieu, and i sowed the seeds in MOHE RANG DE by quoting directly from 1984, an Orwellian world view with a cyber thriller something like a movie BRAZIL ( 1985 ) i like with more emphasis on big data, AI, face recognition softwares and it has all come very clearly in MOHE RANG de, with Rit making a comeback but soon i lost hope and enthusiasm.


but thanks you so much for remembering those stories . It was a journey down the memory lane.

 

[komaalrani]

wow awesome. waiting for next update

NEXT UPDATE on Wednesday .

 

[komaalrani]

But apki story sabse jyada isliye achhi lagti hai kyun aap hindi lipi me likhti ho. Ham jese pathakon ke liye aap vardaan ho. Hinglish me wo maja nhi jo apni bhasha me hai

may your tribe increase.