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Awesome, Fantastic & Mind-blowing story bro. 
Bahut hi jabardast likh rahe ho bhai ekdum jhakaas, Kaafi samay baad koi behtarin kahani padhne ko mili.. Pahle to title dekhKar laga tha isme sirf hawas/tharak hi bhari hogi but ye to bahut hi Interesting kahani nikli warna aajkal to sabhi log apne story mein sirf Supernatural powers dikhane mein hi lage hain, jaise ye Superpower na hokar bacchon ke khelne wala jhunjhuna ho gaya hai.
Lekin aapki story bahut hi dilchasp lagi because isme erotic thrill with revenge, emotions & drama sabhi ka tadka mix hai..
Well, ab aate hain story or uske characters pe to abhi tak ki story padh ke aisa lag raha hai jaise isme Hero Jay nahi balki Soniya hai.. Kyunki aapne usko har tarah se Jay se behtar dikhaya hai chahe paise ho ya Power etc mein... isliye ab Jay ko thoda mature banao, I mean to say ki Jay ko thoda powerful dikhao jo har Situation ko khudse handle kar sake warna abhi tak jitni bhi problems aayi hai sabhi ko Soniya ne hi face kiya hai, Aise mein Jay ki ek Hero hone wali baat kahan Reh Jaati hai..
Khair ab aate hai villain ki taraf jo Soniya ke Kareeb hone ka dikhava karte hue uske hi dushmano se mil gaya hai, I think ye Rubi ho sakti hai because Soniya ke kareeb sirf teen hi log hain Rubi, Priyanka aur uski Maa isliye nanand aur SAS to aisa kaam karne se rahe isliye filhaal mind mein sirf Rubi ka Hi Naam aata hai.. Then Priyanka ko blackmail karne wala Pankaj ya Anand ho sakta hai.?
Well, ab ye kahani kya naya rahasya ujagar karti hai, ye to aage hi pata chalega.
Anyway wonderful & dilchasp started the story.
Waiting 4 next update.....
Bahut hi jabardast likh rahe ho bhai ekdum jhakaas, Kaafi samay baad koi behtarin kahani padhne ko mili.. Pahle to title dekhKar laga tha isme sirf hawas/tharak hi bhari hogi but ye to bahut hi Interesting kahani nikli warna aajkal to sabhi log apne story mein sirf Supernatural powers dikhane mein hi lage hain, jaise ye Superpower na hokar bacchon ke khelne wala jhunjhuna ho gaya hai.
Lekin aapki story bahut hi dilchasp lagi because isme erotic thrill with revenge, emotions & drama sabhi ka tadka mix hai..Well, ab aate hain story or uske characters pe to abhi tak ki story padh ke aisa lag raha hai jaise isme Hero Jay nahi balki Soniya hai.. Kyunki aapne usko har tarah se Jay se behtar dikhaya hai chahe paise ho ya Power etc mein... isliye ab Jay ko thoda mature banao, I mean to say ki Jay ko thoda powerful dikhao jo har Situation ko khudse handle kar sake warna abhi tak jitni bhi problems aayi hai sabhi ko Soniya ne hi face kiya hai, Aise mein Jay ki ek Hero hone wali baat kahan Reh Jaati hai..
Khair ab aate hai villain ki taraf jo Soniya ke Kareeb hone ka dikhava karte hue uske hi dushmano se mil gaya hai, I think ye Rubi ho sakti hai because Soniya ke kareeb sirf teen hi log hain Rubi, Priyanka aur uski Maa isliye nanand aur SAS to aisa kaam karne se rahe isliye filhaal mind mein sirf Rubi ka Hi Naam aata hai.. Then Priyanka ko blackmail karne wala Pankaj ya Anand ho sakta hai.?
Well, ab ye kahani kya naya rahasya ujagar karti hai, ye to aage hi pata chalega.
Anyway wonderful & dilchasp started the story.
Waiting 4 next update.....
Kya update diya hai aapne.sonia ka kya chal hoga , jay kya karega priyanka ko bachane ke liye.
