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Scene 🖼️ #01

Aaj se theek 2 din pehle.. ye wahi din hai jab Maalti aur Jabbar k beech wo jhadap hui thi

Asal main es din jab Rocky Maalti ko mila tha.. toh wo usse milne k baad sidha Gaon k Jungle ki taraf chal pada tha

Jis wajah se esi subha uske senior 'Yadav' ka wo phone aaya

Rocky es samay Gaon ki ek choti si nehar k pass apni car k Bonet pe baitha hua.. dur kheton main kaam karti aurton aur unki jawani ko taadne ka kaam kar raha tha

Rocky- (Gaon ki hariyali.. aur bhari jawani ko apni nazron main kaid karte hue.. khud se kehta hai) Manna padega, es Gaon main peene k liye bada ras hai.. par pata nahi kab koi hath aayegi

Rocky ek hath ki ungaliyon k beech cigerate sulgaye hue dur aurton k madmast yovan ko dekhte hue apne dil ki baat bol hi pada tha.. ki tabhi uski jaib main pada phone bajna suru ho jata hai

Rocky turant hi cigerate ko dur fekhte hue apna Mobile bahar nikalta hai.. jise 'Yadav Sir' likha hua tha

Rocky- (Phone received karte hue) kahiye sir.. meri yaad kaise aa gayi ?

Dusri taraf Yadav apne office main baitha hu puri sanjidgi k sath
"Kuch pata chala ?"

Rocky ko samjhate dair nahi lagti ki uska senior es samay jada hi serious hai

"Jada kuch toh nahi.. par yaha kuch bada Game hai, pehle Gufran aur ab ye Anokhi"

Rocky apni baat kehte hue ruk jata hai qki tabhi uske pass se ek bala ki khubsurat aurat apni gaud main ek bache ko liye hue gujarne lagti hai

us khubsurat Aurat ki nazren ek pal k liye Rocky se takrati hai aur wo ek pal k liye Rocky aur phir uski car ko dekhte hue apne peeche ek cycle pe saman laade aa rahe ladke ko dekhte hue kehti hai

"Kiya hua.. jaldi jaldi chal na"

Uske peeche aane wala kareeb 24 saal ka hatta katta ladka.. jo puri tarah thak chuka aur aisi thand main bhi puri tarah paseene main bheega hua tha wo lagbhag haafte hue kehta hai
"Aa raha hu Didi.. saali es cycle ko bhi aaj hi kharab hona tha"

Wo bala ki khubsurat aurat apni gaud main thame hue bache ko sambhalte hue phir se Rocky ko dekhti hai aur dhire se kehti hai

"Kiya re.. Gitesh, aaj kal apne Gaon main sehri Babu bhi aane lage hai.. wo bhi paise waale"

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Rocky ye sunkar muskura padta hai.. wahi wo aurat ab aage bad jaati hai, aur jaldi hi uske peeche aane wala jo sayad uska chota bhai tha.. wo bhi aage badte hue nikal jata hai

Rocky- (khud ko wapas akela paake apne Phone ko kaan se laga leta hai) Sir wo...

Dusri taraf se Yadav
"Ha.. mujhe Idea hai, koi aa gaya hoga.. aage batao"

Rocky- Gufran ko jarur kuch aisa pata chala tha jis wajah se use maar diya gaya, par ye Anokhi toh aisa kuch nahi kar rahi thi.. na hi hamare liye kisi prakar ki koi jasusi phir ye..

Dusri taraf se Yadav phone pe apne ek ek sabd pe jor dete hue
"Wo sab mat dohrao jo main janta hu.. tumhe kuch naya pata chal ki nahi ?"

Rocky man hi ek baar apne senior Yadav ko khadush bolta hai aur phir aage kehta hai
"Es Gaon main jo kuch bhi ho raha hai uske taar yaha k ek pariwar se jude hai.. aur"

Yadav- (Apni kurshi pe apni estithi badalte hue) aur kiya.. ?

"Yaha ka jungle.. aisa lagta hai jo kuch bhi hai uski wajah jungle k andar hi hai"

Yadav maano apna faisla sa sunate hue
"Toh intizar kis baat ka kar rahe hai.. pata karo, aur yaad rahe pichli baar tumne jo kaand diya tha usse tumhe bahar nikalne k liye main kiya kiya kara tha

Ab ummid karta hu tum meri ummid pe khare utroge"

Rocky- Mujhe sab yaad hai.. aur wapas mujhpe jo barosha kiya hai wo tutega nahi

Yadav- Maine pehle bhi kaha hai.. tum apna kaam apne hisab se karo, bus mujhe natija chahiye

Rocky- Yes Sir

Eske baad Yadav aur kuch bolne ya Rocky ki taraf se sunne tak ka intzar nahi karta aur phone cut jata hai

Rocky Phone ko jaib main wapas se rakhte hue.. ek lambi si saans leta hai aur dur faile junglon ko dekhte hue
"Hmm.. pata toh karna hi hoga"

Rocky apni car se apna camera nikalta hai aur use apne gale me daal leta hai aur phir car ko ache se lock aur check karne k baad use wahi chor k Gaon k Jungle ki taraf akela hi paidal chal padta hai

Waise toh yaad hi hoga.. par wapas se bata deta hu

Sundarpur Gaon kuch aisa hai jise dekh k aap keh sakte hai ye aaj bhi bahari Duniya se puri tarah kata hua hai

Or eski Sabse Badi wajah hai 'Thakur Balwant Pratap Singh' aur unke Purvaj.. waise kehte hai kabhi esi Pariwar k log yaha k Raja hua karte thay

Yaha aaj bhi Sahukari jaisi rudhiwadi parampara mil jayegi, toh Bank jaisi suvidhayen bhi

Waise dono hi cheezon pe hukum 'Thakur Balwant Pratap Singh' yani 'Thakur ji'.. ka hi chalta hai

Gaon ki abadi achi khasi hai, yani yaha logo ki tanik bhi kami nahi hai.. khaskarke Ladkiyon aur mahilaon ki qki jadatar mard toh kaam ki talash main Gaon se bahar hi chale jate hai

Rocky chalte hue jungle k bilkul pass aa chuka tha.. jaha jungle k andar se Jhingur ki dhimi dhimi par ajeeb si daravani aawaz si aa rahi thi

Aisa sayad itne sannate ki wajah se tha

Rocky- (Aage badne se pehle charo taraf dekhte hue) hmm.. maine us Pahalwan ko kai baar esi taraf se jungle main aate jaate dekha hai, aakhir yaha itne ghane jungle main karne kiya ata hai ?

Asal main Rocky ne Yadav ko puri baat nahi batayi thi.. wajah bhi sidhi thi ki abhi khud use sab pata nahi tha

Rocky jabse Gaon aaya hai tabhi se apni chaan bheen main lag gaya tha, jaha use pata laga ki Thakur ji k sabse kareeb logo mein ya toh uske 2 gunde jaise aadmi hai.. ya Pahalwan

Esliye Rocky ne Pahalwan k bare pata karna suru kiya toh usne paya ki wo aksar chori chupe jungle main ata jata hai.. aur esi karan aaj wo khud yaha khada tha

Waise agar aap sabhi Pahalwan ko bhool gaye hai toh yaad dila du ki Gaon ki 'Anaj mandi' ko sambhalne ka kaam yahi karta hai

Rocky charo taraf dekh k pakka karta hai aur phir jungle k andar pravesh kar hi jata hai

Jungle k bare main agar likhu toh ye Gaon ki उत्तर disha main ek aisa ghana jungle hai jiska koi ant nahi..

ye jungle itna ghana hai ki jungle k beech main Suraj ki roshni tak nahi pahuchti

Esliye koi bhi Jungle k jada andar jane ki galti nahi karta

Waise es Jungle k thoda hi andar kai khubsurat chote chote chupe talab bhi hai.. jaha Gaon k kuch manchale aur Manchali apni bhookh mitane aate hai

Aur konsi bhookh.. ye toh aap samajh hi gaye honge 😉

Par koi bhi jungle k jada andar jana pasand nahi karta.. ya sayad kisi ki bhi jungle k aur andar jane ki himmat hi nahi hoti

Aur eski kuch wajah Gaon main prachalit kai kisse kahaniya hai

Gaon k kai bade budhon ka kehna hai ki aksar yaha Jane wala jaldi laut k nahi aaya


Phir aisi jagah Pahalwan kiya karne ata hoga.. esi baat ne Rocky ko uspe saq karne k liye majbur kar diya tha, aur usi baat ka pata karne aaj wo khud es jungle main pravesh kar chuka tha

Jaldi hi Jungle ko paar karta hua Rocky kaafi aage nikal ayaa tha.. sayad jungle k beecho beech aa chuka tha wo

wo baar baar peeche mud k dekhta bhi ja raha tha ki koi hai toh nahi

Puri satarkta k sath wo aage bad raha tha ki sirf uske pairon k neeche aane waale sukhe patton ki aawaz hi us jungle k sannate ko tod rahi thi ki tabhi achanak se Rocky ki peet pe koi sard cheez aake chuti hai

"Kon hai be"

Rocky ek police wala tha.. esliye aisi cheezon se darna usne nahi seekha tha

Rocky- (Jaldi se apne gale main pade camera ko thamte hue) wo.. main jungle main anokhe pakshiyon ki photo leta hu.. photographer.. hu

Rocky darne ka aisa natak karta hai maano abhi mut padega.. jispe wo aadmi has padta hai

"Chal be.. munh meri taraf kar"

Rocky darte uski taraf dekhta hai.. aur us chehre ko dekh k Rocky man hi man khus ho jata hai

Rocky k man main ek hi baat aati hai
'Kuch toh gadbad hai es jungle main.. warna Thakur ka ye kutta yaha banduk liye kiya kar raha hota'

Rocky jab mudta hai toh dekhta hai ki uski peet pe wo sard cheez ek banduk hi thi jo abhi bhi usi aadmi k hathon main thi

Wo aadmi apne tambaku waale gande munh.. jispe bade bade chaichak k daag thay, aur aise gande munh se haste hue Rocky ko uper se neeche tak dekhta hai aur phir ghusse se uski taraf banduk dikhate hue kehta hai

"Tu toh bada chikna sehri hai.. sach sach bata kiya kar raha hai yaha"

Rocky usi prakar kaanpte hue wapas se apna camera dikhate hue
"Photo.. main.. main photographer hu.. wo main"

Wo aadmi Rocky ko uper se neeche tak dekhta hai aur phir bina kuch kahe aage badkar uske gale se camera kheech leta hai..

Rocky ka man toh karta hai use yahi nipta de par apne ghusse pe kabu rakhta hai

Aadmi- sun pe chikne.. tu sehri lag raha hai esliye chor raha hu, par aaj k baad es Jungle main dikha toh goli seedha Gand pe marunga.. wo bhi ched main banduk ki nali ghusa k samjha..

Rocky jaldi se ha main sar hilata hai maano bahut dar raha ho

Aadmi- chal nikal yaha se..

Rocky bina kuch kahe wapas jungle k bahar ki taraf chal padta hai.. wo kai baar peeche mud k us aadmi ko dekhta hai jo uska camera cheen k has raha tha

Rocky jungle k bahar aakar
"Yani jo kuch hai.. uska pata esi jungle se chalega, par es jungle main aakhir aisa kiya chal raha hai jiske liye Thakur ka khas kutta.. 'Kaaliya' yaha ki rakhwali kar raha hai

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Kaaliya ek 40-42 saal ka gunda hai.. jo pichle 5-7 saalon se Thakur Balwant Pratap Singh yani 'Thakur ji' k liye kaam karta aa raha hai

Puri tarah Harami aur ayyash kism ka mard hai.. par apne kaam main mahir aur berham

Rocky kuch pal k liye kuch sochta hai aur agle hi pal wo muskura padta hai.. aur jaldi hi wo apni car k andar baitha tha jaha seat k neeche hath daal k wo dusra camera nikal k apni bagal waali seat pe rakh leta hai

Rocky- Thakur Balwant Pratap Singh.. hmmm.. eski kundali banani hi padegi, par usse pehle mujhe hamare Khabri Gufran k pariwar se milna hoga.. sayad unse kuch madad mil sake

Rocky Gufran k pariwar k bare main sochta hai toh ek pal k liye uski aankhon k aage Gufran ki khubsurat Begum.. 'Nasreen' ka bhara hua jism aur badi badi latakti Chuchiyon ka drishya uski aankhon k aage naach jata hai

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Rocky- (Apni paint k uper se hi apna lund masalte hue) uffff... kiya bhara maal hai saali... maza aa jayega


Scene 🖼️ #02
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Maalti subha subha hi naha k Pooja path karke pure ghar main sabhi ko bari bari se aarti de rahi thi

Aisa karne k liye aaj usse Harshita ne kaha tha.. aur ek Maa apne bache k liye kuch bhi karne se peeche kaha rehti hai

Aaj ghar kuch jada hi bhara hua tha.. wajah thi aaj se theek 2 dino pehle Jabbar aur Maalti k beech wo ladai

Waise use ladai kehna sahi nahi hoga, qki usme Jabbar ne jo kiya.. Maalti ko pehle uski tanik bhi bhanak nahi thi

Maalti ka sar pe chaut kuch jada nahi aayi thi, par sar pe ek chota sa ghaav hone ki wajah se khoon nikal aya tha

Maalti Bari bari se sabhi aurton ko arti deti hai aur phir Mardo ki taraf bad chalti hai

Maalti ki nanzren Bade Jeth ji 'Mahendra' k pass baitha apne Pati Kundan pe jaati hai

Jaha use dhiyan ata hai ki Kundan ne use pehle ki keh diya tha ki wo ghar pe us Sandook ko leke koi baat na kare.. kisi se bhi nahi

Esliye Maalti jab apne Pati Kudan k sath ghar aayi thi, tabse usne sab kuch bataya.. bus us sandook ko leke koi baat nahi ki

Maalti aarti ki thali liye hue sabse pehle Sonu k pass jaati hai.. jaha Sonu Maalti ko dekhte hi muskurate hue khada ho jata hai aur arti lete hue muskura k kehta hai
"Waaahhh.. Chachi, aapne koi naya sabun lagaya hai kiya ?"

Maalti ko kuch bhi samajh nahi aata esliye wo sawaliya nazron se puchti hai..

'ki uske kehne ka kiya matlab hai ?'

Sonu bhi apni khubsurat Chachi ki baat ko unki nazron k eshare se hi samajh jata hai aur muskurate hue kehta hai
"Wo aapse bahut achi khusboo aa rahi hai na"

Maalti muskurate k use marne ka eshara karti hai aur phir aise hi muskurate hue wahi aangan main baithe hue Sattu ki taraf chal padti hai

Maalti, Sattu k samne aake halka jhuk k khadi hoti hai toh use maano hosh aata hai aur wo Jaldi se apni jagah se uthne lagta hai jaha ek pal k liye uski nazren apne samne Maalti k blouse k andar ki gehrai pe chali hi jati hai par wo apne aap ko behakne se rok leta hai
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Maalti eshare se kuch puchti hai

Sattu- Chachi, Main kuch samjha nahi.. ?

Tabhi wahi aangan se thoda hatkar Harshita aur Sheela k sath baithi Savita bolti hai
"Wo puch rahi hai.. ye Satyam kaha hai ?"

"Are wo.. kuch nahi yahi ghar k peeche gaya hai, peshab karne

Waise Maalti Chachi aaj aise eshare se q sawal kar rahi hai ?"

Sattu wapas apni jagah pe baithte hue apni baat puri karta hai

Jispe es baar uske sawal ka jawan dene ka kaam Harshita karti hai

Harshita- (Muskurate hue) qki mere mayke main ek pandit ji hai, unka kehna hai tha ki Subha ki arti aur Pooja samapt hone tak kuch nahi bolna chahiye.. warna anisht hota hai

Sheela- (Haste hue) Hamari bholi bhali Harshita Bhabhi aur unke andhvishwas

Sheela ki baat pe waha baitha har ek inshan has padta hai.. waise hasti toh Maalti bhi hai par phir bhi wo aaj Harshita ki batai es baat pe chal rahi thi

Wo kehte hai na.. ki Inshan jab nirash hota hai toh wo kisi bhi baat ko sach maan leta hai

Wahi ek kursi pe baitha hua Mahendra apne ghar main aisa khushi ka mahole dekh k mand mand muskurate hue Maalti ko dekhta hai aur kehta hai
"Bahu.. ab tumhare sar ki chaut kaisi hai?"

Maalti kuch bol paati usse pehle hi Veeru haste hue bol padta hai

"Abhi toh Bhabhi aapke sawalon ka jawan bhi na deni waali, bechare aaj Harshita ki baaton main aake fas gayi hai"

Veeru ki baat pe es baar pura ghar khil-khila k has padta hai.. jisse Harshita apne Pati ko dekh k bura sa munh bana leti hai, uska aisa bachon sa ruthna dekh k Veeru bhi khud ko hasne se rok nahi paata

Es baar Mahendra k theek pass baitha hua Tyagi kehta hai
"Bhai.. maine ilaj kiya hai Maalti bahu ka, aise kaise theek nahi hogi.. dekhna 1-2 din main hi uski chaut puri tarah theek ho jayegi"

Tyagi apni baat puri karte hue apni jagah se uthta hai aur sath hi apne pass rakha hua jhola uthata hai

Savita- are Bhai Sahab kaha chal diye, waise bhi itne dino se na jane kaha gayab ho gaye thay ?

Savita apni baat kehte hu.. apne hathon ko halka sa utha ka angdai se leti hai, waise bhi pichle 2 dino se sayad hi koi sahi se soya hoga


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Savita ka aisa kamuk avtar aur uske hathon k yu uthne k karan uski namkeen bagal nazar aane lagti hai.. jise dekh k Tyagi ka man kisi mayur saman naach padta hai

Tyagi toh.. Ek pal k liye Savita ko aise dekhta hai mano apni khuwaish ko dekh raha ho, par wo apne irade apne chehre se jahir nahi hone deta
"Monu k liye ek khas jadi buti lene himalayan gaya hua tha.. "

Tyagi ki baat sunte hi waha baitha har Inshan asha ki kiran ki tarah Tyagi ko dekhne lagta hai

Tyagi ek ek karke sabhi ko dekhta hai aur phir ek lambi si saans lete hue kehta hai
"Apne samast gyan ka estimal karke main es nishkarsh pe pahucha hu ki Monu k swasth karne ka yahi eklauta tarika hai ab"

Tyagi apni baat kehte hue apne jhole se ek ghass jaisi kuch jadi buti nikalta hai

Savita- Ye toh ghass lag rahi hai ?

Tyagi- nahi Savita Bhabhi, ye ek alokik jadi buti hai.. jo sirf himalyan k ek khas stan pe milti hai, aur ese prapt karne k liye hi main itne dino se Gaon se bahar tha

Maalti ki aankhon main aasha ki kiran saman aashu bhar aate hai, par abhi wo kuch bol nahi sakti thi

Tyagi- Main.. Monu k kamre main ja raha hu, agle 10-15 min tak koi bhi us kamre k kareeb nahi aayega.. qki es jadi buti ko jala k jo dhuwa utpan kiya jayega wo Monu ki avastha k hisab se labhkari hoga par dusron k liye hanikarak ho sakta hai

Tyagi apni Baat puri karte hue Maalti ki taraf badta hai aur arti leta hai..

Maalti kuch kehti nahi par uski aankhon main Mamta aur prem se bhare hue aansu dekh k koi bhi bata sakta tha ki es samay use Tyagi uske liye kisi devtuly saman hai

Par abhi es Ghar main sayad ki kisi ko pata hoga ki.. Tyagi asal main kaisa inshan hai aur uske asal irade kiya hai

Tyagi abki baar Sattu ki taraf dekhte hue
"Beta mujhe thodi si aag chahiye aur ek geela kapda"

Sattu turant hi Kundan aur apne Pita Mahendra ki taraf dekhta hai, maano use ijajat maang raha ho

Mahendra- munh kiya dekh raha hai.. Tyagi Chacha jo kehte hai, turant de unhe

Sattu abki jara bhi dairi nahi karta aur Rasoighar k pass Jake aag jalane ka jugad lagane lagta hai.. jismain uski madad k liye Sheela bhi turant uske sath hi rasoighar ki taraf chal padti hai

Tyagi wapas se Maalti aur baki aurto ki taraf dekhte hue
"Aap sabhi prathana kariye ki aaj main safal rahu.. aur..

choro wo sab, baad main bataunga"

Har koi Tyagi se puchna chahta tha ki aisa kiya hai jo wo batate batate ruk gaye, par abhi Ghar ka mahole bahut si sanjida ho chuka tha.. esliye kisi ne bhi abhi ye sawal karna sahi nahi samjha

Jaldi hi Sheela aur Sattu ek lohe k tasle main aag jala k le aate hai

Tyagi- mujhe ek geela kapda bhi chahiye

Es baar ye kaam k liye Harshita aage badti hai.. aur jaldi hi Tyagi ki jarurat ka sara saman uske samne tha

Tyagi- Ye sabhi saman Monu k kamre main rakh do, aur yaad rahe agle 10-15 min tak koi bhi uske kamre k nazdik nahi aana chahiye.. Kudan ye tumhari jimmedari hai

Tyagi ne apni antim baat Kundan ki taraf dekhte hue kahi

Eske baad Jaldi hi Tyagi Monu k kamre k andar tha aur usne andar jaate hi darwaja andar se band kar liya, aur ab sabhi wapas se aangan main baithe hue usi kamre ki taraf dekh rahe thay

Esi beech Maalti ne sabhi ko arti dila di thi.. esliye wo bhi baki sabhi aurton k sath aake baith gayi aur apne hath jod k prathana karne lagi

Ghar main maujad har koi yahi prathana kar raha tha ki aaj koi karishma ho jaye.. siwaye ek k.. yani 'Bhanu'

Qki uski aankhon k aage toh kal shaam jo hua.. uska ek ek drishya kisi chalchitr saman chal raha tha

Jise yaad karte hue uske jabde bheech gaye.. aur muthiya khas gayi thi

Bhanu ghusse se badbada padta hai

"Madarchod.. Tyagi..."



Jaldi milta hu wapas, with Update #13, Scene #03
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Scene 🖼️ #01

Aaj se theek 2 din pehle.. ye wahi din hai jab Maalti aur Jabbar k beech wo jhadap hui thi

Asal main es din jab Rocky Maalti ko mila tha.. toh wo usse milne k baad sidha Gaon k Jungle ki taraf chal pada tha

Jis wajah se esi subha uske senior 'Yadav' ka wo phone aaya

Rocky es samay Gaon ki ek choti si nehar k pass apni car k Bonet pe baitha hua.. dur kheton main kaam karti aurton aur unki jawani ko taadne ka kaam kar raha tha

Rocky- (Gaon ki hariyali.. aur bhari jawani ko apni nazron main kaid karte hue.. khud se kehta hai) Manna padega, es Gaon main peene k liye bada ras hai.. par pata nahi kab koi hath aayegi

Rocky ek hath ki ungaliyon k beech cigerate sulgaye hue dur aurton k madmast yovan ko dekhte hue apne dil ki baat bol hi pada tha.. ki tabhi uski jaib main pada phone bajna suru ho jata hai

Rocky turant hi cigerate ko dur fekhte hue apna Mobile bahar nikalta hai.. jise 'Yadav Sir' likha hua tha

Rocky- (Phone received karte hue) kahiye sir.. meri yaad kaise aa gayi ?

Dusri taraf Yadav apne office main baitha hu puri sanjidgi k sath
"Kuch pata chala ?"

Rocky ko samjhate dair nahi lagti ki uska senior es samay jada hi serious hai

"Jada kuch toh nahi.. par yaha kuch bada Game hai, pehle Gufran aur ab ye Anokhi"

Rocky apni baat kehte hue ruk jata hai qki tabhi uske pass se ek bala ki khubsurat aurat apni gaud main ek bache ko liye hue gujarne lagti hai

us khubsurat Aurat ki nazren ek pal k liye Rocky se takrati hai aur wo ek pal k liye Rocky aur phir uski car ko dekhte hue apne peeche ek cycle pe saman laade aa rahe ladke ko dekhte hue kehti hai

"Kiya hua.. jaldi jaldi chal na"

Uske peeche aane wala kareeb 24 saal ka hatta katta ladka.. jo puri tarah thak chuka aur aisi thand main bhi puri tarah paseene main bheega hua tha wo lagbhag haafte hue kehta hai
"Aa raha hu Didi.. saali es cycle ko bhi aaj hi kharab hona tha"

Wo bala ki khubsurat aurat apni gaud main thame hue bache ko sambhalte hue phir se Rocky ko dekhti hai aur dhire se kehti hai

"Kiya re.. Gitesh, aaj kal apne Gaon main sehri Babu bhi aane lage hai.. wo bhi paise waale"

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Rocky ye sunkar muskura padta hai.. wahi wo aurat ab aage bad jaati hai, aur jaldi hi uske peeche aane wala jo sayad uska chota bhai tha.. wo bhi aage badte hue nikal jata hai

Rocky- (khud ko wapas akela paake apne Phone ko kaan se laga leta hai) Sir wo...

Dusri taraf se Yadav
"Ha.. mujhe Idea hai, koi aa gaya hoga.. aage batao"

Rocky- Gufran ko jarur kuch aisa pata chala tha jis wajah se use maar diya gaya, par ye Anokhi toh aisa kuch nahi kar rahi thi.. na hi hamare liye kisi prakar ki koi jasusi phir ye..

Dusri taraf se Yadav phone pe apne ek ek sabd pe jor dete hue
"Wo sab mat dohrao jo main janta hu.. tumhe kuch naya pata chal ki nahi ?"

Rocky man hi ek baar apne senior Yadav ko khadush bolta hai aur phir aage kehta hai
"Es Gaon main jo kuch bhi ho raha hai uske taar yaha k ek pariwar se jude hai.. aur"

Yadav- (Apni kurshi pe apni estithi badalte hue) aur kiya.. ?

"Yaha ka jungle.. aisa lagta hai jo kuch bhi hai uski wajah jungle k andar hi hai"

Yadav maano apna faisla sa sunate hue
"Toh intizar kis baat ka kar rahe hai.. pata karo, aur yaad rahe pichli baar tumne jo kaand diya tha usse tumhe bahar nikalne k liye main kiya kiya kara tha

Ab ummid karta hu tum meri ummid pe khare utroge"

Rocky- Mujhe sab yaad hai.. aur wapas mujhpe jo barosha kiya hai wo tutega nahi

Yadav- Maine pehle bhi kaha hai.. tum apna kaam apne hisab se karo, bus mujhe natija chahiye

Rocky- Yes Sir

Eske baad Yadav aur kuch bolne ya Rocky ki taraf se sunne tak ka intzar nahi karta aur phone cut jata hai

Rocky Phone ko jaib main wapas se rakhte hue.. ek lambi si saans leta hai aur dur faile junglon ko dekhte hue
"Hmm.. pata toh karna hi hoga"

Rocky apni car se apna camera nikalta hai aur use apne gale me daal leta hai aur phir car ko ache se lock aur check karne k baad use wahi chor k Gaon k Jungle ki taraf akela hi paidal chal padta hai

Waise toh yaad hi hoga.. par wapas se bata deta hu

Sundarpur Gaon kuch aisa hai jise dekh k aap keh sakte hai ye aaj bhi bahari Duniya se puri tarah kata hua hai

Or eski Sabse Badi wajah hai 'Thakur Balwant Pratap Singh' aur unke Purvaj.. waise kehte hai kabhi esi Pariwar k log yaha k Raja hua karte thay

Yaha aaj bhi Sahukari jaisi rudhiwadi parampara mil jayegi, toh Bank jaisi suvidhayen bhi

Waise dono hi cheezon pe hukum 'Thakur Balwant Pratap Singh' yani 'Thakur ji'.. ka hi chalta hai

Gaon ki abadi achi khasi hai, yani yaha logo ki tanik bhi kami nahi hai.. khaskarke Ladkiyon aur mahilaon ki qki jadatar mard toh kaam ki talash main Gaon se bahar hi chale jate hai

Rocky chalte hue jungle k bilkul pass aa chuka tha.. jaha jungle k andar se Jhingur ki dhimi dhimi par ajeeb si daravani aawaz si aa rahi thi

Aisa sayad itne sannate ki wajah se tha

Rocky- (Aage badne se pehle charo taraf dekhte hue) hmm.. maine us Pahalwan ko kai baar esi taraf se jungle main aate jaate dekha hai, aakhir yaha itne ghane jungle main karne kiya ata hai ?

Asal main Rocky ne Yadav ko puri baat nahi batayi thi.. wajah bhi sidhi thi ki abhi khud use sab pata nahi tha

Rocky jabse Gaon aaya hai tabhi se apni chaan bheen main lag gaya tha, jaha use pata laga ki Thakur ji k sabse kareeb logo mein ya toh uske 2 gunde jaise aadmi hai.. ya Pahalwan

Esliye Rocky ne Pahalwan k bare pata karna suru kiya toh usne paya ki wo aksar chori chupe jungle main ata jata hai.. aur esi karan aaj wo khud yaha khada tha

Waise agar aap sabhi Pahalwan ko bhool gaye hai toh yaad dila du ki Gaon ki 'Anaj mandi' ko sambhalne ka kaam yahi karta hai

Rocky charo taraf dekh k pakka karta hai aur phir jungle k andar pravesh kar hi jata hai

Jungle k bare main agar likhu toh ye Gaon ki उत्तर disha main ek aisa ghana jungle hai jiska koi ant nahi..

ye jungle itna ghana hai ki jungle k beech main Suraj ki roshni tak nahi pahuchti

Esliye koi bhi Jungle k jada andar jane ki galti nahi karta

Waise es Jungle k thoda hi andar kai khubsurat chote chote chupe talab bhi hai.. jaha Gaon k kuch manchale aur Manchali apni bhookh mitane aate hai

Aur konsi bhookh.. ye toh aap samajh hi gaye honge 😉

Par koi bhi jungle k jada andar jana pasand nahi karta.. ya sayad kisi ki bhi jungle k aur andar jane ki himmat hi nahi hoti

Aur eski kuch wajah Gaon main prachalit kai kisse kahaniya hai

Gaon k kai bade budhon ka kehna hai ki aksar yaha Jane wala jaldi laut k nahi aaya


Phir aisi jagah Pahalwan kiya karne ata hoga.. esi baat ne Rocky ko uspe saq karne k liye majbur kar diya tha, aur usi baat ka pata karne aaj wo khud es jungle main pravesh kar chuka tha

Jaldi hi Jungle ko paar karta hua Rocky kaafi aage nikal ayaa tha.. sayad jungle k beecho beech aa chuka tha wo

wo baar baar peeche mud k dekhta bhi ja raha tha ki koi hai toh nahi

Puri satarkta k sath wo aage bad raha tha ki sirf uske pairon k neeche aane waale sukhe patton ki aawaz hi us jungle k sannate ko tod rahi thi ki tabhi achanak se Rocky ki peet pe koi sard cheez aake chuti hai

"Kon hai be"

Rocky ek police wala tha.. esliye aisi cheezon se darna usne nahi seekha tha

Rocky- (Jaldi se apne gale main pade camera ko thamte hue) wo.. main jungle main anokhe pakshiyon ki photo leta hu.. photographer.. hu

Rocky darne ka aisa natak karta hai maano abhi mut padega.. jispe wo aadmi has padta hai

"Chal be.. munh meri taraf kar"

Rocky darte uski taraf dekhta hai.. aur us chehre ko dekh k Rocky man hi man khus ho jata hai

Rocky k man main ek hi baat aati hai
'Kuch toh gadbad hai es jungle main.. warna Thakur ka ye kutta yaha banduk liye kiya kar raha hota'

Rocky jab mudta hai toh dekhta hai ki uski peet pe wo sard cheez ek banduk hi thi jo abhi bhi usi aadmi k hathon main thi

Wo aadmi apne tambaku waale gande munh.. jispe bade bade chaichak k daag thay, aur aise gande munh se haste hue Rocky ko uper se neeche tak dekhta hai aur phir ghusse se uski taraf banduk dikhate hue kehta hai

"Tu toh bada chikna sehri hai.. sach sach bata kiya kar raha hai yaha"

Rocky usi prakar kaanpte hue wapas se apna camera dikhate hue
"Photo.. main.. main photographer hu.. wo main"

Wo aadmi Rocky ko uper se neeche tak dekhta hai aur phir bina kuch kahe aage badkar uske gale se camera kheech leta hai..

Rocky ka man toh karta hai use yahi nipta de par apne ghusse pe kabu rakhta hai

Aadmi- sun pe chikne.. tu sehri lag raha hai esliye chor raha hu, par aaj k baad es Jungle main dikha toh goli seedha Gand pe marunga.. wo bhi ched main banduk ki nali ghusa k samjha..

Rocky jaldi se ha main sar hilata hai maano bahut dar raha ho

Aadmi- chal nikal yaha se..

Rocky bina kuch kahe wapas jungle k bahar ki taraf chal padta hai.. wo kai baar peeche mud k us aadmi ko dekhta hai jo uska camera cheen k has raha tha

Rocky jungle k bahar aakar
"Yani jo kuch hai.. uska pata esi jungle se chalega, par es jungle main aakhir aisa kiya chal raha hai jiske liye Thakur ka khas kutta.. 'Kaaliya' yaha ki rakhwali kar raha hai

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Kaaliya ek 40-42 saal ka gunda hai.. jo pichle 5-7 saalon se Thakur Balwant Pratap Singh yani 'Thakur ji' k liye kaam karta aa raha hai

Puri tarah Harami aur ayyash kism ka mard hai.. par apne kaam main mahir aur berham

Rocky kuch pal k liye kuch sochta hai aur agle hi pal wo muskura padta hai.. aur jaldi hi wo apni car k andar baitha tha jaha seat k neeche hath daal k wo dusra camera nikal k apni bagal waali seat pe rakh leta hai

Rocky- Thakur Balwant Pratap Singh.. hmmm.. eski kundali banani hi padegi, par usse pehle mujhe hamare Khabri Gufran k pariwar se milna hoga.. sayad unse kuch madad mil sake

Rocky Gufran k pariwar k bare main sochta hai toh ek pal k liye uski aankhon k aage Gufran ki khubsurat Begum.. 'Nasreen' ka bhara hua jism aur badi badi latakti Chuchiyon ka drishya uski aankhon k aage naach jata hai

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Rocky- (Apni paint k uper se hi apna lund masalte hue) uffff... kiya bhara maal hai saali... maza aa jayega


Scene 🖼️ #02
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Maalti subha subha hi naha k Pooja path karke pure ghar main sabhi ko bari bari se aarti de rahi thi

Aisa karne k liye aaj usse Harshita ne kaha tha.. aur ek Maa apne bache k liye kuch bhi karne se peeche kaha rehti hai

Aaj ghar kuch jada hi bhara hua tha.. wajah thi aaj se theek 2 dino pehle Jabbar aur Maalti k beech wo ladai

Waise use ladai kehna sahi nahi hoga, qki usme Jabbar ne jo kiya.. Maalti ko pehle uski tanik bhi bhanak nahi thi

Maalti ka sar pe chaut kuch jada nahi aayi thi, par sar pe ek chota sa ghaav hone ki wajah se khoon nikal aya tha

Maalti Bari bari se sabhi aurton ko arti deti hai aur phir Mardo ki taraf bad chalti hai

Maalti ki nanzren Bade Jeth ji 'Mahendra' k pass baitha apne Pati Kundan pe jaati hai

Jaha use dhiyan ata hai ki Kundan ne use pehle ki keh diya tha ki wo ghar pe us Sandook ko leke koi baat na kare.. kisi se bhi nahi

Esliye Maalti jab apne Pati Kudan k sath ghar aayi thi, tabse usne sab kuch bataya.. bus us sandook ko leke koi baat nahi ki

Maalti aarti ki thali liye hue sabse pehle Sonu k pass jaati hai.. jaha Sonu Maalti ko dekhte hi muskurate hue khada ho jata hai aur arti lete hue muskura k kehta hai
"Waaahhh.. Chachi, aapne koi naya sabun lagaya hai kiya ?"

Maalti ko kuch bhi samajh nahi aata esliye wo sawaliya nazron se puchti hai..

'ki uske kehne ka kiya matlab hai ?'

Sonu bhi apni khubsurat Chachi ki baat ko unki nazron k eshare se hi samajh jata hai aur muskurate hue kehta hai
"Wo aapse bahut achi khusboo aa rahi hai na"

Maalti muskurate k use marne ka eshara karti hai aur phir aise hi muskurate hue wahi aangan main baithe hue Sattu ki taraf chal padti hai

Maalti, Sattu k samne aake halka jhuk k khadi hoti hai toh use maano hosh aata hai aur wo Jaldi se apni jagah se uthne lagta hai jaha ek pal k liye uski nazren apne samne Maalti k blouse k andar ki gehrai pe chali hi jati hai par wo apne aap ko behakne se rok leta hai
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Maalti eshare se kuch puchti hai

Sattu- Chachi, Main kuch samjha nahi.. ?

Tabhi wahi aangan se thoda hatkar Harshita aur Sheela k sath baithi Savita bolti hai
"Wo puch rahi hai.. ye Satyam kaha hai ?"

"Are wo.. kuch nahi yahi ghar k peeche gaya hai, peshab karne

Waise Maalti Chachi aaj aise eshare se q sawal kar rahi hai ?"

Sattu wapas apni jagah pe baithte hue apni baat puri karta hai

Jispe es baar uske sawal ka jawan dene ka kaam Harshita karti hai

Harshita- (Muskurate hue) qki mere mayke main ek pandit ji hai, unka kehna hai tha ki Subha ki arti aur Pooja samapt hone tak kuch nahi bolna chahiye.. warna anisht hota hai

Sheela- (Haste hue) Hamari bholi bhali Harshita Bhabhi aur unke andhvishwas

Sheela ki baat pe waha baitha har ek inshan has padta hai.. waise hasti toh Maalti bhi hai par phir bhi wo aaj Harshita ki batai es baat pe chal rahi thi

Wo kehte hai na.. ki Inshan jab nirash hota hai toh wo kisi bhi baat ko sach maan leta hai

Wahi ek kursi pe baitha hua Mahendra apne ghar main aisa khushi ka mahole dekh k mand mand muskurate hue Maalti ko dekhta hai aur kehta hai
"Bahu.. ab tumhare sar ki chaut kaisi hai?"

Maalti kuch bol paati usse pehle hi Veeru haste hue bol padta hai

"Abhi toh Bhabhi aapke sawalon ka jawan bhi na deni waali, bechare aaj Harshita ki baaton main aake fas gayi hai"

Veeru ki baat pe es baar pura ghar khil-khila k has padta hai.. jisse Harshita apne Pati ko dekh k bura sa munh bana leti hai, uska aisa bachon sa ruthna dekh k Veeru bhi khud ko hasne se rok nahi paata

Es baar Mahendra k theek pass baitha hua Tyagi kehta hai
"Bhai.. maine ilaj kiya hai Maalti bahu ka, aise kaise theek nahi hogi.. dekhna 1-2 din main hi uski chaut puri tarah theek ho jayegi"

Tyagi apni baat puri karte hue apni jagah se uthta hai aur sath hi apne pass rakha hua jhola uthata hai

Savita- are Bhai Sahab kaha chal diye, waise bhi itne dino se na jane kaha gayab ho gaye thay ?

Savita apni baat kehte hu.. apne hathon ko halka sa utha ka angdai se leti hai, waise bhi pichle 2 dino se sayad hi koi sahi se soya hoga


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Savita ka aisa kamuk avtar aur uske hathon k yu uthne k karan uski namkeen bagal nazar aane lagti hai.. jise dekh k Tyagi ka man kisi mayur saman naach padta hai

Tyagi toh.. Ek pal k liye Savita ko aise dekhta hai mano apni khuwaish ko dekh raha ho, par wo apne irade apne chehre se jahir nahi hone deta
"Monu k liye ek khas jadi buti lene himalayan gaya hua tha.. "

Tyagi ki baat sunte hi waha baitha har Inshan asha ki kiran ki tarah Tyagi ko dekhne lagta hai

Tyagi ek ek karke sabhi ko dekhta hai aur phir ek lambi si saans lete hue kehta hai
"Apne samast gyan ka estimal karke main es nishkarsh pe pahucha hu ki Monu k swasth karne ka yahi eklauta tarika hai ab"

Tyagi apni baat kehte hue apne jhole se ek ghass jaisi kuch jadi buti nikalta hai

Savita- Ye toh ghass lag rahi hai ?

Tyagi- nahi Savita Bhabhi, ye ek alokik jadi buti hai.. jo sirf himalyan k ek khas stan pe milti hai, aur ese prapt karne k liye hi main itne dino se Gaon se bahar tha

Maalti ki aankhon main aasha ki kiran saman aashu bhar aate hai, par abhi wo kuch bol nahi sakti thi

Tyagi- Main.. Monu k kamre main ja raha hu, agle 10-15 min tak koi bhi us kamre k kareeb nahi aayega.. qki es jadi buti ko jala k jo dhuwa utpan kiya jayega wo Monu ki avastha k hisab se labhkari hoga par dusron k liye hanikarak ho sakta hai

Tyagi apni Baat puri karte hue Maalti ki taraf badta hai aur arti leta hai..

Maalti kuch kehti nahi par uski aankhon main Mamta aur prem se bhare hue aansu dekh k koi bhi bata sakta tha ki es samay use Tyagi uske liye kisi devtuly saman hai

Par abhi es Ghar main sayad ki kisi ko pata hoga ki.. Tyagi asal main kaisa inshan hai aur uske asal irade kiya hai

Tyagi abki baar Sattu ki taraf dekhte hue
"Beta mujhe thodi si aag chahiye aur ek geela kapda"

Sattu turant hi Kundan aur apne Pita Mahendra ki taraf dekhta hai, maano use ijajat maang raha ho

Mahendra- munh kiya dekh raha hai.. Tyagi Chacha jo kehte hai, turant de unhe

Sattu abki jara bhi dairi nahi karta aur Rasoighar k pass Jake aag jalane ka jugad lagane lagta hai.. jismain uski madad k liye Sheela bhi turant uske sath hi rasoighar ki taraf chal padti hai

Tyagi wapas se Maalti aur baki aurto ki taraf dekhte hue
"Aap sabhi prathana kariye ki aaj main safal rahu.. aur..

choro wo sab, baad main bataunga"

Har koi Tyagi se puchna chahta tha ki aisa kiya hai jo wo batate batate ruk gaye, par abhi Ghar ka mahole bahut si sanjida ho chuka tha.. esliye kisi ne bhi abhi ye sawal karna sahi nahi samjha

Jaldi hi Sheela aur Sattu ek lohe k tasle main aag jala k le aate hai

Tyagi- mujhe ek geela kapda bhi chahiye

Es baar ye kaam k liye Harshita aage badti hai.. aur jaldi hi Tyagi ki jarurat ka sara saman uske samne tha

Tyagi- Ye sabhi saman Monu k kamre main rakh do, aur yaad rahe agle 10-15 min tak koi bhi uske kamre k nazdik nahi aana chahiye.. Kudan ye tumhari jimmedari hai

Tyagi ne apni antim baat Kundan ki taraf dekhte hue kahi

Eske baad Jaldi hi Tyagi Monu k kamre k andar tha aur usne andar jaate hi darwaja andar se band kar liya, aur ab sabhi wapas se aangan main baithe hue usi kamre ki taraf dekh rahe thay

Esi beech Maalti ne sabhi ko arti dila di thi.. esliye wo bhi baki sabhi aurton k sath aake baith gayi aur apne hath jod k prathana karne lagi

Ghar main maujad har koi yahi prathana kar raha tha ki aaj koi karishma ho jaye.. siwaye ek k.. yani 'Bhanu'

Qki uski aankhon k aage toh kal shaam jo hua.. uska ek ek drishya kisi chalchitr saman chal raha tha

Jise yaad karte hue uske jabde bheech gaye.. aur muthiya khas gayi thi

Bhanu ghusse se badbada padta hai

"Madarchod.. Tyagi..."



Jaldi milta hu wapas, with Update #13, Scene #03
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Scene 🖼️ #01

Aaj se theek 2 din pehle.. ye wahi din hai jab Maalti aur Jabbar k beech wo jhadap hui thi

Asal main es din jab Rocky Maalti ko mila tha.. toh wo usse milne k baad sidha Gaon k Jungle ki taraf chal pada tha

Jis wajah se esi subha uske senior 'Yadav' ka wo phone aaya

Rocky es samay Gaon ki ek choti si nehar k pass apni car k Bonet pe baitha hua.. dur kheton main kaam karti aurton aur unki jawani ko taadne ka kaam kar raha tha

Rocky- (Gaon ki hariyali.. aur bhari jawani ko apni nazron main kaid karte hue.. khud se kehta hai) Manna padega, es Gaon main peene k liye bada ras hai.. par pata nahi kab koi hath aayegi

Rocky ek hath ki ungaliyon k beech cigerate sulgaye hue dur aurton k madmast yovan ko dekhte hue apne dil ki baat bol hi pada tha.. ki tabhi uski jaib main pada phone bajna suru ho jata hai

Rocky turant hi cigerate ko dur fekhte hue apna Mobile bahar nikalta hai.. jise 'Yadav Sir' likha hua tha

Rocky- (Phone received karte hue) kahiye sir.. meri yaad kaise aa gayi ?

Dusri taraf Yadav apne office main baitha hu puri sanjidgi k sath
"Kuch pata chala ?"

Rocky ko samjhate dair nahi lagti ki uska senior es samay jada hi serious hai

"Jada kuch toh nahi.. par yaha kuch bada Game hai, pehle Gufran aur ab ye Anokhi"

Rocky apni baat kehte hue ruk jata hai qki tabhi uske pass se ek bala ki khubsurat aurat apni gaud main ek bache ko liye hue gujarne lagti hai

us khubsurat Aurat ki nazren ek pal k liye Rocky se takrati hai aur wo ek pal k liye Rocky aur phir uski car ko dekhte hue apne peeche ek cycle pe saman laade aa rahe ladke ko dekhte hue kehti hai

"Kiya hua.. jaldi jaldi chal na"

Uske peeche aane wala kareeb 24 saal ka hatta katta ladka.. jo puri tarah thak chuka aur aisi thand main bhi puri tarah paseene main bheega hua tha wo lagbhag haafte hue kehta hai
"Aa raha hu Didi.. saali es cycle ko bhi aaj hi kharab hona tha"

Wo bala ki khubsurat aurat apni gaud main thame hue bache ko sambhalte hue phir se Rocky ko dekhti hai aur dhire se kehti hai

"Kiya re.. Gitesh, aaj kal apne Gaon main sehri Babu bhi aane lage hai.. wo bhi paise waale"

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Rocky ye sunkar muskura padta hai.. wahi wo aurat ab aage bad jaati hai, aur jaldi hi uske peeche aane wala jo sayad uska chota bhai tha.. wo bhi aage badte hue nikal jata hai

Rocky- (khud ko wapas akela paake apne Phone ko kaan se laga leta hai) Sir wo...

Dusri taraf se Yadav
"Ha.. mujhe Idea hai, koi aa gaya hoga.. aage batao"

Rocky- Gufran ko jarur kuch aisa pata chala tha jis wajah se use maar diya gaya, par ye Anokhi toh aisa kuch nahi kar rahi thi.. na hi hamare liye kisi prakar ki koi jasusi phir ye..

Dusri taraf se Yadav phone pe apne ek ek sabd pe jor dete hue
"Wo sab mat dohrao jo main janta hu.. tumhe kuch naya pata chal ki nahi ?"

Rocky man hi ek baar apne senior Yadav ko khadush bolta hai aur phir aage kehta hai
"Es Gaon main jo kuch bhi ho raha hai uske taar yaha k ek pariwar se jude hai.. aur"

Yadav- (Apni kurshi pe apni estithi badalte hue) aur kiya.. ?

"Yaha ka jungle.. aisa lagta hai jo kuch bhi hai uski wajah jungle k andar hi hai"

Yadav maano apna faisla sa sunate hue
"Toh intizar kis baat ka kar rahe hai.. pata karo, aur yaad rahe pichli baar tumne jo kaand diya tha usse tumhe bahar nikalne k liye main kiya kiya kara tha

Ab ummid karta hu tum meri ummid pe khare utroge"

Rocky- Mujhe sab yaad hai.. aur wapas mujhpe jo barosha kiya hai wo tutega nahi

Yadav- Maine pehle bhi kaha hai.. tum apna kaam apne hisab se karo, bus mujhe natija chahiye

Rocky- Yes Sir

Eske baad Yadav aur kuch bolne ya Rocky ki taraf se sunne tak ka intzar nahi karta aur phone cut jata hai

Rocky Phone ko jaib main wapas se rakhte hue.. ek lambi si saans leta hai aur dur faile junglon ko dekhte hue
"Hmm.. pata toh karna hi hoga"

Rocky apni car se apna camera nikalta hai aur use apne gale me daal leta hai aur phir car ko ache se lock aur check karne k baad use wahi chor k Gaon k Jungle ki taraf akela hi paidal chal padta hai

Waise toh yaad hi hoga.. par wapas se bata deta hu

Sundarpur Gaon kuch aisa hai jise dekh k aap keh sakte hai ye aaj bhi bahari Duniya se puri tarah kata hua hai

Or eski Sabse Badi wajah hai 'Thakur Balwant Pratap Singh' aur unke Purvaj.. waise kehte hai kabhi esi Pariwar k log yaha k Raja hua karte thay

Yaha aaj bhi Sahukari jaisi rudhiwadi parampara mil jayegi, toh Bank jaisi suvidhayen bhi

Waise dono hi cheezon pe hukum 'Thakur Balwant Pratap Singh' yani 'Thakur ji'.. ka hi chalta hai

Gaon ki abadi achi khasi hai, yani yaha logo ki tanik bhi kami nahi hai.. khaskarke Ladkiyon aur mahilaon ki qki jadatar mard toh kaam ki talash main Gaon se bahar hi chale jate hai

Rocky chalte hue jungle k bilkul pass aa chuka tha.. jaha jungle k andar se Jhingur ki dhimi dhimi par ajeeb si daravani aawaz si aa rahi thi

Aisa sayad itne sannate ki wajah se tha

Rocky- (Aage badne se pehle charo taraf dekhte hue) hmm.. maine us Pahalwan ko kai baar esi taraf se jungle main aate jaate dekha hai, aakhir yaha itne ghane jungle main karne kiya ata hai ?

Asal main Rocky ne Yadav ko puri baat nahi batayi thi.. wajah bhi sidhi thi ki abhi khud use sab pata nahi tha

Rocky jabse Gaon aaya hai tabhi se apni chaan bheen main lag gaya tha, jaha use pata laga ki Thakur ji k sabse kareeb logo mein ya toh uske 2 gunde jaise aadmi hai.. ya Pahalwan

Esliye Rocky ne Pahalwan k bare pata karna suru kiya toh usne paya ki wo aksar chori chupe jungle main ata jata hai.. aur esi karan aaj wo khud yaha khada tha

Waise agar aap sabhi Pahalwan ko bhool gaye hai toh yaad dila du ki Gaon ki 'Anaj mandi' ko sambhalne ka kaam yahi karta hai

Rocky charo taraf dekh k pakka karta hai aur phir jungle k andar pravesh kar hi jata hai

Jungle k bare main agar likhu toh ye Gaon ki उत्तर disha main ek aisa ghana jungle hai jiska koi ant nahi..

ye jungle itna ghana hai ki jungle k beech main Suraj ki roshni tak nahi pahuchti

Esliye koi bhi Jungle k jada andar jane ki galti nahi karta

Waise es Jungle k thoda hi andar kai khubsurat chote chote chupe talab bhi hai.. jaha Gaon k kuch manchale aur Manchali apni bhookh mitane aate hai

Aur konsi bhookh.. ye toh aap samajh hi gaye honge 😉

Par koi bhi jungle k jada andar jana pasand nahi karta.. ya sayad kisi ki bhi jungle k aur andar jane ki himmat hi nahi hoti

Aur eski kuch wajah Gaon main prachalit kai kisse kahaniya hai

Gaon k kai bade budhon ka kehna hai ki aksar yaha Jane wala jaldi laut k nahi aaya


Phir aisi jagah Pahalwan kiya karne ata hoga.. esi baat ne Rocky ko uspe saq karne k liye majbur kar diya tha, aur usi baat ka pata karne aaj wo khud es jungle main pravesh kar chuka tha

Jaldi hi Jungle ko paar karta hua Rocky kaafi aage nikal ayaa tha.. sayad jungle k beecho beech aa chuka tha wo

wo baar baar peeche mud k dekhta bhi ja raha tha ki koi hai toh nahi

Puri satarkta k sath wo aage bad raha tha ki sirf uske pairon k neeche aane waale sukhe patton ki aawaz hi us jungle k sannate ko tod rahi thi ki tabhi achanak se Rocky ki peet pe koi sard cheez aake chuti hai

"Kon hai be"

Rocky ek police wala tha.. esliye aisi cheezon se darna usne nahi seekha tha

Rocky- (Jaldi se apne gale main pade camera ko thamte hue) wo.. main jungle main anokhe pakshiyon ki photo leta hu.. photographer.. hu

Rocky darne ka aisa natak karta hai maano abhi mut padega.. jispe wo aadmi has padta hai

"Chal be.. munh meri taraf kar"

Rocky darte uski taraf dekhta hai.. aur us chehre ko dekh k Rocky man hi man khus ho jata hai

Rocky k man main ek hi baat aati hai
'Kuch toh gadbad hai es jungle main.. warna Thakur ka ye kutta yaha banduk liye kiya kar raha hota'

Rocky jab mudta hai toh dekhta hai ki uski peet pe wo sard cheez ek banduk hi thi jo abhi bhi usi aadmi k hathon main thi

Wo aadmi apne tambaku waale gande munh.. jispe bade bade chaichak k daag thay, aur aise gande munh se haste hue Rocky ko uper se neeche tak dekhta hai aur phir ghusse se uski taraf banduk dikhate hue kehta hai

"Tu toh bada chikna sehri hai.. sach sach bata kiya kar raha hai yaha"

Rocky usi prakar kaanpte hue wapas se apna camera dikhate hue
"Photo.. main.. main photographer hu.. wo main"

Wo aadmi Rocky ko uper se neeche tak dekhta hai aur phir bina kuch kahe aage badkar uske gale se camera kheech leta hai..

Rocky ka man toh karta hai use yahi nipta de par apne ghusse pe kabu rakhta hai

Aadmi- sun pe chikne.. tu sehri lag raha hai esliye chor raha hu, par aaj k baad es Jungle main dikha toh goli seedha Gand pe marunga.. wo bhi ched main banduk ki nali ghusa k samjha..

Rocky jaldi se ha main sar hilata hai maano bahut dar raha ho

Aadmi- chal nikal yaha se..

Rocky bina kuch kahe wapas jungle k bahar ki taraf chal padta hai.. wo kai baar peeche mud k us aadmi ko dekhta hai jo uska camera cheen k has raha tha

Rocky jungle k bahar aakar
"Yani jo kuch hai.. uska pata esi jungle se chalega, par es jungle main aakhir aisa kiya chal raha hai jiske liye Thakur ka khas kutta.. 'Kaaliya' yaha ki rakhwali kar raha hai

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Kaaliya ek 40-42 saal ka gunda hai.. jo pichle 5-7 saalon se Thakur Balwant Pratap Singh yani 'Thakur ji' k liye kaam karta aa raha hai

Puri tarah Harami aur ayyash kism ka mard hai.. par apne kaam main mahir aur berham

Rocky kuch pal k liye kuch sochta hai aur agle hi pal wo muskura padta hai.. aur jaldi hi wo apni car k andar baitha tha jaha seat k neeche hath daal k wo dusra camera nikal k apni bagal waali seat pe rakh leta hai

Rocky- Thakur Balwant Pratap Singh.. hmmm.. eski kundali banani hi padegi, par usse pehle mujhe hamare Khabri Gufran k pariwar se milna hoga.. sayad unse kuch madad mil sake

Rocky Gufran k pariwar k bare main sochta hai toh ek pal k liye uski aankhon k aage Gufran ki khubsurat Begum.. 'Nasreen' ka bhara hua jism aur badi badi latakti Chuchiyon ka drishya uski aankhon k aage naach jata hai

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Rocky- (Apni paint k uper se hi apna lund masalte hue) uffff... kiya bhara maal hai saali... maza aa jayega


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Maalti subha subha hi naha k Pooja path karke pure ghar main sabhi ko bari bari se aarti de rahi thi

Aisa karne k liye aaj usse Harshita ne kaha tha.. aur ek Maa apne bache k liye kuch bhi karne se peeche kaha rehti hai

Aaj ghar kuch jada hi bhara hua tha.. wajah thi aaj se theek 2 dino pehle Jabbar aur Maalti k beech wo ladai

Waise use ladai kehna sahi nahi hoga, qki usme Jabbar ne jo kiya.. Maalti ko pehle uski tanik bhi bhanak nahi thi

Maalti ka sar pe chaut kuch jada nahi aayi thi, par sar pe ek chota sa ghaav hone ki wajah se khoon nikal aya tha

Maalti Bari bari se sabhi aurton ko arti deti hai aur phir Mardo ki taraf bad chalti hai

Maalti ki nanzren Bade Jeth ji 'Mahendra' k pass baitha apne Pati Kundan pe jaati hai

Jaha use dhiyan ata hai ki Kundan ne use pehle ki keh diya tha ki wo ghar pe us Sandook ko leke koi baat na kare.. kisi se bhi nahi

Esliye Maalti jab apne Pati Kudan k sath ghar aayi thi, tabse usne sab kuch bataya.. bus us sandook ko leke koi baat nahi ki

Maalti aarti ki thali liye hue sabse pehle Sonu k pass jaati hai.. jaha Sonu Maalti ko dekhte hi muskurate hue khada ho jata hai aur arti lete hue muskura k kehta hai
"Waaahhh.. Chachi, aapne koi naya sabun lagaya hai kiya ?"

Maalti ko kuch bhi samajh nahi aata esliye wo sawaliya nazron se puchti hai..

'ki uske kehne ka kiya matlab hai ?'

Sonu bhi apni khubsurat Chachi ki baat ko unki nazron k eshare se hi samajh jata hai aur muskurate hue kehta hai
"Wo aapse bahut achi khusboo aa rahi hai na"

Maalti muskurate k use marne ka eshara karti hai aur phir aise hi muskurate hue wahi aangan main baithe hue Sattu ki taraf chal padti hai

Maalti, Sattu k samne aake halka jhuk k khadi hoti hai toh use maano hosh aata hai aur wo Jaldi se apni jagah se uthne lagta hai jaha ek pal k liye uski nazren apne samne Maalti k blouse k andar ki gehrai pe chali hi jati hai par wo apne aap ko behakne se rok leta hai
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Maalti eshare se kuch puchti hai

Sattu- Chachi, Main kuch samjha nahi.. ?

Tabhi wahi aangan se thoda hatkar Harshita aur Sheela k sath baithi Savita bolti hai
"Wo puch rahi hai.. ye Satyam kaha hai ?"

"Are wo.. kuch nahi yahi ghar k peeche gaya hai, peshab karne

Waise Maalti Chachi aaj aise eshare se q sawal kar rahi hai ?"

Sattu wapas apni jagah pe baithte hue apni baat puri karta hai

Jispe es baar uske sawal ka jawan dene ka kaam Harshita karti hai

Harshita- (Muskurate hue) qki mere mayke main ek pandit ji hai, unka kehna hai tha ki Subha ki arti aur Pooja samapt hone tak kuch nahi bolna chahiye.. warna anisht hota hai

Sheela- (Haste hue) Hamari bholi bhali Harshita Bhabhi aur unke andhvishwas

Sheela ki baat pe waha baitha har ek inshan has padta hai.. waise hasti toh Maalti bhi hai par phir bhi wo aaj Harshita ki batai es baat pe chal rahi thi

Wo kehte hai na.. ki Inshan jab nirash hota hai toh wo kisi bhi baat ko sach maan leta hai

Wahi ek kursi pe baitha hua Mahendra apne ghar main aisa khushi ka mahole dekh k mand mand muskurate hue Maalti ko dekhta hai aur kehta hai
"Bahu.. ab tumhare sar ki chaut kaisi hai?"

Maalti kuch bol paati usse pehle hi Veeru haste hue bol padta hai

"Abhi toh Bhabhi aapke sawalon ka jawan bhi na deni waali, bechare aaj Harshita ki baaton main aake fas gayi hai"

Veeru ki baat pe es baar pura ghar khil-khila k has padta hai.. jisse Harshita apne Pati ko dekh k bura sa munh bana leti hai, uska aisa bachon sa ruthna dekh k Veeru bhi khud ko hasne se rok nahi paata

Es baar Mahendra k theek pass baitha hua Tyagi kehta hai
"Bhai.. maine ilaj kiya hai Maalti bahu ka, aise kaise theek nahi hogi.. dekhna 1-2 din main hi uski chaut puri tarah theek ho jayegi"

Tyagi apni baat puri karte hue apni jagah se uthta hai aur sath hi apne pass rakha hua jhola uthata hai

Savita- are Bhai Sahab kaha chal diye, waise bhi itne dino se na jane kaha gayab ho gaye thay ?

Savita apni baat kehte hu.. apne hathon ko halka sa utha ka angdai se leti hai, waise bhi pichle 2 dino se sayad hi koi sahi se soya hoga


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Savita ka aisa kamuk avtar aur uske hathon k yu uthne k karan uski namkeen bagal nazar aane lagti hai.. jise dekh k Tyagi ka man kisi mayur saman naach padta hai

Tyagi toh.. Ek pal k liye Savita ko aise dekhta hai mano apni khuwaish ko dekh raha ho, par wo apne irade apne chehre se jahir nahi hone deta
"Monu k liye ek khas jadi buti lene himalayan gaya hua tha.. "

Tyagi ki baat sunte hi waha baitha har Inshan asha ki kiran ki tarah Tyagi ko dekhne lagta hai

Tyagi ek ek karke sabhi ko dekhta hai aur phir ek lambi si saans lete hue kehta hai
"Apne samast gyan ka estimal karke main es nishkarsh pe pahucha hu ki Monu k swasth karne ka yahi eklauta tarika hai ab"

Tyagi apni baat kehte hue apne jhole se ek ghass jaisi kuch jadi buti nikalta hai

Savita- Ye toh ghass lag rahi hai ?

Tyagi- nahi Savita Bhabhi, ye ek alokik jadi buti hai.. jo sirf himalyan k ek khas stan pe milti hai, aur ese prapt karne k liye hi main itne dino se Gaon se bahar tha

Maalti ki aankhon main aasha ki kiran saman aashu bhar aate hai, par abhi wo kuch bol nahi sakti thi

Tyagi- Main.. Monu k kamre main ja raha hu, agle 10-15 min tak koi bhi us kamre k kareeb nahi aayega.. qki es jadi buti ko jala k jo dhuwa utpan kiya jayega wo Monu ki avastha k hisab se labhkari hoga par dusron k liye hanikarak ho sakta hai

Tyagi apni Baat puri karte hue Maalti ki taraf badta hai aur arti leta hai..

Maalti kuch kehti nahi par uski aankhon main Mamta aur prem se bhare hue aansu dekh k koi bhi bata sakta tha ki es samay use Tyagi uske liye kisi devtuly saman hai

Par abhi es Ghar main sayad ki kisi ko pata hoga ki.. Tyagi asal main kaisa inshan hai aur uske asal irade kiya hai

Tyagi abki baar Sattu ki taraf dekhte hue
"Beta mujhe thodi si aag chahiye aur ek geela kapda"

Sattu turant hi Kundan aur apne Pita Mahendra ki taraf dekhta hai, maano use ijajat maang raha ho

Mahendra- munh kiya dekh raha hai.. Tyagi Chacha jo kehte hai, turant de unhe

Sattu abki jara bhi dairi nahi karta aur Rasoighar k pass Jake aag jalane ka jugad lagane lagta hai.. jismain uski madad k liye Sheela bhi turant uske sath hi rasoighar ki taraf chal padti hai

Tyagi wapas se Maalti aur baki aurto ki taraf dekhte hue
"Aap sabhi prathana kariye ki aaj main safal rahu.. aur..

choro wo sab, baad main bataunga"

Har koi Tyagi se puchna chahta tha ki aisa kiya hai jo wo batate batate ruk gaye, par abhi Ghar ka mahole bahut si sanjida ho chuka tha.. esliye kisi ne bhi abhi ye sawal karna sahi nahi samjha

Jaldi hi Sheela aur Sattu ek lohe k tasle main aag jala k le aate hai

Tyagi- mujhe ek geela kapda bhi chahiye

Es baar ye kaam k liye Harshita aage badti hai.. aur jaldi hi Tyagi ki jarurat ka sara saman uske samne tha

Tyagi- Ye sabhi saman Monu k kamre main rakh do, aur yaad rahe agle 10-15 min tak koi bhi uske kamre k nazdik nahi aana chahiye.. Kudan ye tumhari jimmedari hai

Tyagi ne apni antim baat Kundan ki taraf dekhte hue kahi

Eske baad Jaldi hi Tyagi Monu k kamre k andar tha aur usne andar jaate hi darwaja andar se band kar liya, aur ab sabhi wapas se aangan main baithe hue usi kamre ki taraf dekh rahe thay

Esi beech Maalti ne sabhi ko arti dila di thi.. esliye wo bhi baki sabhi aurton k sath aake baith gayi aur apne hath jod k prathana karne lagi

Ghar main maujad har koi yahi prathana kar raha tha ki aaj koi karishma ho jaye.. siwaye ek k.. yani 'Bhanu'

Qki uski aankhon k aage toh kal shaam jo hua.. uska ek ek drishya kisi chalchitr saman chal raha tha

Jise yaad karte hue uske jabde bheech gaye.. aur muthiya khas gayi thi

Bhanu ghusse se badbada padta hai

"Madarchod.. Tyagi..."



Jaldi milta hu wapas, with Update #13, Scene #03
Bht badiya monu bhai kya jabardast update Diya h aap ne.
Dekhte ab aage kya krta h tyagi monu k sath or ye banu ke sath kya hua tha ye to aage story me hi pta chalega.
Or rocky dekhte h kya krta h nasreen k sath kyu ki uski bhari chuchiyo ke liye bht lalait lag rha h.

Monu bhai Sunday ko bhi ek update de doge to bht acha rahega....
 

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