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saare ke saare updates mast diye hai ab suspense se bhi dhere dhere parda hat raha hai aur pata chal raha hai kyu Tyagi, bhanu aur baaki logon ki monu ke pariwar se dushmani hai ek taraf maalti aur satyam ka khel chal raha hai toh dusri taraf kundan aur premlata ka , udhar sheela apne me hi mast hai kundan ke liye uski tadap dekhne layak hai savita toh badi chudakkad aurat hai aur uska pati mahendra dekhne me seedha sa lagta hai lekin saala kuch toh iske dimaag me khichdi pak rahi hai aur veeru toh alag hi type ka banda nikla saala khud ki patni ko dusre ki bistar par dekhne ke sapne dekh raha hai aur harshita bhale hi kitni bhi sanskaari ho lekin woh bhi mast apne pati ka saath deti hai jab uska pati kisi dusre mard ka naam lekar usko chhedta hai aur maalti ke mayke ki toh baat hi nirali hai udhar premlata aur kundan ka chakkar pata nahi kabse chal raha hai halanki abhi tak maalti mayka utna detail me nahi dikhaya udhar manohar das bhi ulti khopdi ka maaloom padta hai lagta hai aur ye Jawan laude toh alag hi hawasi hain sattu sonu satyam monu isme bhi sabse jyada satyam harami lagta hai
 

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Update #13

Scene 🖼️ #05

Monu ko leke pehle se hi vyakul Bhanu muskil se Heera Panna k liye koi jugad kar paya tha.. aur uski es pareshani main ghee dalne ka kaam karti hai us taali ki karkas aawaz

Bhanu ghusse se us aadmi ko kuch kehne k liye jaise hi peeche ki taraf mudta hai uske sabd bahar hi nahi aa paate qki uske samne taali bajane wala aur koi nahi apitu 'Tyagi' tha

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Bhanu man hi man sochane pe majbur ho jata hai
'kahi esne kuch jada toh nahi sun liya'

Ye sochte hi Bhanu k jism main ek sard lehar si daud jaati hai.. ki kahi uske saalon ki mehnat pe paani toh nahi phir jayega

Thand toh waise bhi thi par aisa lagta hai jaise mausam aur jada sard hota chala ja raha ho

Thandi hawa patton ko hila rahi ho, maano kisi tez tufan se pehle ki shanti ho

Tyagi- (Maano jaiss kataksh si karta hai) Kaisa chal raha hai tumhara sadhyantra ?

Bhanu ko aisa laga jaise uske saalon ki mehnat pe sach main paani firne wala ho.. par wo itni asani se tut jaye, aisa inshan kaha

Par Tyagi aage bolta hai
"Anokhi.. phir Monu, aur sayad... Khalid ka baap bhi Gufran bhi.. 3 jaan, waah manna padega tumhe?"

Bhanu k kaano main padne waale ye sabd aise thay maano kisi ne uske kaan main jalta hua koyala bhar diya ho

Bhanu kuch bolna chahta hai par wo ruk jata hai aur ass pass dekhne lagta hai maano pakka kar raha ho waha un dono k alawa aur koi toh nahi.. aur jab use puri tarah yakin ho jata hai waha bus wahi dono hai toh wo apni nazron ko ghuma k khet ki maid k pass behne waali naali k pass rakhi hui apni kudal ki taraf dekhta hai aur maano kisi nishkarsh pe pahuchne ki koshish kar raha ho

Tyagi ne bhi Bhanu ki nazron ko bhaap liya tha esliye wo bhi muskura padta hai.. waise kahi na kahi use bhi ek pal k liye dar toh laga tha, qki wo ache se jaan chuka tha ki Bhanu kis prakar ka aadmi hai

Tyagi- (Muskurate hue) Kiya hua.. us kudal se mujhe marna chahte ho.. hmmm.. sayad waise hi jaise Anokhi, Monu.. aur Gufran ko mara hoga.. ek min sayad ye kaam tumne nahi...

Tyagi dar toh raha tha qki wo bhalibhanti janta tha ki wo Bhanu se saririk taqat main jeet nahi sakta, par dimag ka istemal karna wo bhi ache se janta tha
"Ye sab toh tumne apne aadmi Jabbar se karwaya hoga na.. hmm tabhi usne Maalti ko bhi marne ki koshish ki"

Bhanu- (Ek antim baar koshish karte hue) Ye sab kiya bakwas kar rahe hai.. aapko pata hai na main us ghar ka damad hu

Tyagi muskurate hue wahi emli k paid k neeche padi charpai ki taraf badta hai aur muskurate hue uspe baith jata hai aur haskar apni baat aage kehta hai
"Yakin maano.. mujhe jada mehnat nahi lagegi ye sab sabit karne main, aur agar kisi ko meri baat pe barosha nahi hua toh..

Monu hai na"

Bhanu ghusse se laal hone lagta hai, qki Tyagi ne Monu ka naam leke uske dar ko aur bada diya tha.. Bhanu ghusse se kudal ki taraf badne lagta hai

Bhanu ko yu kudal ki taraf badte hue dekh k ek pal k liye Tyagi bhi dar se kaanp jata hai par wo apne uper dar ko haavi nahi hone deta
"Monu sirf meri wajah se hosh main nahi aa raha.. warna wo toh kab ka theek ho chuka hai"

Tyagi ne maano koi dhamaka sa kiya ho, Bhanu k kadam bhi wahi k wahi ruk jate hai aur sawaliya nazron se Tyagi ki taraf dekhte hue
"Kiya matlab hai tumhara ?"

Bhanu k mukh se nikli ye baat Tyagi k liye Vijaypath pe chalne ka rasta sa tha

Tyagi- (Muskurate hue ek angdai sa leta hai, maano Bhanu ki halat ka bharpur maza le raha ho.. aur phir wo ek raaz kholta hai) tumhe kiya lagta hai.. mere jaisa vadiya sar ki ek jara si chaut ko ab tak theek nahi kar saka ?

Bhanu, Kudal ko bhool k Tyagi ki taraf kuch kadam aage badta hai
"Saaf saaf kaho"

Tyagi- Monu toh suru k 10 dino main hi theek ho gaya tha, kuch baat toh hai us ladke main jo itna jordar waar khane k baad bhi maut uska kuch bigad nahi paayi

Bhanu- Kiya kehna cha rahe ho.. maine kaha na mera in sab se koi lena dena nahi hai

Bhanu ek baar phir se sari baaton ko manne se puri tarah mana karte hue

Tyagi- (Has padta hai.. aur shant aawaz main aage kehta hai) Pata hai.. main jab chahu Monu ko hosh main la sakta hu, aur tumhe toh pata hi hai wo hosh main aate hi sabko kiya batayega

Tyagi apni jagah se uthta hai aur haste hue Bhanu k charo taraf aise ghumne lagta hai maano uski parikrama si kar raha ho aur aage kehta hai
"Waise manna padega, bade taqatwar malum padte ho.. par kiya tum Kundan se jeet paoge, itni taqat hai tumme"

Bhanu ka sabr ab puri tarah tut jata hai.. qki Tyagi ne uske Dushman ko usse jada bada bata diya tha

Bhanu- (Kisi saand ki tarah fufkarte hue) Tum mujhe jante nahi ho Tyagi.. apni had main raho warna..

Tyagi- (Wapas se muskura padta hai) warna kiya.. mujhe bhi marwa doge jaise Maalti ko warne ki koshish ki

Bhanu- Maine Maalti ko marwane ki koshish nahi ki.. qki use toh main apne ek hathon se marunga, wo bhi tadpa tadpa k

Bhanu ne apne antim sabd aise ghusse se kahe ki Tyagi k jism main bhi jhurjhuri si daud padi thi

Tyagi- (Khud ko sambhalte hue) hmm.. mujhe pata hai, tumhare chote Bhai k zehar khane ka sabab aur yaha tak tumhare Maa Baap k zinda jalne ki wajah wahi aurat 'Maalti' hai

Bhanu aisi hairani se Tyagi ko dekhta hai.. jaise uske Jeevan ka sabse bada sach usko pata chal gaya ho

Par Tyagi bina ruke aage kehta hai
"Par tum akele nahi ho jiska pariwar aur zindagi Maalti k pariwar ne barbad ki

Fark sirf itna hai ki tumhare Chote Bhai aur Maa Baap k sath jo hua uski wajah Maalti or uske dono Bhai.. or Maalti ki badi Bhabhi Premlata hai"

Esse Pehle hi Tyagi kuch aage bolta Bhanu ghusse se jalta hu bol padta hai
"Aur wo harami 'Murli Das' bhi"

Tyagi ha main sar hilate hue aage kehta hai
"Ha.. Murli Das, Kundan ka baap.. bhala use kaise bhool sakta hu"

Es baar aage bolne ka kaam Bhanu karta hai
"Tumhara kiya bigada hai Maalti ne"

Tyagi hairani se Bhanu ko dekhta hai maano puch raha hai..
'mera.. matlab'

Bhanu ab kaafi shant nazar aane laga tha wo asani se chalte hue us charpai pe baith jata hai aur pure shant swar main kehta hai

"Ab jab tumhe mere bare main itna sab pata hai.. par tumne ye sab apne dost Mahendra ko batane ki jagah yaha mere paas aaye ho, toh ye sab yuhi toh nahi ho sakta"

Asal main Bhanu ko thoda samay lagta hai par wo jaldi hi samajh chuka tha ki Tyagi ka yu use darana aur uske bare main itna sab pata hona.. par ab tak chup rehna, jarur uske peeche kuch toh raaz hai

Tyagi- (Ek Lambi si saans chorte hue, wahi Bhanu k pass Charpai pe baith jata hai aur kisi sunya main taakte hue kehta hai) 'Bela'.. Bela naam tha uska, mera prem aur mera jeevan thi wo.. par 'Murli Das' aur uske dono beton Mahendra or Kundan ne pure Gaon k aage us bechari ko Badchalan aur kulta bata k use khudkushi karne pe majbur kar kiya.. aur cheen liya meri Bela ko mujhse


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Bela 👆

Tyagi ki aankhon main paani bhar aaya tha aur gala rundha sa gaya tha.. wo ek pal k liye rukta hai aur aage kehta hai
"Pata hai.. jab meri Bela ne Gaon waalon k taano se pareshan hoke khudkushi ki toh wo akeli nahi mari thi, uske pait main mera bacha bhi tha

Us din Murli Das k dono beton ne sirf meri hone wali patni ko nahi, balki mere paida hone wale bache ko bhi mara tha

20 saalon se unse badla lene k liye tarap raha hu.. ek ek din kaisa kaata hai sirf main hi janta hu, meri in haddiyon main tumhari jaisi jaan nahi hai.. par jadi butiyon ka aisa gyan jarur hai jisse main unse badla leke rahunga"

Bhanu k liye ye sab bilkul naya tha.. waise usne ye naam 'Bela' suna hua tha

Apni Patni Sheela k mukh se.. par uske hisab se Kahani kuch aur hi thi aur ab Tyagi k hisab se kuch aur

Bhanu- (Sirf matlab ki baat pe aate hue) Phir meri kiya jarurat.. qki tum yaha aise toh nahi aaye hoge ?

Tyagi- (Bhanu ki taraf dekhta hai aur apni bhar aayi aankhon ko saaf karte hue) mere pass jadi butiyon ka gyan toh hai.. par main Murli Das k pure pariwar ko tadpa tadpa k marna chahta hu, chahta hu ki wo sab bhi wo dard mehsus kare jo meri Bela ne us din mehsus kiya hoga, esliye Budhi k sath sath mujhe tumhara bal bhi chahiye

Bhanu ab sab kuch samajh chuka tha.. par ab bhi uske man main kai sawal thay

Bhanu- Aaj achanak q.. pehle kabhi mere pass aane k bare main q nahi socha ?

"Sach kahu toh mujhe lagta tha ki Mahendra or uske pariwar se main aur Vanraj akele hi badla le sakte thay.. par abhi kuch dino pehle Vanraj Gaon k bazar main Kundan se takraya tha aur tab wo badi muskil se apni jaan aur pehchan chupa k bhaag paya tha

Sidha sidha kabu toh es jung main Vanraj aur main.. kaafi nahi hai, hume tumhari taqat bhi chahiye

Waise bhi hamara dushman lagbhag ek hi hai"
Tyagi apni puri baat kehte hue, Bhanu ki taraf aise dekhne lagta hai jaise ab uske uttar ka intezar ho use

Bhanu- Vanraj ?

Par Bhanu alag hi sawal karta hai

Tyagi- (Jaise use apni galti ka ehsas hua ho) are ha.. main batana hi bhool gaya, Vanraj meri Bela ka Bhai hai

Bhanu- (Ab wapas sabse eham sawal pe aata hai) Tum keh rahe thay ki.. Monu ab tak sirf tumhari wajah se us behoshi ki halat main hai ?

Tyagi- (Muskura padta hai) ha.. main use jo jadi butiyan deta hu wo use theek karne k liye nahi.. balki use usi avastha main rakhne k liye hai

Bhanu- aur eski wajah ?

Tyagi- (Bhanu ki taraf dekh k Muskurate hue) kiya tum Maalti ki aulad ko itni asan aur shant maut dena chahte ho, jaha use dard ka pata tak na chale

Bhanu- (Maano ghusse ki aag bhadak uthi ho) bilkul nahi.. use toh aisi maut dunga ki Maalti or Kundan dekh k apni maut ki bheekh mangenge, par us din sab kuch meri soch se alag chal raha tha esliye use itni asan maut deni padi.. par meri kismat ki wo tab bhi nahi mara

Tyagi- Main phir se mauka de sakta hu.. es baar uska wo haal karo jo tum chahte ho

Bhanu- (Tyagi ki taraf dekhte hue) aisa kaise sambhav hai.. wo hosh main aate hi mera sach sabko bata dega

Tyagi- (Muskurate hue) jab use yaad rahega tab na.. main apni jadi butiyon se uske dimag main basi antim yaadon ko daba dunga, aur jab tak main nahi chahunga use behoshi se pehle ka kuch pal yaad nahi aayenge

Bhanu, Tyagi ki taraf aise dekhta hai maano aankhon hi aankhon main sawal kar raha ho

Tyagi- (Muskurate hue) ha.. tumhara sochna sahi hai, main un yaadon ko puri tarah bhi mita sakta hu.. par tab tum mujhe bhi toh maar sakte ho na.. ab tumhara kiya barosha, aakhir Anokhi bhi toh tumhare liye kaam karti thi.. dekho kiya haal kiya tumne uska

Waise Tyagi ne jo baatein kahi.. khas karke Anokhi aur Jabbar ko leke unpe ab tak wo khud pakka nahi tha, par uski in baaton se Bhanu ka ravayya dekh k wo samajh chuka tha ki wo jo soch raha hai.. wo sab sach hai

Bhanu daat peesh k reh jata hai.. qki Tyagi k hisab se Bhanu kabhi bhi uske viruddh nahi ja sakta tha, warna wo Monu ki yaadon ko jagrit bhi kar sakta hai

Kulmilakar Tyagi, Monu k bahane Bhanu pe apna kabu bana raha hai.. jo baat wo ache se samajh raha tha

Bhanu- Theek hai.. par yaad rahe, agar tumne mujhe dokha dene ki sochi bhi toh..

Tyagi- (Uski baat kaate hue) Aur tum bhi yaad rakhna.. agar tum mere khilaaf gaye toh.. Monu ko sab kuch yaad aa sakta hai

Tyagi ne Saaf sabdo main bata diya tha ki ab Bhanu bina uski marzi k kuch nahi sakta

Tyagi apni jagah se uthte hue
"Chalo phir kal ek chamatkar hoga.. kal Monu ko hosh aayega"

Tyagi apni baat kehte hue muskura padta hai aur waha se chal padta hai.. use jaate hue dekh k Bhanu kisi zehrili naag jaisa fufkar padta hai
"Ek baar main es Jabbar ka masla hal kar du, phir tujhe bhi teri aukat dikhaunga.. Madarchod Tyagi"

Wahi khet se dur nikal aane pe Tyagi lambi si saans lete hue muskura padta hai aur khud se kehta hai
"Bhanu.. ab tu wahi karega jo main chahunga, qki ab tere gale main Tyagi ka patta rahega

Mera Jadi butiyon ko leke itne saalon ka gyan ab kaam aayega.. waise bhi Monu k antim palon ki yaadein toh main kab ka daba chuka hu, logo ko andaza hi nahi ayurved kon kon se chamatkar kar sakta hai"


Yaha tak cheeze ab saaf ho chuki hai.. esliye wapas usi samay laut chalte hai jab Tyagi Monu k upchar karne wala hai, ya sirf ek natak matr


Scene 🖼️ #06

Tyagi ne Kamre ko andar se band kar rakha tha.. aur yaha har kisi ki nazren sirf aur sirf darwaje ki taraf atki hui thi

Savita, Maalti, Sheela aur Harshita charo aurte kabhi darwaje ki taraf dekhti toh kabhi ishvar se pradhana karne lagti


Wahi mardon ka bhi haal kuch alag nahi tha.. Jaha Mahendra baar baar sab acha hone ki kaamna karta wahi Monu ka baap Kundan, baar baar apne bache k sahi hone ki dua mang raha tha

Veeru, Sattu aur Sonu bhi apne bhai k jaldi se theek hone ki prathana karne main peeche nahi thay.. agar koi tha jise kisi baat ka fark nahi pad raha tha wo tha Satyam, qki uski nazren baar baar Maalti ki gathile jism pe naach rahi thi

Satyam man hi man
'Agar ye Monu theek ho gaya toh lagta nahi hum kabhi es Gaon ki gareebi ko chor k sehar ki khushal zindagi dekh payenge..

waise ye bhi hai ki jab tak Monu sahi nahi hoga mera Maalti chachi pe chadhne ka sapna bhi pura nahi hoga.. behenchod ajeeb mushibat hai'

Tabhi Savita ki aawaz sabhi ka dhiyan apni taraf kheechne main kamyab rehti hai
"Are ye itta sara dua kaise.. ?"

Kundan- Sayad Tyagi bhaiya ne us khas Himalayan jadi budi se Monu ka ilaj suru kar diya hai

Kundan sabhi ko tyagi ki kahi baatein yaad dilate hue

Samay yuhi beetta chala jata hai..10 min.. 15 min.. 20 min.. 1 ganta

Kamre ki band khidki aur darwaje k beeche se halka halka dhua ab bhi bahar aata ja raha tha par na Tyagi abhi tak bahar aaya tha na hi uska koi jawab

Jabki yaha mardo ka haal aisa tha ki kabhi Kundan pure aangan main chaihal kadmi karte hue dikhta toh kabhi Mahendra, ha Bhanu jarur kuch pareshan sa tha

Bhanu man hi man
'Kahi ye Tyagi mujhe dokha toh nahi dekha.. esne jo kaha hai ki Monu ki antim samay k kuch pal yaad nahi rahenge, kahi wo sab jhoot toh nahi.. ye madarchod kahi mera khel bigad na de'

Par tabhi Bhanu ki soch main vign pad jata hai qki darwaja halka sa khulta hai aur Tyagi ka paseene se bheega hua chehra bahar aata hai

Sabhi k sabhi uth k Tyagi ki taraf lagbhag bhaag se padte hai par Tyagi unhe rokte hue
"Wahi rukiye aap sabhi.. Monu ka upchar jitna saral samajh raha tha, utna hai nahi.. mujhe.. Savita Bhaujai se thodi madad chahiye"

Savita ye sunte hi aage badne main koi bhi vilamb nahi karti aur turant hi darwaje k pass pahuch jaati hai, Tyagi bina kuch kahe darwaje se hatte hue andar aane ka rasta deta hai aur phir wapas se darwaja band kar deta hai

Savita ab kamre k andar thi.. wo dekhti hai ki kamre main ek taraf lohe k tasle main aag jal rahi thi jiske pass hi Tyagi ka jhola rakha hua tha.. aur us aag se halka halka dhuwa nirantan nikalta ja raha tha

Wahi jab wo Monu ki taraf dekhti hai toh paati hai Monu k sar pe kisi jadi buti ka laip sa laga hua tha

Savita- (Vyakulta bhare swar main) Kiya baat hai.. Tyagi Bhaiya, hamara Monu theek toh ho jayega na ?

Tyagi ek pal k liye man hi man hasta hai aur sochta hai
'Monu toh kab ka theek ho chuka hai, par apne khel ko aage badane k liye abhi thoda aur natak karna hai mujhe, uske baad hi use hosh main launga

Waise bhi asli khel toh ab suru hoga'

Tyagi ye sochte hue Savita k bharibharkam jism ko badi hi piyasi nazron se dekhta hai

Tyagi wapas se apne chehre pe chinta ki lakire laate hue
"Bhaujai.. baat ye hai ki.. wo...ki.."

Savita- (Pareshan si hone lagti hai) Baat kiya hai bhaiya.. batayie na, kuch bhi kariye bus hamare Monu ko theek kar dijiye

Tyagi- (Ek lambi si saans chorte hue) Bhaujai baat ye hai ki.. meri jadi buti ko kaam karne k liye bahut si garmi ki jarurat hai.. aur wo.. main..

Savita- are toh esmain konsi badi baat hai, aap kahiye toh main abhi yaha aag jalwa deti hu

Tyagi- (Ek pal k liye rukta hai, wo jaan k mahole ko sanjida banane ki puri koshish karte hue aage kehta hai) aap samjhi nahi Bhaujai.. main.. kaise samjhau.. kuch samajh nahi pa raha.. kis munh se batau

"Tyagi Bhaiya jo bhi baat hai aap khul k saaf saaf kahiye na yu paheliyan q bhuja rahe hai..

main Maalti ka aisa bhuja hua chehra aur nahi dekh sakti..


Ek Maa pe apne bache ko es halat main dekh k uspe kiya beet rahi hogi.. main soch bhi leti hu toh mera kaleja phat padta hai

Tyagi- (Ek lambi si saans lete hue) Bhaujai main jo bolne ja raha hu.. use sunkar aap mujhe galat mat samajhana par aur koi rasta nahi hai, aur agar Monu ko jaldi hi hosh nahi laya gaya toh wo hamesha hamesha k liye esi avastha main fas jayega

Tyagi ki baat sunkar Savita kaanp si padti hai
"Are toh dair q kar rahe hai.. Monu ko bhale hi maine janm nahi diya hai, par main bhi uski Maa jaisi hu.. aap bus batayie karna kiya hai"

Tyagi- (Man hi man has padta hai apni chaal k safal hone pe) Asal main Bhaujai.. Monu ko jis garmi ki jarurat hai wo hai saririk garmi.. aap samajh rahi hai na.. main kaise samjhau.. wo

Savita ne duniya dekhi thi.. aur saririk garmi ka matlab bhi bhali bhati samajh chuki thi, par phir bhi dhimi si aawaz main kehti hai
"Aap.. aap kehna kiya cha rahe hai Bhaiya.. saaf saaf kahiye na"

Tyagi- Bhaujai.. Monu ko jaldi se hosh main laane k liye meri es jadi buti k sath sath use bahut si saririk garmi ki avashakta hai.. aur ye kaam sirf ek aurat kar sakti hai apne jism se.. aap samajh rahi hai na

Savita es baar kuch bol hi nahi paati, par ha main apna sar jarur hila deti hai

Tyagi- (aage bolte hue) Aur meri nazron main sirf aap hi hai jo Monu ko wo garmi de sakti hai.. waise maine pehle Maalti ko ye sab batane ka niryan liya tha par phir socha wo ek Maa hai.. uski kuch seema hai.. esliye

Tyagi apni baat kehte hue chup ho jata hai

Savita- (Kuch palon tak shant rehne k baad) aur koi rasta nahi..

Tyagi apna sar 'na' main sar hila deta hai, Savita kuch palon tak khadi khadi sochti hi rehti hai par jab wo Behsoh Monu k masum chehre ko dkehti hai toh uske andar ki mamta bhi uchal marne lagti hai

Savita- Mujhe manjur hai.. batayie kiya karna hai, par ye baat

Tyagi- (Apni khushi ko chupate hue) Main janta hu.. ye baat sirf hum dono tak hi rahegi.. balki Monu ko bhi kabhi es upchar ka bare main puri baat nahi pata chalegi

Savita- (Apni nazren neeche jhukaye hue) toh kiya yaha..

Tyagi- Nahi nahi Bhaujai.. ye sab itna saral bhi nahi.. eske liye pehle aapke sarir pe ek khas jadi buti se bana tail lagega, taki apne jism ki garmi aur jada bad sake aur uske baad.. main bataunga kaise..

Yani Tyagi ne saaf kar diya tha ki jab ye sab ho raha hoga.. wo khud bhi wahi hoga

Tyagi aage kehta hai
"Jungle k uttari hisse main ek purana mandir hua karta tha jaha ab sirf khandhar bache hai.. wo jagah sahi hai, waha hum thodi aag bhi jala sakte hai madad k liye aur waha koi ayega bhi nahi, aur sabase badi baat mujhe kuch aur jadi butiyon ki jarurat hai jo mujhe usi jagah mil jayengi.. par aap janti hai na mere kehne ka kiya matlab hai

Dekho Bhaujai main janta hu ki main kiya keh raha hu.. par kiya karu, aur koi rasta bhi nahi hai

Aur agar Monu jaldi se hosh main nahi aya toh wo hamesha hamesha k liye esi avastha main fas k reh jayega"

Savita- (Turant bol padti hai) nahi nahi.. aap jo chahte hai wo sab hoga, aap bus upchar kariye

Tyagi- toh theek hai main Mahendra aur sabhi se baat karke us jagah pe sare intizam karwata hu

Savita bus ha main apna sar hila k reh jaati hai aur phir Monu k sar k pass baith k bade hi sneh bhare hathon se uske baalon main apni ungliya chalane lagti hai.. par es samay uski aankhon main sirf mamta thi.. hawas nahi

Dusri taraf Tyagi bahar aake sabhi ko ye batata hai ki usko kuch tazi jadi butiyon ki jarurat hai jise woo turant tod k estimal karega aur jiske liye Jungle k uttari hisse main us khandar wali jagah pe aage ka upchar hoga

Aur wo ye bhi batata hai ki eske liye use Savita bhaujai ki jarurat padegi qki in sabhi main unhi ko sabse jada anubhav hai.. waise Tyagi ki es baat pe baki teeno aurte bhi apna sahyog dene ki baat kehti hai jispe Tyagi man hi man has padta hai.. qki unhe pata nahi tha ki aaj konsa sahyog hone wala hai

Kundan- (Tyagi ki baat sunkar apni sanka vyakt karte hue) Tyagi Bhaiya aapki sab baat theek hai, par aap toh jante hi hai.. ki es samay Monu ko khatra hai aise main use us ekant jagah pe aur aap keh rahe hai hum bhi waha nahi aa sakte ?

Tyagi- Ha kundan tumne sahi suna, qki yaha ek band kamra tha par waha pura khula vatavaran hoga aur us buti ka dhua dur tak ja sakta hai.. mere pass us buti ki kaat waali dawa sirf itni hi hai ki main use sirf kisi ek ko de sakta hu aur maine Savita Bhaujai ko de di taki unpe us duwe ka prabhav na pade.. aur rahi baat Monu pe khatre ki toh maana main tumhare jaisa jawan nahi.. par tumhse wada karta hu agar Monu pe kisi prakar ka koi khatra hua toh chahe mujhe apni jaan q na deni pade par main use kuch nahi hone dunga

Mahendra- nahi nahi Tyagi Bhai kaisi baat karte ho hum sabhi ko aap par pura barosha hai

Mahendra bari bari se sabhi ki taraf dekhta hai jaha har koi Mahendra se sehmat tha

Kareeb 40 min baad..

Jungle k uttari hisse main ek chatai bichi hui thi jispe Monu behoshi ki halat main laita hua tha aur uske sameep hi Tyagi aur Savita khade thay.. baki sabhi log waha se kareeb 500 meter dur ek choti si puliya k pass khade thay

Asal main har koi waha aana cha raha tha esliye Tyagi ne ki kaha tha ki wo sab aa sakte hai par kam se kam 500m unse dur rehna hoga taki us duwe ka galat prabhar un sabhi pe na pade

Edhar us purane khadar jaisi jagah pe khadi Savita pehle Monu aur phir Tyagi ki taraf dekhte hue
"Toh ab.."

Tyagi aane jhole se ek bottle nikalta hai jismain sarso jaisa koi tail bhara hua tha.. us bottle ko hath main lete hue
"Kapde utaro Bhaujai.."


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Aaj se theek 2 din pehle.. ye wahi din hai jab Maalti aur Jabbar k beech wo jhadap hui thiAsal main es din jab Rocky Maalti ko mila tha.. toh wo usse milne k baad sidha Gaon k Jungle ki taraf chal pada thaJis wajah se esi subha uske senior 'Yadav' ka wo phone aayaRocky es samay Gaon ki ek choti si nehar k pass apni car k Bonet pe baitha hua.. dur kheton main kaam karti aurton aur unki jawani ko taadne ka kaam kar raha thaRocky- (Gaon ki hariyali.. aur bhari jawani ko apni nazron main kaid karte hue.. khud se kehta hai) Manna padega, es Gaon main peene k liye bada ras hai.. par pata nahi kab koi hath aayegiRocky ek hath ki ungaliyon k beech cigerate sulgaye hue dur aurton k madmast yovan ko dekhte hue apne dil ki baat bol hi pada tha.. ki tabhi uski jaib main pada phone bajna suru ho jata haiRocky turant hi cigerate ko dur fekhte hue apna Mobile bahar nikalta hai.. jise 'Yadav Sir' likha hua thaRocky- (Phone received karte hue) kahiye sir.. meri yaad kaise aa gayi ?Dusri taraf Yadav apne office main baitha hu puri sanjidgi k sath
"Kuch pata chala ?"Rocky ko samjhate dair nahi lagti ki uska senior es samay jada hi serious hai"Jada kuch toh nahi.. par yaha kuch bada Game hai, pehle Gufran aur ab ye Anokhi"Rocky apni baat kehte hue ruk jata hai qki tabhi uske pass se ek bala ki khubsurat aurat apni gaud main ek bache ko liye hue gujarne lagti haius khubsurat Aurat ki nazren ek pal k liye Rocky se takrati hai aur wo ek pal k liye Rocky aur phir uski car ko dekhte hue apne peeche ek cycle pe saman laade aa rahe ladke ko dekhte hue kehti hai"Kiya hua.. jaldi jaldi chal na"Uske peeche aane wala kareeb 24 saal ka hatta katta ladka.. jo puri tarah thak chuka aur aisi thand main bhi puri tarah paseene main bheega hua tha wo lagbhag haafte hue kehta hai
"Aa raha hu Didi.. saali es cycle ko bhi aaj hi kharab hona tha"Wo bala ki khubsurat aurat apni gaud main thame hue bache ko sambhalte hue phir se Rocky ko dekhti hai aur dhire se kehti hai"Kiya re.. Gitesh, aaj kal apne Gaon main sehri Babu bhi aane lage hai.. wo bhi paise waale"

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Rocky ye sunkar muskura padta hai.. wahi wo aurat ab aage bad jaati hai, aur jaldi hi uske peeche aane wala jo sayad uska chota bhai tha.. wo bhi aage badte hue nikal jata haiRocky- (khud ko wapas akela paake apne Phone ko kaan se laga leta hai) Sir wo...Dusri taraf se Yadav
"Ha.. mujhe Idea hai, koi aa gaya hoga.. aage batao"Rocky- Gufran ko jarur kuch aisa pata chala tha jis wajah se use maar diya gaya, par ye Anokhi toh aisa kuch nahi kar rahi thi.. na hi hamare liye kisi prakar ki koi jasusi phir ye..Dusri taraf se Yadav phone pe apne ek ek sabd pe jor dete hue
"Wo sab mat dohrao jo main janta hu.. tumhe kuch naya pata chal ki nahi ?"Rocky man hi ek baar apne senior Yadav ko khadush bolta hai aur phir aage kehta hai
"Es Gaon main jo kuch bhi ho raha hai uske taar yaha k ek pariwar se jude hai.. aur"Yadav- (Apni kurshi pe apni estithi badalte hue) aur kiya.. ?"Yaha ka jungle.. aisa lagta hai jo kuch bhi hai uski wajah jungle k andar hi hai"Yadav maano apna faisla sa sunate hue
"Toh intizar kis baat ka kar rahe hai.. pata karo, aur yaad rahe pichli baar tumne jo kaand diya tha usse tumhe bahar nikalne k liye main kiya kiya kara thaAb ummid karta hu tum meri ummid pe khare utroge"Rocky- Mujhe sab yaad hai.. aur wapas mujhpe jo barosha kiya hai wo tutega nahiYadav- Maine pehle bhi kaha hai.. tum apna kaam apne hisab se karo, bus mujhe natija chahiyeRocky- Yes SirEske baad Yadav aur kuch bolne ya Rocky ki taraf se sunne tak ka intzar nahi karta aur phone cut jata haiRocky Phone ko jaib main wapas se rakhte hue.. ek lambi si saans leta hai aur dur faile junglon ko dekhte hue
"Hmm.. pata toh karna hi hoga"Rocky apni car se apna camera nikalta hai aur use apne gale me daal leta hai aur phir car ko ache se lock aur check karne k baad use wahi chor k Gaon k Jungle ki taraf akela hi paidal chal padta haiWaise toh yaad hi hoga.. par wapas se bata deta huSundarpur Gaon kuch aisa hai jise dekh k aap keh sakte hai ye aaj bhi bahari Duniya se puri tarah kata hua haiOr eski Sabse Badi wajah hai 'Thakur Balwant Pratap Singh' aur unke Purvaj.. waise kehte hai kabhi esi Pariwar k log yaha k Raja hua karte thayYaha aaj bhi Sahukari jaisi rudhiwadi parampara mil jayegi, toh Bank jaisi suvidhayen bhiWaise dono hi cheezon pe hukum 'Thakur Balwant Pratap Singh' yani 'Thakur ji'.. ka hi chalta haiGaon ki abadi achi khasi hai, yani yaha logo ki tanik bhi kami nahi hai.. khaskarke Ladkiyon aur mahilaon ki qki jadatar mard toh kaam ki talash main Gaon se bahar hi chale jate haiRocky chalte hue jungle k bilkul pass aa chuka tha.. jaha jungle k andar se Jhingur ki dhimi dhimi par ajeeb si daravani aawaz si aa rahi thiAisa sayad itne sannate ki wajah se thaRocky- (Aage badne se pehle charo taraf dekhte hue) hmm.. maine us Pahalwan ko kai baar esi taraf se jungle main aate jaate dekha hai, aakhir yaha itne ghane jungle main karne kiya ata hai ?Asal main Rocky ne Yadav ko puri baat nahi batayi thi.. wajah bhi sidhi thi ki abhi khud use sab pata nahi thaRocky jabse Gaon aaya hai tabhi se apni chaan bheen main lag gaya tha, jaha use pata laga ki Thakur ji k sabse kareeb logo mein ya toh uske 2 gunde jaise aadmi hai.. ya PahalwanEsliye Rocky ne Pahalwan k bare pata karna suru kiya toh usne paya ki wo aksar chori chupe jungle main ata jata hai.. aur esi karan aaj wo khud yaha khada thaWaise agar aap sabhi Pahalwan ko bhool gaye hai toh yaad dila du ki Gaon ki 'Anaj mandi' ko sambhalne ka kaam yahi karta haiRocky charo taraf dekh k pakka karta hai aur phir jungle k andar pravesh kar hi jata haiJungle k bare main agar likhu toh ye Gaon ki उत्तर disha main ek aisa ghana jungle hai jiska koi ant nahi..ye jungle itna ghana hai ki jungle k beech main Suraj ki roshni tak nahi pahuchtiEsliye koi bhi Jungle k jada andar jane ki galti nahi kartaWaise es Jungle k thoda hi andar kai khubsurat chote chote chupe talab bhi hai.. jaha Gaon k kuch manchale aur Manchali apni bhookh mitane aate haiAur konsi bhookh.. ye toh aap samajh hi gaye honge 😉Par koi bhi jungle k jada andar jana pasand nahi karta.. ya sayad kisi ki bhi jungle k aur andar jane ki himmat hi nahi hotiAur eski kuch wajah Gaon main prachalit kai kisse kahaniya haiGaon k kai bade budhon ka kehna hai ki aksar yaha Jane wala jaldi laut k nahi aayaPhir aisi jagah Pahalwan kiya karne ata hoga.. esi baat ne Rocky ko uspe saq karne k liye majbur kar diya tha, aur usi baat ka pata karne aaj wo khud es jungle main pravesh kar chuka thaJaldi hi Jungle ko paar karta hua Rocky kaafi aage nikal ayaa tha.. sayad jungle k beecho beech aa chuka tha wowo baar baar peeche mud k dekhta bhi ja raha tha ki koi hai toh nahiPuri satarkta k sath wo aage bad raha tha ki sirf uske pairon k neeche aane waale sukhe patton ki aawaz hi us jungle k sannate ko tod rahi thi ki tabhi achanak se Rocky ki peet pe koi sard cheez aake chuti hai"Kon hai be"Rocky ek police wala tha.. esliye aisi cheezon se darna usne nahi seekha thaRocky- (Jaldi se apne gale main pade camera ko thamte hue) wo.. main jungle main anokhe pakshiyon ki photo leta hu.. photographer.. huRocky darne ka aisa natak karta hai maano abhi mut padega.. jispe wo aadmi has padta hai"Chal be.. munh meri taraf kar"Rocky darte uski taraf dekhta hai.. aur us chehre ko dekh k Rocky man hi man khus ho jata haiRocky k man main ek hi baat aati hai
'Kuch toh gadbad hai es jungle main.. warna Thakur ka ye kutta yaha banduk liye kiya kar raha hota'Rocky jab mudta hai toh dekhta hai ki uski peet pe wo sard cheez ek banduk hi thi jo abhi bhi usi aadmi k hathon main thiWo aadmi apne tambaku waale gande munh.. jispe bade bade chaichak k daag thay, aur aise gande munh se haste hue Rocky ko uper se neeche tak dekhta hai aur phir ghusse se uski taraf banduk dikhate hue kehta hai"Tu toh bada chikna sehri hai.. sach sach bata kiya kar raha hai yaha"Rocky usi prakar kaanpte hue wapas se apna camera dikhate hue
"Photo.. main.. main photographer hu.. wo main"Wo aadmi Rocky ko uper se neeche tak dekhta hai aur phir bina kuch kahe aage badkar uske gale se camera kheech leta hai..Rocky ka man toh karta hai use yahi nipta de par apne ghusse pe kabu rakhta haiAadmi- sun pe chikne.. tu sehri lag raha hai esliye chor raha hu, par aaj k baad es Jungle main dikha toh goli seedha Gand pe marunga.. wo bhi ched main banduk ki nali ghusa k samjha..Rocky jaldi se ha main sar hilata hai maano bahut dar raha hoAadmi- chal nikal yaha se..Rocky bina kuch kahe wapas jungle k bahar ki taraf chal padta hai.. wo kai baar peeche mud k us aadmi ko dekhta hai jo uska camera cheen k has raha thaRocky jungle k bahar aakar
"Yani jo kuch hai.. uska pata esi jungle se chalega, par es jungle main aakhir aisa kiya chal raha hai jiske liye Thakur ka khas kutta.. 'Kaaliya' yaha ki rakhwali kar raha hai
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Kaaliya ek 40-42 saal ka gunda hai.. jo pichle 5-7 saalon se Thakur Balwant Pratap Singh yani 'Thakur ji' k liye kaam karta aa raha haiPuri tarah Harami aur ayyash kism ka mard hai.. par apne kaam main mahir aur berhamRocky kuch pal k liye kuch sochta hai aur agle hi pal wo muskura padta hai.. aur jaldi hi wo apni car k andar baitha tha jaha seat k neeche hath daal k wo dusra camera nikal k apni bagal waali seat pe rakh leta haiRocky- Thakur Balwant Pratap Singh.. hmmm.. eski kundali banani hi padegi, par usse pehle mujhe hamare Khabri Gufran k pariwar se milna hoga.. sayad unse kuch madad mil sakeRocky Gufran k pariwar k bare main sochta hai toh ek pal k liye uski aankhon k aage Gufran ki khubsurat Begum.. 'Nasreen' ka bhara hua jism aur badi badi latakti Chuchiyon ka drishya uski aankhon k aage naach jata hai

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Rocky- (Apni paint k uper se hi apna lund masalte hue) uffff... kiya bhara maal hai saali... maza aa jayegaScene 🖼️ #02
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Maalti subha subha hi naha k Pooja path karke pure ghar main sabhi ko bari bari se aarti de rahi thiAisa karne k liye aaj usse Harshita ne kaha tha.. aur ek Maa apne bache k liye kuch bhi karne se peeche kaha rehti haiAaj ghar kuch jada hi bhara hua tha.. wajah thi aaj se theek 2 dino pehle Jabbar aur Maalti k beech wo ladaiWaise use ladai kehna sahi nahi hoga, qki usme Jabbar ne jo kiya.. Maalti ko pehle uski tanik bhi bhanak nahi thiMaalti ka sar pe chaut kuch jada nahi aayi thi, par sar pe ek chota sa ghaav hone ki wajah se khoon nikal aya thaMaalti Bari bari se sabhi aurton ko arti deti hai aur phir Mardo ki taraf bad chalti haiMaalti ki nanzren Bade Jeth ji 'Mahendra' k pass baitha apne Pati Kundan pe jaati haiJaha use dhiyan ata hai ki Kundan ne use pehle ki keh diya tha ki wo ghar pe us Sandook ko leke koi baat na kare.. kisi se bhi nahiEsliye Maalti jab apne Pati Kudan k sath ghar aayi thi, tabse usne sab kuch bataya.. bus us sandook ko leke koi baat nahi kiMaalti aarti ki thali liye hue sabse pehle Sonu k pass jaati hai.. jaha Sonu Maalti ko dekhte hi muskurate hue khada ho jata hai aur arti lete hue muskura k kehta hai
"Waaahhh.. Chachi, aapne koi naya sabun lagaya hai kiya ?"Maalti ko kuch bhi samajh nahi aata esliye wo sawaliya nazron se puchti hai..'ki uske kehne ka kiya matlab hai ?'Sonu bhi apni khubsurat Chachi ki baat ko unki nazron k eshare se hi samajh jata hai aur muskurate hue kehta hai
"Wo aapse bahut achi khusboo aa rahi hai na"Maalti muskurate k use marne ka eshara karti hai aur phir aise hi muskurate hue wahi aangan main baithe hue Sattu ki taraf chal padti haiMaalti, Sattu k samne aake halka jhuk k khadi hoti hai toh use maano hosh aata hai aur wo Jaldi se apni jagah se uthne lagta hai jaha ek pal k liye uski nazren apne samne Maalti k blouse k andar ki gehrai pe chali hi jati hai par wo apne aap ko behakne se rok leta hai
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Maalti eshare se kuch puchti haiSattu- Chachi, Main kuch samjha nahi.. ?Tabhi wahi aangan se thoda hatkar Harshita aur Sheela k sath baithi Savita bolti hai
"Wo puch rahi hai.. ye Satyam kaha hai ?""Are wo.. kuch nahi yahi ghar k peeche gaya hai, peshab karneWaise Maalti Chachi aaj aise eshare se q sawal kar rahi hai ?"Sattu wapas apni jagah pe baithte hue apni baat puri karta haiJispe es baar uske sawal ka jawan dene ka kaam Harshita karti haiHarshita- (Muskurate hue) qki mere mayke main ek pandit ji hai, unka kehna hai tha ki Subha ki arti aur Pooja samapt hone tak kuch nahi bolna chahiye.. warna anisht hota haiSheela- (Haste hue) Hamari bholi bhali Harshita Bhabhi aur unke andhvishwasSheela ki baat pe waha baitha har ek inshan has padta hai.. waise hasti toh Maalti bhi hai par phir bhi wo aaj Harshita ki batai es baat pe chal rahi thiWo kehte hai na.. ki Inshan jab nirash hota hai toh wo kisi bhi baat ko sach maan leta haiWahi ek kursi pe baitha hua Mahendra apne ghar main aisa khushi ka mahole dekh k mand mand muskurate hue Maalti ko dekhta hai aur kehta hai
"Bahu.. ab tumhare sar ki chaut kaisi hai?"Maalti kuch bol paati usse pehle hi Veeru haste hue bol padta hai"Abhi toh Bhabhi aapke sawalon ka jawan bhi na deni waali, bechare aaj Harshita ki baaton main aake fas gayi hai"Veeru ki baat pe es baar pura ghar khil-khila k has padta hai.. jisse Harshita apne Pati ko dekh k bura sa munh bana leti hai, uska aisa bachon sa ruthna dekh k Veeru bhi khud ko hasne se rok nahi paataEs baar Mahendra k theek pass baitha hua Tyagi kehta hai
"Bhai.. maine ilaj kiya hai Maalti bahu ka, aise kaise theek nahi hogi.. dekhna 1-2 din main hi uski chaut puri tarah theek ho jayegi"Tyagi apni baat puri karte hue apni jagah se uthta hai aur sath hi apne pass rakha hua jhola uthata haiSavita- are Bhai Sahab kaha chal diye, waise bhi itne dino se na jane kaha gayab ho gaye thay ?Savita apni baat kehte hu.. apne hathon ko halka sa utha ka angdai se leti hai, waise bhi pichle 2 dino se sayad hi koi sahi se soya hoga

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Savita ka aisa kamuk avtar aur uske hathon k yu uthne k karan uski namkeen bagal nazar aane lagti hai.. jise dekh k Tyagi ka man kisi mayur saman naach padta haiTyagi toh.. Ek pal k liye Savita ko aise dekhta hai mano apni khuwaish ko dekh raha ho, par wo apne irade apne chehre se jahir nahi hone deta
"Monu k liye ek khas jadi buti lene himalayan gaya hua tha.. "Tyagi ki baat sunte hi waha baitha har Inshan asha ki kiran ki tarah Tyagi ko dekhne lagta haiTyagi ek ek karke sabhi ko dekhta hai aur phir ek lambi si saans lete hue kehta hai
"Apne samast gyan ka estimal karke main es nishkarsh pe pahucha hu ki Monu k swasth karne ka yahi eklauta tarika hai ab"Tyagi apni baat kehte hue apne jhole se ek ghass jaisi kuch jadi buti nikalta haiSavita- Ye toh ghass lag rahi hai ?Tyagi- nahi Savita Bhabhi, ye ek alokik jadi buti hai.. jo sirf himalyan k ek khas stan pe milti hai, aur ese prapt karne k liye hi main itne dino se Gaon se bahar thaMaalti ki aankhon main aasha ki kiran saman aashu bhar aate hai, par abhi wo kuch bol nahi sakti thiTyagi- Main.. Monu k kamre main ja raha hu, agle 10-15 min tak koi bhi us kamre k kareeb nahi aayega.. qki es jadi buti ko jala k jo dhuwa utpan kiya jayega wo Monu ki avastha k hisab se labhkari hoga par dusron k liye hanikarak ho sakta haiTyagi apni Baat puri karte hue Maalti ki taraf badta hai aur arti leta hai..Maalti kuch kehti nahi par uski aankhon main Mamta aur prem se bhare hue aansu dekh k koi bhi bata sakta tha ki es samay use Tyagi uske liye kisi devtuly saman haiPar abhi es Ghar main sayad ki kisi ko pata hoga ki.. Tyagi asal main kaisa inshan hai aur uske asal irade kiya haiTyagi abki baar Sattu ki taraf dekhte hue
"Beta mujhe thodi si aag chahiye aur ek geela kapda"Sattu turant hi Kundan aur apne Pita Mahendra ki taraf dekhta hai, maano use ijajat maang raha hoMahendra- munh kiya dekh raha hai.. Tyagi Chacha jo kehte hai, turant de unheSattu abki jara bhi dairi nahi karta aur Rasoighar k pass Jake aag jalane ka jugad lagane lagta hai.. jismain uski madad k liye Sheela bhi turant uske sath hi rasoighar ki taraf chal padti haiTyagi wapas se Maalti aur baki aurto ki taraf dekhte hue
"Aap sabhi prathana kariye ki aaj main safal rahu.. aur..choro wo sab, baad main bataunga"Har koi Tyagi se puchna chahta tha ki aisa kiya hai jo wo batate batate ruk gaye, par abhi Ghar ka mahole bahut si sanjida ho chuka tha.. esliye kisi ne bhi abhi ye sawal karna sahi nahi samjhaJaldi hi Sheela aur Sattu ek lohe k tasle main aag jala k le aate haiTyagi- mujhe ek geela kapda bhi chahiyeEs baar ye kaam k liye Harshita aage badti hai.. aur jaldi hi Tyagi ki jarurat ka sara saman uske samne thaTyagi- Ye sabhi saman Monu k kamre main rakh do, aur yaad rahe agle 10-15 min tak koi bhi uske kamre k nazdik nahi aana chahiye.. Kudan ye tumhari jimmedari haiTyagi ne apni antim baat Kundan ki taraf dekhte hue kahiEske baad Jaldi hi Tyagi Monu k kamre k andar tha aur usne andar jaate hi darwaja andar se band kar liya, aur ab sabhi wapas se aangan main baithe hue usi kamre ki taraf dekh rahe thayEsi beech Maalti ne sabhi ko arti dila di thi.. esliye wo bhi baki sabhi aurton k sath aake baith gayi aur apne hath jod k prathana karne lagiGhar main maujad har koi yahi prathana kar raha tha ki aaj koi karishma ho jaye.. siwaye ek k.. yani 'Bhanu'Qki uski aankhon k aage toh kal shaam jo hua.. uska ek ek drishya kisi chalchitr saman chal raha thaJise yaad karte hue uske jabde bheech gaye.. aur muthiya khas gayi thiBhanu ghusse se badbada padta hai

"Madarchod.. Tyagi..."Jaldi milta hu wapas, with Update #13, Scene #03
Superb update bro
 
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