Adultery मालती का कामुक संसार (Adultery Upanyas)

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[Danny69]

Bahut achha likhte ho bhai... Maalti aur savita best character hai tumhare story ka... Jab maalti jawan ladka se chudti hai to maza aa jaata hai... Maalti thoda aur nakhra karegi aur sharmayegi chudne me to aur maza aayega... Maalti aur jawan ladko ke beech thodi aur chudai karwao please... Maalti aur satyam ke beech me sab se bach bacha ke gandi gandi isharo se kamuk harkate hogi to aur maza aayega... Jaise haath se kamuk gande ishara karna khet me bulana hugne ke liye... Aur ha bhai ek Request hai maalti ki gaand kisi jawan ladke se hi marwana jaise monu satyam ya sonu se please... Maalti ki gaand chudai ke liye bahut excited hu... Bhai maalti ki gaand chudai ke liye ek bada update dena please jaise maalti ko gaand marwane ke liye manana maalti ko gaand marwane me sharam aana...jaise log gaand marwana gaali ke trah use karte hai gaao me...maalti ki gaand chudai ekdam kamuk aur dirty honi chahiya...

Pura dil ka bat bol diya yaaaar....
Sath ma, Maalti ki fita agar Monu kata to maja aa jaya.....
Akhir uski Mummy ha, to Maa ki Gand pa beta ka pahala haak hota ha.....
Or agar Satyam, Monu ki Maa ki Gand mara ga, to oh kamina bahut berahami sa mara ga....
To pahali Gand Chudai Monu sa hi honi cahiya...
Maa Beta ka Romantic Love affair.....
Maa ki Gand ka Guldasta, Monu hi banaya...
Or Coma ka bad, pura hoss ma, pahali Chudai, Maa ki Gand sa hi ho....
Daaaaya raaaaaa....


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[Dharamveer]

Pura dil ka bat bol diya yaaaar....
Sath ma, Maalti ki fita agar Monu kata to maja aa jaya.....
Akhir uski Mummy ha, to Maa ki Gand pa beta ka pahala haak hota ha.....
Or agar Satyam, Monu ki Maa ki Gand mara ga, to oh kamina bahut berahami sa mara ga....
To pahali Gand Chudai Monu sa hi honi cahiya...
Maa Beta ka Romantic Love affair.....
Maa ki Gand ka Guldasta, Monu hi banaya...
Or Coma ka bad, pura hoss ma, pahali Chudai, Maa ki Gand sa hi ho....
Daaaaya raaaaaa....


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Baat bilkul sahi kaha hai bhai maalti maa ki gaand ka fita monu kaate...wo to iss kahani ke writer pe nirbhar karta hai ki maalti ki gaand ka udghatan kis se karwayenge... mera bas writer bhai se anurodh hai ki agar monu ko mauka nahi milta hai to kisi jawan ladke se hi maalti ki gaand ka udghatan ho...wo bhi kamuk tarike se maalti ki gaand ka guldasta bane...maalti ki gaand ka jab bhi guldasta bane to maalti aur jawan ladke ke beech me iss baare me kamuk aur gandi baatchit ho... Maalti ko sharam lajja mehsoos ho kaise ek jawan ladka usse gaand marwane ke liye mana raha hai... Use lage koi jawan ladka uske gaand ka itna deewana ho sakta... Maalti ke gaand ke baare bahut kamuk aur details me baate ho... Maalti ke gaand marwane se pehle kya kya hota sab detail me hona chahiye... Aur agar Satyam ko mauka mile to satyam aur maalti ke beech kamuk natkhat harkate honi chahiye... Satyam maalti ko sab se bach bacha kar apne hatho ya jeebh se gandi gandi isharo se garam karte rahe maalti ko satyam ke in gandi isharo se sharam lajja ke sath sath kamukta bhi mehsoos ho... Satyam maalti ko isharo se khet me akele hugne jaane ko bole... Satyam maalti ko apne saamne hugne aur peshab karne ko bole jisse maalti ko bahut lajja mehsoos ho... Aur jab maalti aisa kare to satyam maalti ke saath chherkhani kare... Maalti ki kitni bhi chudai ho jaaye usme sharam aur lajja khatam nahi honi chahiye wo sanskari bani rahe... Maine bas apna sujhaw diya ab jaise writer Bhai ko sahi Lage... Waise bhi Bhai ka kahani lekhni ka main to fan hu gajab likhte hai maine shuru se saare update padha hai maza aaya hai aasha hai aage bhi maza aayega...

 

[Danny69]

Baat bilkul sahi kaha hai bhai maalti maa ki gaand ka fita monu kaate...wo to iss kahani ke writer pe nirbhar karta hai ki maalti ki gaand ka udghatan kis se karwayenge... mera bas writer bhai se anurodh hai ki agar monu ko mauka nahi milta hai to kisi jawan ladke se hi maalti ki gaand ka udghatan ho...wo bhi kamuk tarike se maalti ki gaand ka guldasta bane...maalti ki gaand ka jab bhi guldasta bane to maalti aur jawan ladke ke beech me iss baare me kamuk aur gandi baatchit ho... Maalti ko sharam lajja mehsoos ho kaise ek jawan ladka usse gaand marwane ke liye mana raha hai... Use lage koi jawan ladka uske gaand ka itna deewana ho sakta... Maalti ke gaand ke baare bahut kamuk aur details me baate ho... Maalti ke gaand marwane se pehle kya kya hota sab detail me hona chahiye... Aur agar Satyam ko mauka mile to satyam aur maalti ke beech kamuk natkhat harkate honi chahiye... Satyam maalti ko sab se bach bacha kar apne hatho ya jeebh se gandi gandi isharo se garam karte rahe maalti ko satyam ke in gandi isharo se sharam lajja ke sath sath kamukta bhi mehsoos ho... Satyam maalti ko isharo se khet me akele hugne jaane ko bole... Satyam maalti ko apne saamne hugne aur peshab karne ko bole jisse maalti ko bahut lajja mehsoos ho... Aur jab maalti aisa kare to satyam maalti ke saath chherkhani kare... Maalti ki kitni bhi chudai ho jaaye usme sharam aur lajja khatam nahi honi chahiye wo sanskari bani rahe... Maine bas apna sujhaw diya ab jaise writer Bhai ko sahi Lage... Waise bhi Bhai ka kahani lekhni ka main to fan hu gajab likhte hai maine shuru se saare update padha hai maza aaya hai aasha hai aage bhi maza aayega...

Kiya Jabardas bat bol diya aap na....
Sunka maja hi aa gaya....

Sahi kaha....
Maalti ki Gand to kisi Jawan Tagda Lund sa hi marbana cahiya.....

Agar, Monu ko mila apni Maa ki kasi hui Gund ka rasila ched, to maja hi aa jaya....
Monu apni Maa sa bahut piyar karta ha, or apni Maa sa thoda Dominate vi hota ha......
Agar Maalti Mummy, Monu ki malish kar rhi ho, or Monu ka pura sashir tel sa lapa lap ho...
Or Lund apni Maa ki Jawani pa hillora mar raha ho...
Asa ma Monu, apni Maa pa chad jaya, or apni Maa Maalti ki ulta leta ka, unha nangi karka, apna tel sa Sana badan, apni Nangi Chuddakar Kamuk Sanskari Maa ki pith, Gand pa ragad raha ho, or fir usa apni Maa ki Pichwara ki Najuk Sensitive khula band hota Ched dikh jaya....
Or apni Maa sa request kara ki, Coma ka bad, pahali Chudai usa uski Maa ki Gand marka karni ha.....
Or apna Ladla ki dil na todhna ka liya, Maalti apni Pichwara usa dana ka liya man jaya....
Or suru ho jaya Maa ki Gand ki Uthghatan, pahala to, Jiv sa, fir ungli sa, fir Maa ki Lund, Monu ki Lund sa....
Tab to maja hi aa jaya ......
Is ma Maalti apni Pichwara khol ka Monu ka muh pa bath ka vi usa pura Dominate kar sakti ha, or Whose your Mummy.....
Aa vi dikha sakti ha.....

Or agar Satyam ko moka mila....
To aap ki idea vi mast ha.....
Maalti Mummy apni Pichwara khol ka Subha Subha keth ma hugna bath jaya....
Or Satyam khada khada unki Muh ki Chudai kara, or asa ma Maalti Mummy apni Pichwara sa Dhamaka or aga sa mut ka dhar vi chor da, jissa Satyam ki Pair gili ho jaya.....

Fir Satyam, Maalti Mummy ko apni hugi hui Pichwara dhona na da, balki usa chat ka saf kar da, or taja taja hugi hui Pichwara ma apna Lund dal ka,Monu ki Maa ki Gand hi fard da....
Or is Chudai ka doran, Maalti firsa apni Pichwara sa dhamaka kara Furrrrrrrrr farrrrrr fusssssss......
Or for ussa aa vi iltaja, kara ki usa chor da, nhi to Kutiya bank Monu ki Maa, Uska Lund pa hi apni Pichwara ki Pichkari chor dagi.....

Fir Satyam apni Chachi ko, goad ma utha ka, yoni ma Lund pala, ucchal ucchal ka....
Or dono Pichwara ki fako ko khich da....
Or chuta chudta Maalti Mummy, apni Pichwara sa sara Maal keth ma jhardh da, or sath hi, Satyam ki Lund ma mut vi da.....
To maja hi aa jaya....

Or aa Scene ki swakshi agar Monu khud ban jaya, tab to or vi maja aa jaya.....
Daaaaya raaaaaa.....


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[dirty_thoughts]

Bhai next update kabtak aayega... Maalti ki kamuk gaand chudai ke liye wait nahi ho pa raha hai...

Bahut Bahut Dhanyabad Bhai for Amazing Support


NXT Update Friday warna Saturday Morning mein aayega

 

[dirty_thoughts]

Ek shandar update hai. Kahani apni gati se aage badhai hi chahiye. Sirf chudai ki hi asha nahi karni chahiye varna kahani ki atma mar jayegi.
Ek to mai un logo se kahna chahunga jo bina poori kahani ke padhe apne ulte seedhe bayan dete rahte hai. Is kahani ka naam hi Malti Ka Kamuk Sansar hai to aise me uski kamukta ka bakhan bhi jaruri hai aur uske liye writer itni mehnat kar raha hai. Malti ki pichhle complete bhag me sirf ek bar chudai hui hai vo bhi khud ke bete Monu ke sath aur is bhag me ek hi chatai par Satyam ke sath do bar. Mujhe ashcharya hota hai log in do bar ki chudai ko Malti ko randi kaise kah sakte hai. Writer ki kabliyat hai ki vo main character ki sirf 3 bar ki chudai me hi pichhla poora part complete aur is part me 329 page kheench le gaya aur sabhi pathak pasand bhi kar rahe hai. Aap log gaur kare is kahani me sabse jyada chudai to Savita ki hui hai. Us par koi comment nahi kar raha. Vo is kahani ki best supporting heroin hai.

Ab Sarpa ka fir se kahani me pravesh ho gaya hai to chinta ki lakeerein mere mathe par khich gai hai kyoki kai sawal jehan me umad rahe hai. Kya vo fir se Malti khushiyo me aag laga degi ? Kya fir Monu ko target karke use gambhir chot pahunchayegi ? Kya fir ek bar vo Budhe Baba Malti ke parivar ki raksha kar payenge ?
Mujhe lagta hai kahani fir yahan se ek naya mode legi.
Aage kya rochak hoga intjar rahega. Thanks Monu bhai.

Bahut Bahut Dhanyabad Ashiq Baba Bhai maine apni kahani k lagbhag sabhi jaruri characters ko jama diya hai aur ab baari hai kahani main adventure Action or lust ka full doze dene ki

Maine kabhi bhi sirf Sex Activity k baroshe kahani nahi likhi na likhunga, but it's log kiya chahte hai main samajh nahi pa raha hu

Jabki mein suru se bolta hua aa raha hu ki ye ek Adultery Story hai, yaha Maalti ka multiple logo se relationship banega hi banega

Overall jab aap jaise dost kahani ki atma ko samajh k sath dete hai toh bahut himmat milti hai

Aapke support k liye Dil se Dhanyawad

 

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Kahani ka blue print starting me ready nahi hota. Bas ek vichar writer ke dimag me aata hai aur kahani ko gadhna shuru hota hai. Dhire dhire jaise kahani aage badhti hai vaise vaise samay ki mang ke hisab se character rache jate hai uska ek role tay kiya jata hai. Ek kabil writer ki khasiyat hoti hai ki vo us character ke hisab se kab scene create karta hai. Kahani ko rochak banaye rakhne ke liye aage badhane ke liye kab kis kirdar se kya karwana hai taki kahani aage badhne ke sath sath rochak bhi bani rahe aur usme vajan bhi bana rahe aur kahani ki mool aatma par koi dushprabhav na pade. Vaise niyamit pathko ko achhe se pata hoga ki Jaggi bahut pahle se Malti ke chakkar me rahta hai. Vo Malti ki pahli chudai se thik pahle bhi barish ki raat me nashe me dhutt barish me bhigte hue Malti ke ghar ke paas ke ped ke niche maujud tha jahan se usne Malti ke jheth Mahendra ko bahar nikal kar jate hue dekha tha.

Jaan k bahut acha laga ki aapko itni choti si baat aur main detail yaad hai

Ye mere liye bahut badi baat hai

Keep Reading Bhai Ashiq Baba

 

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सबसे पहले तो आपका स्वास्थ्य कैसा है dirty_thoughts भाई ? पूर्ण रूप से स्वस्थ हो गए आप ?

बहुत समय से इस कहानी पर अपने विचार साझा करना चाहता था, लेकिन व्यस्तताओं के चलते ऐसा संभव नहीं हो पाया। हाल के दिनों में देखा है कि पाठकों में कहानी को लेकर काफी नाराज़गी देखने को मिल रही है, मुख्यतः इसलिए कि उनकी अपेक्षाएं पूरी नहीं हो पा रही हैं।

मगर मेरा एक विनम्र सवाल है, जब लेखक ने प्रारंभ से ही इस कहानी को ‘adultery’ की श्रेणी में रखा है, तो आप उसमें ज़बरदस्ती 'incest' की अपेक्षा क्यों कर रहे हैं? यदि ऐसा किया गया, तो लेखक की मूल रूपरेखा ही बिखर जाएगी, और कहानी की आधारशिला ढह सकती है!

संभव है कि लेखक अगली कहानी में आपकी अपेक्षाओं को प्राथमिकता दे, लेकिन इस विशेष कथा में उस दिशा में जाना न केवल असंभव है, बल्कि कथा की आत्मा के विरुद्ध भी होगा!

Bahut Bahut Dhanyabad rajeev13 Bhai for Support

Pehle k comparison ab kaafi acha hu aur wapas se Dukan bhi jana suru kar diya hai

Meri kahani suru se hi Adultery thi aur rahegi main use nahi badalne wala, bhale hi kahani q na band kar du

Par jab tak aap jaise dost hai mujhe nahi lagta meri ye Yatra rukne waali hai

 

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Update ka besabri se intjar hai

Thank You so Much royalroy Bhai for Support

NXT Update bahut jaldi aayega, Keep Supporting

 

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एकदम सही कहा आपने । एक राइटर और एक समझदार पाठक इस बात को अच्छे से समझ सकते है ।

Ashiq Baba rajeev13

 

[dirty_thoughts]

Bhai agr malti ki chut kundan na phadi toh malti gaand muno padhe dono baap beta hi aage tumari mrji bro u r superb writer

Sabse Pehle toh aapke Prem aur sahyog k liye koti koti dhanyawad vijay19884verma Bhai

Baki aapka Suggestion kaafi acha hai, main espe jarur dhiyan dunga

Keep Reading Bhai