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Update #03

Anokhi ki Maut k theek 10 dino Baad, Mumbai jaise bade sehar me Police Headquarter pe

"Ye pehli baar nahi hai.. jab Sundarpur Gaon me aisi ajeeb maut hui hai, esse pehle bhi humne us Gaon me apna ek khabri banaya tha"

Apni aramdayak kurshi pe baitha hua ek aadmi jiska pait nikla hua tha aur uske samne padi Table pe uski nameplat rakhi hui thi jispe 'Nawab Khan' likha tha

Nawab Khan naam ka ye aadmi es samay apne samne baithe ek aadmi se baat kar raha tha.. jiske sar k baal naam matr k bache thay aur aankhon pe bada sa chasma chada hua tha

"Aap sayad 'Gufran' ki baat kar rahe hai"

Khan- Sahi kaha 'Yadav'

Khan aur Yadav karke in dono aadmiyon ne es samay Sade kapde pehne hue thay.. par unki baaton se wo koi sarkari naukar pratit ho rahe thay

Yadav- Yani dono Mauton ka jimmedar koi ek hai ?

Khan Apna sar ha me hilata hai aur apni baat ko aage kehta hai
"ha sahi kaha.. jis rahasya ko pata karne k liye humne 'Gufran' ko apna khabri banaya tha, jiske bare main use kuch pata bhi chala tha par esse pehle hi sachai bahar aa pati uska bhi wahi haal hua

Theek usi prakar use bhi maar k bina kapdon k usi talab main dal diya gaya tha, aur ab ye aurat 'Anokhi'"

Yadav apne chasme ko sahi karte hue
"Ye sab ittefak toh nahi ho sakta Sir"

Khan jiske haav bhaav se hi pata chal raha tha uska rutba jada hai
"Sahi kaha.. esliye main chahta hu ki us Gaon me phir se hamara koi aadmi ho, par es baar aisa koi jo har muskil se nipatna janta ho"

Yadav jo phir se apna chasma sahi karta hai aur kehta hai
"Aapki baat sahi hai par Aapke Department main ek se ek Police Officer hai, phir mujhe q bulaya ?"

In dono ki baaton se ye toh pakka ho chuka tha ki ye Police Department ka hissa hai, par jism pe koi wardi nahi thi

Khan apni seat se khada hota hai aur thodi chahalkadmi karte hue
"Yahi toh Problem hai, Sundarpur or ass pass k sabhi 5 Gaon pe 'Thakur Balwant Pratap Singh' ka raaj chalta hai"

Yadav- (Apne Dimag pe jor lagate hue) Thakur Balwant Pratap Singh, ye wahi hai na jisne abhi kuch dino pehle rulling Party ko ek mota chanda diya hai

Khan- (Wapas Apni Kurshi pe baithate hue) Sahi kaha, aur tum toh jante hi ho hamare Neta kaise hai.. jo aadmi unhe Chande k roop main kaali kamai deta hai, uske wo tatte tak chatt sakte hai

Yadav- (Sochte hue) Aapki Baat sahi hai, par main samajh nahi pa raha aapko meri kiya jarurat hai ?

"Tumhare Department ka kaam hi logo k kaale dhan ka pata lagana hai.. jiske liye wo logo k beech rehkar apni pehchan chupana ache se jante hai"

Yadav bus ha main sar hilata hai aur Khan apni Baat aage kehta hai

"mujhe koi aisa aadmi chahiye jo apni pehchan chupane me mahir ho aur jarurat aane pe hathiyar chalana bhi janta ho"

Yadav- Agar main galat nahi hu.. toh ye sab on Paper nahi hone wala hai na ?

"Ha.. Qki 'Thakur Balwant Pratap Singh' un sabhi Gaon me kisi Police waale ko aane nahi deta.. aur bade bade Neta uski baat nahi talte, aur wajah tum jante hi ho"

Yadav- Paisa.. Chanda.. Kaala Dhan

Khan bus ha me apna sar hila deta hai,

Yadav kuch dair sochne k baad
"hmm.. ek aadmi hai, par bahut tedi khopadi hai"

Khan- Es samay hume aise hi aadmi ki jarurat hai, qki Sundarpur ka rahasya suljhane k liye koi aisa hi chahiye.. jo lodmi jaisa chalak aur hamare liye kutte jaisa wafadar ho

Yadav- (Muskura padta hai) Usmain in dono janwaro waali khubiyan toh hai, par sath sath Sand waali aadat bhi hai

Khan jaise Samajh na paya ho

Yadav- (Muskurate hue) Gadrai Gaay ki chadai karna

Khan has padta hai aur sath hi sath Yadav bhi

Khan- (Muskurate hue) Usse hume koi problem nahi.. agar kaam k sath sath wo thodi bahut masti bhi kar le toh hume kiya, waise konsa naam hai tumhare dimag me ?

Yadav- aap toh jante hai me uski asli pehchan nahi bata sakta.. par uska Code Name 'Rocky' hai

Khan- Kaam toh kar lega na ?

Yadav- Aapne Sundarpur Gaon k bare me jo bataya hai.. uske hisab se wahi hai jo ye kar sakta hai

Khan- Phir Dairi kis baat ki.. lagao use es mission pe


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Ye puri Kahani Sundarpur Gaon k logo ki hai.. esliye aage badne se pehle thoda es Gaon ki estithi bhi jaan lete hai


Sundarpur Gaon kuch aisa hai jise dekh k aap keh sakte hai ye aaj bhi bahari Duniya se puri tarah kata hua hai

Or eski Sabse Badi wajah hai 'Thakur Balwant Pratap Singh' aur unke Purvaj.. waise kehte hai kabhi esi Pariwar k log yaha k Raja hua karte thay

Yaha aaj bhi aapko Sahukari jaisi rudhiwadi parampara mil jayegi, toh Bank jaisi suvidhayen bhi

Gaon ki Abadi achi khasi hai, yani yaha logo ki tanik bhi kami nahi hai.. khaskarke Ladkiyon aur mahilaon ki

Qki jadatar Mard paise k liye Gaon se bahar jana pasand karte hai.. waise es Gaon ki mukhya jeevika kheti hi hai

Eske alawa Gaon main 2 bazar bhi lagte hai.. jaha aas pas k sabhi Gaon wale bhi aate hai

Pehla Bazar 'Choti Mandi' ya 'Chota Bazar' k naam se jana jata hai.. jaha aapko dainik jaruraton ka sara saman mil jayega, sabji fal Kapdon ki 1-2 dukan aur mochi, Saloon, Mithai aur aisi sabhi cheeze

Waise es bazar main logo k ghar bhi hai.. jadatar logo ne apne gharon main hi aage dukan nikal rakhi hai, jismain se kuch dukan logo ne kiraye pe de rakhi hai aur kuch me khud hi apna rojgar karte hai

Wahi Dusra Bazar 'Bade Bazar' k naam se jana jata hai.. yaha Sundarpur aur ass pass k 5 Gaon k logo thok main anaj ko kharedne aur baichne ka kaam karte hai

Esi Bade Bazar k pass Gaon ka eklauta 'Cold Storage' bhi hai.. jiske Malik Gaon k sarpanch 'Sheikh Sahab' hai

Wahi es anaj ki mandi ko sambhalne ka kaam 'Pahalwan' karta hai

Sundarpur Gaon ki Purav (पूर्व) disha me ek pahadi hai jise aaj tak koi bhi paar nahi kar paya hai, aisa nahi hai ki kisi ne koshish nahi ki.. par jo bhi es pahadi ko paar karne ki koshish karta hai wo kabhi bhi wapas nahi ata

Aur jaisa hi hum logo main andhvishwas ki koi kami hai.. toh es Pahadi ko leke bhi aisi baaten fail chuki hai

Gaon k kuch bache hue Buddhon ka kehna hai ki es Pahadi pe 'Yaksha' raaj karte hai esliye waha kisi ko aane nahi dete

Toh kuch pade likhe logo ka ye bhi manna hai ki us pahadi pe Daku' Chor, Badmash aur lutere chup k rehta hai.. esliye waha jo bhi jata hai koi laut k nahi aata

Wahi Gaon ki उत्तर disha main aisa ghana jungle hai jiska koi ant nahi.. es Jungle ki kahani bhi alag nahi hai, ki yaha bhi Jane wala kabhi laut k nahi aaya

Kehte hai jungle itna ghana hai ki jungle k beech main Suraj ki roshni tak nahi pahuchti

Esliye koi bhi Jungle k jada andar jane ki galti nahi karta

Waise es Jungle k thoda hi andar kai khubsurat chote chote chupe talab bhi hai.. jaha Gaon k kuch manchale aur Manchali apni bhook miltane aati hai

Ab konsi Bhook ye batane ki aapko jarurat nahi.. qki yaha mere sabhi Dost bahut Samajhdar hai

पश्चिम main Sundarpur Gaon, baki k 5 alag alag Gaon se judta hai

Surajmukhi Gaon, Pulhwa Gaon, Lobhi Gaon, Haripur aur Menaka puri Gaon

Ye wo Paanch Gaon hai jo Sundarpur k sath jude hue hai..

Par aisa nahi hai ki.. ek se dusre Gaon main jana koi itna asan hai, kabhi aapko Nauka ki sawari karni padegi toh kahi aapko Baansh ka Pul paar karke Jana hoga toh kabhi Aapko kisi jungle k beech se gujarna padega

Par in sabhi kathinaiyon k baad bhi ye sabhi Gaon ek dusre se jude hai

Waise ek Pakka rasta hai bhi hai ek se dusre Gaon main jane ka, jispe sarkari Bus bhi chalti hai par wo kaafi lamba aur ghumavdar rasta hai.. jismain acha khasa samay lagta hai

Wapas Sundarpur ki baat kare toh yaha दक्षिण main ek Station bhi hai.. aur sahi mayne main yahi es Gaon main aane ka sabse surakshit rasta bhi hai

Sundarpur Gaon k liye hafte main sirf ek hi train chalti hai aur wo bhi subha bhor main 4 baje yaha pahuchti hai, aur kabhi dair ho gayi toh aadhi raat hi yaha k Station pe pahuchti hai

Eske alawa bus ka bhi ek tarika hai, par uske liye ek ghana jungle aur phir pahadi chetr jaha har samay lut ka khatra bana rehta hai use paar karna padta hai

Waise yee rasta 'Menaka puri Gaon' se hoke aata hai

Waise yaha aane waali ye Train sirf 2 Station pe hi rukti hai, pehla Sundarpur or dusra 'Pulhwa Gaon' me bane station pe

Aur kabhi kabhi Train pehle Station yani Sundarpur main bhi nahi rukti toh logo ko ulta wapas aana padta hai..

Jiske liye unhe pehle ek chote se Gaon 'Surajmukhi' k Beech se behne waali nadi 'Sarpa' paar karni padti hai jiske liye nauka ka sahara lena padta hai

Waise ye Nadi 'Sarpa' in sabhi gaon ko apas main jodti bhi hai.. aur yaha ki hariyali ki pramukh wajah bhi hai

Par sath hi sath es Nadi ne kai jaane bhi chini hai.. kaiyon ka andhvishwas toh ye bhi kehta hai ki ye 'Sarpa' nadi asal main ek 'Yakshini' ka ghar hai aur usi ka naam Sarpa tha

Par kon jane.. kiya sach hai aur kiya andhvishwas

Aur yahi sab wajah hai ki har koi Train ka safar hi chunta hai


Jabbar ne Anokhi or Monu k sath jo kiya uske ek Mahine baad

Maalti nange Paon ek bade se Peepal k paid k charo taraf chakkar laga rahi thi.. uski aankhon se aanshu beh rahe thay aur lagatar chalte rehne ki wajah se uske paon main dard aur kai kankad pathar chubne ki wajah se khoon bhi nikalne laga tha

Par wo ruk nahi rahi thi wo nirantar apni aankhon ko band kiye hue aur hath jode hue us Purane Peepal k paid k chakr kaat rahi thi aur uske honth baar baar bhagwan ka naam dohra rahe thay

"Bandh karo ye.. pichle 3 gante se aise hi chal rahi hu, bimar pad jaogi"

Maalti apni aankhon ko kholti hai toh uske samne uska Pati Kundan khada tha

subha ka Suraj dhire dhire Ashman ki taraf badne laga tha jiski kirne es samay uske pati k sarir pe pad rahi thi

Maalti- (Usi Prakar us Ped k aage hath jode hue) Apne Bete ki sehat k liye main jo kar sakti hu wo karungi

Aur uski aankhon se aanshu beh nikalte hai, us pal Kundan ka dil bhi paseej gaya tha wo aage badne ki sochta hai.. sochta hai ki apni Patni ko apni baahon main leke uske samjhaye

Par tabhi uski aankhon k aage Premlata ka chehra aa jata hai, maano wo Kundan ko dekh k has rahi ho
'Itni jaldi sab bhool gaye.. bhul gaye ki Maalti ne tumhe dhokha diya hai'

Aur Kundan k badne waale kadam wapas se ruk jate hai.. aur Patni ko dekhte hue thoda ghusse se kehta hai

"Ye sab andhvishwas hai aur kuch nahi, main kehta hu Ghar chalo.. waise bhi yaha koi nahi aata, sapit hai ye vraks"

Maalti- Abhi 50 chakkar aur purn karne hai.. usse pehle main ye band nahi kar sakti, aur apne bete k liye main koi bhi shaap se lad sakti hu

Kundan kuch kehna jarur cha raha tha, par wo Janta tha ki Maalti es samay sirf ek Maa hai aur wo uski koi baat nahi sunne waali

Esliye wo palat k bina kuch kahe wapas Gaon ki taraf chal deta hai.. aur Maalti bhi wapas se us Gaon k bahar ekant main us eklaute Peepal k Ped k chakkar lagana suru kar deti hai

Maalti ka pura jism paseene main bheeg chuka tha, pairon main aisa dard hone laga tha maano paka phoda ho.. par wo tab tak nahi rukti jab tak wo us Peepal k Ped ki 101 baar parikrama puri nahi kar leti

Aur jaise hi 101 parikrama puri hoti hai uska jism kaanpna suru ho jata hai wo jaldi se usi Peepal k Ped k chaav me baith k buri tarah haafne lagti hai

"Paani piogi Putri"

Achanak ek sukun deni waali aawaz Maalti k kaano main padti hai.. na jane us aawaz main alag kiya tha, qki Maalti ki thakan jaise gayab honi suru ho gayi thi

Maalti aawaz ki dish main dekhti hai toh 80-90 saal ka ek buddha jo sidhi tarah khada bhi nahi pa raha tha.. na jane waha achanak kaha se aa gaya tha aur wo ab us Peepal k paid k pass jameen main maano kuch dhund raha ho

Maalti- (Charo taraf dekhte hue) Aap kon hai.. aur kab aaye ?

Buddha jameen se ek Patta uthate hue
"Main kon hu.. kiya batau.. ab toh mujhe khud bhi yaad nahi, na mera ateet.. na vartman"

Maalti- Baba.. main kuch samjhi nahi ?

Wo buddha Maalti ko wahi Patta dete hue jo usne abhi abhi jameen se uthaya tha
"Meri Choro tum batao.. Mitansh ko leke pareshan ho"

Maalti ko jaise jhatka lagta hai.. us buddhe ko uske Bete ka naam kaise pata hai, waise bhi agar koi janta bhi hai toh wo use Monu hi kehta hai.. ye asli naam toh khud usne bhi apne bete ka saalon se nahi liya hoga

Maalti- (Na jane q uske hath judte chale jate hai) Aap kon hai Baba.. mere Bete k bare main kaise jante hai ?

"Abhi toh kaha.. main kon hu, ye khud nahi janta

Rahi tumhare Bete ki baat toh bus ye samjho.. in patton ne bata diya mujhe"
Buddhe ne muskurate hue uper hawa se hilate hue ped or uske patton ko dekhte hue kaha tha

Maalti ko kuch bhi samajh nahi aata, par apne bete ko soch k uski aankhon main aansu jarur aa jate hai

Buddha- Ab tumhari Zindagi main in aanshuyo k liye jagah nahi hai, ek badi jung hone waali hai.. jismain bahut kuch daav pe lagne wala hai

Maalti- Aapki baatein itni rahasya se bhari hui q hai.. aur kaisi jung

Buddha- (Muskurate hue) Zindagi se badi Jung aur kiya hogi.. aur rahasya toh hum sabhi ki zindagi main hai, par yaad rakhna har rahasya ki kadiyan hamare beete hue kal se judi hoti hai

Maalti- Main samjhi nahi.. Baba

Buddha Muskurate hue
"Har cheez ki keemat hoti hai.. jab lage wo Inshan us Keemat ko chuka sakega, tabhi use aur sawal karne chahiye

waise ese paani main ghol k pila dena.. Mitansh theek ho jayega"

Maalti ko samajh nahi aata ki wo Buddha kis cheez ki baat kar raha hai.. par esse pehle ki wo koi sawal karti hai, ek halki si aandhi si aati hai jis wajah se ek pal k liye Maalti ki aankhein band ho jaati hai

Aur jab Maalti wapas apni aankhon ko kholti hai toh waha koi nahi tha.. ye Peepal ka paid Gaon k dur ek ekant aur khuli jagah main tha phir agar koi yaha se aise jayega bhi toh wo nazar aana chahiye tha

Par waha Maalti k alawa koi tha hi nahi, Maalti ko kuch bhi samajh nahi aa raha tha ki ye sab kiya tha

Tabhi Maalti k uper us Peepal k Ped k kai patte ek sath girte hai aur jab Maalti uper dekhti hai toh use aisa lagta hai jaise koi laal kapda ek pal k liye un patton k beech lehraya ho

Bilkul waisa hi jaisa us buddhe ne dharan kiya tha, Maalti ko kuch bhi samajh nahi aa raha tha aur yahi wo pal tha jab uski nazar apne hath main thame ek safed phool pe jaati hai

Use yaad ata hai ki us buddhe ne use jameen se ek patta utha k diya tha.. par ye phool uske hath main kaha se aya aur wo patta kaha chala gaya

Maalti ko kuch bhi samajh nahi aata, wo bahut dair tak wahi baithi apne Bete k liye aanshu bahati rehti hai aur phir wapas chal padti hai.. apne Bete 'Monu' k pass

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Update #04

Puri tarah se jawan ho chuka Satendra yani Sattu charpai pe baitha hua aaj se theek 23 dino pehle k us khubsurat nazare me khoya hua tha jo usne us raat dekha tha jab wo Bhanu Fufa k yaha unhe aur apni Bua Sheela ko bulane gaya tha

Sattu es baare me jitna soch raha tha uske jism me utni hi aag lag rahi thi.. qki wo khubsurat nazara uski aankhon se dur hi nahi ho raha tha

Sattu ki Maa yani Savita es samay Harshita k sath milkar Rasoighar me khana bana rahi thi aur uske Pitaji aur 'Chacha Kundan' ghar k bahar kuwe k pass baithe hue baaton me vyast thay

Veeru aur Bhanu kahi gaye hue thay

aaj kal pura pariwar ek hi chatt k neeche thay aur uski wajah Monu k sath jo hua.. wo thi

Sattu es samay usi charpai pe baitha hua tha jispe Monu beshoshi ki halat me pada hua tha

Asal main ye Mahendra yani Maalti k bade Jeth ji ka hi faisla tha ki Monu ko kabhi bhi akela nahi chora jayega, har samay kisi na kisi ka uske sath rehna jaruri hai

esi karanwas es samay Sattu Monu k pass hi uski Charpai pe baitha hua tha.. par wo alag hi khubsurat khayalon main khoya hua tha jismain kamukta hi halki milawat bhi thi

Sattu es lambi saans lete hue apne lower k uper se hi apne lund ko sehla deta hai aur kuch palon k liye uski aankhen band ho jaati hai jaha un band aankhon se bhi use ek hi drishya nazar aata hai

Uski Khubsurat Sheela Bua jo es samay puri tarah nivastr apne bistar pe so rahi thi.. Sattu ko apne khayalon me aisa lagta hai maano Sheela use apne pass bula rahi ho

Puri tarah jawan ho chuka Sattu in khubsurat yaadon me kho sa jata hai aur apne lund ko sehlate hue apni Bua k nange jism ko yaad karta rehta hai

tabhi uske kaano main halki si ahat sunai padti hai aur wo puri tarah sajag ho jata hai.. wo charo tarah dekhta hai jaha koi bhi khatra nahi tha

par tabhi uski nazar kamre k darwaje k bahar Jhadu lagati hui khubsurat Sheela ki jhalak milti hai

Sheela es samay baith k jhadu laga rahi thi, jis wajah se paseene ki nanhi nanhi bunden uske khubsurat gol aur kathor urojo pe kisi moti ki tarah nazar aa rahi thi

ye jara si jhalak bhi itni kamuk thi ki thi Sattu ka lund puri tarah salami dene laga tha.. na cha k bhi Sattu apne lund ko uper se neeche.. neeche se upar tak sehlane laga tha

par ye nazara jada dair tak nahi chalta qki Sheela jhadu lagate hue darwaje k pass se aage bad jati hai aur khubsurat nazara khatam ho jata hai

Sattu- (Ek lambi si aaah bharte hue Behosh Monu ko dekhte hue kehta hai) ek baat batau Bhai.. pata nahi q aa kal har aurat main mujhe Sheela Bua hi nazar aati hai, kitni khubsurat hai na apni bua.. uffff kiya jism hai na Monu..

Sattu apni hi baat pe thoda sharma sa jata hai, par aage kehta hai
"waise sabse badi baat hai ki main apni ye khuwaish kisi ko bata bhi nahi sakta.. aur kiya kahunga ki mujhe 'Sheela Bua' achi lagne lagi hai"

Sattu ek lambi si saans chorte hue Monu k hath ko pakadte hue aage kehta hai
"Ye sab tujhse bata raha hua, par tu bhi kaha kuch sun raha hoga.. aisa nahi hai ki maine koshish nahi ki"

Sattu ek baar darwaje ki taraf dekhta hai aur phir aage kehta hai
"Maine bahut koshish kari ki Sheela Bua ko leke aisa kuch na Souchu, qki na hi ye samajik taur pe sahi hai.. na hi aisa kuch sambhav hai, par kiya karu Jeevan me pehli baar koi pasand aaya aur wo bhi apni hi Bua.. jo Shadishuda hai"

Sattu aage badta hai aur piyar se Monu k baalon ko sahi karte hue apni baat kehta rehta hai
"Main janta hu tujhe hasi aa rahi hogi ki Sattu Bhaiya ko ye kiya ho gaya hai ?

Par kiya karu main bahut koshish kar raha hu par sheela bua ko apne khayalon se nikal hi nahi pa raha hu.. har samay unka khubsurat chehra meri aankhon k aage ghumta rehta hai"

'ohooo.. kon hai wo khuskismat jispe hamare Sattu ka dil aa gaya.. jara mujhe bhi uske bare me batao"

Apne peeche se aani wali es aawaj se Sattu buri tarah dar jata hai, aur palat k dekhta hai toh andar aane waali aur koi nahi balki uski Bua Sheela hi thi

Bechare Sattu ki toh jaise saans hi atak gayi thi, chehra aisa neela padne laga maano kisi naag ne dash liya ho

Sheela- (Monu aur Sattu k pass aake wahi rakhi kurshi pe baithte hue) Batao batao.. kon hai wo khuskismat ladki ?

Sheela apne gale aur chehre se paseena pouchte hue.. apne hathon ko aise uthati hai maano angdai le rahi ho

Sattu- (Buri tarah sakpaka sa gaya tha) Kon.. kon si ladki Bua.. kon si...

Sheela- (haste hue) acha ji apne Chote bhai ko abhi abhi bata rahe thay ki kisi ka chehra har samay aankhon k aage ghumta hai, aur ab main puch rahi hu toh mujhse natak

Sheela Monu k piyare se chehre aur mathe par sneh se hath firate hue
"Dekh raha hai Monu, tera bada bhai tujhse toh piyar karta hai.. apne dil ki baat bhi batata hai par apni Sheela Bua se use jara bhi piyar nahi"

Piyar jaisa sabd bolke Sheela ne jaise Sattu k jakhm hare kar diye thay esliye bechara thoda bhuja bhuja sa kehta hai
Sattu- (Chehre pe jabardasti ki hasi laate hue) nahi Bua aisi koi baat nahi hai, aap galat samajh rahi ho.. main toh bus aise hi Monu se baaten karne ki koshish kar raha tha

Sheela- rehne de rehne de.. aaj tune bata diya ki tujhe apni Bua se bilkul bhi piyar nahi

Sattu- nahi Bua aisi baat nahi hai.. aapse toh mujhe bahut piyar.. mera matlab hum sabhi piyar karte hai, sach main aisa kuch nahi hai

Sheela- Chalo theek hai, waise kabhi koi pasand aaye toh tu mujhe bata sakta hai.. tu toh janta hai na mujhe experience bhi hai

Sheela apne aur Bhanu k prem vivah ki taraf eshara karte hue kehti hai

Sattu bechara kuch bol hi nahi paaya.. kuch palon tak puri shanti rehti hai

Sheela- waise kaisi ladki pasand hai tujhe, mujhe bata main waisi hi dhund laungi

Sattu- (feeki si hasi haste hue) Aap nahi dhund paogi.. acha Bua mujhe jara kuch kaam hai, aap agar Monu k pass hai toh hoke aau

Sheela- ha.. ha jarur q nahi, waise sach me tujhe kuch kaam hai ya apni Bua se bhaag raha tha, waise bhi main dekh rahi hu aaj kal tu mujhse kuch kata kata rehta hai

Sattu- (Dar jata hai, maano uski chori padki gayi ho) nahi.. nahi Bua aisa kuch nahi hai, aap aise hi sab soch rahi hu bus.. main aata.. aata hu

itna kehkar Sattu jaldi se kamre se bahar chala jata hai.. maano use dar ho jaise wo waha aur ruka toh apne dil ki baat na keh de

Sheela ko bhi badi hairani hoti hai.. ki aaj kal ese ho kiya gaya hai, asal main Sheela Jab andar aayi toh usne sirf chehre waali baat hi suni thi esliye use jada kuch samajh nahi aaya

par phir wo esi nishkarsh pe pahuchti hai ki aaj kal ghar main har koi Monu ko leke pareshan hai.. esliye Sattu bhi esi se gujar raha hai

Sheela mamta bhari nazron se Monu ko dekhti hai aur piyar se uske mathe pe hath rakh k bolti hai
"tu jaldi se theek ho ja.. phir dono milkar Sattu k liye koi achi si ladki dhundenge"

Ab Sheela ko kon samjhaye uske Bhatije Sattu ko ladki nahi ek aurat ki chahat hai


Esi din shaam ko Gaon k bade bazar me Kundan apne kandhe pe apna gamcha rakhe hue bazar k beecho beech chala ja raha tha

Kundan k dimag me ab bhi uska Beta hi chal raha tha jise abhi tak hosh nahi aaya tha

'itni Jaldi main kaha Chal diye Kundan Bhaiya"

tabhi koi Kundan ko aawaz deta hai.. Kundan aawaz dene wale ko dekhta hai toh wo aur koi nahi balki usi k Gaon ka Pahalwan tha

Ye wahi Pahalwan hai jiski Baat Tyagi aur Vanraj kar rahe thay

Update #50, Part #01
https://xforum.live/threads/maa-k-kamuk-kisse-माँ-के-कामुक-किस्से.132410/post-9827277
"Itne saalon tak tumhe(Vanraj) sabse chupaye rakhne k liye hi maine Gaon k 'Pahalwan' k sath milkar aisi afwahen failayi ki es pahadi pe ek aatma ka vaash hai.. taki koi bhi yaha aane ki galti na kare"


In janab Pahalwan ka vistarpurvak parichay main aage dunga..

Kundan ko badi hairani hoti hai ki aaj samne se Pahalwan ne use aawaz kaise de di.. par kundan bhi uska pura samman karte hue
"Aap Bhaiyon ki kripa hai.. aap batayie kaise hai ?"

Pahalwan apne Sabdo me ras gholte hue
"kripa toh hamesha bade Bhai ki hoti hai.. aur wo aap hai, main toh aapka chota Bhai hu

waise aapke Bete k bare main suna bahut dukh hua"

Kundan k chehre pe bhi dard aa hi jata hai.. esliye wo kuch bol nahi pata bus ha me apna sar hila k reh jata hai

"Aao kundan Bhai yahi pass hi ghar hai, chalo ek ek cup chai ho jaye"

Kundan ko aaj Pahalwan ka andaaj bahut ajeeb lag raha tha jis aadmi se.. aaj se pehle kabhi uski baat bhi na hui ho, dono ek dusre ko dekh k apna apna rasta badal lete ho wo aaj itne piyar se baat q kar raha hai ?

Kundan- (Apni soch ko jahir nahi hone deta) jarur Bhai.. par aaj nahi aaj jara kuch kaam hai

Pahalwan- Chalo theek hai, koi nahi aap sayad mujhe apna nahi samajhte.. main toh aapko apna bada bhai hi manta hu

Kundan- nahi nahi Pahalwan aisi koi baat nahi hai, bus wo abhi sach me kuch jaruri kaam aur thoda jaldi main bhi hu.. bus esiliye

Pahalwan- acha theek hai bhai.. par agli baar aapki ek nahi sununga

kundan bhi haste hue
"Ha.. ha jarur Pahalwan"

itna keh k dono ek dusre ko alvida keh k aage bad jate hai

Pahalwan- (Kundan ko jaate hue dekh k hasne lagta hai aur khud se kehta hai) Behenchod teri wajah se mujhe pahalwani chorni padi thi na.. tujhe aise tadapte hue dekh k badi khushi ho rahi hai

Pahalwan apni muchon pe taav dete hue
"abhi toh teri pareshani aur tera ye dard aur badega.. jise dekh k mere dil ko asli thandak milegi

Aaj bhi main apni us beizzati ko nahi bhula hu jo teri wajah se hui thi.. saalon se es aag main jala hu main, par ab tere rone ka samay hai"

Kundan, Pahalwan k iraado se puri tarah anjaan apne kaam pe aage bad jata hai wahi Pahalwan bhi kuch dair tak use hi dekhta rehta hai aur phir wo bhi apne raste chal padta hai

Chaliye aage badne se pehle ye jaan lete hai ki aakhir ye mahoday hai kon ?

Sundarpur Gaon main 2 bazar lagte hai.. pehli Choti Mandi ya 'Chota Bazar' aur Dusra Bazar 'Bade Bazar' k naam se jana jata hai

Es Bade Bazar me ass pass k 5 Gaon k logo thok main anaj ko kharidane aur baichne ka kaam karte hai

Par Bade Bazar main sabse moti kamai hoti hai yaha ki anaj mandi se.. qki yaha ass pass k sabhi Gaon k Kishan apna anaj baichne aate hai aur phir yaha se ye sara anaj ass pass k bade sehro me jake baicha jata hai aur es anaj ki mandi ko sambhalne ka kaam 'Pahalwan' karta hai

Waise ye Anaj Mandi pe raaj karne wala ka naam 'Thakur Balwant Pratap Singh' hai aur Pahalwan unhi ka khas aadmi hai

Pahalwan jiska asli naam 'Mangal Singh' hai wo kisi jamane main pahalwani kiya karta tha.. par phir aisa kuch hua ki use pahalwani chorni padi

Aur tabse leke aaj tak ye Thakur Balwant ka khas hai

Thakur se nazar kuch log toh ese 'Thakur ka Kutta' bhi kehte hai

Pahalwan yani Mangal Singh k pariwar ki baat karu toh uske alawa es pariwar main 2 aur log bhi hai

Bulbul

35 Saal ki sawali par behad khubsurat aur gol Chehre ki Bulbul bilkul apne naam jaisi hai

Jiski Saloni surat dekh k kisi ka bhi lund chehakna suru kar de

Jadatar saree pehnne waali Bulbul ko dekh k Gaon k mard aksar yahi kehte hai
'Pahalwan jaise langur ko Bulbul k angur mile hai'

Bulbul jab pallu chada k chalti hai, toh uske chalne ka andaaz aisa hota hai ki dekhne waalon k arman machal uthte hai

Uski hilti hui gand ko dekhne k liye log apni saansen lena bhul jate hai aur bade bade gaay k than jaisi uski Chuchiyon ka mardan karne k liye har koi apne hisab se apne apne khayalon me kho jata hai

Waise bata du ki Pahalwan aur Bulbul k koi bacha nahi hai

Pahalwan k ghar ka aakhiri sadasya hai

Hansini

Jawani aur uski aag kiya hoti hai ye bus abhi abhi janna suru hi kiya hai esne

Kahaniyon aur filmon me Hero Heroine ko sath me piyar karte hue dekh k eska jism bhi akadne lagta hai.. ese bhi apni zindagi k Hero ka intizar hai

Aisa nahi hai ki School me kisi ladke ne koshish nahi ki, par Hasini ko na jane kiski talash hai aur wo kab jake puri hogi

Waise kabhi ye aur Monu ek sath ek hi class main hua karte thay.. par phir Monu k sath jo hua uske Karan use Delhi Jana pada aur uske baad se aaj tak ye dono mile nahi hai

Waise jin ladkon ne ese paane ki koshish ki hai usmain 'Satyam' bhi aata hai, par Hasini ne use theek waise hi nazarandaz kar diya jaise Election jeetne k baad 'Neta' desh ki janta ko karte hai

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Esi din raat main sabhi log Mahendra k yaha ghar k aangan main baithe hue thay.. aur inhe k sath Gaon ki ek do auraten bhi thi jismain se Monu k khas dost Khalid ki Ammi bhi thi jo ek taraf sabse alag apni hi soch main ghum Kundan ko dekhte hue kehti hai

"Kundan"

Kundan jaise achanak apni soch se bahar aate hue
"Ji Bhabijaan... kahiye"

Khalid ki Ammi 'Nasreen'
"waise us din hua kiya tha.. Monu tumhe mila kaise tha"

Nasreen ki baat sunkar waha har kisi ka dhiyan puri tarah Kundan pe aa chuka tha.. jismain sabse jada utawli Maalti thi

waise aaj es baat ko aaj 23 din ho chuke thay, par abhi tak Kundan ne us raat k bare main kisi ko kuch nahi bataya tha

Virendra urf Veeru, Kundan ka Chota Bhai
"ha Kundan Bhaiya.. us raat aapko Monu nadi main kaise mila tha.. hua kiya tha, aap nadi pe kaise pahuchne"

Kundan sabhi ki taraf dekhta hai aur ek lambi si saans lete hue jaise us din main wapas lautne lagta hai

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Esi samay Sarpa nadi k thande paani k beech se ek sawali par bhare jism waali kamuk si aurat paani se aise bahar aati hai maano wo sidiyon ko chadte hue uper aa rahi hai

Paani k bahar aate hi uski bheegi saree kuch jada hi jaldi sukhne lagti hai

par es samay es aurat k aankhen puri tarah laal thi, ghusse se uska har ang kaanp raha tha.. uske mukh se kuch sabd nikalte hai jo kisi jalte hue angaro se kam nahi thay
"Kundan.. tumne mere jal se ek jeevan ko bacha kar mera aahar cheena hai, tumne Maya k ghusse ko lalkara hai.. eska anjaam bahut dardaank hoga"

Bhai update bahut acha hai story aage aise hi badhti rahe

Monu bhai mai sirf apki story hi nhi apke story par readers ke comment bhi padhta hu
Jisse mujhe ye apki baat bilkul sahi lagi ki koi bhi maa jiska beta koma me pada ho wo kamuk nhi ho sakti turant to bilkul nhi use us samay apne bete ki chinta se badhkar kuch bhi nhi feel hoga
Aur uska kamuk dikhana bilkul bhi vyavharik nhi hoga

Lekin aise waqt par aurat bhavnatmak roop se bahut kamjor hoti hai aise waqt par use kisi mard ke dwara di gyi santvana ya hamdardi use prabhavit kar sakti hai
Ya wo aise kisi mard ke dwara kiye gye kaam jo ki uske aur uske bete ki bhaalai ke liye kiye gye ho jisse us maa ko us mard ki jatai gyi bhavnatmak chinta ko ek khaas apnepan ke roop me qabool kar sakti hai

Ek aurat apne kamjor waqt me ek aise hi apnepan ki bhuki hoti hai bhale hi apnapan dikhave ka ho ya kisi khaas maqsad ko pura karne ke liye ho
Wo aurat is waqt se bahut prabhavit hoti hai aur yahi waqt hota hai ki koi bhi mard chahe wo gair bhi ho wo uske dil me ghar kar leta hai aur aurat ko pta bhi nhi chalta hai
Aur agar ek baar koi mard aurat ke dil me kuch bhi feel kara sakta hai to aurat bhi use kuch n kuch response jarur deti hai bhale hi chahe uska beta koma me hai

ye nirbhar karta hai us mard par ki wo us aurat ko uske kamjor waqt me kaise prabhavit kre
Mai manta hu Beta ke koma me jaate hi ek do din me koi bhi maa aisi baato me dhyaan nhi degi lekin kuch samay baad wo chahe ek hafta ya ek mahina baad use jeewan ke sath chalna hi hota hai kyuki jindagi nhi rukti hai aur samay ke sath sath apne dukh ko handle karna seekh leta hai aur aage badhta hai

Maaf karna mere bhai malti ki kamukta bahar aane ke liye uske bete monu ke koma se bahar aane ka wait nhi kiya ja sakta hai kyuki jadibuti wo kha chuki hai jiske khatarnaak asar ke baare me apne story me bataya hai jiske asar se malti maa bete ka pavitra rishta bhulkar apne hi bete se chudaai kar baithi wo bhi ek raat me ek se jyada bar. to wo ek mard ka kuch n kuch response jarur degi aur jarur dena bhi chahiye kyuki jadibuti khai hai aur na bhi khai hoti to bhi bhavnatmak response jarur degi

Bhale hi teen mahine me aap malti ke sath sex n dikhaye lekin malti ka seduction ki shuruwat to dikha hi sakte hai

Malti ka kamjor waqt chal raha hai aur mujhe lagta hai bhanu ka yahi waqt kamjor lohe par hathoda marne ka uske qareeb aane ka use hamdardi ki aad me seduce karne ka isse acha waqt ho hi nhi sakta

Mai ye nhi keh raha ki har update me yahi seduction dikhao aap apni story ko bhi badhate rahiye lekin malti jo central charecter hai uska jajbato ka fayda uthane ka yahi sahi waqt hai use prabhavit karna shuru kijiye

Samay dene ke liye shukriya next update ka intejaar rahega

 

[Mukhtar]

Sabse pehle to dirty_thoughts ko mera asankhya dhanyawaad ki unhone is lajawaab kahani ko aur romanchit karne ke liye is 'nayi kadi/part' ko humare saamne pesh kiya. Humare lekhak un khaas logo mein se hai jo paathako ki advice aur sujhaav par dhyaan dete hai. Aise lekhak bare bhaagya se Xforum or Xforum pe dekhne ko milte hai. Aur isi liye inki kahani padne hum sab pathak hafto hafto besabri se intezaar karte hai.

Main lekhak se aur baaki pathako se vinti karta hu ki mera sujhav ka bura na maane, aur is comment ko sirf ek 'sujhav' ke nazar se dekhe. Mera iraada lekhak ko protsahan deke sirf is kahaani ko aur bhi behtar banana hain. Time kam hi sahi, pathak bhi dete hai. Is kahani mein ji tod mehnat ki jaa rahi hai. Likhne ka passion aur potential dono bemisaal hai. Main nahi chahta iska engagement gire isiliye apne lambe comment ke liye sabse maafi chaahta hu!

So,

Is Kahani ka extended introduction zaruri tha, acha kiya apne doosri kadi pesh ki

LEKIN...

Introduction ki ek dikkat hai. Naye introduction aur naye kirdaar, kabhi kabhi original kirdaar,puraane context aur unke resolution ko peeche chor/adhoora kar dete hai aur kahani ulajh sakti hai.

Aam taur par, kisi bhi lekhak ke nazar se dekha jaaye to uske banaye saare kirdaar important hote hai par paathak se pucha jaaye to jawaab alag alag milenge.

Kuch kirdaar aur unki gatividhi lupt hoti dikhayi de rahi hai, jaise ki -

1. Maalti. Lekhak ke anusar, isne wo hawas laddoo galti se khayaa hai jisse iska apne aap par ab koi kaaboo nahi hai. Par anokhi ke murder ne kahani ka angle hi ghuma diya aur kuch had tak is kahani ko complicated kar diya hai. Maana ki monu ki haalat ki wajah se wo gamghin hai par kab tak? Maalti kahani ka mukhya kirdar hai par monu se chudai ke baad ab tak ispe koi khaas baat chit hui hi nahi! Kahani bas iske ird-gird (kabhi past kabhi present) mein hi ghoom rahi hai.

Main samajh sakta hu lekhak central character ko chudwa chudwa ke surprise khatam nahi karna chahte. Shayad update 2075 mein uski chudayi dhang se dekhne mile. Par Agar aisa hai to itni jaldi hawas ka laddoo maalti ko khilaya hi kyun? Maalti ko Bhaanu ka lund dikha kar rijhaaya kyun? Ab yeh naya thread aur unki kahani aur unka sex...(lekhak se anurodh karta hu ki kahani ka ek - DIRECTION SET KARIYE)

2. Jabbar - Yeh khoonkhar aadmi chupa chupa hi firta hai, isne abhi tak Maalti ke hawas aur akelepan ka koi fayda nahi uthaya. Aur sab chor chaar ke monu ko khatam karne ke chakkar mein laga hua hai. Kya murder is kahani ka theme hai? Nahi. Kya ye maalti se akarshit hai? Haan. Kya use wo chodega? Iska bhi koi ata pata nahi - direction is undefined.

3. Mahendra. Iska aur maalti ka angle aaj bhi incomplete hai. Isne bhi abhi tak maalti ke akelepan aur hawas ka koi fayda nahi uthaya (jabki ye past mein maalti ko uski jawaani mein mast ragad chuka hai). Monu ka koma mein hona - shayad maalti aur iska angle ko badhawa deta aur Hume shayad dono ke beech ki hawas dekhne ko milti par is naye thread mein naye characters la diye gaye. Kabhi ye bhai sahab aate hai, kabhi ye jaate hai aur filhaal maalti ka kandha bane hue hai. Na jaane choot kab maraange!

4. Bhaanu. Isne bhi abhi tak maalti ke akelepan aur hawas ka koi fayda nahi uthaya (jabki ye past mein, maalti ke laddoo khaane ke baad, maalti ko apna lund pant/dhoti ke upar se dikha ke garam kar chuka hai. Yeh maalti ko gabhin karke badla lena chahta tha. Us din dono ke beech almost kuch ho jata par lekhak ne khade lund pe last maar di! Lekhak ke anusaar ye wahi hai, jiska pura ghar pariwar aur rishetdaar Maalti ki wajah se khatam ho gaye hai. Logic to yahi kehta hai isko maalti ke upar Dore daalne chahiye, use fasa ke bistar par laane ki koshish karni chahiye. Taaki badla le sake. Par ye kar kya raha hai? Apni biwi Sheela ke saath romance.

Tyaagi - Ye bhai sahaab jari booti dhundne aur 'Vanraj' ko thik karne gaye the pahadi waale mandir pe. Yeh wait karke dekhna chaahte the "Bhaanu kya karta hai", par Bhanu ko to biwi ki gaar maarne se fursat nahi..lol. Aur Vaid ji koi ata pata nahi!

Vanraj - Yeh 90's ke Kaanti Shah ke filmo ka bhoot Maalti ko chod ke gabhin karna chahta hai. Par iska WL kabhi confirm nahi hoga kyunki Vaid ji lapata hai, Bhanu ko biwi ki gaar maarne se fursat nahi, Monu Koma mein hai aur Mahendra sirf maalti ko dekh kar hilaata hi hai, Heera aur Panna ki entry baaki hai - aur ye sab ke sab Maalti ke coach mein apna RAC - ab tak confirm nahi karwa paaye aur Part 1 khatam bhi ho gaya. Is naye thread mein lekhak to poore Sundarpur gaon ko dikha rahe hain. Vanraj to..g..g..giyo!

Savita aur Satyam. Ye hamare priya lekhak ke priya characters hai. Lekhak aksar inhe chudwa ke maalti ki chudayi taalte hai. Inka sex repetitive aur boring lagne laga hai kyunki Savita kabhi shareef aur pativrata thi hi nahi - pehle se hi badchalan aurat thi. Uska chudna kisi aam randi ke chudne maafik hi lagta hai chaahe use uska beta chode ya koi aur xyz aadmi.

Anokhi. Part 1 mein jab wo mar hi chuki hai to part 2 (is naye threead) mein uski flashback chudayi dikha ke zaruri kirddaro aur unke milan ko delay karna...mujhe sahi nahi laga. Mere hisab se Anokhi ke past par 'detailed description' lekhak aur pathak dono ka waqt bardaad hai.

Ye sab character aur inka milan abhi bhi adhoora hai. Aur uske pehle hi lekhak ne Sheela aur Sattu, Bulbul aur Thakur BP Singh, Pehlwan Aur Hansini.....naye characters ka angle dikha diya.
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Mera 2 hi hai anurodh hai. Chota se hai. Gaur kariye ga please.

1. Kahaani ki theme par dhyaan dijiye. Kahaani ko disha dikhaiye prabhu!

Ya to Incest+Adultery kariye, ya fir Suspense Thriller dikhaiye ya fir Horror dikhaiye. Har naya theme apna description,context aur time maangti hai. Sab theme mix karne se kahani sirf lambi hogi, dilchasp nahi!

2. Kahani mein aapke banaye sabse important "jodiyo/sex couples" ko - ek ek karke priority dijiye.

Finish one couple's seduction sex and then start another couple's, scene by scene. Act by Act. Jitne naye kirdaar utni zyada likhne mein mehnat, puraane character ke milan ka delay aur ussay bhi jyada painful - important updates ke liye pathako ka lamba wait. These days over two weeks of wait.

Sorry Agar bura laga ho to. But aapne hi review maanga tha. My views are personal. You and other readers can feel free to disagree.

Asankhya dhanyawaad aapke keemti waqt aur mehnat ke liye

Apki baate aur suggestion dhyaan dene layak hai

Apki kai baate mere dimaag me bhi aati hai khas taur se story ke direction ki baat lekin mai manta hu ki mujh jaise readers ko thoda sabr rakhna chahiye kyuki story me kai naye cherecter introduce hote ja rahe hai ho sakta hai story me un charecters ka bahut importance ho

Lekin aapne baat sahi boli malti jo story ka main charecter use story se dur nhi kiya ja sakta
Apka reveiw acha lga ye batata hai ki storyline aur story ki timeline ko gambheerta se lete hai

 

[maurya]

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Ek request ha....
Gif ka nicha likh doga kya, Kon kisa Pel rha ha...
To dekh ka maja aa jata.....

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Rocky and Malti maa

 

[maurya]

Bhai Gifs to jabardas deta ho aap...
Ek request ha....
Gif ka nicha likh doga kya, Kon kisa Pel rha ha...
To dekh ka maja aa jata.....

❤❤❤❤❤

Rocky and Malti maa