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Monu wapas Mahendra k ghar k aangan mein ek Charpai pe laita hua tha
Tyagi ji- (Rahasymay mahole ka nirman karte hue) ab antim kriya baaki hai.. ?
Har kisi ki nazren es samay Charpai pe laite hue behosh Monu aur uske pass khadi Savita ki pe hi tiki hui thi, tabhi ghar k peeche bane naam matr k snanghar ki taraf se Tyagi ji aate hue nazar aate hai aur unke peeche peeche Sattu ek Baalti uthaye hue chala aa raha tha
Tyagi ji jaldi hi sabhi k samne khade thay aur unhi k pass Sattu bhi Balti liye hue khada tha maano Tyagi ji k agle adesh ka intizar kar raha ho
Tyagi ji- (Apni aawaz main bharipan aur rahasy utpan karte hue) Es Paani main ek khas jaldi buti milai hai aur ab ese dhire dhire Monu k uper sareer pe daala jayega, esliye agar ghar ki sabhi stree chahe toh yaha se ja sakti hai.. qki mujhe batane ki jarurat toh hai nahi ki mujhe Monu k sarir se sabhi kapde utarne padenge
Tyagi ji ki baat sunkar Mahendra.. Savita, Maalti, Sheela aur Harshita ki taraf dekhte hue
"Tum sabhi andar chali jao"
Maalti ka man bilkul nahi tha apne bete ko phir se yu chor k jane ka, par wo apne Jeth ji ki baat nahi taal sakti thi.. esliye wo aur uske sath baki aurate bhi jaldi hi andar ki taraf chal padti hai
Jaha Maalti, Savita aur Mahendra k kamre main bane ek chote se mandir k aage baith k prathana karne lagti hai.. uske kaan tarasne lage thay 'Maa' sabd sunne k liye
Yaha Bahar Tyagi ji Snanghar se jo Baalti bhar paani laaye thay usmain unhone kuch khas jadi butiyon ko milaya tha.. jiske bare main aage pata chalega
Tyagi ji, Monu k behosh pade sarir k pass khade hoke use dekhte hue
'Aaj tere jariye mein apni es nayi Jadi buti ka asar bhi dekh paunga'
Phir Tyagi ji apni soch se bahar aate hue Sattu ko eshara karte hai par usse pehle hi Kundan aage badkar apne bete yani Monu k sarir se kapdon ko alag karne lagta hai aur jaldi hi ek baar phir se Monu purn nivastr tha
Par apni Badi Maa ki yoni main gharsan k sath chudai karne k baad uska lund ab supt avastha mein tha
Tyagi, Sattu se baalti apne pairon k pass rakhwate hai phir apne jhole se ek kapda nikalta hai jisse ek ajeeb si gandh si aa rahi thi.. sayad usme bhi kisi prakar ki jadi buti ka laip laga hua tha
Tyagi ji ek baar sabki nazren bachate hue wahi khade Bhanu ki taraf dekhte hai toh use man hi man hasi aa jaati hai
Tyagi ji man hi man
'Mujhe pata hai es samay teri halat us naag jaisi hai, jisne nevle ko nigal liya ho.. aur ab wo use na ugal sakta hai, aur na nigal sakta hai'
Tyagi ki soch bilkul sahi thi, qki Bhanu bhi kuch aisi hi uljhan main fasa hua tha
Bhanu man hi man
'Kahi aisa toh nahi ki ye Tyagi mujhse jhoot bol raha hai, aur es Sapole ko hosh aate hi ye mera naam le le.. nahi nahi Tyagi ka kehna hai ki usne aisi jadi butiyon ka prayog kiya hai ki ese apne antim samay ka kuch yaad nahi hoga
Par agar kahi esne mujhe dhoka diya toh..'
Bhanu ye sochta hai toh uski mutthiyan ghusse se bhicti chali jaati hai
'Agar aisa hua toh aaj sabse pehle mere hathon yahi Tyagi marega, in sabko toh baad main dekhunga.. khoon ki holi kheli jayegi es ghar main aaj khoon ki'
Bhanu khud ko tayyar kar raha tha par wo jab Kundan ko dekhta hai toh maano uska josh hawa hone lagta hai
Bhanu khud ki soch main khud se kehte hue
'Tyagi ne agar khel bigada toh aaj main kisi ko nahi chorunga, bus ye Kundan akela bhari pad sakta hai mujhpe.. samay aaya toh aaj aar paar ki ladai hogi'
Tyagi, Bhanu ko dekhte hue mand mand muskura raha tha, maano jaise wo Bhanu k antarman main chalti baaton ko bhali bhanti sun pa raha ho
Mahendra- (Jo kabse Tyagi ji ko khade khade kuch sochte hue dekh rahe thay) kiya hua.. aage badiye
Tyagi ji maano hosh main aate hue
"Ha.. ha.."
Tyagi ji apne hath main thame hue us kapde ko us jadi buti mile hue paani main bhigote hai aur phir dhire dhire uska paani behosh pade Monu k sarir pe nichodna suru kar dete hai.. ye kaam agle 5-7 min tak yuhi chalta rehta hai ki achanak hi sabhi ko ek halki aah sunai padti hai
"Maaaaa..."
Sabhi k chehre pe maano jamane bhar ki khushi ek sath ubhar aayi ho, har koi Monu k pass aake khada ho jata hai agar kisi ko saq tha toh sirf Bhanu aur Satyam ko
Satyam apne andar chalti aawaz ko sunte hue
'Ye Madarchod Tyagi kiya sach main itna bada vaid hai'
Bhanu k man ka vichar
'Kahi hosh aate hi Monu mera naam na le le'
In dono k alawa har kisi ko es samay Tyagi ji sirf ek Vaid nahi balki koi chamatkar karne waale purush lag rahe thay
Mahendra khushi se bharte hue man hi man
'Mujhe purn yakeen tha, Tyagi Bhai hi hamare Monu ko theek kar sakte hai'
Virendra ki aankhein khushi aur hairani se badi hoti ja rahi thi
'Waah Tyagi Bhaiya ne toh sach main chamatkar kar diya'
Kundan
'Aakhir mera bacha theek ho jayega'
Har kisi k man me khushi ki nayi lehar daud padi thi
Tabhi Tyagi ji us baalti ka paani jo ab bus thoda sa hi bacha tha use ek hi baar main Monu k chehre pe udel deta hai aur aise main jaisa hota hai ki inshan ko saans lele main dikkat aane lagti hai theek wahi Monu k sath bhi hota hai achanak saans na le paane ki wajah se uska pura sarir ek tivr halchal paida karta hai aur achanak hi itne samay se behoshi ki halat main ghum Monu apni jagah uth k baith jata hai
Monu- Maaaaa.......
aawaz itni tez thi ki andar tak sabhi aurton ko sunai pad jata hai aur sabhi ki sabhi ek hi sath bahar bhaag padti hai
Mahendra ko andaza ho gaya tha ki ab sabhi ki sabhi aurte yaha aane waali hogi esliye wo jaldi se apne kandhe pe rakhne waale gamcha ko Monu k guptang yani uske lund k stan pe rakh deta hai
Edhar apne bete ki aawaz sunte hi prathana main leen Maalti k sarir main maano urja ka naya pravah sa behne laga ho, wo jaldi se bahar bhagti hui sabhi se aage Monu k pass aati hai aur kisi bhi baat ki parwa kiye bina use gale se laga leti hai.. es samay agar waha kuch tha toh sirf ek Maa bete ka prem
Sirf ek Maa ki mamta, es prem main hawas aur kamukta ka koi bhi ansh nahi tha
Maalti- Monu.. mere bache.. mera bacha
Maalti ye kehte hue Monu ko kaske gale se laga leti hai, pura hi vatavaran kuch aisa ho chuka tha ki waha maujud Sattu tak ki aankhen bhar aayi thi, baki Maalti ki aankhon se uski Mamta toh na jane kabse aansuon k roop main beh hi rahi thi
Monu- (itne samay baad pehli baar kuch kehta hai) Aaahh Maaa.. dhire, lagta hai moti ho gayi ho
Monu ki baat pe waha khda kundan tak has padta hai
Maalti haste aur mamta roopi aansu bahate hue usse alag hoti hai aur piyar se uske gaalon pe marte hue
"Nalayak apni Maa ko moti bolta hai"
Sabhi log ek baar phir se has padte hai, bus Bhanu hi ek aisa tha ki use dar tha ki kahi Monu uska naam na le le
Veeru- Beta tumhare sath us din kiya hua tha, kon tha jisne ye kiya ?
Veeru jo ab tak kuch nahi bolta tha aakhir wo bol padta hai, waise na jane wo kabse ye janna cha raha tha ki wo kon hai jo uske pariwar ka ahit karna chahta hai esliye itne samay baad Monu ko hosh main aate hue dekh k aakhir wo khud ko rok nahi paata ye sawal puchne se
Veeru k ye sawal karte hi Bhanu ki saanse maano rukni suru ho jaati hai, use dar lagne lagta hai ki kahi Monu ab uska naam na le le
Par Jab Monu apne Chote Chacha ki baat sunta hai aur es baare main sochta hai toh achanak uske sar main tivr dard sa mehsus hota hai
Use aisa lagta hai wo jo yaad karne ki koshish kar raha hai wo uske dimag mein maujud hi na ho.. sirf andhera hi andhera ho waha
Monu- Aaaaaaaahhhh..........
Monu ko yu cheekhte hue dekh k sabhi log buri tarah dar jaate hai wahi Maalti ka toh jaise kajela hi phat padta hai, wo jaldi se Monu ka chehra apne hathon k beech lete hue
"Kiya hua mere bache.. bol na Monu.. kiya hua"
Sabhi kaafi dar gaye thay siway Tyagi k qki wo muskura raha tha maano use pata tha ki yahi hoga
"Aaaahhhh.. pata nahi Maa kiya hua, mujhe kuch yaad nahi aa raha
Aisa lag raha hai jaise sab kuch bus andkar jaisa hai.. mujhe kiya hua hai tha kuch yaad q nahi aa raha hai
Main ghar se kheton k liye nikla tha par phir.. aaaaaaaaaahhhhh"
Monu ek baar phir se un palon ko yaad karne ki koshish karta hai par ek baar phir se uske sar me wahi dard suru ho jata hai
Tyagi ji- (Beech main bolte hue) Tumhe pareshan hone ki jarurat nahi hai beta, itne samay se behosh rehne ka karan kabhi kabhi antim palon ki kuch yaadein mit jaati hai.. par es samay kuch bhi ho jaye tumhe apne dimag pe bilkul bhi jor nahi dena hai
Qki abhi tum saririk roop se bahut kamjor ho chuke ho.. esliye puri tarah swasth hone main samay lagega"
Phir Tyagi sabhi ki taraf dekhte hue
"Aap sab se bhi meri vinti hai ki Monu ko kisi bhi cheez k liye pareshan na kare, aur jitna jada ho sake use prem de.. qki prem hi wo asli dawa hai toh es samay hamare Monu ko chahiye"
Mahendra- (Tyagi ji ki baat se sehmat hote hue) Aaj k baad koi bhi Monu se aisi koi baat nahi puchega jisse use pareshani ho.. baki samay k sath sath use sab kuch khud hi yaad aa jayega, esliye sabhi ko uske khaan paan ka khas dhiyan rakhna hai
Tyagi aur Mahendra ki baat se sabhi log bahut khus thay.. phir sabhi ek ek karke Monu ko gale lagate hue uske jaldi se theek hone ki kaamna karte hai
Tyagi ji sabhi ki taraf dekhte hai phir Kundan aur Mahendra ki taraf dekhte hue
"Waise toh Monu ab theek hai par purn swasth hone main use thoda aur samay lagega.. par main chahta hu ki"
Par phir Tyagi khud hi ruk jata hai aur muskura k monu ko dekhte hue kehta hai
"Are Bhai pehle, Monu ko kuch khilao pilao.. itne samay se bhooka hoga"
Aur phir Monu ko dekhte hue has k kehte hai
"Aur tu kiya nanga punga baitha hai sharam nahi aati"
Tyagi ji ki baat pe Monu ko apni estithi ka aabhas hota hai use pata chalta hai ki wo purn nanga hai sirf uske lund k stan pe ek gamcha pada hua hai
Tyagi ji ki baat pe pura ghar has padta hai, itne samay baad jake kahi es ghar main hasi ghunji thi toh sabse jada khushi Mahendra ko hi thi
Mahendra- Chalo chalo.. sabse Pehle Monu ko andar le jake kuch pehna do aur phir aaj se 1 hafte tak sirf Monu ki pasand ka hi khana banega es ghar main
Apne bade Taya ji ki baat sunkar Monu khusi se hath uthate hue
"Ye hui na baat"
Usi aisi bachon jaisi baat sunkar sabhi phir se khil-khila se padte hai
Jaldi hi Monu ko Sattu sahara deke wapas andar waale roop main le jane lagta hai, qki saririk roop se Monu ab bhi bahut kamjor tha usse khud se khada bhi nahi hua ja raha tha.. ha wo alag baat hai ki aaj uska lund kuch jada hi khada ho raha tha
Sattu, haste hue dhire se Monu ko andar le jaate hue uske kaan me kehta hai
"Khud toh khada nahi ho raha, phir ese q khada karke rakha hai"
Monu apni kamar me wahi gamcha lapete hue tha, jaha use ek bade se akar ka tambu bana hua nazar aata hai.. use pata hi nahi chalta kab uska lund khada ho gaya
Monu- (Dhire se Sharmate hue) Pata nahi Bhaiya.. ye kaise.. matlab
Sattu samajh jata hai ki usmain Monu ki koi galti nahi, aur wo nahi chahta tha ki Monu apne dimag pe jada jor lagaye esliye haste hue apni baat kehta hai
"Are toh kiya hua, mera Chota Bhai asli mard hai.. aur khada toh mard ka hi hota hai na"
Sattu jaan k baat ko taal deta hai, aur phir wo Monu ko andar le jake use wapas se Charpai pe lita deta hai.. jaha baad main Sattu hi uske sarir ko kapde se sukha k use saaf kapde pehna deta hai
Yaha bahar
Savita- (Maalti ki taraf dekhte hu) Chal aaj hum dono Monu k liye kuch acha sa banate hai kahne main
Par Savita ki baat ko Tyagi ji kaat dete hai
"Nahi Bhaujai.. Monu k sarir ki abhi malish honi hai, esliye main aapko tarika bata deta hu taki beech beech main uske sarir ki malish hoti rahe
Uska sarir abhi bahut kamjor hai"
Maalti- Aap mujhe bata dijiye main kar dungi, Bhabhi pehle hi itna pareshan ho chuki hai
Savita- (Piyar bhare ghusse se Maalti ko dekhte hue) kiya kaha Pareshan, ha ha Monu Mera toh bacha hai nahi.. badi aayi
Savita k es andaaz pe Maalti k sath sath waha maujud sabhi log has padte hai
Tyagi ji- (Haste hue) Abhi main Bhaujai ko bata dunga, phir wo aap sabhi ko samjha dengi taki koi na koi Monu k malish karta rahe
Phir Tyagi ji sabhi nazron se bachte hue Savita ki taraf dekh k
"Q.. hai na Bhaujai"
Savita ka jism kamukta ki ek halki lehar ko mehsus karta hai aur wo bhi 'ha' me sar hila deti hai
Sach toh ye tha ki Tyagi ji k yu kehne ki wajah se use ek pal k liye wapas se apni yoni aur gand mein 2 lund andar bahar hote hue mehsus hone lage thay
Sheela- (Itne samay main pehli baar bolte hue) Theek hai, Tab tak main aur Choti Bhabhi rasoi ka kaam dekhte hai
Wahi Mahendra ne dhiyan diya tha ki Tyagi suru main Monu ki sehat ko leke kuch bolne wale thay par achanak ruk gaye thay, esliye wo Kundan, Veeru aur Bhanu ko bahar chalne ka eshara karte hue Tyagi ji ki taraf dekh k kehte hai
"Tyagi Bhai hum sab bahar hai, aap Savita ko sab samjha k aayie.. phir sab badiya si chai peete hai"
Phir wo Harshita ki taraf dekhte hue
"Bahu jara apne hathon se masale waali chai bana do"
Harshita muskurate hue, ha mein sar hila deti hai
Jaldi hi sabhi mard ghar k bahar chappar k neeche baithe hue thay, jismain se sabse jada santusht Bhanu hi lag raha tha, qki Tyagi ne jaisa kaha tha aakhir wahi hua
Monu ko behosh hone se pehle ka kuch yaad nahi, yani wo uska naam bhool chuka hai
Bhanu sabke sath baithe hue sochne lagta hai
'Agar Jabbar ne Maalti pe hamla karne ki galti na ki hoti, toh aaj use bhi kisi bahane wapas bula sakta tha.. par us madarchod ne pura khel bigad dala'
Tabhi Jaise Bhanu k dimag mein ek baat aati hai aur uska chehra khil sa jata hai, wo apni jagah se uthte hue
"Main jara ek min mein aata hu"
Bhanu sabki nazron se kaafi dur nikal aata hai aur phir apni dhoti mein chupaya hua ek Phone nikal k kisi ko Phone milane lagta hai
Bhanu kaan pe Phone lagaye, dusri taraf se Phone uthne ka intizar karne lagta hai, aur jaldi hi uski ye icha puri bhi hoti hai
Dusri taraf se
"Kaise Yaad kiya Bhanu Bhai, aur aakhir kab tak hum dono ko yaha pade rehna hoga"
Bhanu- (Charo taraf dekhte hue) Fikar mat karo, isiliye phone kiya hai.. ab samay aa gaya hai jab tumhe apna khel suru karna hai
Eske aage Bhanu Phone pe unhe kiya samjhata hai, aur wo kisse baat kar raha tha ye aage janne ko milega.. abhi hum kareeb 2 gante aage chalte hai yani suraj ka taap dhire dhire kam hona suru ho chuka tha
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Monu ne es samay sirf ek dhoti pehni hui thi aur ye dhoti bhi use Savita ne hi pehnai thi
Asal main Tyagi ji ne jane se pehle Savita k hathon uske k pure sarir pe ek khas jadi buti ki malish si karwai thi.. jis karanwas Monu ko kuch jada hi garmi mehsus ho rahi thi
Sath hi sath Savita k hathon ko es baar Monu ne pure hosh me apne sarir pe mehsus kiya tha jisse uska lund kuch jada hi bada akar leke khada ho chuka tha
Par us samay kiya kiya hua ye main thoda aage bataunga.. abhi es pal ki baat karte hai
Monu ka lund ab bhi pahad ki uchi choti saman khada hua tha jise usne dhoti k kapde se aise adjust karne ki koshish ki thi ki wo pata na chale
Monu ko sach main garmi mehsus ho rahi thi, warna January k antim dino aur aise thande mausam main koi lagbhag purn nivastr ho aur use garmi lage ye koi aam baat toh hai nahi
Tabhi kamre me Muskurati hui Maalti andar pravesh karti hai.. jiski khubsurti aur baalon se behte hue paani ko dekh k Monu ko samajhne mein dairi nahi lagti ki uski Khubsurat Kamuk Maa naha k aayi hai
Maalti, Monu k paas charpai pe baithe hue piyar se uske sar pe hath firate hue
"Kiya hua kuch pareshan sa lag raha hai"
Monu dhire se muskurate hue
"Ab jiski Maa itni khubsurat ho aur unhone abhi tak apne bete ko piyar na kiya ho wo pareshan nahi hoga kiya"
Maalti ko samajh nahi aata wo muskuraye ya sharmaye, par Monu jo apne andar badti garmi se pareshan tha wo apni Khubsurat Maa k sarir se aati bheeni bheeni khushbu k karan apna aapa kho raha tha
Monu dhire se apna ek hath utha k Maalti ki saree se nazar aati uski gehri naabhi pe rakh k apni ek ungli ko uski gehri naabhi me andar ghusa deta hai
Maalti jo itne samay se, apne bete k karan kamukta ki jakad se dur thi yu hosh main aate hi apne bete k dwara aisi harkat pe machal si padti hai
"Aaaaaaaahhh... kiya kar raha hai... Essshhhhhhhhh"
Maalti ko machalte dekh Monu apni ungli ko uski naabhi main aur andar ghusa k ghumane se lagta hai jisse Maalti aur jada tarap di padti hai
"Essssshhh... Matttt kar beta.... Aaaaaaaaaahhhhh"
Par Monu kaha rukta hai wo usi prakar charpai pe laite hue, naabhi se apni ungli nikal k apni Maa ki ab bhi geele gore aur Kamuk pait pe apne hath ka pura panja rakh k buri tarah masal deta hai
Maalti apne bete k hathon apne gore aur nange pait k masle jane se aur jada tarap uthi hai
"Essssssshhhh... Maaaattt karrrr.... Monu"
Monu muskurate hue usi prakar laite laite apni Maa k pait ko dhire dhire masalna suru kar deta hai aur kehta hai
"Maa aap mujhe piyar nahi karti"
Maalti apni aankhon ko dhire se kholte hue
"Kiya kaha, ek Maa apne bete se piyar nahi karti.. aisa kabhi ho sakta hai kiya ?"
Monu- (Muskurate hue) Toh Saboot do Maa
Monu ye kehte hue apni Maa k nange pait ko masalna chor k waha se apna hath hata leta hai.. aur apni dhoti ko ek hi jhatke se khol deta hai jisse uska pareshan karta lund jo puri akad k sath asman ki taraf sar utha k khada tha Maalti ko apne darshan dene lagta hai
Maalti itne samay baad lund ko itni pass se dekhte hue apne andar ek baar phir se garmi ka pravah mehsus karne lagti hai
Par wo apni himmat k sath khud pe kabu rakhte hue apne man main chal rahi ek baat kehne se khud ko rok nahi paati
Maalti- (Thoda Mayush hoke) Nahi beta.. ye sahi nahi hai, mujhe kabhi kabhi lagta hai ye sab tumhare sath jo hua kahi uski wajah barsat ki wo raat toh nahi jis din humne wo paap kiya tha.. ya sayad wo paap sirf maine kiya tha
Maalti ye kehte hue apna sar neeche kar leti hai, uski aankhon main aansu bhar aaye hai.. aur jo kamukta uspe haavi hone lagi thi wo wapas se hawa ki tarah gayab hone lagti hai
Monu apni Maa ki baat sunkar pareshan nahi hota ulta bus Muskurata hai aur uth k baithe ki koshish karta hai par itne samay se lagatar bistar pe pade rehne aur sahi se na khane k karan uska sarir bahut kamjor ho chuka tha
Maalti, Monu ko uthta hua dekh k jaldi se use sahara deti hai aur Monu uth k baith jata hai aur apni Khubsurat Maa ki aankhon main dekhte hue apna ek hath aage bada k apni piyari Maa k gaalon pe chalata hai aur phir kehta hai
"Maine jada duniya nahi dekhi, par itna janta hu ki kabhi bhi ek Maa ki wajah se uske bete ka ahit nahi ho sakta
Balki aaj main agar zinda hu toh sirf aapki prathana aur prem k karan, warna waise toh mujhe yaad nahi aa raha us din hua kiya tha par kiya pata aapka ashirvad na hota toh syaad main mar..."
Monu itna hi bol pata hai ki, Maalti jaldi se Monu k munh pe hath rakh deti hai aur ghusse se kehti hai
"Jor se marungi, agar dubara marne ki baat ki.. mare tere dushman"
Monu piyar se apne Maa ka hath jo uske munh pe tha use chum leta hai.. Maalti sharma aur Muskura padti hai aur jaldi se apna hath hata leti hai
"Badmash"
Monu wapas se haste hue
"Waise maine suna tha ki Tyagi Chacha keh rahe thay ki.. Monu ko kisi baat k liye pareshan na karna aur use khub prem dena.. hai na aisa hi kuch kaha tha na"
Maalti janti thi ki uska beta baat ko kaha le jana chahta hai par phir bhi wo ha me sar hila deti hai
Monu- (Muskurate hue) Ab itne bade vaid ne kaha hai toh aapko unki baat manni chahiye
Maalti- Acha ji.. toh main apne bete ko prem nahi karti, kisne kaha ye
Monu- Karti hongi, par bina sabut k kaise koi maane
Maalti- Acha ji.. toh tum hi batao tumhari ye Maa kaise ye sabit kare ko wo apne bete se piyar karti hai
Monu jiska lund ab bhi apna akar liye tan k khada tha uski taraf eshara karte hue
"Tarika toh samne hai"
Maalti sharma si jaati hai
"Badmash"
Monu- Please Maa.. pata nahi q ye baith nahi raha.. please.. please
Maalti, Monu ki aisi harkat dekh k has hi padti hai
"Dekho abhi tum bahut kamjor hai aur ye sab tumhare swasth k liye sahi hai hai"
Monu- (Haste hue aankh maar k kehta hai) Are main konsa keh raha hu lund pe chut rakh k baith jao
Maalti sharam se laal pad jaati hai par phir Muskurate hue apne bete k seene pe piyar se marte hue
"Badmash kahi ka.. kuch bhi bolta hai"
Monu haste hue wapas se lund ki taraf eshara karte hue
"Bus ek baar.. itne samay baad aapka beta hosh main ayaa hai aur aap uski itti choti si icha nahi puri kar sakti
Ye kiya baat hoti hai"
Maalti ek pal k liye kuch sochti hai aur phir apni jagah se uth k darwaje ki taraf jane lagti hai, wahi apni Maa ko yu jate hue dekh k Monu ka munh latak jata hai
Par khushi wapas tab laut aati ha jab wo dekhta hai ki uski Maa darwaja andar se band kar rahi hai.. aur phir Maalti darwaja band karne k baad Muskurate hue Monu ko dekhti hai aur apne baalon ka juda sa banate hue uski taraf aage badne lagti hai
Maalti- (Jiski Nanzren ab uske Bete k lund se hat hi nahi rahi hai) Chal tujhe Saboot de hi deti hi.. ki teri ye Maa tujhse kitna prem karti hai
Continue..
Sawal kai hai..
1- Bhanu Phone pe kisse baat kar raha tha ?
2- Savita ne phir se Monu ki maalish ki.. toh kiya phir se wahi kamukta ka khel hua ?
3- Tyagi, Monu ko leke konsi baat kehna cha raha tha.. jiske liye Mahendra ne sabhi ko ghar k bahar bulaya ?
Aur na jane aise kitni hi sawal abhi bhi baaki hai.. ??
Update #16
Scene
Monu apni Maa ko darwaje k pass Jate hue dekh k mayush hone lagta hai par uski khushi wapas tab laut aati ha jab wo dekhta hai ki uski Maa darwaja andar se band kar rahi hai.. aur phir Maalti darwaja band karne k baad Muskurate hue Monu ko dekhti hai aur apne baalon ka juda sa banate hue uski taraf aage badne lagti hai
Maalti- (Jiski Nanzren ab uske Bete k lund se hat hi nahi rahi hai) Chal tujhe Saboot de hi deti hi.. ki teri ye Maa tujhse kitna prem karti hai
Monu yu apni Khubsurat kamukta se bhari hui haseen Maa ko dekh khushi se uchal hi padta hai, waise uchalta wo nahi balki uska lund hai jo es samay us naam maatr ki dhoti se bahar tha aur apni Maa ko apni taraf badte hue dekh k uska lund aise hilore marne laga tha maano uski kaamna ab puri hone k hai
Monu jaldi jaldi apne pairon ko hilate hue apni dhoti ko puri tarah apne jism se alag kar leta hai.. jisse wo ab purn nivastr tha apni kamukta se bhari aur aage badti hui Maa k samne
Maalti muskurate hue apne bete k pass aake baithe hue use muskura k kehti hai jisme kamukta k ansh bhi nazar aa rahe thay
"Badi Jaldi hai tujhe apni Maa k munh mein apna...."
Maalti itna hi kehti hai ki wo khud hi sharam se laal ho jaati hai
Wahi Monu jaisa jawan ladka jiske jism ki hui aaj malish k karan uska lund jada hi uchal maar raha tha aur Maalti bhi uske lund pe laga hua tail dekh pa rahi thi jisse ek pal k liye uske dimag mein ek hi baat aati hai
'Kiya Savita Bhabhi ne lund ki malish bhi ki thi.. ?'
Par ab Maalti ko kon bataye ki Monu ki maalish kaise kaise hui hai aaj
Maatli apne sar ko jhatak k apne vicharo se azadi paati hai aur muskurate hue Monu k seene pe hath rakhte hue use wapas se bistar pe litane lagti hai, wahi Monu bhi ek agykari Bete ki tarah apni Maa k eshare ko samajh k wapas charpai pe lait jata hai par ab bhi uski nazren kabhi uski Khubsurat Maa k haseen aur salone chehre pe jaati toh kabhi uske blouse ki gehrai se nazar aate aur uchal k bahar aane ko atur bade bade rasile aam pe atak jaati hai
Maalti ek hath apne bete k seene pe chalana suru kar deti hai, jisse use malum padne lagta hai ki uska beta kitna jawan aur majbut ho sakta hai agar use sahi cheeze diye jaye
wahi Maalti ab bhi usi prakar maun avastha mein bina kuch bole dhire se apne dusre hath se Monu ka ek hath utha k use dhire se apne uchal marte aur doodh se bhari hui badi chuchi pe rakh deti hai
Monu ka hath jab apni Maa ki chuchi ko chuta hai, bhale hi wo kapde k uper se q na ho.. uska lund pure ahankar se apna sar utha k khushi se hunkaar bharne lagta hai jise dekh k Maalti k chehre pe kamuka se bhari hui khushi daud jaati hai
"badmash..."
Monu bhi khushi se apne hath ki taqat dikahte hue apni Maa k doodh ko masal deta hai
Maalti- (Apne jawan bete k dwara apni chuchi k masle jane se uske pure jism mein kamukta ki anokhi lehar si daud padti hai, aisa lagta hai maano uska beta uski nangi chuchi ko masal raha ho) Esssshhhhhh... dhire... aaaahhhhhh.. beeetttaaaaa....
Par Monu apni Maa ki aisi kamuk siskari sunkar has padta hai aur haste hue hi aur jor se daba deta hai aur kehta hai
"Kiya hua Maa, abhi toh keh rahi thi ki main abhi kamjor hu, ab batao.."
Monu haste hue apni Maa ki ek chuchi ko apne panjo mein bharte hue jor jor se dabaye ja raha tha maano apni maa ki dudharu chuchi ka mulayak ehsaas apne andar bhar raha ho
Maalti- (Apne bete k dwara apni chuchiyon k mardan pe, apne honthon ko kaate hue) esssssshhh.. kamine ruk abhi tujhe batati hu
Aur itna kehte hue has k apne jawan bete ka tana hua jordar lund apni muthi mein dabouch leti hai, waise aaj use laga maano jaise Monu ka lund jada hi shakt aur mota ho gaya ho.. par phir itne samay baad apne andar badti hui kamukta k jwaar k chalte usne es baat ko puri tarah nazarandaaj kar diya
Maalti apne jawan bete k mote tane hue lund ko apni muthi mein bharte hue dhire se use neeche ki taraf khichti hai jisse uska lund apni chamdi ko chorte hue apne mote gulabi supade k darshan dene lagta hai.. jise dekh k ek Maa apne honthon pe apni jeebh firane se khud ko rok nahi paati
Maalti- (Apne joro se dhadak rahe dil ji gati ko samany karne ki koshish karte hue) uffff... apni maa ko dum rakha tha na ab dikhati hu tujhe
Maalti ye kehte hue muskura padti hai aur Monu k lund k charo aur apni ungliyon ka challa sa banate hue uske chamdi ko uper ki taraf laati hai jisse Monu ko aseem anand ki prapti hoti hai, par ek Maa itne pe hi kaha ruk sakti thi.. esliye Maalti wapas se apne bete k mote lund ko muthi mein dabouche hue apne hath ko neeche ki taraf sarkati hia jisse uske bete k lund ki chamdi bhi neeche ko hoti hai aur jo lund abhi abhi chamdi k khol se dhaka tha wo wapas se khul jata hai
Monu- (Apni Kamuk maa ki aisi kamuk harkat se vichlit sa ho uthta hai) aaaaahhhhh.. Maaaaa... q tarpa rahi ho... ache se maslo na
Maalti muskura padti hai, par sath hi sath uski aankhon mein lajja k nishan bhi upasthit thay
Maalti muskurate hue apne apne bete k lund pe apne hath ko ache se chalana suru kar deti hai, wo kabhi lund ko muthi mein dabouch k uski chamdi ko uper ki taraf khichti toh wahi agle hi pal chamdi ko neeche karte hue pure supade ko phir se khol deti.. Maalti k haton ki es thirkan k karan Monu k lund mein khubsurat gharsan si hone lagti thi jisse use aseem anand milne laga tha
Monu- Aaaaaahhhhhhh... aise hi Maaaa....
Maalti apne bete ko anand mein dubte hue dekh man hi man has padti hai aur eska asar uske hath ki gati mein nazar bhi aane laga tha qki wo jaldi jaldi Monu ka lund uper se neeche.. aur neeche se uper ki taraf karte hue ache se use hastmaithun ka anand de rahi thi
Maalti- Ab bata.. bada bol raha tha na..
Monu jiski aankhen lagbhag band hone si lagi thi, aur aisa hota bhi kaise nahi Maa k haton mein bete ka lund ho aur use anand na aaye asia kabhi ho sakta hai kiya
Monu- aaaaahhhh.. aapke hathon mein jadu hai Maaaa... aaahhhhhhh... esssshhhhhhhh.. Maaaaa aapa na...
Maalti has padti hai qki usne apne hath pura neeche le jake monu k lund ko uski jad se pakad k dhire se dabouch diya tha jissev Monu ki kamuk aaahhh phut padi thi
Monu- (Apni maa ka hath apne garam lund pe mehsus karte hue us anokhe pal ka anand lete he) Aaahhh.. kar lo Maaa.. jo karna hai.. essshhhh.. ek din main bhi har cheez ka badla jarur lunga
Maalti muskurate hue apni ek ungli apne jawan bete k mote supade pe laati hai aur uske peshab karne waale ched pe apne nakhun se khurdete hue
"Acha.. toh apni maaa se badla lega.. badmash.. ab bata"
Apne peshab waale nanhe ched pe apni Maa ki ungli aur uske nakhun ki harkat ki wajah se Monu maano tarap sa padta hai aisa lagta hai jaise uske sareer mein khoon ki raftaar kai guna bad gayi ho
Monu- Aaaahhhh... Maaaaaa.... esssshhhhhhh... Aapka jawab nahi.. aaaaahhh kaha se seekha ye sab.. aaaahhhh
Apne Jawan bete ko yu masti mein tarapte hue dekh k aur uske sawal k karan ek pal k liye Maalti k samne ek chehra naach jata hai.. par wo jaldi hi vastvikta mein punah laut aati hai
Maalti dekhti hai ki uske hathon ki chuwan aur uski kamuk harkaton ki wajah se kaise uska beta apni aankhon ko band karke maze se le raha tha.. jise dekh ek Maa ka chehra khil sa uthta hai
Waise apne jawan bete k lund se es taraf se khelne ki wajah se Maalti ki chut bhi puri tarah geeli ho chuki thi aur uski yoni se lislisa dravya nikalne laga tha
Maalti ne es samay Penty nahi pehni hui thi jis wajah se uski yoni se nikalne wala gaada chipchipa paani uski yoni ko bhigote hue dhire dhire uski jaanghon se hote hue aage bad raha tha
Eske sath hi uske nipples bhi blouse k andar puri tarah akad chuke thay.. jismein se uski ek chuchi ko uska jawan beta ab bhi apne hath k panje mein daobuche hue usse khele ja raha tha
Ek Maa ka pura sarir es samay kamukta k chalte dhire dhire kampan sa karna suru ho chuka tha par wo bina ruke apne Bete ko anand diye ja rahi thi.. yahi toh hota hai ek Maa bete ka asli prem
Maalti, Monu ki anand se band aankhon ko dekhti hai toh uska chehra bhi khil jata hai.. wo muskurate hue apne ek hath se Monu ka hath apni ek chuchi se hata k use dusri chuchi pe rakh deti hai aur phir apne jawan bete k lund k uper jhukti chali jaati hai
Maalti ka chehra jaise jaise Monu k lund k nazdik aa raha tha use apne jism mein ek kamuk sugand si bharti hui mehsus ho rahi thi, jiske karan uske andar hawas ka ubal jaisa banne laga tha
Maalti, Monu k lund k uper jhuk k ek pal k liye use ache se niharti hai aur phir apni jeebh nikal k uske supade k ched pe apne jeebh ki nok laga deti hai.. Maalti ko aisa lagta hai maano uske jism se kamukta ka koi sailaab sa phut padne wala ho
Wahi jab Monu ko apne supade k ched pe kuch garam aur geela lagta hua mehsus hota wo apni aankhon ko khole bina nahi reh paata aur jab dekhta hai toh uski saanson ki raftaar achanak se bad jaati hai
Qki ab Maalti apni jeebh se Monu k lund k supade ko chatne lagti thi
"Ummmm... ssslllluuuuupppp.......... sssrrrruuuuuuuuuppp...."
Maalti apni jeebh aur jada bahar nikal k Monu k pure gulabi supade pe chalane lagti hai jisse Monu ka jism kamukta ki adhikta k karan buri tarah kaanp uthta hai
"Aaaahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh.. Maaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa..."
Monu ka jism tharthara sa jata hai, jiski kampan Maalti bhi mehsus kar pa rahi thi, wo bina kuch kahe apne agle padav ki tarf badti hai.. aur apna pura munh kholte hue apne jawan beta k lund ko apne munh mein sama leti hai
"Grrrrrruuuuuuuuuuupppp...rrr...uuuppppp.. "
Monu ko yakeen hi nahi hota ki uski Kamuk Maa ne kitni asani se uske pure lund ko ek hi baar mein yu nigal liya, use toh bus apne lund pe garam saanse mehsus hoti hai aur phir aisa lagta hai jaise geele aur garam gufa k dwar mein uska lund kahi kho sa gaya ho.. kamukta ki adhikta ka naach kuch yu tha ki Maa bete dono k jism ek sath kanpkapa se uthe thay
Monu- (ek baar phir se uski aankhen band hoti chali jaati hai, wo chahta bhi toh aise moke pe apni aankhon ko khole nahi rakh sakta tha) Aaaaaaaahhhhh... Maaaaa..............
Ab tak Monu ka hath uski Maa ki chuchi se hath chuka tha aur wo apna wahi hath apni Maa k sar pe rakh k maano use aur jada apni lund pe dabane sa lagta hai
Wahi uski Maa, jiski chut es samay puri taraf geeli ho chuki thi aur kaamras ki barish si kar rahi thi wo apne honthon ka ek challa sa banati hai aur apne jawan bete k vikral lund k charo taraf karke usek lund ko neeche se leke uper tak aise nichodte hue aati hai.. jaise ganne ki machine kisi ganne ko nichod leti hai
'Slllrrrruuuuuuppp....... grrrruuuuppp... srrruuuuppp......"
par Maalti ab rukhti nahi, ya sayad uska jism use eski agya nahi deta, qki wo jaise hi Monu k lund ko neeche se uper tak nichodte hue aati hai.. thek usi pal wapas se apne bete k lund ko uske supade se leke uski jad tak jaha kaale kaale baal jinhe hum jhanten kehte hai waha tak wapas se chusti hui apna munh uske lund pe dabati chali jaati hai
Monu ek baar phir se maano pagal sa ho uthta hai, use apni Maa k munh main apna lund daal k jo anand mil raha tha use wo khud sabdo mein nahi bata sakta hai
"Aaaahhhhhhh.... Maaaaa............."
Maalti apna ek hath neeche le jake apne jawan bete ki badi badi gaindo yani balls ko pakad leti hai aur wapas se apna munh neeche daba k pure lund ko honthon k beech dabate hue chus leti hai
"Ssslllluuuuuppppppppppppppp..... ummmmmmmmm"
Monu toh jaise es dohre hamle se puri tarah pagal hi hone lagta hai, wo apna hath jo usne apni maa k sar pe rakh rakha tha.. uspe jor laga k use apne lund pe dabana suru kar deta hai, waise wo agar aisa nahi bhi karta tab bhi uski Maa peeche thodi rehne waali thi
Qki Maalti ne jo khel apne bete k kehne pe suru kiya tha ab wo khud usmain fasne lagi thi
"Sllluuuuuppp.... srrruuuuuppp.... ggllllluuurrrrpppp.... gggllluuuuuppp...... grrrrrrrsssspppppllluuuuuu"
Maalti ne apni raftaar pakad li thi, ab wo jor jor se apne bete k lund ko chusna suru kar deti hai
"Sllllllrrruuupp..... gggllluuuuuppp...... grrrrrrrsssspppppllluuuuuu... ummmmmmmm"
Wahi Monu bhi uper se uska sar jor jor se apne lund pe daba raha tha, maano wo chahta hi na ho ki uski Maa kabhi bhi uska lund apne munh se bahar nikale, par aaj uski ye icha bahut ache se puri ho rahi thi qki Maalti puri tarah uske lund pe chai hui thi aur jor jor se apne jawan bete ka lund chuse ja rahi thi
"ummmmm..... Grrrrruuupp...... ggggguuuu.... Sllluuuuuppp.... srrruuuuuppp.... ggllllluuurrrrpppp.... gggllluuuuuppp...... grrrrrrrsssspppppllluuuuuu"
Khel ne apni raftaar ko dhund liya tha, Maalti jitni tezi se apna munh chalate hue apne bete k lund ko chus rahi thi, utni hi gati se Monu ki kamar bhi ab hilore maar rahi thi.. jiskaran uska lund baar baar maalti ki halak tak ghus ja raha tha
"grrrruuuppppprrrrrkkkkkk.... gggrrrruuuuuuuupppp..........."
Monu puri tarah pagal hota ja raha tha, wo jor jor se apni kamar ko neeche se chalate hue apni Maa k munh ko chod raha tha.. aaj ek beta pani Maa se hi mukhchodan ka anand le raha tha
Maalti neeche se aate Monu k jordar dakkon ko sehti hui uske lund ko puri tarah apne munh ki gehrai mein bharte hue use aise chuse ja rahi thi maano uske uper sehad sa laga ho
'Sslllluuuuuppp...... srrruuuuuuppp.... ssslllluuuuuuuupp..."
Maalti jitni nipudta se apne jawan bete ka lund chus rahi thi, utni hi mehnat se uske aand ko daba daba k use dohra anand bhi diye ja rahi thi.. wahi Monu bhi apni Maa k sar pe dabav banate hue jor jor se unke munh mein dumdaar dakke lagaye ja raha tha
pure kamre mein agar kuch sunai pad raha tha toh bus wahi madhur aawaz
"ssssllluuuuppp.... ccccchhuuuuusssspppppp...... pppppppuuucchhhhhhhhh... ggggllllluuuuppp.... grrrruuuppp..... sssslllupppp"
Kamukta ka ye khel na jane kitni dair tak yuhi chalta raha ki achanak Maalti ko ehsas hota hai ki uska beta uske baalon ko pakad k kheech raha hai, maano jaise uske munh se apna lund bahar nikalna cha raha ho
Itni tak apne jawan bete ka lund chusne k karan Maalti k munh bhi buri tarah dard kar raha tha, aisa lag raha tha jaise uske ek ek dant mein dard hone laga tha aur gala andar tak ghayal ho gaya ho
esliye jaise hi apne jawan bete ko aisa karte hue paati hai.. wo jaldi se apna chehra uper karte hue uske lund se apna munh alag kar leti hai
Maalti buri tarah haafte hue.. lambi lambi saanson ko apne andar bharte hue kuch bolne ko hi hoti hai ki Monu bol padta hai
"Maa jaldi se apna blouse kholo.. ?"
Maalti apne bikhre hue baalon ko sahi karti hui lambi lambi saanse lete hue
"Blouse par...."
Monu beech mein hi apni maa ki baat ko kaat deta hai
"Jaldi karo bus..."
Maalti aur koi sawal nahi karti aur jaldi se apne dono hathon ko peeche le jake apne blouse ko kholna suru kar deti hai.. edhar itne samay mein Monu khud apne lund ko jakad leta hai aur uske jor jor se hilane lagta hai
Monu ki harkat aur uska ubalta hua khoon dekh k Maalti samajh jaati hai ki uska jawan beta aakhir chahta kiya hai, aur jaldi hi Blouse k aage se khulte hi maalti puri tarah aage se nangi ho chuki thi, qki jis parakar nahane k baad aaj usne Penty nahi pehni thi theek usi prakar usne aaj Bra bhi nahi pehni thi
Edhar jaise hi uska blouse khulta hai uski rasili papite jaisi badi badi chuchiya uchal k bahar aa jaati hai jinka sudol pan aur majbuti bata rahi thi ki ye jawani itni asani se dhalne waali nahi hai
Monu bina smay vyart kiye apna hath aage karke apni maa ki ek chuchi ko muthi main dabouch k use apne lund ki taraf kheech leta hai jisse agle hi pal Maalti apni dono nangi chuchi ko apne jawan bete k hilore khate lund k aage kiye hue tayyar thi
Maalti- (kamukta se jalti hui) la.. beta.. nehna de apni maa ki chuchiyon ko
Maalti ye kehte hue Monu k virkaal lund ko apni Chuchiyon k beech daba leti hai, theek waise hi jaise ek Maa prem se apne bache ko apni gaud mein chupa leti hai
Aur apne dono hathon se apni Chuchiyon k beech apne jawan bete k lund ko dabane k baad jor jor apne jism ko aage peeche karte hue apne bete ko ek naya anand dene lagti hai
Wahi Monu k liye bhi ye ek naya ehsaas tha.. apna mota lund apni Maa ki Chuchiyon k beech paate hi uska lund haar maan leta hai, aur aisa hota bhi kaise nahi
Phir kaha dair lagne waali thi, qki agle hi pal Monu ka lund fufkarte hue safed gaadi barish karna suru kar deta hai.. jo sidha uski Maa ki badi badi dudharu chuchiyon ko bhigota chala jata hai
Monu- Aaaahhhhhh... Maaaaaaa...........
Apne lund se nikalti jordaar dhar k karan uski aankhen band hoti chali jaati hai, wahi Maalti bhi apni chuchiyon pe apne bete ka garam garam virya mehsus karti hai toh uski yoni bhi apna bahav jaari kar deti hai.. jisse uski aankhen bhi khuli nahi reh paati hai
Agle 2 min tak dono Maa bete usi avastha main rehte hai ki tabhi bahar se koi darwaje pe dastak deta hai
"Maalti.. oh Maalti tu andar hai"
Dono ko jaise achanak se jhatka lagta hia qki ye aawaz Savita ki thi, Maalti jaldi se khadi hoke apna blouse band karne lagti hai, wahi Monu bhi apni dhoti ko jaldi jaldi pehnne lagta hai
Maalti- (Apna Blouse band karte hue) Ha.... bhabhi.. main... main andar hi hu
Savita- Acha.. par ye darwaja q band hai.. ?
Maalti ka toh gala hi sukh jata hai par itni dair mein wo apna blouse pehen chuki thi aur apne pallu se jaldi se apna chehre pe aaye paseene ko pochte hue
"Wo.. sayad maine galti se band kar diya hoga.. aati.. aati hu.. Bhabhi"
Maalti, Monu ki taraf dekhti hai jisne bhi apni halat sudhar li thi, eske baad jaldi hi Maalti apni ghabrahat pe kabu paate hue darwaja kholti hai toh uske samne Savita khadi hui thi
Maalti ko dekhte hi usne sawal phir se dohraya
"Are darwaja band karne ki kiya jarurat thi.. ?"
Maalti- (Ab tak apne aap pe pura kabu pa chuki thi) wo.. sayad maine galti se band kar diya tha.. kuch kuch kaam tha
Savita- Are ha.. wo maine mandir ja rahi thi, tu chalegi na.. ?
Maalti jana toh chahti thi par abhi abhi usne apni chuchiyon pe apne bete ka virya girwaya tha.. esliye aisi avastha mein jana toh sambhav nahi tha
Maalti- ha.. wo jana toh tha par abhi nahi kal subha chalungi
Savita- Chal theek hai, par mein toh ja rahi hu.. aur ye itni thand mein tujhe ye paseena q aa raha hai ?
Maalti ko ek pal k liye kuch samajh nahi aata, par jab wo dekhti hai ki Savita uske blouse k uper se uski chuchi waale sthan ko dekh rahi hai toh uski saanse hi maano rukne lagti hai, qki usne abhi abhi apne bete ka virya apni chuchiyon pe girwaya tha jis karan uske blouse mein ek bada sa dabba sa ban gaya tha jo saaf saaf nazar aane laga tha
Maalti- (Lagbhag haklate hue) wo.. nahi.. wo.. wo.. andar.. yaha garmi bahut hai na.. toh esliye.. wo
Par esse pehle ki Savita aur kuch bol paati darwaje pe aake khada hua Veeru bol padta hai
"Bhaujai Chalo.. warna wapas aate aate andhera ho jayega, aaj toh mausam bhi ajeeb sa ho raha hai lagta hia bina mausam barish ho jayegi"
Maalti dekhti hai ki darwaje pe Veeru ek laathi liye hue khada hai, sayad unhe uski k sath jana tha
Savita apna sar jhatak k
"Acha Chor.. tu kal chali jana, main Satyam se bol dungi.. theek hai"
Maalti rahat ki saans lete hue, bus ha mein sar hila k reh jaati hai
Wahi Savita mudne se pehle ek baar phir se Maalti ka chehra dekhti hai jiska rang udha hua tha aur phir wapas se uske blouse pe jagah jaagah geele un daabon ko dehti hai, qki ab wo dabba sirf ek jagah nahi reh gaya tha Kai aur dabbe nazar aane lage thay.. jisse ek baar phir se Maalti k chehra ka rang safed hone lagta hai
Par es baar jab dono ki nazren apas main takrati hai toh Savita kuch bolti nahi par muskura padti hai.. aur muskurate hue Veeru k sath mandir k liye chal padti hai
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Ghar k bahar Chappar k neeche sabhi mard jama ho chuke thay
Mahendra sabhi ki taraf dekhte hue ant mein Tyagi ji ko dekhte hue kehta hai
"Aap us samay sayad kuch bolna cha rahe thay"
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Update 16, Scene #01 k samay k kuch sawal
1- Bhanu Phone pe kisse baat kar raha tha ?
2- Savita ne phir se Monu ki maalish ki.. toh kiya phir se wahi kamukta ka khel hua ?
3- Tyagi, Monu ko leke konsi baat kehna cha raha tha.. jiske liye Mahendra ne sabhi ko ghar k bahar bulaya ?
Aur na jane aise kitni hi sawal abhi bhi baaki hai.. ??
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Jaisa ki maine pichle Scene (Scene #05) k update k samay kaha tha ki Scene #03 & 04 aage aayega.. toh ye raha Scene #03
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Update #16, Scene #01 se...
Tyagi ji sabhi ki taraf dekhte hai phir Kundan aur Mahendra ki taraf dekhte hue
"Waise toh Monu ab theek hai par purn swasth hone main use thoda aur samay lagega.. par main chahta hu ki"
Par phir Tyagi khud hi ruk jate hai par Mahendra ne es baat pe dhiyan diya tha ki Tyagi suru main Monu ki sehat ko leke kuch bolne wale thay par achanak ruk gaye thay
Esliye wo Kundan, Veeru aur Bhanu ko bahar chalne ka eshara karte hue Tyagi ji ki taraf dekh k kehte hai
"Tyagi Bhai hum sab bahar hai, aap Savita ko sab samjha k aayie.. phir sab badiya si chai peete hai"
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Jaldi hi sabhi mard ghar k bahar chappar k neeche baithe hue thay, jaha kareeb 30-40 min baad Tyagi ji paseene mein bheege hue waha aate hai.. waise wo kaafi khush nazar aa rahe thay
Bhanu, Tyagi ko uper se neeche tak dekh k haste hue kehta hai
"Tyagi Ji toh aise paseene mein bheega hai, maano koi lambi daud laga k aaye ho.. ?"
Tyagi, Bhanu ko dekh k man hi man has padta hai aur apni jeet k bare mein sochne lagta hai
'Saale Bhanu main ache se janta hu, Monu ki yaddasht wapas aane k dar k chalte ab tu wahi karega jo main chahunga'
Tyagi ji wahi chappar k neeche padi ek purani si kurshi pe baithte hue
"Bhai pehle toh chai pilwao"
Tyagi ji ki baat pe Mahendra kuch bolne hi waha tha ki tabhi Harshita waha pahuch chuki thi aur uske hath mein chai pi tray thami hui thi
Harshita- Lijiye aap sabhi ki Chai
Bhanu- (Haste hue) Chutki Bhabhi k hath ki Chai.. waaaahhh
Bhanu ki baat pe sabhi k sabhi has padte hai, aur sabhi ek ek karke apni chai ka cup uthane lagte hai.. aur sabse ant mein baari aati hai Bhanu ki
Bhanu chappar k neeche thoda peeche ki taraf charpai k dusri taraf baitha hua tha.. jaha use chai dene k liye Harshita sabhi ko paar karke us tak aati hai
Harshita- Lijiye Damad ji.. Chai ka maza lijiye
Bhanu- (Chai ka uthate hue dhire se) Waise toh aapke hath ka zehar bhi khane se koi mana na kare, par Chai ki jagah agar...
Harshita es Chai ki tray liye kuch jada hi neeche ki taraf jhuki thi jiskaran uska pallu aage se puri tarah sarak jaata hai aur uska saawala yovan aise khil k apni aabha dikhane lagta hai ki agar ye nazara koi jawan hota ladka dekh le toh uska paani abhi k abhi nikal padta
Par Bhanu ek khaya khela mard hai aur apne naade ka majbut bhi.. par aisa khubsurat nazara aankhon k samne hoga toh wo bechare bhi aakhir uske jadu se kab tak bachta
Harshita ka Pallu jaise hi sarkata hai aur wo use sahi karne hi waali hoti hai ki wo paati hai ki ghar k Damad ji ki nazren uske blouse k andar ghusne lagi hai.. esliye Harshita bhi apne yovan ka darshan karane se jara bhi peeche nahi hatti hai aur muskura k apni aawaz pe utna hi bal deti hai jisse wo sirf Bhanu k kaano tak jaye
"Chai ki jagah agar kiya Damad ji, aap kahiye toh jara.. jo mangenge milega
Aakhir aap es ghar k Damad hai.. aapko kon mana kar sakta hai"
Bhanu- (Harshita k saawale yovan k galiyare ko dekhte hue) Doodh mil jata toh...
Harshita- (Apni hasi chupate hue, qki use pata tha ki uske dono jeth ji aur uska Pati, sath hi Tyagi ji wahi baithe hue hai.. aur aisi estithi mein ghar k damad se hasi thitholi ka apna hi maza hota hai) Doodh aise thodi mil jayega, uske liye mehnat lagti hai
Bhanu- (Ek pal k liye apni nazron ko uper utha k Harshita ki jheel jaisi aankhon mein dekhta hai aur turant hi usi Kamuk ghaati pe apni nazron ko lagate hue kehta hai) Mehnat.. are aap ek baar bol k toh dekha Bhabhi, main toh dono hathon se mehnat karne ko tayyar baitha hua
Bhanu ki hajirjawabi dekh k Harshita bhi apni hasi rok nahi paati aur halka sa uper hote hue
"Sirf dono hathon se.."
Bhanu bina vilamb kiye turant bol padta hai
"Main toh munh se bhi chusne ko tayyar hu"
Harshita ko laga tha Bhanu uske mazak ka jawab bus mazak mein dega, par Bhanu toh achanak se kamukta ka dwaar kholne laga tha.. esliye Harshita jaldi se seedhi hoti hui turant apna pallu sahi karti hai aur Bhanu ko dekh k bus muskura k reh jaati hai
Harshita apni khali Tray ko waha se le jaate hue ek antim baar Bhanu ko dekh k muskura padti hai aur phir ghar k andar pravesh kar jaati hai
Edhar Harshita k waha se jaate hai, Mahendra chai ka ek ghut bharte hue
"Tyagi Bhai, aap andar Monu ki sehat ko leke kuch bolne waale thay.. par phir maine dekha ki aap bolte bolte ruk gaye"
Mahendra ki baat pe ab sabhi ka dhiyan Tyagi ji taraf akarshit ho chuka tha
Tyagi ji kuch palon tak shant rehne k baad apni gambhirta dikhate hue kehte hai
"Waise toh maine jin prachin jadi butiyon se Monu ka upchar kiya hai mujhe unpar purn vishvas hai.. par.. "
Tyagi ji ki es baat pe Kundan vyakul ho uthta hai, aur hota bhi kaise nahi.. aakhir wo ek Baap hai
"Par kiya Tyagi Bhaiya, batayie na.. kiya ab bhi Monu ko koi khatra hai"
Tyagi- (Chai ka ek aur ghut bharte hue) Hmmm.. waise toh Monu purn roop se swasth hai, aur jo thodi bahut kamjori hai wo samay k sath sath khatam ho jayegi.. baki main kuch aisi jadi butiyan dunga jinki nirantar malish se Monu pehle se jada balist aur sharirik roop se majbut ho jayega
Mahendra- (Jisne Tyagi ki baaton se ye toh bhaap hi liya tha ki kuch toh baat hai) Par phir bhi kuch baat toh hai Tyagi Bhai.. jo aap bolna cha rahe hai
Tyagi- (Ek Lambi si saans chorte hue) Aapki baat sahi hai Mahendra Bhai, par main soch raha hu ki kahu ki nahi.. qki usmain thoda kharcha hai
Es baar kisi aur k kuch bolne se pehle hi Veeru bol padta hai
"Aap karche ki na sochiye, Monu ki sehat k liye jo jaruri hai wo batayie.. are mera apna itna bada khet hai jarurat padi toh thoda baich dunga, bus mera bhatija swasth rehna chahiye"
Veeru ki es baat pe Kundan k dil mein apne chote Bhai k liye apne prem ko kai guna bada diya tha.. uski aankhon mein aansu nazar aane lage thay, par mard apne aansu kaha dikhata hai.. esliye Kundan bhi apne prem ko chupa le jata hai
Mahendra- (Theek Kundan ki hi tarah use bhi Veeru ki baat sunkar bahut prasannata hui thi) Aapko jo kehna hai khul k kahiye Tyagi Bhai.. paiso ko leke aap chinta na kariye
Tyagi- (Muskurate hue) Bhai itne jada paise bhi nahi chahiye ki jameen baichne ki naubat aa jaye, ha par 40,000- 50,000 ka karcha jarur hai
Kundan- (Bina ek bhi pal gawaye) Are toh ye konsi badi rakam hai.. intijam ho jayega, aap boliye jo bolna chahte hai
Kundan ki baat sunkar Tyagi aur Bhanu dono hi sochne lagte hai
Bhanu man hi man
'Behenchod bol toh aise raha hai, jaise 40-50 hazar kuch hote hi nahi.. sirf ek chakki hi toh chalata hai'
Tyagi bhi theek Bhanu ki tarah sochne lagta hai
'Ye Kundan toh aise bol raha hai.. jaise eske pass koi khajana bhara ho'
Tyagi anjane mein hi sahi disha mein soch raha tha, qki Kundan bhi es samay usi Khanjar wali tijori k bare me soch raha tha jisme us anokhe Khanjar k sath sath heere moti aur sone k sikke bhi bhare hue hai
Kundan apni soch mein
'Ek sone ka sikka baich dunga, usi se itna paisa mil jayaga ki mere Monu ka sara ilaj ho jayega.. aur jo paisa bachega usse uske liye baad mein ek motorcycle dila dunga'
Tyagi- (Apni soch se bahar aate hue.. sath hi Bhanu aur Kundan ko bhi vartmaan ki dhara pe wapas laate hue) Aap sabhi ko pata hi hai ki Monu ko apne antim samay ka kuch yaad nahi hai, waise toh maine us samay keh diya tha ki ye koi badi baat nahi hai.. par mujhe dar hai ki kahi us chaut ki wajah se uske dimag ki kisi nas me sujan na aa gayi ho.. esliye
Tyagi apni baaton se waha sabhi ko darate hue, siwaye Bhanu k qki wo samajh chuka tha ki Tyagi jaan k koi khel khel raha hai.. warna Monu ki yaddasht toh usne khud apni jadi butiyon se mitayi hai
Kundan- Esliye kiya.. Tyagi Bhaiya.. boliye na
Tyagi puri estithi pe man hi man haste hue sochta hai
'Saalon ko dekho toh kaise phadphada rahe hai.. tum sab ko aise tadapte hue dekh k mujhe bahut sukun mil raha hai, tum sabko aise dekh k aaj meri 'Bela' ki aatma ko chain mil raha hoga'
(Bela)
Tyagi ko yu khoya hua dekh k Veeru use tokte hue bolta hai
"Kiya hua Tyagi Bhaiya kaha kho gaye.. ?"
Tyagi vastvikta mein lautate hue
"Asal mein.. Main chahta hu ki Monu k kuch test karwaye jaye, Delhi mein ek bahut bade Hospital mein mera ek dost hai.. main usko Phone kar dunga toh wo sara intijam kar dega, par wo test thode mehnge hai aur unhe karwaye mein vilamb bhi nahi hona chahiye"
Mahendra- Aap batayie kab karwane hai wo sabhi kiya kaha.. ha Test, paison ki aap fikr na kariye
Tyagi- (Man hi man haste hue) Waise toh acha hota ki 1-2 din k andar hi agar Monu ko leke Delhi chale jaate, qki sabhi test karwane aur result aane mein kam se kam 15-20 dino ka samay toh lag hi jayega
Kundan- (Apne bade Bhai ki taraf dekhte hue) Bhaiya aap agar kahe toh main kal hi raat ki train se Monu ko leke chala jata hu
Mahendra kuch sochne k baad
"Nahi kal raat ki nahi.. agle uske din subha ki train se jao, abhi khatra puri tarah tala nahi hai.. esliye raat ka safar karne ki jarurat nahi hai"
Tabhi waha ab tak shant aur un sab ki baaten sunne wala Bhanu bol padta hai
"Main bhi Kundan Bhaiya k sath Delhi chalunga"
Kundan- Par Bhanu, meri wajah se tumhe apna nuksaan karne ki jarurat nahi hai.. tumhara yaha itna sara kaam hai.. kaise.. ?
Par Bhanu kuch aur hi soch raha tha
"Kaisi baat karte hai Bhaiya, kiya Monu mere bacha nahi hai.. main uska kuch nahi hu, aapne toh ek pal mein mujhe paraya kar diya"
Bhanu apni makkari ka purn parichay dete hue aisa natak karta hai maano kisi bhi pal uski aankhon se aansu beh padenge
Kundan- Kaisi baat karte hue Bhanu.. tum aur Veeru dono hi mere liye ek saman mere chote Bhai ho, main toh bus yahi keh raha tha ki pata nahi waha kitne din lag jaye aur main nahi chahta ki meri wajah se tumhare kheton ka koi nuksan ho
Bhanu- (Apne khel k patte kholte hue) Aisa kuch nahi hai.. baat ye hai ki mujhe lagta hai Monu k uper se khatra puri tarah abhi tala nahi hai, esliye agar phir se aisa kuch hota hai toh uski raksha k liye aapke sath main bhi rahunga.. baki faisla aap sabhi ko karna hai main konsa es ghar ka saga..
Mahendra- Bhanu.. aaj k baad aisi baat na karna, tum bhi es ghar k utne hi ho jitne ki Kundan aur Veeru
Phir Mahendra apne chote bhai Kundan ki taraf dekhte hue
"Mujhe Bhanu ki baat sahi lag rahi hai, khatra apni puri tarah tala nahi hai.. esliye Monu k sath jitne jada log har samay rahenge utna hi acha hai"
Kundan haami mein sar hilate hue, par apne man mein chal rahi sankha bhi vyakt karte hue
"Par Bhaiya.. khatra toh yaha bhi rahega.. toh"
Mahendra haste hue
"Matlab tujhe lagta hai tera bada Bhai apne pariwar ki raksha nahi kar sakta"
Kundan- are nahi nahi Bhaiya mera wo matlab thodi tha.. mein toh bus ye keh raha tha aap akele
Veeru- (Beech mein bolte hue) Bhaiya akele thodi hai, main hu.. Sattu hai.. Satyam hai.. sab toh hai, aap in sabhi baaton ki fikr na karo
"Theek hai Bhaiya, main kal hi station jake hum teeno ki ticket karwa leta hu.. aur phir parso ki train se Delhi k liye nikal jayenge"
Veeru- (achanak jaise use kuch yaad aata hai) Bhabhi k bade Bhaiya bhi toh wahi rehte hai, toh rehne aur khane peene ki koi pareshani bhi nahi hogi
Kundan- hmm.. sahi kaha, main subha hi Manohar Bhaiya ko Phone karke sab bata dunga
Tyagi ji.. jo es baar kaafi dair baad bolte hai
"Yaad rakhna in sabhi test aur unke result mein kab se kam 15-20 din lag jayenge ya sayad 5-7 din aur jada hi"
Kundan- Uski pareshani nahi hai, par meri aur Bhanu ki anupsthiti mein Chakki aur khet..
Kundan ki baat puri hone se pehle hi Mahendra nirnayak aawaz mein apni baat kahte hue
"Us sab ki tum fikar na karo, Bhanu k kheton ki jimmedari Sattu ki rahegi, aur tumhari Chakki ka kaam main aur Sonu milkar dekh lenge"
Bhanu- Par aapke khet.. ?
Mahendra- Satyam hai na..
Kundan- Par Satyam akela itne bade khet.. kaise sambhalega, Sattu ki baat hoti toh baat alag thi
Mahendra- Samay aur jarurat inshan ko sab sikha deti hai, Satyam bhi sab sambhal lega aur jaha jarurat hui toh mein hath bata dunga.. warna ghar ki koi na koi aurat thoda bahut sath de degi uska.. aakhir wo sab bhi kishan k ghar ki 'Bahu betiyan' hai
Mahendra apni baat puri karne k baad Kundan ki taraf dekhte hue
"Kundan tum paiso ki chinta mat karo.. main intijam kar dunga"
Kundan- Nahi uski jarurat nahi hai Bhaiya, paise hai mere pass.. mujhe toh bus aapka ashirvad chahiye
Mahendra apne chote Bhai ki baat pe muskuraye bina nahi reh paata
Aur es tarah tay ho jata hai ki aaj se theek 2 din baad Kudan aur Bhanu, Monu ko leke Delhi jayenge uske jaruri test k liye
Par in sabhi ko jara bhi andaja nahi tha ki Tyagi ne badi hi safai se apna khel.. khel diya tha
Edhar jis samay sabhi mard ye sab baaten kar rahe thay us samay ghar ki aurte bhi darwaje se chipki hui unki baatein sun rahi thi.. aur jab sab pakka ho jata hai toh sabse jada khus Sheela hi thi
Savita- (Sheela ki aankhon mein khushi k aansu dekhte hue) Are tujhe kiya ho gaya.. ?
Sheela- Kuch nahi Bhaujai.. main hamesha sochti thi ki pata nahi wo din kab aayega jab ye ghar mere Pati ko apnayega, par aaj Mahendra Bhaiya ki baat ne mujhe yakin dila diya ki ab ye bhi es pariwar ka hissa hai
Sheela ne ye baat Mahendra ki us baat pe kahi thi.. jo ye thi
'Bhanu.. aaj k baad aisi baat na karna, tum bhi es ghar k utne hi ho jitne ki Kundan aur Veeru'
Sheela ki aankhon mein khusi chalakte hue dekh k Maalti sneh se uske baalon pe hath firate hue
"Pagli kahi ki, faltu baatein bahut sochti hai tu.. are Bhanu es ghar k damad hai, bhala wo es ghar se alag kaise hi sakta hai
Balki sabse jada khushi toh mujhe hai.. jo mere Monu k liye Damad ji apne kheton ka nuksan tak karne ko taiyar hai
Dekha jaye toh eske liye mujhe tujhse maafi bhi mangni chahiye"
Sheela- Kaisi baat karti ho Bhabhi.. apne Monu k liye khet kiya hai, hum kuch bhi daav pe laga sakte hai
Sheela ne jaise hi apni baat purn ki Maalti use kaske apne aap se chipka leti hai aur gale se laga leti hai.. jise dekh k waha upasthit sabhi aurton ki aankhon mein aansu bhar aate hai
Savita- (Mahole ko halka karte hue) Jada chipka chipki na karo.. warna dono geeli ho jaogi
Savita ki baat pe sabhi aurte apni hasi nahi rok paati.. aur aise mein Maalti aur Sheela ek dusre se alag ho jaati hai
Savita aur Sheela rasoighar mein raat k khane ka intizam karne k liye chal padti hai wahi jaise hi Harshita waha se jane ko hoti hai Maalti uska hath pakad leti hai.. aur uske aage hath jod k Kehti hai
"Main Dhanya hu.. jo mujhe tum aur Veeru Bhaiya mile"
Harshita ek pal k liye samajh hi nahi paati ki aakhir Maalti kiya baat kar rahi thi, par tabhi use apne Pati Veeru ki kahi baat yaad aati hai
'Aap karche ki na sochiye, Monu ki sehat k liye jo jaruri hai wo batayie.. are mera apna itna bada khet hai jarurat padi toh thoda baich dunga, bus mera bhatija swasth rehna chahiye'
Harshita muskurate hue apni Bhabhi Maalti ka hath pakad k kehti hai
"Unhone kuch galat thodi kaha, are Monu hamra bacha nahi hai kiya.. khet bache se jada jaruri hai kiya
Aur ye bataiye, agar Monu ki jagah mera Sonu hota.. toh kiya aap peeche rehti"
Maalti ka gala bhar aaya tha wo bus muskura k apni aankhon se hi apna jawab de deti hai.. jise sunkar Harshita muskurate hue jor se apni Bhabhi Maalti ko gale se laga leti hai
"Aaj k baat mere samne hath mat jodiyega, are aap meri Badi Bhabhi hi nahi meri badi Behan bhi hai.. samjhi"
Maalti bus muskurate hue jor se Harshita ko khud se chipka leti hai
Kuch palon k baad Harshita bhi Savita ki tarah mahole ko khushnuma banane ki koshish karte hue
"Waise Bhabhi.. aapki Chuchiya badi chubh rahi hai, lagta hai moti ho gayi ho"
Maalti jhootha ghussa dikhate hue, Harshita se alag hoke
"Kiya kaha main moti ho gayi hu.. badi aayi, kaha se moti ho gayi hu bara jara"
Harshita- (Muskura k aankh marte hue) Kabhi kapde utar k yahi sawal mujhse puchna.. tab ache se jawab dungi
Maalti- (Ek Pal ko toh hairan hi reh jaati hai aur phir sharmate hue muskura k kehti hai) Badmash kahi ki.. Savita Bhaujai ka rang chad gaya hai tujhpe, chal bhaag kuch kaam kar
Maalti ye kehte hue has padti hai, aur Harshita bhi ghar k kaamo mein lag chuki thi.. Maalti wapas apne bete k kamre mein jaati hai jaha es baar wo paati hai ki Monu chain se gehri neend mein so raha hai
Maalti apne bete ko dekhte hue
"Dekho toh kaise so raha hai.. nalayak ne abhi kuch dair pehle hi apni Maa se apna lund chuswa liya.. badmash"
Maalti apni baat puri karti hai toh khud hi sharam se laal ho jaati hai
Edhar jis samay ghar ki aurte darwaje pe kaan lagaye bahar mardo ki baaten sun rahi thi.. theek usi pal Satyam bhi ghar k bahar chappar k pass hi chupa hua unki baatein sun raha tha
aur unki puri baaton ko sunne k baad wahi ghar k pass hi ek purane kuwe pe baith k beedi sulgate hue.. kisi naag k jaise fufkaar raha tha
"Madarchod es Monu k chakkar mein ek din pura ghar bik jayega, behenchod esse acha toh mar hi jata.. ab toh mujhe pakka yakin ho gaya hai ki mera harami Baap kabhi bhi Gaon ki es gandi mitti ko chor k sehar nahi jayega"
Satyam kisi zehrile naag ki tarah fufkarte hue beedi ka ek lamba sa kash marta hai aur aage badbadane lagta hai
"Es madarchod k chakkar mein Veeru Chacha.. wo Maa ka loda apne khet baichne ko tayyar hai.. uski Maa ko chodu
Aur ab mere Baap k paas paise aa jayenge es madarchod Monu ko sehar bhej k test karwane k liye, warna maine jab motorcycle k liye paise mange thay toh mujhe nasihat de raha tha
'Beta utne pair failao jitni chadar ho'
Eski Maa ko chodu.. behenchod aise toh main puri zindagi esi gareebi mein mar jaunga, kuch toh karna padega.. qki mujhe es Gaon ki gandi mitti mein nahi marna hai
Saala aaj k samay kon kishan banta hai, aur mera bhadwa Baap chahta hai ki main pure khet akele sambhalu.. esse acha toh chupchup khet aur jameen baich k badiya sehar me jake mauj karo.. paise faiko aur mast jeevan jiyo"
Satyam apni beedi ka bacha hua hissa bhi kheech k uska tukda usi sukhe kuwe me faikte hue phir se badbadane lagta hai
"uper se meri Rand Maa.. saali ne itne sapne dikhaye thay ki Gaon ki jameen baich k kisi bade sehar mein achi zindagi jiyenge aur dekho saali us Monu k chakkar mein uski mamta bhi Jaag gayi.. Madarchod Rand kahi ki"
Satyam ko nahi pata tha ki uski ye nafrat aur uske andar bhara ye zehar koi dekh raha hai
Jo Satyam k andar bhari nafrat aur Gaon ki sidhi sadhi mitti se judi zindgi se dur bhaagne ki uski lalach ko dekh k has padta hai
"Waaahhh.. es ghar ko barbaad karne k liye ek aur hatiyar mil gaya.. khel toh aur mazedaar hone wala hai
Ab ghar ka bhaidi hi lanka dhayega"
Scene #04... Continue..
aaaaaahhhh monu chat le na apni Maa ki choot dekh na kitna malai laai hai teri maaa uffff monu beta Aaa jaaa naaa or mat tadpaaaa mere pyar bete 
