Romance मोक्ष : तृष्णा से तुष्टि तक .......

[firefox420]

masoom kamine

Dr. saab plan kamyaab hota najar aa raha hai .. aur ab to asar bhi dikhne laga hai .. chidiya jald hi jaal mein fasne wali hai ...

 

[TheBlackBlood]

Dr. saab plan kamyaab hota najar aa raha hai .. aur ab to asar bhi dikhne laga hai .. chidiya jald hi jaal mein fasne wali hai ...

Is chidiya ko fasane wala jaal na bana tha, na bana hai aur na hi bhavishya me kabhi bana payega koi,,,,,,

 

[TheBlackBlood]

Update kidhar hai kamdev bhai,,,,,,

 

[firefox420]

Judge sahab ne to 10 baje ka time diya tha .. ab ye aap andaza laga lo ki kis din ke 10 baje ki baat kar rahe the .. inki kahani ki tarah inke reply bhi pechida aur lathmaar hote hai .. ki koi phir dobaara se savaal bhi nahi karta ...

kehne ko to light (bijli) inke gaanv mein jaayi rehti hai .. magar short circuit hamara ho jaata hai ...

is forum par to writer bhi saare chate - chataaye mile hai .. ek mahashya ne to apna career start hone se pehle hi apni story writing se he sanyaas le liya (TheBlackBlood) ...

ek story aisi likhta hai ki ki naa to uski taang na uski poonch samajh aati hai (Chutiyadr), kabhi - kabhi to muzhe lagta hai ki bechare lekhak mahoday kahani start to kar dete hai magar khatam kaise karni hai ye nahi samajh paate, isi liye duniya bhar ki saari jugaad baazi laga dete hai ...

ek mahashay bina bataaye 6 mahino ke liye gota kha gaye (Enigma) ab inki taraf se reader jhan-noom mein jaao, aur update aise ki subha padhna start karo to sham ho jaati hai .. pata nahi khud konese laddu kha kar updates likhte hai ...

aur ek writer aise hai ki inka Saand chodne se nahi chikkta (anandsngh12), itni ladkiya Xf ki saari stories mein nahi hogi, jitniyo ko inka Saand pel chuka hai ...

aur ek ye mahashya hai kukhyaat vikhyaat kamdev99008 ji, duniya bhar ki saari problem inke aage he aa tapakti hai, aur haazir jawaab itne ki savaal mooh se nikalta nahi, us-se pehle inke bahane taiyaar rehte hai ...

par kuch bhi kaho .. hai saare londe gazab ke .. chahe inme laakh kamiya ho magar kahani saali chappar - faad likhte hai .. aur kahani wohi badhiya hoti hai .. jiske liye review dene mein maza aaye ...

chalo aaj ke liye bahut maska laga liya .. ab saare ke saare kaam par lag jaao .. "Ha Nahi To"

 

[kamdev99008]

Bhai me update to likhunga... Magar ab sham to hone do
Lock down tum sabka hai... Hamara kam to hone do
Jo tumko mil raha khane ko wo ham hi ugate hain...
Ganwar kahte the jinko sab, Ham kisano ka nam to hone do

 

[kamdev99008]

Sai duniya me beshak sabkuchh band ho gaya lekin kisan lock down se bahar hain.... To busy schedule.... But sham ko update complete karke deta hu

 

[firefox420]

abhi gehu na nikle aapke .. ya eekh boni baaki hai ya usme palewa karni hai .. oh right aap to फल ki kehti karne wale kisan hai .. to aadu ki tod chal rahi hogi .. par aapko to sirf baithna hai .. wo sab kaam to labour karegi .. khat pe baith kar ped ke neeche parwa hawa ka maza lo .. kyonki pachwa hawa to ab chalte he mausam bigad jaata hai .. jai jawaan jai kisan ?

 

[kamdev99008]

abhi gehu na nikle aapke .. ya eekh boni baaki hai ya usme palewa karni hai .. oh right aap to फल ki kehti karne wale kisan hai .. to aadu ki tod chal rahi hogi .. par aapko to sirf baithna hai .. wo sab kaam to labour karegi .. khat pe baith kar ped ke neeche parwa hawa ka maza lo .. kyonki pachwa hawa to ab chalte he mausam bigad jaata hai .. jai jawaan jai kisan ?

Makka ki nirai ho rahi hai, dhan ki paudh bone ki tayyari.. Gehu abhi nikal rahe hain... Bhuse ki storage.... Sab mein log busy hain
.......
Mein sabjiyon ki paudh taiyar karwa raha hu... Pedon ke neeche sabjiyan laga raha hu.... Papita, nibu, amrud, kakronda par fal a rahe hain... Anar, belpatthar, kele, am ka bhi season hai... Sab kam me maujood to rahta hu... Sham ko complete karke post karta hu...

 

[TheBlackBlood]

Judge sahab ne to 10 baje ka time diya tha .. ab ye aap andaza laga lo ki kis din ke 10 baje ki baat kar rahe the .. inki kahani ki tarah inke reply bhi pechida aur lathmaar hote hai .. ki koi phir dobaara se savaal bhi nahi karta ...

kehne ko to light (bijli) inke gaanv mein jaayi rehti hai .. magar short circuit hamara ho jaata hai ...

is forum par to writer bhi saare chate - chataaye mile hai .. ek mahashya ne to apna career start hone se pehle hi apni story writing se he sanyaas le liya (TheBlackBlood) ...

ek story aisi likhta hai ki ki naa to uski taang na uski poonch samajh aati hai (Chutiyadr), kabhi - kabhi to muzhe lagta hai ki bechare lekhak mahoday kahani start to kar dete hai magar khatam kaise karni hai ye nahi samajh paate, isi liye duniya bhar ki saari jugaad baazi laga dete hai ...

ek mahashay bina bataaye 6 mahino ke liye gota kha gaye (Enigma) ab inki taraf se reader jhan-noom mein jaao, aur update aise ki subha padhna start karo to sham ho jaati hai .. pata nahi khud konese laddu kha kar updates likhte hai ...

aur ek writer aise hai ki inka Saand chodne se nahi chikkta (anandsngh12), itni ladkiya Xf ki saari stories mein nahi hogi, jitniyo ko inka Saand pel chuka hai ...

aur ek ye mahashya hai kukhyaat vikhyaat kamdev99008 ji, duniya bhar ki saari problem inke aage he aa tapakti hai, aur haazir jawaab itne ki savaal mooh se nikalta nahi, us-se pehle inke bahane taiyaar rehte hai ...

par kuch bhi kaho .. hai saare londe gazab ke .. chahe inme laakh kamiya ho magar kahani saali chappar - faad likhte hai .. aur kahani wohi badhiya hoti hai .. jiske liye review dene mein maza aaye ...

chalo aaj ke liye bahut maska laga liya .. ab saare ke saare kaam par lag jaao .. "Ha Nahi To"

Sach kahu to aapka ye msg padh kar dil garden garden ho gaya. Itna vistaar aap hi kar sakte hain. Duniya me agar kisi ko sabse zyada kaam hai to wo hain apne kamdev bhai. Inhe itna zyada kaam hai ki xf ki koi bhi story read karne se nahi chukte..bhale hi uske liye sara din aur saari raat ka time lag jaye,,,,

Rahi meri baat to main to masoom hu,,,,

 

[Enigma]

बेहतरीन. अब तक लिखें सभी ३२ भाग पढ़ने के बाद बस यही कहना चाहूंगा कि आपके लेखन में असीम गहराई है।