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[kamdev99008]

ek inverter kharid hi lo , kam se kam mobile to charg rahega

Pichhle 15 din se koshish me hu... Lekin market me available hi nahi.. Beech me kuchh dheel mile to yahan naya stock pahuche.. Chhota town hai... Mere distt se delhi tak sabhi jile red zone me hain... Sabhi cities aur towns sirf lock down nahi.... Sealed hain... Ration tak home delivery se mil raha hai....
Gaon me hu to daily need items ki to samasya nahi.. Shahron me to paise se bhi kuchh nahi khreed sakte...

 

[Chutiyadr]

Pichhle 15 din se koshish me hu... Lekin market me available hi nahi.. Beech me kuchh dheel mile to yahan naya stock pahuche.. Chhota town hai... Mere distt se delhi tak sabhi jile red zone me hain... Sabhi cities aur towns sirf lock down nahi.... Sealed hain... Ration tak home delivery se mil raha hai....
Gaon me hu to daily need items ki to samasya nahi.. Shahron me to paise se bhi kuchh nahi khreed sakte...

tab to ghar me raho aur chill maro ,
jinda raho wahi jaruri hai , update to aa hi jayega

 

[TheBlackBlood]

Jab ye comment post kiya tha tab se lagatar bahut tej aandhi chal rahi hai... Bahut se ped, bijli ke khambe aur taar toot gaye..

Ye samasya aur badi ho gayi... Ab shayad 2-4 din me line judegi tabhi bijli ayegi
Me shaya aj ke bad 2-4 din mobile par bhi online nahi aa paunga

Pata nahi ab kab moksh-daayani is story ke update ke darshan honge, aaj kal upar wala bhi kisi ki nahi sun raha, bada dukhi kar diya hai ham masoomo ko,,,,,

 

[firefox420]

Pichhle 15 din se koshish me hu... Lekin market me available hi nahi.. Beech me kuchh dheel mile to yahan naya stock pahuche.. Chhota town hai... Mere distt se delhi tak sabhi jile red zone me hain... Sabhi cities aur towns sirf lock down nahi.... Sealed hain... Ration tak home delivery se mil raha hai....
Gaon me hu to daily need items ki to samasya nahi.. Shahron me to paise se bhi kuchh nahi khreed sakte...

sahi jaa rahe ho kamdev bhiya .. aapko bhi hum teeno(main, Chutiyadr , TheBlackBlood) gandhi ji ke bandar mile hue hai .. to aap bhi hamare jale par namak chidakte rehte ho .. sahi hai .. waise abhi thodi si kami reh gayi .. hamari maarne mein .. jis din se ye kahani start kari hai .. usi din se le rakhi hai aapne .. ab agar kuch kasar reh gayi ho to tel laga kar maarlo ... "Ha Nahi To" ..

 

[kamdev99008]

sahi jaa rahe ho kamdev bhiya .. aapko bhi hum teeno(main, Chutiyadr , TheBlackBlood) gandhi ji ke bandar mile hue hai .. to aap bhi hamare jale par namak chidakte rehte ho .. sahi hai .. waise abhi thodi si kami reh gayi .. hamari maarne mein .. jis din se ye kahani start kari hai .. usi din se le rakhi hai aapne .. ab agar kuch kasar reh gayi ho to tel laga kar maarlo ... "Ha Nahi To" ..

Ab khush ho jao.... Abhi abhi laptop ready kara laya hu.... Rat ko update likhunga

Meri hi buddhi kharab ho gayi thi..
Jo writer bana

Reader tha to kisi ki sunni to nahi padti thi ulte.... sunata aur tha

 

[TheBlackBlood]

Ab khush ho jao.... Abhi abhi laptop ready kara laya hu.... Rat ko update likhunga

Meri hi buddhi kharab ho gayi thi..
Jo writer bana

Reader tha to kisi ki sunni to nahi padti thi ulte.... sunata aur tha

Buddhi kharaab huyi ye achha hua na kamdev bhai. Kam se kam hame aapke dwara likhi ek aisi kahani padhne ko to mili jisme hame thoda bahut aapki khichaayi karne ka mauka bhi mil gaya,,,,,

Waise firefox420 bhai ko bhi aisi hi koi story likhni chahiye,,,,,

 

[firefox420]

Buddhi kharaab huyi ye achha hua na kamdev bhai. Kam se kam hame aapke dwara likhi ek aisi kahani padhne ko to mili jisme hame thoda bahut aapki khichaayi karne ka mauka bhi mil gaya,,,,,

Waise firefox420 bhai ko bhi aisi hi koi story likhni chahiye,,,,,

kahani likhne ke maamle mein main bhi Masoom baccha bana rehna chahta hu...
kyonki kahani likhne ke liye lagataar niyamit taur par kahani ko badhana padta hai... aurmain itna organised nahi hu... story padhne aur comments karne mein he bahut samay khap jaata hai...

aur waise bhi samjhdaar wohi jo dusro ko dekh kar seekh le...

asal mein jitni sulzhi hui baate main karta hu.. itna doodh ka dhula main bhi nahi hu...

 

[TheBlackBlood]

kahani likhne ke maamle mein main bhi Masoom baccha bana rehna chahta hu...
kyonki kahani likhne ke liye lagataar niyamit taur par kahani ko badhana padta hai... aurmain itna organised nahi hu... story padhne aur comments karne mein he bahut samay khap jaata hai...

aur waise bhi samjhdaar wohi jo dusro ko dekh kar seekh le...

asal mein jitni sulzhi hui baate main karta hu.. itna doodh ka dhula main bhi nahi hu...

firefox420 bhai ye batane ki aapko zarurat hi nahi thi ki dhudh ke dhule aap bhi nahi hain. Kyo ki itne samajhdaar to ham hain hi ki aapke bare me ye samajh sake.

Rahi baat kahani ki to main yahi kahuga ki aapko bhi kamdev bhai ke naksh-e-qadam par chalna chahiye. Aapke reviews dekh kar ye samajhna mushkil nahi ki aapke andar bhi ek pratibha lagbhag tadap rahi hai aur aapse ye guhaar laga rahi hai ki aye zaalim insaan kyo mujhe qaid kar rakha hai.

Masoom banna itna bhi asaan nahi hai uske liye bahut kuch tyaag karna padta hai. Aur fir iske liye kya ye zaruri hai ki apne andar ki pratibha ka khoon hi karte rahe.? Yakeen maaniye bhai ki aapke dwara kahani likhne se hame khushi to hogi hi sath hi aisa ehsaas bhi hoga jaise kisi cheez se raahat aur saugaat mili ho,,,,

 

[firefox420]

firefox420 bhai ye batane ki aapko zarurat hi nahi thi ki dhudh ke dhule aap bhi nahi hain. Kyo ki itne samajhdaar to ham hain hi ki aapke bare me ye samajh sake.

Rahi baat kahani ki to main yahi kahuga ki aapko bhi kamdev bhai ke naksh-e-qadam par chalna chahiye. Aapke reviews dekh kar ye samajhna mushkil nahi ki aapke andar bhi ek pratibha lagbhag tadap rahi hai aur aapse ye guhaar laga rahi hai ki aye zaalim insaan kyo mujhe qaid kar rakha hai.

Masoom banna itna bhi asaan nahi hai uske liye bahut kuch tyaag karna padta hai. Aur fir iske liye kya ye zaruri hai ki apne andar ki pratibha ka khoon hi karte rahe.? Yakeen maaniye bhai ki aapke dwara kahani likhne se hame khushi to hogi hi sath hi aisa ehsaas bhi hoga jaise kisi cheez se raahat aur saugaat mili ho,,,,

waise badhiya hai apne aako bachane ke liye .. mere najook kandho par banduk chala rahe ho .. par ye sab shayad jabhi possible ho paayega .. jab mera kisi masoom ke haatho KAYAKALP ho .. nahi to jab tak to mera ilaaz Dr. saab ke haatho chal he raha hai .. shayad us-sabke baad he muzhe Moksh praapt ho paaye ...

waise tahe dil se bahut - bahut shukriya itne gudd jaise meethe shabdo ke liye .. agar aise 1-2 comments aur padh liye to main sugar badhne se he mar jaaunga ..

 

[Naina]

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