Romance रंडी से प्यार (Completed)

[RAJIV SHAW]

Super ending bhai

 

[brego4]

bhai dactar ab yaar wo ek adhuri story bhi poori kar do "daku haseena"

 

[vickyrock]

अति सुन्दर अपडेट

 

[Chutiyadr]

लगता है कहानी सुखद अंत की तरफ है काजल तो हीरोइन है कहानी की बच जाएगी हसीन डाकू कब शुरू करेंगे यहाँ डॉ साहब

Dhundhta hu dost ager uska purana likha mil jaye to naya thread shuru karke complete kar dunga...

 

[Chutiyadr]

Wahhh bhai Kya story thi....sab kuch tha isme story, emotions, action, aur sabse badi baat logo ki ghatiya soch pe ek jordar tamacha.....hats off

Dhanyawad indrajeet...

 

[Chutiyadr]

waah bhait dactar no wors enough to praise your writing skills

ek bahut hu mushkil se subject par ek bahut hi khoosbsurat si story likh dali maja aa agya dost !

Dhanyawad sir ji.

 

[Chutiyadr]

Nice ending. Dr.chutiya ka pehali bar role na kae barabar tha unki kisi story mei. Aur Kajal ne bhi bilkul sahi kaha hmara past humara pichha kabhi nahi chhodta hai

Dhanyawad kai...

 

[Chutiyadr]

dr. bhai aapki story me mai apni likhna bhul gaya yaar ab aap meri likho to mai chhod dun likhna hahaa

Compliment ke liye dhanyawad dost...

 

[Chutiyadr]

Samapt

Dhanyawad sanskari...

 

[Chutiyadr]

Super ending bhai

Dhanyawad rajiv....