AssNova
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Is kahani ki shuruwaat bhi kaafi rochak thi aur sabse badhi baat ki ye thodhi hatke thi aur erotic scenes kaafi kamuk hai is kahani me
Dadi ka aur naani ka samarpadh bahot hi hot hai , aur maa ke prati jo izzat aur importance di bete ne wo bhi bahot accha laga dekh ke
Thodha aur gaav ke baare me describe kar ke likha ja skta hai story ko aur agar hero ghar se bahar nikle aur gaav ke logo se bhi thodha ghule mile aur ghaav ke baare me jaane to kahani aur rochak evam romanchit ho jaayegi
Patron ke bich me dialogues aur nok-jhok ki matra bhi badhaii jaa skti hai , story me bahot ptential hai. well done.
Aur aashaa hai ki jald hi bahot hot and erotic Group scenes bhi dekhne ko milenge bete ke saath !!!!
Lekin updates dene kyu band kar diya lekhak ji aapne , umeed hai jald hi aap lautenge aur apni is bahot hi kamuk kahani ko fir se regularly update karna shuru kar denge
eagerly waiting for the next update
-------KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK, AND KEEP UPDATING----------------
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