Absolute_ONE
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Ab update ni aane wala... story close dukan band.
Wese bhi iss story ke sare characters ko hdd se jada hi chutiya dikhaya gya hai especially Sandhya...iske to har baat pichli baat se alag hote hai bete ke mout ka gum har saal mna skti h wo bhi dulhan ki trh saj dhaj kr aur 9 saalo mai ek baar bhi apne bete ke kamre mai bhi ni gyi...mtlb aisa character smjh se bhi pare hai...lekhak ne ye bhi likha tha ki Sandhya abhay ko bhul kr ab Aman ko hi apna beta manti sara pyar uspe hi lutati ye to abhay tha tb bhi yahi krti thi Sandhya to abhay ke hone ya na hone se kya frk pdd gya...upr se Raman ke sath jo kabbadi kheli hai usko bhi 3 alag alag trh se byan kr ri... Sandhya ne ye khud bola tha ki wo apne bete se pyar na kr saki to raman kis khet ki muli hai isse to yahi lgta h ki Sandhya ke dil mai abhay ke liye na phle kuch tha na ab hai aur na aage hoga.... Sandhya ke character ko aisa kr diya hai ki aage story lekhak likh hi ni skte... condom ke sath chude ya bina condom ke chud to gyi na aur chudai se phle kiss,chuchi dabana aur baki sb to bhut baar kr kiya hoga dono ne achank se to chudai ni ho skti... Sandhya kahi bc abhay ke dada se bhi na chudi ho isliye iss chutiya aurat ko Budha thakurain bna kr gya hai...Aman ke maar khane pr kaise bhadk gyi thakurain bnn kr aur jb apne bete ke bare mai munim ki kartut pta chli to kya boli mere Nazar ke samne na ana...MTLB CHAL KYA RHA !!!
Ye voting pole bhi hta hi do ya badl do ye kr to ya to Sandhya suicide kr le ya to sb kuch chhor kr kahi dur bhag Jaye.... kyuki maafi glti ki hoti hai yaha gunah pr gunah aur ek ni na jane kitne...
Ab story bnd ho gyi hai wese bhi ab intrest khtm ho chuka hai...hm jaise reader itne comment krte hai pr ek bhi reply ni...toh goodbye to ALBELA!!!
Wese bhi iss story ke sare characters ko hdd se jada hi chutiya dikhaya gya hai especially Sandhya...iske to har baat pichli baat se alag hote hai bete ke mout ka gum har saal mna skti h wo bhi dulhan ki trh saj dhaj kr aur 9 saalo mai ek baar bhi apne bete ke kamre mai bhi ni gyi...mtlb aisa character smjh se bhi pare hai...lekhak ne ye bhi likha tha ki Sandhya abhay ko bhul kr ab Aman ko hi apna beta manti sara pyar uspe hi lutati ye to abhay tha tb bhi yahi krti thi Sandhya to abhay ke hone ya na hone se kya frk pdd gya...upr se Raman ke sath jo kabbadi kheli hai usko bhi 3 alag alag trh se byan kr ri... Sandhya ne ye khud bola tha ki wo apne bete se pyar na kr saki to raman kis khet ki muli hai isse to yahi lgta h ki Sandhya ke dil mai abhay ke liye na phle kuch tha na ab hai aur na aage hoga.... Sandhya ke character ko aisa kr diya hai ki aage story lekhak likh hi ni skte... condom ke sath chude ya bina condom ke chud to gyi na aur chudai se phle kiss,chuchi dabana aur baki sb to bhut baar kr kiya hoga dono ne achank se to chudai ni ho skti... Sandhya kahi bc abhay ke dada se bhi na chudi ho isliye iss chutiya aurat ko Budha thakurain bna kr gya hai...Aman ke maar khane pr kaise bhadk gyi thakurain bnn kr aur jb apne bete ke bare mai munim ki kartut pta chli to kya boli mere Nazar ke samne na ana...MTLB CHAL KYA RHA !!!
Ye voting pole bhi hta hi do ya badl do ye kr to ya to Sandhya suicide kr le ya to sb kuch chhor kr kahi dur bhag Jaye.... kyuki maafi glti ki hoti hai yaha gunah pr gunah aur ek ni na jane kitne...
Ab story bnd ho gyi hai wese bhi ab intrest khtm ho chuka hai...hm jaise reader itne comment krte hai pr ek bhi reply ni...toh goodbye to ALBELA!!!
