Incest वो तो है अलबेला (incest + adultery)
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Welcome back bhai the original has returned lets se aage kya hota hai.. ummed rahegi aage bhi kahani aachi rahe…aur bekoof sandhya aur bewkoofi na kare…
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Badi der kardi meharban aate aate..
Bhai fir se welcome hai tumhara, itni khubsurat kahani ko bich me chorke gaye isliye bada dukh hua but fir devil ne is kahani ko apna flavour diya aur use aage badhaya but ha uska skill alag hai aur tumhara alag, usne is kahani ko apne dhang se moda hai....
Tumhari purani dono kahani rishto ki raakh aur Sikandar wali dono hi adhuri hai aur agar wo bhi puri karo to bahut acha hoga.....
As always superb update tha aur tumhari writing skills ke to kya hi kahne to bhai uspe me cmnt karunga nhi....
Bhai bas ek hi salah dunga ke Sandhya ko aman se close mat hone dena nhi to kahani ki maa c**d jayegi, pichli kahani me jese alina ko uske stepson ke close Kiya aur intimate scene dikhaya wo bahut bekar laga yr to please is kahani me kuch bhi esa mat karna, baki tumhe jo theek Lage vese karna, devil bhai ki kahani alag chalti rahe aur tumhari alag chalti rhe kyuki dono hi kahaniyon ka plot aur charector same hai but screenplay alag hai to tum apna continue karo wo apna Karega.....
Baki ho sake to update time se dete rahna aur bas Sandhya ka jhukav aman pe hi na ho ye dhyan rakhna....
Keep going brother
Bhai fir se welcome hai tumhara, itni khubsurat kahani ko bich me chorke gaye isliye bada dukh hua but fir devil ne is kahani ko apna flavour diya aur use aage badhaya but ha uska skill alag hai aur tumhara alag, usne is kahani ko apne dhang se moda hai....
Tumhari purani dono kahani rishto ki raakh aur Sikandar wali dono hi adhuri hai aur agar wo bhi puri karo to bahut acha hoga.....
As always superb update tha aur tumhari writing skills ke to kya hi kahne to bhai uspe me cmnt karunga nhi....
Bhai bas ek hi salah dunga ke Sandhya ko aman se close mat hone dena nhi to kahani ki maa c**d jayegi, pichli kahani me jese alina ko uske stepson ke close Kiya aur intimate scene dikhaya wo bahut bekar laga yr to please is kahani me kuch bhi esa mat karna, baki tumhe jo theek Lage vese karna, devil bhai ki kahani alag chalti rahe aur tumhari alag chalti rhe kyuki dono hi kahaniyon ka plot aur charector same hai but screenplay alag hai to tum apna continue karo wo apna Karega.....
Baki ho sake to update time se dete rahna aur bas Sandhya ka jhukav aman pe hi na ho ye dhyan rakhna....
Keep going brother
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Bhai apki ek story thi " Rishton ki raakh " kya ye bhi fir se shuru hogi ?
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Bhai apki ek story thi " Rishton ki raakh " kya ye bhi fir se shuru hogi ?
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Well said bhaiBadi der kardi meharban aate aate..
Bhai fir se welcome hai tumhara, itni khubsurat kahani ko bich me chorke gaye isliye bada dukh hua but fir devil ne is kahani ko apna flavour diya aur use aage badhaya but ha uska skill alag hai aur tumhara alag, usne is kahani ko apne dhang se moda hai....
Tumhari purani dono kahani rishto ki raakh aur Sikandar wali dono hi adhuri hai aur agar wo bhi puri karo to bahut acha hoga.....
As always superb update tha aur tumhari writing skills ke to kya hi kahne to bhai uspe me cmnt karunga nhi....
Bhai bas ek hi salah dunga ke Sandhya ko aman se close mat hone dena nhi to kahani ki maa c**d jayegi, pichli kahani me jese alina ko uske stepson ke close Kiya aur intimate scene dikhaya wo bahut bekar laga yr to please is kahani me kuch bhi esa mat karna, baki tumhe jo theek Lage vese karna, devil bhai ki kahani alag chalti rahe aur tumhari alag chalti rhe kyuki dono hi kahaniyon ka plot aur charector same hai but screenplay alag hai to tum apna continue karo wo apna Karega.....
Baki ho sake to update time se dete rahna aur bas Sandhya ka jhukav aman pe hi na ho ye dhyan rakhna....
Keep going brother
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Xforum par meri ek hi I'd hai jo aap log padh rahe ho.
Maine ek hi story likhi hai wo hai vo hai albela.
Iske alawa maine aur koi kahani nahi likhi. Shayad ye baat moderator ya admin confirm kar sakte hai IP address ke jariye.
Bahut time baad mai xforum par login hua hoon.
Mai ek hi story me itna doob jata hoon aur hamesha lagta hai ki shabd ya direction sahi nahi Jaa Raha hai, to dusri story shuru karne ki Mai sinch hi nahi sakta.
Mai wo writer nahi jo pahli kahani ko chhod kar dusari shuru kar doon.
Mai wo writer hoon jo story complete karne ke baad bhi us story me sirf yahi dekhata raheta hoon ki kya achha ho sakta tha.
Agar aap log ye kahani padhe hai Puri to app logo ne ek baat notice ki hogi ki Mai kabhi jyada reply nahi deta hoon. Na hi reviews ki maang karta hoon.
Ye Mera default behaviour hai. Iska matlab ye nahi ki Mai reviews nahi chahta. Bus iska matlab ye ki Mai apni story me kho jata hoon.