Incest वो तो है अलबेला (incest + adultery)

[SAps]

Dekho bhai story ko jyada khichne se koi faida nhi abhay ko raman ki sachai pta chale sur use apni ma ki sachai bhi pta chale ki uski ma raman ke sajish ka shikar hui thi | abhay ko uska pyar payal se mila do aur ma bete ka bhi milan karwao aur raman ka bhanda fod krk story ki happy ending do baki story bhut achhi h ekdum must

 

[Hemantstar111]

Dekho bhai story ko jyada khichne se koi faida nhi abhay ko raman ki sachai pta chale sur use apni ma ki sachai bhi pta chale ki uski ma raman ke sajish ka shikar hui thi | abhay ko uska pyar payal se mila do aur ma bete ka bhi milan karwao aur raman ka bhanda fod krk story ki happy ending do baki story bhut achhi h ekdum must

Sabse pahli baat, iss story happy ending hai hi nahi.... Shayad, mujhe aisa lagta hai

 

[Hemantstar111]

Bro story khinch nahi raha hu, vo aapka exitement hi hai jo ye chahta hai ki ye sab cheejen jaldi ho.

 

[Studxyz]

Bro story khinch nahi raha hu, vo aapka exitement hi hai jo ye chahta hai ki ye sab cheejen jaldi ho.

कहानी अपने हिसाब से लिखो बस ट्रैजिक अन्त ना हो तो एक अच्छी थ्रिलर आनंदमयी कहानी बनेगी

 

[Ash Mishra]

hemant bhai story ka happy ending jarur krna bhai

 

[Alex Xender]

Waiting For Update

 

[Lucifer laude wala]

Bhai pls try and write a happy ending

Sabse pahli baat, iss story happy ending hai hi nahi.... Shayad, mujhe aisa lagta hai

Because tragic endings are very very depressing

 

[Aditya01kh]

Sabse pahli baat, iss story happy ending hai hi nahi.... Shayad, mujhe aisa lagta hai

Lagta hai? Kisi or se kahani likhwa rahe ho kya ya kisi or ka idea hai?

 

[MAD. MAX]

Dekho bhai story ko jyada khichne se koi faida nhi abhay ko raman ki sachai pta chale sur use apni ma ki sachai bhi pta chale ki uski ma raman ke sajish ka shikar hui thi | abhay ko uska pyar payal se mila do aur ma bete ka bhi milan karwao aur raman ka bhanda fod krk story ki happy ending do baki story bhut achhi h ekdum must

Lgta hai aapko suspens pasand ni hai bhai
.
Waise jldi ka kam shaitaan ka hota hai
.
Jaisa aap bol rhe ho krne ko use SHOT STORY bolte hai agar waisa hr writer krne lge to fayda ky story write krne ka ek writer ke lye

 

[MAD. MAX]

Sabse pahli baat, iss story happy ending hai hi nahi.... Shayad, mujhe aisa lagta hai

Bro glt bat hai abi se suspens open kr rhe ho not fair bro
.
Write aap apne hisab se kro
.
But jb bol dia hai to ek bat bolo ga ending aapko ab happy krne pdegi ab aapke uper hai
.
Or bro ise aap public demand smjo
.
Aapka fan
Thanku