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Thriller शतरंज की चाल
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Pahle bhi kaha tha aur ab bhi yahi kahuga ki aapne story ko fast forward ki tarah pesh kiya hai.... 
Thriller prefix...upar se aisa title...Koi bhi yahi expect karega ki story me thrill suspense ke sath sath bheja fry kar dene wala scene dekhne ko milega but...but to be honest aapke fast forward ne aisa kahi bhi feel nahi hone diya.
Mujhe samajh nahi aaya ki fast forward ki zarurat kya thi ya ye kahe ki story ko aise narrate karne ka khayaal kaise aaya aapke zahen me????? Sach kahu to Is story me jis tarah ka kathanak tha aur jis tarah ka mashala tha usko agar aap fast forward ki tarah pesh na karte to yakeenan ye ek zabardast story ho sakti thi.. 
Next update ke liye itna time lene ke baad bhi aapne ek zabardast suspense thriller ban jane wale novel ko ek simple si short story me convert kar diya.... I'm very very disappointed men
Police walo ki investigation....aala adhikariyo ka behaviour
Anyway...Manish ko to shuru se hi lallu laal banaya hi tha magar last me usse leading role bhi chheen liya. Matlab perfect tarike se Laude laga hi diye usko
Neha.....Aaahhhh uhhhh shshshsh
Sahi maayne me to Neha ne Dil jeeta apan ka, is liye ek baar fir se usko imagine karega apan
Maza aa gaya
Next story fast forward me na likhna please....
Thriller prefix...upar se aisa title...Koi bhi yahi expect karega ki story me thrill suspense ke sath sath bheja fry kar dene wala scene dekhne ko milega but...but to be honest aapke fast forward ne aisa kahi bhi feel nahi hone diya.
Mujhe samajh nahi aaya ki fast forward ki zarurat kya thi ya ye kahe ki story ko aise narrate karne ka khayaal kaise aaya aapke zahen me????? Sach kahu to Is story me jis tarah ka kathanak tha aur jis tarah ka mashala tha usko agar aap fast forward ki tarah pesh na karte to yakeenan ye ek zabardast story ho sakti thi.. Next update ke liye itna time lene ke baad bhi aapne ek zabardast suspense thriller ban jane wale novel ko ek simple si short story me convert kar diya.... I'm very very disappointed men
Police walo ki investigation....aala adhikariyo ka behaviour
Anyway...Manish ko to shuru se hi lallu laal banaya hi tha magar last me usse leading role bhi chheen liya. Matlab perfect tarike se Laude laga hi diye usko
Neha.....Aaahhhh uhhhh shshshsh
Sahi maayne me to Neha ne Dil jeeta apan ka, is liye ek baar fir se usko imagine karega apan
Maza aa gaya
Next story fast forward me na likhna please....