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Incest शराफ़त की मां की ... ( Adultery incest )

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Bhai kahani track se bahar ja rhi.......kahani title ke bare me kuch socho.......sonu ko already chudai ka chaska lagne laga........fir bhi sharafat ka parda odhe huye hai

Bhai ye sab jo ho raha unnatural lag raha........kisi sapne ki tarah

Pichle 2 updates se meri kuch sikayate hain

1) Suman ne komal ko jaldi maaf kar diya wo thik hai lekin usne ek baar bhi ye nhi pucha ki wo ladka kaun tha aur kyu kar raha tha.......usne apne bete ko to sharafat sikha di kya komal ko sharafat sikha payi

2) Aarti pehle bhi point out kar chuki thi ki sonu sharafat ko chhod de aur jindagi jiye.......aur use to thoda shaq apni behan pe to pehle se hi tha.......fir bhi wo chupchap ja ke komal ko gale lagakar so gayi......wahh

Sabse jyada gussa komal ke upar aarti ko aana chahiye tha kyonki aarti apne bhai se bahut pyar karti hai.......use komal se sawal uthane the ki bhai se jhut bolke komal randipana karke kis muh se sonu ko sharafat ka path padha rhi

3) Aur ye sabse badi problem hai ki sonu ko regret ho raha usne apni didi ke bf ko maar diya.......uske dimag me ye ek baar bhi nhi aaya ki komal ne usase har baar jhut bola chahe mall me ya fir school pe.......use to sabse jyada gussa khud pe hona chahiye mi bc uski maa aur didi use kabse chutiya bana rhi aur khud randipana kar rhi.......ek bas aarti thi jo ye sharafat ka dhong hai isase bahar aane ko kehti thi

Sonu ko chahiye tha ki wo bhale komal se gussa na ho kyuki sabko apne mann se jindagi jeene ka
adhikar hai........ Lekin use khud par gussa aana chahiye tha ki bc wo kitna bada chutiya tha ki use uski maa aur didi sharafat padhati hain aur khud randipana kar rhi........use khud par hasi aani chahiye thi

Wo bolta sharafat gayi maa chudane.......ab dikhata hu hawasipan kya hota hai........wo sex hawas se nhi balki gusse ke karan karta ek badla lene ke bhav se
Bro let writer write.....tum jese hoshyar logo ki wajah se writer apni he script m confus ho jati ha .


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.or fir tum jese loog he bolte ho achi chl Rai thi story....band keu kri
 

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भाई तुम जो लिख रहे हों लिखो हम आपको सपोर्ट करेंगे और जो लोग ज्ञान दे रहे है उनसे विनती है अपनी स्टोरी शुरु करे
 
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Crazy7

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Bro let writer write.....tum jese hoshyar logo ki wajah se writer apni he script m confus ho jati ha .


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.or fir tum jese loog he bolte ho achi chl Rai thi story....band keu kri
Something similar happened to the story NADANI KI SAZA


Hope you restart it some other day

And write as per your wish and though process only
 
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Update plz
 

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