Incest शराफ़त की मां की ... ( Adultery incest )

[Neerav]

Bhai Kya baki reh gaya hai reaction ka action dekhne ke liye... Ya action ka reaction dekhne ke liye... Kahaani Ho ya serial one sided hi dekhne ko milta hai.. Yahan ab ek do kahaani ko chhod toh koi bhi pdhne layak nahi hai jaha Mann lgaa kr pdhne ka dil kre... Komal ke "PAVITRA" ANSU me uski maa behan sab yakin krke sach maan baithe.. 1ghanta bhi gussa nahi rkh paye... Kya yrrr aise one sided kahaani me Kya mazaa... Komal ne bhari mehfil me sonu ko khud ke sath anu ke hatho bhi jaleel krwaya... Arti ka pyar bhi dikhawa hi lagaa mujhe toh ek behan ki wajah se uske masum Bhai ki izzat ka tamasha bnaya gya or arti ne bade hi sehaz tarike badi behan ko gale lga kr sulaya.. Jaise nainsaafi sonu ke sath nahi kamol ke sath hui Ho... Jaise Komal ka rape hua ho.. Jise santvana diya ja rha Ho... Hattt

Agreed bro
Komal ko bhot jldi bakio ne maff kia
Sonu ki kya glti thi
Uski bhen ne jake naved ko thappad marra ki tune mujhe chua kese
Ab bhai to pelle ga hi
Sonu ne jo kia shi kia
Sonu ko full support h
Usko komal ko asani se baat ni krni chaie
Uske anusio me bilkul bhi ni ana chaie

Ab bhen chinnal jesi harkate kr rhi h
Bhai ki kya glti

 

[HorseMan]

Bhai Kya baki reh gaya hai reaction ka action dekhne ke liye... Ya action ka reaction dekhne ke liye... Kahaani Ho ya serial one sided hi dekhne ko milta hai.. Yahan ab ek do kahaani ko chhod toh koi bhi pdhne layak nahi hai jaha Mann lgaa kr pdhne ka dil kre... Komal ke "PAVITRA" ANSU me uski maa behan sab yakin krke sach maan baithe.. 1ghanta bhi gussa nahi rkh paye... Kya yrrr aise one sided kahaani me Kya mazaa... Komal ne bhari mehfil me sonu ko khud ke sath anu ke hatho bhi jaleel krwaya... Arti ka pyar bhi dikhawa hi lagaa mujhe toh ek behan ki wajah se uske masum Bhai ki izzat ka tamasha bnaya gya or arti ne bade hi sehaz tarike badi behan ko gale lga kr sulaya.. Jaise nainsaafi sonu ke sath nahi kamol ke sath hui Ho... Jaise Komal ka rape hua ho.. Jise santvana diya ja rha Ho... Hattt

Hahahah
Aap kya kahna chahte hai komal ko ghar se nikal dun . Ya Ghar ke kisi kone me dal du bhand kar. Ya vo fanshi laga le ya Naved ke pas hi chali jaye . Han usne apne bhai ka sath nhi dia " this is the part of story "
Koi ruthega koi manayega kisi ko kisi ki ahmiyat ka pta chalega . Kisi ko pyar hoga . Ho gyi galti bachchi se ab uski jaan lekar manoge.

 

[DB Singh]

Agreed bro
Komal ko bhot jldi bakio ne maff kia
Sonu ki kya glti thi
Uski bhen ne jake naved ko thappad marra ki tune mujhe chua kese
Ab bhai to pelle ga hi
Sonu ne jo kia shi kia
Sonu ko full support h
Usko komal ko asani se baat ni krni chaie
Uske anusio me bilkul bhi ni ana chaie

Ab bhen chinnal jesi harkate kr rhi h
Bhai ki kya glti

Bilkul Bhai... Sala komal ki wajah se sonu or uske ghar ki Kya izzat reh gai itne logon ke saamne.. Arey Komal ek Randi hai ek se uska guzara nhi hai uska or ek Randi pure ghar ko kharab kr skti hai... Duniya wale uss ghar me rhne wale baki members ko bhi usi nazar se dekhte hai.. Saali puri family hi jhuthi makkar hai.. Ek trf sharafat ka chola pehan kr beta ko amrit Vaani sunati hai OR ek trf vaishyavriti krti hai... Galti kaisi glti ek trf jab Bhai ko achhaai ka gyan pelte Ho Tab ye gyan khud pr apply nhi hota... Glti kaisi galti ek trf jab Bhai ko sharafat or achhaai ka gyaan pelte Tab wahi gyaan Kya khud pr apply nahi hota... OR haa galti ek baar hoti hai baar baar nahi.. Jo baar baar ho usey galti nahi gunaah paap bolte hai... Jiski koi maafi nhi... Jab ek baar usko shayad saheli kaha tha warn bhi kiya tha ki jab uska sach janega toh Kya hoga.. Uske bawzood woh gunaah krti rhi

 

[kamdev99008]

Bhai Kya baki reh gaya hai reaction ka action dekhne ke liye... Ya action ka reaction dekhne ke liye... Kahaani Ho ya serial one sided hi dekhne ko milta hai.. Yahan ab ek do kahaani ko chhod toh koi bhi pdhne layak nahi hai jaha Mann lgaa kr pdhne ka dil kre... Komal ke "PAVITRA" ANSU me uski maa behan sab yakin krke sach maan baithe.. 1ghanta bhi gussa nahi rkh paye... Kya yrrr aise one sided kahaani me Kya mazaa... Komal ne bhari mehfil me sonu ko khud ke sath anu ke hatho bhi jaleel krwaya... Arti ka pyar bhi dikhawa hi lagaa mujhe toh ek behan ki wajah se uske masum Bhai ki izzat ka tamasha bnaya gya or arti ne bade hi sehaz tarike badi behan ko gale lga kr sulaya.. Jaise nainsaafi sonu ke sath nahi kamol ke sath hui Ho... Jaise Komal ka rape hua ho.. Jise santvana diya ja rha Ho... Hattt

Bhai me bhi apki tarah se hi sochta hu... Real life me bhi...
Lekin sirf yahan hi nahin real life me bhi ghar, parivar, samaj aur sarkar bhi... Sahi aur galat nahi... Jo dikhne me achchha lage uska sath dete hain...
Lekin ham dusron ko nahin badal sakte... Isliye 3 options hain
1- ya to unke jaise ho jao
2- ya unke khilaf ladte huye hi jindgi bita do
3- unko bilkul chhod do, jiye ya marein... Sirf apne ap ka socho, apni khusi ke liye jio

Yahan forum par...
Option 1 mere liye nahin
Option 2 mere comments hote hain.. aur kahani puri hone tak dhairya se intzar karta hu
Option 3 writer chahe mere logic ko kahani me na shamil kare... Koi baat nahin.... Lekin jab vo mere logic ko bina kisi thos jawab ya logic ke galat sabit karne lagta hai.... To me comment karna band kar deta hu... Kahani padhna ya na padhna meri marji

Abhi recently ek kahani hai 'चीरहरण' jis par meine comments band kar diye aur sirf kahani padhta hu... Kyonki writer ka attitude mere logics ka jawab dene ya najarandaz karne ki bajaye majak udane wala tha

So cool down and wait for next

 

[HorseMan]

Bilkul Bhai... Sala komal ki wajah se sonu or uske ghar ki Kya izzat reh gai itne logon ke saamne.. Arey Komal ek Randi hai ek se uska guzara nhi hai uska or ek Randi pure ghar ko kharab kr skti hai... Duniya wale uss ghar me rhne wale baki members ko bhi usi nazar se dekhte hai.. Saali puri family hi jhuthi makkar hai.. Ek trf sharafat ka chola pehan kr beta ko amrit Vaani sunati hai OR ek trf vaishyavriti krti hai... Galti kaisi glti ek trf jab Bhai ko achhaai ka gyan pelte Ho Tab ye gyan khud pr apply nhi hota... Glti

I like you
Aapke zajbat bata rhe hai. Aap feel kar rhe ho story ko imagine kar rhe ho imotion feeling and anger.. I like it. And thanks brother

 

[kamdev99008]

Hahahah
Aap kya kahna chahte hai komal ko ghar se nikal dun . Ya Ghar ke kisi kone me dal du bhand kar. Ya vo fanshi laga le ya Naved ke pas hi chali jaye . Han usne apne bhai ka sath nhi dia " this is the part of story "
Koi ruthega koi manayega kisi ko kisi ki ahmiyat ka pta chalega . Kisi ko pyar hoga . Ho gyi galti bachchi se ab uski jaan lekar manoge.

Agree...

Sonu ko khud hi karna hoga...

Use samajh ana chahiye ki log jaise dikhte hain vaise hain nahin... Galat karne wala aansu banakar hamdardi bator leta hai aur sahi karne wale me galtiyan nikaali jati hain....

 

[HorseMan]

Bhai me bhi apki tarah se hi sochta hu... Real life me bhi...
Lekin sirf yahan hi nahin real life me bhi ghar, parivar, samaj aur sarkar bhi... Sahi aur galat nahi... Jo dikhne me achchha lage uska sath dete hain...
Lekin ham dusron ko nahin badal sakte... Isliye 3 options hain
1- ya to unke jaise ho jao
2- ya unke khilaf ladte huye hi jindgi bita do
3- unko bilkul chhod do, jiye ya marein... Sirf apne ap ka socho, apni khusi ke liye jio

Yahan forum par...
Option 1 mere liye nahin
Option 2 mere comments hote hain.. aur kahani puri hone tak dhairya se intzar karta hu
Option 3 writer chahe mere logic ko kahani me na shamil kare... Koi baat nahin.... Lekin jab vo mere logic ko bina kisi thos jawab ya logic ke galat sabit karne lagta hai.... To me comment karna band kar deta hu... Kahani padhna ya na padhna meri marji

Abhi recently ek kahani hai 'चीरहरण' jis par meine comments band kar diye aur sirf kahani padhta hu... Kyonki writer ka attitude mere logics ka jawab dene ya najarandaz karne ki bajaye majak udane wala tha

So cool down and wait for next

Yaar ek baar batao aap log please hamare ghar me laga lo ya samaj me laga lo. Koi bhi ladki chahe vo hamare ghar ki hi kyun na ho chahe bahan ho maa ho beti ho. Kitne log unko Ghar se nikal dete hai . Ya maar dete hai. Vo usi Ghar me rahti hai . Ye Ghar ghar ki kahani hai. Don't feel bad ye sach . Pura samaj ghanda hai kahan rahti hai vo ladkiya apne gharo me hi na .
Ohhh.. sorry story se alag topic chal gya sorry and thanks brother aapke support ke liye.

 

[KnightAngel]

Bhai pata nhi sab log writer pe kyu chadhe ja rhe......komal ne jo kiya wo jaan bujh ke kiya galti nhi thi use sab pata tha wo apne bhai ko in sab se dur rakh rhi thi aur khud maje le rhi thi.......aisa hum sab ke jeewan me hota hai lekin kayi cheezon ko hum lightly le lete hai uske liye realisation jaruri hota hai.......whi komal ke sath hua wo sab chizo ko lightly lekar maje le rhi thi aur usko realisation hua

Is story me sabse se jyada nafrat mujhe komal se hi hai......lekin ye baat ko jhutlaya nhi ja sakta ki komal apne bhai se bahut pyar karti hai......use lagta tha wo bhai se bachkar maje kar sakti thi lekin aisa nhi hua.......ab komal ko realise ho rha usne kitni badi galti ki hai......use to khud pe bhi sharm aa rhi........aur rahi baat maafi ki to uski maa uspe kafi bhadki huyi thi......lekin hai to maa hi na......bas is baat ki nirasha hai ki aarti ne jaldi maaf kar diya......use apni behan se sawal karna tha ki jab khud didi muh kala karwa rhi to kis muh se sonu ko sharafat sikha rhi

Mujhe story se koyi problem nhi ekdum shi chal rhi......lekin aisa lag raha tha ki sonu ko regret ho raha tha......wo bilkul nhi hona chahiye balki use khud par gussa hona chahiye ki wo kitna bada ghochu tha ki use uski behan hi chutiya bana di......aur uske liye wo komal ko asani se maaf na kare

HorseMan bhai tum bindas apne mann se kahani likho

 

[kamdev99008]

Yaar ek baar batao aap log please hamare ghar me laga lo ya samaj me laga lo. Koi bhi ladki chahe vo hamare ghar ki hi kyun na ho chahe bahan ho maa ho beti ho. Kitne log unko Ghar se nikal dete hai . Ya maar dete hai. Vo usi Ghar me rahti hai . Ye Ghar ghar ki kahani hai. Don't feel bad ye sach . Pura samaj ghanda hai kahan rahti hai vo ladkiya apne gharo me hi na .
Ohhh.. sorry story se alag topic chal gya sorry and thanks brother aapke support ke liye.

Comments me dimaag lagaane ki bajaye kahani me dimaag lagao...

Kahani apni marji se apne tareeke se likho... Abhi ek kahani 'Talaash Raavi ki' me bhi yahi hua... Sab readers ka kahna tha ki 2nd maa hero ke alava dusre se naa chude.....
Lekin kahani ki demand... Vo ek ki bajaye 2 se DP kar rahi thi...

Kahani apko likhni hai... Apne tareeke se likho
Ham readers ko padhkar jo mahsus hoga vo hi likheinge...

Aur criticize apki kahani ko karna hai na ki hamare comments ko... Isliye hame galat sabit karne me energy mat kharch karo, kahani aage badhane me karo

 

[kamdev99008]

Bhai pata nhi sab log writer pe kyu chadhe ja rhe......komal ne jo kiya wo jaan bujh ke kiya galti nhi thi use sab pata tha wo apne bhai ko in sab se dur rakh rhi thi aur khud maje le rhi thi.......aisa hum sab ke jeewan me hota hai lekin kayi cheezon ko hum lightly le lete hai uske liye realisation jaruri hota hai.......whi komal ke sath hua wo sab chizo ko lightly lekar maje le rhi thi aur usko realisation hua

Is story me sabse se jyada nafrat mujhe komal se hi hai......lekin ye baat ko jhutlaya nhi ja sakta ki komal apne bhai se bahut pyar karti hai......use lagta tha wo bhai se bachkar maje kar sakti thi lekin aisa nhi hua.......ab komal ko realise ho rha usne kitni badi galti ki hai......use to khud pe bhi sharm aa rhi........aur rahi baat maafi ki to uski maa uspe kafi bhadki huyi thi......lekin hai to maa hi na......bas is baat ki nirasha hai ki aarti ne jaldi maaf kar diya......use apni behan se sawal karna tha ki jab khud didi muh kala karwa rhi to kis muh se sonu ko sharafat sikha rhi

Mujhe story se koyi problem nhi ekdum shi chal rhi......lekin aisa lag raha tha ki sonu ko regret ho raha tha......wo bilkul nhi hona chahiye balki use khud par gussa hona chahiye ki wo kitna bada ghochu tha ki use uski behan hi chutiya bana di......aur uske liye wo komal ko asani se maaf na kare

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