Update 10
Agle din sawere jado komal uthdi a, te bhar ja ke jado usdi nazar usdi mummy te pendi a, usde dimag vich phir toh sariyan gallan ghum jandia ne, dee raat tak soch ke v usnu is masle da koi hal nahi miliya c, oh ida sidi ja ke apni mummy nal gal karan toh v katra rahi c, te kise nu dasan toh v katra rahi c.Komal bechari socha vich hi college chali jandi a ki oh ki kare.
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Kam kar toh vehli ho ke rubi simran nu phone laga dindi a, jo ke is time college vich apni mashuk joyti nal betha hoeya c. Jado usda phone bajda a te oh dekhda a upar rubi pabhi likhiya a, te oh joyti nu keh ke ki pabhi di call a mein aeya sun ke.
Simran:- haan pabhi bol kime yaad kita.
Rubi:- dekh kida gal karda a mere nal, sari taameej bhul gya tu?
Simran:- hnji pabhi ji daso?
Rubi:- pehla ih das kithe a tu?
Simran:- kuj nhi college a, joyti lage betha c, side te aeya a gal karan.
Rubi:- asha sun tenu yaad huna a asi usdin jo suit le ke aye c?
Simran:- haan yaad a.
Rubi:- mein soch rahi c ke mein na aaj apni sas nal gal kara gi ke etki mein suit shehron silwa leni a, nale jooth bol dama gi ke rani kehndi c ke usdi jaan pehchan di hai ik tailor. Te je meri sas mn gyi mein shehar ama gi te aage tu smj gya na?
Simran:- haan smj te gya a pabhi par time da dekhne pena a ina nahi la sakde nahi ta teri sas bole gi late kyun ayi ae.
Rubi:- na oh nahi boldi fer v shehar jabo do tin ghante te lag hi jande a. Fatafat naap dama ge darjan nu te fer apna kam karage.
Simran:- chal theek a pabhi, je teri gal ban gayi te das dami mein v fer tiyari kar lama ga.
Rubi:- tu ki tiyari karni ae?
Simran:- lun nu chamka ke ama ga ta ki chungan vele tere muh vich bal na aun.
Rubi:- besharam kise tha da, chal rakhdi a hun.
Simran:- asha theek a pabhi.
Rubi nal gal karke simran jado joyti kol janda a te joyti usnu sherdan lag jandi a.
Joyti:- bada pabhi da phone aunda a kite pabhi te deor vich kuj chal ta nahi reha a.
Simran:- saki pabhi nahi a oh, sade gharde lage ghar a ohna da, te sade nal changi bol chal a ohna di te, ta usnu pabhi kehnda a.
Joyti:- asha g, te ih pabhi tuhanu phone karke ki keh rahi c.
Simran:- keh rahi c ke college vich kurdian toh dur reha kar, ih kurdian mundeya nu fasa lendia ne te, vaad vicho dil tordh ke paj jandian ne.
Joyti:- asha meri v ik pabhi keh rahi c, ke munde mithiyan mithiyan gallan karke tere wargian bholian kurdian nu fasa lende ne te ohna di le ke rafuchakar ho jande ne.
Simran:- par teri pabhi ne ik gal galata kahi.
Joyti:- oh ki?
Simran:- ohne tenu bholi bhali keha, jadke ohna nu ih nhi pata ohna di kurdi te vrdi tez a, mere warge shareef munde nu apne husab de jaal vich fasa liya a ohne.
Joyti:- asha g, ise tarah tuhadi pabhi ne v ih gal galat kahi ke kurdian mundeya da dil tordh ke paj jandian ne, koi mere wargi v hundi a jo kise v had tak guzar sakdi a bss us munde da sath paan layi.
Simran:- oh te fer jado time awega odo pata lage ga, ki pata jado time awe, oh kurdi di himmat hi na pawe.
Joyti:- himmat te bahut a us kurdi vich pame hune hi ajma lawo.
Simran:- asha jo v bola ga kare gi?
Joyti:- haan hukam karo.
Simran:- tenu kuj sabit karan di lodh nahi a pata a meinu tera.
Joyti:- bss meinu shadeyo na, hun mein tuhade bina nahi reh sakdi a.
Simran:- jarur janemn.
Ida hi simran de joyti apas vich lage rehnde ne
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Duji side rubi apni sas nal gal kardi a te usdi sas mn jandi a ki suit tuci paune a, jide toh marji silwa lawo, bss paise jayda na de dami, rubi v kehndi, hanji jyada paise nhi dama gi.
Rubi di sas usnu jaan bare puchdi a te rubi keh dindi a ke oh bus vich chale jawe gi aage kehrda kadi oh ikali gayi nahi a. Rubi da pakka ho janda a, rubi di khushi sambal nahi rahi c, usnu kahli c ke oh simran nu ih gal jaldi dase, par jado oh usnu phone kardi a te simran phone nahi chakda, oh sochdi a ki shaed class vich busy huna a.
Rubi apna phone apne kamre vich rakh dindi a, te cha cha vich gharda sara kam jaldi nal khatam karke nahon chali jandi a, rubi cha rahi c ke oh apne sharer de bala di safayi hune hi kar lawe kyunki fer usde bacheya ne padh ke a jana c te usne fer kam lag jana c.
Rubi fatafat nangi ho jandi a, te razor nal apni fudhi te ughe shote shote ballan nu saaf karan lag jandi a, te jado usdi fudhi de bal saf ho jande ne te oh usnu dekh ke kehndi a, dekh karta tenu tiyar tere yaar lyi, kal dekhi kida tere vich kotna firda, hun tu ihna machle gi te kotna fer ke tenu shant te karwone pena a na, fer rubi apne baki sharer de v baal saaf karan lag jandi a te ik dum nikhar ke naha ke kaprde pa ke bhar a jandi a oh kamre vich ja ke dekhdi a usda phone te simran da na miss call c na koi message.
Rubi nu bura lag reha c, ki simran ne usdi call dekhi v hai ja nahi, kutta laga huna apni mashuk nal oda te bolda c ki mein kise nu hath nahi londa jina chir tu nhi hath laon dindi, te hun mashul aage meinu bhul gya, kida bolda c ke pabhi tere wargi koi nahi, aun de jara usda phone usdi te mein khabar lendi a, te bed te lme pe ke rest karan lag jandi a, kuj der vaad rubi da phone bjda a te oh khush ho ke chakan lagdi a te jad dekhdi a company walia di call c, rubi nu hor khij chardi a, ik ta sale ih company wale, ih pata dehadi vich kini vari bond dinde a.
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Simran nu jado shuti hundi a te oh dekhda a te uste rubi pabhi di miss call c, oh phone karan hi lagda a te uskol usdi saheli joyti a jandi a te nal usdi ik sahel kajal v us nal hi c, islyi simran back call nahi karda a.
Ida hi apni mashuk te yaara dostan nal gallan baata mar ke simran ghar a janda a te apne kamre vich ja ke rubi pabhi nu phone landa a paar phone bajda rehnda a, te vardi der vaad rubi call chak lendi a.
Simran:- ki gal pabhi vardi der la diti phone chakan vich?
Komal:- tuhadi pabhi nahi a, mein a komal, mummy te rasoi vich busy ne.
Pencho shukar a mein kuj galt nahi bol betha, nahi ta komal nu ki kehnda mein.
Komal:- hnnji bolo chup kiyu karge, tuci?
Simran:- oh pabhi da phone aeya c te ta mein call kiti ke puch la ki kam c?
Komal:- koi nhi mein dindi a mummy nu phone.
Simran:- nhi nhi koi gl nhi, rehn de tu pabhi nu kam karan de ape vehle ho ke gal kar len ge.
Komal:- asha theek a fr mein mummy nu ds dama gi ke tuhadi call ayi c
Simran:- haan das dami.
Te simran nal hi phone cut dinda a, pencho aaj te pe jana c pataka, rab da shukar a.
Duji side komal sochdi a, ahoo kita huna a tere nal ashiqi karan layi phone meri mummy ne, hayee raaba ki chal reha a mere ghar vich, hun meinu mummy nu ih kehne pena a ki tere yaar da phone c jisnal tu muh kala kar rahi a.
Komal rasoi vich jandi a te apni mummy nu usda phone frdhondi boldi a mummy simran paji di call c, keh rahe c tuci ohn nu call kiti c?
Rubi v dar jandi a par apne aap nu sahi rakhde boldi a, haan kiti c, oh na oh na usnu mein puchna c ki je kise shehar vich koi vadia tailor hai te dase.
Komal:- par paji nu ki pata tailor da, nale je pata v hoeya ohna ne janania de kaprde keo silwone ne.
Rubi:- ( mn vich sochdi ih ki bol gayi mein, fite muh mera) oh tu v dangar ae, mein simran di mummy nu phone kita c ohna ne chakeya nhi ta simran tu kita ke oh meri bhenji nal gal karwa dawe, je ohna nu pata howe ta oh das den.
Komal:- asha etki tuci shehro suit silwone ne?
Rubi:- haan ahi soch rahi c etki, rani kehndi c ke shehar bhut vadia tailor ne vadia kaprde seende ne, jime kawo use style vich sii dinde ne.
Komal:- ( apne mn vich sochdi hoyi mata mereye, pata a meinu tu ki kar rahi a tu suit silwon de bahane shehar vich simran paji toh apne kaprde utarwone ne, par mein tenu ime karan nahi dena) mummy waah fer te mere suit haige a, kal asi fer ikatheya jama giyan, meinu pata a ik tailor da meri saheli silwondi a usto kaprde.
Rubi:- nhi mein ikali chali jama gi tu apne nape layi apna koi suit de dami.
Komal:- nahi mummy mein nama napa dena a, ta ki a dome ikatheya jama gian.
Rubi:- te tere college da ki tu shuti karegi?
Komal:- te hor ki nale vaise v mein shuti nhi kiti a kafi chira toh nale college wale kehrda dhyan dinde a padhna te khud hi penda a.
Rubi:- fer v tu ami thak jame gi mere nal.
Komal:- kuj nhi hunda mummy nale asi shehar ghum ke kuj hor v khareed lama gian tu ami bus vich dhake khamegi mere nal chali scooty te aaram nal jama gian.
Rubi:- (mn vich ih ki panga pe gya hun isnu kime manah kara sarian gallan da jawab ihde kol, je sidah hi manah karta ihne kehna kyun, hun te ih neyani v nahi a jisnu gusse vich bol dama te mn jabe gi kini vadi ho gayi sab samj a isnu, chal ihde nal chali te jama par simran nu kida samjama gi, ohne te bhut gussa karna a mere te, par kar v ki sakdi a, chal ik vari try karke dekhdi a) ni kurde tu kyun mere nal dhupe ghumna a?
Komal:-( kida chola tap reha a meri mummy da par mummy mein ida nahi karan dena tuhanu) dadi ji dadi ji dekho mummy meinu shehar lejan toh manah kar rahi a, mein v name suit silwone ne tuci kahwo na mummy nu, meri piyari dadi.
Dadi:- ni tu leja ka isnu nal, nale ih v ghum lawe gi.
Rubi:- mein te bss ta keh rahi c ki ihdi shutu huni a.
Komal:- dadi ji kuj nhi hunda shuti karke oda v mein kehrda shutti kardi a, meinu nahi pata mein jana a bss.
Dadi:- koi nhi putt mein keh dita a na, tu jame gi, sun gya tenu bahu.
Rubi:- hanji.
Te komal khush hundi apne kamre vich dord jandi a te ohdi dadi usnu hasde dorde dekh khush ho jandi a.
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Rubi da sara plan fail ho chuka c, usnu apni dee te bahut gussa a reha c, te usnu simran da v dar c ke hun oh ki kahwe ga. Usda pura mood kharab ho chuka c, usdi sari washroom vich kiti mehnat v bekar gayi c, usnu varda dukh ho reha c ke kine cha nal usne apne sharer te main hisian de bal ik dum saaf kar dite c. Oh varde dukhi mn nal simran nu phone kardi a. Te simran jaldi nal hi phone chak lenda a jime bss udeek reha howe kado phone awe te mein chaka.
Simran:- hello pabhi.
Rubi:- ( sad tone vich) haan.
Simran:- ki gal pabhi vardi dukhi lagdi ae?
Rubi:- ki dasa tenu mein sada sara plan fail ho gya.
Simran:- kida ho gya kyun teri sas nahi mani?
Rubi:- oh te mn gayi c, tahi te tenu pehla phone kita c, par tu chakeya nahi.
Simran:- oh mein class vich c te class vich phone silent te hunde a mein chak nahi sakda c, par yeh mn gaye c te hun ki ho gya.
Rubi:- meri kurdi komal karke hoeya a.
Simran:- pabhi tu das ta sahi.
Rubi:- oh kehndi mein v nal jana a, mein manah kita te apni dadi nu kehan lag payi zid karan lag payi, fer meri sas ne v hukam karta ki ih nal jawe gi.
Simran:- pabhi ih te bhut galat hoeya, yaar mera te dil hi tut gya.
Rubi:- haan mera v, mein te bal v saaf kar laye c, te ih v soch liya c ke teri diti special bra penty pama gi. Pr hun kuj nahi ho sakda a.
Simran:- pabhi ida na bol, koi te hila howe ga kuj te soch.
Rubi:- ki socha meri kuj samaj nahi a reha a, meinu meri kurdi te bahut gussa a reha a.
Simran:- gussa te meinu v a reha a, par pabhi koi te tareeka howe ga.
Rubi:- mera dimag nahi chal reha hun tu hi soch jo sochna a.
Simran:- haan sochne pena a.
Rubi:- chal fer tu soch meinu hun roti v paka ke dene peni a, mein phone rakhdi a hun, te sun hun tu phone na kri meinu, mein khud karagi, te message v na kri, jida hun isne phone chak liya c ki pata fer kise de hath a jawe phone, mein tenu khud vehli ho ke kara gi phone.
Simran:- theek a pabhi.
Rubi phone ghat dindi a, te lag pendi a khije mn nal rotian pakon.
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Duji side simran v sad c, oh v pehla jado pabhi da phone awya c te usne plan daseya c oh khush ho gya c, ke pabhi di garma garm fudhi mile gi, par sab ulta ho ho gya.
Hun oh kar v ki sakda c, bss sochan lag piya ke kida ki kita jawe.
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